00:54:882 (1) - Some cosmetics, when you try to make such small little sliders curvy, you make them ugly honestly. When you have such a small slider, better keep it straight, it will look a lot better. http://i.imgur.com/uNqtba3.png Imo yours looks way worse.
01:03:111 (1,2) - Fix this huge readability issue, this is not some Expert diff where you should play with reading. kk
01:08:597 (1,2,3,4) - This is too cluttered, do not place everything in one single place, it hurts to play. Space out the sliders and make some usual shapes, not this little corner thing. Song needs more emphasis here, it doesn't hurt to play either
02:15:797 (1,2,3,4) - Yeah hello 2011. Hello
02:22:654 (1,2,3,4) - Again 2011. This is really ugly and shouldn't be used nowadays. Hello again