-[ Nymph ]- wrote:

hi

i'm low skill for english

00:03:574 (3) - move to x228 y84 Done
00:09:781 (8) - ctrl+g Done
00:11:333 (8,1,2,3,4) - move to 00:11:505 - , add a circle here 00:11:333 - , remove 00:12:884 (4) - , and add a circle here 00:12:884 - Done
00:20:815 (8) - ctrl+h ctrl+j Done
00:43:229 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - change to jump Done
02:33:574 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ Done
02:07:884 - add a circle There's nowhere to place a circle and it sounds fine without I think


good luck

SolrosRepica wrote:

hiya~
Came from my modding queue

FUNKY SLIDERZ

00:07:712 (5) - Move to x:115 y:184 Done
00:15:126 (6) - Change slider end length to 00:15:471 - Example: http://puu.sh/naUNv/c91d2a81d0.jpg Done
00:19:091 (1) - This note need more distance. here? x:256 y:140 or x:142 y:96 Done
00:22:884 (1) - Change start point to 00:22:712 (1) - and end point to 00:23:919 - Done
01:08:057 (1) - Change slider end length to 01:08:315 - Example: http://puu.sh/naVo8/e5ba72f929.jpg I didn't really understand what you were doing here
01:19:091 (7) - Move to x:208 y:316 Done

Good luck

Warpyc wrote:

HI

Just some general stuff: If you want to rank this you will need a full diff spread, you can either map it yourself or get some guest difficulties, "FUNKY SLIDERZ" Is an unrankable difficulty name since it isn't related to the song in any way, also 100% volume is never recommended max is usualy around 70-80% I guess I'll change the name although it was funky :c, I also lowered the volume all around, but kept the main parts relatively loud due to the nature of D&B. I'll be adding more difficulties soon too (possible an insane gd), and maybe a hard.

now let's get into some points about improving the map itself!

1. the map seems to be a bit lacking in terms of patterns, you should try doing some blankets (http://puu.sh/nb9Dy/969283e281.jpg) or using polygon circles (CTRL SHIFT D), also curved sliders doesnt really look good instead of a random http://puu.sh/nb9Hr/91411dc8d9.jpg try making a straight one or a slightly curved one http://puu.sh/nb9Ii/c907cf1983.jpg I think there are some patterns especially at the jumps towards the end. I made a few blankets but can't find anymore good spots for them. Also changed some curved sliders to give it less curve.
2. 00:03:229 (1,2,3,4) - here it looks like you just placed circles randomly, try copying (1,2) and pasting it on (3,4) and then increase spacing by using (CTRL SHIFT S) Done (also changed the start a bit to mostly sliders)
3. 00:03:919 (5,6) - Slider overlaps like this looks extremely bad imo move it to another position and try to make it more visualy pleasing Done
4. You should always NC on big white tick unless you have some other NC pattern in mind, but right now it seems you've just put out nc's randomly. Fixed some combos although still not all of them are on the white ticks.
5. 01:35:643 (4) - Ok this is kind of funny I've gotta say I just realised that slider and the follow spells SV which is funny considering the slider velocity , does it need changing though?
6. 01:46:678 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - this part has the exact same calm beat and still you have a lot of different spacing and patterns, you should try to be consistant when mapping Lowered spacing and replaced single notes with sliders
7. 01:49:436 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - same beat as above but now you're making it 1/1(only white ticks) instead of 1/2 (white and red ticks) there is defenitely a 1/2 sound in the song so personally I'd put sliders in that part. Done
8. Alright that's it for me, hopefully this gave you some stuff that will improve this and your future maps!
   
9. oh just noticed spacing fail on easy diff 02:23:919 (4) - Done

Rizen wrote:

yayyyy more NZ mappers

dentek wrote:

hey! #modreqs

What about change 00:44:781 on Preview Point?

Easy

01:19:091 (4) - Add Finish here Done
02:07:712 (3) - Remove clap Done
02:12:194 (2) - Remove finish and add clap Doesn't really fit
02:25:298 (6) - Add finish Done
02:25:298 - End Klai here Done

FUNKY SLIDERZ

00:20:471 (7,8,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - What about change clap on whistle? Clap on whistle? o.o
00:29:264 (6) - Add finish Done
00:32:022 (1) - ^ Done
01:30:126 (1) - ^ Done
02:09:091 (6) - NC Done
02:36:074 (1) - Add finish Done

I think that's all. Good luck!

FUNKY SLIDERZ

Chibi Maruko wrote:

maybe free mod coz many warnings here
wub wub map

Let me honest, This map is sooo unrankable coz no normal, hard and insane. Please make your own diff or find mapper to make it. coz I see many mapper reject ur map O.o

FUNKY SLIDERZ

1. FUNKY SLIDERZ name diff will be unrankable. Change diff name into Extra or Expert. Done
2. 00:01:850 (1) - Please add finish coz start song here Done
3. 00:04:609 (1,2,3) - Please use ds. It is too slider awkward Aren't they spaced properly?
4. 00:09:091 (5) - Don't stack at previous slider like awkward lol. use ds Done
5. 00:12:884 (5) - Whistle here Done
6. 00:17:022 (4,5,6) - Kinda look random spacing here. Use recommend ds Done
7. 00:22:712 (1) - Add finish at end spinner would be nice Done
8. 00:25:126 (1,2) - Use ds coz stack is look bad Done
9. 00:28:574 (5) - Kinda look wub slider. Fix this to blanket or sliderwave Done
10. 00:40:471 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Please fix wub wub sliders. Kinda look slider awkward and didn't use ds. That's how mapper reject ur map coz person didn't like wub map Done.. I think. Gave it ds at least.
11. 00:45:988 (1) - Add finish at end slider and sliderwave can be improved. Please fix sliderwave for example use grid size (LARGE) to make sure sliderwave will be nice Done
12. 00:52:712 (5,7) - Wub wub sliders again lol. Fix this into blanket or something I think the sliders play fine.
13. 00:55:471 (1,3) - This too I think the sliders play fine.
14. 00:57:712 (2,3,4) - Ds coz random spacing I guess Spacing is fine here, it plays fine.
15. 00:58:229 (5) - OMG. truly most wub slider if i ever seen https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4562790 Please fix this into normal It plays fine.
16. 01:13:574 (1,2,3,4) - I guess square slider would didn't nice. use ds normally Maybe, I'll leave it for now though
17. 01:16:333 (1,2,3,4) - huhu. Nazi part. Maybe fix ds normally Done I guess.. What was I meant to fix meant to fix here?
18. 01:19:436 (1) - Blanket this coz wub slider Aren't wub sliders fine for a wub map? o.o
19. 01:26:333 (2,3,4) - This too Done (changed pattern to cross)
20. 01:35:643 (1) - wowowowowowo. Seriously SLIDER LIKE S? Maybe if bn see this will be fainting. Please change inhereted point to 1.50x. Done
21. 01:53:229 (2,3,4,5,6) - ds Done
22. 02:01:850 (8,9) - Blanket Done
23. 02:02:540 (1,2,3,4) - Please add clap here coz sound bass Done
24. 02:09:953 (11) - Kinda ribben slider not suitable. Fix this into normal blanket Done

gl

1. 00:05:298 (3,1) - overlap is pretty weird any reason for this?
2. 00:06:678 (5,1) - ^
3. 00:07:022 (6,1) - ^
4. 00:12:884 (5,1) - ?overellelrep
5. 00:14:609 (4,6) - ^ i think there is a lot of these judging by the start ill dodge the overlaps for now you just have to spot them yourself
6. 00:33:747 (3) - x:256 y:88 stacks nicely gets rid of another awkward overlap imo
7. 00:44:609 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - wassup with those NC's?
8. the kiai is pretty weird imo, it seems so overmaped but that might just be me, also SV -2? a bit too high
9. 00:58:229 (5) - lol the control points
10. rest is overmaped imo

Cooldue7 wrote:

ayyyyyyyyyyy lmao from queue


[Exp3rt]

1. 00:05:298 (3,1) - overlap is pretty weird any reason for this? Fixed
2. 00:06:678 (5,1) - ^ Fixed
3. 00:07:022 (6,1) - ^ No overlap here?
4. 00:12:884 (5,1) - ?overellelrep Fixed
5. 00:14:609 (4,6) - ^ i think there is a lot of these judging by the start ill dodge the overlaps for now you just have to spot them yourself Fixed
6. 00:33:747 (3) - x:256 y:88 stacks nicely gets rid of another awkward overlap imo Fixed (although it makes another overlap ._.)
7. 00:44:609 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - wassup with those NC's? I think they're fine
8. the kiai is pretty weird imo, it seems so overmaped but that might just be me, also SV -2? a bit too high SV 2 is the main theme of this difficulty, and ~5.2 stars is alright for a 174 bpm expert diff.
9. 00:58:229 (5) - lol the control points Plays well doe
10. rest is overmaped imo

sorry for this sort of mod, just giving opinons on this

1. 00:03:230 (1,4) - overlap and 00:03:230 (1,2) - blanket better
2. 00:04:609 (5) - don't make this long slider just a curve
3. 00:06:678 (2,3) - overlap
4. 00:07:367 (1,2,3) - ^
5. 00:08:746 (1,2,3) - Make these blanket, not overlap each other
6. 00:25:126 (3,4) - lap, I'd rather blanket these
7. 00:26:505 (6,1) - overlap better, stack or don't overlap at all
8. 00:27:884 (4,5) - ^
9. 00:30:815 (6,7) - better blanket
10. 00:37:540 (1,2) - horrible overlap, blanket properly
11. 00:47:195 (6,8) - not very cool lap
12. 00:52:712 circle here?
13. 00:57:022 (1) - could be shaped better
14. 01:05:988 (4,1,2,3) - overlap
15. 01:12:195 (1,2) - put these to same y coordinate
16. 01:17:712 (1,2) - space between these
17. 01:26:678 (3) - I'd change this to circles
18. 01:27:367 (1) - no kiai here
19. 01:30:212 (1) - start this at red spike and end it at 01:33:574
20. after that spinner put break there that lasts to 01:40:126 (1) -
21. 01:43:574 (4,2) - overlap
22. 01:46:678 (4) - this slider should start at red spike earlier
23. 01:55:643 (3) - Don't make slider this long to just a curve
24. 02:03:229 (1,3) - stack
25. 02:07:712 (2) - don't make slider go off screen
26. 02:09:091 (4,7) - overrlap
27. 02:10:815 (8,3) - stack better
28. 02:28:402 (2,1) - lap
29. 02:25:298 (1) - end kiai here
30. 02:32:884 (3,2) - overlap

1. 00:03:919 (5,6) - blanket better
2. 00:04:264 (6,1) - overlap
3. 00:08:746 (4,5) - blanket
4. 00:09:436 (6,7) - overlap
5. 00:11:850 (2,3,4) - more space
6. 00:16:333 (3,5) - overlap, blanket better
7. 00:18:402 (9) - NC 00:19:091 (1) - no NC
8. 00:24:264 (1) - silent sound starting here, not normal
9. 00:24:609 (2,2) - overlap
10. 00:29:264 (6,1) - blanket better
11. 00:47:195 (5,7) - Not like this, just don't let these touch each other and make this different compared to each other
12. 00:49:953 (4) - pretty lame just to use simply curved sliders so much
13. 00:52:712 (5,7) - pls remake
14. 00:58:229 (5) - DAFUCK IS THIS? more anchors than I have fingers
15. Just follow these notes that I made here check all overlaps, bad sliders etc though the map and fix them, I'm too lazy to point them out because there is so many of them.

greenwood0301 wrote:

Hi Billythekidzz here the mod you ask for

HARD

00:04:609 to 00:05:988 this slider is too long for a hard diff Fixed

00:45:643 move this note for better reading Done

01:35:643 to 01:36:678 this slider is too long Removed

01:44:264 to 01:44:953 this slider is a bit too long Should be fine

01:52:884 to 01:53:574 Slider too long Should be fine

01:55:643 to 01:56:678 Same here Fixed

01:58:402 to 01:59:436 same here Should be fine

02:35:988 move this note for better reading Done

02:03:221 to 02:03:919 too long Should be fine

GL HF for the rank

Fisabillilah wrote:

Expert

First of all, good luck trying to get the rank!

00:02:540 (3) - This slider feels kind of weird. Try doing something like this (including the jumps):
Changed to blanket

00:16:333 (3) - This slider is really unexpected. Shortened it

00:19:436 (2,3,4,5,6) - Turn these into a jump like this: Current one flows well

00:57:022 (4) - A fast slider and then this sudden one. Make it a bit faster so the player doesn't sliderbreak. I think it's fine but might change
01:23:919 (4) - I didn't see this coming... The sliders are so fast I can't even see the reverse arrows! (or maybe I am too stupid to see them) Changed
01:27:712 (3) - Hitsound sounds wrong. Changed

Summary: Work on the sliders and the spacing, everything else is ok. If you want this to get ranked take a look at some 5* maps in the editor and get your ideas from there. Good luck!

lazyboy007 wrote:

Hey from modding queue for NM.

Careful, your kiai should be the same on all diffs :p

Easy:
00:47:367 (3,5) - overlap Fixed
00:57:712 (2,3) - align Done
01:03:229 (2,3) - align Done
01:59:092 (3,2,3) - overlap Fixed
02:25:298 (6,1) - overlap Fixed

Your patterns are too straight, and have too many right angles, feels like an old map :p Make more curves, so the map flow better. Rhythmically everything was correct doe ^^ Added more curved sliders, might need to remap this diff with a higher distance spacing doe

Hard:

00:03:230 (1,2) - blanket What do you mean? Isn't it already a blanket?
00:04:264 (4,2) - stacks weirdly Fixed slightly
00:25:126 (3,4) - blanket What do you mean? Isn't it already a blanket?
00:32:540 (3,4,5) - alignment slightly off Fixed
00:38:229 (3,4) - looks weird :p Fixed
01:48:402 (2,3) - stacking again Fixed
01:49:436 (1,2) - blanket What do you mean? Isn't it already a blanket?
01:58:402 (2) - weird shape :p you can get it better with only 3 points, do something similar to here (yeah the slider isn't correctly timed i know, just an example) Can't seem to get the same shape with 3 points :/

SPOILER

This diff i better than easy imo ^^ Flow better, less squares. Rhythmically your mapset's fine, the only issues I find are due to slider design and/or general map flow. Good luck finishing this

1. are you mapping for ranked? if so, u should add a normal diff and an insane diff to fit the diffspread

1. 00:47:367 (3,5) - since the ar is quite low, the 5 already appears before 3 disappears. thus it's not that neat to have the two objects look too close visually
2. 01:14:953 (2,1) - new players might misread this, i guess sth like http://puu.sh/q2ijW/7ded10a490.jpg or other alternatives can be better off
3. 01:28:746 (3,1) - 01:30:125 (1,1) - rip ds
4. 01:49:436 (1,1) - 02:12:540 (1,1) - a 4/1 gap is needed after a spinner in the lowest diff afaik

1. just some general stuff about this diff: firstly the distance between objects need quite some rearrangement imo, like 00:04:609 (1,2) - 00:04:953 (2,1) - the first one is a 1/2 gap while the other is 1/1, but u simply applied the same distance, it's not gud for reading and not suggested, u should check the rest part according to this ( keeping ds is not a must in hard diff, but to some degree that makes ur map neat overall).
   and about the pattern designing, i think u should avoid objects getting too messy like 00:06:678 (2,3,1,2) - , learning from ranked stuffs can actually help u improve fast.

1. pattern designing same as hard, i'd suggest u map more to get that improved and there's actually no need to stick to a certain mapset

Garden wrote:

[General]

1. are you mapping for ranked? if so, u should add a normal diff and an insane diff to fit the diffspread

[Easy]

1. 00:47:367 (3,5) - since the ar is quite low, the 5 already appears before 3 disappears. thus it's not that neat to have the two objects look too close visually Fixed
2. 01:14:953 (2,1) - new players might misread this, i guess sth like http://puu.sh/q2ijW/7ded10a490.jpg or other alternatives can be better off Fixed
3. 01:28:746 (3,1) - 01:30:125 (1,1) - rip ds Fixed
4. 01:49:436 (1,1) - 02:12:540 (1,1) - a 4/1 gap is needed after a spinner in the lowest diff afaik Doesn't say that in the wiki but I'll keep that in mind

[Hard]

1. just some general stuff about this diff: firstly the distance between objects need quite some rearrangement imo, like 00:04:609 (1,2) - 00:04:953 (2,1) - the first one is a 1/2 gap while the other is 1/1, but u simply applied the same distance, it's not gud for reading and not suggested, u should check the rest part according to this ( keeping ds is not a must in hard diff, but to some degree that makes ur map neat overall).
   and about the pattern designing, i think u should avoid objects getting too messy like 00:06:678 (2,3,1,2) - , learning from ranked stuffs can actually help u improve fast. I changed most of the first part to have the same DS and better flow

[Expert]

1. pattern designing same as hard, i'd suggest u map more to get that improved and there's actually no need to stick to a certain mapset

good luck then~

Lilyanna wrote:

Hello NM from my Queue

MOD

General: some spacing issues need to be fixed make sure u use DS more often and try make cool slider arts and bit polish ur map with good blankets nice BG
Hard
00:03:919 (3,1,2) - avoid overlap 00:04:953 (2) - this slider looks kinda dull and give bad aesthetic maybe try this Fixed
00:04:264 (4,1) - fix blanket Fixed
00:07:022 (3,1,2,3) - fix spacing ist confusing and not equal use ds on some parts when the music is all constent Fixed
00:08:746 (1,2) - blanket Fixed
00:25:126 (3,4) - blanket 00:25:298 (4) - make it less curvy and blanket with note 3 Fixed
00:25:126 (3,4,5) - spacing i rly recommand using DS here Fixed
00:56:160 (3,1,2) - dont like how they overlap Fixed
01:05:988 (4,5) - fix like this maybe Fixed
01:20:126 (2,4) - can stack Fixed
01:28:402 (5,1) - maybe stack 5 with the end of slider 1 Might get confused with a fast stack
01:41:850 (3) - imo if u change this to small jumps will flow better
01:47:712 (2,1) - blanket maybe
01:52:884 (2) - make cool slider art Done
01:55:643 (3) - ^ rly u can be creative with those Done
02:02:884 (2,1) - blanket with the curve of the slider Done.. But can't do it with 1x DS :/

I hope i helped a little :3 Good luck