General
HP: 4 for the Salad (Rain HP6 and Platter HP5)
Salad
00:01:370 (4) - maybe move to x:256 ?
00:10:584 (1) - Ctrl + G highly recommended
00:14:013 (1,2,3) - Bad flow here, create a curve by gradually decreasing the distance, like this
00:24:727 (10) - This beat is stronger than others, why put a smaller distance than others patterns ?
move 00:24:727 (10) - to 112.
Platter
00:00:513 (2,3) - This pattern must be symmetric, move 00:00:941 (3) - to x:192
00:18:513 (4,5,6) - Ctrl + G
00:22:584 (1) - move to x:127
00:32:441 (6,7) - Troll end, nerf the spacing please.
Rain
00:03:084 (2) - x: 224
00:03:727 (1,2) - Troll spacing, 00:04:370 (2) - x:120 would be more playable
00:05:441 (1,2) - Troll spacing here too, 00:05:656 (2) - x: 192
00:08:227 (2) - Ctrl + H
00:13:799 (4) - x: 224
00:22:584 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Fun, but increase the distance a little bit more
00:26:441 (2) - x: 288
00:32:013 (5,6,1) - Same for the platter.
Edit: This is a good result for a start, keep going.
HP: 4 for the Salad (Rain HP6 and Platter HP5)
Salad
00:01:370 (4) - maybe move to x:256 ?
00:10:584 (1) - Ctrl + G highly recommended
00:14:013 (1,2,3) - Bad flow here, create a curve by gradually decreasing the distance, like this
00:24:727 (10) - This beat is stronger than others, why put a smaller distance than others patterns ?
move 00:24:727 (10) - to 112.
Platter
00:00:513 (2,3) - This pattern must be symmetric, move 00:00:941 (3) - to x:192
00:18:513 (4,5,6) - Ctrl + G
00:22:584 (1) - move to x:127
00:32:441 (6,7) - Troll end, nerf the spacing please.
Rain
00:03:084 (2) - x: 224
00:03:727 (1,2) - Troll spacing, 00:04:370 (2) - x:120 would be more playable
00:05:441 (1,2) - Troll spacing here too, 00:05:656 (2) - x: 192
00:08:227 (2) - Ctrl + H
00:13:799 (4) - x: 224
00:22:584 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Fun, but increase the distance a little bit more
00:26:441 (2) - x: 288
00:32:013 (5,6,1) - Same for the platter.
Edit: This is a good result for a start, keep going.