Hi, from my M4M modding queue.
[General]
> All looks good.
[Kantan]
> The gap between Kantan and Futsuu is a bit too wide. Kantan can be made harder imo.
> 00:10:705 - How about try this:
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The note at 00:11:588 - seems not mapping to anything, just only put randomly with 4/1. The above one can match the vocal part well with BGM.This suggestion is applied to the following similar patterns before 00:22:176 - .
> 00:25:705 - I think it is not necessary to use Finish here. The notes which need special emphasize would
only just be 00:22:176 - and 00:29:235 (1) - .
> 00:28:794 - It can be deleted to leave a space to emphasize the start of Kiai.
> In Kiai, do some changes if you made amendments at the session between 00:10:705 - and 00:22:176 - .
[Futsuu]
> 00:12:029 - add k here to match the vocal part, like 00:10:044 (21,22) - ?
> 00:25:705 - same in Kantan, I really do not think it should be a Finish. The music there is not as strong as 00:22:176 - .
> 00:49:088 (56,57) - ctrl+G, k d sounds better according to pitch. 00:49:088 - In Kantan and Futsuu, this note should be n k for the consistency.
> 00:55:044 (73,74) - ctrl+G, this time, d k sounds nicer with the pitch there. The consistency is also concerned.
[Muzukashii]
> 00:20:191 - This can be D for a better contradiction with 00:19:970 - . It is okay that you use K in Kantan and Futsuu but using D in Muzukashii and Oni.
> 00:42:911 - using another monochrome k triplet in 1/4 here? ddd kkk D would be a bit challenging and fun to play.
> 00:53:941 (107,108,109,110) - the triplet should set at the first note but not the last note. Leaving 00:54:382 - standing alone is better than using triplet to mask the outstanding vocal there. d ddd --> ddd d as a result.
> 00:54:823 (111,112,113,114) - same as above, k kkk --> kkk k.
> 00:56:588 - / 00:57:249 - they are unnecessary and bother me a lot. They should be removed since the ending is quite clear with just vocal part. Adding these 2 notes is too much for this part.
[Oni]
> 00:20:191 - same in Muzukashii, change to D. You have k at the front for accompaniment.
> 00:53:941 (134) - check the same session in Muzukashii. Make some changes according to your amendments in Muzukashii.
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Oni is pretty nice. The easier difficulties have some concerns about the note spread.