Exile- wrote:

[General]

1. The star rating difference between Insane and Collab Insane is huge and the names may be misleading. Maybe rename Insane to Hyper? // Did it.
2. 01:25:848 - The last spinner starts a bit too early // Not sure what you meant, but it's according to the finish sounds.

[Expert]

1. 00:19:965 (3) - This note looks like it doesn't belong. I would like to see some parallelograms with 00:20:426 (1,2,3) - or 00:20:888 (1,2,3) - // Not sure if those should correlate since it's a different combo afterall.
2. 00:25:618 (3,4,5) - You should connect 00:25:734 (4,5) - these notes to emphasize the vocal like you did before. 00:25:849 (5) - this note is not audible at all. // Did some change.
3. 00:45:003 - I really feel like something is missing here. Make a slider from 00:44:888 (7) - . It sounds very well with 00:45:118 (1,2) - these. // I wanted to devide them rhythmically.
4. 00:53:657 (7,1,2,3,4) - Woah! I would rather slow down 00:53:657 (7) - this slider and 00:54:118 (1,2,3,4) - make this stream faster to build an emphasize. // I'd keep the slow down to actually make an emphasize from the kiai.
5. 00:57:349 (1,2,3,4,5) -Imo this pattern is a bit too extreme compared to your previous patterns and the song's intensiveness is very low. // Well that might be a personal feeling since I don't think as extreme.

[Collab Insane]

1. 00:26:426 (7,8,1) - the way they're connected is uncomfortable imo. 00:26:426 (7) - move the tail a little bit downwards for better flow // Did something.
2. 01:01:503 (3,1) - Why they're so similar? o.O Maybe 01:01:503 (3) - Ctrl + G this? // Why not? I think it's good as it is.

[Insane]

1. 00:09:926 (5,6) - imo stack would emphasize better here // The current one might be a better pattern imo.
2. 00:11:426 (4,6) - nazi blanket // Not a problem imo.
3. 00:17:426 (3) - This note is more audible than the previous two ones and the vocal comes from different person. Maybe emphasize it? // This is the end of the 3 note placement. I guess that much emphasis is enough since I don't think this as much audible than others.

[Hard]

1. 01:10:965 (3,1) - This overlap is avoidable. Just make 01:11:195 (1) - this slider more straight // Did something.

[Normal]

1. 00:39:811 (1,2) - Blanket wouldn't hurt // I'd like to use the same slidershape with the next one.

[Easy]

Fine

smallboat wrote:

Random pick forum-PM to do my modding.

I don't pick some nazi problem at my modding, so I just say some suggestion.

Hard and Collab Insane fine.

[General]

1. Fine

[Easy]

1. 00:13:965 (3) - Forgot add NC? Feel shouldn't do a 3 big white line in the same color combo here imo. // For patterning issue, I prefer the current comboing.

[Normal]

1. 00:12:811 (2) - This sliderend'sound so heavy beat (Btw this slider length so long), maybe you can consider this rhythm which I suggest : // Maybe both could be fine since this is a low difficulty afterall. I wanted to express the heavy beat as the slider end.
2. 00:37:965 (3,1) - Distance keep consistent? // Since there is a time interval of 2/1, I placed them a little closer so that players won't suddenly move there cursor too much.

[Insane]

1. Feel the Hard to Insane diff's SV have a spread gap, hope just my misunderstanding. // Actually sv gap exists, but I hope it's fine owo
2. 01:25:848 (3) - This music sounds like can do a jump for this note, why not to do it? // I'd like to end this map in a calm way, and using a jump might be complexed for the rhythm.

[Expert ]

1. 01:22:252 (1) - Suggest the sliderend stack better? // Eh not sure what this means.