Aqua Timez - Alones

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Avishay

Kyle Y wrote:

Breezy wrote:

Ky's Normal


00:11:620 (1) - You could maybe do a more interesting slider shape since the other sliders are just curves and straight sliders. fixed
00:28:539 (1,2) - It might be me, but these two sliders sound very weird when playing for some reason. The timing for this song is weird also.
00:32:251 (1) - You could move this a bit closer since the previous sliders are connected with lower spacing. no, I need to have constand distance spacing for Normal.
00:34:829 (1) - Maybe curve this slightly so it flows into the next note?okay....
01:18:699 (4) - In my opinion, the blanket this has seems to be too close to the slider, and doesn't really look too good. If possible, you can adjust something to make the blankets the same distance like the other ones?okay...
01:33:523 (2) - Curve this slightly to match the previous slider more. both are okay.
Nothing else I could really find, the difficulty is already well made. Good job!

It's a nice mapset, good luck getting this ranked!

Seto Kousuke wrote:

[Ky's Normal]

  1. 00:09:686 (2) - This would look better if you put a little curve Like this I think it is not that important if I curve or not, becasue the flowing is not affected
  2. 00:11:620 (1) - I think this section could play better and look nicer if you adjust it to something Like this because it helps a lot in the flow and you could also stack 00:14:198 (1) - with the tail to look consistent.....and well, if you do this, I also suggest you a little curve on 00:13:554 (4) - to make the flow even better fixed
  3. 00:16:132 (4) - I think it would play a little better if you place this slider more to the left remain, if I change to left, the pattern will be weird, you can try it on your own, second, this song is not high bpm, even if I use right slider, even new players can play it.
  4. 00:21:933 (1,2) - huh....volumes? xD I agree, but I have not hitsound it.
  5. 00:52:876 (1,2,3) - I don't like this ;w; The idea was good, but i think it's really ugly and a bit random like this....you could make 1 have a better shape/curve and make 3 symmetrical to it any suggestion?
  6. 01:15:476 (2,5) - Since this is the kiai, I highly suggest you use more curved sliders in patterns like this, so you give the player a better flow and also make the kiai look more epic um... for me, I think normal diff and easy diff do not need to have so many pattern, as it is mainly for new players, rhythm is more important than pattern for them.
  7. 01:27:078 (4) - a sexy little curve to the left here would make this little overlap look way better :Premain, just weird in look, and the flowing here is good that not need to intend to map a right slider.


And that's it...I hope it helps you, nice idea of mapset and fun diffs, good luck man :D
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You should probably respond to Slayed as well, he did the first mod and he did mod your diff as well.
SnowNiNo_
From my queue

1pc test play
[Caffe's Insane]
00:15:971 (3) - unnecessery note...
00:19:355 (6) - NC
00:20:644 (1) - match the vocal here ? this slider sound very weird...
00:45:141 (1,4) - overlap or dont... choose one
01:14:187 (6) - NC here and 01:14:510 (1) - NC off
01:30:300 (1) - not good flow, should be → or ↘

1pc test play
[O"(Q*)c==")*c 912839017238912389 hello how are you /////(((((((())))))))) yiha]
00:01:790 (2,3,4) - the triplet here is really weird, cause 00:02:273 - 00:20:884 - are all slider..
00:06:785 (2,1) - dont overlap?
00:09:686 (3,4) - ^
00:18:065 (1,2) - ^
00:39:179 (2,3,4,5,6) - is these really necessary = =? why dont make the DS same
00:39:502 (6,7) - flow is not good
00:44:416 (4) - move to 188 256?
00:56:445 (3,1,2) - why 1>2 DS is smaller then 3>1, one is 1/1 and another is 1/2
01:00:875 (2,3) - crtl + G ?
01:10:145 (7) - ^
01:17:329 (6) - unnecessary note, no music fit here ...
01:34:168 (1) - stick to end of 01:32:879 (2)

tried my best XD
GL ~ :D
Topic Starter
Avishay

SnowNiNo_ wrote:

1pc test play
[O"(Q*)c==")*c 912839017238912389 hello how are you /////(((((((())))))))) yiha]
00:01:790 (2,3,4) - the triplet here is really weird, cause 00:02:273 - 00:20:884 - are all slider.. Uhm yeah when I mapped that I had something different in my mind and as for now it doesn't go very well, changed.
00:06:785 (2,1) - dont overlap? Hm, okay.
00:09:686 (3,4) - ^ Seems fine/
00:18:065 (1,2) - ^^
00:39:179 (2,3,4,5,6) - is these really necessary = =? why dont make the DS same Because it's cool and it plays nicely
00:39:502 (6,7) - flow is not good Okay, perhaps you are right, changed.
00:44:416 (4) - move to 188 256? Made something more basic.
00:56:445 (3,1,2) - why 1>2 DS is smaller then 3>1, one is 1/1 and another is 1/2 Rhythm difference, and I didn't really want to visually increase the DS here.
01:00:875 (2,3) - crtl + G ? Intentional
01:10:145 (7) - ^^
01:17:329 (6) - unnecessary note, no music fit here ... Yeah, removed.
01:34:168 (1) - stick to end of 01:32:879 (2) Took me a while to understand what you meant, but sure lol.

tried my best XD
GL ~ :D
thanks
CaffeAmericano

SnowNiNo_ wrote:

From my queue

1pc test play
[Caffe's Insane]
00:15:971 (3) - unnecessery note... consistant with 00:06:947 (2) - I think... Maybe I should delete borth, but I think it fits
00:19:355 (6) - NC fixed
00:20:644 (1) - match the vocal here ? this slider sound very weird... sounds good to me
00:45:141 (1,4) - overlap or dont... choose one changed, but not as suggested
01:14:187 (6) - NC here and 01:14:510 (1) - NC off I prefer to keep NC at downbeat
01:30:300 (1) - not good flow, should be → or ↘ intentional flow break at downbeat


tried my best XD
GL ~ :D
Thank you for the mod!

I will post update after making few more changes.

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pies
Hi. I came from your M4M q

00:04:529 (2,3) - I would like to change these circles. Suggestion: http://prntscr.com/9s3xzq
00:06:785 (2,3) - These are fine i guess. The vocal is short and quite fast so these circles can stay.
00:12:183 - Same as 2 lines above.
00:14:922 - Same
00:17:339 - Same
00:29:182 (2) - Something like this: http://prntscr.com/9s40kt
01:01:762 (6) - Make simple slider like this one: http://prntscr.com/9s41o0
01:20:310 (2) - Flip it upside down.
I find this diff funny enough.
01:34:409 - Did you try to make something like this: http://prntscr.com/9s4532 ?
01:36:343 - Vocal goes on, so you can add spinner at the end.
I could say it's more like Light Insane or so. It has a lot strange sliders (It may look nice, but damn its tough to play)
00:48:847 (4) - Change it.
01:04:186 (3,4) - Strange flow.
01:08:040 (8) - Delete this circle and make (7) one tick longer.
01:14:187 (3,4,5,6) - Maybe square?
01:28:206 (2,3,4,5) - Hard to read for the first time
00:31:731 (2) - Something like this: http://prntscr.com/9s4dxl
00:37:729 (2,3,4,5,6) - I dont feel like clicking this in normal is good. I would like to change (2) and (3) for slider, or make one circle on white tick.
00:48:847 (3,4) - A bit tough aswell.
01:31:428 (3) - Delete circle?
00:51:264 (3) - Delete circle? Move next slider to white tick so the gap between sliders will be 1/2. Maybe make him longer.

Good luck :)
Topic Starter
Avishay

HKrecords_ wrote:

Hi. I came from your M4M q

00:04:529 (2,3) - I would like to change these circles. Suggestion: http://prntscr.com/9s3xzq Why? the vocal ends and there are those 1/2 instruments.
00:06:785 (2,3) - These are fine i guess. The vocal is short and quite fast so these circles can stay.
00:12:183 - Same as 2 lines above.
00:14:922 - Same
00:17:339 - Same
00:29:182 (2) - Something like this: http://prntscr.com/9s40kt Why?
01:01:762 (6) - Make simple slider like this one: http://prntscr.com/9s41o0 Why?
01:20:310 (2) - Flip it upside down. Why?


Good luck :)
I can't really understand why are you suggesting those stuff, if you could add and say why, I'll appreciate it.
- HellBird -
Hai

Caffe's Insane

• 00:10:976 (2,1) - The overlap here could have been way better. Try making the slider (2) overlapped at half of the slider (1)

• 00:44:819 (2) - This note would look better if it was placed in a blanket with 00:43:852 (1). Right now it looks plain.

• 00:47:075 (3) - Fix Blanket

• 00:49:653 (4,1) - Bad overlap

• 01:06:831 - Add a note here for a triple. I think a triple sounds right here.

• 01:10:965 (2,3) - Spacing between these sliders should match the spacing between 01:10:643 (1,2)

Rest is fine.

[O"(Q*)c==")*c 912839017238912389 hello how are you /////(((((((())))))))) yiha]

• 00:20:965 (1) - I think you should NC this

• 00:32:193 (8) - Add a finish (Along with the clap ofc)

• 00:34:184 (3,4) - This part completely ruins the flow of this part of the song imo

• 01:05:789 (3) - NC here (Because the vocalist starts a new part here)

• 01:16:685 (3) - Move to x:464, y:112 for better spacing

• 01:19:263 (3,4) - I can't explain these doubles they are just wrong imo.

And that's it!

Really nice map. Good luck on rank!
CaffeAmericano

HKrecords_ wrote:

Hi. I came from your M4M q


I find this diff funny enough.
01:34:409 - Did you try to make something like this: http://prntscr.com/9s4532 ? 01:34:570 - I don't think there's drum beat at this location
01:36:343 - Vocal goes on, so you can add spinner at the end. I prefer not to map this part, since I think 01:35:457 - is good place to cut. but if I decided to, I think it'll be better to map it with circles and sliders :^)

Good luck :)

Scebtile wrote:

Hai

Caffe's Insane

• 00:10:976 (2,1) - The overlap here could have been way better. Try making the slider (2) overlapped at half of the slider (1) I'm not sure what you mean

• 00:44:819 (2) - This note would look better if it was placed in a blanket with 00:43:852 (1). Right now it looks plain. I prefer to keep it this way

• 00:47:075 (3) - Fix Blanket fixed

• 00:49:653 (4,1) - Bad overlap fixed

• 01:06:831 - Add a note here for a triple. I think a triple sounds right here. I think it would work, but I prefer not to add it.

• 01:10:965 (2,3) - Spacing between these sliders should match the spacing between 01:10:643 (1,2) I disagree

Rest is fine.
Thanks for the mod, modders!

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148,288,68856,5,0,0:0:0:0:
352,328,69017,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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128,196,69500,2,0,P|184:200|220:228,1,85
352,328,69823,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,288,69984,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,288,70306,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,216,70467,1,0,0:0:0:0:
68,56,70643,6,0,P|56:104|72:152,1,85
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332,72,71287,2,0,L|352:156,1,85
500,264,71609,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,148,71770,1,0,0:0:0:0:
428,312,71932,5,0,0:0:0:0:
504,128,72093,2,0,P|463:75|365:90,1,170
428,312,72576,1,0,0:0:0:0:
428,312,72898,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,352,73060,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,176,73221,5,0,0:0:0:0:
352,296,73382,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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304,236,73704,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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180,208,74187,1,0,3:0:0:0:
207,218,74268,1,0,0:0:0:0:
231,234,74349,1,0,3:0:0:0:
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263,281,74510,5,8,3:0:0:0:
294,268,74590,1,8,3:0:0:0:
318,243,74671,1,8,3:0:0:0:
333,213,74751,1,8,3:0:0:0:
344,164,74832,6,0,P|325:100|287:71,1,110.499994941712,4|0,0:3|0:0,0:3:0:0:
144,120,75154,1,8,0:0:0:0:
251,156,75315,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,56,75476,2,0,L|100:16,1,110.499994941712
144,120,75798,1,8,0:0:0:0:
292,73,75959,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,204,76121,6,0,P|108:201|69:167,1,110.499994941712
208,56,76443,1,8,0:0:0:0:
251,156,76604,1,0,0:0:0:0:
52,88,76765,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,120,76926,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,264,77087,1,8,0:0:0:0:
36,172,77249,1,0,0:0:0:0:
161,291,77410,6,0,P|129:339|73:359,1,110.499994941712
139,198,77732,2,0,P|196:201|241:240,1,110.499994941712,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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324,204,78376,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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280,83,79504,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,159,79666,1,8,0:0:0:0:
368,46,79827,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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196,364,80310,2,0,L|216:249,1,110.499994941712,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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228,164,80955,2,0,P|176:128|124:124,1,110.499994941712,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,64,81277,6,0,L|391:31,1,110.499994941712
464,164,81599,2,0,L|344:131,1,110.499994941712,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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468,348,82244,2,0,L|348:315,1,110.499994941712,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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288,172,82888,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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376,168,85628,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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280,160,89817,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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200,204,90139,1,8,0:3:0:0:
220,216,90220,1,8,0:3:0:0:
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192,108,90623,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,148,90784,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,160,90945,2,0,L|407:113,1,110.499994941712
424,8,91267,1,8,0:0:0:0:
500,180,91428,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,120,91589,5,0,0:0:0:0:
500,180,91751,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,156,91912,2,0,L|303:265,1,110.499994941712,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,340,92234,2,0,L|190:213,1,110.499994941712
56,152,92556,2,0,L|95:261,1,110.499994941712,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,336,92879,6,0,P|300:348|368:324,1,110.499994941712
432,172,93201,2,0,P|382:172|323:213,1,110.499994941712,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,278,93523,2,0,P|141:280|92:254,1,110.499994941712
44,92,93845,2,0,P|97:103|137:140,1,110.499994941712,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
50,201,94168,5,0,0:0:0:0:
204,180,94329,2,0,L|232:124,2,55.2499974708558,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,336,94651,2,0,L|316:320,3,55.2499974708558,8|8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
331,311,94973,1,8,0:3:0:0:
353,295,95054,1,8,0:3:0:0:
371,274,95134,1,8,0:3:0:0:
384,249,95215,1,8,0:3:0:0:
390,221,95296,1,8,0:3:0:0:
390,193,95376,1,8,0:3:0:0:
383,172,95457,5,12,0:3:0:0:
Topic Starter
Avishay
@Scebtile, changed / fixed everything accept for the last thingy, look at previous mods if you wanna know why.
Smokeman
M4M

[O"(Q*)c==")*c 912839017238912389 hello how are you /////(((((((())))))))) yiha]

  • 00:01:629 (1,2,3,4) - this doesn rly follow anything. The guitar isnt going with the vocals here. 00:02:072 - guitar note 00:01:951 (3,4) - arent rly on anything. If you did this intentionally i would recommend you lower the spacing (scale it down) since its confusing to play (confused me 5 timesi tried till i decided to look wtf was going on) smth that isnt in the music.
    00:03:562 (1) - having a slider this cramped in itself makes it look edgy (no pun intended). You could "unfold" it a bit more
    00:03:562 (1,1) - space this out a bit more so there is some space between them. Looks betetr imo. i mean you have this space between all the other sliders aswell 00:04:529 (2,3) - rly wierd since they play on nothing...

    What are the green lines following? Vocal range? Actual notes sung? Intensity of said vocals? I wont tell you to not do this but it plays wierd when you 0.8 on this 00:05:818 - and this 00:06:463 (1) - when they feel so much different.
    00:07:752 (1,1,1,1) - why gradually reduce the speed but increase the spacing between them? Are you trying to enhance the song by slowing things down or making it harder by having sharper drops from 3/4 to 3/4 sliders?
    00:10:330 - you should add some of those sv changes around here aswell.

    00:12:264 (2,3) - wierd again (at this point i wouls suggest you atleast use some propper hitsounds so they dont feel so out of place :/ )
    00:14:842 (2,3) - ^
    00:15:486 (1) - did you intend the wistle on the slider body? This whistle sound while dragging the slider is annoying :(
    00:21:287 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - ok now whis rly takes the cake... You cant just start adding rythms they dont exist just because you want there to be this rythm. Not following the music is worse than overmapping imo, but adding an 8 note stream is quite a strech. Its like you want to run into trouble..
    00:26:754 (5,6,1) - it would be better not to have these three one one circular 3 note pattern since 00:27:088 (1) - changes the timing by quite a bit dont you think? I would suggest you change this 00:26:431 (4) - to 2 notes and 00:26:754 (5,6) - to a 1/2 slider 00:29:988 (3) - move this to 324|296 so the pattern has more space and looks better overall
    00:39:260 (3) - this is overmapped but it doesnt hurt that much since its barely noticeable
    00:43:127 (4) - do this like you did those 01:00:634 (1,2,3) -
    00:50:620 (2) - you think you can put this infornt of the slider. It looks kinda meh
    00:58:056 (1,2,3) - change 1 and 2 for a slider since the intensity drops almost instantly after 00:57:895 (5) - . It played very wierd...
    01:01:762 (6) - cant you do smth more visualy apealing ? Like... atleast the other sliders looked kinda ok and cool
    01:03:212 (1,2) - Can you atleast put a 1/2 slider so 01:03:714 - can be made clickable. You did this rythm other times aswell but this time it even felt off-putting in all my plays.
    01:04:197 (1,2,3,4) - less off-putting since you get used to it... but if ou change the above than change this aswell.
    01:13:865 - its kinda wierd to ignore the strong guitar for the overmapped stream + kickslider
    01:21:277 - This should be clickable. A new verse starts here. 01:21:116 (6) - this doesnt look or play good (prolly the akward flow) so you can replace it by a circle and then add a sldier for the verse.
    01:27:400 (2,1) - move either of the two away so that 01:27:722 (1) - gets more emphasis.
    01:27:722 (1) - you could aslo reduce the sv back to 1 here so the transition happens more smoothly (creating stress through emphasis is more dinamic than relative speed slider speed changes. (or just reduce the sv to 1.0x)
    01:31:912 (2,3,4) - this is rly hard to hit considering its the only patern spaced like this in the whole map
    01:34:973 (8) - it woul fit better if these two kicks were with the others together 01:35:134 (1,2,3,4,1) - .

    01:35:457 - Since the song is cut you wont be able to map the next section in the song... so why start it. It feels wierd to end in the middle of a new section.
    01:36:934 - this kinda off, the fuck timing?


sry i dont think i can mod the other difs, this already took long enough and i didnt even write down all my thoughts. (it just got tiring after 4 mods today...)

Its cool to hit those sliders, but man is it off-putting when you have to play an 8-note (9 with slider) while the song is still in its chill phase :/

you should get some more professional modders on this
this dog tho wtf it that thing...
Topic Starter
Avishay

Smokeman wrote:

M4M

[O"(Q*)c==")*c 912839017238912389 hello how are you /////(((((((())))))))) yiha]

  • 00:01:629 (1,2,3,4) - this doesn rly follow anything. The guitar isnt going with the vocals here. 00:02:072 - guitar note 00:01:951 (3,4) - arent rly on anything. If you did this intentionally i would recommend you lower the spacing (scale it down) since its confusing to play (confused me 5 timesi tried till i decided to look wtf was going on) smth that isnt in the music. The mp3 is crap so that's why the guitar is slightly off, the guitar does clearly land on 00:01:790 but it is supposed to land on 00:02:112 as well, but it is just slightly off. I made something else that's more friendly but it doesn't leave the rhythm empty.
    00:03:562 (1) - having a slider this cramped in itself makes it look edgy (no pun intended). You could "unfold" it a bit more I agree that it might look a bit cramped with the current shape, but I like it and it goes really really well with the pattern.
    00:03:562 (1,1) - space this out a bit more so there is some space between them. Looks betetr imo. i mean you have this space between all the other sliders aswell Spaced it out a bit. 00:04:529 (2,3) - rly wierd since they play on nothing... Please listen closely, I know the second note is slightly off but they clearly exist, the mp3 is crap but the notes are snapped fine at 00:06:785 (2,3) - for example, that's the same

    What are the green lines following? Vocal range? Actual notes sung? Intensity of said vocals? I wont tell you to not do this but it plays wierd when you 0.8 on this 00:05:818 - and this 00:06:463 (1) - when they feel so much different. Intensity and range, whatever feels right to me. The first slider is fine so I guess I should slow down the second one a bit more, so I'll do that.
    00:07:752 (1,1,1,1) - why gradually reduce the speed but increase the spacing between them? Are you trying to enhance the song by slowing things down or making it harder by having sharper drops from 3/4 to 3/4 sliders? I felt like the vocals become slighlty weaker over time in this stanza so I reduced the SVs, spacing are like that are for asthetics and they play pretty well too.
    00:10:330 - you should add some of those sv changes around here aswell. I guess I will.

    00:12:264 (2,3) - wierd again (at this point i wouls suggest you atleast use some propper hitsounds so they dont feel so out of place :/ )
    00:14:842 (2,3) - ^ Weird, no one mentioned those as weird so far, I might find some different hitsound for them.
    00:15:486 (1) - did you intend the wistle on the slider body? This whistle sound while dragging the slider is annoying :(Not intended, removed.
    00:21:287 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - ok now whis rly takes the cake... You cant just start adding rythms they dont exist just because you want there to be this rythm. Not following the music is worse than overmapping imo, but adding an 8 note stream is quite a strech. Its like you want to run into trouble.. It has a purpose, although overmapped, it works really really well with the song, creates intensity right into the strong section and whatnot, the hitsound help it to blend with the song and it creates something even better.
    00:26:754 (5,6,1) - it would be better not to have these three one one circular 3 note pattern since 00:27:088 (1) - changes the timing by quite a bit dont you think? I would suggest you change this 00:26:431 (4) - to 2 notes and 00:26:754 (5,6) - to a 1/2 slider Oh shit I knew I forgot something I wanted to change after I played the map, changed. 00:29:988 (3) - move this to 324|296 so the pattern has more space and looks better overall Nice, I like it.
    00:39:260 (3) - this is overmapped but it doesnt hurt that much since its barely noticeable It's not, delete the note and listen closely :P
    00:43:127 (4) - do this like you did those 01:00:634 (1,2,3) - It's fine as it is.
    00:50:620 (2) - you think you can put this infornt of the slider. It looks kinda meh
    00:58:056 (1,2,3) - change 1 and 2 for a slider since the intensity drops almost instantly after 00:57:895 (5) - . It played very wierd... Repositioned them so it should be better.
    01:01:762 (6) - cant you do smth more visualy apealing ? Like... atleast the other sliders looked kinda ok and cool But I like it :< Slighty changed, might overhaul later.
    01:03:212 (1,2) - Can you atleast put a 1/2 slider so 01:03:714 - can be made clickable. You did this rythm other times aswell but this time it even felt off-putting in all my plays.
    01:04:197 (1,2,3,4) - less off-putting since you get used to it... but if ou change the above than change this aswell. Chagned both ^ Including some nearby patterns.
    01:13:865 - its kinda wierd to ignore the strong guitar for the overmapped stream + kickslider Changed pattern around a bit.
    01:21:277 - This should be clickable. A new verse starts here. 01:21:116 (6) - this doesnt look or play good (prolly the akward flow) so you can replace it by a circle and then add a sldier for the verse. Yeah I agree, changed.
    01:27:400 (2,1) - move either of the two away so that 01:27:722 (1) - gets more emphasis. Repositioned.
    01:27:722 (1) - you could aslo reduce the sv back to 1 here so the transition happens more smoothly (creating stress through emphasis is more dinamic than relative speed slider speed changes. (or just reduce the sv to 1.0x) But I reduced it already.. It is 0.8 here.
    01:31:912 (2,3,4) - this is rly hard to hit considering its the only patern spaced like this in the whole map That's not really hard, 01:16:443 (2,3,4) - is siimlar.
    01:34:973 (8) - it woul fit better if these two kicks were with the others together 01:35:134 (1,2,3,4,1) - . I can't really agree on that.

    01:35:457 - Since the song is cut you wont be able to map the next section in the song... so why start it. It feels wierd to end in the middle of a new section. Because it's still part of the song and it's not low enough to be the outro.
    01:36:934 - this kinda off, the fuck timing? Yeah.. blame the mp3, best I could get, there's no point in adding a timing point there because it immediately gets fixed, but it is not really noticeable so I'd say that's fine.


sry i dont think i can mod the other difs, this already took long enough and i didnt even write down all my thoughts. (it just got tiring after 4 mods today...)

Its cool to hit those sliders, but man is it off-putting when you have to play an 8-note (9 with slider) while the song is still in its chill phase :/

you should get some more professional modders on this
this dog tho wtf it that thing...
The stream is the gate between the slow part and the new section, it does its' job well >.>

The 'dog' (lion zz) is Kon from Bleach http://bleach.wikia.com/wiki/Kon

Mod was very helpful, thanks, I'll finish mine now.


I should note that I added a new clap, and it is much betta, so redl.
pies

Avishay wrote:

HKrecords_ wrote:

Hi. I came from your M4M q

00:04:529 (2,3) - I would like to change these circles. Suggestion: http://prntscr.com/9s3xzq Why? the vocal ends and there are those 1/2 instruments. ~1) Barely hearable instruments. 2) Vocal is longer 3) You ve done the whole section follows vocal (except these).
00:06:785 (2,3) - These are fine i guess. The vocal is short and quite fast so these circles can stay.
00:12:183 - Same as 2 lines above.
00:14:922 - Same
00:17:339 - Same
00:29:182 (2) - Something like this: http://prntscr.com/9s40kt Why? ~Nvm, I rechecked this.
01:01:762 (6) - Make simple slider like this one: http://prntscr.com/9s41o0 Why? ~Looks nicer
01:20:310 (2) - Flip it upside down. Why? ~Flows better


Good luck :)
I can't really understand why are you suggesting those stuff, if you could add and say why, I'll appreciate it.
Please dont hurt me.
Bara-
Hi. Can you please change my diffname from "Baraatje123's ..." to "Bara's ..."?
I had a namechange, and would like it if you can change it. Make sure to add my new name to tags (and keep the old one as well)
Thanks!
I need to check my GD's thread more often >_>
Give me some time to fix
Topic Starter
Avishay
done, resolved some inconsistencies as well, I'll get this set back to track after RS
Topic Starter
Avishay
alright, I fixed some timings issues, I made it much nicer with the use of additional timing points so the beatmap wouldn't just switch its' offset drastically, I have done minor changes to the GD so there won't be any unrankable issues, I honsetly think I should just tidy up my diff and this is ready for rank.
Underforest
Hi! From your M4M queue

Red = Unrankable
Blue = Strongly recommendated
Black = Normal suggestion

General
  1. BG size is unrankable (1228x767), needs to be 1366x768 or 1024x768 at least
  2. Wave hitsounds with possible delay >5ms: normal-hitclap2.wav


Ky's Normal
  1. Your diff has 2 stars, according to the Ranking Criteria needs to be less than 2
  2. Put AR as 4 or 4.5
  3. 01:05:804 (1,2) - Not a good overlap


Bara's Hard
  1. RIP 10k posts ayy :'v
  2. 00:09:041 (1) - Better this imo
  3. 00:20:965 - 00:21:610 - This from this are clickable beats
  4. 00:44:175 (4) - Slider tail border is off for 4:3 screens, fix it
  5. 00:48:204 (2) - Same as 00:09:041
  6. 00:51:265 (3,4) - Intentional?
  7. 01:06:287 (2) - Same as 00:09:041
  8. 01:12:573 (5,1) - Not a nice stack
  9. 01:29:009 (1) - This?
  10. 01:34:165 (1,2,1,2) - Fix claps
  11. 01:38:516 (2) - Same as 00:09:041


Caffe's Insane
  1. 00:00:662 - 00:00:984 - Every diff have mapped this part except yours, try this
  2. 00:31:731 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - This?
  3. Very clear diff thought :)


O"(Q*)c==")*c 912839017238912389 hello how are you /////(((((((())))))))) yiha
  1. 00:01:307 (3,4,5,6,1,1,2,1,1,2,3,1,1,1,1,1,1,2,3,1,2,1,1,1,1,1,2,3,4,1,1,1,1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,4,1,2) - So many stacks on blue tick, please avoid that
  2. So clear thought too!

GL!
p/4946727
Topic Starter
Avishay
@BG, ahh I hate those, I'll try to find someone to fix that.
@Hitsounds, I can't really feel it, if it is a delay for certain I'll use something else or try to fix that.
@Mod on my diff, that's the whole point of the section :\

Thanks.
Underforest
About the BG, I resized it for you http://puu.sh/nxrEA.jpg

Above, the delay it has the hitsound (0.10 seconds), I also fixed it http://puu.sh/nxrOX.wav
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Avishay
Holy, thanks!!
Battle
m4m from q right? i dunno im messaging you right now lol

[Normal]
00:07:752 (3,4) - Feels kinda off, here I don't think there really should be a sort of cut off to the current flow. Although the vocal for 00:05:174 (3,4) - is pretty significantly different, and deserves emphasis, it follows the current flow whereas this doesn't really go along with flow
00:23:531 (4) - Try considering making two single taps instead, that was the strong drum on 00:23:853 - is at least pressed instead of on a slider end
01:23:208 (2,3) - Flow can improve lol

[Hard]
00:19:354 (1,2,3,4,1) - It would feel a bit better if you made it so the spacing is large at the start the gradually going down than low -> high -> low since it'll make it so the transition for the vocals getting quieter is a bit smoother
00:38:697 (4,5) - Stack is kinda outta place since previous stack was done with vocals and this one is with vocals then drum but it's structured, still something to keep in mind tho
01:14:507 (5,6) - I dunno, spacing for 5 -> 6 could be a little bigger imo so it goes along with the song starting to pick up into the kiai

[Insane]
00:24:176 (1,2) - Lacks emphasis compared to other drums
00:26:915 (7,1,2) - Weird how 2 has emphasis comparable to 1 when 1 is the stronger note
01:14:749 (4,1) - tbh there's times where it's pretty understandable to have a jump at the end of the stream for emphasis, but it kinda just looks like since the inherited point was there the ds changed lol

[long diff name]
Isn't a bit mroe than ar9 kinda overkill
00:25:626 (2,3,4) - The harsh directional change of 2 -> 3 really takes the emphasis away from the drum on 4
01:14:829 (1,2) - I don't think it would hurt to not have them right next to each other, it's a high difficulty anyways with high ar

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btw the bg size isn't unrankable with that other dimension but w/e
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