Breezy wrote:
Ky's Normal
00:11:620 (1) - You could maybe do a more interesting slider shape since the other sliders are just curves and straight sliders. fixed
00:28:539 (1,2) - It might be me, but these two sliders sound very weird when playing for some reason. The timing for this song is weird also.
00:32:251 (1) - You could move this a bit closer since the previous sliders are connected with lower spacing. no, I need to have constand distance spacing for Normal.
00:34:829 (1) - Maybe curve this slightly so it flows into the next note?okay....
01:18:699 (4) - In my opinion, the blanket this has seems to be too close to the slider, and doesn't really look too good. If possible, you can adjust something to make the blankets the same distance like the other ones?okay...
01:33:523 (2) - Curve this slightly to match the previous slider more. both are okay.
Nothing else I could really find, the difficulty is already well made. Good job!It's a nice mapset, good luck getting this ranked!
Seto Kousuke wrote:
[Ky's Normal]And that's it...I hope it helps you, nice idea of mapset and fun diffs, good luck man
- 00:09:686 (2) - This would look better if you put a little curve Like this I think it is not that important if I curve or not, becasue the flowing is not affected
- 00:11:620 (1) - I think this section could play better and look nicer if you adjust it to something Like this because it helps a lot in the flow and you could also stack 00:14:198 (1) - with the tail to look consistent.....and well, if you do this, I also suggest you a little curve on 00:13:554 (4) - to make the flow even better fixed
- 00:16:132 (4) - I think it would play a little better if you place this slider more to the left remain, if I change to left, the pattern will be weird, you can try it on your own, second, this song is not high bpm, even if I use right slider, even new players can play it.
- 00:21:933 (1,2) - huh....volumes? xD I agree, but I have not hitsound it.
- 00:52:876 (1,2,3) - I don't like this ;w; The idea was good, but i think it's really ugly and a bit random like this....you could make 1 have a better shape/curve and make 3 symmetrical to it any suggestion?
- 01:15:476 (2,5) - Since this is the kiai, I highly suggest you use more curved sliders in patterns like this, so you give the player a better flow and also make the kiai look more epic um... for me, I think normal diff and easy diff do not need to have so many pattern, as it is mainly for new players, rhythm is more important than pattern for them.
- 01:27:078 (4) - a sexy little curve to the left here would make this little overlap look way better remain, just weird in look, and the flowing here is good that not need to intend to map a right slider.
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