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Mint Bunny
Maybe, I'm still not done the normal and insane. I'll let you know.
val0108
:) :) :)
Aleks719
General
4 unused *.osb files. Please remove it + full submit

Guest diff is shorter then others, maybe make end of diff like in creator easy diff?
Two Insanes longer than Normal diffs or make all diffs with a same length...

Norway + Iceland
What about distance snap?
I made 2x100 here and didn't can understand why. But I opened editor I saw why xD
Please, make Easy diff with distance snapping.
Try to avoid this : prev 1.05x , next 0.65x , but usually you used 0.8x here.
I'll write about that I see momentarily, I suggest recheck all diff.
01:20:276 (4,5) - distance
01:23:362 (3,4) - ^
Other here is good for me.

Sweden + Finland
Hp drain here like in Denmark. Make it -1 maybe?
00:32:105 (x) - add note + whistle ?
00:42:562 (4) - add whistle to the end of slider
01:12:390 (5) - ^
01:16:162 (1) - add whistle to the start and add finish to the end
01:17:362 (2) - add whistle, remove clap
01:18:219 (3) - add finish, remove clap
01:25:076 (3) - add whistle to the reverse, remove clap from the reverse
01:38:790 (2) - remove clap from the reverse
01:39:476 (3) - remove clap from the start
01:40:162 (4) - remove claps from the start and reverse, add clap to the end
01:40:847 (1) - remove clap, add finish
01:41:190 (2) - add clap
01:41:533 (3) - remove clap
01:41:876 (4) - add clap
01:42:219 (5) - remove clap from the start, add finish to the start, add clap to the end
01:42:904 (6) - ^

And a bit nazi, minor suggestions :
01:38:104 (1,2,3,4) - this sliders is not parallel x)
01:40:162 (4,1) - little overlap here

Denmark
00:47:362 (1) - add whistle to the end
00:47:876 (2) - add whistle to the start and to the end, remove clap from the end
00:48:562 (4) - add whistle
01:20:276 (5) - add finish to the start
01:20:962 (7) - ^
01:21:304 (8) - ^
92648 [T] - your Kiai ends strange. Replace this point on to 01:32:447 (before spinner) or on to 01:33:990 (after spinner)
And so, CS:1 ... why? You don't have custom sounds in your map, fix it please.

Animelover's Nordic 5 [Insane]
00:26:444 (5) - remove finish from the start, add whistle to the start
00:36:730 (4,5) - stack this please or use distance.
01:04:844 (1) - 0.5x points inside slider, make it 0.5x fully oO"
01:07:072 (5,6,7,8) - 1/2 beats, but distance is different. Make new combo or keep distance
01:10:672 (1) - remove clap from the start, add whistle to the start
01:11:358 (4) - ^
01:20:615 (9) - add whistle to the end
01:23:015 (1) - remove clap from the start, add whistle to the start, add clap to the end
Topic Starter
Celeste76

Aleks719 wrote:

General
4 unused *.osb files. Please remove it + full submit

Guest diff is shorter then others, maybe make end of diff like in creator easy diff?
Two Insanes longer than Normal diffs or make all diffs with a same length...

Norway + Iceland
What about distance snap?
I made 2x100 here and didn't can understand why. But I opened editor I saw why xD
Please, make Easy diff with distance snapping.
Try to avoid this : prev 1.05x , next 0.65x , but usually you used 0.8x here.
I'll write about that I see momentarily, I suggest recheck all diff.
01:20:276 (4,5) - distance
01:23:362 (3,4) - ^
Other here is good for me.
For this whole suggestion, I had Mint Bunny go over it with me and stuff. We did fix a lot of spacing errors. I did some more, though just for the sake of this.

Sweden + Finland
Hp drain here like in Denmark. Make it -1 maybe? Done
00:32:105 (x) - add note + whistle ? Done
00:42:562 (4) - add whistle to the end of slider Done
01:12:390 (5) - ^ Done
01:16:162 (1) - add whistle to the start and add finish to the end Done
01:17:362 (2) - add whistle, remove clap Done
01:18:219 (3) - add finish, remove clap Done
01:25:076 (3) - add whistle to the reverse, remove clap from the reverse Done
01:38:790 (2) - remove clap from the reverse Done
01:39:476 (3) - remove clap from the start Done
01:40:162 (4) - remove claps from the start and reverse, add clap to the end Done
01:40:847 (1) - remove clap, add finish Done
01:41:190 (2) - add clap Done
01:41:533 (3) - remove clap Done
01:41:876 (4) - add clap Done
01:42:219 (5) - remove clap from the start, add finish to the start, add clap to the end Done
01:42:904 (6) - ^ Done

And a bit nazi, minor suggestions :
01:38:104 (1,2,3,4) - this sliders is not parallel x) Fixed
01:40:162 (4,1) - little overlap here Fixed

Denmark
00:47:362 (1) - add whistle to the end
00:47:876 (2) - add whistle to the start and to the end, remove clap from the end
00:48:562 (4) - add whistle
01:20:276 (5) - add finish to the start
01:20:962 (7) - ^
01:21:304 (8) - ^
92648 [T] - your Kiai ends strange. Replace this point on to 01:32:447 (before spinner) or on to 01:33:990 (after spinner)
And so, CS:1 ... why? You don't have custom sounds in your map, fix it please. Fixed
Did everything~
Mint Bunny

Aleks719 wrote:

Guest diff is shorter then others, maybe make end of diff like in creator easy diff?

Animelover's Nordic 5 [Insane]
00:26:444 (5) - remove finish from the start, add whistle to the start added whistle to the finish, it makes a good effect, thank you~
00:36:730 (4,5) - stack this please or use distance. how did that even happen!? xD done
01:04:844 (1) - 0.5x points inside slider, make it 0.5x fully oO" what do you mean?
01:07:072 (5,6,7,8) - 1/2 beats, but distance is different. Make new combo or keep distance done
01:10:672 (1) - remove clap from the start, add whistle to the start added whislte but keps clap
01:11:358 (4) - ^ added whislte but keps clap
01:20:615 (9) - add whistle to the end done
01:23:015 (1) - remove clap from the start, add whistle to the start, add clap to the end done
Thank you! I'm improving on my hitsounds :D

Download: Hatsune Miku - Ban Ban Boo (Celeste76) [Animelover's Nordic 5 [Insane]].osu
Aleks719

Mint Bunny wrote:

01:04:844 (1) - 0.5x points inside slider, make it 0.5x fully oO" what do you mean?
Your slider must be inside 0.5x area completely. Replace timing points a bit.
KiriNoMorii
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Aleks719
Small suggestion without kd :
scorebar-ki
scorebar-kidanger
scorebar-kidanger2

Could you Cropped unused top of this skin elements ?
they are looking bad in-game now
Derekku
Denied kd for non-mod posts. Please only give kudosu to people that mod your map in some substantial way.
Topic Starter
Celeste76

Derekku wrote:

Denied kd for non-mod posts. Please only give kudosu to people that mod your map in some substantial way.
When did I not do that?
Topic Starter
Celeste76

Aleks719 wrote:

Small suggestion without kd :
scorebar-ki
scorebar-kidanger
scorebar-kidanger2

Could you Cropped unused top of this skin elements ?
they are looking bad in-game now
I can't do that. When I do, the scorebar elements will go up so high that the head is cut off
DerekMcD
Hello!!!!

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Blue: You must fix this.
Red: You better fix it!
Orange: Screenshot ahead.
Black: Just suggestions though.

Norway + Iceland

00:17:191 (2): Move two or three grids left.
01:24:390 (5): Add a new combo?
01:29:876 (4): ^

Sweden + Finland

Have nothing to say...

Denmark

00:17:191-00:18:733: Try this.

Animelover's Nordic 5 [Insane]

Nah... I'm good...

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That's it and here's your star. Because I like this song.
Thank you and good luck.
Topic Starter
Celeste76

kokoroanime wrote:

Hello!!!!
Done everything~! Thank you!
akrolsmir
Norway+Iceland:

01:05:876 (2) - 1 grid down for symmetry
01:10:676 (1) - Maybe make this symmetric with end and start on the same level?
01:13:419 (1,2,3) - 1 grid up to align to the circle before it
01:31:247 (1,2,3,4,5) - Consider spreading this out instead of stacking.

Sweden+Finland:
00:13:762 (3) - move center node 1 grid right
00:21:991 (1) - Endpoint 2 grids right
00:55:247 (4,5) - Looks kinda ugly, try a different shape or make these identical or something.
The two X-shapes starting from 00:59:705 (1) - These aren't quite perfect. For best results, I'd suggest starting with drawing one slider angled exactly at 45 degrees from the center (maybe use another grid level, like 2 or 1), then copy+paste+rotating three times. And repeat for the other X. Make sure to hitsound it again.
01:05:533 (2) - up 1 grid
01:06:219 (4,5) - spacing here is too close
01:23:704 (4,5,1,2) - Not symmetric, try making (1,2) a copy of (4,5).
01:28:504 (4) - Make this a copy of 3
01:38:104 (1,2,3,4) - These aren't parallel; pick one and copy paste for all others
01:42:904 (6) - Make this a copy of 5

Denmark:
Many of your short curved sliders here are not symmetric.

00:21:305 (3) - Move center up and left 1 grid
00:31:248 (6,7) - Make 6 a flipped copy of 5, and align 7 so the ends are in a line.
00:37:076 (6,7) - Move the center node of (6) up 1 grid, and make 7 a copy of 6.
00:55:590 (4) - Make more pointed, kinda like (1,2,3) before it.
00:56:276 (7) - Endpoint down 1 grid
00:58:676 (4,5) - Pick one and make the other a copy of it.
01:14:447 (6) - Right 1 grid
01:16:162 (1,2) - Pick one and make the other a copy of it.
01:17:533 (3) - Too sharp + not symmetric
01:20:962 (7) - too flat?
01:38:104- Practically every short curved slider after this is not symmetric, I'd suggest just checking each one.

Animelover's Nordic 5:
... Why are these sliders all Catmull sliders? That makes them kinda pointed and ugly. Open the .osu, and you'll see that sliders are marked with a C, while normal Bezier sliders such as those on other difficulties are marked with a B. Was this mapped before this was made impossible? Anyways, this is pretty important, fix this.

00:18:730 (1,4) - Not symmetric
00:39:301 (1) - Really jerky and awkward. I'm not sure this is rankable.
00:40:673 (1) - ^
01:07:072 (1,2,3,4) - Space this out, it otherwise it feels like it should be 1/4th notes.

As a general rule, when you want to shapes to mirror each other, it'd be faster and more pretty to copy and paste rather than draw a new one. That way the two shapes will be identical.

The placement of notes in time was pretty good but the patterns and shapes were not quite perfect; continue to work on those. Anyways, starred!
Mint Bunny
nya nya nya!
Guest diff name change and....

akrolsmir wrote:

Animelover's Nordic 5:
... Why are these sliders all Catmull sliders? That makes them kinda pointed and ugly. Open the .osu, and you'll see that sliders are marked with a C, while normal Bezier sliders such as those on other difficulties are marked with a B. Was this mapped before this was made impossible? Anyways, this is pretty important, fix this. woah woah woah! thank for pointing that out!

00:18:730 (1,4) - Not symmetric fixed~
00:39:301 (1) - Really jerky and awkward. I'm not sure this is rankable. fixed~
00:40:673 (1) - ^ mhmm~
01:07:072 (1,2,3,4) - Space this out, it otherwise it feels like it should be 1/4th notes. i like that anti-jump ^w^
Download: Hatsune Miku - Ban Ban Boo (Celeste76) [Mint's Nordic 5 [Insane]].osu
Topic Starter
Celeste76

akrolsmir wrote:

Norway+Iceland:
Done everything here

Sweden+Finland:
Done everything here

Denmark:
Done everything here
Topic Starter
Celeste76

Mint Bunny wrote:

nya nya nya!
Guest diff name change and....

akrolsmir wrote:

Animelover's Nordic 5:
... Why are these sliders all Catmull sliders? That makes them kinda pointed and ugly. Open the .osu, and you'll see that sliders are marked with a C, while normal Bezier sliders such as those on other difficulties are marked with a B. Was this mapped before this was made impossible? Anyways, this is pretty important, fix this. woah woah woah! thank for pointing that out!

00:18:730 (1,4) - Not symmetric fixed~
00:39:301 (1) - Really jerky and awkward. I'm not sure this is rankable. fixed~
00:40:673 (1) - ^ mhmm~
01:07:072 (1,2,3,4) - Space this out, it otherwise it feels like it should be 1/4th notes. i like that anti-jump ^w^
I'm actually trying to figure out how I can make your name in your diff pulse or something. I wanna make you all spiffy
Mint Bunny

Celeste76 wrote:

I'm actually trying to figure out how I can make your name in your diff pulse or something. I wanna make you all spiffy
that would mean you would have to get a background image without any writing on it, make a separate image with my name, and use The separate image to storyboard pulsing. Though I'm still trying to figure out how to make the separate image pulse in the first place...
Good luck :|
rEdo
[Norway + Iceland]
you guys could've mapped those last 6 seconds.
0:17:191 (2,3,1) - a bit inconsistent spacing, should be like this.
1:23:362 (3,4,1,2,3) - maybe it doesn't seems like this, but this pattern might be confusing for some people. they could click that yellow (1) note too early, so i'd suggest moving it somewhere else.

[Sweden + Finland]
you guys could've mapped those last 6 seconds, too.
0:44:276 (1,2,3,1) - this pattern is kinda aesthetic, especially that yellow (1) note. i'd suggest something like this.
0:55:247 (4,5) - those sliders' ends aren't stacked with theirselves, rorate (5) by one degree counterclockwise. (ctrl+r)
1:20:962 (5,6) - a bit inconsistent spacing, move those notes by some grids higher

[Denmark]
0:19:933 (2) - maybe move it a bit lower, despiting the distance snap?
0:26:105 (1) - delete new combo
0:57:990 (1,2,3) - are those notes following the music at all? i'd suggest leaving just the third circle, and extending the spinner by 1/2.
1:39:476 (1) - a bit too far from the previous note.

[Mint's Nordic 5 [Insane]] uh, kinda weird diff's name...
map this until the end of the song, it's definitely worth it.
0:13:073 (1) - add a finish
0:25:758 (2) - i kinda dislike how this slider is shaped, maybe try something like this?
0:27:987 (1) - innecessary new combo
0:39:301 (1), 0:40:673 (1) - please, don't shape your sliders like this in such a random places, this is kind of surprising.
0:47:358 (12,1) - maybe it's just me, but that jump kinda surprised me too... maybe move that stack a bit closer to (1)?
0:54:730 (1) etc. - don't use new combos like that.
1:02:615 (1) - delete new combo?
1:05:358 (1) - ^
1:07:072 (1,2,3,4) - another random weird stuff in a random place, maybe some rhombus-shaped jump pattern instead of this?


well, that's it. if you're mapping a short song, make sure that all the difficulties has the same length, it's uncool to have 4 difficulties that ends at different moments of the song.
good luck!
Topic Starter
Celeste76

rEdo wrote:

[Denmark]
0:57:990 (1,2,3) - are those notes following the music at all? i'd suggest leaving just the third circle, and extending the spinner by 1/2. Yes this is following the music. I like the way it is thanks.
Done all my diffs.
Mint Bunny
MDuh
omg 10 months
anyways, here's the requested mod

[Norway + Iceland]

00:47:362 (3) - Remove
00:47:876 (4) - Move to 00:47:362 then create additional repeat until 00:48:733
01:02:447 (1,2) - Copy paste 00:59:705 (1,2) - Pattern then put it in this manner
01:22:847 (2) - Move to 01:23:019?
01:49:076 (1) - Create Inherited points w/ Slowly decreasing volume here

[Sweden + Finland]

01:49:076 (1) - Create Inherited points w/ Slowly decreasing volume here

[Denmark]

+2 HP Drain
01:44:961 (1) - This placing is kinda awkward to me (not asking to change)
01:49:076 (1) - Create Inherited points w/ Slowly decreasing volume here

[Insane]

00:25:587 (1) - Far from center after spinner
01:49:244 (1) - Create Inherited points w/ Slowly decreasing volume here

starred~
Mint Bunny

MDuh wrote:

[Insane]

00:25:587 (1) - Far from center after spinner does that really matter? :< sorry, no.
01:49:244 (1) - Create Inherited points w/ Slowly decreasing volume here
きゅん!Download: Hatsune Miku - Ban Ban Boo (Celeste76) [Mint's Nordic 5 [Insane]].osu
p3n
[Norway + Iceland]
Nothing here. Some beat-placements may play weird for beginners but that's probably just me:
00:54:562 (1,2,3,4) - As the beat of the song goes 0-1-0-1 this is easy to follow...
01:38:104 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - ...this is mapped 1-0-1-0 (which is CORRECT!) but it might be confusing for beginners, as it doesn't follow the dominant beats that they can hear

[Sweden + Finland]
00:28:505 (6) - Curve more exactly around (5) (like (7) already is)
00:32:105 (7) - Maybe replace this by a slider from previous white tick to this point? It feels like this should be a normal diff and while this note is placed right, it feels weird to leave out the beat on the white tick before
00:44:962 (2,3) - Can be placed better to fix the different gaps: Move (2) to 159/237 and (3) to 102/162

[Denmark]

00:45:476 (7) - Wrong timing. Use a circle instead of the slider-end (on white tick) to match the vocals+beat
01:07:762 (8) - Maybe delete this last note as it doesn't fit imo
01:17:533 (3) - Wrong timing. Use a normal slider from 01:17:362 - 01:17:704 (red tick to red tick) and add a circle at 01:17:876 (white tick) to match the song

The two wrong parts aside, this map is really fun to play ;)

[Mint's Nordic 5]

Some weird spacings (personal preferences) and one completely irrational jump @00:19:415 (5,1) but overall very good!


good mapset!
~star
Topic Starter
Celeste76

MDuh wrote:

omg 10 months
anyways, here's the requested mod

[Norway + Iceland]
01:22:847 (2) - Move to 01:23:019? I like it that way.
Thank you! I did everything except for the above.
Topic Starter
Celeste76

p3n wrote:

good mapset!
~star
Thank you! Did everything!
Kiiwa
Hi~

General
I like you avatar *.*
Ahhh i feel like a combo-whore
Disable count down on all diffs
Audio-lead in is not the same on all diffs
Does the second Red line even change anything? If not remove it, if so, add it to all diffs

Insane
Diff name is strange o.o
OD-1
Too much loud N whistle in Kiai gives a noisy impression

00:07:591 (1) - Remove new combo
00:08:619 (8) - New combo
00:08:962 (1) - Remove new combo
00:25:587 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Maybe lower the volume for this part, its pretty loud
00:35:701 (1) - Remove new combo
00:38:615 (6) - New combo
00:47:358 (12,1) - Is this space the same as 00:46:672 (8,9) - ?
00:48:558 (4,5) - Stack under 00:46:330 (5,6,7,8) -
00:48:815 (1) - Maybe end this spinner at 00:51:130 - and add note at 00:51:473 -
01:04:844 (1) - Change to a jump slow down like the previous one ( 01:01:758 (13,1) - )
01:15:472 (9,10,11,1,2,3,4) - Sort out your claps here? their confusing me~!
01:45:130 (5) - Stack on 01:45:473 (7) - ?
01:45:473 (7) - Should start at 01:45:644 -
01:48:387 (8) - New combo
01:48:730 (9) - Move to x:96 y:280
01:49:073 (11) - Move to x:256 y:8 (maybe need recheck here)

Denmark
Rename to 'Hard'
OD-1

01:06:562 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This could look better
01:32:619 (1) - Add finish
01:43:590 (1) - Change position
Add finish to the follow: 01:46:333 (1) - 01:47:019 (4) - (begining) 01:47:704 (1) - 01:48:047 (3) - 01:48:390 (5,6,7) -
01:49:076 (1) - Dosent finish at that funny sound

S+F
Rename to 'Normal'
OD-1/2
AR-1
No break in this diff yet there is in the harder diffs?

00:17:533 (5) - Spacing
01:49:076 (1) - Dosent finish at that funny sound

N+I
Rename to 'Easy'
OD-1
HD-1

00:32:105 (6) - Dont like this
00:51:476 (1) - End at 00:51:476 (1) -
00:54:219 - Add note?
00:56:962 (1) - Short?

Everything else looks cool.
Good luck~ star
Mint Bunny
fixed a bunch of spacing.
I didn't agree to a lot of Kiiwa's suggestions :|

Download: Hatsune Miku - Ban Ban Boo (Celeste76) [Mint's Nordic 5 [Insane]].osu
Topic Starter
Celeste76

Kiiwa wrote:

Hi~

General
I like you avatar *.* Thank you~
Disable count down on all diffs No thank you
Denmark
01:43:590 (1) - Change position No.

N+I
Rename to 'Easy'
OD-1 No.
HD-1 No.

00:32:105 (6) - Dont like this I do.
00:56:962 (1) - Short? Good the way it is.

Everything else looks cool.
Good luck~ star
Thank you!
The 08 team_Bourdon
Hi.. :3
i just can give some suggestion for you~

Norway+Iceland
- It is Easy or Normal? If it is EASY, This difficulty didn't feel easy enough...

00:54:219 (1,2) - Too far from spinner, you need to put this note close to the spinner...
00:59:705 (1,2,1,2) - IMO, These will confuse beginners...

Sweden+Finland
00:31:933 (7) - i can't see it clearly :(
00:48:562 (6,1) - right 1 grid?
00:50:448 (6) - up+left 1 gird?
01:34:333 (5) - down+left 2 grid?
01:35:019 (7) - down+right 2 grid?
01:35:704 (2) - too more repeat on this slider.. feel a bit boring~
01:41:876 (4) - right+up 2 grid?

Denmark
-Overall Difficulty +1?

00:18:905 - why don't here put some note start from here o.O?
00:20:276 - ^
01:06:562 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - make this pattern like a circle?
01:22:847 (6) - New Combo?
01:25:762 (5) - ^
01:31:247 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - too more finish sound..A bit noisy~
01:41:190 (3) - up+left 2 grid?
01:41:876 (6) - up+right 2 grid?
01:42:561 (2,3,4) - Overlap it, making it more beautiful... (Overlap can be closed grid snap)

Mint's Nordic 5
00:36:734 (4,5) - up+left 3 grid?
00:47:533 (1) - too far from the previous note.
00:51:648 (1) - too far from the previous spinner?
00:53:019 (5) - New Combo?
00:56:448 (8) - ^
00:56:791 (11) - too far from the previous note.
01:00:905 (9) - New Combo?
01:03:648 (9) - ^
01:14:448 (5) - ^
01:28:676 (5) - ^
01:40:848 (1,2,3,4) - down 1 grid?
01:46:162 (8) - down+right 1 grid?
01:47:705 (6) - New Combo?
hit sound set up very well :)

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Nice Map 8-)
Hope you can get ranked ;)
S-t-a-r!~!!!
Topic Starter
Celeste76

The 08 team_Bourdon wrote:

Hi.. :3
i just can give some suggestion for you~

Norway+Iceland
- It is Easy or Normal? If it is EASY, This difficulty didn't feel easy enough...

00:59:705 (1,2,1,2) - IMO, These will confuse beginners... How?

Sweden+Finland

Denmark
-Overall Difficulty +1? No.

00:18:905 - why don't here put some note start from here o.O? It's supposed to match the music or something like that.
00:20:276 - ^ ^
01:31:247 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - too more finish sound..A bit noisy~ I like it the way it is.
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Nice Map 8-)
Hope you can get ranked ;)
S-t-a-r!~!!!
Thank you! I did everything else~
Mint Bunny
winber1
General

--Why is the bpm 175.001? On Mint's Nordic, the bpm is exactly 175. Just use BPM 175.
--The kiai times are all really different in each difficulty

Mint's Nordic

00:00:734 - 00:05:876 - I would much rather use soft hitsounds. This Normal hitsound is too noisy imo. If you do not apply this change, at least lower the volume then.
00:07:591 (5) - new combo
00:07:934 (1) - remove combo
00:08:962 (4) - new combo
00:09:305 (1) - remove combo
00:10:334 (4) - new combo
00:10:676 (1) - remove combo
00:11:705 (4) - new combo
00:19:419 (5) - i didn't expect a 2nd repeat on this slider. It doesn't really fit imo :/ Perhaps you could take one repeat off and add a note at 00:19:934 (if you do, this note should be a new combo and remove the combo of the next note).
00:26:791 (6) - new combo?
00:26:962 (1) - remove combo?
00:29:705 (2) - this time i thot it was 2 repeats, except it was 3... =_="
01:13:419 (2) - These two repeat reverse sliders really annoy me >_>
01:20:619 (9) - ^
01:49:076 (5) - this note touches the hp bar. You can just lower combo 5, and also make combo 4 symmetric about the y-axis? it annoys me that it's slightly off.

Denmark


00:19:933 (2) - new combo?
00:21:305 (3) - new combo?
01:23:876 (6) - add note
01:38:276 (2) - This every other 1/2 tick clap pattern is a little noisy imo. A every 1/1 tick clap pattern fits much better.
01:42:390 (2) - add note

Sweden + Finland

--Is this a normal diff?

00:59:705 (1,2,3,4,5) - If this is supposed to be a Normal difficulty, I wouldn't have this stack. It's just really hard for beginners to read, so I would space it out. If it's a hard difficulty, I guess it's fine.. i guess...
01:14:790 (5,6,1) - you should space this evenly.

Norway + Iceland

00:18:562 (1) - Replace the finish at the end of the slider with a clap.
00:19:933 (2) - remove clap
00:19:933 (2) - Replace the finish at the end ofthe slider with a clap
00:32:105 (6) - move this note 1/2 tick later and fix spacing. This note doesn't really make any sense the in the curren spot it is in.
01:44:961 (2) - add finsih
01:46:333 (4) - add finish at the beginning and end of slider (not the middle)
01:47:704 (5,6) - add finishes to all notes

Nice map! :3
Topic Starter
Celeste76

winber1 wrote:

Denmark

Sweden + Finland

--Is this a normal diff?

00:59:705 (1,2,3,4,5) - If this is supposed to be a Normal difficulty, I wouldn't have this stack. It's just really hard for beginners to read, so I would space it out. If it's a hard difficulty, I guess it's fine.. i guess... It is a normal you know. And I like this pattern.

Norway + Iceland
00:32:105 (6) - move this note 1/2 tick later and fix spacing. This note doesn't really make any sense the in the curren spot it is in. I think it makes perfect sense there. Can't you hear it? It's going to the the soft whistle in the background.

Nice map! :3
Did everything except for above.
winber1
00:32:105 (6) - move this note 1/2 tick later and fix spacing. This note doesn't really make any sense the in the curren spot it is in. Edit: Oh, my mistake. I immediately assumed that soft-whistle-like sound was actually a custom sound you had. It didn't feel like it was part of the music some reason.
Astom
o/
Some suggestions

[Skin]
-If you are gonna use template skin parts, then force it in all diff, because it's unnecesary copy them in your folder song (song setup->Storyboarding->Skinning->Default to force template skin)

[Norway + Iceland]
-00:31:591 (5,6,1,2), set a slider from 00:31:591 to 00:32:105 with one repeat, a circle in 00:32:962 and another one in 00:33:305, then a slider from 00:33:648 to 00:33:991 with one repeat and finally a slider from 00:34:676 to 00:35:019.

[Insane]
-Looks a little overmapped, is not necessary set circles in every beat.

Uhmm... that's all.
Topic Starter
Celeste76

Astom wrote:

o/
Some suggestions

[Skin]
-If you are gonna use template skin parts, then force it in all diff, because it's unnecesary copy them in your folder song (song setup->Storyboarding->Skinning->Default to force template skin) So do I just delete the copied elements afterwards?

[Norway + Iceland]
-00:31:591 (5,6,1,2), set a slider from 00:31:591 to 00:32:105 with one repeat, a circle in 00:32:962 and another one in 00:33:305, then a slider from 00:33:648 to 00:33:991 with one repeat and finally a slider from 00:34:676 to 00:35:019. No, sorry.
HellDawn
Norway-Iceland
00:33:991- This object is too cloose to the previous object.
00:35:362- ^
00:37:248- ^
00:54:905-^
00:47:019- far from the previous object

Sweden-Finland
00:41:705- Add a note
00:33:734-Concealed slider repeats

00:55:591- ^

Denmark
Hp Drain Rate -1

Insane
00:18:219- 1 grid down
01:29:534- 1 grid left

Nice mapset!
Topic Starter
Celeste76

HellDawn wrote:

Norway-Iceland
00:33:991- This object is too cloose to the previous object. No it's not?
00:35:362- ^ Fixed
00:37:248- ^ ^
00:54:905-^ ^
00:47:019- far from the previous object ^

Sweden-Finland
00:41:705- Add a note Done
00:33:734-Concealed slider repeats I think it's just fine, but if someone else complains then I'll change it

00:55:591- ^ ^

Denmark
Hp Drain Rate -1 Done
Nice mapset!
Tanmak
Great.

There is no fixing object.

Good job~

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