Here is your star :3
мб сделать звук на 8 всё таки? прям бьёт лишнее... сделаем 7
(00:19:506 - добавь комбо 00:16:923-00:19:589 - it's not completed :3
я не знаю как на всей карте но... 01:12:423 до брейка...ты расставляй фихи по шкалам вверху...помоему звучит ужасно.. начиная с с слайдера тут же...прислушайсо... ._.
разберись с этим )) I changed offset and the result
- General: (Considerations and things you need to check/fix for the whole map)
- Remove commas from the tags; add "donald", "kinghts" to tags done
When you re-compress the video, be sure to remove the audio from it.
The .osb file doesn't match to the .osu. Please remove it.
- .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
Give a name to the difficulty.
Yeah missing hitsounds, but you know that xD
00:03:433 (11) done - 00:06:099 (11) done - 00:11:099 (9) i think, that not - you're mapping the stream on the voice, but there's no voice here.
.Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
00:11:516 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - very un-natural to play ok
00:16:183 (7) - this slider is different from the Owen Was Her's one. I know, but this is Mix, I wanted to do a little harder (1,5x) ._.
00:17:506 (3) - un-natural. The beat is actually 1/4 after. Thanks :3 done
00:18:089 - add a beat done
00:24:506 (6) - add a repetition why D:
00:26:839 (4,5) - add a repetition to (4), move (5) 1/6 before and fix (5)'s spacing. done
00:40:173 (10) - new combo highly recommended done
00:42:756 - add a beat? no :3
00:43:506 (2) - add new combo; 00:42:839 (1) - remove new combo done
01:14:339 - where's the spinner? xD On video, Ronald points his finger to the next slide D:
00:24:839 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - un-natural don't want to repeat
01:32:839 (14) - new combo, really. done. I reworked the map, probably forgot to press
01:34:756 (1) - really unintuitive. done
01:43:506 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ugly spacing usage. done
02:11:006 (6,7,8) - ^ ok
02:17:506 (3) - new combo done
.Errors/Mistakes: (Bad gameplay issues or badly applied changes)
00:18:256 (8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - this is random, it doesn't follow anything. done
00:20:506 (7) - there should be something like 4 beats here, not one. done
00:21:673 - add a beat here and fix 00:21:756 (15)'s spacing done
00:29:644 (8,9,10) - this part should be mapped using 1/8 (and it's unsnapped too): 00:29:673 (8) - red line; 00:29:714 (9) - yellow line; ok
00:29:756 (10) - blue line. Suggesting a Short slider for these three. Same thing for 01:33:673 (22,23,24) and 02:37:672 (8,9,10) ok
00:51:506 (1) - No please. Everyone will misread this for a 1/2 spacing. done
00:58:673 (5) - No please. Everyone will misread this for a 1/4 spacing. done
From 01:15:506 (1) to 01:20:256 (5) - All Off-timed. Sadly, this pattern just doesn't fit here. You should try the triplets that Reikin used in Owen was her at ~01:15:000. The stream right after these is not so right too (but at least a bit more playable)... ok
01:37:173 (2,3) - the end of the sliders is snapped to nothing. not, i think thats ok
01:59:506 (9) - 02:02:173 (9)- where are the other beats? done
02:00:173 (14) - 02:02:839 (14) - 02:06:839 (6) - move 1/4 before and in the previous stack. ok
02:05:006 (1) - No please. Everyone will misread this for a 1/2 spacing. done
02:07:173 (9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6) - they don't follow anything ok
This kind of map you're trying to make usually follows the "vocals" very strictly.
Since it seems that following "vocals" was your intention (you also used well-known patterns from other maps) you can't afford to make variations unless they're absolutely easy to read; all underlined "un-natural"s are an example of this.
Also, about this matter, my opinion is: using some patterns from well-known maps (like using them as a citation) is not bad, but i think you have to use those patterns in the exact same part of the song as the original ones (or at least a part that's fairly similiar); some of those patterns feel awkward because of this (like 00:11:516 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8), as i wrote above).
Your own patterns are quite good, instead: quite original patterns and a good flow. Why don't you make the whole map using your own patterns instead of forcing the well-known ones? I told you by chat that imho it wasn't a problem, but your patterns are good and i think it's better to make something completely new since you did good. Maybe you right, I'll think about it
Awesome moding, Awesome Card N'FoRcE Thanks so much <3