Suzully wrote:

Kiva's Hazy+

1. 00:19:531 (1) - start this spinner at next redline like same as other diffs. -fixed
2. 01:01:115 (1) - put finish sound at start of slider? -fixed
3. 01:12:402 (2,3,4,5) - make (3,4) be in alignment with (2,5)? like this -fixed
   
4. 01:36:758 (1,2,3,4) - too difficult to play...change (3,4) to slider? - no..i like what it is now
5. 01:39:135 (T) - what is this KIAI TIME? -fixed
6. 02:08:243 (1,2,1,2) - I feel these notes don't follow music.

- drum rhythem

wcx19911123 wrote:

[Kiva's Hazy+]
00:15:966 (1,2) - change to 1 slider -ok
01:05:570 (4,1) - spacing , if it's a jump I think it's kinda suddenly - is it
01:17:748 (7,8,9,10,11,1) - pentagon plz -ok
01:34:085 (7) - 1 gird left , pay attention to spacing below - -ok
01:36:758 (1,2,3,4) - very unreadble -blahblah
01:41:214 (6,1) - ctrl+r and remap them -ok
01:51:610 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - hexagon plz -ok
02:13:590 (3,4,5,6) - square plz -now it is la
02:18:639 (2,3,4,5) - ^ , and make 5 more good look plz -ok
02:48:045 (8,9,10) - I think spacing should be a little down -ok
03:14:778 (6,1) - spacing -ok

1. Taiko作者的名字沒進tags
2. tags關鍵字之間用空白隔開不是用逗號..
3. 你的creator words有錯字啊, 自己id都打錯了233
4. Yuki的難度沒preview time
5. 只有Kiva的難度有關countdown其他都開著?
6. 只有Hazy難度的Stack Leniency開到0.9其他都是0.7並且我看不到特別理由
7. 建議還是勾了display storyboard in front of combo fire, 500combo後變藍火會遮住歌詞
8. Hazy也是你自己的難度, 建議上Light Short有KIAI的那段Hazy也加上

loveFantasy wrote:

路過來騙kd看看..歌太長了, 清完現在的modding request再來full mod

你的creator words有錯字啊, 自己id都打錯了233 ._.不习惯打英文 而且打太快了。。
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mi sa wrote:

这首歌我非常喜欢，《胧月》算是初音的一首金曲，唯美的歌词，只为怀念逝去的爱恋。玩了一下感觉sb做的挺好，但note没有能让我体会这首歌的意韵，并且note的摆放让我看不清sb。我是个map新人，说一些自己的看法，请多指教。

1. change offset to -666ms
2. remove countdown on all diffs
3. In custom sampleset1 you got a silenced soft-hitnormal which is not allowed and the soft-hitclap2 doesn't really fit the song, imo. Also some diffs use silenced sliderslides in the intro part, some don't. It all should be a bit more consistent.
4. Since [Light Short] ends earlier than the other diffs, I would make the SB diff specific, and change it for [Light Short]. Revome all SB after the end of this diff and put the "Thank you for playing" here.

Dangaard wrote:

Overall

1. change offset to -666ms fixed!
2. remove countdown on all diffs fixed!
3. In custom sampleset1 you got a silenced soft-hitnormal which is not allowed and the soft-hitclap2 doesn't really fit the song, imo. Also some diffs use silenced sliderslides in the intro part, some don't. It all should be a bit more consistent. fixed!
4. Since [Light Short] ends earlier than the other diffs, I would make the SB diff specific, and change it for [Light Short]. Revome all SB after the end of this diff and put the "Thank you for playing" here.0.0 confused.

[Light Short]
consider reducing hp drain by 1 here fixed!
00:19:828 (1) - reduce the volume of this spinner (put the inherited timing point from 00:22:501 to the start of the spinner and reduce the volume) fixed!
01:46:263 (3) - starting from here you changed the clap rhythm, best is to put them on 2nd and 4th white tick (you changed from this to 1st and 3rd tick rhythm) fixed!


[Kiva]
00:05:273 - I don't see a reason for the change to 40% volume here, you should remove this timing point fixed!
00:07:055 (1) - remove new combo fixed!
00:30:521 (6) - add whistle on the end fixed!
00:37:946 (2) - same here fixed!
00:39:432 (2) - remove whistle fixed!
00:46:857 (1,2,1) - this is one example, you got some combos that seem spilt up in smaller combos on the wrong place (In this case I would remove it from 00:48:045 (1) and put it on (2) or (3))
00:51:731 - The speed up feels too early, you should keep 50% speed until 01:01:115. Also the volume should stay the same as before here fixed!
01:10:739 - Again, why the lower volume fixed!
01:22:501 (1) - another example for the combo problem fixed!
01:29:333 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - sounds empty without hitsounds fixed!
01:39:251 - And lower volume again (I would remove it, considering it's the corus of the song) fixed!

etc

Spacing seems fine on most parts in this diff, but as mentioned you got inconsistent combos and hitsounds you should take care of (and I mean on the whole diff, not only on the examples I posted).
Also snap timing points to to the timing after you fixed/removed those unneeded ones with lower volume (the 2nd half of this diff doesn't have any timing points).


[Hazy]
I don't know about the clap hitsounds before the first break... I'd prefer whistles fixed!
some combos seemed a bit too long fixed!
04:01:709 - put the volume for this a bit higher, 0% is unrankable now (5% is the minimum you can get now) fixed!


[Yuki YukI]
set a preview time (PreviewTime: 98519) fixed!
snap the timing points here too (at least the ones with speedchanges) fixed all
00:53:986 (1) - sliders like these are too confusing, since you cant read it properly (this is not allowed btw) fixed!
02:35:570 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - quite many finish sounds here fixed!


[Taiko]
please snap the inherited timing points to the timing (at least the kiai parts) fixed kiai part
00:11:700 - You have 2 timing points here only with different volume, so remove 1 of them fixed!
04:01:709 (66,67,68,69,70,71,72,73) - this whole section is not timed, i suggest to make this diff end earlier fixed!

I'm pretty sure this mod is not complete, but since there is much general stuff to fix I think you should first check it on your own thoroughly. Spacing wise there is not much to complain about, but there are just too many inconsistencies and technical problems.

Numbers 596108 wrote:

啊嗚啊嗚~~再射顆粉星幫你打氣吧~~>w<

karenying wrote:

Yuki YukI
00:01:116 - hitnormal靜音超怪的... 这是由于后来加了一个无声的soft-hitnorma弄的 fixed
00:21:908 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 吵,節奏超怪 fixed a lot
00:44:482 (5) - ugly fixed
其他還不錯 就normal hitsound的地方很吵 這些地方建議减音量,若10~20% 有些地方降了10%的音量

Nymph_ wrote:

Nymph here and request from: wcx19911123's mod queue.
Yuki Yuki:
01:17:749 (1) - ...(我觉得挺难看的 液) 这个随手拉的 太长了想不到怎么拉所以就这样了 重新拉过了一下 不过实在不擅长这个
01:56:957 (1) - 转盘FINISH? ok.....
03:41:512 (1,2,3) - 03:51:908 (2) - 我真心认为这些并不适合 虽然能听出来前面的是在跟乐器.. 后面的就真不知道为什么要这么下了.. 后面的deleted

tutuhaha wrote:

Yuki Yuki
没仔细看，但是就前面这一段来说要降音就降得彻底点比较好吧，突然两个whistle很吓人的。。。。。
音效和前面三难度尽量保持一致比较好 这个由于是remap过的版本所以没加原来的音效
这首歌只有一些地方要加重音的所以Normal音只要在一些地方加就行了一段一段的太吵了真的。。。 normal的话音量已经尽量降小了 感觉normal的话更有打击感 不是麽

1. The source of [Yuki Yuki] is vocaloid vocaloid2 while others are vocaloid2, idk which is the real source, but use same one please
2. It seems SB.jpeg and miku.jpeg is the same image with different resolution, miku.jpeg as BG and SB.jpeg used in SB right? Actually you could totally use SB.jpeg as BG. Well, I think it's not a big problem

1. The lyric couldn't be well viewed since it has a dark color, maybe add a soft light under it would be beeter, and here is a contrast:
   yours:
   Fixed:

1. 00:32:601 (1) - Remove whistle and use finish instead since there is a finish sound in the background music
2. 00:42:106 - It's not recommended that use 0.5xBPM in the easiest diff., it's hard to new players
3. 01:10:621 (1) - Remove whistle and add finish
4. 01:54:581 (5) - Doesn't fit music, suggest use a slider and a note instead or other ways you like. Oh, remember to add a custom soft clap at 01:55:175
   

1. 00:23:096 (1) - Add finish to fit music
2. 00:58:145 (4) - Spacing to 3 is a bit far
3. 01:10:027 (5) - If you use normal hitsound with about 70% volume here, it would sounds nice
4. 01:20:126 (2) - Add finish
5. 01:36:759 (1,2,3) - Add finish
6. 01:39:135 (1) - ^
7. 01:43:591 (1) - Why this slider spacing so close to previous notes?
8. 01:48:640 (2) - Add finish
9. 02:07:650 (2) - ^
10. 02:17:155 (1) - Finish instead of whistle
11. 02:26:660 (1) - ^
12. 02:45:670 (3) - Add finish
13. 02:55:175 (1) - ^
14. 03:52:205 (1) - ^

1. 00:05:720 (10) - Try 5% soft volume to the reverse seems better
2. 01:37:205 (2,3) - Add finish sounds better IMO
3. 02:24:878 (2) - Even if you want a slow down effect, is should start at this time

1. 00:30:522, 00:30:819 - Add a note sounds better
2. 01:19:532 (1) - Slider ends here seems better
3. 01:29:631 (5) - Add finish
4. 03:42:700 (4) - ^
5. 03:52:205 (3) - ^

1. Offset -6? (-772) Don't forget to move the sections and SB elements as well
2. Because of the SB, maybe disable letterbox during breaks in all diffs
3. I suggest using the kiai pattern of the taiko diff in all diffs. Don't use kiai just for the fountains, that's silly
4. Use the same slider tick rate for all diffs

1. It isn't necessary to change it now, but next time use 640*480 png files for black and white
2. For optimalization, you have various "white.jpg" "black.jpg" and "black ring.png" sprites in the sprite list, next time try reusing old sprites instead of adding new ones.

1. How about making the length of your maps consistent by making this diff as long as the other diffs? If you disagree please remove the SB on this diff that shows up after the map ends.

1. You placed some stacks in your map, for example: 01:18:937 (4,5,6) - But I think it's easier to read for new players if you space them out like you did on 01:36:165 (3,4,5) - maybe consider that.

1. the streams/stacks make this map a rather low-end hard, I like it more as a normal and I personally find these streams/stacks a bit unfitting here D: I really think you should remove them to make this map easier. Otherwise it would be too similar to the other diffs and 3 hard diffs is a bit weird
2. recheck your new combos, they're set pretty randomly imo
3. 02:26:066 (1) - move the middle waypoint 1 grid to the left to make the slider look better, also fix the sliders after this

1. 00:19:829 (1) - Let this spinner start 1/4 earlier
2. 00:40:027 (1) - Maybe let this spinner start 1/2 earlier? remove the note there
3. 00:54:878 (6) - This rhythm is a bit weird, change this slider into something else. Maybe place a note on 00:54:878 - and move the slider 1/2 back
4. 02:37:353 (5) - This stack is kinda hard to read, maybe move this 1/4 back to fit the vocals? or space it out.
5. 02:39:730 (5) - Apply the same here
6. 03:56:660 (1) - This spinner is rather sudden and short. Maybe replace it with a few beats?

1. 00:32:007 (1) - This is too close to (7)
2. 00:58:145 (4) - This is too close to (3)
3. 01:05:571 (4,1) - This jump here is very inconsistent with the rest of the spacing of this map

1. Reduce HP drain a bit? it's quite high xD I suggest -2
2. 00:05:274 (10) - No, silencing isn't an excuse for a pooted up rhythm
3. 02:25:472 (3) - Maybe add a new combo on this one to make it a bit easier to read
4. 02:40:918 (6) - Add new combo?
5. 01:39:135 - & 03:42:700 - Resnap these timing sections

1. 00:06:462 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - change the rhythm here and have something at 00:07:650 -
2. 00:11:215 (3,4) - The endpoints on blue ticks don't sound good
3. 00:19:680 (1) - Make this spinner start 1/4 earlier?
4. 00:22:353 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - wah! this is very hard to read with the sudden repeat slider in the middle of it and I think you should remove the note at 00:23:244 - It confuses me
5. 00:49:234 (2) - This slider doesn't look good, but the rhythm is also bad, don't use blue tick here
6. 03:41:512 (1,2,3) - another wah! Don't start new sliders on blue ticks! This is really impossible to read. Does this 1/4 stream even fit the song here? 1/6 fits better imo

1. 03:26:363 (2) Too close to (1)
2. 03:52:799 (4) - Spacing looks weird here, maybe give this note a new combo

1. There are too many reduntant timing sections! please remove the useless sections
2. You placed finishes on notes that are 1/4 apart from eachother. This is not allowed, and no the bpm is not 220. I'll point them out
   
   
   • 00:08:838 (9)
     00:30:522 (41,42,43)
     01:24:878 (23)
     01:46:561 (33,34,35)
     02:34:977 (143)
     02:41:215 (170,171)
     02:43:888 (174,175,176)
     03:02:304 (4)
     03:21:611 (54,55)
     03:26:660 (75)
     02:53:096 (218,219,220)

1. 03:23:096 (58,59,60,61,62,63) - Overtaking notes here! please fix this
2. 03:40:324 (1) - place a note here?
3. I can't say I'm impressed by this diff, the rhythm and hitsounds are placed very randomly and don't fit the song at all

happy30 wrote:

[General]
Technical stuff Fixed

1. Offset -6? (-772) Don't forget to move the sections and SB elements as well Fixed
2. Because of the SB, maybe disable letterbox during breaks in all diffs Fixed
3. I suggest using the kiai pattern of the taiko diff in all diffs. Don't use kiai just for the fountains, that's silly Fixed on [Hazy] diff
4. Use the same slider tick rate for all diffs Fixed

[SB]
Technical stuff

1. It isn't necessary to change it now, but next time use 640*480 png files for black and white
2. For optimalization, you have various "white.jpg" "black.jpg" and "black ring.png" sprites in the sprite list, next time try reusing old sprites instead of adding new ones. Thanks for suggestions. I will

[Light Short]
Technical stuff

1. How about making the length of your maps consistent by making this diff as long as the other diffs? If you disagree please remove the SB on this diff that shows up after the map ends. Fixed

Difficulty

1. You placed some stacks in your map, for example: 01:18:937 (4,5,6) - But I think it's easier to read for new players if you space them out like you did on 01:36:165 (3,4,5) - maybe consider that. Fixed

[Kiva]
Technical Stuff

1. the streams/stacks make this map a rather low-end hard, I like it more as a normal and I personally find these streams/stacks a bit unfitting here D: I really think you should remove them to make this map easier. Otherwise it would be too similar to the other diffs and 3 hard diffs is a bit weird Fixed
2. recheck your new combos, they're set pretty randomly imo Fixed
3. 02:26:066 (1) - move the middle waypoint 1 grid to the left to make the slider look better, also fix the sliders after this Fixed

Rhythm

1. 00:19:829 (1) - Let this spinner start 1/4 earlier Fixed
2. 00:40:027 (1) - Maybe let this spinner start 1/2 earlier? remove the note there Fixed
3. 00:54:878 (6) - This rhythm is a bit weird, change this slider into something else. Maybe place a note on 00:54:878 - and move the slider 1/2 back Fixed
4. 02:37:353 (5) - This stack is kinda hard to read, maybe move this 1/4 back to fit the vocals? or space it out. Fixed
5. 02:39:730 (5) - Apply the same here Fixed
6. 03:56:660 (1) - This spinner is rather sudden and short. Maybe replace it with a few beats? Fixed

Spacing

1. 00:32:007 (1) - This is too close to (7) Fixed
2. 00:58:145 (4) - This is too close to (3) Fixed
3. 01:05:571 (4,1) - This jump here is very inconsistent with the rest of the spacing of this map Fixed

[Hazy]
Technical Stuff

1. Reduce HP drain a bit? it's quite high xD I suggest -2 Fixed
2. 00:05:274 (10) - No, silencing isn't an excuse for a pooted up rhythm Fixed
3. 02:25:472 (3) - Maybe add a new combo on this one to make it a bit easier to read Fixed
4. 02:40:918 (6) - Add new combo? Fixed
5. 01:39:135 - & 03:42:700 - Resnap these timing sections Fixed

[Yuki YukI]
Rhythm
Some rhythms in your map don't follow the song well and feel weird and overmapped

1. 00:06:462 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - change the rhythm here and have something at 00:07:650 - Fixed
2. 00:11:215 (3,4) - The endpoints on blue ticks don't sound good Fixed
3. 00:19:680 (1) - Make this spinner start 1/4 earlier? Fixed
4. 00:22:353 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - wah! this is very hard to read with the sudden repeat slider in the middle of it and I think you should remove the note at 00:23:244 - It confuses me Fixed
5. 00:49:234 (2) - This slider doesn't look good, but the rhythm is also bad, don't use blue tick here Fixed
6. 03:41:512 (1,2,3) - another wah! Don't start new sliders on blue ticks! This is really impossible to read. Does this 1/4 stream even fit the song here? 1/6 fits better imo Fixed

Spacing

1. 03:26:363 (2) Too close to (1) Fixed
2. 03:52:799 (4) - Spacing looks weird here, maybe give this note a new combo Fixed

[S.Nagi's Taiko]

1. There are too many reduntant timing sections! please remove the useless sections All Fixed
2. You placed finishes on notes that are 1/4 apart from eachother. This is not allowed, and no the bpm is not 220. I'll point them out
   
   
   • 00:08:838 (9) Fixed
     00:30:522 (41,42,43) Fixed
     01:24:878 (23) Fixed
     01:46:561 (33,34,35) Fixed
     02:34:977 (143) Fixed
     02:41:215 (170,171) Fixed
     02:43:888 (174,175,176) Fixed
     03:02:304 (4) Fixed
     03:21:611 (54,55) Fixed
     03:26:660 (75) Fixed
     02:53:096 (218,219,220)Fixed

1. 03:23:096 (58,59,60,61,62,63) - Overtaking notes here! please fix this
2. 03:40:324 (1) - place a note here? Fixed
3. I can't say I'm impressed by this diff, the rhythm and hitsounds are placed very randomly and don't fit the song at all

Raging Bull wrote:

Ohh thanks. Although I don't know why Kiva didn't upload attachment o.o

Raging Bull wrote:

Ohh thanks. Although I don't know why Kiva didn't upload attachment o.o

[HitObjects]
140,156,18040,1,0
140,156,18189,1,0
139,156,18337,2,0,B|88:220|142:282,1,140,0|0
136,368,19228,2,0,B|212:368|228:284,1,105
256,192,19823,12,2,22496
256,192,23090,5,4