ArcherLove wrote:

hai

beginner

00:21:461 (21461|2) - ini mending ganti begini http://puu.sh/nlPur/293422635f.png lebih enak dimainin rejected. karena emg bagian yg drumnya cepet di bikin ln, kalo yg di setiap situ kasih note 1/2 terus bosen pasti :'3

intermediate

01:29:278 (89278|1,89278|2) - pindah ke 1-4 aja rejected. suara drum kick nya sama kaya 01:29:067 (89067|2,89067|1,89490|1,89490|2) -

advance

00:06:884 (6884|1) - pindah ke 3 accepted. :3
00:08:152 (8152|2) - pindah ke 2 ^

itu deh ww, sudah siap bubble sih menurut saya
good luck!~

PnX wrote:

From PnX's modding queue

MY MODS

Beginner
No errors

Intermediate
No errors

Advance
00:38:997 (38997|3,38997|2) - Move to 00:38:997 (38997|2,38997|1)

No kds. It's only a little suggestion.
GL >,<

lejel wrote:

(from queue)
Hi~
I'm extremely sorry if it's not that good ._.
But I've tried my best and here's what I found You may reject them doe ._.

Beginner

00:28:856 Triple (Probably too difficult for beginner?)
01:02:447 (62447|3,64137|0,65828|3,69208|0,70898|3) - Doubles
01:28:856 Single

Intermediate

00:09:208 (9208|3,10053|0,10898|2,11321|2,11743|3) - Only a suggestion.. Doubles here? If it seems too difficult, it's okay
00:12:588 (12588|2,13433|1,14278|1,15968|3,16814|0,17659|3,18504|0,19349|1,20194|2) - Same as ^

Advanced

No errors
But I found something in the background that bothers me.. IDK if it's only on me o rno, but there's 3 bg(s) in my storyboard (design) that makes the bg black all the time?

Sorry if it's not a perfect mod and suggestions
Anyway thanks for queuing in my page ^^

cgk wrote:

Re-mod checks. Hii I'm comeback, lol

Only at advanced diff 00:18:715 (18715|3) - move to 1. for the same variaton 00:19:560 (19560|1,19560|3,20405|2,20405|0) -

Good luck. Your beatmap nearly ready for ranked. Ask someone to check your metadata.
No Kudos pls.

Protastic101 wrote:

Hello~
Beginner

00:33:715 - Add something since you can easily hear the drum play? sure. accepted. also i added note at 00:28:644 - because it had same sound too.
01:22:518 (82518|1) - ? I can't hear anything playing here that would fit an LN. rejected. it had sound like 00:55:475 (55475|0) - too.

Intermediate

00:39:419 (39419|2,39525|3,39630|2,40264|1,40370|0,40475|1) - One handed 1/4 beat might be a bit difficult for an intermediate difficulty. Hmm.. I agree! done.

Advanced

All good

No kudosu, just small suggestions Excellent map. I would love to see this ranked. Have a star. *pew pew*

Muu-chan wrote:

hii~
udah bagus kok mapnya

cmn itu knp pake widescreen? kayanya gada SBnya deh.. mending di uncheck aja. Malah BGnya jd item gini u u http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4649117
aku saranin jg SVnya kaya gini. Lebih enjoyable imo http://puu.sh/nth7d/3309a3dd82.png

goodluck^^

yuleee wrote:

maps perjuangan
cepet ranked yaa

443 wrote:

Panggilan buat ngecek metadata._.

Artist : THE ORAL CIGARETTES ✔
Romanised Artist : THE ORAL CIGARETTES ✔
Title : 狂乱 Hey Kids!! ✔
Romanised Title : Kyouran Hey Kids!! ✔
Source : ノラガミ ARAGOTO ✔
Tags : noragami aragoto opening 2 tv size hiyori yato yukine ✔ tambain aj yg kurang

maap yak lama. sumber :
http://noragami-anime.net/disco/detail.php?id=1011083
http://theoralcigarettes.com/discography/
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/371419
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/371118

ref nya di artist itu pake ジ オーラル シガレッツ (https://ja.wikipedia.org/wiki/THE_ORAL_CIGARETTES) tapi karena yg prev ranked bitmep nya pada ga pake, yasudah nggausah di pake.
mungkin sisanya ntar dicek lg sama om/tante bn. cuma bs segitu aj

gudlak bitmepnya om >,<

no kds.

makasih gugel, makasih trenslet, makasih semuanya :v

Lina Sintyadewi wrote:

ew, mending kalo udah ada storyboardnya coba cari orang yang bisa mod story board biar ga ke-DQ gara gara storyboard

Mark101 wrote:

Hi from my metadata checking queue :3

Artist: THE ORAL CIGARETTES
Title: 狂乱 Hey Kids!!
Source: ノラガミ ARAGOTO
Tags: noragami aragoto opening 2 tv size hiyori yato yukine

Everything right, good luck :3

DkAngelS wrote:

From my queue
More songs with SB/SV, Oh yeah...
I need really a tutorial to how to make SB ;_; .

Advanced

00:58:433 (58433|0,58644|1) - I don't know about this if you need apply ctrl+g.
and
01:09:525 to 01:11:109 - Using same 0,1 pattern, but I think is okay with the song.

That's all.
This song is too good for me to modding it, maybe is because was 3.02 stars, I don't know.
Anyway, feel free to reject it if you won't use this suggestions or if my mod was too short.
Good luck

Nivrad00 wrote:

From Nivrad00's Mania Queue

Looks like a simple but very competent map. I see you mapped mostly drums, but there's enough variation to make it interesting and the SVs and storyboard (kudos to lejel) adds enough to make it outstanding.

Speaking of SVs, nice!! They add a lot of flavor but they're still very reasonable to read. The 1.00x and 1.05x parts are an interesting touch that not a lot of mappers consider. I hope you keep experimenting with SV in the future.

I also think you did a great job of using repetition (pattern-wise) to make your map more orderly and structured. Makes a lot of sense for drums, which are usually very orderly and structured in the first place, but lots of people don't think about that.

So uh, no suggestions. Looks like you have enough mods already, anyway. This is a wonderful little set so I hope you manage to get it ranked!! ;n;

Have some stars

-BANGKE- wrote:

Bubbled!

-BANGKE- wrote:

Bubbled!

Pope Gadget wrote:

-BANGKE- wrote:

Bubbled!

>implying

yuleee wrote:

youuu~

Crusts wrote:

dah bubble kapan ranked ? xD bentar lagi 1st ranked map dah om hiki

Hamids- wrote:

dorrr

-NanoRIPE- wrote:

BGnya rada gimana gitu :3 ~
kayak ada bekas crop dan kurang rapi ~
coba cari bg yg lain ~
btw Nice SB ~

Nivrad00 wrote:

BN check

General

Timing

Why don't you make the kiais consistent?

You should also consider making the speeds a little more consistent:
00:22:095 - Beginner and Advanced have 0.95x, but Intermediate has 1.0x
01:02:659 - Beginner and Advanced have 1.05x, but Intermediate has 1.0x
That doesn't really make sense ==a fixed

Storyboard

There are some unused files in the SB folder that you should delete:

honor-hero.png
thumb.db (looks like this was a glitch or something, should be ok if you just delete it P:)

5548272.jpg and 608362.jpg are too large based on the ranking criteria. Make sure 548272.jpg is less than 640 pixels wide and 608362.jpg is less than 480 pixels tall. Here's what the RC says:

The maximum dimensions for tall or wide scrolling images are 640x1440 and 1920x480 respectively. This is for the sake of gameplay performance, image loading time, and filesize.

Hitsounding

I found a couple of unused files that you should delete. I checked this by using ctrl+f on the .osu's, but if I made a mistake please tell me which diff and what time the file is used ;n;

LR_Drum Rpd vFast.wav deleted
LR_Drum Rpd Fast.wav

NOTE: you have both of these files in the song folder:
LR_Drum Rpd Fast .wav
LR_Drum Rpd Fast.wav
The first one is used but the second one is not, so you only have to delete the second one deleted

Another issue: Beginner uses a hitsound called "LR_Drum Hit Beat Low.wav" which does not exist I'm so sorry that it's my mistake. I forgot to make it LR_Drum Beat Low.wav instead of LR_Drum Hit Beat Low.wav. So, I've changed the name of that hitsound. Please add LR_Drum Hit Beat Low or use another sound instead

Difficulties

I actually have no suggestions lol lol xD

Great mapping! There's a lot of parallel construction, which many 4K mappers tend to neglect. SVs look cool. I'll be glad to bubble once you address the issues above. You may need to call lejel and Raika to fix some things ;n; Thanks Nivrad! I've fixed Raika's hitsound and for the storyboard, i'm waiting confirmation from lejel.