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Rihanna - Lost In Paradise

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neonat
Beatmap Nominator
3,528 posts
Joined April 2012
neonat
You do realise I am well aware of that as well, surprise surprise.

I am asking for additional time even after factoring that, guess maybe you didn't think I was suggesting that.
Vovan
547 posts
Joined March 2014
Vovan

Bakari wrote:

You'd be surprised to know that osu! automatically adjusts lead in. You don't have to touch it at at all.

As requested.

[General]
  1. Disable letterboxes as they're unnecessary. Just to make sure things run just the way they should. Fixed
  2. thumbs.db can be removed, these files are useless. Deleted
  3. 00:44:369 - try to make the BG appear at this point, so it syncs better with the vocals.
[D27's Beginner]
  1. Probably AR2 or 2,5 would look better wih the velocity/spacing values you're using here. Changed to AR 2.5
  2. 00:03:316 (3,1) - this might be unnoticeable but in terms of flow this feels weird. Consider avoid overlapping sliders like that. I changed the pattern. (That make a line flow now ^^)
  3. 01:09:632 - I would try to make that clickable to the player. Probably snap a circle instead of repeat here. Fixed
    Note: 01:14:369 - and a single circle instead of a slider should be here. Give it a try. Oh yes, it sounds better, thanks !
    Looks alright.
Just a bit more work and this will look pretty impressive.
Yep ^^
Overall it looks promising, I'd try to get a couple of skilled mods/BNs to polish it to the limit and push it forward. Have a star for your efforts, you're close to getting it bubbled.
Thanks !
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Okay :D
Poke me if you'll be having hard time getting a bubble/heart for this afterwards.

For hent & Prismetical !

Update !!!! This update will be a bit special because the SB is changed a bit. I deleted letterbox for ALL diffs and I removed thumbs.db (and I apply my mod xD) so the update will be on puush

http://puu.sh/n563H/b196832e64.osz
Prismetical
274 posts
Joined October 2015
Topic Starter
Prismetical

Bakari wrote:

As requested.

[Normal]
  1. Could use CS 3,5 to catch up with the modern difficulty standards for a Normal. Smaller circles always look better, right? yup
  2. Your combooing is irregular. Consider looking through it and optimizing it to make it more consistent? improved
  3. 00:23:448 (3,2) - 00:30:553 (3,5) - not a big fan of such stacks as they make the flow go in a rather unnatural for a Normal difficulty way. nvm cuz remap
  4. 00:42:790 (1) - the start of kiai and the most interesting part of the SB are both left out. Remove the spinner and map it properly? idk how to map that part properly for a Normal difficulty, might end up too hard
  5. 01:08:843 (4) - halve the slider, so it ends on the previous whte tick and add a circle to 01:09:632 - as it feels like the beat here has to be clickable.
    Note:Read this if you don't get what I am trying to say. done

    Looks safe to go. Could be a bit more polished, but it's okay. POLISHED UP!
[Hard]
  1. If you agree to set CS 3,5 on Normal, go for CS4 here. It looks really nice and makes the spread here work better. k
  2. 00:07:264 (3) - any reason in music to curve it this way? Try to use something simplier? nvm cuz remap
  3. 00:15:158 (7) - use the same rhythm you did before? A 2/3 slider and a circle just like 00:14:369 (5,6) - 00:13:580 (3,4) - will fit perfectly here! doesn't fit for me... meh :/
  4. 00:16:211 (2,3) - feels pretty random, if you ask me. Try an 1/1 slider or a 2/3 slider and a circle? i like the little tapping area here :)
  5. 00:25:816 (1,2,3) - shouldn't thewse sliders use the same rhythm like 00:14:369 (5,6) - 00:13:580 (3,4) did? This would make sense with the vocals and feel more consistent. I had it like this before, every single BN hated on it... /me confused :c
    Note: you can apply it the other way and use 1/1 sliders everywhere.
  6. 00:42:790 (1) - again, try to map the part instead of using spinner. Or simply keep a break. This spinner covers a big part of the PA-RA-DISE .pngs and makes the beginning of the kiai feel like a break/recovery time. done here
  7. 01:08:053 (1,1) - try to avoid overusing new combos just one is enough for the emphasis. but it's so beautiful ;_; done

    Just a bit more work and this will look pretty impressive. YES! :D
Overall it looks promising, I'd try to get a couple of skilled mods/BNs to polish it to the limit and push it forward. Have a star for your efforts, you're close to getting it bubbled. I will do my best! Thankyou so much! You resetted my fire for this! :) ♥♥♥

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Poke me if you'll be having hard time getting a bubble/heart for this afterwards. I will! thankyou thankyou thankyou thankyou! ♥
hent2222
395 posts
Joined April 2014
hent2222
work in progress woof

Bakari wrote:

You'd be surprised to know that osu! automatically adjusts lead in. You don't have to touch it at at all.

As requested.

[General]
  1. Disable letterboxes as they're unnecessary. Just to make sure things run just the way they should.
  2. thumbs.db can be removed, these files are useless.
  3. 00:44:369 - try to make the BG appear at this point, so it syncs better with the vocals.
[2222's Easy]
  1. 00:06:474 (1) - given that it's the only slider with the red anchor in the intro, it looks weird. Make the curve softer? There are more sliders with red point. No change. Slider is really nice
  2. 00:24:632 (6) - add a circle for the drum beat and vocals here? This would fit really well. For a large spacing between the objects is, if I good understand this point
    Note: 00:24:632 (6) - same.
  3. 00:42:001 (1) - having the spinner blocking the first for beatas of a rather short kiai feels wrong. Try to remove it and map this part? ok. I have done differently, but thanks for the suggestion
  4. 00:49:106 - as the drums go, the circle here would emphasize the downbeat really well. + It'd help players to feel the consistent rhythm. I add slider now and later

    Should be okay if you pay a bit more attention to the rhythm.


Poke me if you'll be having hard time getting a bubble/heart for this afterwards. ok dad
Thanks koshka

for prismetical lov
osu file format v14

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 42001
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
EpilepsyWarning: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 13815
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Lost In Paradise
TitleUnicode:Lost In Paradise
Artist:Rihanna
ArtistUnicode:Rihanna
Creator:Prismetical
Version:2222's Easy
Source:
Tags:dono027 d27 pop rated r hent2222 unapologetic
BeatmapID:827415
BeatmapSetID:371997

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:2.5
ApproachRate:3.5
SliderMultiplier:0.7
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
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Shiranai
2,186 posts
Joined August 2012
Shiranai
Hello as requested
Sugestion,

General
  1. Delete thumbs.db on sb folder and lyric folder http://puu.sh/n707d/755dcbc884.png
  2. Not sure if this a bug, but it seems your hitcircle.png kinda too big http://puu.sh/n70GR/4f8f73cb43.jpg because they exceed the hitcircleoverlay.png as you can see on that picture
Dono Beginner
  1. Your placement here 01:00:158 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - kinda boring because they are repeat to be placed on same spot
  2. 01:08:843 (4,5,1,2) - Kinda too cramped imo
Hent Easy
  1. 00:13:580 (1) - 00:19:895 (2) - and etc, there's some whistle sound on slider body, I'm not sure if that intentional or not but I think that kinda out of place. Because imo it'll be better if silent the slider body and if you want to put whistle on a specific slider head or tail you should double click its head or tail, otherwise the slider body will also have whistle sound
  2. 00:41:211 (4) - Delete finish, based on the music there is no cymbal sound or any finisher
  3. 00:44:369 (1) - You can try to add finish, there's cymbal sound and to indicate the kiai part
  4. 00:44:369 - The hitsound on kiai kinda random and I think the clap spam not represent the music very well. My sugestion try to put that clap on every fist white tick (downbeat) and the third tick, so the hitsound more reasonable to be hear imo

    Still need more work imo, try to improve your hitsound and some nc kinda too long and random, try to make nc on every one measurement/downbeat (white big tick)
Normal
  1. 00:05:685 (6) - Personal preference, maybe you can this placement https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4529235 ? so it can help the readability between 00:04:895 (4,5,6) -
  2. 00:45:553 (2,3,4,5) - The placement kinda tricky imo for a normal, because the (5)
  3. 01:00:948 - Add clap? to emphsized the drum sound there
  4. 01:13:974 (3) - Skipping big tcik here 01:14:369 - not good imo, try to have 1/1 slider + circle? so it'll improve the rhythm
Hard
  1. 00:12:264 (2,3,1) - Your placement kinda too cramped imo, maybe you should try another placement or this kind of rhythm http://puu.sh/n73xD/6cb7f04911.jpg ? so it'll less cramped to move
  2. 00:24:895 (2,3,4) - Same as above
  3. 00:04:106 (3,4) - and etc, there's some stacking under slider like that which is not very comfortable for readability on its 1/3 beat imo, my sugestion try to not stacking circle on slider tail so it'll make player easier to distinguish its beat
I love those sb lyric, but about the whole diffs still can be improved (hitsound, rhythm choice, and placement). For hitsound on kiai try to put that clap on every fist white tick (downbeat) and the third tick, so the hitsound more reasonable to be hear

I hope that help, good luck!
Vovan
547 posts
Joined March 2014
Vovan

Mako Sakata wrote:

Hello as requested
Sugestion,

Dono Beginner
  1. Your placement here 01:00:158 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - kinda boring because they are repeat to be placed on same spot Fixed
  2. 01:08:843 (4,5,1,2) - Kinda too cramped imo
Fixed
Update !
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Rihanna - Lost In Paradise (Official) (mp3cut.net).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 42001
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
EpilepsyWarning: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 13815
DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 3
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Lost In Paradise
TitleUnicode:Lost In Paradise
Artist:Rihanna
ArtistUnicode:Rihanna
Creator:Prismetical
Version:D27's Beginner
Source:
Tags:dono027 d27 pop rated r hent2222 unapologetic
BeatmapID:825140
BeatmapSetID:371997

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:2.5
SliderMultiplier:0.500000005960464
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"fantasy-dreamworld.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Combo3 : 233,170,39
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Prismetical
274 posts
Joined October 2015
Topic Starter
Prismetical

Mako Sakata wrote:

Hello as requested
Sugestion,

General
  1. Delete thumbs.db on sb folder and lyric folder k, thankyou
  2. Not sure if this a bug, but it seems your hitcircle.png kinda too big http://puu.sh/n70GR/4f8f73cb43.jpg because they exceed the hitcircleoverlay.png as you can see on that picture looks perfect on my side, lel...
Normal
  1. 00:05:685 (6) - Personal preference, maybe you can this placement https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4529235 ? so it can help the readability between 00:04:895 (4,5,6) - i love this!!! ♥
  2. 00:45:553 (2,3,4,5) - The placement kinda tricky imo for a normal, because the (5) moved (1) so you can see (5), i guess that's better (?)
  3. 01:00:948 - Add clap? to emphsized the drum sound there added
  4. 01:13:974 (3) - Skipping big tcik here 01:14:369 - not good imo, try to have 1/1 slider + circle? so it'll improve the rhythm changed
Hard
  1. 00:12:264 (2,3,1) - Your placement kinda too cramped imo, maybe you should try another placement or this kind of rhythm http://puu.sh/n73xD/6cb7f04911.jpg ? so it'll less cramped to move changed
  2. 00:24:895 (2,3,4) - Same as above ^
  3. 00:04:106 (3,4) - and etc, there's some stacking under slider like that which is not very comfortable for readability on its 1/3 beat imo, my sugestion try to not stacking circle on slider tail so it'll make player easier to distinguish its beat the whole thing is mapped like that, i see your issue, but i dont know how to do different properly, and i actually dont want to change it and like myself a lot :)
I love those sb lyric, but about the whole diffs still can be improved (hitsound, rhythm choice, and placement). For hitsound on kiai try to put that clap on every fist white tick (downbeat) and the third tick, so the hitsound more reasonable to be hear i'm very confident ^.^ this is a great mapset, it has quality, good music, beautiful design, and this is just a piece of amazing work from the osu! community ♥

I hope that help, good luck! thankyou ♥ see ya!
hent2222
395 posts
Joined April 2014
hent2222
I hate fucking hitsounds. Hitsounds are shitty!

Mako Sakata wrote:

Hello as requested
Sugestion,

General
  1. Delete thumbs.db on sb folder and lyric folder http://puu.sh/n707d/755dcbc884.png
  2. Not sure if this a bug, but it seems your hitcircle.png kinda too big http://puu.sh/n70GR/4f8f73cb43.jpg because they exceed the hitcircleoverlay.png as you can see on that picture
Hent Easy
  1. 00:13:580 (1) - 00:19:895 (2) - and etc, there's some whistle sound on slider body, I'm not sure if that intentional or not but I think that kinda out of place. Because imo it'll be better if silent the slider body and if you want to put whistle on a specific slider head or tail you should double click its head or tail, otherwise the slider body will also have whistle sound I don't understand really good, but I delete whistles
  2. 00:41:211 (4) - Delete finish, based on the music there is no cymbal sound or any finisher ok
  3. 00:44:369 (1) - You can try to add finish, there's cymbal sound and to indicate the kiai part Good idea
  4. 00:44:369 - The hitsound on kiai kinda random and I think the clap spam not represent the music very well. My sugestion try to put that clap on every fist white tick (downbeat) and the third tick, so the hitsound more reasonable to be hear imo I tried set good hitsounds for me

    Still need more work imo, try to improve your hitsound and some nc kinda too long and random, try to make nc on every one measurement/downbeat (white big tick) Change NCs
I love those sb lyric, but about the whole diffs still can be improved (hitsound, rhythm choice, and placement). For hitsound on kiai try to put that clap on every fist white tick (downbeat) and the third tick, so the hitsound more reasonable to be hear

I hope that help, good luck!
Thanks :3

One diff and too much work...
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Rihanna - Lost In Paradise (Official) (mp3cut.net).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 42001
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
EpilepsyWarning: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 13815
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Lost In Paradise
TitleUnicode:Lost In Paradise
Artist:Rihanna
ArtistUnicode:Rihanna
Creator:Prismetical
Version:2222's Easy
Source:
Tags:dono027 d27 pop rated r hent2222 unapologetic
BeatmapID:827415
BeatmapSetID:371997

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:2.5
ApproachRate:3.5
SliderMultiplier:0.7
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"fantasy-dreamworld.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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[Colours]
Combo1 : 243,58,86
Combo2 : 128,128,192
Combo3 : 233,170,39
SliderBorder : 250,215,90

[HitObjects]
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riffy
osu! Alumni
8,060 posts
Joined December 2010
riffy
Yo.

[General]
  1. Metadata seems to be correct according to all the links in the website. The website itself has stylyzed metadata and can not be used to justify capitallization.
  2. Seems like your GDer has changed their username. they might want to update the difficulty with the new name.
[D27's Beginner]
  1. 01:08:843 (4) - this could benefit from being a circle. So, beginners won't be stressed by the ocerlap you have currently.
[2222's Easy]
  1. 00:12:790 - a single circle here would be enough. The slider does not give enough emphasis to the beat I linked and leaves the main bass unclickable to the player.
  2. 00:19:895 (2) - this would definitely work better as an 1/1 slider and a circle. So, vocals are stressed properly and all the impotrant parts are clickable.
    Note: 00:19:895 (2) - and here, instead of the repeat, you really should place a circle. the synth sound is begging for a clickable beat. Confused? Read more.
  3. 00:42:001 (1) - after the spinner there should be more recovery time. Twice as much from what you have now. Personally, I would just map the spinner.
[Normal]
  1. 00:17:527 (5,2) - this could be a bit too much in terms of readability. Tr to test it with low-skilled players and see if it's necessary to unstack.
  2. 00:56:211 (4) - the points of the slider are far outside its body. It may cause glictches and the blanket here (and blankets in general) could use some improvements. So, yeah, let's fix the points and make the thing look neater!
[Hard]
  1. 00:12:790 (1,3) - minor - a complaint about this overlap looking untidy.
  2. 00:41:211 (1) - the word "right" ends exactly in the middle of the slider. For that reason it feels somewhat rndom. Make it shorter and add a circle at 00:42:001?
  3. 00:46:343 - for the sake of rhythm and vocals, and also to make things easier to follow you should add a circle here. 5/3 gap here feels way to unnatural.
    Note: 00:47:527 (3) - same here. If you are unsure about the circle, you can add an 1/1 slider. Please, not that there are a fe wmore similar patterns.
Let's address these things and see if I can bubble it or if it still needs mods.
Vovan
547 posts
Joined March 2014
Vovan

Bakari wrote:

Yo.

[General]
  1. Seems like your GDer has changed their username. they might want to update the difficulty with the new name. Yep, He will probably change the diff to Lexis's Beginner
[D27's Beginner]
  1. 01:08:843 (4) - this could benefit from being a circle. So, beginners won't be stressed by the ocerlap you have currently.
    Deleted the circle after the slider and added a reverse.
Let's address these things and see if I can bubble it or if it still needs mods.
Update.
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Rihanna - Lost In Paradise (Official) (mp3cut.net).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 42001
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
EpilepsyWarning: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 13815
DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 3
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Lost In Paradise
TitleUnicode:Lost In Paradise
Artist:Rihanna
ArtistUnicode:Rihanna
Creator:Prismetical
Version:D27's Beginner
Source:
Tags:dono027 d27 pop rated r hent2222 unapologetic
BeatmapID:825140
BeatmapSetID:371997

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:2.5
SliderMultiplier:0.500000005960464
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"fantasy-dreamworld.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
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69632,-100,4,2,1,45,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 243,58,86
Combo2 : 128,128,192
Combo3 : 233,170,39
SliderBorder : 250,215,90

[HitObjects]
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Prismetical
274 posts
Joined October 2015
Topic Starter
Prismetical

Bakari wrote:

Yo.

[General]
  1. Metadata seems to be correct according to all the links in the website. The website itself has stylyzed metadata and can not be used to justify capitallization. so, is all right? xD
  2. Seems like your GDer has changed their username. they might want to update the difficulty with the new name. he didn't say anything yet and he applied this mod and didn't changed the name, I changed it now
[Normal]
  1. 00:17:527 (5,2) - this could be a bit too much in terms of readability. Tr to test it with low-skilled players and see if it's necessary to unstack. flipped it
  2. 00:56:211 (4) - the points of the slider are far outside its body. It may cause glictches and the blanket here (and blankets in general) could use some improvements. So, yeah, let's fix the points and make the thing look neater!fixed that part
[Hard]
  1. 00:12:790 (1,3) - minor - a complaint about this overlap looking untidy. i don't know how to fix it honestly, i'll keep it
  2. 00:41:211 (1) - the word "right" ends exactly in the middle of the slider. For that reason it feels somewhat rndom. Make it shorter and add a circle at 00:42:001? only following the background music at this part
  3. 00:46:343 - for the sake of rhythm and vocals, and also to make things easier to follow you should add a circle here. 5/3 gap here feels way to unnatural. i added a circle, had problems with its placing, need help with that then [/color]
    Note: 00:47:527 (3) - same here. If you are unsure about the circle, you can add an 1/1 slider. Please, not that there are a fe wmore similar patterns.
Let's address these things and see if I can bubble it or if it still needs mods.
riffy
osu! Alumni
8,060 posts
Joined December 2010
riffy
Fallback messes up the skin, we decided to blame it on a bug and move on.

This is a pretty nice set for a beginner mapper, let's give it a try.

Bubbled!
Last edited by riffy , edited 1 time in total.
hent2222
395 posts
Joined April 2014
hent2222

Bakari wrote:

Yo.

[General]
  1. Metadata seems to be correct according to all the links in the website. The website itself has stylyzed metadata and can not be used to justify capitallization.
  2. Seems like your GDer has changed their username. they might want to update the difficulty with the new name.
[2222's Easy]
  1. 00:12:790 - a single circle here would be enough. The slider does not give enough emphasis to the beat I linked and leaves the main bass unclickable to the player. ok
  2. 00:19:895 (2) - this would definitely work better as an 1/1 slider and a circle. So, vocals are stressed properly and all the impotrant parts are clickable. ok
    Note: 00:19:895 (2) - and here, instead of the repeat, you really should place a circle. the synth sound is begging for a clickable beat. Confused? Read more. Ookay
  3. 00:42:001 (1) - after the spinner there should be more recovery time. Twice as much from what you have now. Personally, I would just map the spinner. Delete circle, if I good understand
Let's address these things and see if I can bubble it or if it still needs mods.
Thanks for mod c:

salsa
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Rihanna - Lost In Paradise (Official) (mp3cut.net).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 42001
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
EpilepsyWarning: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 13815
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4
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TitleUnicode:Lost In Paradise
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Version:2222's Easy
Source:
Tags:dono027 d27 pop rated r hent2222 unapologetic
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Shmiklak
Elite Storyboarder
3,218 posts
Joined January 2015
Shmiklak
Cool. Gratz with bubble. Hope for see it in qualified soon. And I wish be friends again. I'm really sorry ;w;
Vovan
547 posts
Joined March 2014
Vovan

Shmiklak wrote:

Cool. Gratz with bubble. Hope for see it in qualified soon. And I wish be friends again. I'm really sorry ;w;
I hope to see the map qualified too :3
Shiranai
2,186 posts
Joined August 2012
Shiranai
Hello a recheck, sorry been busy with my thesis ;(
Sugestion,

Dono Beginner
  1. 00:13:580 (2,3) - Umm the cursor actually move rather to sharp on that one, maybe you should reconsider on do ctrl+h this one 00:15:158 (3) - and a bit move to x:224 y:68? and also a bit rearrange this slider 00:16:737 (4) - to x:232 y:236? so the overall flow will be looks like this http://puu.sh/pijxT/980a27e689.jpg more or less
  2. 01:15:158 (5) - Try to move that like this http://puu.sh/pijCQ/ead01217d6.jpg , to prevent odd movement on 01:12:790 (3,4,5) -
Hent Easy
  1. 00:12:790 (1) - Doesn't really need to nc there imo, if you try to make your nc based on vocal
  2. 00:12:790 (1,1) - 00:24:632 (3,1) - and 00:55:422 (3,4) - Spacing error, they are supposed to be 1.2x right? or at least
  3. 00:52:658 (3) - I think you can bent the slider's tail node a little more, so the flow on 00:51:474 (2,3,1) - less weird, example: http://puu.sh/piThX/58e7aa7243.jpg
  4. 01:13:974 (2) - For consistency with 01:09:632 (1,2) - and 01:11:211 (1,2) - , I gues that one better be replaced with a circle + 1/1 slider, example: http://puu.sh/piTwF/a2bf3eaf00.jpg
  5. Umm your hitsound on kiai part really mess up, so I strongly recommend that you should:
    1. Delete clap on: 00:45:553 - , 00:47:527 - , 00:50:685 - , 00:51:080 - , 00:53:843 - , 00:54:237 - , 00:57:001 - , 00:57:001 - , 00:59:764 - , 01:00:158 - , 01:03:316 - , and 01:06:474 -
    2. Add clap on: 00:46:737 - , 00:49:895 - , 00:51:474 - , 00:53:053 - , 00:54:632 - , 00:56:211 - , 00:57:790 - , 01:00:948 - , 01:04:106 - , and 01:07:367 -
    3. 01:12:001 - Should be use clap instead finish
Normal
  1. 00:17:527 - and 00:18:711 - The clap sound just out of place imo, not sure why put clap there
  2. 00:24:632 (1,2) - Make your hitsound same as 00:12:001 (1,2,3) - ? Literally they share same drum sound on music
  3. 00:49:501 - Delete clap there, doesn't really need clap emphasize imo
  4. 00:46:343 (4) - Move to x:268 y:84 and 00:46:737 (5) - readjust your first node to x:304 y:178. At least you can improve your blanket there http://puu.sh/piUKy/c719e48e18.jpg
  5. 01:15:158 (1,2) - They sound rather calmer and there's no drum sound based on music. So delete clap would be sounds more make sense there
Hard
  1. 00:09:632 - Delete the finish, I think cymbal sound not supported on that one
  2. 00:49:895 (3) - Missing clap for sure
  3. 01:15:158 (1,2) - Same as Normal, better delete the clap
Umm imo there's still room to improve this mapset somehow and I don't think this one ready yet to be push forward
Well just an honest opinion, if you have any trouble on my mod I'll help you when in game :)
Vovan
547 posts
Joined March 2014
Vovan

Mako Sakata wrote:

Hello a recheck, sorry been busy with my thesis ;(
Sugestion,

Update
osu file format v14

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Tags:dono027 d27 pop rated r hent2222 unapologetic
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Dono Lexis please. :p Beginner
  1. 00:13:580 (2,3) - Umm the cursor actually move rather to sharp on that one, maybe you should reconsider on do ctrl+h this one 00:15:158 (3) - and a bit move to x:224 y:68? and also a bit rearrange this slider 00:16:737 (4) - to x:232 y:236? so the overall flow will be looks like this http://puu.sh/pijxT/980a27e689.jpg more or less It's cool.I like this. I apply.

  2. 01:15:158 (5) - Try to move that like this http://puu.sh/pijCQ/ead01217d6.jpg , to prevent odd movement on 01:12:790 (3,4,5) -
Umm... I don't see an odd movement... And it will make a right angled pattern and I hate that xD (So I don't apply)

Umm imo there's still room to improve this mapset somehow and I don't think this one ready yet to be push forward
Well just an honest opinion, if you have any trouble on my mod I'll help you when in game :) Thanks :3
Yanterko
54 posts
Joined June 2015
Yanterko
There is a conflict with 2222's Easy with the tags. Just paste this new code into the 2222's Easy .osu file.
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ZekeyHache
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ZekeyHache
Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa where's Prismetical? ;w;
Prismetical
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Prismetical

ezek wrote:

Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa where's Prismetical? ;w;
Here! o/ I'm HEEEERE!!

Mako Sakata wrote:

Normal
  1. 00:17:527 - and 00:18:711 - The clap sound just out of place imo, not sure why put clap there
  2. 00:24:632 (1,2) - Make your hitsound same as 00:12:001 (1,2,3) - ? Literally they share same drum sound on music
  3. 00:49:501 - Delete clap there, doesn't really need clap emphasize imo
  4. 00:46:343 (4) - Move to x:268 y:84 and 00:46:737 (5) - readjust your first node to x:304 y:178. At least you can improve your blanket there http://puu.sh/piUKy/c719e48e18.jpg
  5. 01:15:158 (1,2) - They sound rather calmer and there's no drum sound based on music. So delete clap would be sounds more make sense there
Hard
  1. 00:09:632 - Delete the finish, I think cymbal sound not supported on that one
  2. 00:49:895 (3) - Missing clap for sure
  3. 01:15:158 (1,2) - Same as Normal, better delete the clap
All applied!
hent2222
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Joined April 2014
hent2222

Mako Sakata wrote:

Hello a recheck, sorry been busy with my thesis ;(
Sugestion,

Hent Easy
  1. 00:12:790 (1) - Doesn't really need to nc there imo, if you try to make your nc based on vocal change c:
  2. 00:12:790 (1,1) - 00:24:632 (3,1) - and 00:55:422 (3,4) - Spacing error, they are supposed to be 1.2x right? or at least ok!
  3. 00:52:658 (3) - I think you can bent the slider's tail node a little more, so the flow on 00:51:474 (2,3,1) - less weird, example: http://puu.sh/piThX/58e7aa7243.jpg ok
  4. 01:13:974 (2) - For consistency with 01:09:632 (1,2) - and 01:11:211 (1,2) - , I gues that one better be replaced with a circle + 1/1 slider, example: http://puu.sh/piTwF/a2bf3eaf00.jpg now is better for me
  5. Umm your hitsound on kiai part really mess up, so I strongly recommend that you should:
    1. Delete clap on: 00:45:553 - , 00:47:527 - , 00:50:685 - , 00:51:080 - , 00:53:843 - , 00:54:237 - , 00:57:001 - , 00:57:001 - , 00:59:764 - , 01:00:158 - , 01:03:316 - , and 01:06:474 -
    2. Add clap on: 00:46:737 - , 00:49:895 - , 00:51:474 - , 00:53:053 - , 00:54:632 - , 00:56:211 - , 00:57:790 - , 01:00:948 - , 01:04:106 - , and 01:07:367 -
    3. 01:12:001 - Should be use clap instead finish Big thanks. I don't like set hitsounds. It's too hard for me
Umm imo there's still room to improve this mapset somehow and I don't think this one ready yet to be push forward
Well just an honest opinion, if you have any trouble on my mod I'll help you when in game :)
Thanks.

+I change tags (I think)

meow
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after 2 months I before check BN request. I'm noob
Electoz
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Electoz
Holy hell and I thought he was gone for real
Vovan
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Vovan

Electoz wrote:

Holy hell and I thought he was gone for real
Same.

I waited him 2 months ;w;
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