00:11:620 (1) - You could maybe do a more interesting slider shape since the other sliders are just curves and straight sliders.
00:28:539 (1,2) - It might be me, but these two sliders sound very weird when playing for some reason.
00:32:251 (1) - You could move this a bit closer since the previous sliders are connected with lower spacing.
00:34:829 (1) - Maybe curve this slightly so it flows into the next note?
01:18:699 (4) - In my opinion, the blanket this has seems to be too close to the slider, and doesn't really look too good. If possible, you can adjust something to make the blankets the same distance like the other ones?
01:33:523 (2) - Curve this slightly to match the previous slider more.
Nothing else I could really find, the difficulty is already well made. Good job!
00:02:274 (2) - Fix the blanket a little, you can very slightly see from the approach circle that it doesn't perfectly fit the curve with (1).
00:05:175 (3,4) - Make these have the same curvature?
00:20:966 - In my opinion, it sounds strange to leave this empty but I understand your intention of doing so.
00:21:933 (1) - You could adjust this to the left more since it kind of overlaps the edge of grid map, but if it's allowed then don't worry about it.
00:21:933 (1,3) - You can see very closely that these don't have the same slope.
00:26:754 (9) - You could adjust this slider so that the ticks form a perfect V-shape.
00:43:208 (3) - This blanket doesn't really look that good because of how it nearly touches the slider. Maybe move it a further apart if possible?
01:13:221 (7) - Maybe add a NC here since the combo gets quite high here compared to the rest of the map?
01:26:755 (5) - You could curve this slightly less so the curve doesn't look too sharp and because you can form a better looking blanket with the previous slider.
01:34:490 (2) - You could CTRL + G because this reverse slider ends facing away from the next note.
01:35:134 (2) - ^
This is all I could find, it's a well-made difficulty! Good job!
00:10:976 (2) - You could try having this go directly through the middle of the slider instead of slightly to the side.
00:13:876 (5) - Have this directly in-between the (2) and (3).
00:20:644 (1) - You could blanket (1)'s tail with (7) better.
00:25:948 (3) - Kind of awkward having this next note off to the side like that after the slider. Maybe you could find a more reachable position for this note?
00:31:117 (1) - You could improve the curve for this slider so it's not as sharp. Having a smoother curve accounts for a better blanket.
00:53:381 (3) - I think stacking this on 00:54:026 (2) looks and plays better.
01:03:714 (3) - I think this would look better if moved slightly upwards.
01:05:145 (5) - Stack this on 01:04:186 (1) ?
01:11:287 (3) - Tilt this slightly so it doesn't touch the (5) ? It kind of looks messy this way.
01:14:832 (5) - Would a NC work here?
01:34:973 (4) - Maybe curve this stream for better aesthetics?
01:35:457 (10) - Maybe add a NC since it's the last note?
That's all I could find here, good job with your map! It's well made!
00:29:500 (3) - This double sounds out of place to me in my opinion, but you probably heard something in the song that this follows?
00:39:179 (2,3,4,5) - In my opinion, I think the stream looks better without the rapid rise in DS changes. Maybe have the stream look similar to this? 00:41:757(4,5,6,7)
00:49:492 (4,5,6,7) - You could do the same with this stream as the above example ^
00:54:026 (2) - I think this slider looks better slightly adjusted down instead of stacked in order to stay consistent with the other notes.
00:57:975 (1,2,3) - This line of notes looks sort of bland to me, maybe do something more interesting with this since you did it with 00:59:667 (1,2,3,4)
01:08:856 (1) - The placement of this note is kind of awkward, I would place it somewhere where it's more reachable.
01:10:145 (5) - CTRL + G so that this reverse slider ends facing the next note?
01:13:865 - I think having a note here would play better.
01:19:263 (3,4) - The shape of these doesn't look too good, I would just have these both go vertically up instead of the way it is right now.
01:21:841 (2,3) - This one could be angled downwards slightly to the left instead of this current shape.
01:30:623 (1) - Not sure why the NC is here.
01:31:912 (1) - ^
01:34:973 (8) - You could move this closer so that the distance is equal among these jumps.
01:38:035 (1) - Not a huge difference, but I think this note looks nicer around X:0/Y:264
Overall, this is all I found here. Good job with the map!