1. Treasure (2.6 stars, 564 notes)

Garden wrote:

来支持一下

Narcissu wrote:

臣妾沒精力了，需要補魔……

Hello- wrote:

Hello =w=!
i'm not well modding. but, i'm hope my modding is helpful for you.

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General
1.Timing -8~-12? …… i think it should +10 Orz , timing not by me
2.HP Drain +1~1.5 so low. lol …… ok , HP6
2.Delete .osb……fix
3.Turn off Widescreen Support…… fix

Treasure
00:28:527 - 00:33:982 - 00:39:437 - 00:44:891 - add whistle. …… i just add 13 whistle and 24clap …… not follow music Orz
00:33:641 (2) - add clap
00:36:027 (3) - try move 148/324? i think better set with 00:34:664 (1) - last head. / or rotate 4, stack 00:30:573 - ?
00:47:277 (4) - add finish.…… fix
00:47:618 (5) - Ctrl+G? ……
01:20:346 - change finish?…… ok
01:31:937 (1) - blanket to 01:32:959 (2) - ……it's blanket too ??
01:42:164 (5) - Ctrl+G?
01:44:209 (3) - move 296/312 last head? …… ??
01:48:130 - maybe looks better add circle?…… i all 1/2 …… 1/4 a bit abrupt
01:56:482 (1) - blanket to 01:57:505 (2) - …… fix
02:25:459 (2) - change finish, off additions.…… fix
02:31:937 - no hear finish sound. you can off finish.…… e ……
03:57:846 (3) - reduce 03:58:187 - …… ok
03:48:130 - same 01:48:130 -
04:14:550 (6) - off finish.…… fix
04:23:755 (1) - change normal(additions) finish.…… fix
04:25:459 (6) - change finish, off additions.…… fix
04:46:909 (6) - NC.…… ok
05:12:025 (5) - ^……8note same color better ?
05:15:355 (1) - off NC?…… ok

veeeeeeeeeeeeeery good song! …… ::>_<::
good luck~

Kalibe wrote:

Hello, as requested in-game.

general:

nothing~

[Treasure]

00:53:755 (1) - expecting a jump here D: …… ok
01:01:596 (5) - try to avoid overlap? x: 168 y: 348 maybe... ? …… i think move more comfortable ;w;
01:15:573 (1) - moar spacing please ;w;…… i can't jump all download , it's a bit dull Orz
01:26:482 (1) - ^ same……
01:30:573 (3,4,5,6) - spacing here is weird for me, because i hear white tick is stronger than red so 5>4 in spacing imo. So maybe try this? : …… i prefer use my beautiful layout Orz https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4040247
01:37:391 (1) - x: 208 y: 188 ? ……ok
01:52:732 (4) - clap here is weird. I have idea : remove it and change sampleset to Drum, sounds better imo …… i don't think so - -
02:01:937 (6) - NC mayb? …… no nc better read ?
02:18:300 (1) - spacing is too small for me.
03:09:437 (5) - add clap with normal addition?…… fix
03:52:008 (3) - sounds off dude. It's snap on 1/16 lel ? …… you are right …… but i want to use 1/2……: http://puu.sh/lCiIu/bbadc809fe.jpg
04:01:937 (7) - also, maybe NC? it will be nice imo :3
04:25:459 (6) - with clap i hear finish too.……fix

Ok, that's all. Good map and really nice song tho :3

Have a starr (／・ω・)／ ⋆

Kyle Y wrote:

2.6 星的慢歌你想我摸什喵啦
給你星星好了

moonlightleaf wrote:

[Treasure]

00:09:777 - note……因为人声有蓝线所以从头到尾都没跟

00:20:687 扔3连?……放连打就没有干净的感觉了……

00:31:937 (1) - 漏了00:32:959 很难受……因为口琴有蓝线所以从头到尾都没跟

02:25:118 (5,6) - 没平行好难受 …… 唔……

04:42:138 (4) - ctrl+h的样子……因为是finish所以和正常的地方不一样……

05:46:513 - 3连?……为何……

摸不出啥...太水了orz

1. All clear.

1. 01:30:573 (3,4,5,6,1) - This star pattern's movement can catch player's off-guard, due to the first one having a different kind of movement(by first one I mean 01:08:755 (3,4,5,6,1) - ). And on top of that, I do not really like the movement of this pattern when looked over it individually, as the movement between the notes are getting suddenly bigger then smaller then bigger etc., personally I like the movement in the first star pattern than this.
2. 01:41:482 (3,4,5) - This is my personal opinion, but reducing the distance on (5) that much when (3) and (4) were basically 'far' jumps may have a negative effect on the movements of the player. Yes, this breaks off the consistency, but it reflects the instrument's 'mood' in this part when (5) is moved a bit more far apart.
3. 02:25:459 (6) - You might as well give a little bit more spacing on this note, as this is having the same cymbals like 02:24:437 (3) - . It feels a little bit weird to have the same distance like 02:25:800 (7) - this did, as in the other parts, 02:25:800 (7) - this note had a lower distance than any other notes in the same type of rhythm.
4. 02:41:482 (3) - Any reason why is there a normal addition on the head of this slider? I mean, there wasn't any in the other parts, but I don't see a specific reason for this to be here.
5. 05:41:025 (4,5) - Something similar like the movement point made above, this doesn't necessarily have to be under 05:39:695 (6) - , it just doesn't really reflect the mood of the song in this part(the stanza being the most intense one here). Instead, you could blanket 05:39:695 (6) - this note instead with these notes, which may give a better emphasis to the song's mood.

[Sc4v4ng3r] wrote:

Heya! Mod as requested in-game~

• Unrankable issues

1. My opinion which I highly recommend changing it
2. Small suggestions/nazi

[General]

1. All clear.

[Treasure]

1. 01:30:573 (3,4,5,6,1) - This star pattern's movement can catch player's off-guard, due to the first one having a different kind of movement(by first one I mean 01:08:755 (3,4,5,6,1) - ). And on top of that, I do not really like the movement of this pattern when looked over it individually, as the movement between the notes are getting suddenly bigger then smaller then bigger etc., personally I like the movement in the first star pattern than this.
   
   ……it‘s mean all star pattern like 01:08:755 (3,4,5,6,1) - ?? i prefer random jump , reasonably ≈ dull imo
2. 01:41:482 (3,4,5) - This is my personal opinion, but reducing the distance on (5) that much when (3) and (4) were basically 'far' jumps may have a negative effect on the movements of the player. Yes, this breaks off the consistency, but it reflects the instrument's 'mood' in this part when (5) is moved a bit more far apart.
   
   …… same as above , random jump have fun XD , i prefer to do lively not logic
3. 02:25:459 (6) - You might as well give a little bit more spacing on this note, as this is having the same cymbals like 02:24:437 (3) - . It feels a little bit weird to have the same distance like 02:25:800 (7) - this did, as in the other parts, 02:25:800 (7) - this note had a lower distance than any other notes in the same type of rhythm.
   ……ok,
4. 02:41:482 (3) - Any reason why is there a normal addition on the head of this slider? I mean, there wasn't any in the other parts, but I don't see a specific reason for this to be here.
   
   add jump when download ?? maybe it's a bit different with others ……
5. 05:41:025 (4,5) - Something similar like the movement point made above, this doesn't necessarily have to be under 05:39:695 (6) - , it just doesn't really reflect the mood of the song in this part(the stanza being the most intense one here). Instead, you could blanket 05:39:695 (6) - this note instead with these notes, which may give a better emphasis to the song's mood.
   
   ……e .. you are right , but looks very complicated ...

Overall a really good map, with great song and hitsounds. They are beautiful
GL!

XiMerx wrote:

Hello c: From PM owo

It seems that your mapping style don't blanket very often? Blanketing makes things very pretty ww

Treasure

1. 00:26:482 (1,2) - Because of where (1) slider end is facing, (2) should be in front of (1), not behind.…… 的確我有點看不懂 ;w;
2. 01:06:027 (3,4,1) - You should emphasise on (1), not (4). …… 對
3. 01:31:255 (5,6) - Ctrl+G so that 01:31:937 (1) will be emphasised …… 這個反過來的話……後面那個就有點奇怪
4. 01:33:300 (3,4,1) - They should have same DS because (3) and (1) have the same sound on start. (1) should not have lesser DS.……ok
5. 01:37:391 (1,2) - You should blanket them…… 包好的話滑條就太彎了Orz
6. 01:39:437 (4,1) - ^
7. 01:51:027 (1,2) - Because of where (1) slider end is facing, (2) should be in front of (1), not behind.
8. 02:21:027 (1,2) - Blanket?
9. 03:15:573 (1) - More DS? ??
10. 05:14:021 (2) - This should be in front of the slider (1) because of its direction. This creates more flow.……ok
    
    Example

    

Sorry for bad mod. PM me 如果你不明白一些提示。

Evil_Twilight wrote:

[Treasure]
00:23:755 (1) - NC移到00:25:118 (2) - 去突顯這一段的結束 …… 原來如此lol ,看來刻板的人是我
01:08:755 (3) - 我會在這放NC
01:33:300 (3) - 擺在x:224 y:316 好看一些……好
01:57:846 (3) - 跟上面一樣頭壓尾不太好看……後面都是圈有點難動……
02:19:664 (4) - 試試 http://puu.sh/lDXXz/836392093f.png ……好

還是這種小清心的圖好
就是速度有點慢了…… 之前我做成4.6星，AR9 OD8……最後還是放棄了 ah

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337,283,186027,2,0,P|261:303|191:268,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:

pieguyn wrote:

[Treasure]
00:52:391 (3) - maybe curve might flow better? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4069149 …… ok
00:55:118 (3) - i'd prefer a position more like this... https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4068913 i don't get the reason behind jump at 00:53:755 (1,2) - only …… e, i prefer own

76,224,55118,2,0,P|115:218|150:201,2,79.9999999999999,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

00:57:846 (3,4,1) - i don't think this spacing really fit well. there's no emphasis on drums at 00:58:527 (4) - but emphasis on drums at 00:57:846 (3) - and vocal, it feels random to play for me. mb try a position more like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4069048 …… no jump emphasis next jump more ?
01:00:232 (2) - maybe try a position more like x388 y248?…… ok
01:06:027 (3,4) - any reason this isn't blanket? seems u use a lot of blankets here but this one isn't…… random blanket XD
01:17:618 (4) - make it symmetric to 01:16:937 (3) - imo…… ok
01:41:823 (4,5) - imo spacing here doesn't fit emphasis from drum well. how about pattern like this instead... https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4069136 ? if u accept, maybe rearrange the other notes a bit so spacing isn't as high……it's too hard lol
02:18:300 - imo this rhythm would fit vocal a lot better http://puu.sh/lIFVj/af6d299813.jpg……never follow vocal XD , random rhythm……
02:46:937 - maybe pattern like this could fit emphasis from drum better? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4069124 ……ok
03:06:027 (3) - if "random jump" is what u prefer i think a jump like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4069077 would be good……ok

337,283,186027,2,0,P|261:303|191:268,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:

03:17:618 (4,1) - seem odd for me there's no jump here bc it's in the middle of a jump pattern. how about position like this to keep spacing up? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4069082……
03:47:959 (4,1) - jump here (1.6x DS)? seem to fit rest of the vocal in this area……ok
03:52:732 (4) - x80 y344?
04:35:666 (2) - i think i get how u placed most of the jumps but i don't get this one. it's not a blanket and doesn't seem follow anything. imo move to x316 y300 and make jump between 04:35:666 (2,3) - fits better
05:40:360 (2,3) - 1/2 slider here? spacing at 05:40:692 (3,4) - doesn't seem to emphasize vocal well enough imo……i want to add more note …… get PP ?

all suggestions
first mod in 10 months, sorry in advance if it's not helpful
i like the hitsounds a lot ~
gl ~

your mod all very pertinent about jump…… but if i jump all drum and downbeat …… the layout will be formalization…… i remove many jump because i want to make a easy and relax map Orz

1. 01:01:596 (5) - You can maybe move it to x:127 y:339 because it's doing an overlap with 01:00:573 (3) - at the moment and you could improve the jump here
2. 01:18:641 (2) - I think you can move that note aswell to x:99 y:41 to get a flawless cursor's movement when playing these : 01:17:618 (4,1,2,3) -
3. 01:23:073 (4,5) - You can try to rearrange the spacing here to get another flow and avoid some overlaps :
   
   example

   
4. 02:13:868 (4,5,6) - I was a little bit confused by this placement ; it sounded a bit random imo owo Maybe you can rearrange the placement here?
5. 02:23:755 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This is nice! Good job ♥
6. 03:34:664 (1) - I'd Ctrl+G that note in order to make an awesome flow with 03:35:687 (2,3) - ( it improve the jump here!)
7. 04:30:552 (3,4) - Your pattern could be more energic , try it like that :
   
   example2

   

Secretpipe wrote:

Very solid map here in general! Throwing some suggestions and we're good to go !

[Treasure]

1. 01:01:596 (5) - You can maybe move it to x:127 y:339 because it's doing an overlap with 01:00:573 (3) - at the moment and you could improve the jump here …… the overlap is my wish , like random and spontaneous , but too many people think it's bad Orz , i move too 144|344
2. 01:18:641 (2) - I think you can move that note aswell to x:99 y:41 to get a flawless cursor's movement when playing these : 01:17:618 (4,1,2,3) - ……ok
3. 01:23:073 (4,5) - You can try to rearrange the spacing here to get another flow and avoid some overlaps : …… the jump too big Orz
   
   example

   
4. 02:13:868 (4,5,6) - I was a little bit confused by this placement ; it sounded a bit random imo owo Maybe you can rearrange the placement here? …… random is romantic ! , i dont know how to change Orz
5. 02:23:755 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This is nice! Good job ♥ …… naya ~
6. 03:34:664 (1) - I'd Ctrl+G that note in order to make an awesome flow with 03:35:687 (2,3) - ( it improve the jump here!) …… ok
7. 04:30:552 (3,4) - Your pattern could be more energic , try it like that :……ok
   
   example2

   

Alright , once you applied those, call me bac for a recheck!

Natsu wrote:

hey from x'mas queue, you have BN for this? if not pm in game !

ZZHBOY wrote:

timing is fine for me, approved~!

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