Michael Wong - Tong Hua

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Topic Starter
Karen
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015年11月29日 at 23:04:26

Artist: Michael Wong
Title: Tong Hua
Tags: Guang Liang Fairytale 光芒 Guang Mang Xinely
BPM: 63
Filesize: 7142kb
Play Time: 03:56
Difficulties Available:
  1. Angel <3 (2.35 stars, 339 notes)
  2. Easy <3 (1.49 stars, 215 notes)
  3. Normal <3 (1.85 stars, 308 notes)


Download: Michael Wong - Tong Hua
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Dedicated to Xinely



Storyboard - Xinely (Lyrics written by me)
Xinely
First <3
Gaia
wew this renchon ( ‾◡‾) ♥
KittyAdventure
Michael Wong? Why Michael Wong?
Good luck~
Topic Starter
Karen

gokugohan12468 wrote:

Michael Wong? Why Michael Wong?
Good luck~
then what it should be? o.o
Lily Bread
BG真好看
liangv587
秀恩爱死得快
KittyAdventure
My mistake, that have in picture album!
Anyway, add Guang Liang Fairytale in tags

Here the website, baka:
http://www.xymusic.com/artist/detail/id/2
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=k2L0d31BvZ8
Flask
sad story
liangv587
前排呲呲
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Topic Starter
Karen
Thanks a lot for the timing
and added some tags, about the metadata i'll confirm it later~
Xinely
chuchuchu

19:15 Xinely: btw before u forget
19:15 Xinely: no use custom combo colour?
19:16 Karen: nani
19:16 Xinely: waaa
19:16 Karen: waa
19:16 Karen: forgot
19:16 Xinely: waaa
19:16 Xinely: madaha
19:17 Karen: waa
19:17 Karen: im 马大哈
19:17 Xinely: waaa
19:17 Xinely: tell me when ready
19:19 Karen: any suggestion of combo color? :D
19:19 Karen: wanna see my angel's advice
19:19 Xinely: waaa.. lemme try make
19:20 Xinely: [http://puu.sh/lBBB0/ca726f4124.png maybe this] will send the code if needed
19:20 Karen: waa
19:21 Karen: waa good
19:21 Xinely: waaa
19:22 Karen: waa
19:22 Karen: made some changes on your advice
19:22 Xinely: waaa
19:22 Xinely: hao
19:22 Karen: i prefer light colors :D
19:22 Xinely: waaa i just make them similar with bg
19:23 Xinely: waa chuchu me too but if light color used for stroke in your lyrics, will hard to see your yellow color :(
19:24 Karen: waa
19:24 Xinely: chuchu
19:24 Karen: chuchu
19:24 Karen: done
19:24 Karen: irc mod?
19:24 Xinely: en
19:24 *Xinely is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/813909 Michael Wong - Tong Hua [Easy <3]]
19:25 Karen: <3
19:25 Xinely: 00:00:481 - unused greenline, should be removed since has redline in same time
19:26 Karen: wa sure
19:27 Karen: too shy to see my own handwriting >//<
19:27 Xinely: baka baka >//<
19:28 Xinely: asdf my internet even cant update
19:28 Xinely: 00:15:910 (2) - i see 0,93x spacing here.. intentional or your bakaness?
19:29 Xinely: 00:40:621 (6) - whistle? piano is loud here
19:29 Karen: my bakaness ;-;
19:30 Xinely: 00:52:527 (4) - maybe 1,12x spacing here too
19:31 Karen: ok applied to all diffs
19:31 Karen: okay
19:33 Xinely: 01:26:058 (2) - somehow the blanket looks a bit off
19:34 Xinely: mean like http://puu.sh/lBC9S/44654a1149.jpg , just a bit though
19:35 Xinely: 01:42:822 (1,3) - swap NC for consistency? suddenly NC after 1 stanza there
19:35 Xinely: 01:49:871 (1) - add finish on head for emphasize the drum as well
19:35 Karen: hao
19:35 Karen: changed ><
19:37 Xinely: 01:51:194 (2) - just suggestion altho not related with your hitsound pattern but whistle here for emphasize that loud piano?
19:37 Xinely: 02:05:312 (2) - same as above if u apply it
19:38 Karen: 好的
19:38 Xinely: 02:05:753 (3) - a bit nazi but your blanket with (5) looks off http://puu.sh/lBCkc/fd6d5d16b5.jpg
19:40 Karen: fixed
19:41 Xinely: 02:28:694 (5,6) - just my taste, i think instead of making sliders totally straight, you can up the tail of (5) a bit to 上面 and tail of (6) a bit to 下面 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4035790
19:43 Karen: {http://puu.sh/lBCwv/11105e9836.jpg changed to this}
19:43 Karen: eww im baka
19:43 Xinely: become totally go to shang mian xia mian waaaa
19:43 Xinely: dont worry i love baka chuchu <3
19:44 Karen: chuchuchu ><
19:46 Xinely: 02:48:106 (3) - aaa a bit off blanket with (5).. i think (3) for 296,120 would make it better
19:47 Karen: yea sure <3
19:48 Xinely: 02:46:373 - aa what is this greenline?
19:48 Karen: waa im baka
19:48 Xinely: 03:13:285 - too
19:49 Karen: fixed :3
19:50 Karen: 03:48:523 - this too
19:50 Karen: fixed either
19:50 Xinely: baka baka
19:50 Xinely: 03:12:812 (7) - instead of drum whistle in head, i would say soft default finish because that crash cymbal
19:51 Karen: ok
19:52 Xinely: 03:32:223 (4) - just my taste again but i hear loud piano so add whistle in repeat?
19:53 Xinely: 03:48:523 - asdf baka remove greenline, cant double with redline
19:54 Karen: there is a clap on it
19:54 Xinely: yep clap + whistle i mean ><
19:54 Karen: waa
19:54 Karen: umm ok
19:54 Karen: and that greenline removed
19:54 Xinely: and that unsnapped too?
19:55 Xinely: 03:48:579 -
19:55 Karen: havnt checked unrankable things so many baka isssues ><
19:55 Xinely: baka like you
19:55 Karen: fixed
19:55 Xinely: wa easy done
19:55 *Xinely is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/813910 Michael Wong - Tong Hua [Normal <3]]
19:56 Xinely: 00:01:814 - i would say add note too here, still can hear the piano
19:56 Karen: hmm i didnt follow that piano here
19:57 Karen: 00:04:870 - you can see i didnt follow this too
19:57 Karen: umm but inconsistent
19:57 Xinely: wa hao
19:57 Xinely: 00:03:975 (4) - maybe keep use 1,0x? bpm only decreased 3 here
19:58 Karen: changed here like i did in Easy
19:58 Karen: hao
19:58 Xinely: 00:16:792 (1) - just my baka eyes kan dao this.. 0,94x? :D
19:59 Xinely: 00:21:650 (4) - and that 1,07x
19:59 Karen: fixed
20:00 Xinely: 00:34:388 (1) - kill my eyes, see 1,06x
20:01 Xinely: 00:37:486 (4) - and here too if u want to fix
20:01 Karen: how to kill your cute eyes
20:01 Xinely: kiss them chuchuchu waaa
20:01 Karen: ahh this ds change due to bpm change
20:02 Karen: dont want to change this
20:02 Xinely: yep still noticed that.. so i write "if u want" xD
20:02 *Karen kisses
20:02 *Xinely dies
20:04 Karen: <3
20:04 Xinely: chuchu
20:04 Karen: chuuuu
20:04 Xinely: 01:43:925 (9) - here is your cute blanket ;_;
20:05 Xinely: *where
20:06 Xinely: btw related to hitsounds should apply to all diffs, too lazy to say again but i never lazy to say i love you
20:06 Karen: waa fixed
20:06 Karen: yea ofc applied to all diffs
20:06 Karen: and i love you
20:06 Xinely: i love you too chuchu <3
20:06 Karen: chuchu <33
20:07 Xinely: 02:20:753 (5) - very nazi, 1 grid right for better blanket
20:08 Karen: 好
20:08 Xinely: 02:38:841 (6) - wa that 1,06x next spacing
20:09 Karen: fixeddd
20:10 Xinely: 02:46:341 (1,2) - btw make them more symmetrical?
20:11 Karen: hao
20:13 Xinely: 03:26:047 (2) - 440,196 if you gonna make them symmetric each other, if not then ignore this one
20:13 Xinely: 03:39:282 (1) - maybe there is an error in this slider?
20:15 Xinely: 03:46:342 (1) - how about add finish for emphasize the music? (i forgot to say before aaa)
20:15 Xinely: waa normal hao le
20:16 Karen: all fixed <3
20:16 Karen: arigatou
20:16 Xinely: wa hard now
20:16 *Xinely is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/813908 Michael Wong - Tong Hua [Angel <3]]
20:18 Xinely: 00:40:192 (3) - just nazi, for design how about move to 76,288 so looked a bit more 中心 between (1) and (2)
20:20 Karen: 00:39:309 (1,3,5) - but i wanted to make a straight line here QAQ
20:20 Karen: 00:39:764 (2,3,5) - *
20:20 Xinely: oh hao
20:20 Xinely: then 00:40:192 (3) - 1 grid left to make it in zhong xin lol
20:22 Karen: hmm so 麻烦 here
20:22 Xinely: wawa
20:22 Xinely: im ma fan
20:23 Xinely: i guess nope for hard.. looks cute as the mapper :D
moonlightleaf
[General]

这红线吓尿了

没有改这玩意儿 -> AudioLeadIn: 0 (1500推荐)

SB: asd/last 建议 y下移30 (果然还是板子笔好,可以写字,鼠标写不动

[Easy]

00:15:910 (2) - 删

00:54:732 (6) - ^

00:21:223 note

03:50:081 ^

00:38:855 (3,4) - 建议换单滑条

01:04:017 (1,2) - ^

01:51:194 (2,3) - ^

03:25:165 (4,5) - ^

00:47:186 (2) - 这00:47:911结束

01:28:705 (4) - F5会碰到HP条

01:47:234 (5) - ^

03:00:018 (8) - ^

[Normal]

00:32:274 (3) - 加大DS overlap ?

00:32:274 (3,4) - 我觉得还是单滑条好

00:47:911 note?

01:59:576 (4,1) - 嘛还是吐槽下 我一般往3上走..

02:03:988 (1) - 略高

02:19:650 (3) - 可删(话+里,中间没声

02:30:459 (4) - ctrl+ghj 那个样子比较顺,也不会太高 x|359y|140 ,234没正三角

03:02:223 (4,5) - 乍一看果然没blanket

03:24:944 (7) - 删吧 有点难了这边

[Hard]

00:15:910 (2) - 删

00:47:911 可note 或滑条end

00:51:631 (3,4) - ctrl+g

01:04:017 (1) - 正常是在5上

01:19:660 note

01:23:852 (4,5,6) - 没法传图到官网,试试46ctrl+g然后56ctrl+g

02:02:003 (4) - DS

02:17:223 (6,7,8) - 一条直线我觉得容易些,而且你没NC 这有点突然

02:58:253 (3) - F5 , HP touch

03:21:635 (1) - ^

03:34:871 (5,1) - 逼死强迫症没blanket

03:50:081 note ?
Streliteela
Hi~m4m here~:3
挺喜欢这首歌的,所以我摸得详细一点,可能带有一些个人见解你酌情参考

[Meli<3]

  • 爷爷这diff名第一眼看成Mei<3,瞬间基情满满有木有2333(逃
  1. 00:13:366 (5) - 这个滑条有点太躺了,角度有点尴尬imo。两种方案:
    1. 固定selection center然后顺时针旋转6度重新微调blanket
    2. Ctrl+J这个滑条并与00:12:905 (4) - blanket,重新调整00:13:366 (5,1) - 之间blanket
  2. 00:30:933 (3) - 这里补个note吧,因为前面00:16:792 (3) - 这个地方类似节奏你是跟了vocal下过一个note的
  3. 00:33:131 (2,4) - 重度强迫症表示如果这里也blanket的话会挺好看233
  4. 00:38:427 (4) - 这里和前面有个不同的地方是vocal在这里突然转高。个人觉得如果依然保持着和前面一样的间距的话有些表现力不足。你这样摆试一下:
  5. 00:56:536 (5) - 其实我觉得完全可以把这个note删掉。首先是因为我觉得你这一段确实是有在跟钢琴(比如00:47:186 (2) - 这里后面蓝线没有note大概就是因为跟了钢琴的考虑),所以这个地方跟钢琴也是合理的;而这个note的位置完全是只有vocal而没有钢琴的,并且下一个钢琴的重音00:56:991 (1) - 这个地方其实相比于前面的音来讲还蛮重的,因此我个人觉得把这个钢琴重音前面空一下然后突出这个钢琴音会更加有表现力一些。其次,00:55:173 (4,5,1) - 这三个objects的位置其实蛮尴尬的,如果维持现状让00:54:732 (3,5) - stack的话,这三个不在一条线上的东西看起来特别不舒服;如果让这三个放一条线了的话stack又不好了。所以我建议干脆就删了这个note,然后你可以考虑稍稍增大一下00:55:173 (3,1) - 之间的ds,个人觉得其实现在这样也还好,不用大调
  6. 01:03:128 (6) - 移到x504|y246,现在这个样子flow稍稍有点尴尬
  7. 01:58:694 (3) - 微移到x214|y146, 01:58:253 (2,3) - 在一条直线上比较舒服
  8. 02:01:341 (3,4,5) - 这里为何看着不等距的样子?微调一下吧
  9. 02:05:532 (4) - 隐约觉得这条蓝线是有音的,所以可以考虑把02:05:312 (3) - 换成一个1/4的折返滑条
  10. 02:13:694 (4) - 可以试试ctrl+g这个,这样能把02:14:576 (1) - 这个重音跳出去而且flow也挺舒服
  11. 02:25:165 (1,2,3,4) - 这里的flow和排列都感觉有点怪怪的,原因我觉得是02:26:488 (2,3,4) - 这几个的弧度有点太偏上了而本身02:25:165 (1) - 的使用率先造成了一个非常大的向下flow。所以一个最小改动的方法是这样:把02:26:709 (3) - 这个note放在02:26:488 (2) - 稍稍偏下的位置做一个微小的下降flow做缓冲,然后02:26:929 (4) - 摆在02:26:709 (3) - 右上做一个向上的flow。我觉得这样就可以解决flow问题了,排列也不至于看着很生硬。如图:
  12. 02:59:135 (4,5,6) - 这里的曲调是一个逐渐升高的趋势,而排列上却走了下降我觉得不太好(即使02:58:253 (3,4,5,6) - 是想做个平行四边形pattern但事实也并没有做好这个平行啊2333)所以建议你这么摆试试:
  13. 03:10:165 (5,1) - 这两个还是建议blanket better
  14. 03:50:081 - 我觉得还是在这里加点什么东西比较好(比如滑条),空空的感觉有点奇怪imo
[Normal<3]

  • 奇怪我aimod出bug了ds一直报错……所以ds就没查不过感觉应该没问题嗯
  1. 00:52:527 (4) - 微移到 x190|y103,感觉之前那样不太对称
  2. 02:11:047 (1,2) - Blanket有一点点偏差
    其它没什么问题,棒棒哒~
[Easy<3]
  1. 01:44:146 (2) - 移到x140|y319做个对称?
    其它也挺好的owo

嗯就这样吧~~送星支持~~
祝早日rank~ :)
Shad0w1and
整体没找到啥问题。
[Meli]
00:13:366 (5) - 可以包好点,顺带避免overlap
00:14:534 (1) - 注意前后DS,我都读错了
00:21:650 (1) - 个人倾向
00:41:503 (6) - 作为一个主难度我觉得当vocal很突出的时候不应该放过,哭字这里被放过了,我建议是放反转滑条,并给nc(这里没钢琴要不就删掉空着)
00:59:599 (4,2) - 可以包好点
01:02:680 (5) - 435,201
01:15:910 (2) - 397,358
02:02:003 (4) - 容易读错,注意02:01:341 (3) - 前后DS和间距
02:16:341 (5) - 似乎没包好
02:17:223 (6,7,8) - DS很难读,或者给nc
03:13:473 (4,5,6,7) - ^

e和n做的很安全,没啥问题
顺带我的EZ做好了求recheck lol
t/319541
Topic Starter
Karen

moonlightleaf wrote:

[General]

这红线吓尿了

没有改这玩意儿 -> AudioLeadIn: 0 (1500推荐) 这玩意儿没用了

SB: asd/last 建议 y下移30 (果然还是板子笔好,可以写字,鼠标写不动

[Easy]

00:15:910 (2) - 删

00:54:732 (6) - ^
这里有钢琴
00:21:223 note
只跟钢琴,不跟人声
03:50:081 ^
^
00:38:855 (3,4) - 建议换单滑条
00:39:309 - 这个音很强
01:04:017 (1,2) - ^
有道理但是没啥区别啊。懒得改
01:51:194 (2,3) - ^
连续滑条太多了
03:25:165 (4,5) - ^
^
00:47:186 (2) - 这00:47:911结束
不跟人声
01:28:705 (4) - F5会碰到HP条
不出界就行
01:47:234 (5) - ^
^
03:00:018 (8) - ^
^
[Normal]

00:32:274 (3) - 加大DS overlap ?
减小了DS
00:32:274 (3,4) - 我觉得还是单滑条好
nope
00:47:911 note?
太难了
01:59:576 (4,1) - 嘛还是吐槽下 我一般往3上走..
你书的队但是偶像也可以尝试一下这样的
02:03:988 (1) - 略高
不出界就行
02:19:650 (3) - 可删(话+里,中间没声
这个note是跟着“里”
02:30:459 (4) - ctrl+ghj 那个样子比较顺,也不会太高 x|359y|140 ,234没正三角
这样的话不就变成你吐槽的02:30:459 (4,5) - 这个了吗
03:02:223 (4,5) - 乍一看果然没blanket

03:24:944 (7) - 删吧 有点难了这边

[Hard]

00:15:910 (2) - 删
hard就跟这样的音了
00:47:911 可note 或滑条end
这种人声不明显
00:51:631 (3,4) - ctrl+g
太难了
01:04:017 (1) - 正常是在5上

01:19:660 note
这里还不激烈,没到跟这种vocal的地方
01:23:852 (4,5,6) - 没法传图到官网,试试46ctrl+g然后56ctrl+g
有点难
02:02:003 (4) - DS

02:17:223 (6,7,8) - 一条直线我觉得容易些,而且你没NC 这有点突然
这是下一个kiai的开始,理应难一点
02:58:253 (3) - F5 , HP touch
不出界没事
03:21:635 (1) - ^

03:34:871 (5,1) - 逼死强迫症没blanket
这也要blanket太难了
03:50:081 note ?
不想

Streliteela wrote:

Hi~m4m here~:3
挺喜欢这首歌的,所以我摸得详细一点,可能带有一些个人见解你酌情参考

[Meli<3]

  • 爷爷这diff名第一眼看成Mei<3,瞬间基情满满有木有2333(逃 那是你跟神麻婆Mei的感情太深
  1. 00:13:366 (5) - 这个滑条有点太躺了,角度有点尴尬imo。两种方案:
    1. 固定selection center然后顺时针旋转6度重新微调blanket
    2. Ctrl+J这个滑条并与00:12:905 (4) - blanket,重新调整00:13:366 (5,1) - 之间blanket
  2. 00:30:933 (3) - 这里补个note吧,因为前面00:16:792 (3) - 这个地方类似节奏你是跟了vocal下过一个note的
  3. 00:33:131 (2,4) - 重度强迫症表示如果这里也blanket的话会挺好看233
  4. 00:38:427 (4) - 这里和前面有个不同的地方是vocal在这里突然转高。个人觉得如果依然保持着和前面一样的间距的话有些表现力不足。你这样摆试一下:hmm想了一会觉得还是不想改,虽然这里vocal比较强但是我不太喜欢跟vocal,而且那样有些难读,这里相对还是比较平和的
  5. 00:56:536 (5) - 其实我觉得完全可以把这个note删掉。首先是因为我觉得你这一段确实是有在跟钢琴(比如00:47:186 (2) - 这里后面蓝线没有note大概就是因为跟了钢琴的考虑),所以这个地方跟钢琴也是合理的;而这个note的位置完全是只有vocal而没有钢琴的,并且下一个钢琴的重音00:56:991 (1) - 这个地方其实相比于前面的音来讲还蛮重的,因此我个人觉得把这个钢琴重音前面空一下然后突出这个钢琴音会更加有表现力一些。其次,00:55:173 (4,5,1) - 这三个objects的位置其实蛮尴尬的,如果维持现状让00:54:732 (3,5) - stack的话,这三个不在一条线上的东西看起来特别不舒服;如果让这三个放一条线了的话stack又不好了。所以我建议干脆就删了这个note,然后你可以考虑稍稍增大一下00:55:173 (3,1) - 之间的ds,个人觉得其实现在这样也还好,不用大调 李菊福啊
  6. 01:03:128 (6) - 移到x504|y246,现在这个样子flow稍稍有点尴尬
  7. 01:58:694 (3) - 微移到x214|y146, 01:58:253 (2,3) - 在一条直线上比较舒服
  8. 02:01:341 (3,4,5) - 这里为何看着不等距的样子?微调一下吧
  9. 02:05:532 (4) - 隐约觉得这条蓝线是有音的,所以可以考虑把02:05:312 (3) - 换成一个1/4的折返滑条 感觉即使有也是十分不明显,还是不跟了
  10. 02:13:694 (4) - 可以试试ctrl+g这个,这样能把02:14:576 (1) - 这个重音跳出去而且flow也挺舒服
  11. 02:25:165 (1,2,3,4) - 这里的flow和排列都感觉有点怪怪的,原因我觉得是02:26:488 (2,3,4) - 这几个的弧度有点太偏上了而本身02:25:165 (1) - 的使用率先造成了一个非常大的向下flow。所以一个最小改动的方法是这样:把02:26:709 (3) - 这个note放在02:26:488 (2) - 稍稍偏下的位置做一个微小的下降flow做缓冲,然后02:26:929 (4) - 摆在02:26:709 (3) - 右上做一个向上的flow。我觉得这样就可以解决flow问题了,排列也不至于看着很生硬。如图:
  12. 02:59:135 (4,5,6) - 这里的曲调是一个逐渐升高的趋势,而排列上却走了下降我觉得不太好(即使02:58:253 (3,4,5,6) - 是想做个平行四边形pattern但事实也并没有做好这个平行啊2333)所以建议你这么摆试试:
  13. 03:10:165 (5,1) - 这两个还是建议blanket better
  14. 03:50:081 - 我觉得还是在这里加点什么东西比较好(比如滑条),空空的感觉有点奇怪imo 确实奇怪但是白线上没音
[Normal<3]

  • 奇怪我aimod出bug了ds一直报错……所以ds就没查不过感觉应该没问题嗯
  1. 00:52:527 (4) - 微移到 x190|y103,感觉之前那样不太对称
  2. 02:11:047 (1,2) - Blanket有一点点偏差
    其它没什么问题,棒棒哒~
[Easy<3]
  1. 01:44:146 (2) - 移到x140|y319做个对称?
    其它也挺好的owo

嗯就这样吧~~送星支持~~
祝早日rank~ :)

Shad0w1and wrote:

整体没找到啥问题。
[Meli]
00:13:366 (5) - 可以包好点,顺带避免overlap
00:14:534 (1) - 注意前后DS,我都读错了
00:21:650 (1) - 个人倾向 滑条改了
00:41:503 (6) - 作为一个主难度我觉得当vocal很突出的时候不应该放过,哭字这里被放过了,我建议是放反转滑条,并给nc(这里没钢琴要不就删掉空着)这里已经不是按DS摆的啦,挺跳的感觉
00:59:599 (4,2) - 可以包好点
01:02:680 (5) - 435,201 为啥
01:15:910 (2) - 397,358
02:02:003 (4) - 容易读错,注意02:01:341 (3) - 前后DS和间距
02:16:341 (5) - 似乎没包好
02:17:223 (6,7,8) - DS很难读,或者给nc
03:13:473 (4,5,6,7) - ^

e和n做的很安全,没啥问题
顺带我的EZ做好了求recheck lol
t/319541

no comment means fixed.
Thanks for mods!
DreaM117er
~~

[E]

  • 00:53:409 (5) - 這裡可以NC
    01:10:248 (1,2) - NC反了 :?
    01:21:646 (5) - 這裡NC
    01:28:705 (4) - ^
    01:35:763 (5) - ^
    01:53:400 (5) - ^
    02:00:459 (5) - ^
    02:07:518 (5) - ^
    02:14:576 (4) - ^
    02:21:635 (5) - ^
    02:28:694 (5) - ^
    02:35:753 (4) - ^
    02:42:812 (5) - ^
    02:49:871 (5) - ^
    02:56:929 (4) - ^
    03:03:988 (4) - ^
    03:11:047 (5) - ^
    03:18:106 (6) - ^
    03:25:165 (4) - ^
    03:32:223 (4) - ^
    03:39:282 (5) - ^
    03:46:342 (6) - NC
  1. 覺得NC太長了,不要修就無視 :)
[N]

  • 02:47:665 (2,3) - Circle在前,滑條在後比較好
    02:52:076 (6,7) - ^
  1. 看著看著沒有什麼問題 :)
[Meli]

  • 00:08:191 (4) - 這裡要不要跟00:04:646 (4,5) - 一樣?? 聽著聽著沒有對好鋼琴
    00:11:059 (3,4) - 我覺得這裡超適合放折返的
    02:58:253 (3) - 這個貼到血條了不要緊嗎??
    03:18:547 (2) - 怪怪的,都換成Circle??

趕快找人讓它飛吧 :)
Topic Starter
Karen

DreaM117er wrote:

~~

[E]

  • 00:53:409 (5) - 這裡可以NC
    01:10:248 (1,2) - NC反了 :?
    01:21:646 (5) - 這裡NC
    01:28:705 (4) - ^
    01:35:763 (5) - ^
    01:53:400 (5) - ^
    02:00:459 (5) - ^
    02:07:518 (5) - ^
    02:14:576 (4) - ^
    02:21:635 (5) - ^
    02:28:694 (5) - ^
    02:35:753 (4) - ^
    02:42:812 (5) - ^
    02:49:871 (5) - ^
    02:56:929 (4) - ^
    03:03:988 (4) - ^
    03:11:047 (5) - ^
    03:18:106 (6) - ^
    03:25:165 (4) - ^
    03:32:223 (4) - ^
    03:39:282 (5) - ^
    03:46:342 (6) - NC
  1. 覺得NC太長了,不要修就無視 :)都改了
[N]

  • 02:47:665 (2,3) - Circle在前,滑條在後比較好 这里还是对称吧
    02:52:076 (6,7) - ^ hmm 有道理但是不太想改,觉得我这样也挺好
  1. 看著看著沒有什麼問題 :)
[Meli]

  • 00:08:191 (4) - 這裡要不要跟00:04:646 (4,5) - 一樣?? 聽著聽著沒有對好鋼琴
    00:11:059 (3,4) - 我覺得這裡超適合放折返的 改起来好麻烦QAQ
    02:58:253 (3) - 這個貼到血條了不要緊嗎?? 不出界就没事
    03:18:547 (2) - 怪怪的,都換成Circle?? 哪里怪啦,我觉得很好呀

趕快找人讓它飛吧 :)

Thanks :)
Rizia
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Topic Starter
Karen
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