Glee Cast - Last Christmas (Speed Up Ver.)

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MkGuh
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on quarta-feira, 16 de dezembro de 2015 at 22:11:55

Artist: Glee Cast
Title: Last Christmas (Speed Up Ver.)
Source: Glee
Tags: Glee The Christmas Album nightcore remix Rachel Berry Finn Hudson New Directions The Music The Complete Season Two short cut ver xmas fox
BPM: 133,62
Filesize: 4521kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1,2 stars, 77 notes)
  2. Normal (1,71 stars, 137 notes)
  3. Xmas (2,82 stars, 185 notes)


Download: Glee Cast - Last Christmas (Speed Up Ver.)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#4

~My Christmas Mappu! o3o~


Happy Christmas to all of you! :D


-Added SB at November 30th, redownload if you downloaded before this day :3


- ByBy13
- Ipas
- Gero
Lumael
19:14 *Lumael is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/813398 Glee Cast - Last Christmas (Speed Up Ver.) [Easy]]
19:14 Lumael: 00:12:965 (3) -
19:14 Lumael: coloca um slider 1/2
19:15 Lumael: 00:12:741 - aqui
19:15 MkGuh: ain, migo
19:15 MkGuh: irc D:
19:15 MkGuh: çlsakda
19:15 MkGuh: okay
19:15 Lumael: nunca deixe o espaço de 1 tick e meio
19:15 MkGuh: tudo bem
19:15 Lumael: no easy
19:15 Lumael: n quer? ;w;
19:15 Lumael: 00:15:884 - whistle
19:16 MkGuh: pronto <3
19:16 MkGuh: n ligo
19:16 MkGuh: çlsakdçlas
19:16 Lumael: 00:20:599 (1) - n tem nada no reverse
19:16 Lumael: troca pra 1/1 com reverse
19:16 Lumael: e um circulo?
19:17 Lumael: 00:57:644 - mesma coisa q eu falei antes
19:18 *Lumael is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/813400 Glee Cast - Last Christmas (Speed Up Ver.) [Normal]]
19:18 Lumael: 00:11:618 (5) - acho q tem q colocar nc
19:18 Lumael: pq vc colocou aqui00:08:026 (1) -
19:18 Lumael: eu sei q fica dois NCsseguindos
19:18 Lumael: mas
19:18 Lumael: consistency?
19:19 Lumael: 00:15:210 (5) - ah e os whistles
19:21 MkGuh: pronto
19:21 MkGuh: consertei tudo
19:21 MkGuh: miguxo
19:21 Lumael: pera to falando com meu pai no telefone
19:23 Lumael: preciso ser sincero
19:23 Lumael: o kiai
19:23 Lumael: tá muito denso
19:24 Lumael: principalmente
19:24 Lumael: o terceiro
19:24 Lumael: parece um advanced
19:31 *Lumael is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/813399 Glee Cast - Last Christmas (Speed Up Ver.) [Hard]]
19:31 Lumael: i dont really know
19:31 Lumael: 00:09:149 (3,4) -
19:31 Lumael: se o jump
19:31 Lumael: é um problema
19:31 Lumael: pq tipo
19:31 MkGuh: oi
19:31 Lumael: 00:05:781 (3) - aqui nao teve
19:33 Lumael: 00:38:560 (1) - n tem nada no tick azul
19:34 MkGuh: pode ir continuando
19:34 MkGuh: n vou ver agr
19:34 MkGuh: ja ja eu vejo
19:34 Lumael: 00:52:031 (3) - same
19:50 MkGuh: posta
19:50 MkGuh: no
19:50 MkGuh: forum
19:50 Lumael: /savelog
19:50 Lumael: fail
Topic Starter
MkGuh

Lumael wrote:

19:14 *Lumael is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/813398 Glee Cast - Last Christmas (Speed Up Ver.) [Easy]]
19:14 Lumael: 00:12:965 (3) -
19:14 Lumael: coloca um slider 1/2
19:15 Lumael: 00:12:741 - aqui
19:15 MkGuh: ain, migo
19:15 MkGuh: irc D:
19:15 MkGuh: çlsakda
19:15 MkGuh: okay
19:15 Lumael: nunca deixe o espaço de 1 tick e meio
19:15 MkGuh: tudo bem
19:15 Lumael: no easy
19:15 Lumael: n quer? ;w;
19:15 Lumael: 00:15:884 - whistle
19:16 MkGuh: pronto <3
19:16 MkGuh: n ligo
19:16 MkGuh: çlsakdçlas
19:16 Lumael: 00:20:599 (1) - n tem nada no reverse
19:16 Lumael: troca pra 1/1 com reverse
19:16 Lumael: e um circulo?
19:17 Lumael: 00:57:644 - mesma coisa q eu falei antes
19:18 *Lumael is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/813400 Glee Cast - Last Christmas (Speed Up Ver.) [Normal]]
19:18 Lumael: 00:11:618 (5) - acho q tem q colocar nc
19:18 Lumael: pq vc colocou aqui00:08:026 (1) -
19:18 Lumael: eu sei q fica dois NCsseguindos
19:18 Lumael: mas
19:18 Lumael: consistency?
19:19 Lumael: 00:15:210 (5) - ah e os whistles
19:21 MkGuh: pronto
19:21 MkGuh: consertei tudo
19:21 MkGuh: miguxo
19:21 Lumael: pera to falando com meu pai no telefone
19:23 Lumael: preciso ser sincero
19:23 Lumael: o kiai
19:23 Lumael: tá muito denso
19:24 Lumael: principalmente
19:24 Lumael: o terceiro
19:24 Lumael: parece um advanced
19:31 *Lumael is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/813399 Glee Cast - Last Christmas (Speed Up Ver.) [Hard]]
19:31 Lumael: i dont really know
19:31 Lumael: 00:09:149 (3,4) -
19:31 Lumael: se o jump
19:31 Lumael: é um problema
19:31 Lumael: pq tipo
19:31 MkGuh: oi
19:31 Lumael: 00:05:781 (3) - aqui nao teve
19:33 Lumael: 00:38:560 (1) - n tem nada no tick azul
19:34 MkGuh: pode ir continuando
19:34 MkGuh: n vou ver agr
19:34 MkGuh: ja ja eu vejo
19:34 Lumael: 00:52:031 (3) - same
19:50 MkGuh: posta
19:50 MkGuh: no
19:50 MkGuh: forum
19:50 Lumael: /savelog
19:50 Lumael: fail
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Squichu
hey there!
from my queue~ :3
I'm just making suggetsions, feel free to disagree with anything mentioned! c:

General
  1. is there something missing at the end of the map? there are so many green lines, but nothing's mapped.. O:


Easy
  • I like the diff, very neat~ I just disagree with DS of 1.1 >: the objects look kinda glued together
    have you considered using slightly higher DS like 1.2 or 1.3? I feel like that'd match the song better
  1. 00:08:026 (3) - it's the same as 00:04:434 (3) - , which is not a bad thing, but considering the strong vocals that are added here, I'd prefer if it were slightly different. maybe you can try this rhythm? http://puu.sh/l2san.jpg maybe you think it's too hard for an Easy, but I think it's quite suitable..
  2. 00:11:618 (2,3) - hmh. imo a 1/2 slider on 00:12:741 - works better than just a circle. just an alterntaive, ofc
  3. 00:19:701 (3,1) - movemnt is a little uncomfortable ;-; you could try to smoothen it a little by moving (1) elsewhere. example: http://puu.sh/l2ss2.jpg
  4. 00:33:172 (3) - the slidertail is a little offscreen :/ can you move this further up to avoid that? (I don't think it has any effect on the gameplay, but to be on the safe side.. also it'd look better, imo xD)
  5. 01:09:095 (3,1) - pretty close, can you move (1) a pixel or two to the right?


Normal
  1. 00:20:599 (1) - consider changing the rhythm here, the long sliders matched better in the beginning, but the music gets more lively here, so it feels a little out of place. it's, imo, "too less to play", I expected more to click. I'd go with this: http://puu.sh/l2t7Q.jpg
  2. 00:24:191 (1) - similar here. also, there's a pretty strong beat on the second and the third white tick and they shouldn't be ignored, imo. consider shortening the slider and adding two circles on 00:24:865 - and 00:25:089 -
  3. 00:25:987 (3) - same as the first point. the rhythm I suggested before would work here, too, but I'm sure you can come up with another one (in case you want to change anything)
  4. 00:40:356 (2,3,4) - rhythm seems off to me because the strong beats are on the sliderends of (3,4). maybe a different rhythm would work better. example: http://puu.sh/l2tu5.jpg


Hard
  1. eeh, is this diff finished yet? the copypasted Kiai part was unexpected. :/ I mean it's fine if you like it that way, but I have to admit it's pretty boring to play the same thing twice, especially if it's in such a sort time..
  2. 00:16:894 - missing a circle here? you mapped hte blue tick before (00:16:333 (2) - ) so leaving this blank sounds off
  3. 00:38:560 (1) - I'd prefer a circle here over the slider because there's no sound that exactly matches the slider (vocals start way before the slider and the next beat is on the next white tick..)
  4. 00:44:622 - there's another beat here, so consider adding another circle? or you might want to try this rhythm: http://puu.sh/l2ucQ.jpg
  5. 00:52:031 (3) - there's nothing on the blue tick, but one on the red tick, so I think shortening this to a 1/2 slider matches the melody slightly better
  6. 00:58:318 (4,5) - I miss some emphasis on the beats here. following vocals is nice too, hmm~ up to you ofcourse! ( http://puu.sh/l2ur9.jpg )
  7. 01:27:056 - missing something clickable here ;o; add a circle?
  8. 01:28:740 - here, too. another circle?


rather short mod, but the set looks nice as it is :3
Good luck with this!
//squee
Topic Starter
MkGuh

Squirrel wrote:

hey there!
from my queue~ :3
I'm just making suggetsions, feel free to disagree with anything mentioned! c:

General
  1. is there something missing at the end of the map? there are so many green lines, but nothing's mapped.. O: Added a spinner o3o


Easy
  • I like the diff, very neat~ I just disagree with DS of 1.1 >: the objects look kinda glued together
    have you considered using slightly higher DS like 1.2 or 1.3? I feel like that'd match the song better It was the CS, i changed for CS 3 and it's much better now :D
  1. 00:08:026 (3) - it's the same as 00:04:434 (3) - , which is not a bad thing, but considering the strong vocals that are added here, I'd prefer if it were slightly different. maybe you can try this rhythm? http://puu.sh/l2san.jpg maybe you think it's too hard for an Easy, but I think it's quite suitable.. Hmm, sorry, i prefer my actual rhythm.
  2. 00:11:618 (2,3) - hmh. imo a 1/2 slider on 00:12:741 - works better than just a circle. just an alterntaive, ofc Fixed.
  3. 00:19:701 (3,1) - movemnt is a little uncomfortable ;-; you could try to smoothen it a little by moving (1) elsewhere. example: http://puu.sh/l2ss2.jpg Done.
  4. 00:33:172 (3) - the slidertail is a little offscreen :/ can you move this further up to avoid that? (I don't think it has any effect on the gameplay, but to be on the safe side.. also it'd look better, imo xD) Changed the shape o3o
  5. 01:09:095 (3,1) - pretty close, can you move (1) a pixel or two to the right? Changed the CS, so i don't need to change this anymore!!


Normal
  1. 00:20:599 (1) - consider changing the rhythm here, the long sliders matched better in the beginning, but the music gets more lively here, so it feels a little out of place. it's, imo, "too less to play", I expected more to click. I'd go with this: http://puu.sh/l2t7Q.jpg You're right, i didn't follow your example, but i changed the slider here.
  2. 00:24:191 (1) - similar here. also, there's a pretty strong beat on the second and the third white tick and they shouldn't be ignored, imo. consider shortening the slider and adding two circles on 00:24:865 - and 00:25:089 - ^
  3. 00:25:987 (3) - same as the first point. the rhythm I suggested before would work here, too, but I'm sure you can come up with another one (in case you want to change anything) ^^
  4. 00:40:356 (2,3,4) - rhythm seems off to me because the strong beats are on the sliderends of (3,4). maybe a different rhythm would work better. example: http://puu.sh/l2tu5.jpg Fixed.


Hard
  1. eeh, is this diff finished yet? the copypasted Kiai part was unexpected. :/ I mean it's fine if you like it that way, but I have to admit it's pretty boring to play the same thing twice, especially if it's in such a sort time.. Ughhh, i'm too lazy xDDDD okay, i'll map something different.
  2. 00:16:894 - missing a circle here? you mapped hte blue tick before (00:16:333 (2) - ) so leaving this blank sounds off Added.
  3. 00:38:560 (1) - I'd prefer a circle here over the slider because there's no sound that exactly matches the slider (vocals start way before the slider and the next beat is on the next white tick..) I prefer a slider at this part, but i extended to 1/2 :D
  4. 00:44:622 - there's another beat here, so consider adding another circle? or you might want to try this rhythm: http://puu.sh/l2ucQ.jpg Added.
  5. 00:52:031 (3) - there's nothing on the blue tick, but one on the red tick, so I think shortening this to a 1/2 slider matches the melody slightly better Oki.
  6. 00:58:318 (4,5) - I miss some emphasis on the beats here. following vocals is nice too, hmm~ up to you ofcourse! ( http://puu.sh/l2ur9.jpg ) Emphasis done! O3O
  7. 01:27:056 - missing something clickable here ;o; add a circle? Nice catch :D
  8. 01:28:740 - here, too. another circle? ^


rather short mod, but the set looks nice as it is :3 Thanks for the mod, it was really helpful!
Good luck with this!
//squee
Prismetical
Heya! :3

- color suggestion:
-> Red
-> Blue
-> Gold
00:47:541 (3) - make it more beautiful :3
01:29:750 (1) - maybe start the spinner here (?)
00:47:541 (1,2,3,4) - I would find this better
01:29:301 (1) - I would start the spinner there
00:26:436 (2,3) - I wouldn't stack there
00:52:929 (1,2) - I prefer that
pishifat




gj

easy
00:17:007 (1) - 00:28:682 (2) - 00:35:866 (2) - 01:00:114 (1) - 01:11:789 (2) - claps tho
00:12:741 (3) - 00:57:644 (2) - 1/2 sliders + low sv + object immeidately after = very eh. head and tail are just like on top of each other at this point. leaving a circle and a 3/2 gap would even work better than confusing minisliders
01:07:298 (1,2) - song isn't really doing anything special enough to say "use a 1/2 gap in this place and only this place throughout the entire map." like it just stands out more than it should. i doubt i need to give example rhythms that work better since so many options

normal
i cant tell if you're trying to combo according to every measure or every other measure you keep switching. like 00:09:822 (1,2,3,4,1) - 00:13:414 (1,2,3,4,5) - are literally the same rhythm with different comboing whttt
00:41:254 (4) - the claps from ez and this yea copying hitsounds from a diff that skips beats is lol
00:31:376 (1) - pretty loud sound to ignore on that white tick dood. it's like the same thing as using 3/4 sliders over loud sounds on the red tick you just dont do it
00:36:091 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - following constantly offbeat vocals sounds so awkward but i dunno what would sound better ugh guhgug ughugh
01:01:910 (1,2,3,4) - 4 consecutive 1/2 clicks i dont think so 01:16:279 (1) - or something more appropriate
01:19:871 (1) - uh from here to the end you've got no 1/1 gaps. might wanna include them cuz a 10+ second 1/2 chain is pretty hardcore

hard
00:04:434 (1) - nice offscreen slidertail zxzxz
00:09:149 (3,4,1) - if you're gonna introduce jumps here, don't do it to the degree where it's visually close to the same size as 1/1 spacing right after it. doing something where 4 is closer to 3 and 1 is further away is coolk
Sonnyc

Easy:
  1. pishi pointed out missing claps.
  2. 00:36:764 (1) - Weird combo setting. Rather using 2 stanza as a combo cycle would be more natural as you've done at 00:31:376 (1,2,3).
    00:36:764 (1) -
    00:40:356 (1) -
    00:38:560 (2) -
    00:42:153 (2) -
  3. 00:45:296 - Are you sure about this normal-clap? It feels pretty awkward with the overall, also considering there wasn't an actual instrument change in the song.
  4. 01:29:077 (1) - 10 seconds spinner, but this usage was appropriate enough if someone asks me.

Normal:
  1. 00:15:210 (5) - Missing NC due to your combo pattern.
  2. 00:18:354 (3) - 00:29:131 (3) - 01:01:461 - 01:12:238 - Missing clap.
  3. 00:31:376 (1) - Considering there is a strong symbol sound at 00:31:825 in the music, try reducing 1/2 and adding a note at 00:32:049.
  4. 00:36:540 (5) - 00:56:073 (7) - 01:03:257 (5) - 01:05:053 (3) - 01:06:849 (4) - 01:17:626 (3) - According to the song, starting combo from here would suit better.

Hard:
  1. 00:04:434 (1) - Nearly offscreen, but actually it is barely inside. Still I wouldn't recommend such usages.
  2. 00:09:598 - Consider adding a note on 00:09:149 (3) to form a back'n forth long distanced flow. Personally it would play better and have a higher readability than the current ambiguous status.
  3. 00:16:782 (3,4,1) - 00:31:151 (5,6,1) - 00:59:889 (7,8,1) - 01:28:628 (6,7,1) - Since a sv multiplier change appears, the actual distance of this stream is not consistent. This was not a nice transition between sv changes. Please set it consistently.
  4. 00:29:131 - Personally disappointed with the fact that this strong object being ignored.
  5. 00:29:580 (3) - Add a NC since this rhythms are following the drums. It is to acquire consistency with 00:15:435 (1).
  6. 00:57:869 (3,1) - Couldn't feel anything strong at 00:58:318 which worth an emphasis. The current jump feels quite random in that point.

Not bad. In fact, your hard was quite nice.
Good luck with this mapset :3
Topic Starter
MkGuh
Fixed all from pishi's mod except 00:36:091 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - following constantly offbeat vocals sounds so awkward but i dunno what would sound better ugh guhgug ughugh I really like to follow vocals on lower diffs, i won't change it for now, but if someone more complain i might change it idk D:

Will edit this post with the reply from Sonnyc's mod later!!

Thanks for modding xd

EDIT: Fixed almost everything from Sonnyc's mod except two things on hard, 00:57:869 (3,1) - Couldn't feel anything strong at 00:58:318 which worth an emphasis. The current jump feels quite random in that point. Imo, the vocals are very strong at this part, so i'll stay with the jump.

00:29:131 - Personally disappointed with the fact that this strong object being ignored. Following the vocals D:

Didn't make a full reply cause i fixed almost everything!!

thanks for the mods again :3
Little
Hi there!

[General]
  1. The spinner at the end is excessively long, and will be tiring for some players - especially in the case of Easy difficulty. I also think it fits the song better if you just remove the spinner and end on the last note of the kiai section.


[Easy]
  1. 00:13:414 (1) - The whistle at the end doesn't seem to fit with the hitsound pattern used with the previous iterations of this phrase at 00:02:638 (1) and 00:06:230 (1)
  2. 00:15:210 (3) - I think it would be nice to use drum sampleset with soft additions here to highlight the drums.
  3. 00:18:803 (2) - Remove whistle from end.
  4. 00:20:599 (1) - Add whistle on head?
  5. 00:25:987 (3) - Same as above.
  6. 00:32:723 (2,3) - Looks nicer if you make the curve match with (1) like this: http://puu.sh/liV5r/f1a2c0ed1c.jpg
  7. 00:36:764 (3) - Flows slightly better when curved the other direction to lead into (1) a little smoother in my opinion: http://puu.sh/liVd4/7ba7e14a35.jpg
  8. 00:43:949 (3) - I think it would be nice to use drum sampleset with soft additions here to highlight the drums.
  9. 00:58:318 (3) - Same as above.
  10. 01:08:197 (2) - Remove whistle from head?
  11. 01:09:095 (3) - At most other parts with this rhythm, you used a whistle on the repeat. Would you like to do the same here?
  12. 01:10:891 (1) - Whistle on head to match 00:27:783 (1)


[Normal]
  1. 00:06:903 (2,3) - I recommend changing the rhythm here to match 00:03:311 (2) The rhythm in the song is the same, and since the beginning of the song is relatively calm, I recommend starting out with fewer clicks so you have room to build up.
  2. 00:20:599 (1) - Why is there a red node on the repeat? I'm not sure what difference that makes, but you should probably make it a white node.
  3. 00:31:376 (1) - This is way outside the grid, and comes close to touching the edge of the screen. If possible, try moving it more to the left, starting with the objects at 00:24:191
  4. 00:35:866 (3,4,1) - This rhythm is really awkward to play. I know it follows the vocals, but skipping beat four makes it feel very empty without the clap. I think this will be a more appropriate rhythm: Image It will also help to give emphasis on the downbeat with a circle rather than a weak slider end, espcially if you stack the circle on the head of the next slider like so: Image
  5. 00:37:887 (4,5) - I think this will be better as a 1/2 beat slider to help emphasize the repeated offbeat vocals.
  6. Some of the hitsound suggestions for Easy may apply here. Make sure to check.


[Hard]
  1. 00:13:863 (1,2) - Would look nice if you blanketed these: http://puu.sh/ljhoF/68757674d7.jpg
  2. 00:30:702 (4) - Drum sampleset would fit nicely on the head.
  3. Some of the hitsound suggestions for Easy may apply here. Make sure to check.


Good luck!
Sc4v4ng3r


Well I didn't wanted to mod nothing before my exams, so here it is. Just few quick suggestions from me~

  1. Unrankable issues
  2. My opinion which I highly recommend changing it
  3. Small suggestions/Nazi

[General]
  1. Disable widescreen support on Easy and Normal for unification of option.
  2. Why not add 'X-mas' to the tags? Some people may search beatmaps using this keyword.


[Easy]
  1. Mostly hitsound suggestions, the pattern and flow looks good already.
  2. 00:18:803 (2) - Honestly I don't see what is the whistle at the tail of this slider is following. It kinda feels out of place compared to other upbeats... Well it is not a problem if this was following something at least.
  3. 00:22:395 (3,2) - A really, really, minor thing. Since you didn't have this kinds of 'just-a-bit-touching overlaps' in the whole map after this, you may want to re-arrange the pattern to avoid that. And yes, it is visible in play mode due to the AR.
  4. 00:25:987 (3) - Possibly you could add a whistle onto the head of this slider as the vocal is strong here.
  5. 00:29:580 (3) - You've coulda used drum sampleset on the repeat of this slider as well as it is in the same drumroll like the head and the tail.
  6. 00:43:949 (3) - Similar to what you've did at 00:29:580 (3) - , you should try to use drum sampleset on the head and the tail(possibly also the repeat if you are taking my suggestion at 00:29:580 (3) - ) for consistency and to emphasize the drumrolls.
  7. And so on with the 'add whistle' or 'use this' w/e. Just sharing my opinion, I feel the whistles could have been better emphasized if they were just placed every big white ticks in the kiai, but what you have did right now is also fine.


[Normal]
  1. 00:29:580 (4,5) - You know, I feel that two 1/1 sliders aren't enough to emphasize the drumroll in the background properly... Just my opinion on this, but you may want to add a circle on the missing red ticks to emphasize the drumrolls. Or at least just the first red tick to avoid a long chain of 1/2 notes.
  2. 00:34:968 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Damn all these notes are hard to follow when the previous notes were all on the beat :o I can see that you are trying to follow here, but this may just throw beginners off as almost none of the notes here are actually on beat :/ I can't think of an example if you insist on following the vocals though... I would just make 00:37:887 (3,4) - these 2 a 1/2 repeated slider which starts at 00:37:662 - .
  3. Well just saying, is changing up the NC patterning at kiai allowed? I didn't know that was possible :o


[Hard]
  1. 00:45:520 - It feels weird to have the drumrolls here unmapped when 00:43:949 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - these did map it out. Just saying for the consistency's sake.
  2. Other than that, looks all good :D By far this is the best difficulty out of them all lols


That is all from me. GL!
Topic Starter
MkGuh

Little wrote:

Hi there!

[General]
  1. The spinner at the end is excessively long, and will be tiring for some players - especially in the case of Easy difficulty. I also think it fits the song better if you just remove the spinner and end on the last note of the kiai section.


[Easy]
  1. 00:13:414 (1) - The whistle at the end doesn't seem to fit with the hitsound pattern used with the previous iterations of this phrase at 00:02:638 (1) and 00:06:230 (1) Oh yeah, remvoed.
  2. 00:15:210 (3) - I think it would be nice to use drum sampleset with soft additions here to highlight the drums. Used it on the tail.
  3. 00:18:803 (2) - Remove whistle from end. Ok
  4. 00:20:599 (1) - Add whistle on head? ^
  5. 00:25:987 (3) - Same as above. ^^
  6. 00:32:723 (2,3) - Looks nicer if you make the curve match with (1) like this: http://puu.sh/liV5r/f1a2c0ed1c.jpg It didn't make any big difference tbh.
  7. 00:36:764 (3) - Flows slightly better when curved the other direction to lead into (1) a little smoother in my opinion: http://puu.sh/liVd4/7ba7e14a35.jpg ^
  8. 00:43:949 (3) - I think it would be nice to use drum sampleset with soft additions here to highlight the drums. Used it on the tail.
  9. 00:58:318 (3) - Same as above. ^
  10. 01:08:197 (2) - Remove whistle from head? Yeah.
  11. 01:09:095 (3) - At most other parts with this rhythm, you used a whistle on the repeat. Would you like to do the same here? :3
  12. 01:10:891 (1) - Whistle on head to match 00:27:783 (1) Okay.


[Normal]
  1. 00:06:903 (2,3) - I recommend changing the rhythm here to match 00:03:311 (2) The rhythm in the song is the same, and since the beginning of the song is relatively calm, I recommend starting out with fewer clicks so you have room to build up. Okay
  2. 00:20:599 (1) - Why is there a red node on the repeat? I'm not sure what difference that makes, but you should probably make it a white node. XDDDDDDDDD, man, this didn't make any difference ;PP
  3. 00:31:376 (1) - This is way outside the grid, and comes close to touching the edge of the screen. If possible, try moving it more to the left, starting with the objects at 00:24:191 Well, i tested on many resolutions, and it's okay, i think it isn't a problem almost touch the edge.
  4. 00:35:866 (3,4,1) - This rhythm is really awkward to play. I know it follows the vocals, but skipping beat four makes it feel very empty without the clap. I think this will be a more appropriate rhythm: Image It will also help to give emphasis on the downbeat with a circle rather than a weak slider end, espcially if you stack the circle on the head of the next slider like so: Image Changed the rhythm, but didn't use your example.
  5. 00:37:887 (4,5) - I think this will be better as a 1/2 beat slider to help emphasize the repeated offbeat vocals.
  6. Some of the hitsound suggestions for Easy may apply here. Make sure to check.


[Hard]
  1. 00:13:863 (1,2) - Would look nice if you blanketed these: http://puu.sh/ljhoF/68757674d7.jpg Bahh, it's already fine.
  2. 00:30:702 (4) - Drum sampleset would fit nicely on the head. sure :3
  3. Some of the hitsound suggestions for Easy may apply here. Make sure to check.


Good luck!

[Sc4v4ng3r] wrote:



Well I didn't wanted to mod nothing before my exams, so here it is. Just few quick suggestions from me~

  1. Unrankable issues
  2. My opinion which I highly recommend changing it
  3. Small suggestions/Nazi

[General]
  1. Disable widescreen support on Easy and Normal for unification of option. Ya.
  2. Why not add 'X-mas' to the tags? Some people may search beatmaps using this keyword. Nice catch.


[Easy]
  1. Mostly hitsound suggestions, the pattern and flow looks good already.
  2. 00:18:803 (2) - Honestly I don't see what is the whistle at the tail of this slider is following. It kinda feels out of place compared to other upbeats... Well it is not a problem if this was following something at least. Fixed.
  3. 00:22:395 (3,2) - A really, really, minor thing. Since you didn't have this kinds of 'just-a-bit-touching overlaps' in the whole map after this, you may want to re-arrange the pattern to avoid that. And yes, it is visible in play mode due to the AR. Okay.
  4. 00:25:987 (3) - Possibly you could add a whistle onto the head of this slider as the vocal is strong here. O3O
  5. 00:29:580 (3) - You've coulda used drum sampleset on the repeat of this slider as well as it is in the same drumroll like the head and the tail. Just a whisthsakd is already enough.
  6. 00:43:949 (3) - Similar to what you've did at 00:29:580 (3) - , you should try to use drum sampleset on the head and the tail(possibly also the repeat if you are taking my suggestion at 00:29:580 (3) - ) for consistency and to emphasize the drumrolls. ^
  7. And so on with the 'add whistle' or 'use this' w/e. Just sharing my opinion, I feel the whistles could have been better emphasized if they were just placed every big white ticks in the kiai, but what you have did right now is also fine.


[Normal]
  1. 00:29:580 (4,5) - You know, I feel that two 1/1 sliders aren't enough to emphasize the drumroll in the background properly... Just my opinion on this, but you may want to add a circle on the missing red ticks to emphasize the drumrolls. Or at least just the first red tick to avoid a long chain of 1/2 notes. I fell that this isn't needed, just two 1/¹ are fine.
  2. 00:34:968 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Damn all these notes are hard to follow when the previous notes were all on the beat :o I can see that you are trying to follow here, but this may just throw beginners off as almost none of the notes here are actually on beat :/ I can't think of an example if you insist on following the vocals though... I would just make 00:37:887 (3,4) - these 2 a 1/2 repeated slider which starts at 00:37:662 - . Changed the rhythm :3
  3. Well just saying, is changing up the NC patterning at kiai allowed? I didn't know that was possible :oidk D:


[Hard]
  1. 00:45:520 - It feels weird to have the drumrolls here unmapped when 00:43:949 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - these did map it out. Just saying for the consistency's sake. Fixed
  2. Other than that, looks all good :D By far this is the best difficulty out of them all lols yay thanks


That is all from me. GL! tanks o3o

Thanks for modding >///<
Ipas


Hello!
It's random pick from Christmas☆Queue 2015!

[General]
  1. Looks Clean~


[Easy]
  1. 00:15:210 (3) - This slider's body almost touch the default hp bar . Because it's almost, it may affect to custom hp bar skin among players, so I suggest you to move it down lower . Some sort of this case appears in further of the diff, so if you're intend to, make sure you change them all
  2. Overall, looks fine for me


[Normal]
  1. 00:18:354 (3,5) - This overlap looks untidy for me. It makes section 00:17:007 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - getting very dense in terms of placements . You may need to avoid it if it comes to my suggestion
  2. 00:30:253 - As a build-up before the rhythm changed, it sounds good to have a circle here to help 00:29:580 (4,5) - complete the rhythm spread
  3. 00:57:644 (3,4) - If you stack them, they will more easier to hit instead being separated like this . Also, players that actually play this diff will start to distress
  4. 01:16:279 (1) - This is really almost touched the hp bar . I recommend you to make its placement more lowered
  5. 01:17:626 (1,2) - Shouldn't new combo swapped?


[Hard]
  1. Looks clean . But, in my opinion, you may need to reduce some intensity in this diff to make sure that the gap between Normal and this diff is really acceptable . Maybe, you can add more of 1/1 gap like this 01:06:849 (3,1) - to some places that will benefits

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If you need me, you can call me back
meii18

Hello!

[General]
  1. Just notice that Glee: The Music is repeated in tags.Be sure that you have to keep one of these two
  2. In tags there's 'cut' and 'short ver'.You can add only 'cut version' or 'short version' because in my opinion you don't need to have cut and short both in tags because it is the same let's say
  3. Seems that the metadata is alright proof


[Easy]
  1. 00:54:726(2,3)- Seems the flow is odd here as I can see.I suggest to move the circle to 443|55 to improve the flow here and also don't forget tomove the next objects to avoid DS errors
  2. 00:56:522(1)- If you listen carefully the music,you will see that the strong beat is on 00:57:420- and not on 00:57:195- and also the vocals are extending a bit to 00:57:420- when there the vocals are finishing with 'know' lyric there and instead so it will feel more natural if you will move the slider's end to 00:57:420- where's the strong beat to emphasize it instead leaving it empty which mean that you have to snap the 3/2 slider to a 2/1 slider
  3. 01:00:114(1)- Honestly saying I would like to see this 3/2 slider with a repeat replaced with 2 1/2 slider to make this strong beat from 01:01:012- clickable instead ignoring it let's say and also as you did at 01:07:298(1,2)-
  4. 01:14:483(1)- Same as above ^


[Normal]
  1. 00:30:253- There's the high pitch of the vocals I mean they are kind of stronger vocals and instead leaving them empty,you can add a note to emphasize the high pitch of the vocals
  2. 01:03:257(1,2)- I'd like to swap the combos here since on 01:03:706(2)- there are the reset of the vocals&instruments and not on the previous slider
  3. 01:05:053(1,2)- Same as above^
  4. 01:06:849(1,2)- Same^
  5. 01:17:626(1,2)-^


[Hard]
  1. 00:28:457(2)- I'd like to remove the repeat from this 3/2 slider and adding 2 notes after this slider for the stronger beat(clap) from 00:29:131- and the beat from the 00:29:355- because I'd like to emphasize that stronger beat instead leaving it empty
    Nice but some triplets could be 'reduced' for avoiding making a spread gap between normal and hard


I'll star it for now since it is good enough but as I can see you need some improvement in hitsounds.Just get 1-2 mods regarding the hitsounds and then call me back!
Topic Starter
MkGuh

Ipas wrote:



Hello!
It's random pick from Christmas☆Queue 2015!

[General]
  1. Looks Clean~


[Easy]
  1. 00:15:210 (3) - This slider's body almost touch the default hp bar . Because it's almost, it may affect to custom hp bar skin among players, so I suggest you to move it down lower . Some sort of this case appears in further of the diff, so if you're intend to, make sure you change them all Fixed.
  2. Overall, looks fine for me Yayy


[Normal]
  1. 00:18:354 (3,5) - This overlap looks untidy for me. It makes section 00:17:007 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - getting very dense in terms of placements . You may need to avoid it if it comes to my suggestion
  2. 00:30:253 - As a build-up before the rhythm changed, it sounds good to have a circle here to help 00:29:580 (4,5) - complete the rhythm spread
  3. 00:57:644 (3,4) - If you stack them, they will more easier to hit instead being separated like this . Also, players that actually play this diff will start to distress
  4. 01:16:279 (1) - This is really almost touched the hp bar . I recommend you to make its placement more lowered
  5. 01:17:626 (1,2) - Shouldn't new combo swapped? Fixed all :3


[Hard]
  1. Looks clean . But, in my opinion, you may need to reduce some intensity in this diff to make sure that the gap between Normal and this diff is really acceptable . Maybe, you can add more of 1/1 gap like this 01:06:849 (3,1) - to some places that will benefits I've just found 3 places to add gap like this :P

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If you need me, you can call me back I will sdadasd

ByBy13 wrote:


Hello!

[General]
  1. Just notice that Glee: The Music is repeated in tags.Be sure that you have to keep one of these two
  2. In tags there's 'cut' and 'short ver'.You can add only 'cut version' or 'short version' because in my opinion you don't need to have cut and short both in tags because it is the same let's say
  3. Seems that the metadata is alright proof


[Easy]
  1. 00:54:726(2,3)- Seems the flow is odd here as I can see.I suggest to move the circle to 443|55 to improve the flow here and also don't forget tomove the next objects to avoid DS errors Fixed o3o
  2. 00:56:522(1)- If you listen carefully the music,you will see that the strong beat is on 00:57:420- and not on 00:57:195- and also the vocals are extending a bit to 00:57:420- when there the vocals are finishing with 'know' lyric there and instead so it will feel more natural if you will move the slider's end to 00:57:420- where's the strong beat to emphasize it instead leaving it empty which mean that you have to snap the 3/2 slider to a 2/1 slider Oki.
  3. 01:00:114(1)- Honestly saying I would like to see this 3/2 slider with a repeat replaced with 2 1/2 slider to make this strong beat from 01:01:012- clickable instead ignoring it let's say and also as you did at 01:07:298(1,2)- Nice idea, fixed.
  4. 01:14:483(1)- Same as above ^ ^^


[Normal]
  1. 00:30:253- There's the high pitch of the vocals I mean they are kind of stronger vocals and instead leaving them empty,you can add a note to emphasize the high pitch of the vocals Added.
  2. 01:03:257(1,2)- I'd like to swap the combos here since on 01:03:706(2)- there are the reset of the vocals&instruments and not on the previous slider
  3. 01:05:053(1,2)- Same as above^
  4. 01:06:849(1,2)- Same^
  5. 01:17:626(1,2)-^ Fixed all O3O


[Hard]
  1. 00:28:457(2)- I'd like to remove the repeat from this 3/2 slider and adding 2 notes after this slider for the stronger beat(clap) from 00:29:131- and the beat from the 00:29:355- because I'd like to emphasize that stronger beat instead leaving it empty I prefer follow the vocals at this part :<
    Nice but some triplets could be 'reduced' for avoiding making a spread gap between normal and hard Okay, added some 1/4 sliders instead of just 3 1/4 notes


I'll star it for now since it is good enough but as I can see you need some improvement in hitsounds.Just get 1-2 mods regarding the hitsounds and then call me back! I'll remap them by myself :3
blissfulyoshi
Christmas Queue modding

I'm curious, why do you have blue, red, and yellow combo colors? It doesn't fit your bg or the winter theme.
Why is there a comma after Glee in your tags?

Easy:
00:09:822 (1) - having a repeat felt a bit weird here since the stresses in the lyrics are on the white ticks here. I would have ended the slider at 00:10:720 without a repeat and then start 2 at 00:11:169 -
01:25:259 (1) - maybe this is just me, but I found the jutting out of 1 when transitioned from 3, to look terrible. I would suggest rotating 01:25:259 (1,2) so that it follows 3's linear line
01:27:056 (3) - move to the left and up a bit so that 2's end looks like it forms a line with the first half of 3

Normal:
00:11:618 (5) - Why is there no new combo here to match your pattern of 1 new combo every large white tick? You used single item new combos at 01:12:687 (1)
00:15:210 (5) - ^
00:36:764 (1) - Why did this have a new combo? You have been doing a new every 2 white ticks so far in this lyrics section
01:26:831 (4) - Move up a bit to form a line with the end of 2 and 3
I don't like how you used linear sliders with anchor points along with curved sliders in the same pattern like 00:50:011 (2). For me, it looks weird, but not really an issue.

Hard:
00:05:781 (3) - why is there no jump here like 00:09:373 (4)
00:24:191 (1) - Why is this underspaced? Caught me up while playing.
00:47:541 (1) - semi-random jump. None of the other nearby new combos have jumps, not even small ones

===============

Not much wrong, just a bunch of minor things here and there. Best of luck.
Topic Starter
MkGuh

blissfulyoshi wrote:

Christmas Queue modding

I'm curious, why do you have blue, red, and yellow combo colors? It doesn't fit your bg or the winter theme. Ofc, it fits the BG, Red: her clothes. Yellow: her hair. Blue: the sky. o3o
Why is there a comma after Glee in your tags? Idk too xD

Easy:
00:09:822 (1) - having a repeat felt a bit weird here since the stresses in the lyrics are on the white ticks here. I would have ended the slider at 00:10:720 without a repeat and then start 2 at 00:11:169 - I don't think so, the repeat emphasize the strong vocal at the red tick, so...
01:25:259 (1) - maybe this is just me, but I found the jutting out of 1 when transitioned from 3, to look terrible. I would suggest rotating 01:25:259 (1,2) so that it follows 3's linear line Hmm... Yeah, the old slider style was a bit weird at this part, changed the pattern, but kept the old slider ♥
01:27:056 (3) - move to the left and up a bit so that 2's end looks like it forms a line with the first half of 3 A bit nasi xD Didn't change cause i changed the previous pattern, and it was after this sooooooo o3o

Normal:
00:11:618 (5) - Why is there no new combo here to match your pattern of 1 new combo every large white tick? You used single item new combos at 01:12:687 (1) ye, i know, but it feels weird having just a slider in the combo.
00:15:210 (5) - ^ ^
00:36:764 (1) - Why did this have a new combo? You have been doing a new every 2 white ticks so far in this lyrics section The vocals are different.
01:26:831 (4) - Move up a bit to form a line with the end of 2 and 3 Nope, very nazi tbh XD
I don't like how you used linear sliders with anchor points along with curved sliders in the same pattern like 00:50:011 (2). For me, it looks weird, but not really an issue. I know that my slider choices are very weird, but... i like them xD

Hard:
00:05:781 (3) - why is there no jump here like 00:09:373 (4) Hmm, idk tbh, but i feels like the currently one is better.
00:24:191 (1) - Why is this underspaced? Caught me up while playing. Okay, fixed.
00:47:541 (1) - semi-random jump. None of the other nearby new combos have jumps, not even small ones But the vocals are stronger ;__;

===============

Not much wrong, just a bunch of minor things here and there. Best of luck. Ty for the mod ♥
Ipas
Recheck as your request!

[Easy]
  1. 00:22:395 (3) - Just feel it moves great while I Ctrl+G this slider . It also correspond the next object as nice as it is
  2. 01:25:260 (1,2,3,1) - Make them flow constantly like image below, create more neater transition


[Normal]
  1. 00:03:311 (2) - Curve to upside please . This will allow the flow play smoother
  2. 00:08:699 (2) - Ctrl+J please xD Nice
  3. 00:20:150 (6,1) - Whoops, I catch this one as harsh movement since this is a Normal . I'd rather to add some curve, to help the movement . I don't give suggestion, do whatever you want
  4. 00:31:376 (1) - Just telling, it's near off-screen, "near"
  5. 01:12:238 (3) - Curve please, flow plays rigid here
  6. 01:27:954 (1,2) - Same with harsh movement complaint above, they somehow carry it too, curve will helps here


[Hard]
  1. 00:09:373 (4) - Not really think that this jump will fits with song intensity for now . Vocals get the more intensity starts on here 00:09:822 (1) -
  2. 00:45:184 (5) - I admit that I often got 100 while hitting this 1/4 slider on this kind of pattern . So, I really don't recommend to use this slider on this pattern . It can ruin mostly of people combo/accuracy in my opinion, according to my trouble . Just play the same objects with previous 1/4 rhythm beforehand
  3. 00:59:440 (4,5) - I rarely seen this kind of pattern in Hard :/ Maybe just let it play with 1/4 kick reverse slider

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Let's say it's ready
Call me again after fix!
Topic Starter
MkGuh

Ipas wrote:

Recheck as your request!

[Easy]
  1. 00:22:395 (3) - Just feel it moves great while I Ctrl+G this slider . It also correspond the next object as nice as it is
  2. 01:25:260 (1,2,3,1) - Make them flow constantly like image below, create more neater transition


[Normal]
  1. 00:03:311 (2) - Curve to upside please . This will allow the flow play smoother The flow is already nice on that way.
  2. 00:08:699 (2) - Ctrl+J please xD Nice
  3. 00:20:150 (6,1) - Whoops, I catch this one as harsh movement since this is a Normal . I'd rather to add some curve, to help the movement . I don't give suggestion, do whatever you want
  4. 00:31:376 (1) - Just telling, it's near off-screen, "near" Well, i won't change it, cause it seems fine for me :P it's on the bg part yet, so :P
  5. 01:12:238 (3) - Curve please, flow plays rigid here
  6. 01:27:954 (1,2) - Same with harsh movement complaint above, they somehow carry it too, curve will helps here


[Hard]
  1. 00:09:373 (4) - Not really think that this jump will fits with song intensity for now . Vocals get the more intensity starts on here 00:09:822 (1) -
  2. 00:45:184 (5) - I admit that I often got 100 while hitting this 1/4 slider on this kind of pattern . So, I really don't recommend to use this slider on this pattern . It can ruin mostly of people combo/accuracy in my opinion, according to my trouble . Just play the same objects with previous 1/4 rhythm beforehand
  3. 00:59:440 (4,5) - I rarely seen this kind of pattern in Hard :/ Maybe just let it play with 1/4 kick reverse slider

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Let's say it's ready
Call me again after fix!
Not replied = fixed

Updated!
Ipas
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