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DerekMcD
Hello!!!!

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Blue: You must fix this.
Red: You better fix it!
Orange: Screenshot ahead.
Black: Just suggestions though.

Norway + Iceland

00:17:191 (2): Move two or three grids left.
01:24:390 (5): Add a new combo?
01:29:876 (4): ^

Sweden + Finland

Have nothing to say...

Denmark

00:17:191-00:18:733: Try this.

Animelover's Nordic 5 [Insane]

Nah... I'm good...

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That's it and here's your star. Because I like this song.
Thank you and good luck.
Topic Starter
Celeste76

kokoroanime wrote:

Hello!!!!
Done everything~! Thank you!
akrolsmir
Norway+Iceland:

01:05:876 (2) - 1 grid down for symmetry
01:10:676 (1) - Maybe make this symmetric with end and start on the same level?
01:13:419 (1,2,3) - 1 grid up to align to the circle before it
01:31:247 (1,2,3,4,5) - Consider spreading this out instead of stacking.

Sweden+Finland:
00:13:762 (3) - move center node 1 grid right
00:21:991 (1) - Endpoint 2 grids right
00:55:247 (4,5) - Looks kinda ugly, try a different shape or make these identical or something.
The two X-shapes starting from 00:59:705 (1) - These aren't quite perfect. For best results, I'd suggest starting with drawing one slider angled exactly at 45 degrees from the center (maybe use another grid level, like 2 or 1), then copy+paste+rotating three times. And repeat for the other X. Make sure to hitsound it again.
01:05:533 (2) - up 1 grid
01:06:219 (4,5) - spacing here is too close
01:23:704 (4,5,1,2) - Not symmetric, try making (1,2) a copy of (4,5).
01:28:504 (4) - Make this a copy of 3
01:38:104 (1,2,3,4) - These aren't parallel; pick one and copy paste for all others
01:42:904 (6) - Make this a copy of 5

Denmark:
Many of your short curved sliders here are not symmetric.

00:21:305 (3) - Move center up and left 1 grid
00:31:248 (6,7) - Make 6 a flipped copy of 5, and align 7 so the ends are in a line.
00:37:076 (6,7) - Move the center node of (6) up 1 grid, and make 7 a copy of 6.
00:55:590 (4) - Make more pointed, kinda like (1,2,3) before it.
00:56:276 (7) - Endpoint down 1 grid
00:58:676 (4,5) - Pick one and make the other a copy of it.
01:14:447 (6) - Right 1 grid
01:16:162 (1,2) - Pick one and make the other a copy of it.
01:17:533 (3) - Too sharp + not symmetric
01:20:962 (7) - too flat?
01:38:104- Practically every short curved slider after this is not symmetric, I'd suggest just checking each one.

Animelover's Nordic 5:
... Why are these sliders all Catmull sliders? That makes them kinda pointed and ugly. Open the .osu, and you'll see that sliders are marked with a C, while normal Bezier sliders such as those on other difficulties are marked with a B. Was this mapped before this was made impossible? Anyways, this is pretty important, fix this.

00:18:730 (1,4) - Not symmetric
00:39:301 (1) - Really jerky and awkward. I'm not sure this is rankable.
00:40:673 (1) - ^
01:07:072 (1,2,3,4) - Space this out, it otherwise it feels like it should be 1/4th notes.

As a general rule, when you want to shapes to mirror each other, it'd be faster and more pretty to copy and paste rather than draw a new one. That way the two shapes will be identical.

The placement of notes in time was pretty good but the patterns and shapes were not quite perfect; continue to work on those. Anyways, starred!
Mint Bunny
nya nya nya!
Guest diff name change and....

akrolsmir wrote:

Animelover's Nordic 5:
... Why are these sliders all Catmull sliders? That makes them kinda pointed and ugly. Open the .osu, and you'll see that sliders are marked with a C, while normal Bezier sliders such as those on other difficulties are marked with a B. Was this mapped before this was made impossible? Anyways, this is pretty important, fix this. woah woah woah! thank for pointing that out!

00:18:730 (1,4) - Not symmetric fixed~
00:39:301 (1) - Really jerky and awkward. I'm not sure this is rankable. fixed~
00:40:673 (1) - ^ mhmm~
01:07:072 (1,2,3,4) - Space this out, it otherwise it feels like it should be 1/4th notes. i like that anti-jump ^w^
Download: Hatsune Miku - Ban Ban Boo (Celeste76) [Mint's Nordic 5 [Insane]].osu
Topic Starter
Celeste76

akrolsmir wrote:

Norway+Iceland:
Done everything here

Sweden+Finland:
Done everything here

Denmark:
Done everything here
Topic Starter
Celeste76

Mint Bunny wrote:

nya nya nya!
Guest diff name change and....

akrolsmir wrote:

Animelover's Nordic 5:
... Why are these sliders all Catmull sliders? That makes them kinda pointed and ugly. Open the .osu, and you'll see that sliders are marked with a C, while normal Bezier sliders such as those on other difficulties are marked with a B. Was this mapped before this was made impossible? Anyways, this is pretty important, fix this. woah woah woah! thank for pointing that out!

00:18:730 (1,4) - Not symmetric fixed~
00:39:301 (1) - Really jerky and awkward. I'm not sure this is rankable. fixed~
00:40:673 (1) - ^ mhmm~
01:07:072 (1,2,3,4) - Space this out, it otherwise it feels like it should be 1/4th notes. i like that anti-jump ^w^
I'm actually trying to figure out how I can make your name in your diff pulse or something. I wanna make you all spiffy
Mint Bunny

Celeste76 wrote:

I'm actually trying to figure out how I can make your name in your diff pulse or something. I wanna make you all spiffy
that would mean you would have to get a background image without any writing on it, make a separate image with my name, and use The separate image to storyboard pulsing. Though I'm still trying to figure out how to make the separate image pulse in the first place...
Good luck :|
rEdo
[Norway + Iceland]
you guys could've mapped those last 6 seconds.
0:17:191 (2,3,1) - a bit inconsistent spacing, should be like this.
1:23:362 (3,4,1,2,3) - maybe it doesn't seems like this, but this pattern might be confusing for some people. they could click that yellow (1) note too early, so i'd suggest moving it somewhere else.

[Sweden + Finland]
you guys could've mapped those last 6 seconds, too.
0:44:276 (1,2,3,1) - this pattern is kinda aesthetic, especially that yellow (1) note. i'd suggest something like this.
0:55:247 (4,5) - those sliders' ends aren't stacked with theirselves, rorate (5) by one degree counterclockwise. (ctrl+r)
1:20:962 (5,6) - a bit inconsistent spacing, move those notes by some grids higher

[Denmark]
0:19:933 (2) - maybe move it a bit lower, despiting the distance snap?
0:26:105 (1) - delete new combo
0:57:990 (1,2,3) - are those notes following the music at all? i'd suggest leaving just the third circle, and extending the spinner by 1/2.
1:39:476 (1) - a bit too far from the previous note.

[Mint's Nordic 5 [Insane]] uh, kinda weird diff's name...
map this until the end of the song, it's definitely worth it.
0:13:073 (1) - add a finish
0:25:758 (2) - i kinda dislike how this slider is shaped, maybe try something like this?
0:27:987 (1) - innecessary new combo
0:39:301 (1), 0:40:673 (1) - please, don't shape your sliders like this in such a random places, this is kind of surprising.
0:47:358 (12,1) - maybe it's just me, but that jump kinda surprised me too... maybe move that stack a bit closer to (1)?
0:54:730 (1) etc. - don't use new combos like that.
1:02:615 (1) - delete new combo?
1:05:358 (1) - ^
1:07:072 (1,2,3,4) - another random weird stuff in a random place, maybe some rhombus-shaped jump pattern instead of this?


well, that's it. if you're mapping a short song, make sure that all the difficulties has the same length, it's uncool to have 4 difficulties that ends at different moments of the song.
good luck!
Topic Starter
Celeste76

rEdo wrote:

[Denmark]
0:57:990 (1,2,3) - are those notes following the music at all? i'd suggest leaving just the third circle, and extending the spinner by 1/2. Yes this is following the music. I like the way it is thanks.
Done all my diffs.
Mint Bunny
MDuh
omg 10 months
anyways, here's the requested mod

[Norway + Iceland]

00:47:362 (3) - Remove
00:47:876 (4) - Move to 00:47:362 then create additional repeat until 00:48:733
01:02:447 (1,2) - Copy paste 00:59:705 (1,2) - Pattern then put it in this manner
01:22:847 (2) - Move to 01:23:019?
01:49:076 (1) - Create Inherited points w/ Slowly decreasing volume here

[Sweden + Finland]

01:49:076 (1) - Create Inherited points w/ Slowly decreasing volume here

[Denmark]

+2 HP Drain
01:44:961 (1) - This placing is kinda awkward to me (not asking to change)
01:49:076 (1) - Create Inherited points w/ Slowly decreasing volume here

[Insane]

00:25:587 (1) - Far from center after spinner
01:49:244 (1) - Create Inherited points w/ Slowly decreasing volume here

starred~
Mint Bunny

MDuh wrote:

[Insane]

00:25:587 (1) - Far from center after spinner does that really matter? :< sorry, no.
01:49:244 (1) - Create Inherited points w/ Slowly decreasing volume here
きゅん!Download: Hatsune Miku - Ban Ban Boo (Celeste76) [Mint's Nordic 5 [Insane]].osu
p3n
[Norway + Iceland]
Nothing here. Some beat-placements may play weird for beginners but that's probably just me:
00:54:562 (1,2,3,4) - As the beat of the song goes 0-1-0-1 this is easy to follow...
01:38:104 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - ...this is mapped 1-0-1-0 (which is CORRECT!) but it might be confusing for beginners, as it doesn't follow the dominant beats that they can hear

[Sweden + Finland]
00:28:505 (6) - Curve more exactly around (5) (like (7) already is)
00:32:105 (7) - Maybe replace this by a slider from previous white tick to this point? It feels like this should be a normal diff and while this note is placed right, it feels weird to leave out the beat on the white tick before
00:44:962 (2,3) - Can be placed better to fix the different gaps: Move (2) to 159/237 and (3) to 102/162

[Denmark]

00:45:476 (7) - Wrong timing. Use a circle instead of the slider-end (on white tick) to match the vocals+beat
01:07:762 (8) - Maybe delete this last note as it doesn't fit imo
01:17:533 (3) - Wrong timing. Use a normal slider from 01:17:362 - 01:17:704 (red tick to red tick) and add a circle at 01:17:876 (white tick) to match the song

The two wrong parts aside, this map is really fun to play ;)

[Mint's Nordic 5]

Some weird spacings (personal preferences) and one completely irrational jump @00:19:415 (5,1) but overall very good!


good mapset!
~star
Topic Starter
Celeste76

MDuh wrote:

omg 10 months
anyways, here's the requested mod

[Norway + Iceland]
01:22:847 (2) - Move to 01:23:019? I like it that way.
Thank you! I did everything except for the above.
Topic Starter
Celeste76

p3n wrote:

good mapset!
~star
Thank you! Did everything!
Kiiwa
Hi~

General
I like you avatar *.*
Ahhh i feel like a combo-whore
Disable count down on all diffs
Audio-lead in is not the same on all diffs
Does the second Red line even change anything? If not remove it, if so, add it to all diffs

Insane
Diff name is strange o.o
OD-1
Too much loud N whistle in Kiai gives a noisy impression

00:07:591 (1) - Remove new combo
00:08:619 (8) - New combo
00:08:962 (1) - Remove new combo
00:25:587 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Maybe lower the volume for this part, its pretty loud
00:35:701 (1) - Remove new combo
00:38:615 (6) - New combo
00:47:358 (12,1) - Is this space the same as 00:46:672 (8,9) - ?
00:48:558 (4,5) - Stack under 00:46:330 (5,6,7,8) -
00:48:815 (1) - Maybe end this spinner at 00:51:130 - and add note at 00:51:473 -
01:04:844 (1) - Change to a jump slow down like the previous one ( 01:01:758 (13,1) - )
01:15:472 (9,10,11,1,2,3,4) - Sort out your claps here? their confusing me~!
01:45:130 (5) - Stack on 01:45:473 (7) - ?
01:45:473 (7) - Should start at 01:45:644 -
01:48:387 (8) - New combo
01:48:730 (9) - Move to x:96 y:280
01:49:073 (11) - Move to x:256 y:8 (maybe need recheck here)

Denmark
Rename to 'Hard'
OD-1

01:06:562 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This could look better
01:32:619 (1) - Add finish
01:43:590 (1) - Change position
Add finish to the follow: 01:46:333 (1) - 01:47:019 (4) - (begining) 01:47:704 (1) - 01:48:047 (3) - 01:48:390 (5,6,7) -
01:49:076 (1) - Dosent finish at that funny sound

S+F
Rename to 'Normal'
OD-1/2
AR-1
No break in this diff yet there is in the harder diffs?

00:17:533 (5) - Spacing
01:49:076 (1) - Dosent finish at that funny sound

N+I
Rename to 'Easy'
OD-1
HD-1

00:32:105 (6) - Dont like this
00:51:476 (1) - End at 00:51:476 (1) -
00:54:219 - Add note?
00:56:962 (1) - Short?

Everything else looks cool.
Good luck~ star
Mint Bunny
fixed a bunch of spacing.
I didn't agree to a lot of Kiiwa's suggestions :|

Download: Hatsune Miku - Ban Ban Boo (Celeste76) [Mint's Nordic 5 [Insane]].osu
Topic Starter
Celeste76

Kiiwa wrote:

Hi~

General
I like you avatar *.* Thank you~
Disable count down on all diffs No thank you
Denmark
01:43:590 (1) - Change position No.

N+I
Rename to 'Easy'
OD-1 No.
HD-1 No.

00:32:105 (6) - Dont like this I do.
00:56:962 (1) - Short? Good the way it is.

Everything else looks cool.
Good luck~ star
Thank you!
The 08 team_Bourdon
Hi.. :3
i just can give some suggestion for you~

Norway+Iceland
- It is Easy or Normal? If it is EASY, This difficulty didn't feel easy enough...

00:54:219 (1,2) - Too far from spinner, you need to put this note close to the spinner...
00:59:705 (1,2,1,2) - IMO, These will confuse beginners...

Sweden+Finland
00:31:933 (7) - i can't see it clearly :(
00:48:562 (6,1) - right 1 grid?
00:50:448 (6) - up+left 1 gird?
01:34:333 (5) - down+left 2 grid?
01:35:019 (7) - down+right 2 grid?
01:35:704 (2) - too more repeat on this slider.. feel a bit boring~
01:41:876 (4) - right+up 2 grid?

Denmark
-Overall Difficulty +1?

00:18:905 - why don't here put some note start from here o.O?
00:20:276 - ^
01:06:562 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - make this pattern like a circle?
01:22:847 (6) - New Combo?
01:25:762 (5) - ^
01:31:247 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - too more finish sound..A bit noisy~
01:41:190 (3) - up+left 2 grid?
01:41:876 (6) - up+right 2 grid?
01:42:561 (2,3,4) - Overlap it, making it more beautiful... (Overlap can be closed grid snap)

Mint's Nordic 5
00:36:734 (4,5) - up+left 3 grid?
00:47:533 (1) - too far from the previous note.
00:51:648 (1) - too far from the previous spinner?
00:53:019 (5) - New Combo?
00:56:448 (8) - ^
00:56:791 (11) - too far from the previous note.
01:00:905 (9) - New Combo?
01:03:648 (9) - ^
01:14:448 (5) - ^
01:28:676 (5) - ^
01:40:848 (1,2,3,4) - down 1 grid?
01:46:162 (8) - down+right 1 grid?
01:47:705 (6) - New Combo?
hit sound set up very well :)

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Nice Map 8-)
Hope you can get ranked ;)
S-t-a-r!~!!!
Topic Starter
Celeste76

The 08 team_Bourdon wrote:

Hi.. :3
i just can give some suggestion for you~

Norway+Iceland
- It is Easy or Normal? If it is EASY, This difficulty didn't feel easy enough...

00:59:705 (1,2,1,2) - IMO, These will confuse beginners... How?

Sweden+Finland

Denmark
-Overall Difficulty +1? No.

00:18:905 - why don't here put some note start from here o.O? It's supposed to match the music or something like that.
00:20:276 - ^ ^
01:31:247 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - too more finish sound..A bit noisy~ I like it the way it is.
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Nice Map 8-)
Hope you can get ranked ;)
S-t-a-r!~!!!
Thank you! I did everything else~
Mint Bunny
winber1
General

--Why is the bpm 175.001? On Mint's Nordic, the bpm is exactly 175. Just use BPM 175.
--The kiai times are all really different in each difficulty

Mint's Nordic

00:00:734 - 00:05:876 - I would much rather use soft hitsounds. This Normal hitsound is too noisy imo. If you do not apply this change, at least lower the volume then.
00:07:591 (5) - new combo
00:07:934 (1) - remove combo
00:08:962 (4) - new combo
00:09:305 (1) - remove combo
00:10:334 (4) - new combo
00:10:676 (1) - remove combo
00:11:705 (4) - new combo
00:19:419 (5) - i didn't expect a 2nd repeat on this slider. It doesn't really fit imo :/ Perhaps you could take one repeat off and add a note at 00:19:934 (if you do, this note should be a new combo and remove the combo of the next note).
00:26:791 (6) - new combo?
00:26:962 (1) - remove combo?
00:29:705 (2) - this time i thot it was 2 repeats, except it was 3... =_="
01:13:419 (2) - These two repeat reverse sliders really annoy me >_>
01:20:619 (9) - ^
01:49:076 (5) - this note touches the hp bar. You can just lower combo 5, and also make combo 4 symmetric about the y-axis? it annoys me that it's slightly off.

Denmark


00:19:933 (2) - new combo?
00:21:305 (3) - new combo?
01:23:876 (6) - add note
01:38:276 (2) - This every other 1/2 tick clap pattern is a little noisy imo. A every 1/1 tick clap pattern fits much better.
01:42:390 (2) - add note

Sweden + Finland

--Is this a normal diff?

00:59:705 (1,2,3,4,5) - If this is supposed to be a Normal difficulty, I wouldn't have this stack. It's just really hard for beginners to read, so I would space it out. If it's a hard difficulty, I guess it's fine.. i guess...
01:14:790 (5,6,1) - you should space this evenly.

Norway + Iceland

00:18:562 (1) - Replace the finish at the end of the slider with a clap.
00:19:933 (2) - remove clap
00:19:933 (2) - Replace the finish at the end ofthe slider with a clap
00:32:105 (6) - move this note 1/2 tick later and fix spacing. This note doesn't really make any sense the in the curren spot it is in.
01:44:961 (2) - add finsih
01:46:333 (4) - add finish at the beginning and end of slider (not the middle)
01:47:704 (5,6) - add finishes to all notes

Nice map! :3
Topic Starter
Celeste76

winber1 wrote:

Denmark

Sweden + Finland

--Is this a normal diff?

00:59:705 (1,2,3,4,5) - If this is supposed to be a Normal difficulty, I wouldn't have this stack. It's just really hard for beginners to read, so I would space it out. If it's a hard difficulty, I guess it's fine.. i guess... It is a normal you know. And I like this pattern.

Norway + Iceland
00:32:105 (6) - move this note 1/2 tick later and fix spacing. This note doesn't really make any sense the in the curren spot it is in. I think it makes perfect sense there. Can't you hear it? It's going to the the soft whistle in the background.

Nice map! :3
Did everything except for above.
winber1
00:32:105 (6) - move this note 1/2 tick later and fix spacing. This note doesn't really make any sense the in the curren spot it is in. Edit: Oh, my mistake. I immediately assumed that soft-whistle-like sound was actually a custom sound you had. It didn't feel like it was part of the music some reason.
Astom
o/
Some suggestions

[Skin]
-If you are gonna use template skin parts, then force it in all diff, because it's unnecesary copy them in your folder song (song setup->Storyboarding->Skinning->Default to force template skin)

[Norway + Iceland]
-00:31:591 (5,6,1,2), set a slider from 00:31:591 to 00:32:105 with one repeat, a circle in 00:32:962 and another one in 00:33:305, then a slider from 00:33:648 to 00:33:991 with one repeat and finally a slider from 00:34:676 to 00:35:019.

[Insane]
-Looks a little overmapped, is not necessary set circles in every beat.

Uhmm... that's all.
Topic Starter
Celeste76

Astom wrote:

o/
Some suggestions

[Skin]
-If you are gonna use template skin parts, then force it in all diff, because it's unnecesary copy them in your folder song (song setup->Storyboarding->Skinning->Default to force template skin) So do I just delete the copied elements afterwards?

[Norway + Iceland]
-00:31:591 (5,6,1,2), set a slider from 00:31:591 to 00:32:105 with one repeat, a circle in 00:32:962 and another one in 00:33:305, then a slider from 00:33:648 to 00:33:991 with one repeat and finally a slider from 00:34:676 to 00:35:019. No, sorry.
HellDawn
Norway-Iceland
00:33:991- This object is too cloose to the previous object.
00:35:362- ^
00:37:248- ^
00:54:905-^
00:47:019- far from the previous object

Sweden-Finland
00:41:705- Add a note
00:33:734-Concealed slider repeats

00:55:591- ^

Denmark
Hp Drain Rate -1

Insane
00:18:219- 1 grid down
01:29:534- 1 grid left

Nice mapset!
Topic Starter
Celeste76

HellDawn wrote:

Norway-Iceland
00:33:991- This object is too cloose to the previous object. No it's not?
00:35:362- ^ Fixed
00:37:248- ^ ^
00:54:905-^ ^
00:47:019- far from the previous object ^

Sweden-Finland
00:41:705- Add a note Done
00:33:734-Concealed slider repeats I think it's just fine, but if someone else complains then I'll change it

00:55:591- ^ ^

Denmark
Hp Drain Rate -1 Done
Nice mapset!
Tanmak
Great.

There is no fixing object.

Good job~

;)
Your message is too short.
Zelos
Well lets get started

Folder:
Clean

General:
0.5 tickrate is no longer allowed (Mint Bunnies diff) I suggest you change it to tick rate 2 like the rest of the difficulties.
Keep your kiai times consistent please

Any mod is a suggestion and can be ignored

Norway + Iceland:
00:22:676 (1,2) - you should vertically align these by moving note 2 slightly over to the right. it makes it neater.
00:30:219 (2,3,4,5,6) - you should horizontally aligh these by moving 3,4,5,6 down a little bit. makes it neater also.
00:59:705 (1,2) - the hiding of the beginning of slider 2 halfway under slider 1 isnt unrankable but it isnt that good looking either, possibly change this?
01:02:448 (1,2) - ^^
01:10:676 (3) - this slider is really unsymmetrical. I decided to fix it for you. it now looks like this

its a teensy bit off but it will definitely do much better. click the code box for the slider code and paste it where its supposed to be in the .osu
352,216,70676,6,0,B|256:296|176:208,2,200,4|0|8

01:20:276 (4,5) - horizontally align the end of 4 with note 5 or vice versa, it would look neater.
01:29:876 (1,2,3) - the spacing here is slightly inconsistent. fix?
01:47:705 (5,6) - not many easy players can read the note under the end of slider 5, I suggest you move it from under 5.

Sweden + Finland:
00:18:562 (1,2,3,4) - this pattern here as some inconsistent distance spacing, you should possibly fix this so that the spacing makes it symmetrical once more.
00:19:934 (5,6) - move 6 to the right 1 grid point so it verticaly lives up with slider 5?
00:55:248 (4,5) - the ends are slightly unstacked, adjust them so that the ends are stacked? it would look neater.
00:59:705 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - these are too hard for normal players in my opinion, please change these to something else.
01:27:819 (3,5) - delete slider 5, copy slider 3 and paste it into slider 5s original position so it becomes stacked correctly again.
01:31:248 (1,1) - the 1/1 distance between this spinner and this note might be a bit hard for the Normal players to re-adjust there arms and hit in time.
01:48:048 (4,5,6,7,8) - might be to many half notes for a Normal player to hit but that maybe just my opinion too.

Denmark:
00:45:648 (7,1,2) - inconsistent spacing here. its a bit obvious, might wanna fix.
Thats it on this difficulty, they were much better than the other 2 so far.

Mint Bunnies diff:
01:04:505 (6,1) - these are too close considering previous spacing, people would easily confused it for half notes.
Yes the 2 insanes were better looking

Good Luck!
Topic Starter
Celeste76

Zelos wrote:

Any mod is a suggestion and can be ignored


Sweden + Finland:
I like them that way
01:27:819 (3,5) - delete slider 5, copy slider 3 and paste it into slider 5s original position so it becomes stacked correctly again.
01:31:248 (1,1) - the 1/1 distance between this spinner and this note might be a bit hard for the Normal players to re-adjust there arms and hit in time. I think it's just fine...
Thank you for the mod! I did everything except the above!
tutuhaha
B....BL?!0口0.........
(¯﹃¯)b I like it, so nice~~~~~~~~APH APH lalalala~~~

Norway + Iceland
00:24:048 (1) - end in 00:26:105-to short in easy
00:31:591 (5,6) - change in one slider beacuse in easy 6 is to hard(slider00:31:591 to 00:32:105 is best)
00:37:762 (1) - space
00:41:876 (6) - this slider I think end in 00:42:476 and the add repeat(Return) is good
00:49:419 (1) - Don't Overlapping, put it like this →http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/157531
00:54:219 (1) - Delete, too hard in easy
00:56:962 (1) - end on 00:59:019
01:10:676 (3) - use this↓
352,216,70676,2,0,B|256:264|160:216,2,200,0|4|0
01:23:019 (2) - move 2 to there,too hard in easy
01:31:248 (1) - use this↓
136,112,91248,5,4
72,160,91591,1,4
96,240,91934,1,4
176,240,92276,1,4
200,160,92619,1,4
01:48:734 (6) - Don't overlapping

Sweden + Finland
00:31:934 (7) - add one repeat(return)
00:36:391 (5) - ^
00:52:505 (3) - ^
00:55:248 (4) - .....Tail overlapping?
00:59:705 (1-5) - ....I really don't like this.....they look very crowded and ugly D:.......
01:02:448 (1-5) - ^
01:17:362 (2) - change a slider end on 01:17:962 is best than this I think
01:27:819 (3) - use this ↓
280,72,87819,2,0,B|360:48|408:112,1,140,0|8
376,216,88505,2,0,B|296:240|248:176,1,140,0|8
280,72,89191,2,0,B|360:48|408:112,1,140,0|8

Denmark
00:56:962 (1) - too short,change on slider or circle

Mint's Nordic 5 [Insane]
00:21:819 (2) - delete it and put there one circle and then move 3 and 4 on 00:21:991 and 00:22:334
and then add one ciecle on 00:22:676, listen better, right?
01:04:848 (1) - space

Denmark listen like Mint's Nordic 5 [Insane]..
trouble D:
some new Beat↓ I think you need delete some note

Download: Hatsune Miku - Ban Ban Boo (Celeste76) [Denmark2].osu
Mint Bunny

tutuhaha wrote:

Mint's Nordic 5 [Insane]
00:21:819 (2) - delete it and put there one circle and then move 3 and 4 on 00:21:991 and 00:22:334
and then add one ciecle on 00:22:676, listen better, right? What does that even mean? :<
Did all but above. Sorry for making you wait.
Download: Hatsune Miku - Ban Ban Boo (Celeste76) [Mint's Nordic 5 [Insane]].osu
Topic Starter
Celeste76

tutuhaha wrote:

B....BL?!0口0.........
(¯﹃¯)b I like it, so nice~~~~~~~~APH APH lalalala~~~

Norway + Iceland
01:10:676 (3) - use this↓
352,216,70676,2,0,B|256:264|160:216,2,200,0|4|0
01:23:019 (2) - move 2 to there,too hard in easy No.
01:31:248 (1) - use this↓
136,112,91248,5,4
72,160,91591,1,4
96,240,91934,1,4
176,240,92276,1,4
200,160,92619,1,4
It's just fine.

Sweden + Finland
00:31:934 (7) - add one repeat(return) No.
00:55:248 (4) - .....Tail overlapping? I like it that way.
00:59:705 (1-5) - ....I really don't like this.....they look very crowded and ugly D:....... No.
01:02:448 (1-5) - ^^
01:17:362 (2) - change a slider end on 01:17:962 is best than this I think No.
01:27:819 (3) - use this ↓
280,72,87819,2,0,B|360:48|408:112,1,140,0|8
376,216,88505,2,0,B|296:240|248:176,1,140,0|8
280,72,89191,2,0,B|360:48|408:112,1,140,0|8
It's just fine.

Denmark
00:56:962 (1) - too short,change on slider or circle No.
Thank you for the mod! I did everything but the above!
Neptunus
Hey~

General:
NOTE THAT SLIDER TICK RATE OF 0.5 IN Mint's Nordic [Insane] IS UNRANKABLE NOW!! BASED ON THE NEW RULE, ATTENTION PLEASE!

Nice hitsound but the gap between the first 2 diffculties are huge with 1.99 stars vs. 4.44 stars.

Norway + Iceland:
To keep consistency, 00:21:305 (3) - newcombo here and cancel newcombo here 00:22:676 (1) -
Again about consistency , you can either newcombo here at00:40:505 (4) - or you can cancel newcombo at 00:45:991 (1) -
Also here 01:46:334 (4) - newcombo here or cancel newcombo at 01:40:162 (1) -

Sweden + Finland
00:47:019 (3,4,5) - spacing problem between 3 and 4 regarding what you have spaced in 00:46:333 (1,2,3) -

Denmark:
01:43:591 (1) - why suddenly put such interval ? I suggest long sliders in this area

Mint's Nordic [Insane]:
01:43:591 (7) - cancel newcombo here and start newcombo here at 01:44:105 (1) -


thats it ,
good luck on ranking~ ;)
Topic Starter
Celeste76

Neptunus wrote:

Hey~
Denmark:
01:43:591 (1) - why suddenly put such interval ? I suggest long sliders in this area I like it the way I did it.
good luck on ranking~ ;)
Thank you for the mod! I did everything but the above!
eldnl
[General]

- I download the song with the video but this is not in the folder, please put the video in the folder and do a full submit. Also use the same video offset in all difficulties, in Denmark difficulty is different.
- You use the same slider velocity in normal, hard and insane, you should fix it.
- Use the same kiai time in all difficulties, actually is different in the insane difficulty.
- Use the same Audio lead-in on all difficulties, is different in the insane difficulty again.

[Mint's Nordic 5 [Insane]]

Slider tick rate 0.5 is unrankable, you should change it to 1.
Can't understand the name of this difficulty, just rename it to "Mint's Nordic 5" but with the "[Insane]" looks really weird, you should change it.
OD 7 is really annoying see lots of 100s = ='.
00:03:476 (5) To be consistent you need a new combo here.
00:07:591 (5) Add a new combo here and remove in the next note, the new combo should be in the white big tick.
00:08:962 (4) ^ Same as above.
00:10:334 (4) ^ Same as above.
00:19:419 (5) Sliders like this are very hard to read, you can't tell when they're going to end, and this feels that the next (1) is in the white tick, If you don't want to change it, please consider this for the future.
00:36:905 (5) The second reverse-arrow of this slider is hidden by the previous hit-burst, you should unstack (4,5).
00:39:476 - A Clap should be here, also you forgot the clap pattern here 00:43:248 because the clap should be in the second and fourth white tick.
00:51:476 - It's better if you end the spinner in the previous white tick (00:51:134) and add a note here.
00:54:219 - The volume down feels really weird, don't fit with the music, If you really want to keep this, up the volume a little in the lower part.
00:56:105 (6) To be consistent with the previous pattern, needs a new combo here.
01:02:105 (1) These slowdown sliders are very hard to read, have the same size as the sliders 1/4, strongly suggest to use 0.75x slowdown and make the slider different.
01:04:848 (1) ^ Same as above, also you can use the same slider.
01:10:676 - You use a wrong clap pattern in this part, please follow this pattern.
01:49:076 (5) Down this note a little, is touching the score bar.

[Denmark]

00:37:419 (7) I suggest to just add a repeat in (7) and delete (8), can't see the reason to make it harder.
00:56:962 - Really short spinner, also the next note is very close to the spinner, the player need recover the control of the cursor, more if is an unexpected short spin, strongly suggest to extend the spin to 00:59:362. Feels better.
01:10:676 (1,2) Spacing error between these sliders.
01:14:791 (7) Needs a new combo here.
01:19:934 (4,5) Spacing error between these notes.

[Sweden + Finland]

If this is the normal difficulty you should reduce the difficulty, I say:
OD-2
AP-1
HP-1
00:26:791 (1) Feels empty, maybe add a finish?
00:47:019 (3,4) Spacing error between these notes.
00:55:934 (5,6) Add a repeat on (5) and delete (6), it's a little hard to read for beginners.
00:59:705 - Really hard pattern to be a normal difficulty, you should change it to something more readable for beginners.
01:32:962 (1) This note is very close to the spin, I suggest to delete this note.
01:42:905 (6,7) Just add a repeat in (6) and delete (7), don't try to make the easier difficulties more harder, make no sense.

[Norway + Iceland]

00:24:048 - End the spinner in the big white tick, fit better with the song and increase the spacing between the spin and the next note.
00:41:876 (6) The repeat in the blue tick don't follow the music, extend the spin to the next white tick and remove (1), it's better. Don't forgot to add a new combo in the next note.
00:56:619 (4) Please don't stack this note and complete the square.
01:22:848 (2) Please don't put notes in the red ticks, it's hard to read for beginners, use a slider here, it's better.

That's all, star and good luck. (:
Topic Starter
Celeste76

eldnl wrote:

[General]

- I download the song with the video but this is not in the folder, please put the video in the folder and do a full submit. Also use the same video offset in all difficulties, in Denmark difficulty is different. There is no video...
- You use the same slider velocity in normal, hard and insane, you should fix it. Does it really matter?

[Denmark]

00:37:419 (7) I suggest to just add a repeat in (7) and delete (8), can't see the reason to make it harder. No.
00:56:962 - Really short spinner, also the next note is very close to the spinner, the player need recover the control of the cursor, more if is an unexpected short spin, strongly suggest to extend the spin to 00:59:362. Feels better. No.

[Sweden + Finland]

If this is the normal difficulty you should reduce the difficulty, I say:
OD-2 -1
00:55:934 (5,6) Add a repeat on (5) and delete (6), it's a little hard to read for beginners. It's just fine.
00:59:705 - Really hard pattern to be a normal difficulty, you should change it to something more readable for beginners. I like it that way.
01:32:962 (1) This note is very close to the spin, I suggest to delete this note. No.
01:42:905 (6,7) Just add a repeat in (6) and delete (7), don't try to make the easier difficulties more harder, make no sense. No.

[Norway + Iceland]
01:22:848 (2) Please don't put notes in the red ticks, it's hard to read for beginners, use a slider here, it's better. It's just fine.

That's all, star and good luck. (:
Thank you for the mod! I did everything except the above!
eldnl


If you don't have the video need to delete it on all difficulties.
-Baby Strawberry-
Hihi~! I was really shocked that u got soooooo many moddings..
anyways, start modding~! here we go~!

General
SPOILER
actually the skin is good, but there are still some problems i think:
http://puu.sh/8Qap this is to big. make it smaller or change it into something else.
http://puu.sh/8QaG make these go up a little bit, since http://puu.sh/8Qb9,i think it is too low..
http://puu.sh/8QbSthis is a llittle bit big compared to other maps. if this is what u want, nvm.
add some decorations at the edgehttp://puu.sh/8QiB
For the diff names, i don't know if they are rankable or not since there's no indication of diff levels.

【Denmark】diff
SPOILER
00:15:819 (1,2,3,4) - DO use the same shape by copy and paste
00:27:819 (4,5,6) - how about this?http://puu.sh/8QcX
00:32:276 (1,3,4) - same shape problem
00:45:991 (1,2,3,4) - move them to be more beautiful
00:52:848 (1) - how about this? http://puu.sh/8Qee
00:54:562 (1,2,3) - too much blocking, separate them a little bit.
00:59:705 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - same shape problem
01:02:448 (1,2,3,4,5) - same shape problem
01:10:676 (1,2) - same shape
01:18:905 (1,3,5,6,7,8) - same shape
01:24:733 (2,3,4) - same shape
01:27:133 (1,2) - how about put these two on the left top corner?
01:28:505 (1,2) - if u did^, put this on the right bottom corner.
01:42:562 (3,4,5) - shape
For all the shape problems, if u could make them all the same by copying, pasting and rotating the best shaped slider, i think u will get a better effect.

【Mint's Nordic 5】diff
SPOILER
00:06:562 (2,3) - no finish?
00:07:934 (2,3) - no finish?
00:25:591 (1) -from here, i don't think u need to use any whistlers.the whistler is a sharp sound, if u use is at a good point, perfect, i will give u an awesome effect; if u over use it, it will oppositely break your ears. Miku's voice is pretty sharp, so i dont think whistler is suitable for this song, or u may use it at some points but not all the time.
01:09:648 (1) - do it like this?http://puu.sh/8Qib

【Sweden + Finland】diff
SPOILER
btw, is it supposed to be a hard or a normal?
if its a normal, OD -2, remove some notes if possible. if its a hard, u can HR+1or even +2 i think.
00:28:505 (6,7) - same shape
00:50:791 (7,8) - move these 2 up to the same height as 00:50:448 (6)
00:55:248 (4,5) - shape and move the tails be on a same spot
01:21:648 (1,2,3) - personally i dont like this pattern's shape
【Norway + Iceland】diff
SPOILER
i think this is an [easy] diff, so OD-1 or -2
00:23:705 (4) - left a little bit?
00:32:962 (2,3,4) - shape problem
01:03:819 (2) - right a little bit?
01:31:248 (1,2,3,4,5) - make the shape better like a star
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Also for the hit sound,i think u should re-do it in some sections. be careful at some detailed parts such as the shape of a sliders. though they do not have big differences, it Does affect ur map. try to make them in same shapes if possible to see if it make u feel better. ;)
Good Luck :)
Since I am a new modder, all the moddings are ONLY PERSONAL SUGGESTIONS.
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