BluJvy wrote:

Fix offset in all diffs please

Prismetical wrote:

there might be a problem if you give me the audio and you mod the old version :/ can you edit these times?

Nekomata wrote:

any offset/mp3 changes should always be the last thing to do

01:11:080 -
01:12:658 -
01:14:237 -

Swegmec wrote:

Hey Prismetical, (Check my queue homepage for color meanings)

This map is great, and I love the song. Just a few minor things:

Beginner: I would think that this is almost too easy. Even complete newbies at osu could probably manage a 1 star map. I would raise this just a bit.

Easy: Slider velocity is a bit slow. Then again, you would have to resnap all of the sliders, so your choice.

Normal: 00:06:474 (1,2,3) - The slider is too long; you have constant beats and then a long slider that interrupts the flow. Also, making the circle size 3.2-3.3 from 3.0 would give it an extra sense of increased difficulty.

Hard: Loved this map! Got 99% on it. Nothing wrong here.

Please leave a kudosu as I need to build up my supply! I would award 3-5 stars, but I have no kudosu!

Thankyou a lot!

1. 00:29:369 (1,2) - I'm not too fond of this pattern. It doesn't really represent anything and it's unpleasing to the eye. If you curved them more, you'd have a solid oval shape, but as it currently stands, I'm not liking the look of it.
2. 00:35:685 (3) - Why did you put a whistle on the slider trail as well? It sounds so different to the usual now, and it is quite inconsistent. I would change this by making sure there's only a whistle on the end and start of the slider.
3. 00:57:001 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - These patterns feel a bit cramped. It feels as if everything is going on in the bottom left quadrant. This is bad when sliders like (4) nearly end up going off the screen. You have all this space, use it.

1. 00:00:159 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Is it just me or does this whole area have no hitsounds? I would add some, because without hitsounds the patterns would sound bland and monotonous.
2. 00:04:895 (5,1) - Despite them being in different combos, I still think these sliders should be symmetrical; it would look a lot nicer that way.
3. 01:15:158 (1) - Unrankable, Hitsounds from notes and sliders must be audible. Why is the hitsound here so quiet? I know you want to reflect on how most of the instruments stop here, but it's ineffective and it would be better just to get rid of the note. So either make the hitsound here normal volume, or just get rid of the slider.

1. 00:25:816 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Personally, I feel that it would be better if you did patterns here rather than just straight lines; it feels somewhat bland.
2. 00:41:211 (1,2,3,4) - Another minor suggestion; you could make this pattern symmetrical, as the position of (4) is a bit off. Try moving it to 220|132 instead.
3. 00:51:474 (3,1,2) - The claps here are so inconsistent. Remove the claps at (2) and the head of (1), and place a clap at the tail of (1). This will sound much nicer and consistent.

1. 00:13:580 (3,5) - I suppose you were going for something like an oval here. Unfortunately it looks a bit lopsided; it would really help improve it if you were to make both sliders identical to each other. (3) has a much stronger cure than (5).
2. 00:42:395 (2) - I really don't think this beat is strong enough to justify a finish. Sure, you want to help build up towards the spinner, but because there isn't an actual strong beat in the music, it just sounds funny. It would sound much nicer if you just got rid of the finish.
3. 00:45:027 I would add a note here to map to the bass. You have a note here on all the other patterns like this, so why is this so different? It's just inconsistent.
4. 01:07:658 (1,1,1) - I feel as though these notes could use a bit more oomph, so why not space them out a bit? It's a hard difficulty, so you can break distance snap to add jumps if you want.

-Faded- wrote:

Hi, m4m from Dono's queue! thankyou Donooo! ♥

[Normal]

1. 00:25:816 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Personally, I feel that it would be better if you did patterns here rather than just straight lines; it feels somewhat bland. I wanted it to directly go down, because the vocal is going deeper and so I want to kind of simulate that xD (rip english)
2. 00:41:211 (1,2,3,4) - Another minor suggestion; you could make this pattern symmetrical, as the position of (4) is a bit off. Try moving it to 220|132 instead. good point, it was because (3) was a bit higher than (2)
3. 00:51:474 (3,1,2) - The claps here are so inconsistent. Remove the claps at (2) and the head of (1), and place a clap at the tail of (1). This will sound much nicer and consistent. tried your resulution, still sounded weird, I used 3 claps in a row now for end of (3) and for both of (1)

[Hard]

1. 00:13:580 (3,5) - I suppose you were going for something like an oval here. Unfortunately it looks a bit lopsided; it would really help improve it if you were to make both sliders identical to each other. (3) has a much stronger cure than (5). I actually didn't care if oval or not, gonna leave it
2. 00:42:395 (2) - I really don't think this beat is strong enough to justify a finish. Sure, you want to help build up towards the spinner, but because there isn't an actual strong beat in the music, it just sounds funny. It would sound much nicer if you just got rid of the finish. not sure, both sounds cool for me
3. 00:45:027 I would add a note here to map to the bass. You have a note here on all the other patterns like this, so why is this so different? It's just inconsistent. you're so right!
4. 01:07:658 (1,1,1) - I feel as though these notes could use a bit more oomph, so why not space them out a bit? It's a hard difficulty, so you can break distance snap to add jumps if you want. changed it up a bit, I'm a huge friend of distance snap, so I will not break it ^^

Overall, it's a pretty good mapset. Aspects such as patterns and flow were pretty good, although hitsounds could use some work on the easier difficulties. I shot a star, good luck!thanks A LOT!

Prismetical wrote:

-Faded- wrote:

Hi, m4m from Dono's queue! thankyou Donooo! ♥

I want this song ranked. I'll apply the mod of Faded. 2mins. ♥

-Faded- wrote:

Hi, m4m from Dono's queue!

[Beginner]
I'd add a spinner somewhere. I know this is beginner, and that beginners might not be able to handle spinners, but how will they learn? Also, spinners are important to add variety to the scoreboards when the map gets ranked. Imagine if #1 simply became a race to see who can full mod FC your diff first.

• 
  Fixed. THANKS ! c:

1. 00:29:369 (1,2) - I'm not too fond of this pattern. It doesn't really represent anything and it's unpleasing to the eye. If you curved them more, you'd have a solid oval shape, but as it currently stands, I'm not liking the look of it.
   I just curved a bit more the sliders
   
2. 00:35:685 (3) - Why did you put a whistle on the slider trail as well? It sounds so different to the usual now, and it is quite inconsistent. I would change this by making sure there's only a whistle on the end and start of the slider.
   Fixed.
   
3. 00:57:001 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - These patterns feel a bit cramped. It feels as if everything is going on in the bottom left quadrant. This is bad when sliders like (4) nearly end up going off the screen. You have all this space, use it.

Nope, the points don't go out of the grid, and that's just a blanket. I don't know what is the problem. I keep this.

Update.

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byfar wrote:

Normal

1. i'd say remake your sliders so that they blanket the circles even with DS aren't they fine?
2. 00:10:422 (3) - the slider tail should be a circle. you should use the same rhythm you used here 00:03:316 (1,2,3) - I like it
3. 00:11:606 - i highly suggest you fill this with a 1/1 slider 00:11:211 (4) - but I understand that you want to put emphasis on the three circles no, I like your idea, I want to change the 3 circles anyway so this is the perfect chance! thankyou ^^
4. 00:13:185 - here I want to put full focus on voice
5. 00:40:422 (2) - look at my mod for the hard diff first for a method to fix this eh.. wut? xD

Hard

1. 00:26:606 (2,3) - make the visual distance the same spacing as 00:25:816 (1,2) - ? . compare http://puu.sh/mf7tp/586a05edd2.jpg to http://puu.sh/mf7ue/7f8203922c.jpg it might not seem like a big difference, but there really is (especially since this is a light hard diff with low ar) they had a wrong spacing anyway, spaced/placed them completely new
   
2. 00:28:974 (1) - make it more perfect like this? http://puu.sh/mf7nm/b76a7116c3.jpg seems good to me
   code for it if you want it

   480,128,28974,22,0,B|420:160|468:224|384:244,1,140

   do it the same way for all your other squigly sliders please, it looks better and more neater this way
3. 00:50:290 (5) - uh sooooorry, changed
4. 00:54:632 (2) - ^ I'm creative!
   a tip for sliders, less nodes = better

gl

Thankyou!

- Castaway - wrote:

Hey! M4M From my queue

General

1. Turn off grid snap please...i'll have examples of why down below! Using this is highly recommended.
2. I'm sad how the lyrics have a great and interesting rhythm but all the maps go by the beat in the background... D: It feels like i'm playing the drums..... That's because all the voice sound go to the beat.
3. Snap Preview Points

I'll speak about this tomorrow with Prismetical ^^

D27's Easy

1. As said above, the grid snap can sometimes be annoying especially on easy diffs. It's very slight, but here are some examples: 00:05:685 (5,1) - these are almost touching 00:34:895 (2) - move circle to x:245 y:218 That's because I use DS ._.
2. 00:38:843 - might wanna snap the preview point :/ Ill do this
3. It would also be nice if your sliders were more consistent. These 2 00:06:474 (1,3) - could be the same as these 00:00:159 (1,3) - . Its exactly the same sound so... It's the same sound so I've use the same hitsounds & the same kind of slider.
4. 00:15:158 (2,1) - ^ I don't know here is the problem.
5. 01:00:158 (3,4) - don't like this placement. a sharp turn for beginner 00:59:369 (2,3,4) - That make a basic pattern : triangle. So no changes;
6. Clean the map up abit and it'll be great

... Uh... For me no changes, just snap the point. I will speak about this with Prismetical tomorrow.

1. 00:24:632 (5,1) - I feel a reverse slider might work here to get 00:25:027 - in with the beat.
2. 00:32:527 (1) - I feel the extra red curve on this is not needed.
3. 00:42:001 - Maybe add a circle here to keep consistency with 00:38:053 (4) -, And it also adds a bit on the vocal because that's where the vocalist says "To".
4. 00:44:369 (1,2) - i feel like a slider could be used here instead of two circles to add to the vocal.
5. 01:09:632 - I feel like the drum set of hit sounds could be used here.
6. 01:13:974 - This one spot feels like its missing a note or something like that, maybe add a circle here.

1. 00:03:711 - I feel like u should remove (4) at 00:04:106 (4) - and make a slider from 00:03:711 - to 00:04:106 - and add one circle to 00:04:501 -. That way it sounds a bit more in flow with the rhythm.
2. 00:10:027 - Same thing here but only up to 00:10:816 -
3. 00:49:106 - I feel a slider might work very well with the rhythm here.
4. 00:58:974 - I think a circle should be added here to keep consistency with 00:55:422 (1,2,3,4,5) -
5. 01:04:106 (3) - Maybe curve this more to add to the vocal.
6. 01:15:158 (1) - Feel like there could be a hit sound here that would help emphasize the last part of the song.

1. 00:12:790 (3) - imo the (3) here can be changed to a slider so it fits with the "mhh..".
2. 00:45:158 - I think a circle should go here. It will work better with the rhythm.
3. 00:53:843 (1) - I feel a slider will do better here then a circle, will work better with rhythm.

1. 00:41:211 (1) - imo this is kind of not needed, the vocal from 00:41:211 - ends at 00:41:606 -, maybe make a slider up to there then put a circle at 00:42:001 -
2. 00:50:158 (4) - This is probably just me but it sounds like its not needed here.
3. 00:50:685 (6) - ^ same thing. I Think you should extend 00:50:290 (5) - to (6) and get rid of the circle on (6)

bryjow123 wrote:

From my queue:

These maps seem pretty clean to me. I take that as a compliment I didn't really find much so it's a short mod but here you are:

Normal:

00:45:158- add another circle to this combo here? nope, because of spacing between spinner and next element

01:07:264 (3) - Make this the NC point instead of 01:07:658 (1)? I prefer it how it is, because we are following the downbeats and (3) is not a part of that

Thankyou!

- Castaway - wrote:

Dono27 already answered the General things correctly

Normal

1. 00:00:948 (2,3,4) - (3) and (4) blanket...but it looks ugly next to slider (2) hard to blanket, I tried
2. 00:03:316 (1,2) - fix blanket please ._. tried
3. 00:07:264 (3) - why is this long slider here...keep it consistent with the first set of 'oooo's' 00:00:159 (1,2,3) - I like it
4. 00:19:501 (2) - ^ ^
5. 00:19:501 (2,1) - dis blanket :/ I really don't see a problem there xD
6. 00:21:080 (2,3,4) - this better: http://puu.sh/mfcyv/7cdfdce16b.JPG copied (2) and rotated it, might look better now
7. 00:32:527 (1,3) - copy (1) and rotate for slider (3) imo they are copied
8. 00:36:474 (4,5) - this part is exactly the same as 00:34:895 (1,2,3) - echoing 'with this heart' you're right, I miss the concern here, it is fine
9. 00:44:764 - You can use red ticks in normal... the chorus starts somewhere here on the red tick...unless your going by the beat D: everybody says that, we need a certain break after a spinner
10. 00:51:474 (3,1) - its a bit of symmetry which makes it looks ugly imo yeah, but I have to stack the sliderending otherwise I would have a overlay
11. 01:08:448 (3,4) - blanket PWEZ looks good to me :3
12. 00:57:395 (2) - This isn't centred between 00:56:211 (3,3) - these...it's off correct, looked at y-coordinate, they are on same height now! thankyou ^^
13. 01:03:316 (3) - slider disagree
14. 01:04:895 (3) - ^ ^
15. 01:06:474 (2) - ^ ^
16. 01:13:974 (3) - 1/4 slider please and 01:14:764 - circle here nah

Hard

1. throughout the whole song...the map goes by the beat...and the beat usually changes only slightly throughout a song...so your basically repeating the beat for the WHOLE 1:15 min...i hope you will change this I think this difficulty has a lot of variety, fun and complexity, so that it is still entertaining by only following the drums, well, everybody has his own taste
2. 00:14:369 (5,7) - blanket off I don't find a problem... it seriously wonders me that your are the only one after tons of mods that encounters that
3. 00:38:843 (2,3,4,5) - See...this part could be much more interesting can't change much :/
4. Fix Preview Point as well
   Pretty much fine diff thankyou ^^

GL with ur map thankyou! good luck with yours too!

geodoomcraft wrote:

Hello, doing M4M from Dono027's queue good boy, Dono

[Normal]

1. 00:12:790 (3) - imo the (3) here can be changed to a slider so it fits with the "mhh..". I want to point the voice out, so I start with the voice
2. 00:45:158 - I think a circle should go here. It will work better with the rhythm. I knooow! But I need to have a certain break after a spinner ._. kills be aswell cuz it would be so good
3. 00:53:843 (1) - I feel a slider will do better here then a circle, will work better with rhythm. not sure, rather going with the drums

[Hard]

1. 00:41:211 (1) - imo this is kind of not needed, the vocal from 00:41:211 - ends at 00:41:606 -, maybe make a slider up to there then put a circle at 00:42:001 - not following voice here
2. 00:50:158 (4) - This is probably just me but it sounds like its not needed here. the cool thing here is that we are following two things in once (that weird alarm and the drums) and it works totally for me, one of the coolest parts in that difficulty for me :3
3. 00:50:685 (6) - ^ same thing. I Think you should extend 00:50:290 (5) - to (6) and get rid of the circle on (6) nah

If there are any questions about my mod pls ask I'm fine!
Good luck with the map! thankyouu! :3

geodoomcraft wrote:

Hello, doing M4M from Dono027's queue

[D27's Begineer]

1. 00:24:632 (5,1) - I feel a reverse slider might work here to get 00:25:027 - in with the beat. Fixed.
   
2. 00:32:527 (1) - I feel the extra red curve on this is not needed. I prefer with this.
   
3. 00:42:001 - Maybe add a circle here to keep consistency with 00:38:053 (4) -, And it also adds a bit on the vocal because that's where the vocalist says "To". This is a beginner diff. We are after a spinner, so I give time to the player after this.
   
4. 00:44:369 (1,2) - i feel like a slider could be used here instead of two circles to add to the vocal. For diversity, i added 2 circles, a map with only sliders will be...
   
5. 01:09:632 - I feel like the drum set of hit sounds could be used here. The actual hitsounds sound good, and drum hitsound are really heavy.
   
6. 01:13:974 - This one spot feels like its missing a note or something like that, maybe add a circle here.

I know, but I want to keep this. I don't want to make the end too hard I prefer just keep this.

If there are any questions about my mod pls ask
Good luck with the map!

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Kuki wrote:

osu! needs more generic pop music

wasinkingspeedq wrote:

M4M from my Q / *O* Stars 101

General
fine. good c:

Normal
00:24:632 (3) - Blanket with 00:24:237 (2) - I suggest you move the center of slider (3) up 2 space I don't get your concern
00:45:158 - This line is empty, you can add something here break after spinner
00:50:685 (1) - Missing Finish ? try to add here. I think it's fine correct
00:56:211 (3) - Again the blanket doesn't fit with 00:55:816 (2) - , but if you don't mind about blanket it's ok you are actually right that it isn't blanket that well... but still it kind of looks good to me. xD
00:57:790 (3) - ^

Hard
00:23:843 (5) - Spacing error between 00:23:448 (4) - check this right, fixed!
00:27:395 (3) - This slider makes sure you wanna make these shape the same with 00:26:606 (2) - right ?, but I think it doesn't fit here, when you moved slider overlaps with 00:26:606 (2) - for example move slider(3) a bit down it's fine. I have no idea how you did this in your example without breakin distance snap, but I would keep mine anyway :3
00:49:895 (3) - 00:51:474 (3) - Missing clap for the first one no because the drums aren't followed on that part but I added a clap at the second one
00:57:001 (7) - Can Finish hs yeah, added

That's all for this map rank it soon guy :D I try sooo hard! thankyou

Rendyindo wrote:

Here, take my 14 stars! Hopefully it's very useful. thankyou! of course it is! ♥♥♥
I think this should ranked soon me too! ♥

Aihuro wrote:

Hey! M4M request through PM.
Well, here goes nothing.

D27's Beginner:

1. 00:02:527 (3,1) - I don't really like this overlap here, maybe try Ctrl+H And place him here: X: 132 Y: 160. I think it will also improve the flow. (It's also a quick fix, just have to fix the DS)
   That's not an overlap, when I see the 1, the 3 have disappear, so, that's not an overlap.
   
2. 00:15:158 (2,4) - Same here, please stack (4) on (2)'s tail to prevent from overlapping with each other.
   Nope, same reason.
   
3. 00:26:211 (6,1) - ^ Stack them properly please.
   Fixed
   
4. 00:32:527 (1,3) - These two sliders are touching each other's head, I highly suggest you do something like this instead: http://puu.sh/mkBof/d46bbc075a.jpg
   Fixed.
   
5. 00:45:158 (2,4) - Same as I mentioned above, stack.
   No.
   
6. 01:00:948 (4) - I think Ctrl+H Will work better since it will prevent overlapping with 00:57:001 (1) - .
   When I see the 4, the 1 have disappear, so That's not an overlap.
   
7. 01:14:369 (4,5) - I didn't saw you using this kind of pattern through out the whole mapset, maybe remove (4) and add a note here: 01:14:369 - .
   During all the map I used 2/1 & 4/1 beats. I made the end a bit harder for the player.
   
8. Overall, nice diff! Just the stacking that kept bugging me. Thanks ! But that isn't overlaps & problems of stacks x)

wasinkingspeedq wrote:

M4M from my Q / *O* Stars 101

D27's Beginner
00:08:843 (2) - Consider this circle is too closer (3) than (1), make it good by move circle(2) to X:180 Y:252
They're the same circles xDDDD 1 is horizontal & 3 is vertical. that's all x)

00:16:737 (3) - ^ X:220 Y:168
That will break my blanket.

00:26:211 (6) - Begin with the new vocal maybe you can NC here like 00:29:369 (1) -
Fixed.

00:50:685 (1) - In my opinion overlap with 00:48:316 (4) - prettier than your own, when you did it don't forget to fix distance since 00:52:264 (2) -
We can't see the 4 & 1 at the same moment x), so I keep this.

01:15:158 (5) - Can NC
I keep this.

That's all for this map rank it soon guy :D

THANKS GUYS !

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wasinkingspeedq wrote:

M4M from my Q / *O* Stars 101

General
fine.

2222' Easy
00:21:080 (3) - I think make this slider to be a curve slider for better flow I will try to make a difference at this moment
00:25:816 (1) - Spacing error here I can moved this slider please fix it Is okay
00:42:001 (1) - You can add "Finish" hs at the end of spin ok :3
01:09:632 (1) - Missing Finish ok
01:10:422 - 01:12:001 - 01:13:580 - Missing Clap Why not

That's all for this map rank it soon guy :D Yeah :3

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Quack wrote:

yo yo m4m

[Beginner]
I don't think anything's wrong with it, just a subjective thing is that I don't really like some of the flow of the sliders, for example 00:00:159 (1,2) - 1 into 2 and 01:00:948 (4,1) - 4 into 1, if you see what I mean. The flow is slightly off imo, an extremely nit picky subjective opinion.

I'm a beginner mapper, so I don't know what is flow, so I searched , Now I know, Now the beginning is better, thanks !

As you can see I love flow but it may not be significant enough at times to warrant a fix, but hey flowy map is nice map. Good luck!

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Quack wrote:

yo yo m4m

[General]
All OK. gewd. c:

[Normal]
00:24:237 (2,3) - Improve blanket yeah, did some work on that
00:32:527 (1,2,3) - Consider changing up this section to make it flow better (looking specifically at 3) totally changed it up
00:45:158 (1) - Should be a circle or something here, there's a really emphasized beat in the song. you're probably the 15th person to say that, but there is a damn spinner and I need to make a certain pause
00:46:737 (4,5) - Flow into 5 is a little off. I don't think so
00:48:316 (1,2) - ^ seems also pretty fine to me

[Hard]
I wouldn't change much except for some flow lol. A few places in here where the flow could be improved a bit. gotta look a thousand times over it, k, thankyou ^^

As you can see I love flow but it may not be significant enough at times to warrant a fix, but hey flowy map is nice map. Good luck! thanks ^.^

HKrecords_ wrote:

Hello. M4M from this queue t/402464/start=0

[Beginner]

It's OK. I would like to change 1/1 reverse sliders like this one: 00:16:737 (3) - to 2/1 sliders.
Umm... That can be a good idea, but I like patterns like this. I think 1/1 sliders here make a bit more energy on the slow diff.

Good luck mapping

HKrecords_ wrote:

Hello. M4M from this queue t/402464/start=0

Normal

00:28:974 (1,2,3) - I dont really like this flow. it is exactly the one before just rotated, I guess
00:45:158 - You missed a note i think. trust me, 20 people already said that, I finally will do it because I start getting annoyed xDDD YOU DID IT! xD

Hard

00:41:211 (1) - I think this slider can look better. Consider using 2 white points on each side. ugh... gonna keep it, I like it ^^
00:52:658 - I really wanted to click something here xD I know what you mean but I didn't map any downbeat like that so I will leave it like that
01:15:158 (1) - Make it louder focus should be on the words, not on the hitsounds ^^

Good luck mapping thankyouuuuuuuu ♥

bigjoe97 wrote:

M4M

Beginner

Nothing specific here, but you might want to rework the repeating sliders like at 00:16:737 (3) so that the hitcircle doesn't overlap with the repeat arrow.
00:16:737 (3,4,1) - I will not change moments like this because that will break the line flow.

Might need to remap with higher SV, but that shouldn't be too hard for a beginner diff. Sorry No. Use 0.5 SV is my desicion, sorry, and that's a beginner made for begginners (P.S I've a beginner friend and he got difficulties to play this, sooo. xD )

1. Oh! I see that you have added a "moon" hitcircle! It does fit with the background, haha. But you should know that when adding a skin into a beatmap, you need a complete set of skin elements. To see what to include, check this wiki. But in this mapset, here are the things you have to add:
   
   1. approachcircle.png
   2. hitcircleoverlay.png
   3. lighting.png
   4. Add SliderBorder : 255,255,255 under [Colours] and after the combocolours values, in every .osu file. It should look like this.
   You can take the missing elements from the original osu! skin if you don't have your own. Click here to get the skin template!
2. You need to remove the unused transparency in your lyrics image files, otherwise it's against the Ranking Criteria unless you have a good reason. It shouldn't have problems to the SB since everything in your SB is anchored in the center, so it's safe to crop them.

1. 00:16:737 (3) - Essaye de jouer avec la blanket 00:15:158 (2,3) parce qu'elle est un peu laide pour moi. Sinon, je te suggère de bouger le slider vers la queue de 00:15:158 (2) -, donc quelque part x:239 y:243. N'oublie pas de bouger les objets suivants.
2. 00:38:843 (1) - Je ne vois pas l'usage de mettre un spinner ici, il va très mal avec la musique parce qu'il ne va pas bien. Ma seule suggestion est de mapper cette partie avec des cercles et des sliders. Essaye ça:
   
   Rythme

   

1. 00:04:895 (5,1) - This is subjective, but one of them can be a different shape instead of being the same. This is because in both parts, there are not the same melody, so having the same pattern doesn't work, for me.
2. 00:45:948 to 01:07:658 - The clap pattern doesn't work very well. You basically added a clap on every object, and that doesn't sound good. What I did suggest is clap on 3rd and 4th white ticks, but I decided to add one on each 3rd white tick, so the downbeat, because it highlights the drum that goes high. If you don't know what I'm talking about, here's an image of what I want to suggest:
   
   Measure

   
   This represents a measure. What I circled is the tick I want you to add a clap whenever there's an object on.
   And suddenly, after 00:55:422 the hitsounds just dies, lel. There is no claps nor anything, so you can do what's above.

1. 00:00:159 (1) - 00:09:632 (1) - I think those objects should also have a clap, if I follow 00:03:316 (1) and 00:06:474 (1) correctly.
2. 00:06:474 (1,3) - 00:23:448 (3,2) - These kind of stacks occurs frequently in this difficulty. To elaborate, you make a stack between one beat, and it's usually a circle you put in-between. The speed is short, so I wouldn't recommend as they get a little invisible. That could possibly only me, but I would avoid that.
3. 00:21:080 (2,1) - The whistles on the sliders are not sounding great, and they feel random, so maybe remove them?
4. 00:45:158 to 01:09:632 - I honestly don't get your clap pattern in this part. It sometimes gets inconsistent, and I'm not sure what does it follow. In my opinion, if you added the claps on the middle white tick on each measure (downbeat), that would sound perfect because it gets the high drum like 00:45:158 (1) - 00:48:316 (1) - other than the rest since they sound low. Here are some example if you need more:
   
   1. 00:45:158 (1) -
   2. 00:46:737 (5) - head
   3. 00:48:316 (1) - head
   4. 00:49:895 (3) - and many more.
   So, I suggest you redo the hitsounds in the chorus, but with what I said.
5. 00:58:580 (1,2,3) - I'd rather not repeat the same pattern and flow as 00:55:422 (1,2,3) since it tends to be boring to repeat a third time.

1. I think you should lower the AR to 6. 7.5 feels too fast for the song.
2. 00:00:159 to 00:12:001 - You seem to not add claps on downbeats like in Normal. Your choice to remove the claps in Normal or add them in Hard, but try to be consistent throughout the mapset.
3. 00:12:790 (1) - 00:25:422 (4) - I recommend you avoid such stacks. The players will have to react fast because the rhythm gets sudden by 00:12:395 (3) and they can missed the shot. You can try this pattern instead:
   
   Pattern

   
4. 00:52:264 (5) - 00:58:580 (5) - Remove the finish? I don't hear any crash.
5. 00:44:369 to 01:07:658 - The kiai section has some new combo inconsistency. Try adding one on every two measures.

sheela901 wrote:

Hey again, Prismetical! You requested a recheck, so here it is! And no kudosu.

Gonna look at the General things later.

[Normal]

1. 00:00:159 (1) - 00:09:632 (1) - I think those objects should also have a clap, if I follow 00:03:316 (1) and 00:06:474 (1) correctly. correct
2. 00:06:474 (1,3) - 00:23:448 (3,2) - These kind of stacks occurs frequently in this difficulty. To elaborate, you make a stack between one beat, and it's usually a circle you put in-between. The speed is short, so I wouldn't recommend as they get a little invisible. That could possibly only me, but I would avoid that. i actually like them a lot, i dont know, i could lower the AR then ._. would that be better?
3. 00:21:080 (2,1) - The whistles on the sliders are not sounding great, and they feel random, so maybe remove them? done
4. 00:45:158 to 01:09:632 - I honestly don't get your clap pattern in this part. It sometimes gets inconsistent, and I'm not sure what does it follow. In my opinion, if you added the claps on the middle white tick on each measure (downbeat), that would sound perfect because it gets the high drum like 00:45:158 (1) - 00:48:316 (1) - other than the rest since they sound low. Here are some example if you need more:
   
   1. 00:45:158 (1) -
   2. 00:46:737 (5) - head
   3. 00:48:316 (1) - head
   4. 00:49:895 (3) - and many more. all done, and many more
   So, I suggest you redo the hitsounds in the chorus, but with what I said.
5. 00:58:580 (1,2,3) - I'd rather not repeat the same pattern and flow as 00:55:422 (1,2,3) since it tends to be boring to repeat a third time. but it is just on a time period of 5 seconds, is it that important?

[Hard]

1. I think you should lower the AR to 6. 7.5 feels too fast for the song. yup
2. 00:00:159 to 00:12:001 - You seem to not add claps on downbeats like in Normal. Your choice to remove the claps in Normal or add them in Hard, but try to be consistent throughout the mapset. gotta add here, gonna take a while till i figured out what fits
3. 00:12:790 (1) - 00:25:422 (4) - I recommend you avoid such stacks. The players will have to react fast because the rhythm gets sudden by 00:12:395 (3) and they can missed the shot. You can try this pattern instead: both changed and even avoided an overlap with this
   
   Pattern

   
4. 00:52:264 (5) - 00:58:580 (5) - Remove the finish? I don't hear any crash. right
5. 00:44:369 to 01:07:658 - The kiai section has some new combo inconsistency. Try adding one on every two measures. i dont understand ._. can you try to explain it better to me? c:

There's still room for improvements, so this recheck may not be enough. But I don't think there are major issues, and this mapset actually gets better (if I remember correctly what was before lel...)! Try to catch a BN for a check! i'm trying for 1 month, but i'll work harder It could greatly improve this mapset, I think. If you need more assistance, you can always catch me. thanks, boo c:

Also, this mod didn't get a kudosu, but you did apply the mod, so... lel. sorry, just a human being ._. kudos given xd