Odaril wrote:

PLease reply to this mod saying what you didn't fix (and what you did) and why.
Also, if you have any question, feel free to ask me in-game

General
"discovery" in tags ? what's wrong with it?

Easy
The very low spacing made the beginning quite confusing to me. Also, the difficulty is extremely uneven. There are very hard patterns and rhythms at times, and sometimes very easy parts. Which patterns are very hard for you?

Normal
Pretty much the same comments for this, except I find it rather hard for a Normal, because of the rhythms and patterns. ^ (rhythms?)

Hard
01:19:245 (7) - Too close to previous object. (unless you can justify this spacing ? also this is true for the next patterns like this one) slowdown slider
01:27:045 (5) - And for all the next patterns like this one: I absolutely don't understand this placement it's simple - try to listen this part again - I use jumps on beats (also they are very easy ) Oh, OK, I fixed that like jericho2442 tell me. I don't want to be too selfish.
01:56:448 (4,3) - And for all the next patterns like this one: too close to previous object slowdown slider
01:58:248 (4,5) - And for all the next patterns like this one: why is their spacing higher ? because this is a jump. I think this is a good place for it.
02:34:552 (3,4,5) - Why is there a jump here ? because I use this jump throughout whole song

Weird song to map ._. good luck with it -_-

Fight69 wrote:

Hoi ! o/

[General]

02:35:942 - Just a personal opinion, but this break is maybe a bit too long I know, but it's made by purpose
03:31:258 - A short kiai time here looks a bit weird, this song is too slow for a kiai fountain not change it now


[Hard]

Nice !

[Normal]

01:23:745 (6,7) - When it's placed like that, it look a bit ugly, what about stacking them ? hm, changed a bit

[Easy]

Using a really short 1/4 slider on a Easy is not a good idea ! OK, these parts are remapped
It's too hard for a beginner to see if it's a slider or 2 circles

I guess that's all

I have to agree that is song is really hard to map, you did a great job ! thanks!
So : Starz'd !

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

[Easy]
Why i feel it's missing many notes? because it's easy maybe?
I do think Normal whistles aren't good... maybe use Soft Whistle in all the song? nah

[Normal]
Some notes are missing ( they seems to be forcefully deleted in some parts :like between 00:24:339 (6) - and 00:25:239 (1) - for example) You like notes on every beat? It isn't possible and feels bad for me. Oh ok, I place here slider, but I don't make any other changes

[Hard]
Some notes are missing ( they seems to be forcefully deleted in some parts :like between 00:29:139 (1) - and 00:30:640 (2) - for example) yeah, I delete it forcefully to follow music.
Spacing is very confusive ( i do see many unwanted jumps.. like 00:31:240 (3,1) )

this was a generic mod... will proceed to full when you try to repair these point So I can't repair it now, sorry. You simply don't like this map or... I don't understand what you want.

Chacha17 wrote:

General
Discovery is the album from which this came, right? So that must be in the source. Interstella 5555 might be in the tags. (correct me if I'm wrong) from FAQ: "If the song is from an anime or video game, or is most famous for its use as a TV or movie theme, the title of that source goes here". Interstella 5555 is the anime title.
Remove unused .osb file.

Easy:

By playing it, the spacing seems fine. Looking at the editor made me find some of the inherited timing sections, the ones that change the volume of the hitsounds, placed directly on the beat. Try moving it back by one tick so that even when a player hits it either late or early, it will still take effect. it fixed in current osu version

Also, a kiai fountain at the end seems...weird. D: ok, removed

00:49:842 (3) - remove the clap at the end of the slider ok
00:49:842 (3) - clap
01:45:047 (1) - ^ noo

Normal - some patterns might be a bit hard for a normal. I suggest making the circles bigger by one notch which patterns? I can't make circles bigger - it will be mess then I simply don't want it

01:33:046 (6) - sounds weird. remove one repeat and extend to the last vocal beat hm, no sorry
01:45:047 (1) - clap
01:52:848 (6) - no finish here nah^
02:10:250 (2) - claaap oh, fixed thanks

Hard - okay diff
Nothing much but i guess making the circles a bit larger would also be nice.

Ayeen wrote:

Hitsound suggestion:

Easy:
00:19:239 Volume = 50%
00:21:039 (3) remove clap on blue tick
00:23:439 (4) ^
00:26:439 (4) remove whistle, add clap on 00:26: and 00:27:639
00:40:241 (4) remove whistle, add finish at start of slider
00:41:141 (1) remove clap on blue tick
00:42:641 (3) remove whistle on blue tick
00:46:841 (2) remove whistle on red tick
00:57:642 (1) remove whistle on blue tick
01:00:043 volume = 40%
01:00:043 (1) remove whistle on blue tick
01:02:443 volume =50% and remove whistle on blue tick
01:04:843 Volume = 40%
01:05:293 (2) moved to 01:05:443 and remove whistle on red tick
01:07:243 volume= 35% and remove whistle on blue tick
01:09:644 Volume =45% and remove whistle on blue tick
01:12:044 Volume = 40% and remove whistle on blue tick
01:14:444 Volume =50%
01:14:894 (2) move to white tick and remove whistle on red tick after that
01:17:144 Volume 40%, use normal set
01:19:245 (2) remove whistle at the end of slider
01:24:045 (2) remove whistle at end of slider
01:25:845 (1) add finish
01:26:145 (2) remove inherited time
01:28:545 (1,2,3,4) removed inherited time and add finish on (2)
01:30:646 (1) add finish, remove inherited time on (2) add clap on beginning of (3)
01:36:346 change to normal set and remove whistle on (2,4), add finish
01:38:446 (2) remove whistle at end of slider

Will continue... and I think I'll just do on easy for hitsound. Hitsound is too soft

Louis Cyphre wrote:

- 20 секунд брейк, понижай. очень не хотелось, но многим не нравится, так что всё-таки "понизил"

[Easy]
1/4 соло ноты на изи, постарайся избегать их, как минимум вот эти 02:41:303 (2,3), 03:00:505 (2,3), 03:19:707 (2,3) - должны быть исправленно они полностью следуют музыке, я и так уже переделал большинство таких нот, но эти хочу оставить
В остальном гуд, нечего сказать.

[Normal]
HP-1 ок
Соло 1/4 ноты как и в изи
00:47:891 (4) - заменяй тройку и четверку на слайдер
00:50:292 (3) - такая же беда.
00:58:092 (2) - и так далее BPM = 100, так что, думаю, это не смертельно^

Честно, мапа не нравится, ты бы мог сделать её куда лучше, используя не прямые паттерны, слова тут не частно встречаются, неудачный подход идти по вокалу, тут больше по задним битам подходит. В общем вот так вот, мапа старки заслуживает и ранка. По-моему, слова тут как раз самое важное и специально выделяются на общем фоне. Прямые паттерны это да, моя слабость.

abalee wrote:

Hmm maybe that's a way that making random spacing (like 01:50:448 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - or so ) in slow BPM maps to make it more fun to play. but I support to add rhythm yourself to let it fun.

aww feeling I am not posting the "right" modding post. Sorry for that

1. All fine.

1. 01:23:745 (6,7) - Set the same spacing as 01:22:545 (4,5)
2. I know you inherited green line with 0.5x that caused the spacing change, but they were supposed to be kept the same spacing since those notes were stacked as a whole pattern.

1. 02:00:949 (3,4) - Set the same spacing as 02:00:649 (2,3)
2. 02:02:149 (2,3) - ^
3. 02:05:749 (3,4) - ^
4. 02:06:949 (2,3) - ^
5. 02:10:550 (3,4) - ^
6. 02:11:750 (2,3) - ^

gdeath wrote:

[Easy]:

1. All fine.

[Normal]:

1. 01:23:745 (6,7) - Set the same spacing as 01:22:545 (4,5)
2. I know you inherited green line with 0.5x that caused the spacing change, but they were supposed to be kept the same spacing since those notes were stacked as a whole pattern.

[Hard]:

1. 02:00:949 (3,4) - Set the same spacing as 02:00:649 (2,3)
2. 02:02:149 (2,3) - ^
3. 02:05:749 (3,4) - ^
4. 02:06:949 (2,3) - ^
5. 02:10:550 (3,4) - ^
6. 02:11:750 (2,3) - ^

Well, ok I changed this spacing as well as 01:18:944 (6,7), 01:22:545 (4,5) in hard. It's impossible to notice slowdown sliders now, but they are played not so bad for me. Thanks.
/me shoots a star.

• • Overall Difficulty: 7

xxheroxx wrote:

[Hard]

• • Overall Difficulty: 7well, ok

Can't find anything else.
Nice map, I really like it.Thanks, now it's ready for MAT, imho.

Wiinter wrote:

Ohai
So.. the only thing that bugged me here was something related to the hitsounds. They're generally great, but uhn.. i really dislike the whistles in the beginning of the map. They just don't sound natural imo D: But that's probably just me. Cool mapset, have a star ~

ziin wrote:

Matsumoto eh?

I agree that the whistles in the beginning of the map aren't very good, but I don't think quieting them works very well. Perhaps you could switch over to soft for the whistles, then switch back? I think about it...

[easy]
00:21:039 (3) - this is a hard part to follow for easy.
00:24:339 - add note
00:43:541 - add note. It really helps fill in the gap. Actually you could add a repeat instead?
01:05:293 (2) - when you use spacing which makes circles just barely touch, it looks bad unless you make sure all of the circles are exactly the same distance apart. 01:02:443 (1,2) - are perfect, but the next 2 look too close.
02:28:401 (4) - shorten 1/4 fixed^

[normal]
I didn't really like all the 1/4 sliders. well, don't really want to change them, but maybe
02:33:052 (6) - move 1/4 later, add circle where it used to start hm, I like it in current way, it's more readable, imo

[hard]
00:59:593 (4,4) - these really didn't fit in my opinion. you're right, I add it recently, when see this song in a different view, but now I add insane and can remove this shit
01:38:446 (7,8) - make it a repeating slider...
01:43:247 (7,8) - ^ it fits perfectly, why I don't get it by myself?
01:58:248 (4,5) - these jumps seem random. I could see just putting a jump at 5 though. and you're right again, changed

[insane]
seems a bit overmapped on first glance, but I don't think it is.
01:38:446 (7,8) - make it a repeating slider...
01:43:247 (7,8) - ^ fixed too

Song's pretty chill. Too boring to be awesome, but still nice.

ShadowLord wrote:

Yea, everyone looks pretty much solid

[Normal]

01:52:248 (5,6,7) - Hmm, yea, try this maybe =p Place the sliders like this, and stack (7) on (4) cool, but I don't like overlap

SPOILER

Being symmetrical sometimes is fun too =p

01:57:348 (5,7) - delete these, move 01:57:648 (6) - move back once, remove whistle on slide, and place a whistle on the end point, then copy and paste it like the picture and placement like the picture maybe. nice suggestion too, but I like current slider placing

SPOILER

whatever, I changed these patterns, but in a bit other way

rest looks good.

No kudosu

ykcarrot wrote:

[General]
02:13:100 - Drag break time like this? http://puu.sh/7bS2


[Normal]
02:32:752 (5) - Damn, now I find only one thing. 1 grid left. >A<


Flawless map.
No kds.

Breeze wrote:

Timing

1. Eh, 99.99BPM, I've tried 100 but it seems 100 is do fast /o/ That's really a rare BPM Timing was checked few times in this thread. I use 99.99 at first, then 100, then again 99.99 with offset fix.

Easy

1. Although blue tick note and slider are hard for newbie, since this is a low BPM song, so it looked not that much I just can't ignore blue tick sounds starting at 00:57:642 and later. Before that I use only slider ends so I think it's ok for play

Normal

1. 02:47:903 (6) - Add finish here sounds something wrong , remove finish or use whistle instead seems better
2. 03:26:307 (6) - ^ I like these finishes, but after seeing your angry smiley I removed them. I use whistles at big white lines so I don't want to use them here. Also what about 03:04:705 (4,4)? I keep these finishes, but I think you hate it too. I use this thing in hard as well - see 02:26:001 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5). Well, I want to keep it in these places at least.

Hard

1. 01:57:048 - 02:12:950 - I've never seen this kind of jump : only last note is a jump, I'm not to say it's wrong, it played well while test XD Just hardly to see, anyway it's good to try different way to put notes I also use such jumps at 02:35:152 (4,5) and later. This is a bit weird hard, yeah.
   You need to know, after few playtests I change some note placing at the start (too linear mapping, it plays and looks horrible) - here 00:25:839 (5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) and here 00:50:742 (1,2,3,4,5).

I like how you used whistle sound, but as for clap, I prefer to fit drum sound Anyway how to use hitsound is your right In insane diff I almost do this at first part, but in general I think that follow only drums is a too monotonous for this song. (but I add few claps at drums in hard)
Nice map, call me back for a recheck when you have any reply, please

1. 01:33:045 (1,2,3) - Weird, I didn't found these when I mod last time lol, the spacing is too far to read to 1/2 beat space, sorry I must missed those lol

Breeze wrote:

[Insane]

1. 01:33:045 (1,2,3) - Weird, I didn't found these when I mod last time lol, the spacing is too far to read to 1/2 beat space, sorry I must missed those lol fixed, probably (I keep 01:32:745 (9,1) jump - it's like 01:27:945 (9,1))

Fix this and I'll bubble, sorry for missing this /o/