1. Futsuu (1,95 stars, 251 notes)
2. Kantan (1,3 stars, 161 notes)
3. Muzukashii (2,42 stars, 366 notes)
4. Oni (3,21 stars, 502 notes)

WhaHey!

ZTH wrote:

Hello~ From my modding queue. Please note that these are just my personal suggestions and are entirely optional.

General

1. Uncheck "Widescreen Support" on Kantan and Muzukashii

Oni

1. 00:04:783 (8,9) - Ctrl+g. Sound of the trumpet (?) is increasing so d k works better here. Done.
2. 00:20:300 (68) - Change to d. Tune is low. Honestly i think it sounds way better with a k.
3. 00:26:920 (99) - Change to d. Same reason as above. ^
4. 00:31:886 (117,118,119,120,121) - I would honestly go for kdk k k or kdk d k here to emphasize the trumpet(?). changed to kdk d k.
5. 00:46:783 (181) - Change to d. ^ ^
6. 00:53:403 (212) - Change to d. ^ ^
7. 00:58:369 (230,231,232) - how about kdk instead? Follows the tune better. Done.
8. 01:12:024 (278) - Change to k to follow that powerful trumpet. Done.
9. 01:25:265 (319) - Change to k for same reason. Done.
10. 01:38:093 (361,362,363,364,365) - might go for kdk k k or kdk d k to emphasize the chello(?) sound. changed to kdk d k.
11. 01:52:990 (428,429) - Ctrl+g. Tune is increasing. Done.
12. 01:58:783 (460) - Change to k. The song is at its climax and putting k emphasizes the ending better. Done.
13. 02:02:300 (8,9) - Ctrl+g for same reason. Done.

Muzukashii

1. 00:04:162 (17) - Change to d. This note serves as a trumpet build up. Done.
2. 00:20:300 (63) - Change to d to follow the decreasing tone. Same reason as oni, it sounds better with a k.
3. 00:26:920 (87) - Change to d for same reason. ^
4. 00:31:886 (102,103,104,105,106) - kdk k k or kdk d k (See Oni) changed to kdk d k
5. 00:46:782 (147) - d ^ ^
6. 00:53:403 (171) - d ^ ^
7. 00:58:369 (187,188,189) - kdk (See Oni) Done.
8. 01:12:024 (222) - Change to k for the powerful trumpet. Done.
9. 01:14:300 (226) - Change to k as the sound of the trumpet is decreasing. Done.
10. 01:25:265 (16) - k for powerful trumpet Done.
11. 01:38:093 (14,15,16) - kdk (See Oni) Done.
12. 01:43:886 - 01:46:369 - The sudden change in fewer note density makes this part a bit off. I recommend adding some notes for better transition. Added few notes.
13. 02:01:679 (100) - Change to d. ^ Done.

Futsuu

1. 00:04:162 (11) - Change to d for build up. Done.
2. 00:32:714 (17,18) - Either change both to k to follow the increasing tune or only change note 18. Changed note 18.
3. 00:58:783 (14,15,16) - Ctrl+g. Increasing tune. Done.
4. 01:19:472 (48) - Change to k. High pitch going on here. Done.
5. 01:38:921 (15,16) - Same as 00:32:714 (17,18) Done.
6. 01:57:955 (58) and 01:59:610 (62) - I would put k in these notes for variation + emphasizes the climax better. (Increases the difficulty a little bit, but since this is at the end of the kiai, the difficulty serves a purpose.) Done.
7. 02:01:679 (6) - d for trumpet build up. Done.

Kantan

1. 00:08:714 (10) - I would move this note to 00:09:127 and change it to k for better emphasis on the trumpet. Done.
2. 01:08:714 (77,78) - Ctrl+g since the tune is decreasing + for consistency. This is similar to 00:05:817 (6,7) Done.
3. 01:11:610 (81) - Again, move this note to 01:12:024 - and change it to k for better emphasis. Done.
4. 01:21:955 (92,93) - Ctrl+g for consistency. Done.
5. 01:24:852 (96) - You know what to do. Done.
6. 01:46:783 - 02:00:024 - I am not sure about this 1-3-1-3-1 note pattern usage. I know Kantan mostly consists of independent and simple patterns but it doesn't really follow the song structure and plays a bit inconsistent. You should get more mods opinion on this. I changed a bit the kiai, i hope it's better now.

Overall a satisfying map, but the second kiai on every difficulty seems a bit questionable. Don't really depend on me but I find the patterns a bit independent/simplistic and this quite jinx the flow. You should get more mods especially on that part. We'll see, i personaly think it follow the music pretty well.

Other than that, GL with your map and hope you can bring some Christmas spirits!

Kazaze wrote:

Hello ~ ♥

Your map is really good I love it ! °^°
I don't think there's many things to change, but here are some suggestions :

Kantan

00:33:127 - d ok.
01:07:058 (75) - D ok. and 01:07:679 (76) - k No.
and same with 01:20:300 (90) and 01:20:920 (91) same.
01:39:334 (10) - d ok.
Change 01:52:576 (29,30,31) and 01:57:541 (37,38,39) to d - k - k caca.

Futsuu

00:37:266 (28) - d and 00:37:679 (29) - k foutix.
01:14:300 (41) - k Fabien barthez.
Move 01:30:230 (66) to 01:30:024 and make the spinner start from 01:30:230 (Just like in the Kantan) Poisson vert.
01:38:300 - Add a d here orgasme.

Muzukashii

00:16:162 (46) - k Balle des boules
00:22:783 (70) - ^ Père fouras
00:37:265 (117) - d Grozibou
00:37:679 (118,119,120) - Change to k - d - k Thomas le train.
00:38:714 - Add a k Bizon futé
00:39:541 - Add a d Près de la mer.
01:04:369 (206) - Move this note to 01:04:472 ( Or at least remove it, it doesn't fit the melody at all ) Prout.
01:30:230 (25) - Remove it and make the spinner begin from it ( 01:30:230 Like in the Kantan again ) Frank provost.

Oni

Change 00:17:817 (54) to k pd.
Change 00:18:231 (55,56,57,58,59) - to d - d - k - d - k Tu n'as pas saisi le concept.
> 00:24:024 (81,82,83,84,85,86,87,88,89,90) - As above
> 00:43:886 (163,164,165,166,167,168,169,170,171,172) - ^ manouche
> 00:50:507 (194,195,196,197,198,199,200,201,202,203) - ^[/color] forain
01:32:300 (339) - d Galette d'épautre.

I hope my mod will help this map getting ranked ! :3 ♥

1. 00:00:852 ~ 00:10:783 - i think the note density should be gradually increasing rather than decreasing in this section because more instrument is played by the time and should make it gradually more intense. but it's just my opinion.

1. 00:01:679 - delete to give calmer opening. build up will start from 00:02:507 -
2. 00:05:403 - in the other hand, can add note here to make it denser because more instrument is played.
3. 00:12:438 - change to k? pitch sounds same with 00:14:093 -
4. 00:14:920 (1,2,3) - i think it fits the song better if changed to k---dk , like at 00:48:024 -
5. 00:14:920 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - the last 3 notes has lower pitch so using same pattern not sounds good to me. maybe change to kkd-dkd
6. 00:21:541 ~ 00:27:334 - same as two mods above. or maybe can make variation like make 00:24:024 (14,15,16,17,18,19) - kdk-ddk
7. 00:28:162 - delete this note to give player some break after finisher in previous section
8. 00:29:403 - move to 00:30:231 - and change 00:31:472 - to k (high pitch)
9. 00:33:127 - change to k
10. 00:34:783 - delete, and 00:36:024 - move to 00:36:852 -
11. 00:45:955 - change to k? sounds different with 00:45:541 -
12. 00:50:507 (51,52,53,54,55,56) - something like kdk-dkd
13. 00:59:196 - move to 00:58:369 - for pattern consistency. and change 00:59:610 - to d
14. 01:14:507 (82) - change to k? pitch considered still high
15. 01:20:920 - maybe off beat is a bit hard for newbie. move to 01:21:541 - instead?
16. 01:07:679 - ^
17. 01:35:196 - change to k? same pitch with 01:36:024 -
18. 01:41:817 - ^
19. 01:47:610 (21,22,23,24) - try kdk-k? fits better imo
20. 01:52:576 - change to d and 01:52:989 - delete
21. 01:56:300 - move to 01:54:645 - and adjust the coloring
22. 02:00:852 - better change to d and move to 02:02:507 - to give break after kiai. and trombone is playing there
23. 02:06:231 (47) - move to 02:06:645 - and change to k, consistency with 00:09:127 -
    

1. 00:01:058 (2,3,5) - i would delete these to make less density in the intro
2. 00:08:714 (1,2) - swap to fits the pitch better
3. 00:10:783 ~ 00:14:093 - you only put 1 note at this section in kantan. remove some for better spread.
4. 00:24:024 - maybe change to k to make variation. sounds different than 00:17:403 -
5. 00:27:955 - deleting this would result in better spread with kantan. and to provide more break.
6. 00:31:265 - ^
7. 00:34:576 - ^
8. 00:37:679 - better move it to 00:38:093 - and 00:39:334 - delete this
9. 00:50:507 - change to k?
10. 00:54:438 - delete
11. 00:55:886 - change to k and move to 00:56:300 -
12. 01:01:058 - delete
13. 01:02:507 - change to k and move to 01:02:920 -
14. 01:12:024 - k for high pitch?
15. 01:25:265 - ^
16. 01:34:162 - delete.
17. 01:40:783 - ^
18. 01:43:886 - - change to k and move to 01:44:300 -
19. 01:46:783 (31) - i think D will give stronger impact here
20. the last kiai is a bit questionable.
21. 01:48:438 - change to k? it's different than 01:50:093 -
22. 01:53:403 - and change to d to make the pattern consistent
23. 01:52:783 (1,2) - can swap these to make reverse pattern of 01:59:196 (1,2,3) -
24. 01:56:714 - d here?
25. 01:57:955 - ^
26. 02:00:230 (2,3,5) - i would delete this. same as the intro.
27. 02:06:231 (1,2) - swap

1. 00:00:955 (2) - consider deleting this? triplet right from the start seems not so generous.
2. 00:01:783 - ^
3. 00:12:231 - delete this? repetitive pattern is boring imo, and change 00:12:024 - to d if applied
4. 00:13:886 - delete?
5. 00:38:714 - change to d? lower pitch than 00:37:886 - or make 00:37:679 (117,118,119) - this kdk
6. 00:40:576 (123,124,125,126) - change to D d k d. 00:41:817 - has same pitch with 00:43:472 - and for consistency with 00:47:196 (147,148,149,150) -
7. 00:56:093 - deleting this will result in better spread with futsuu
8. 01:02:714 - ^
9. 00:57:541 - consider delete this too to give some break, same like you did at 01:37:265 -
10. 01:19:058 (2,3,4) - change to k kk? it fits the high pitch better imo and give more emphasis at 01:20:300 -

1. 00:00:955 (2,2) - delete
2. 00:13:472 - move to 00:13:058 - ? sounds weird if empty there
3. 00:15:748 (1,2) - swap this to match the high bass
4. 00:22:369 (1,2) - ^
5. 00:24:231 - maybe make some variation here by changing this to k
6. 00:25:058 - ^
7. 00:25:886 - ^
8. 00:50:714 - ^
9. 00:51:541 - ^
10. 00:52:369 - ^
11. 01:09:955 - put a break here seems good
12. 01:14:920 - ^
13. 01:23:196 - ^
14. 01:28:162 - ^
15. 01:30:645 (331,332,333,334,335,336) - consider change them into a spinner like other diffs? it's pretty boring there
16. the patterning in last kiai looks questionable. try something like below? (taking 01:47:610 ~ 01:52:162 - as example)
    

Flying Pan wrote:

and also requested in my queue~

[General]

1. 00:00:852 ~ 00:10:783 - i think the note density should be gradually increasing rather than decreasing in this section because more instrument is played by the time and should make it gradually more intense. but it's just my opinion. I agree for Kantan/futsuu but doesn't work for muzu and oni.

[Kantan]

1. 00:01:679 - delete to give calmer opening. build up will start from 00:02:507 - Done.
2. 00:05:403 - in the other hand, can add note here to make it denser because more instrument is played. It sounds really weird to me.
3. 00:12:438 - change to k? pitch sounds same with 00:14:093 - They are both really different sound imo.
4. 00:14:920 (1,2,3) - i think it fits the song better if changed to k---dk , like at 00:48:024 - Yeah, changed.
5. 00:14:920 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - the last 3 notes has lower pitch so using same pattern not sounds good to me. maybe change to kkd-dkd
6. 00:21:541 ~ 00:27:334 - same as two mods above. or maybe can make variation like make 00:24:024 (14,15,16,17,18,19) - kdk-ddk Everything changed.
7. 00:28:162 - delete this note to give player some break after finisher in previous section Done.
8. 00:29:403 - move to 00:30:231 - and change 00:31:472 - to k (high pitch) That works too but i'll keep my pattern, but maybe i'll change it if got the same suggestion.
9. 00:33:127 - change to k Done.
10. 00:34:783 - delete, and 00:36:024 - move to 00:36:852 - Note deleted.
11. 00:45:955 - change to k? sounds different with 00:45:541 - Was already a k ._.
12. 00:50:507 (51,52,53,54,55,56) - something like kdk-dkd Done.
13. 00:59:196 - move to 00:58:369 - for pattern consistency. and change 00:59:610 - to d Done.
14. 01:14:507 (82) - change to k? pitch considered still high Done.
15. 01:20:920 - maybe off beat is a bit hard for newbie. move to 01:21:541 - instead? Done.
16. 01:07:679 - ^ Done.
17. 01:35:196 - change to k? same pitch with 01:36:024 - Done.
18. 01:41:817 - ^ Done.
19. 01:47:610 (21,22,23,24) - try kdk-k? fits better imo Done.
20. 01:52:576 - change to d and 01:52:989 - delete Done.
21. 01:56:300 - move to 01:54:645 - and adjust the coloring Done.
22. 02:00:852 - better change to d and move to 02:02:507 - to give break after kiai. and trombone is playing there Done.
23. 02:06:231 (47) - move to 02:06:645 - and change to k, consistency with 00:09:127 - Done.
    

[Futsuu]

1. 00:01:058 (2,3,5) - i would delete these to make less density in the intro Done.
2. 00:08:714 (1,2) - swap to fits the pitch better Done.
3. 00:10:783 ~ 00:14:093 - you only put 1 note at this section in kantan. remove some for better spread. Done.
4. 00:24:024 - maybe change to k to make variation. sounds different than 00:17:403 - Done.
5. 00:27:955 - deleting this would result in better spread with kantan. and to provide more break. Done.
6. 00:31:265 - ^ Done.
7. 00:34:576 - ^ Done.
8. 00:37:679 - better move it to 00:38:093 - and 00:39:334 - delete this Done.
9. 00:50:507 - change to k? Done.
10. 00:54:438 - delete Done.
11. 00:55:886 - change to k and move to 00:56:300 - Done.
12. 01:01:058 - delete Done.
13. 01:02:507 - change to k and move to 01:02:920 - Done.
14. 01:12:024 - k for high pitch? Done.
15. 01:25:265 - ^ Done.
16. 01:34:162 - delete. Done.
17. 01:40:783 - ^ Done.
18. 01:43:886 - - change to k and move to 01:44:300 - Done.
19. 01:46:783 (31) - i think D will give stronger impact here Done.
20. the last kiai is a bit questionable.
21. 01:48:438 - change to k? it's different than 01:50:093 - Done.
22. 01:53:403 - and change to d to make the pattern consistent Done.
23. 01:52:783 (1,2) - can swap these to make reverse pattern of 01:59:196 (1,2,3) - Done.
24. 01:56:714 - d here? Done.
25. 01:57:955 - ^ Done.
26. 02:00:230 (2,3,5) - i would delete this. same as the intro. Done.
27. 02:06:231 (1,2) - swap Done.

muzu and oni later. (¦3[___]

sorry for late.
[Muzukashii]

1. 00:00:955 (2) - consider deleting this? triplet right from the start seems not so generous. Done.
2. 00:01:783 - ^ Done.
3. 00:12:231 - delete this? repetitive pattern is boring imo, and change 00:12:024 - to d if applied Done.
4. 00:13:886 - delete? Done.
5. 00:38:714 - change to d? lower pitch than 00:37:886 - or make 00:37:679 (117,118,119) - this kdk Changed to d.
6. 00:40:576 (123,124,125,126) - change to D d k d. 00:41:817 - has same pitch with 00:43:472 - and for consistency with 00:47:196 (147,148,149,150) Done. -
7. 00:56:093 - deleting this will result in better spread with futsuu Done.
8. 01:02:714 - ^ Done.
9. 00:57:541 - consider delete this too to give some break, same like you did at 01:37:265 - Done.
10. 01:19:058 (2,3,4) - change to k kk? it fits the high pitch better imo and give more emphasis at 01:20:300 - Done.

[Oni]

1. 00:00:955 (2,2) - delete Done.
2. 00:13:472 - move to 00:13:058 - ? sounds weird if empty there Doing this would make it no consitent with here 00:11:817
3. 00:15:748 (1,2) - swap this to match the high bass Doesn't sound that good imo.
4. 00:22:369 (1,2) - ^ Same.
5. 00:24:231 - maybe make some variation here by changing this to k
6. 00:25:058 - ^
7. 00:25:886 - ^
8. 00:50:714 - ^
9. 00:51:541 - ^
10. 00:52:369 - ^ All applied, i guess variation is better.
11. 01:09:955 - put a break here seems good Done.
12. 01:14:920 - ^ Done.
13. 01:23:196 - ^ Done.
14. 01:28:162 - ^ Done.
15. 01:30:645 (331,332,333,334,335,336) - consider change them into a spinner like other diffs? it's pretty boring there Done.
16. the patterning in last kiai looks questionable. try something like below? (taking 01:47:610 ~ 01:52:162 - as example) Done.
    

Chromoxx wrote:

Hey, here's my mod

[Color Code]

VERY IMPORTANT, must be changed in order for the map to be rankable
IMPORTANT pattern issues, issues with note placement/patterns that don't fit the song at all in my opinion and should be changed in my opinion unless you have a very good reason not to
SUGGESTIONS, these would work better in my opinion and should be changed in my opinion unless you have a good reason not to
MINOR SUGGESTIONS, these are usually very minor pattern fixes, that would work better in my opinion but are also fine as they are, feel free to do whatever you want with these, since these are usually entirely objective

[General]

seems fine, audio file is fine, BG has the right resolution, Metadata is all in order

[Kantan]

- uncheck Widescreen Support
00:40:576 (37) - maybe change to D, to emphasize the pitch change more, the K also fits in a way, but it kinda ignores the distinct change of pitch between the notes I prefer K, since it's consitent with 00:47:196 (47) -
01:11:196 (78) - maybe change to d, i think the pitch change between the note before isn't that high to warrant a dk here, but i guess it's fine tho it isn't that high but i think it's better than d d.
01:24:437 (93) - same same ^.
01:38:507 (8,10) - ctrl G, the pitch goes up from 8/9 to 10 Yep, changed.
same as the purple suggestions before

[Futsuu]

00:40:576 (30) - maybe change to D, to emphasize the pitch change more, the K also fits in a way, but it kinda ignores the distinct change of pitch between the notes This time it's fine since 00:47:197 (3) - is a d.
00:53:404 (2,3) - maybe ctrl G to emphasize the distinct pitch change between 00:53:818 (3) - and the following notes more No change here.
00:57:748 (10,11) - ctrl G, the pitch goes up i think Deleted 10 lol.
01:03:748 (22) - change to d, pitch goes down from the note before i think it's fine like this.
01:04:575 (23,24) - ctrl G, the pitch goes down throughout this triplet same.
01:07:058 (27) - maybe change to d to emphasize the pitch changes more Yes.
01:11:196 (34) - maybe change to d, same reasons as kantan No change.
01:24:437 (55) - ^ same.
01:37:472 (10,11) - ctrl G, the pitch goes up imo Deleted 10 too.
- it might be a bit too dense at the start but idk if that's acceptable or not, just keep it in mind

[Muzukashii]

- uncheck Widescreen Support
00:37:679 (114,115,116,117,118,119,120,121,122) - maybe consider turning these into x xx to suit the rythm better It is intentional to be only mapped on oni diff.
01:04:162 (200,201,202) - ^ same.
01:07:058 (207) - maybe change to D, would emphasize the note and the pitch changes more imo Yes.
01:10:783 (214) - maybe change to d (like i said in the other diffs) no change.
01:20:300 (5) - change to d, the pitch goes down and it'S a strong sound Done.
01:24:024 (12) - same as the other purple one no change.
01:26:920 (18,19,20) - these 3 are exactly the same pitch, so they should be the same color imo Yeah.
01:43:885 (32,33,34,37,38,39) - maybe consider making them x xx No changes here.

[Oni]

00:40:162 (148,149,150,151,152) - 152 should be a d imo, maybe change it to kkkkd or something like that I think it's better how it is.
- that's it lol XD

I think that should be it XD well anyway, i thope it's helpful
GL with this

1. .mp3 seems so small. if possible, change to bigger file (and +10% hitsound) please.

1. 00:43:886 (41,42,43) - How about changing to kdk to make reversed pattern of next dkd? it would fit to patterns flow imo.
2. 00:50:507 (51,52,53,54,55,56) - consider changing pattern for making various patterns? kdk-dkd is so similar as prev dkd pattern. eg. kkd-ddk / dkk-kdd etc.
3. 01:37:679 (7) - change to kat for avoid continuous don? also it would more fit to flow imo.
4. 01:54:231 (31,32,33) -, 01:57:541 (36,37,38) -. I'd propose changing to kkd/ddk for making various patterns. similar as above.

1. 00:08:714 (14) - move to 1/1 tick left? same as 01:11:196 (33) -.
2. 00:24:024 (9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1) - How about making reversed patterns of 00:17:403 (30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,1,2) -? I think it would make more interesting pattern.
3. 01:28:989 (61) - maybe d is better imo, since this sound is similar pitch as (62,63).
4. 01:53:403 (44) - 01:55:058 (48) - 01:56:714 (52) - 01:58:369 (56) -. change to k/d/k/d for making d-k-d-k-/k-d-k-d- as an expression of different pitch sound?
5. 02:06:231 (9) - see above.

1. 01:55:886 (78,79,80) - You used the same pattern in the 01:49:265 (50,51,52) - and 01:50:920 (57,58,59) -, so I think it should be dkd as with 01:54:231 (71,72,73) - in the same way.
2. 01:56:714 (81,82,83,84,85,86,87,88,89,90,91,92,93,94) - I'd suggest to use reversed pattern of 01:50:093 (53,54,55,56,57,58,59,60,61,62,63,64,65,66) -. (kkk-d---d-k-d---/ddd-k---k-d-k---). it would more fit to patterns flow imo.

1. 00:14:507 (40) - maybe k? higher pitch sound than (39).
2. 00:21:127 (71) -, 00:47:610 (184) -, etc. ^
3. 01:09:127 (270,271,272) -, 01:12:438 (278,279,280) -. adjust the ratio of pattern? dkk are so many in this part. also it would more fit to sound imo.
4. 01:22:369 (309,310,311) - 01:25:679 (317,318,319) - ^
5. 01:30:231 (330) - d? lower pitch than (329)

tasuke912 wrote:

Hi. from TNA queue.
[ General]

1. .mp3 seems so small. if possible, change to bigger file (and +10% hitsound) please. Audio quality is good so i don't think that's a issue. +10% hitsound added.

[ Kantan]

1. 00:43:886 (41,42,43) - How about changing to kdk to make reversed pattern of next dkd? it would fit to patterns flow imo. Done.
2. 00:50:507 (51,52,53,54,55,56) - consider changing pattern for making various patterns? kdk-dkd is so similar as prev dkd pattern. eg. kkd-ddk / dkk-kdd etc. Changed to kkd ddk.
3. 01:37:679 (7) - change to kat for avoid continuous don? also it would more fit to flow imo. Sounds better, changed.
4. 01:54:231 (31,32,33) -, 01:57:541 (36,37,38) -. I'd propose changing to kkd/ddk for making various patterns. similar as above. First one changed to kkd and second one to ddk.

[ Futsuu]

1. 00:08:714 (14) - move to 1/1 tick left? same as 01:11:196 (33) -. Yes sure.
2. 00:24:024 (9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1) - How about making reversed patterns of 00:17:403 (30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,1,2) -? I think it would make more interesting pattern. I like the idea, changed.
3. 01:28:989 (61) - maybe d is better imo, since this sound is similar pitch as (62,63). I keep k, 61 and 62 don't have the same sound imo.
4. 01:53:403 (44) - 01:55:058 (48) - 01:56:714 (52) - 01:58:369 (56) -. change to k/d/k/d for making d-k-d-k-/k-d-k-d- as an expression of different pitch sound? Yes yes yes.
5. 02:06:231 (9) - see above. Changed.

[ Muzukashii]

1. 01:55:886 (78,79,80) - You used the same pattern in the 01:49:265 (50,51,52) - and 01:50:920 (57,58,59) -, so I think it should be dkd as with 01:54:231 (71,72,73) - in the same way. Done.
2. 01:56:714 (81,82,83,84,85,86,87,88,89,90,91,92,93,94) - I'd suggest to use reversed pattern of 01:50:093 (53,54,55,56,57,58,59,60,61,62,63,64,65,66) -. (kkk-d---d-k-d---/ddd-k---k-d-k---). it would more fit to patterns flow imo. Okay, it sounds better.

[ Oni]

1. 00:14:507 (40) - maybe k? higher pitch sound than (39). No change here, they have really similar sound imo.
2. 00:21:127 (71) -, 00:47:610 (184) -, etc. ^ ^
3. 01:09:127 (270,271,272) -, 01:12:438 (278,279,280) -. adjust the ratio of pattern? dkk are so many in this part. also it would more fit to sound imo.
4. 01:22:369 (309,310,311) - 01:25:679 (317,318,319) - ^ I think i'll keep them, since i can't any other pattern that fit more than dkk.
5. 01:30:231 (330) - d? lower pitch than (329) Done.

Good luck! Thanks!

Nwolf wrote:

TNA#2 inc

[General]

tasuke is right, the mp3 isn't the best. It's also 128 kb/s which is lower than the normal mp3 file on osu (of course there are some but it would be better to have sth higher) Uh, i guess i can't avoid it, i have to re-do offset x) Changed to a better mp3 at 192/kbps. ( To next modder, please check my new offset ;w; )

[Futsuu]

00:14:507 - I think this one breaks flow a bit. It's okay to leave out notes here in Kantan because there you have 1 note in place for 2, but here you have 00:14:920 (25,26) - two notes. It would be best to just have a don in this spot to finish melody. Yeah, applied.
00:21:127 - ^, but this would also mean that 00:20:300 (2) - would have to be deleted. ^
Repeat in kiai ^
00:53:817 - 01:07:058 - In this part I'm not sure if it's too wise to cover up and therefore remove emphasis on 00:55:059 (5,6) - these notes by having 00:54:645 (4) - these ones. While spread demands something like this, the question remains if the map needs it. Possibly Kantan can have reduced notes here too. I don't think it's bad either to keep it like this, i just swap some notes to have a better emphasis.
01:00:231 - And maybe have a kat here for 1/2 doublet. Okay.

[Muzukashii]

00:00:852 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - Compare this with 00:04:162 (15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26) - . You build up with 1/2 and even 1/4 in the beginning only to have it fall into 3/2 and even bigger breaks. It's a pretty big difference and feels pretty uncomfortable and unfitting, since you play a lot and suddenly you play almost nothing even though the song keeps its pace. I think you should have less notes in the first four seconds. Well, i'll consider it if this become an issue, but i can't remove notes, This sounds so bad, especialy on oni.
00:54:438 (172) - Together with Futsuu, I think this part can have less notes in Muzukashii too. 00:57:748 (181) - 01:01:058 (191) - my recommendation would be all these notes since you have a lot of 1/2 close to each other and then nothing again, which doesn't suit the song. Removed 00:57:748 (181) - but i keep 01:01:058 (191) - for consistency with 00:54:438 (168,169) -
01:05:817 (205,206) - Add a note 01:06:024 - here and change to dkd Done.
01:06:645 - Add a don here too, for da melody ^
01:33:541 - Repeat stuff in this part ^
02:00:024 - Same as intro Same.

[Oni]

00:00:852 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Same as Muzukashii, just that the difference is even bigger now Same as oni.
00:10:783 (25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39) - I don't think this works well with the song. It doesn't show any pattern with a 3/1 length, so I'd actually recommend doing kdk 1/2 triplets, like this (following the up down up down thing in bass) Sounds nice, applied.
00:33:541 (122,123,124,125) - why why why why why why why why why why literal the first time you really overmap. 1/2 should be enough here, lower diffs all give melody a break here. Removing this also makes 00:40:162 (148,149,150,151,152) - way more important. idk idk idk idk idk, changed to 1/2 pattern.
00:54:231 (215) - Remember Muzukashii? Yeah, I think you can remove this note here. So 00:54:438 (216) - becomes more noticeable. Same applies to 00:57:541 (227) - 01:00:852 (239) - I agree to all but 00:57:541 (227) - has clearly a noticable sound so i keep it.
01:33:541 - Repeat in this part ^
02:00:024 - Same as intro Same.


nice set! Thanks!

1. At 25% some parts seem a bit early (ESPECIALLY THE END)... but it seems to play fine with low OD, aaaah.
2. +10% Volume boost? Below 40% is not preferred in taiko.

1. 00:36:179 (133,134) - I wish these were swapped whenever they happened since it follows the song better, but it seems you do it every time so aah.
   
2. 01:03:489 (245,246,247) - k kk, since you use d dk earlier in the song? (And you seem to never re-use patterns)
3. 01:05:144 (251,252,253) - ^
   And maybe as another variation for the later one:
4. 01:43:213 (40) - k
5. 01:44:351 (44) - ^
6. 01:44:868 (46) - ^
   I kinda don't like how d dk d dd sounds, since it seems you're mapping low sounds when the sounds are actually high, but it's fine.

1. 00:38:041 (118) - Delete? The other two of these in the map don't have a note in the middle here. Plus, it gets too close to Oni.
2. 01:19:420 - d? Since there's no room for a break or anything you may as well map tougher to get away from Futsuu.

1. NICE I STILL SUCK AT MODDING FUTSUU

1. 01:43:627 (17) - You've had pretty consistent breaks for a while, but here there's a bit too many notes in a row as it goes into kiai. Deleting this fits the pipe sound and makes a nice 4/1 break.

OzzyOzrock wrote:

Let's get back into business.

[General]

1. At 25% some parts seem a bit early (ESPECIALLY THE END)... but it seems to play fine with low OD, aaaah. I agree, but idk how to fix it if it's needed ._.
2. +10% Volume boost? Below 40% is not preferred in taiko. Done.

[Oni]

1. 00:36:179 (133,134) - I wish these were swapped whenever they happened since it follows the song better, but it seems you do it every time so aah. I swaped these 00:32:041 (118,119) - instead since it sounds better here to me.
   
2. 01:03:489 (245,246,247) - k kk, since you use d dk earlier in the song? (And you seem to never re-use patterns)
3. 01:05:144 (251,252,253) - ^
   And maybe as another variation for the later one:
4. 01:43:213 (40) - k
5. 01:44:351 (44) - ^
6. 01:44:868 (46) - ^ Applied all.
   I kinda don't like how d dk d dd sounds, since it seems you're mapping low sounds when the sounds are actually high, but it's fine.

[Muzukashii]

1. 00:38:041 (118) - Delete? The other two of these in the map don't have a note in the middle here. Plus, it gets too close to Oni. Yes, deleted.
2. 01:19:420 - d? Since there's no room for a break or anything you may as well map tougher to get away from Futsuu. Okay.

[Futsuu]

1. NICE I STILL SUCK AT MODDING FUTSUU GG

[Kantan]

1. 01:43:627 (17) - You've had pretty consistent breaks for a while, but here there's a bit too many notes in a row as it goes into kiai. Deleting this fits the pipe sound and makes a nice 4/1 break. Yep.

lolcubes wrote:

Timing request by Ozzy! ╭( ･ㅂ･)و

The BPM is not a whole number. Use the following timing:

BPM 145.075
Offset 202.

This should be spot on.
Cheers.

P.S.
01:32:430 (1,2,3,4,5) - Why not make a 1/6 drumroll + a finisher instead? Actually goes for all occurences, like 01:05:961 (254,255,256,257,258) - etc
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4307234

It's more true to the music since these are 1/6 in the music, but I suspect you don't want to make the map too difficult. Just remember to set slider tickrate to 3 if you are going to do this, else the ticks will be 1/4, also the slider should be starting at 01:32:223 - ! Yes, i don't want to it make too difficult, and i don't really like to put sliders on my maps so i'm not gonna add it :3.