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709sec. - Draw the Line

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Topic Starter
Ch1ka
Thank you, done :3
Dark_Ai
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Hey (:

Easy:
00:13:297 (1) - I would make the Sliders so: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/62588 But it is up to you ^^
00:15:891 (1) - ^
00:18:486 (1) - ^
00:34:054 (1,2,3) - End the sliders 1/1, much better.
00:42:162 (2) - ^
00:42:973 (3) - begin the slider on 00:43:135 and end this 00:43:783
00:43:783 (4) - move to 00:44:108
01:06:966 (3) - begin 01:06:803; end 01:07:776
So I think the sound is better if you begin all Sliders 1/1 and end 1/1 , but it is up to you ;)

Normal:
I thik its okay =)

Hard
01:13:290 (1,2,3) - I don't like how they sounds, they doesn't seems to follow anything T_T Replace them with something else, please.
I don't have more to say :D
A really nice map :3 you have a Star
Topic Starter
Ch1ka
Thank you for mod, fixed :D
Kurowolfe
Hi there!
Wow, there's a lot of mods before me, and I'm not sure what I find might help you at this point, but here goes:
kurohacker's mod(^^)
[Easy]
0:47:027 [1&2] - Move these two one grid left (grid level 3).

[Normal]
0:14:108 [4&5] - There's a jump here. Also, maybe you can align them.
0:38:270 [4] - Move one grid up (grid level 3).
0:42:810 [2&3] - Arrange them like so -->
1:03:567 [3] - Maybe you can align this with slider [2] before it, or follow the pattern of [2&3] at 1:01:621?
1:12:479 [4] - Move one grid up.
1:17:830 - Add a circle here.
1:36:966 [spinner] - The spinner's kinda short for a Normal. Maybe change it to sliders instead?

[Hard]
0:19:946 [5] - Move this so that it's in a straight line with [3].
0:20:756 [1-2, next 1-3] - Maybe you can arrange them like so -->

0:31:459 [1] - Move 2 grids up.
0:32:916 [6] - Same here.
0:35:189 [4] - New combo here.
0:37:783 [4] - Same here.
0:56:432 [2&3] - I suggest you rearrange them so that they are symmetrical to the [2] and [3] at 0:55:135.

[Ono's Taiko Oni]
I'm not really sure about using 1/6 beat spacings for this map, but I guess that's just me.
Also, I suggest that you avoid putting a note 1/6 beat after a large 'don' or 'ka', like at 0:13:351; it's hard to actually see them this way.

[Reiji-RJ's Line]
1:47:993 [spinner] - I suggest pushing the slider two 1/4 beats back. Then, put a circle here instead.

I like some of the maps' notes placing, and I also like the song, despite being Engrish...
Also, I don't want Yukari to come get me for not doing so :o , so here's a star for you~
All the best with your maps! :)

Topic Starter
Ch1ka
Thank you, fixed some thing
m i z u k i
god song
OnosakiHito
Oh god, the taiko diff's notes are after resnapping on the wrong place...... I replaced it by my own now.

Download: 709sec. - Draw the Line (Ch1ka) [Ono's Taiko Oni].osu
Topic Starter
Ch1ka
OnosakiHito, thank you :3
OnosakiHito
No problem. I hope this will get ranked soon. :<
MMzz
Can't find anything wrong with the taiko map except the sliders, they are to close to the next note. Need to be at least a measure apart.
LightoHK
8-)
Nice.
Diasios
[General]

  • mp3 bitrate is unrankable; please reduce it to 192kbps.
    Set the same combo colours on all difficulties.
[Easy]

  • Slider Tick Rate: 0,5
    • 00:15:891 (1) - Extend by 1/2
    • 00:18:486 (1) - ^
    • 00:30:000 (break) - Delete this break and try to map this part.
    • 00:36:648 (3) - Add "New Combo"
    • 01:30:000 (break) - Delete this break and try to map this part.
    • 00:44:108 (4) - Delete this circle
    • 00:47:027 (1,2) - Add a slider instead of these circles.
    • 00:48:324 (3,4) - ^
    • 00:49:297 (5) - Add "New Combo"
    • 00:50:594 (1) - Remove "New Combo"
    • 00:50:918 (2,3) - Add a slider instead of these circles.
    • 00:51:567 (4,5) - ^
    • 01:25:128 (1) - Remove "New Combo". Move 1/2 earlier and extend by 1/2
    • 01:25:939 (1) - Remove "New Combo"
    • 01:46:371 (1) - ^
[Normal]

  • HP Drain Rate: 4
    Approach Rate: 4
    Overall Difficulty: 4
[Reiji-RJ's Line]

  • • 00:58:000 (break) - Delete this break and try to map this part.
    • 01:31:776 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Change this part in something different.
    Example:
Faust

xxheroxx wrote:

mp3 bitrate is unrankable; please reduce it to 192kbps.
What?

The mp3 bitrate doesn't even go above 192kbps for even a second. What the fuck are you saying.
Topic Starter
Ch1ka
SPOILER

xxheroxx wrote:

[General]

  • mp3 bitrate is unrankable; please reduce it to 192kbps. I dont understand, im already have 157kbps-mp3
    Set the same combo colours on all difficulties. done
[Easy]

  • Slider Tick Rate: 0,5 no
    • 00:15:891 (1) - Extend by 1/2 ok
    • 00:18:486 (1) - ^ no
    • 00:30:000 (break) - Delete this break and try to map this part. done
    • 00:36:648 (3) - Add "New Combo"ok
    • 01:30:000 (break) - Delete this break and try to map this part. ok
    • 00:44:108 (4) - Delete this circle ok
    • 00:47:027 (1,2) - Add a slider instead of these circles. ok
    • 00:48:324 (3,4) - ^ ok
    • 00:49:297 (5) - Add "New Combo" ok
    • 00:50:594 (1) - Remove "New Combo" ok
    • 00:50:918 (2,3) - Add a slider instead of these circles. nope
    • 00:51:567 (4,5) - ^ done
    • 01:25:128 (1) - Remove "New Combo". Move 1/2 earlier and extend by 1/2 fixed
    • 01:25:939 (1) - Remove "New Combo" ok
    • 01:46:371 (1) - ^ok

[Normal]

  • HP Drain Rate: 4
    Approach Rate: 4
    Overall Difficulty: 4 fixed
  • Thank you for mod!
Kaona
Very nice~ :D
OnosakiHito
I'm really waiting for your mapset to get ranked. :o
Do you would like to have a second easier Taiko diff.?
To have a full mapset also in the Taiko mode.
Taiko Oni // Taiko Muzukashii

By the way I have updated the BG, this is much better.

Topic Starter
Ch1ka

OnosakiHito wrote:

[b]I'm really waiting for your mapset to get ranked. :o
Do you would like to have a second easier Taiko diff.?
To have a full mapset also in the Taiko mode.
Taiko Oni // Taiko Muzukashii
I'm really sorry that I don't answer immediately, but I was very busy and didnt have any free time for mapping :(
Soon I ressurect my maps and will continue work.
Also, tnks for BG, its really good :3
OnosakiHito
Ah! That's great!
Then I know it now. :3
Topic Starter
Ch1ka

OnosakiHito wrote:

Do you would like to have a second easier Taiko diff.?
To have a full mapset also in the Taiko mode.
Taiko Oni // Taiko Muzukashii
Sure, if you want it now
OnosakiHito
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