Rihanna - Lost In Paradise · forum

Vovan

Joined March 2014

Vovan 2015-12-31T16:39:51+00:00

-Faded- wrote:

Hi, m4m from Dono's queue!

[Beginner]
I'd add a spinner somewhere. I know this is beginner, and that beginners might not be able to handle spinners, but how will they learn? Also, spinners are important to add variety to the scoreboards when the map gets ranked. Imagine if #1 simply became a race to see who can full mod FC your diff first.

Fixed. THANKS ! c:

00:29:369 (1,2) - I'm not too fond of this pattern. It doesn't really represent anything and it's unpleasing to the eye. If you curved them more, you'd have a solid oval shape, but as it currently stands, I'm not liking the look of it.
I just curved a bit more the sliders
00:35:685 (3) - Why did you put a whistle on the slider trail as well? It sounds so different to the usual now, and it is quite inconsistent. I would change this by making sure there's only a whistle on the end and start of the slider.
Fixed.
00:57:001 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - These patterns feel a bit cramped. It feels as if everything is going on in the bottom left quadrant. This is bad when sliders like (4) nearly end up going off the screen. You have all this space, use it.

Nope, the points don't go out of the grid, and that's just a blanket. I don't know what is the problem. I keep this.

Update.

osu file format v14

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[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Lost In Paradise
TitleUnicode:Lost In Paradise
Artist:Rihanna
ArtistUnicode:Rihanna
Creator:Prismetical
Version:D27's Beginner
Source:
Tags:dono027 d27 pop rated r hent2222 unapologetic
BeatmapID:825140
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[Difficulty]
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byfar

1,186 posts

Joined July 2014

byfar 2015-12-31T20:59:07+00:00

Beginner

looks fine

Easy

00:02:527 (3) - do not use a slider tail for emphasizing downbeat. make this part a slider 00:03:316 -
00:04:895 (5) - move this to 00:04:501 -
00:08:843 (3) - similar
00:11:211 (5) - similar
im not going to go through all of the parts you did this, but please change it so that the downbeat is clickable.

Normal

i'd say remake your sliders so that they blanket the circles even with DS
00:10:422 (3) - the slider tail should be a circle. you should use the same rhythm you used here 00:03:316 (1,2,3) -
00:11:606 - i highly suggest you fill this with a 1/1 slider 00:11:211 (4) - but I understand that you want to put emphasis on the three circles
00:13:185 -
00:40:422 (2) - look at my mod for the hard diff first for a method to fix this

Hard

00:26:606 (2,3) - make the visual distance the same spacing as 00:25:816 (1,2) - ? . compare http://puu.sh/mf7tp/586a05edd2.jpg to http://puu.sh/mf7ue/7f8203922c.jpg it might not seem like a big difference, but there really is (especially since this is a light hard diff with low ar)
00:28:974 (1) - make it more perfect like this? http://puu.sh/mf7nm/b76a7116c3.jpg
code for it if you want it
```
480,128,28974,22,0,B|420:160|468:224|384:244,1,140
```
do it the same way for all your other squigly sliders please, it looks better and more neater this way
00:50:290 (5) - uh
00:54:632 (2) - ^
a tip for sliders, less nodes = better

gl

Prismetical

274 posts

Joined October 2015

Topic Starter

Prismetical 2015-12-31T21:28:19+00:00

byfar wrote:
Normal
i'd say remake your sliders so that they blanket the circles even with DS aren't they fine?
00:10:422 (3) - the slider tail should be a circle. you should use the same rhythm you used here 00:03:316 (1,2,3) - I like it
00:11:606 - i highly suggest you fill this with a 1/1 slider 00:11:211 (4) - but I understand that you want to put emphasis on the three circles no, I like your idea, I want to change the 3 circles anyway so this is the perfect chance! thankyou ^^
00:13:185 - here I want to put full focus on voice
00:40:422 (2) - look at my mod for the hard diff first for a method to fix this eh.. wut? xD
Hard
00:26:606 (2,3) - make the visual distance the same spacing as 00:25:816 (1,2) - ? . compare http://puu.sh/mf7tp/586a05edd2.jpg to http://puu.sh/mf7ue/7f8203922c.jpg it might not seem like a big difference, but there really is (especially since this is a light hard diff with low ar) they had a wrong spacing anyway, spaced/placed them completely new
00:28:974 (1) - make it more perfect like this? http://puu.sh/mf7nm/b76a7116c3.jpg seems good to me
code for it if you want it
480,128,28974,22,0,B|420:160|468:224|384:244,1,140
do it the same way for all your other squigly sliders please, it looks better and more neater this way
00:50:290 (5) - uh sooooorry, changed
00:54:632 (2) - ^ I'm creative!
a tip for sliders, less nodes = better
gl

Thankyou!

Drasamii

20 posts

Joined March 2015

Drasamii 2015-12-31T22:07:20+00:00

From my queue:

These maps seem pretty clean to me. I didn't really find much so it's a short mod but here you are:

SPOILER

2222's Easy:

00:48:711 (4) - make this a two-beat slider?

Normal:

00:45:158- add another circle to this combo here?

01:07:264 (3) - Make this the NC point instead of 01:07:658 (1)?

- Castaway -

40 posts

Joined April 2014

- Castaway - 2015-12-31T22:52:59+00:00

Hey! M4M From my queue

SPOILER

General

Turn off grid snap please...i'll have examples of why down below!
I'm sad how the lyrics have a great and interesting rhythm but all the maps go by the beat in the background... D: It feels like i'm playing the drums.....
Snap Preview Points

D27's Easy

As said above, the grid snap can sometimes be annoying especially on easy diffs. It's very slight, but here are some examples: 00:05:685 (5,1) - these are almost touching 00:34:895 (2) - move circle to x:245 y:218
00:38:843 - might wanna snap the preview point :/
It would also be nice if your sliders were more consistent. These 2 00:06:474 (1,3) - could be the same as these 00:00:159 (1,3) - . Its exactly the same sound so...
00:15:158 (2,1) - ^
01:00:158 (3,4) - don't like this placement. a sharp turn for beginner
Clean the map up abit and it'll be great

2222's Easy

00:21:080 (3) - turn so it leads on to (4)
00:33:711 (2) - less curve on this please
00:40:422 (3,4) - fix blanket (slightly)
Snap Preview Point as well
00:49:895 (5,1,2,3) - this rhythm should be the same as this 00:45:948 (1,2,3,4) -. Your a beat ahead but because the sliders are the same shape its confusing D:
00:57:790 (5,1) - fix the flow from (5) to (1) please
01:00:948 (3,1) - same shape better
01:06:869 (5) - Make horizontal. Like this: http://puu.sh/mfccb/335b7af349.JPG
01:09:632 (1,5) - same shape as well please
01:12:790 (5,6,1) - http://puu.sh/mfch1/17a6f7d68d.JPG http://puu.sh/mfcj6/58b9947873.JPG. (5) will blanket (1)

Normal

00:00:948 (2,3,4) - (3) and (4) blanket...but it looks ugly next to slider (2)
00:03:316 (1,2) - fix blanket please ._.
00:07:264 (3) - why is this long slider here...keep it consistent with the first set of 'oooo's' 00:00:159 (1,2,3) -
00:19:501 (2) - ^
00:19:501 (2,1) - dis blanket :/
00:21:080 (2,3,4) - this better: http://puu.sh/mfcyv/7cdfdce16b.JPG
00:32:527 (1,3) - copy (1) and rotate for slider (3) imo
00:36:474 (4,5) - this part is exactly the same as 00:34:895 (1,2,3) - echoing 'with this heart'
00:44:764 - You can use red ticks in normal... the chorus starts somewhere here on the red tick...unless your going by the beat D:
00:51:474 (3,1) - its a bit of symmetry which makes it looks ugly imo
01:08:448 (3,4) - blanket PWEZ
00:57:395 (2) - This isn't centred between 00:56:211 (3,3) - these...it's off
01:03:316 (3) - slider
01:04:895 (3) - ^
01:06:474 (2) - ^
01:13:974 (3) - 1/4 slider please and 01:14:764 - circle here

Hard

throughout the whole song...the map goes by the beat...and the beat usually changes only slightly throughout a song...so your basically repeating the beat for the WHOLE 1:15 min...i hope you will change this
00:14:369 (5,7) - blanket off
00:38:843 (2,3,4,5) - See...this part could be much more interesting
Fix Preview Point as well
Pretty much fine diff

GL with ur map

Vovan

547 posts

Joined March 2014

Vovan 2016-01-01T00:10:47+00:00

- Castaway - wrote:
Hey! M4M From my queue

General
Turn off grid snap please...i'll have examples of why down below! Using this is highly recommended.
I'm sad how the lyrics have a great and interesting rhythm but all the maps go by the beat in the background... D: It feels like i'm playing the drums..... That's because all the voice sound go to the beat.
Snap Preview Points
I'll speak about this tomorrow with Prismetical ^^

D27's Easy
As said above, the grid snap can sometimes be annoying especially on easy diffs. It's very slight, but here are some examples: 00:05:685 (5,1) - these are almost touching 00:34:895 (2) - move circle to x:245 y:218 That's because I use DS ._.
00:38:843 - might wanna snap the preview point :/ Ill do this
It would also be nice if your sliders were more consistent. These 2 00:06:474 (1,3) - could be the same as these 00:00:159 (1,3) - . Its exactly the same sound so... It's the same sound so I've use the same hitsounds & the same kind of slider.
00:15:158 (2,1) - ^ I don't know here is the problem.
01:00:158 (3,4) - don't like this placement. a sharp turn for beginner 00:59:369 (2,3,4) - That make a basic pattern : triangle. So no changes;
Clean the map up abit and it'll be great
... Uh... For me no changes, just snap the point. I will speak about this with Prismetical tomorrow.

geodoomcraft

7 posts

Joined March 2015

geodoomcraft 2016-01-01T02:36:31+00:00

Hello, doing M4M from Dono027's queue

[D27's Begineer]

00:24:632 (5,1) - I feel a reverse slider might work here to get 00:25:027 - in with the beat.
00:32:527 (1) - I feel the extra red curve on this is not needed.
00:42:001 - Maybe add a circle here to keep consistency with 00:38:053 (4) -, And it also adds a bit on the vocal because that's where the vocalist says "To".
00:44:369 (1,2) - i feel like a slider could be used here instead of two circles to add to the vocal.
01:09:632 - I feel like the drum set of hit sounds could be used here.
01:13:974 - This one spot feels like its missing a note or something like that, maybe add a circle here.

[2222's Easy]

00:03:711 - I feel like u should remove (4) at 00:04:106 (4) - and make a slider from 00:03:711 - to 00:04:106 - and add one circle to 00:04:501 -. That way it sounds a bit more in flow with the rhythm.
00:10:027 - Same thing here but only up to 00:10:816 -
00:49:106 - I feel a slider might work very well with the rhythm here.
00:58:974 - I think a circle should be added here to keep consistency with 00:55:422 (1,2,3,4,5) -
01:04:106 (3) - Maybe curve this more to add to the vocal.
01:15:158 (1) - Feel like there could be a hit sound here that would help emphasize the last part of the song.

[Normal]

00:12:790 (3) - imo the (3) here can be changed to a slider so it fits with the "mhh..".
00:45:158 - I think a circle should go here. It will work better with the rhythm.
00:53:843 (1) - I feel a slider will do better here then a circle, will work better with rhythm.

[Hard]

00:41:211 (1) - imo this is kind of not needed, the vocal from 00:41:211 - ends at 00:41:606 -, maybe make a slider up to there then put a circle at 00:42:001 -
00:50:158 (4) - This is probably just me but it sounds like its not needed here.
00:50:685 (6) - ^ same thing. I Think you should extend 00:50:290 (5) - to (6) and get rid of the circle on (6)

If there are any questions about my mod pls ask

Good luck with the map!

Prismetical

274 posts

Joined October 2015

Topic Starter

Prismetical 2016-01-01T14:12:46+00:00

bryjow123 wrote:
From my queue:

These maps seem pretty clean to me. I take that as a compliment I didn't really find much so it's a short mod but here you are:

Normal:

00:45:158- add another circle to this combo here? nope, because of spacing between spinner and next element

01:07:264 (3) - Make this the NC point instead of 01:07:658 (1)? I prefer it how it is, because we are following the downbeats and (3) is not a part of that

Thankyou!

- Castaway - wrote:
Dono27 already answered the General things correctly

Normal
00:00:948 (2,3,4) - (3) and (4) blanket...but it looks ugly next to slider (2) hard to blanket, I tried
00:03:316 (1,2) - fix blanket please ._. tried
00:07:264 (3) - why is this long slider here...keep it consistent with the first set of 'oooo's' 00:00:159 (1,2,3) - I like it
00:19:501 (2) - ^ ^
00:19:501 (2,1) - dis blanket :/ I really don't see a problem there xD
00:21:080 (2,3,4) - this better: http://puu.sh/mfcyv/7cdfdce16b.JPG copied (2) and rotated it, might look better now
00:32:527 (1,3) - copy (1) and rotate for slider (3) imo they are copied
00:36:474 (4,5) - this part is exactly the same as 00:34:895 (1,2,3) - echoing 'with this heart' you're right, I miss the concern here, it is fine
00:44:764 - You can use red ticks in normal... the chorus starts somewhere here on the red tick...unless your going by the beat D: everybody says that, we need a certain break after a spinner
00:51:474 (3,1) - its a bit of symmetry which makes it looks ugly imo yeah, but I have to stack the sliderending otherwise I would have a overlay
01:08:448 (3,4) - blanket PWEZ looks good to me :3
00:57:395 (2) - This isn't centred between 00:56:211 (3,3) - these...it's off correct, looked at y-coordinate, they are on same height now! thankyou ^^
01:03:316 (3) - slider disagree
01:04:895 (3) - ^ ^
01:06:474 (2) - ^ ^
01:13:974 (3) - 1/4 slider please and 01:14:764 - circle here nah
Hard
throughout the whole song...the map goes by the beat...and the beat usually changes only slightly throughout a song...so your basically repeating the beat for the WHOLE 1:15 min...i hope you will change this I think this difficulty has a lot of variety, fun and complexity, so that it is still entertaining by only following the drums, well, everybody has his own taste
00:14:369 (5,7) - blanket off I don't find a problem... it seriously wonders me that your are the only one after tons of mods that encounters that
00:38:843 (2,3,4,5) - See...this part could be much more interesting can't change much :/
Fix Preview Point as well
Pretty much fine diff thankyou ^^
GL with ur map thankyou! good luck with yours too!

geodoomcraft wrote:
Hello, doing M4M from Dono027's queue good boy, Dono

[Normal]
00:12:790 (3) - imo the (3) here can be changed to a slider so it fits with the "mhh..". I want to point the voice out, so I start with the voice
00:45:158 - I think a circle should go here. It will work better with the rhythm. I knooow! But I need to have a certain break after a spinner ._. kills be aswell cuz it would be so good
00:53:843 (1) - I feel a slider will do better here then a circle, will work better with rhythm. not sure, rather going with the drums
[Hard]
00:41:211 (1) - imo this is kind of not needed, the vocal from 00:41:211 - ends at 00:41:606 -, maybe make a slider up to there then put a circle at 00:42:001 - not following voice here
00:50:158 (4) - This is probably just me but it sounds like its not needed here. the cool thing here is that we are following two things in once (that weird alarm and the drums) and it works totally for me, one of the coolest parts in that difficulty for me :3
00:50:685 (6) - ^ same thing. I Think you should extend 00:50:290 (5) - to (6) and get rid of the circle on (6) nah
If there are any questions about my mod pls ask I'm fine!
Good luck with the map! thankyouu! :3

Now that took a bit, thanks to you all! :3

Vovan

547 posts

Joined March 2014

Vovan 2016-01-01T15:08:15+00:00

geodoomcraft wrote:
Hello, doing M4M from Dono027's queue

[D27's Begineer]
00:24:632 (5,1) - I feel a reverse slider might work here to get 00:25:027 - in with the beat. Fixed.
00:32:527 (1) - I feel the extra red curve on this is not needed. I prefer with this.
00:42:001 - Maybe add a circle here to keep consistency with 00:38:053 (4) -, And it also adds a bit on the vocal because that's where the vocalist says "To". This is a beginner diff. We are after a spinner, so I give time to the player after this.
00:44:369 (1,2) - i feel like a slider could be used here instead of two circles to add to the vocal. For diversity, i added 2 circles, a map with only sliders will be...
01:09:632 - I feel like the drum set of hit sounds could be used here. The actual hitsounds sound good, and drum hitsound are really heavy.
01:13:974 - This one spot feels like its missing a note or something like that, maybe add a circle here.
I know, but I want to keep this. I don't want to make the end too hard I prefer just keep this.

If there are any questions about my mod pls ask
Good luck with the map!

Update

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Rihanna - Lost In Paradise (Official) (mp3cut.net).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 38815
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
EpilepsyWarning: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 13815
DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 2
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TitleUnicode:Lost In Paradise
Artist:Rihanna
ArtistUnicode:Rihanna
Creator:Prismetical
Version:D27's Beginner
Source:
Tags:dono027 d27 pop rated r hent2222 unapologetic
BeatmapID:825140
BeatmapSetID:371997

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CircleSize:3
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SliderTickRate:1

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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Aihuro

329 posts

Joined January 2015

Aihuro 2016-01-05T17:42:53+00:00

Hey! M4M request through PM.
Well, here goes nothing.

D27's Beginner:

00:02:527 (3,1) - I don't really like this overlap here, maybe try Ctrl+H And place him here: X: 132 Y: 160. I think it will also improve the flow. (It's also a quick fix, just have to fix the DS)
00:15:158 (2,4) - Same here, please stack (4) on (2)'s tail to prevent from overlapping with each other.
00:26:211 (6,1) - ^ Stack them properly please.
00:32:527 (1,3) - These two sliders are touching each other's head, I highly suggest you do something like this instead: http://puu.sh/mkBof/d46bbc075a.jpg
00:45:158 (2,4) - Same as I mentioned above, stack.
01:00:948 (4) - I think Ctrl+H Will work better since it will prevent overlapping with 00:57:001 (1) - .
01:14:369 (4,5) - I didn't saw you using this kind of pattern through out the whole mapset, maybe remove (4) and add a note here: 01:14:369 - .
Overall, nice diff! Just the stacking that kept bugging me.

2222's Easy:

00:07:658 (2) - Mm. . I think something like this will improve the flow and it also plays nicely: http://puu.sh/mkBNL/91a296bb0a.jpg Just keep turning the slider clockwise until it looks like the picture above.
00:21:080 (3,4) - I suggest you switch these two notes maybe?
00:50:685 (1,2,3) - Why don't you add some hitsounds here? It feels pretty incomplete imo. Here: 00:51:474 (2) - you can put a clap.
00:54:632 (5,1,2,3,4,5) - Same here, please add some hitsounds, feels kinda empty.
Okay, this diff looks also pretty good, you just have to complete the hitsounds, lol.

Normal:
Looks fine~

Okay, I will end my mod here.
Good Luck with this mapset of yours~

Kuki

722 posts

Joined October 2013

Kuki 2016-01-06T10:28:27+00:00

osu! needs more generic pop music

hent2222

395 posts

Joined April 2014

hent2222 2016-01-06T16:53:20+00:00

-Faded-

I really don't like how you've hitsounded this difficulty. Why have the first part of the song use whistles and the second part use claps? Both parts are very similar to each other and you shouldn't segregate the hitsounds like this, use them together. Otherwise it will startle and confuse players. (two claps in a short succession also sound bad when used consecutively in a short period of time.)
00:00:159 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Is it just me or does this whole area have no hitsounds? I would add some, because without hitsounds the patterns would sound bland and monotonous. monotonous? no. This part isn't energetic.
00:04:895 (5,1) - Despite them being in different combos, I still think these sliders should be symmetrical; it would look a lot nicer that way. Ok :3
01:15:158 (1) - Unrankable, Hitsounds from notes and sliders must be audible. Why is the hitsound here so quiet? I know you want to reflect on how most of the instruments stop here, but it's ineffective and it would be better just to get rid of the note. So either make the hitsound here normal volume, or just get rid of the slider. I add Finish sound and I change the volume on 40%
And what's with the lack of hitsounds at all towards the end of the diff? Please, this is a solid difficulty in all aspects except for hitsounds, which I personally think needs a redo. Look at the other difficulties in this mapset for an example of good hitsounding.

byfar

00:02:527 (3) - do not use a slider tail for emphasizing downbeat. make this part a slider 00:03:316 - Ok
00:04:895 (5) - move this to 00:04:501 - Is okay
00:08:843 (3) - similar Ok
00:11:211 (5) - similar Is okay
im not going to go through all of the parts you did this, but please change it so that the downbeat is clickable.

bryjow123

00:48:711 (4) - make this a two-beat slider? This brief break match this moment the song

- Castaway -

00:21:080 (3) - turn so it leads on to (4) ok
00:33:711 (2) - less curve on this please why not
00:40:422 (3,4) - fix blanket (slightly) I don't see
Snap Preview Point as well ok
00:49:895 (5,1,2,3) - this rhythm should be the same as this 00:45:948 (1,2,3,4) -. Your a beat ahead but because the sliders are the same shape its confusing D: Nooo, is good
00:57:790 (5,1) - fix the flow from (5) to (1) please ok
01:00:948 (3,1) - same shape better ok
01:06:869 (5) - Make horizontal. Like this: http://puu.sh/mfccb/335b7af349.JPG ok
01:09:632 (1,5) - same shape as well please No
01:12:790 (5,6,1) - http://puu.sh/mfch1/17a6f7d68d.JPG http://puu.sh/mfcj6/58b9947873.JPG. (5) will blanket (1) Good idea

geodoomcraft

00:03:711 - I feel like u should remove (4) at 00:04:106 (4) - and make a slider from 00:03:711 - to 00:04:106 - and add one circle to 00:04:501 -. That way it sounds a bit more in flow with the rhythm. Nope
00:10:027 - Same thing here but only up to 00:10:816 - Nope
00:49:106 - I feel a slider might work very well with the rhythm here. This brief break match this moment the song
00:58:974 - I think a circle should be added here to keep consistency with 00:55:422 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is easy diff. There must be a break between objects
01:04:106 (3) - Maybe curve this more to add to the vocal. Why not
01:15:158 (1) - Feel like there could be a hit sound here that would help emphasize the last part of the song. I changed earlier c:

Aihuro

00:07:658 (2) - Mm. . I think something like this will improve the flow and it also plays nicely: http://puu.sh/mkBNL/91a296bb0a.jpg Just keep turning the slider clockwise until it looks like the picture above. I changed but otherwise
00:21:080 (3,4) - I suggest you switch these two notes maybe? Is okay
00:50:685 (1,2,3) - Why don't you add some hitsounds here? It feels pretty incomplete imo. ok Here: 00:51:474 (2) - you can put a clap. No
00:54:632 (5,1,2,3,4,5) - Same here, please add some hitsounds, feels kinda empty. Is okay
Okay, this diff looks also pretty good, you just have to complete the hitsounds, lol. I hate set hitsounds XD

Thanks all!!!

Download :3

osu file format v14

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Artist:Rihanna
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Tags:dono027 d27 pop rated r hent2222 unapologetic
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Prismetical

274 posts

Joined October 2015

Topic Starter

Prismetical 2016-01-06T18:30:27+00:00

Kuki wrote:
osu! needs more generic pop music

EXACTLY!

wasin

wasin 2016-01-06T21:26:38+00:00

M4M from my Q / *O* Stars 101

General
fine.

D27's Beginner
00:08:843 (2) - Consider this circle is too closer (3) than (1), make it good by move circle(2) to X:180 Y:252
00:16:737 (3) - ^ X:220 Y:168
00:26:211 (6) - Begin with the new vocal maybe you can NC here like 00:29:369 (1) -
00:50:685 (1) - In my opinion overlap with 00:48:316 (4) - prettier than your own, when you did it don't forget to fix distance since 00:52:264 (2) -
01:15:158 (5) - Can NC

2222' Easy
00:21:080 (3) - I think make this slider to be a curve slider for better flow
00:25:816 (1) - Spacing error here I can moved this slider please fix it
00:42:001 (1) - You can add "Finish" hs at the end of spin
01:09:632 (1) - Missing Finish
01:10:422 - 01:12:001 - 01:13:580 - Missing Clap

Normal
00:24:632 (3) - Blanket with 00:24:237 (2) - I suggest you move the center of slider (3) up 2 space
00:45:158 - This line is empty, you can add something here
00:50:685 (1) - Missing Finish ? try to add here. I think it's fine
00:56:211 (3) - Again the blanket doesn't fit with 00:55:816 (2) - , but if you don't mind about blanket it's ok
00:57:790 (3) - ^

Hard
00:23:843 (5) - Spacing error between 00:23:448 (4) - check this
00:27:395 (3) - This slider makes sure you wanna make these shape the same with 00:26:606 (2) - right ?, but I think it doesn't fit here, when you moved slider overlaps with 00:26:606 (2) - for example move slider(3) a bit down it's fine.
00:49:895 (3) - 00:51:474 (3) - Missing clap
00:57:001 (7) - Can Finish hs

That's all for this map rank it soon guy :D

-Keitaro

1,013 posts

Joined October 2013

-Keitaro 2016-01-08T12:23:00+00:00

Here, take my 14 stars! Hopefully it's very useful.
I think this should ranked soon

Prismetical

274 posts

Joined October 2015

Topic Starter

Prismetical 2016-01-09T10:01:53+00:00

wasinkingspeedq wrote:
M4M from my Q / *O* Stars 101

General
fine. good c:

Normal
00:24:632 (3) - Blanket with 00:24:237 (2) - I suggest you move the center of slider (3) up 2 space I don't get your concern
00:45:158 - This line is empty, you can add something here break after spinner
00:50:685 (1) - Missing Finish ? try to add here. I think it's fine correct
00:56:211 (3) - Again the blanket doesn't fit with 00:55:816 (2) - , but if you don't mind about blanket it's ok you are actually right that it isn't blanket that well... but still it kind of looks good to me. xD
00:57:790 (3) - ^

Hard
00:23:843 (5) - Spacing error between 00:23:448 (4) - check this right, fixed!
00:27:395 (3) - This slider makes sure you wanna make these shape the same with 00:26:606 (2) - right ?, but I think it doesn't fit here, when you moved slider overlaps with 00:26:606 (2) - for example move slider(3) a bit down it's fine. I have no idea how you did this in your example without breakin distance snap, but I would keep mine anyway :3
00:49:895 (3) - 00:51:474 (3) - Missing clap for the first one no because the drums aren't followed on that part but I added a clap at the second one
00:57:001 (7) - Can Finish hs yeah, added

That's all for this map rank it soon guy :D I try sooo hard! thankyou

Rendyindo wrote:
Here, take my 14 stars! Hopefully it's very useful. thankyou! of course it is! ♥♥♥
I think this should ranked soon me too! ♥

Vovan

547 posts

Joined March 2014

Vovan 2016-01-09T14:20:40+00:00

Aihuro wrote:
Hey! M4M request through PM.
Well, here goes nothing.

D27's Beginner:
00:02:527 (3,1) - I don't really like this overlap here, maybe try Ctrl+H And place him here: X: 132 Y: 160. I think it will also improve the flow. (It's also a quick fix, just have to fix the DS)
That's not an overlap, when I see the 1, the 3 have disappear, so, that's not an overlap.
00:15:158 (2,4) - Same here, please stack (4) on (2)'s tail to prevent from overlapping with each other.
Nope, same reason.
00:26:211 (6,1) - ^ Stack them properly please.
Fixed
00:32:527 (1,3) - These two sliders are touching each other's head, I highly suggest you do something like this instead: http://puu.sh/mkBof/d46bbc075a.jpg
Fixed.
00:45:158 (2,4) - Same as I mentioned above, stack.
No.
01:00:948 (4) - I think Ctrl+H Will work better since it will prevent overlapping with 00:57:001 (1) - .
When I see the 4, the 1 have disappear, so That's not an overlap.
01:14:369 (4,5) - I didn't saw you using this kind of pattern through out the whole mapset, maybe remove (4) and add a note here: 01:14:369 - .
During all the map I used 2/1 & 4/1 beats. I made the end a bit harder for the player.
Overall, nice diff! Just the stacking that kept bugging me. Thanks ! But that isn't overlaps & problems of stacks x)

wasinkingspeedq wrote:
M4M from my Q / *O* Stars 101

D27's Beginner
00:08:843 (2) - Consider this circle is too closer (3) than (1), make it good by move circle(2) to X:180 Y:252
They're the same circles xDDDD 1 is horizontal & 3 is vertical. that's all x)

00:16:737 (3) - ^ X:220 Y:168
That will break my blanket.

00:26:211 (6) - Begin with the new vocal maybe you can NC here like 00:29:369 (1) -
Fixed.

00:50:685 (1) - In my opinion overlap with 00:48:316 (4) - prettier than your own, when you did it don't forget to fix distance since 00:52:264 (2) -
We can't see the 4 & 1 at the same moment x), so I keep this.

01:15:158 (5) - Can NC
I keep this.

That's all for this map rank it soon guy :D

THANKS GUYS !

Update :

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hent2222

395 posts

Joined April 2014

hent2222 2016-01-09T16:17:51+00:00

wasinkingspeedq wrote:
M4M from my Q / *O* Stars 101

General
fine.

2222' Easy
00:21:080 (3) - I think make this slider to be a curve slider for better flow I will try to make a difference at this moment
00:25:816 (1) - Spacing error here I can moved this slider please fix it Is okay
00:42:001 (1) - You can add "Finish" hs at the end of spin ok :3
01:09:632 (1) - Missing Finish ok
01:10:422 - 01:12:001 - 01:13:580 - Missing Clap Why not

That's all for this map rank it soon guy :D Yeah :3

Thanks!!

#aktualisieren

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Quack

64 posts

Joined July 2013

Quack 2016-01-18T03:10:46+00:00

yo yo m4m

[General]
All OK.

[Beginner]
I don't think anything's wrong with it, just a subjective thing is that I don't really like some of the flow of the sliders, for example 00:00:159 (1,2) - 1 into 2 and 01:00:948 (4,1) - 4 into 1, if you see what I mean. The flow is slightly off imo, an extremely nit picky subjective opinion.

[Easy]
00:10:422 (4,5) - Blanket 4 more with 5
00:22:658 (5) - Feel like it plays and sounds better as this. Consider changing the long slider into this.
00:27:395 (2,3) - Flow into 3 is a little off, once again all my comments on flow are nit picky and subjective.

00:30:553 (4,5) - ^
00:45:948 (1,2,3,4) - Might want to consider moving this section more to the left so that it doesn't go so much towards the right of the screen.

[Normal]
00:24:237 (2,3) - Improve blanket
00:32:527 (1,2,3) - Consider changing up this section to make it flow better (looking specifically at 3)
00:45:158 (1) - Should be a circle or something here, there's a really emphasized beat in the song.
00:46:737 (4,5) - Flow into 5 is a little off.
00:48:316 (1,2) - ^

[Hard]
I wouldn't change much except for some flow lol. A few places in here where the flow could be improved a bit.

As you can see I love flow but it may not be significant enough at times to warrant a fix, but hey flowy map is nice map. Good luck!

Vovan

547 posts

Joined March 2014

Vovan 2016-01-18T15:30:20+00:00

Quack wrote:
yo yo m4m

[Beginner]
I don't think anything's wrong with it, just a subjective thing is that I don't really like some of the flow of the sliders, for example 00:00:159 (1,2) - 1 into 2 and 01:00:948 (4,1) - 4 into 1, if you see what I mean. The flow is slightly off imo, an extremely nit picky subjective opinion.

I'm a beginner mapper, so I don't know what is flow, so I searched , Now I know, Now the beginning is better, thanks !

As you can see I love flow but it may not be significant enough at times to warrant a fix, but hey flowy map is nice map. Good luck!

Update.

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Prismetical

274 posts

Joined October 2015

Topic Starter

Prismetical 2016-01-18T15:37:41+00:00

Quack wrote:
yo yo m4m

[General]
All OK. gewd. c:

[Normal]
00:24:237 (2,3) - Improve blanket yeah, did some work on that
00:32:527 (1,2,3) - Consider changing up this section to make it flow better (looking specifically at 3) totally changed it up
00:45:158 (1) - Should be a circle or something here, there's a really emphasized beat in the song. you're probably the 15th person to say that, but there is a damn spinner and I need to make a certain pause
00:46:737 (4,5) - Flow into 5 is a little off. I don't think so
00:48:316 (1,2) - ^ seems also pretty fine to me

[Hard]
I wouldn't change much except for some flow lol. A few places in here where the flow could be improved a bit. gotta look a thousand times over it, k, thankyou ^^

As you can see I love flow but it may not be significant enough at times to warrant a fix, but hey flowy map is nice map. Good luck! thanks ^.^

pies

205 posts

Joined January 2013

pies 2016-01-18T19:53:17+00:00

Hello. M4M from this queue t/402464/start=0

Begginer

It's OK. I would like to change 1/1 reverse sliders like this one: 00:16:737 (3) - to 2/1 sliders.

Easy

00:11:211 (5,6) - This is strange. Suggestion: http://prntscr.com/9rsfys
01:11:211 (3) - I dont like this curve. Something like this looks better for me: http://prntscr.com/9rshmi

Normal

00:28:974 (1,2,3) - I dont really like this flow.
00:45:158 - You missed a note i think.

Hard

00:41:211 (1) - I think this slider can look better. Consider using 2 white points on each side.
00:52:658 - I really wanted to click something here xD
01:15:158 (1) - Make it louder

Good luck mapping

Vovan

547 posts

Joined March 2014

Vovan 2016-01-19T16:12:29+00:00

HKrecords_ wrote:
Hello. M4M from this queue t/402464/start=0

[Beginner]

It's OK. I would like to change 1/1 reverse sliders like this one: 00:16:737 (3) - to 2/1 sliders.
Umm... That can be a good idea, but I like patterns like this. I think 1/1 sliders here make a bit more energy on the slow diff.

Good luck mapping

Prismetical

274 posts

Joined October 2015

Topic Starter

Prismetical 2016-01-19T18:35:26+00:00

HKrecords_ wrote:
Hello. M4M from this queue t/402464/start=0

Normal
00:28:974 (1,2,3) - I dont really like this flow. it is exactly the one before just rotated, I guess
00:45:158 - You missed a note i think. trust me, 20 people already said that, I finally will do it because I start getting annoyed xDDD YOU DID IT! xD

Hard
00:41:211 (1) - I think this slider can look better. Consider using 2 white points on each side. ugh... gonna keep it, I like it ^^
00:52:658 - I really wanted to click something here xD I know what you mean but I didn't map any downbeat like that so I will leave it like that
01:15:158 (1) - Make it louder focus should be on the words, not on the hitsounds ^^

Good luck mapping thankyouuuuuuuu ♥

transcendental

160 posts

Joined September 2013

transcendental 2016-01-20T04:33:04+00:00

M4M

Beginner

Nothing specific here, but you might want to rework the repeating sliders like at 00:16:737 (3) so that the hitcircle doesn't overlap with the repeat arrow. Might need to remap with higher SV, but that shouldn't be too hard for a beginner diff. Sorry

easy

00:04:895 (5) - start at 00:04:501 because vocals
00:11:211 (5) - ^
00:21:080 (3,5) - remove overlap pls. angle 00:21:080 (3) a bit should do it.

normal

looks good

hard

only thing here is I would make 01:07:658 (1,1,1) have larger spacing to emphasize the music but that's up to you. it looks good to me.

Vovan

547 posts

Joined March 2014

Vovan 2016-01-20T23:36:12+00:00

bigjoe97 wrote:
M4M

Beginner

Nothing specific here, but you might want to rework the repeating sliders like at 00:16:737 (3) so that the hitcircle doesn't overlap with the repeat arrow.
00:16:737 (3,4,1) - I will not change moments like this because that will break the line flow.

Might need to remap with higher SV, but that shouldn't be too hard for a beginner diff. Sorry No. Use 0.5 SV is my desicion, sorry, and that's a beginner made for begginners (P.S I've a beginner friend and he got difficulties to play this, sooo. xD )

No changes, again ;_;

hent2222

395 posts

Joined April 2014

hent2222 2016-01-22T18:31:11+00:00

Quack

00:10:422 (4,5) - Blanket 4 more with 5 It is the interval between objects. Nothing changes
00:22:658 (5) - Feel like it plays and sounds better as this. Consider changing the long slider into this. I did differently, but good idea
00:27:395 (2,3) - Flow into 3 is a little off, once again all my comments on flow are nit picky and subjective.

Is okay
00:30:553 (4,5) - ^ ^
00:45:948 (1,2,3,4) - Might want to consider moving this section more to the left so that it doesn't go so much towards the right of the screen. ok

HKrecords_

00:11:211 (5,6) - This is strange. Suggestion: http://prntscr.com/9rsfys Strange for u, nice for me
01:11:211 (3) - I dont like this curve. Something like this looks better for me: http://prntscr.com/9rshmi why not

bigjoe97

00:04:895 (5) - start at 00:04:501 because vocals A lot of people I draw this out, but this part is good
00:11:211 (5) - ^ ^
00:21:080 (3,5) - remove overlap pls. angle 00:21:080 (3) a bit should do it. I did differently

Thanks for mods! c;

always new mods omg xd

osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 42001
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
EpilepsyWarning: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

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Title:Lost In Paradise
TitleUnicode:Lost In Paradise
Artist:Rihanna
ArtistUnicode:Rihanna
Creator:Prismetical
Version:2222's Easy
Source:
Tags:dono027 d27 pop rated r hent2222 unapologetic
BeatmapID:827415
BeatmapSetID:371997

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:2.5
ApproachRate:3.5
SliderMultiplier:0.7
SliderTickRate:1

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sheela

2,651 posts

Joined October 2011

sheela 2016-01-28T23:25:20+00:00

Hey again, Prismetical! You requested a recheck, so here it is! And no kudosu.

[General]

Oh! I see that you have added a "moon" hitcircle! It does fit with the background, haha. But you should know that when adding a skin into a beatmap, you need a complete set of skin elements. To see what to include, check this wiki. But in this mapset, here are the things you have to add:
1. approachcircle.png
2. hitcircleoverlay.png
3. lighting.png
4. Add SliderBorder : 255,255,255 under [Colours] and after the combocolours values, in every .osu file. It should look like this.
You can take the missing elements from the original osu! skin if you don't have your own. Click here to get the skin template!
You need to remove the unused transparency in your lyrics image files, otherwise it's against the Ranking Criteria unless you have a good reason. It shouldn't have problems to the SB since everything in your SB is anchored in the center, so it's safe to crop them.

[D27's Beginner]

00:16:737 (3) - Essaye de jouer avec la blanket 00:15:158 (2,3) parce qu'elle est un peu laide pour moi. Sinon, je te suggère de bouger le slider vers la queue de 00:15:158 (2) -, donc quelque part x:239 y:243. N'oublie pas de bouger les objets suivants.
00:38:843 (1) - Je ne vois pas l'usage de mettre un spinner ici, il va très mal avec la musique parce qu'il ne va pas bien. Ma seule suggestion est de mapper cette partie avec des cercles et des sliders. Essaye ça:
Rythme

[2222's Easy]

00:04:895 (5,1) - This is subjective, but one of them can be a different shape instead of being the same. This is because in both parts, there are not the same melody, so having the same pattern doesn't work, for me.
00:45:948 to 01:07:658 - The clap pattern doesn't work very well. You basically added a clap on every object, and that doesn't sound good. What I did suggest is clap on 3rd and 4th white ticks, but I decided to add one on each 3rd white tick, so the downbeat, because it highlights the drum that goes high. If you don't know what I'm talking about, here's an image of what I want to suggest:
Measure
This represents a measure. What I circled is the tick I want you to add a clap whenever there's an object on.
And suddenly, after 00:55:422 the hitsounds just dies, lel. There is no claps nor anything, so you can do what's above.

[Normal]

00:00:159 (1) - 00:09:632 (1) - I think those objects should also have a clap, if I follow 00:03:316 (1) and 00:06:474 (1) correctly.
00:06:474 (1,3) - 00:23:448 (3,2) - These kind of stacks occurs frequently in this difficulty. To elaborate, you make a stack between one beat, and it's usually a circle you put in-between. The speed is short, so I wouldn't recommend as they get a little invisible. That could possibly only me, but I would avoid that.
00:21:080 (2,1) - The whistles on the sliders are not sounding great, and they feel random, so maybe remove them?
00:45:158 to 01:09:632 - I honestly don't get your clap pattern in this part. It sometimes gets inconsistent, and I'm not sure what does it follow. In my opinion, if you added the claps on the middle white tick on each measure (downbeat), that would sound perfect because it gets the high drum like 00:45:158 (1) - 00:48:316 (1) - other than the rest since they sound low. Here are some example if you need more:
1. 00:45:158 (1) -
2. 00:46:737 (5) - head
3. 00:48:316 (1) - head
4. 00:49:895 (3) - and many more.
So, I suggest you redo the hitsounds in the chorus, but with what I said.
00:58:580 (1,2,3) - I'd rather not repeat the same pattern and flow as 00:55:422 (1,2,3) since it tends to be boring to repeat a third time.

[Hard]

I think you should lower the AR to 6. 7.5 feels too fast for the song.
00:00:159 to 00:12:001 - You seem to not add claps on downbeats like in Normal. Your choice to remove the claps in Normal or add them in Hard, but try to be consistent throughout the mapset.
00:12:790 (1) - 00:25:422 (4) - I recommend you avoid such stacks. The players will have to react fast because the rhythm gets sudden by 00:12:395 (3) and they can missed the shot. You can try this pattern instead:
Pattern
00:52:264 (5) - 00:58:580 (5) - Remove the finish? I don't hear any crash.
00:44:369 to 01:07:658 - The kiai section has some new combo inconsistency. Try adding one on every two measures.

There's still room for improvements, so this recheck may not be enough. But I don't think there are major issues, and this mapset actually gets better (if I remember correctly what was before lel...)! Try to catch a BN for a check! It could greatly improve this mapset, I think. If you need more assistance, you can always catch me.

Also, this mod didn't get a kudosu, but you did apply the mod, so... lel.

Prismetical

274 posts

Joined October 2015

Topic Starter

Prismetical 2016-01-29T14:25:40+00:00

sheela901 wrote:
Hey again, Prismetical! You requested a recheck, so here it is! And no kudosu.

Gonna look at the General things later.

[Normal]
00:00:159 (1) - 00:09:632 (1) - I think those objects should also have a clap, if I follow 00:03:316 (1) and 00:06:474 (1) correctly. correct
00:06:474 (1,3) - 00:23:448 (3,2) - These kind of stacks occurs frequently in this difficulty. To elaborate, you make a stack between one beat, and it's usually a circle you put in-between. The speed is short, so I wouldn't recommend as they get a little invisible. That could possibly only me, but I would avoid that. i actually like them a lot, i dont know, i could lower the AR then ._. would that be better?
00:21:080 (2,1) - The whistles on the sliders are not sounding great, and they feel random, so maybe remove them? done
00:45:158 to 01:09:632 - I honestly don't get your clap pattern in this part. It sometimes gets inconsistent, and I'm not sure what does it follow. In my opinion, if you added the claps on the middle white tick on each measure (downbeat), that would sound perfect because it gets the high drum like 00:45:158 (1) - 00:48:316 (1) - other than the rest since they sound low. Here are some example if you need more:
00:45:158 (1) -
00:46:737 (5) - head
00:48:316 (1) - head
00:49:895 (3) - and many more. all done, and many more
So, I suggest you redo the hitsounds in the chorus, but with what I said.
00:58:580 (1,2,3) - I'd rather not repeat the same pattern and flow as 00:55:422 (1,2,3) since it tends to be boring to repeat a third time. but it is just on a time period of 5 seconds, is it that important?
[Hard]
I think you should lower the AR to 6. 7.5 feels too fast for the song. yup
00:00:159 to 00:12:001 - You seem to not add claps on downbeats like in Normal. Your choice to remove the claps in Normal or add them in Hard, but try to be consistent throughout the mapset. gotta add here, gonna take a while till i figured out what fits
00:12:790 (1) - 00:25:422 (4) - I recommend you avoid such stacks. The players will have to react fast because the rhythm gets sudden by 00:12:395 (3) and they can missed the shot. You can try this pattern instead: both changed and even avoided an overlap with this
Pattern
00:52:264 (5) - 00:58:580 (5) - Remove the finish? I don't hear any crash. right
00:44:369 to 01:07:658 - The kiai section has some new combo inconsistency. Try adding one on every two measures. i dont understand ._. can you try to explain it better to me? c:
There's still room for improvements, so this recheck may not be enough. But I don't think there are major issues, and this mapset actually gets better (if I remember correctly what was before lel...)! Try to catch a BN for a check! i'm trying for 1 month, but i'll work harder It could greatly improve this mapset, I think. If you need more assistance, you can always catch me. thanks, boo c:

Also, this mod didn't get a kudosu, but you did apply the mod, so... lel. sorry, just a human being ._. kudos given xd

Vovan

547 posts

Joined March 2014

Vovan 2016-01-29T18:13:02+00:00

w8 10mins

sheela901 wrote:
Hey again, Prismetical! You requested a recheck, so here it is! And no kudosu.

[General]

[*]You need to remove the unused transparency in your lyrics image files, otherwise it's against the Ranking Criteria unless you have a good reason. It shouldn't have problems to the SB since everything in your SB is anchored in the center, so it's safe to crop them.
I don't understand ._. (P.S : Thanks prismetical for tell me what means this :3) Fixed now.

[D27's Beginner]
00:16:737 (3) - Essaye de jouer avec la blanket 00:15:158 (2,3) parce qu'elle est un peu laide pour moi. Sinon, je te suggère de bouger le slider vers la queue de 00:15:158 (2) -, donc quelque part x:239 y:243. N'oublie pas de bouger les objets suivants.
Tu as raison, j'avoue que faut pas trop en abuser. Fixed.
00:38:843 (1) - Je ne vois pas l'usage de mettre un spinner ici, il va très mal avec la musique parce qu'il ne va pas bien. Ma seule suggestion est de mapper cette partie avec des cercles et des sliders. Essaye ça:
Rythme
Fixed.

There's still room for improvements, so this recheck may not be enough. But I don't think there are major issues, and this mapset actually gets better (if I remember correctly what was before lel...yep :p)! Try to catch a BN for a check we don't find it T-T! It could greatly improve this mapset Yep, , I think. If you need more assistance, you can always catch me. Ok

Also, this mod didn't get a kudosu, but you did apply the mod, so... lel.

PRISMETICAL , be gentle and give a kudo to Nekomata xD

Update

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hent2222

395 posts

Joined April 2014

hent2222 2016-01-30T09:10:14+00:00

sheela901 wrote:
[2222's Easy]
00:04:895 (5,1) - This is subjective, but one of them can be a different shape instead of being the same. This is because in both parts, there are not the same melody, so having the same pattern doesn't work, for me. ok
00:45:948 to 01:07:658 - The clap pattern doesn't work very well. You basically added a clap on every object, and that doesn't sound good. What I did suggest is clap on 3rd and 4th white ticks, but I decided to add one on each 3rd white tick, so the downbeat, because it highlights the drum that goes high. If you don't know what I'm talking about, here's an image of what I want to suggest:
Measure
This represents a measure. What I circled is the tick I want you to add a clap whenever there's an object on. I understand 50/50
And suddenly, after 00:55:422 the hitsounds just dies, lel. There is no claps nor anything, so you can do what's above. I think that at this point add hitsounds isn't needed

Thanks ;*

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neonat

Beatmap Nominator

3,526 posts

Joined April 2012

neonat 2016-02-02T16:26:55+00:00

General

Could use a little bit more time before the first object with lead-in, no harm

Beginner

00:00:159 (1,2,3,4) - actually I would think you should follow the rhythm of 00:06:474 (1,2,3) instead because if you did, you would click something at 00:03:316 where the music is stronger
00:12:790 (5) - should have started the NC here
00:13:580 (1) - you can really adjust this shape to blanket and curve around better, you can still +/- around 0.03 from the snap, I adjusted it to around 0.82x and it seemed better:

SPOILER

00:30:553 - don't NC, doesn't follow the other patterns
00:38:053 (4) - NC
00:38:843 (5,6) - don't overlap, find another position
00:42:790 (1) - don't NC

Easy

The custom claps used in the kiai are overused and not really intuitively used

Normal

00:11:211 (4,1,2) - could be more curvy to help flow

You tried something else with the NC, but it looks real messy right now

All I honestly see are 1/1 beats everywhere, without much matching to the actual song. You might be going for the percussion, but that beat is what you can see in any kind of song, repeatedly using that and the map is just dead and monotonous. The sliders do not help, it's not like you find held percussion in there, unless you hold it with the vocals, which isn't present.

Hard

00:08:843 (5,3) - why leave out the claps?
00:16:211 (2,3,5,6) - but the music here isn't even doubles?
00:19:895 (3,4) - ^
00:54:632 (2,6) - sliders look sloppy

Generally the rhythm used isn't even the main beats, and it's very additive and not really following the actual song.

Good Luck

Prismetical

274 posts

Joined October 2015

Topic Starter

Prismetical 2016-02-02T16:57:21+00:00

neonat wrote:
General

Could use a little bit more time before the first object with lead-in, no harm it would feel weird to randomly start and the middle of nowhere, gonna keep this

Normal

00:11:211 (4,1,2) - could be more curvy to help flow improved

You tried something else with the NC, but it looks real messy right now isn't it consistent?

All I honestly see are 1/1 beats everywhere, without much matching to the actual song. You might be going for the percussion, but that beat is what you can see in any kind of song, repeatedly using that and the map is just dead and monotonous. The sliders do not help, it's not like you find held percussion in there, unless you hold it with the vocals, which isn't present. I find it very good to understand, it matches with the beat perfectly, except some circles that just fill breaks, but otherwise I think there are no complains on the beats, true, it is mainly 1/1, but, I just didn't want to make it too complicated and wanted to keep the difficulty spread consistent

Hard

00:08:843 (5,3) - why leave out the claps? added
00:16:211 (2,3,5,6) - but the music here isn't even doubles? but it fits well and plays good
00:19:895 (3,4) - ^ ^
00:54:632 (2,6) - sliders look sloppy changed (2) but I like (6)

Generally the rhythm used isn't even the main beats, and it's very additive and not really following the actual song. mh.. ._.

Good Luck

Vovan

547 posts

Joined March 2014

Vovan 2016-02-02T17:23:08+00:00

neonat wrote:
General

Could use a little bit more time before the first object with lead-in, no harm

Beginner

00:00:159 (1,2,3,4) - actually I would think you should follow the rhythm of 00:06:474 (1,2,3) instead because if you did, you would click something at 00:03:316 where the music is stronger Fixed
00:12:790 (5) - should have started the NC here Fixed
00:13:580 (1) - you can really adjust this shape to blanket and curve around better, you can still +/- around 0.03 from the snap, I adjusted it to around 0.82x and it seemed better:
SPOILER
Not fixed like you made, but that's fine now~
00:30:553 - don't NC, doesn't follow the other patterns Fixed
00:38:053 (4) - NC Fixed
00:38:843 (5,6) - don't overlap, find another position Fixed
00:42:790 (1) - don't NC Fixed

Good Luck

Thanks !

Update

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neonat

Beatmap Nominator

3,526 posts

Joined April 2012

neonat 2016-02-02T17:33:00+00:00

Prismetical wrote:
neonat wrote:
General

Could use a little bit more time before the first object with lead-in, no harm it would feel weird to randomly start and the middle of nowhere, gonna keep this

As in add into the AudioLeadIn in the .osu but that's up to you

riffy

osu! Alumni

8,060 posts

Joined December 2010

riffy 2016-02-11T17:14:44+00:00

You'd be surprised to know that osu! automatically adjusts lead in. You don't have to touch it at at all.

As requested.

[General]

Disable letterboxes as they're unnecessary. Just to make sure things run just the way they should.
thumbs.db can be removed, these files are useless.
00:44:369 - try to make the BG appear at this point, so it syncs better with the vocals.

[D27's Beginner]

Probably AR2 or 2,5 would look better wih the velocity/spacing values you're using here.
00:03:316 (3,1) - this might be unnoticeable but in terms of flow this feels weird. Consider avoid overlapping sliders like that.
01:09:632 - I would try to make that clickable to the player. Probably snap a circle instead of repeat here.
Note: 01:14:369 - and a single circle instead of a slider should be here. Give it a try.
Looks alright.

[2222's Easy]

00:06:474 (1) - given that it's the only slider with the red anchor in the intro, it looks weird. Make the curve softer?
00:24:632 (6) - add a circle for the drum beat and vocals here? This would fit really well.
Note: 00:24:632 (6) - same.
00:42:001 (1) - having the spinner blocking the first for beatas of a rather short kiai feels wrong. Try to remove it and map this part?
00:49:106 - as the drums go, the circle here would emphasize the downbeat really well. + It'd help players to feel the consistent rhythm.

Should be okay if you pay a bit more attention to the rhythm.

[Normal]

Could use CS 3,5 to catch up with the modern difficulty standards for a Normal. Smaller circles always look better, right?
Your combooing is irregular. Consider looking through it and optimizing it to make it more consistent?
00:23:448 (3,2) - 00:30:553 (3,5) - not a big fan of such stacks as they make the flow go in a rather unnatural for a Normal difficulty way.
00:42:790 (1) - the start of kiai and the most interesting part of the SB are both left out. Remove the spinner and map it properly?
01:08:843 (4) - halve the slider, so it ends on the previous whte tick and add a circle to 01:09:632 - as it feels like the beat here has to be clickable.
Note:Read this if you don't get what I am trying to say.

Looks safe to go. Could be a bit more polished, but it's okay.

[Hard]

If you agree to set CS 3,5 on Normal, go for CS4 here. It looks really nice and makes the spread here work better.
00:07:264 (3) - any reason in music to curve it this way? Try to use something simplier?
00:15:158 (7) - use the same rhythm you did before? A 2/3 slider and a circle just like 00:14:369 (5,6) - 00:13:580 (3,4) - will fit perfectly here!
00:16:211 (2,3) - feels pretty random, if you ask me. Try an 1/1 slider or a 2/3 slider and a circle?
00:25:816 (1,2,3) - shouldn't thewse sliders use the same rhythm like 00:14:369 (5,6) - 00:13:580 (3,4) did? This would make sense with the vocals and feel more consistent.
Note: you can apply it the other way and use 1/1 sliders everywhere.
00:42:790 (1) - again, try to map the part instead of using spinner. Or simply keep a break. This spinner covers a big part of the PA-RA-DISE .pngs and makes the beginning of the kiai feel like a break/recovery time.
01:08:053 (1,1) - try to avoid overusing new combos just one is enough for the emphasis.

Just a bit more work and this will look pretty impressive.

Overall it looks promising, I'd try to get a couple of skilled mods/BNs to polish it to the limit and push it forward. Have a star for your efforts, you're close to getting it bubbled.

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Poke me if you'll be having hard time getting a bubble/heart for this afterwards.

neonat

Beatmap Nominator

3,526 posts

Joined April 2012

neonat 2016-02-12T04:27:16+00:00

You do realise I am well aware of that as well, surprise surprise.

I am asking for additional time even after factoring that, guess maybe you didn't think I was suggesting that.

Vovan

547 posts

Joined March 2014

Vovan 2016-02-12T11:36:44+00:00

Bakari wrote:
You'd be surprised to know that osu! automatically adjusts lead in. You don't have to touch it at at all.

As requested.

[General]
Disable letterboxes as they're unnecessary. Just to make sure things run just the way they should. Fixed
thumbs.db can be removed, these files are useless. Deleted
00:44:369 - try to make the BG appear at this point, so it syncs better with the vocals.
[D27's Beginner]
Probably AR2 or 2,5 would look better wih the velocity/spacing values you're using here. Changed to AR 2.5
00:03:316 (3,1) - this might be unnoticeable but in terms of flow this feels weird. Consider avoid overlapping sliders like that. I changed the pattern. (That make a line flow now ^^)
01:09:632 - I would try to make that clickable to the player. Probably snap a circle instead of repeat here. Fixed
Note: 01:14:369 - and a single circle instead of a slider should be here. Give it a try. Oh yes, it sounds better, thanks !
Looks alright.
Just a bit more work and this will look pretty impressive.
Yep ^^
Overall it looks promising, I'd try to get a couple of skilled mods/BNs to polish it to the limit and push it forward. Have a star for your efforts, you're close to getting it bubbled.
Thanks !
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Okay
Poke me if you'll be having hard time getting a bubble/heart for this afterwards.

For hent & Prismetical !

Update !!!! This update will be a bit special because the SB is changed a bit. I deleted letterbox for ALL diffs and I removed thumbs.db (and I apply my mod xD) so the update will be on puush

http://puu.sh/n563H/b196832e64.osz

Prismetical

274 posts

Joined October 2015

Topic Starter

Prismetical 2016-02-12T13:50:23+00:00

Bakari wrote:
As requested.

[Normal]
Could use CS 3,5 to catch up with the modern difficulty standards for a Normal. Smaller circles always look better, right? yup
Your combooing is irregular. Consider looking through it and optimizing it to make it more consistent? improved
00:23:448 (3,2) - 00:30:553 (3,5) - not a big fan of such stacks as they make the flow go in a rather unnatural for a Normal difficulty way. nvm cuz remap
00:42:790 (1) - the start of kiai and the most interesting part of the SB are both left out. Remove the spinner and map it properly? idk how to map that part properly for a Normal difficulty, might end up too hard
01:08:843 (4) - halve the slider, so it ends on the previous whte tick and add a circle to 01:09:632 - as it feels like the beat here has to be clickable.
Note:Read this if you don't get what I am trying to say. done

Looks safe to go. Could be a bit more polished, but it's okay. POLISHED UP!
[Hard]
If you agree to set CS 3,5 on Normal, go for CS4 here. It looks really nice and makes the spread here work better. k
00:07:264 (3) - any reason in music to curve it this way? Try to use something simplier? nvm cuz remap
00:15:158 (7) - use the same rhythm you did before? A 2/3 slider and a circle just like 00:14:369 (5,6) - 00:13:580 (3,4) - will fit perfectly here! doesn't fit for me... meh :/
00:16:211 (2,3) - feels pretty random, if you ask me. Try an 1/1 slider or a 2/3 slider and a circle? i like the little tapping area here
00:25:816 (1,2,3) - shouldn't thewse sliders use the same rhythm like 00:14:369 (5,6) - 00:13:580 (3,4) did? This would make sense with the vocals and feel more consistent. I had it like this before, every single BN hated on it... /me confused :c
Note: you can apply it the other way and use 1/1 sliders everywhere.
00:42:790 (1) - again, try to map the part instead of using spinner. Or simply keep a break. This spinner covers a big part of the PA-RA-DISE .pngs and makes the beginning of the kiai feel like a break/recovery time. done here
01:08:053 (1,1) - try to avoid overusing new combos just one is enough for the emphasis. but it's so beautiful ;_; done

Just a bit more work and this will look pretty impressive. YES!
Overall it looks promising, I'd try to get a couple of skilled mods/BNs to polish it to the limit and push it forward. Have a star for your efforts, you're close to getting it bubbled. I will do my best! Thankyou so much! You resetted my fire for this! ♥♥♥

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Poke me if you'll be having hard time getting a bubble/heart for this afterwards. I will! thankyou thankyou thankyou thankyou! ♥

hent2222

395 posts

Joined April 2014

hent2222 2016-02-12T22:32:21+00:00

work in progress woof

Bakari wrote:
You'd be surprised to know that osu! automatically adjusts lead in. You don't have to touch it at at all.

As requested.

[General]
Disable letterboxes as they're unnecessary. Just to make sure things run just the way they should.
thumbs.db can be removed, these files are useless.
00:44:369 - try to make the BG appear at this point, so it syncs better with the vocals.
[2222's Easy]
00:06:474 (1) - given that it's the only slider with the red anchor in the intro, it looks weird. Make the curve softer? There are more sliders with red point. No change. Slider is really nice
00:24:632 (6) - add a circle for the drum beat and vocals here? This would fit really well. For a large spacing between the objects is, if I good understand this point
Note: 00:24:632 (6) - same.
00:42:001 (1) - having the spinner blocking the first for beatas of a rather short kiai feels wrong. Try to remove it and map this part? ok. I have done differently, but thanks for the suggestion
00:49:106 - as the drums go, the circle here would emphasize the downbeat really well. + It'd help players to feel the consistent rhythm. I add slider now and later

Should be okay if you pay a bit more attention to the rhythm.

Poke me if you'll be having hard time getting a bubble/heart for this afterwards. ok dad

Thanks koshka

for prismetical lov

osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 42001
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
EpilepsyWarning: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

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DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4
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Title:Lost In Paradise
TitleUnicode:Lost In Paradise
Artist:Rihanna
ArtistUnicode:Rihanna
Creator:Prismetical
Version:2222's Easy
Source:
Tags:dono027 d27 pop rated r hent2222 unapologetic
BeatmapID:827415
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