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Basshunter - Jingle Bells

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Slayed_old_1
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Slayed_old_1
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 16 декабря 2015 г. at 20:13:20

Artist: Basshunter
Title: Jingle Bells
Tags: christmas dnb winter drum bass new year fcl zlodeuka-
BPM: 140
Filesize: 9648kb
Play Time: 02:43
Difficulties Available:
  1. Advanced (2,03 stars, 231 notes)
  2. Basic (1,55 stars, 130 notes)
  3. Extreme (3,59 stars, 461 notes)
  4. FCL's Challenging (2,8 stars, 355 notes)
  5. Jingle Bass (4,47 stars, 468 notes)
Download: Basshunter - Jingle Bells
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Basic by me
Advanced is a сollab with Neverwinter
Challenging by FCL
Extreme by me
Jingle Bass by me and ZLOdeuka-
Storyboard by me

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by Kyubey

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Last edited by Slayed_old_1 , edited 83 times in total.
_handholding
3,109 posts
Joined April 2014
_handholding
[justdystonia's easy]

00:10:697 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think you should map the vocals for this part as you have done for the rest of the section.
01:18:197 (4) - move to (384x ,64 y). just so its not touching the edge of slider 3
01:29:125 (3) - add a note here? there is a quite a strong beat
02:24:268 (3,4,5,6) - this is too hard for an easy isnt it?
how aobout this?
[img]02:24:268%20(3,4,5)%20-[/img]
02:37:982 (4,5,6,7,1) - same as above, I think this pattern might be too hard for an easy. Maybe... idk

[Hard]
00:14:125 (1,2,3) - I think that this pattern fits the vocals better, if thats what you were trying to map anyways
01:34:697 (1) - NC
02:39:840 (1) - A jump this big doesnt fit the music imho, it just seemed forced

[Jingle bells]
GG


Thats all I could find. I hope this mod was useful. GL
Slayed_old_1
Topic Starter
Slayed_old_1

Hi Im Nathan wrote:

[justdystonia's easy] its not easy, but ok :D

00:10:697 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think you should map the vocals for this part as you have done for the rest of the section.
01:18:197 (4) - move to (384x ,64 y). just so its not touching the edge of slider 3
01:29:125 (3) - add a note here? there is a quite a strong beat
02:24:268 (3,4,5,6) - this is too hard for an easy isnt it?
how aobout this?
[img]02:24:268%20(3,4,5)%20-[/img]
02:37:982 (4,5,6,7,1) - same as above, I think this pattern might be too hard for an easy. Maybe... idk

[Hard]
00:14:125 (1,2,3) - I think that this pattern fits the vocals better, if thats what you were trying to map anyways
01:34:697 (1) - NC
02:39:840 (1) - A jump this big doesnt fit the music imho, it just seemed forced

[Jingle bells]
GG


Thats all I could find. I hope this mod was useful. GL
thanks for the mod!
Little
2,509 posts
Joined November 2012
Little
Hi!

[General]
  1. According to the Ranking Criteria, the lowest difficulty must be below 2.0 stars. Please adjust the difficulty spread to meet this criterion.
  2. There are no hitsounds in this mapset. You must use hitsounds.

[justDystonia's Standart]
  1. Why is it named "Standart", and not "Standard"?
  2. 00:04:697 (2) - This is touching the HP bar, and can be distracting to the player. Try to adjust the placement to avoid this.
  3. 00:52:482 (2,4) - Stacked circles like this are difficulty for beginners to read, and I advise against using this kind of pattern in the lowest difficulty. Same for other similar parts.
  4. 01:02:554 (2,3) - Try blanketing the sliders evenly for better aesthetic: Image
  5. 01:26:125 (1,2) - The sudden decrease in hit object density seems unreasonable in the context of the music. Perhaps you should map out the rhythms at this part.
  6. 02:23:554 (2,3) - The distance spacing here is huge. I highly recommend shortening the distance to match the rest of the map. For example: Image
  7. 02:23:590 (2,5) - This overlap can cause confusion with the timing of (5) due to overlapping edges. I recommend moving them apart or stacking perfectly to make it more readable.
[Hard]
  1. 00:12:411 (1) - Remove new combo to match with previous combos?
  2. 00:14:768 (2) - I think it would be better if this circle was removed. The rhythm would fit with the song better.
  3. 00:15:840 (4) - The shape is a bit uneven on the right side near the corner. Try to make it smoother and more symmetric like this: Image
  4. 01:47:554 (3) - Try to make the curved part of the slider smoother: Image
  5. 01:52:268 (2,3,4) - This kind of placement is awkward to play because the 1/4 is at a sharp corner, placing strong emphasis on the unimportant beat. Try to make the movement across (2,3,4) more direct.
  6. 02:00:411 (1) - Remove new combo to match other combos.
  7. 02:08:982 (1) - The new combo here is unnecessary and excessive. Remove it.
[Jingle Bass]
  1. 01:01:911 (6,1) - I think it's better to unstack this to avoid confusion since you've used stacks for 1/4 beat in a lot of places. Blanket would be nice: Image
  2. 01:50:982 (3) - I think the flow will be much better if you reverse the direction of this slider.
Louis Cyphre
2,684 posts
Joined October 2009
Louis Cyphre
[Overall]
- Я уверен, есть полно вариантов найти БГ по-новогоднее) Если хочешь - помогу с выбором, напиши в игре, поищем.
- АиМод говорит, что неплохо было бы сделать легкую сложность. Лично я согласен с ним.

[justDistonia's Standart]
- По русски действительно пишется: "Стандарт", а вот по английски: "Standard"
- 00:32:982 (1) - почему не следовать логике и не сделать этот слайдер таким же как и два последующих?
- 00:54:197 (2,3) - неприятный стак, переделать бы так, чтобы было без него
- 01:01:054 (2,3) - ^
01:41:554 (1) - несколько клеток вправо и было бы классно


[Hard]
00:42:411 (3) - И т.д. Зачем? Для меня уже интересно, откуда такие идеи слайдеров?)
01:58:697 (1,2) - этот стак прям режет глаза, исправь)
02:39:411 (1,2,3,4) - Лишь совет дам, может все-таки сделать вот так?
SPOILER

[Jingle Bass]
- А где собственно хитсаунды?
- Не вижу ни малейшего смысла использовать AR9, зачем? 140 бпм же, давай на единичку меньше.
- 00:03:840 - начало карты, такой релакс, а хитсаунды на Normal стоят. Ставь софт и используй свистки софтовские, куда лучше звучать будет.
- 00:08:768 (3,1) - эм, а смысл прыжка?
- 00:15:840 (1) - хмм. Зачем? Может все же просто слайдер какой-нибудь, по-скромнее?
- 01:17:554 (1) - левее бы чуток, чтобы так некрасно он не виден был снизу сразу после стрима.
- 01:30:411 (5) - new combo
- 01:34:697 (1) - не обоснованно. Слишком жесткий переход для такого момента.
- 01:55:268 - самый кайфучий момент. Я бы прыжкого бы все сделал, чтобы прям аж мочило), 02:12:411 - как начиная отсюда, например.
- 02:41:554 - снизь громкость до 5% на софте.
Slayed_old_1
Topic Starter
Slayed_old_1
Little's mod

Little wrote:

Hi!

[General]
  1. According to the Ranking Criteria, the lowest difficulty must be below 2.0 stars. Please adjust the difficulty spread to meet this criterion. yeah, i need to add an easy diff
  2. There are no hitsounds in this mapset. You must use hitsounds. ye, ill ad them

[justDystonia's Standart]
  1. Why is it named "Standart", and not "Standard"?
  2. 00:04:697 (2) - This is touching the HP bar, and can be distracting to the player. Try to adjust the placement to avoid this.
  3. 00:52:482 (2,4) - Stacked circles like this are difficulty for beginners to read, and I advise against using this kind of pattern in the lowest difficulty. Same for other similar parts. i dont think that this stacking is that unreadable
  4. 01:02:554 (2,3) - Try blanketing the sliders evenly for better aesthetic: Image
  5. 01:26:125 (1,2) - The sudden decrease in hit object density seems unreasonable in the context of the music. Perhaps you should map out the rhythms at this part. i wanted to give a rest for new players, but if some1 else will notice, ill fix it up
  6. 02:23:554 (2,3) - The distance spacing here is huge. I highly recommend shortening the distance to match the rest of the map. For example: Image oops, my bad
  7. 02:23:590 (2,5) - This overlap can cause confusion with the timing of (5) due to overlapping edges. I recommend moving them apart or stacking perfectly to make it more readable. i dont understand about what objects are u speaking


[Hard]
  1. 00:12:411 (1) - Remove new combo to match with previous combos? this NC was put reasonable to others
  2. 00:14:768 (2) - I think it would be better if this circle was removed. The rhythm would fit with the song better. im mapping on vocal, so this bit is needed
  3. 00:15:840 (4) - The shape is a bit uneven on the right side near the corner. Try to make it smoother and more symmetric like this: Image
  4. 01:47:554 (3) - Try to make the curved part of the slider smoother: Image
  5. 01:52:268 (2,3,4) - This kind of placement is awkward to play because the 1/4 is at a sharp corner, placing strong emphasis on the unimportant beat. Try to make the movement across (2,3,4) more direct. im mapping on vocal, so this bit is needed
  6. 02:00:411 (1) - Remove new combo to match other combos. this NC was put reasonable to others
  7. 02:08:982 (1) - The new combo here is unnecessary and excessive. Remove it.
[Jingle Bass]
  1. 01:01:911 (6,1) - I think it's better to unstack this to avoid confusion since you've used stacks for 1/4 beat in a lot of places. Blanket would be nice: Image its insane, so it will be harder to play
  2. 01:50:982 (3) - I think the flow will be much better if you reverse the direction of this slider.
no reply = fixed

Thanks! :)



Louis Cyphre's mod

Louis Cyphre wrote:

[Overall]
- Я уверен, есть полно вариантов найти БГ по-новогоднее) Если хочешь - помогу с выбором, напиши в игре, поищем.
- АиМод говорит, что неплохо было бы сделать легкую сложность. Лично я согласен с ним.

[justDistonia's Standart]
- По русски действительно пишется: "Стандарт", а вот по английски: "Standard"
- 00:32:982 (1) - почему не следовать логике и не сделать этот слайдер таким же как и два последующих?
- 00:54:197 (2,3) - неприятный стак, переделать бы так, чтобы было без него
- 01:01:054 (2,3) - ^
01:41:554 (1) - несколько клеток вправо и было бы классно


[Hard]
00:42:411 (3) - И т.д. Зачем? Для меня уже интересно, откуда такие идеи слайдеров?)
01:58:697 (1,2) - этот стак прям режет глаза, исправь)
02:39:411 (1,2,3,4) - Лишь совет дам, может все-таки сделать вот так?


[Jingle Bass]
- А где собственно хитсаунды?
- Не вижу ни малейшего смысла использовать AR9, зачем? 140 бпм же, давай на единичку меньше.
- 00:03:840 - начало карты, такой релакс, а хитсаунды на Normal стоят. Ставь софт и используй свистки софтовские, куда лучше звучать будет.
- 00:08:768 (3,1) - эм, а смысл прыжка?
- 00:15:840 (1) - хмм. Зачем? Может все же просто слайдер какой-нибудь, по-скромнее?
- 01:17:554 (1) - левее бы чуток, чтобы так некрасно он не виден был снизу сразу после стрима.
- 01:30:411 (5) - new combo
- 01:34:697 (1) - не обоснованно. Слишком жесткий переход для такого момента.
- 01:55:268 - самый кайфучий момент. Я бы прыжкого бы все сделал, чтобы прям аж мочило), 02:12:411 - как начиная отсюда, например.
- 02:41:554 - снизь громкость до 5% на софте.
Неудобно писать пояснения к твоему моду, поэтому не стал. Многое пофиксил, спасибо!

Thanks! :)
riffy
osu! Alumni
8,060 posts
Joined December 2010
riffy
We did a short look through on this set with the mapper. Mainly minor changes.

Get back to me when it's ready! ♥
Slayed_old_1
Topic Starter
Slayed_old_1

Bakari wrote:

We did a short look through on this set with the mapper. Mainly minor changes.

Get back to me when it's ready! ♥
thanks a lot! <3
ErunamoJAZZ
osu! Alumni
2,693 posts
Joined August 2012
ErunamoJAZZ
[easy]
  1. 00:08:125 (2) - why is it straight if 00:07:268 (1) - is not?, looks a vit strange imo, http://puu.sh/lsOTb/35e940c291.jpg well.. idk, this happen in all map.. looks a bit random imo, :P
  2. 00:12:411 (2) - use 2 nodes to improve the blanket. Also, bc the flow, a shape like this will be better: http://puu.sh/lsOYV/5f7910d635.jpg
    If you notice, actually the flow is pointing to the tail of 00:14:125 (1) - !, for beginners, stuffs like this will be confusing.
  3. 00:23:554 (2) - move a bit to right for better flow: http://puu.sh/lsPa0/babfbe16bc.jpg
  4. 00:33:840 (2) - same here: http://puu.sh/lsPc5/bc195be96b.jpg
  5. 00:38:125 (1,2) - similar issue happen here! If a beggine play this, it is likely that fails, clicking in the tail of 00:39:840 (2) - .
    I think is very importat try to make easy diffs, more friendly to new players.
  6. 00:44:125 (2) - move a mit to the right, you know :P
  7. 00:44:982 (1) - ... You really will improve it.
    How to:
    1)

    2)
    (Ctrl+Shif+S)

    3) And rote with Ctrl+Shif+R.
  8. 00:57:840 (2) - move a bit to right.
  9. 00:58:697 (1) - to improve the flow to the next circle?
  10. 01:03:840 (3) - i think a shape like this will be better: http://puu.sh/lsPZq/60cc4781a4.jpg
  11. 01:56:125 (2,1) - overlap!!!, and, move 01:56:982 (1) - to right for better flow pls :3
  12. 02:28:697 (2) - randomrednode~? :P
  13. 02:36:411 (1) - move a bit to right pls
  14. 02:38:982 (2,3,1) - mm...mmm.... I think a repear slider will be better... but try to ask more opinions:
[Standard]
  1. 00:11:125 (2) - this will feels better:
  2. 00:33:625 - 00:34:482 - Polarity issues!!!, pls fix it. My suggestion is add a circle, and a slider:
  3. 00:51:840 (1) - make curve like in 00:52:697 (3) - : http://puu.sh/lsRla/336d6ee556.jpg
  4. 00:58:697 (1) - pls, consider to change the curve: http://puu.sh/lsRqt/afcaef0fba.jpg
  5. 01:05:554 - I realy think avoit some note here is bad idea. Consider add a circle or repeat the slider.
  6. 01:26:982 (3,1) - hhmm... The flow between 01:27:840 (1,2) - feels really wrong. I want to sugest this refactorig (using Ctrl+G, Ctrl+H, Ctrl+J):
    tadaaann~
  7. 02:00:268 - i think add a note here will be nice (Following the voice).
  8. 02:07:125 - same here!
  9. 02:08:125 (5,1) - I want to suggest this:
  10. 02:24:268 (3,4,5,6) - :!: I really think this is not appropriate. This is very difficut to read, and usually, is bad idea when slider tail is over a big white tick.
    Pls, consider some like this:
  11. 02:31:125 (3,4,5,6) - 02:37:982 (4,5,6) - :!: Same here... pls >_<
[Hard]
  1. 00:05:554 (3,4) - improve the blanket pls
  2. 00:16:054 - this square feels wrong for me... ask for more opinions pls.
  3. mm.. idk, this have many triples... spread with normal will be complicated.
  4. 01:05:554 - same that normal.
  5. 01:16:161 (2) - and etc... orz, you are overusing this pattern... feels boring if you use it in all ._.
Take care about spread with normal. Ask more about it.

[Insane]
  1. 00:07:268 (1) - this flow feels strange for me u.u
  2. 00:12:625 (2) - overmapped?
  3. 00:15:840 (1) - lol, improve the blanket :P
  4. 00:39:732 - add a note?
  5. 00:59:554 (1,2,3,4) - why same shape?? is boring~, try another way~ :)
  6. 01:05:554 - same that normal.
  7. 01:15:732 - add a note?
  8. 01:33:197 (2,3,4,5) - I dont understand your intention here. I want to suggest this:
  9. 01:35:125 (5,6) - some like before... my sugestion:
  10. 02:20:982 (1) - 02:21:411 (2) - short and add a circle pls
  11. mm.. Spacing feels a bit extrem at end imo, but ask for testplays first :)

Yeah, my english sux, so, ask me if you dont understand something. 8-)
Good luck with hitsounds!
Hathz
157 posts
Joined August 2013
Hathz
Hai, for M4M oh god this song

[General]
  1. soft-hitfinish.mp3 - Perhaps convert this to a .wav format as it is a hitsound
  2. Hitsounding could be a lot better in some places (for example 01:50:982 (3,4,5,1,2) these claps are kinda random, you have them on 3 and 2 but following your hitsounding logic from a few objects earlier they should be on 5 and 4 that follows the 2. I dunno it's just weird to me this way it doesn't fit the music at all IMO)
[Easy]
  1. Reduce AR and OD, they seem too high to me. AR 3 and OD 4 for example.
  2. 00:31:268 (1) - The way this folds back on itself may be inappropriate for an Easy difficulty. I don't know how rankability goes with this though.
  3. 01:10:697 (2) - Same for this
  4. 00:34:697 (3) - Have just a circle instead of a slider? A nice strong impact there and no need to drag it out with a slider.
  5. 01:22:697 - Why is there a break here :( Beginner players have less song to play, and it's not even a calmer section so the break doesn't fit.
  6. 01:56:125 (2,1) - Adjust these to remove tiny overlap
[Standard] -- could just be called Normal, weird mix of difficulty naming IMO
  1. Could increase HP by 1
  2. 00:20:982 (1,2,3,4,1) - Spacing is slightly off 1.40 on these
  3. 00:51:840 (1,2,3,4) - This is a bit dodgy IMO, this stack will probably be misread by a beginner; maybe do it kinda like you did here 00:58:697 (1,2,3,4) ?
  4. 01:20:768 (3,4) - Overlaps on edge, looks unpolished
  5. 02:23:554 (2,3) - Huge spacing change here, ples fix to constant 1.40x
  6. 02:25:554 (6,1) - These are a bit too close at 1.30x
  7. 02:35:554 (4,1) - ^ 1.20x
[Hard]
  1. 00:30:840 (1,2,3,4,1) - Why do these streams have different spacing than this for example 00:29:982 (2,3,4), for one it looks unpolished and also messes with reading since the spacing is inconsistent while the time between objects is the same. Also these triples and streams seem a bit too hard for this difficulty to me. /rant mode off
  2. 00:43:268 (1,2) - Touching on the edge
  3. 01:58:697 (1,2,3) - ^, few more around the map that could use some changing around
  4. 00:45:840 (4,2) - These are not blanketed correctly
  5. 01:19:054 (5,1) - There's no need for this jump here
  6. 01:29:340 (5,1) - ^
  7. 01:32:768 (5,1,2) - ^, and this is pretty hard to hit at this skill level IMO
  8. 01:34:054 (4,1) - Reading the amount of reverses on these sliders is a hard, there's no clear indication other than the approach circle of the next object when the player should move on to the next object. Same here 01:12:625 (2,3) and some other places too. If you really wanna put these reversing sliders in there I'd really just keep em all the same length if they follow one another to make reading easy.
  9. 02:39:697 (6,1) - This last jump is also unfitting I think, if you just make a diamond shape with those 4 circles at the end it should end up fine

Good luck I guess :)
Shmiklak
Elite Storyboarder
3,218 posts
Joined January 2015
Shmiklak
#RANDOM

General

Как мне кажется после припева должно быть еще одно киаи тут 01:08:982 и тут 02:12:411. Сделай хотя бы просто киаи в один тик
Превью ты выбрал так себе. Мне кажется лучше один из этих вариантов:
00:38:018
00:51:732
01:05:447

Easy

00:16:697 - Мб начать перерыв с 00:17:554 (хотя при игре это не так заметно, так что тут дело твое)
00:39:411 - Мб ноту? Здесь хорошо слышны ударные и мне кажется так будет лучше
00:41:125 - ^
00:46:268 - ^
00:47:982 - ^
00:54:840 - ^
Думаю моя мысль понятна. Дальше сделай также в таких местах

Normal

02:23:554 (2,3) - АИМод ругается на ДС

Hardl

Может быть CS лучше сделать где то 3.5 а AR может быть 8? Мне кажется так лучше играется
___________________________________________________________________________________________
Удачи!

P.S. Зачем стоит 1/3 в изи и нормале? Ты ведь их даже не используешь, хотя возможно я не заметил
Slayed_old_1
Topic Starter
Slayed_old_1
0.o
Thanks all, I will check all your mods in the evening, when I will be at home

edit: used all mods, thanks
Last edited by Slayed_old_1 , edited 2 times in total.
Yuzeyun
7,622 posts
Joined September 2010
Yuzeyun
i'll laugh if it gets ranked on january 1st
Slayed_old_1
Topic Starter
Slayed_old_1

_Gezo_ wrote:

i'll laugh if it gets ranked on january 1st
i will try to make u laugh
Seijiro
osu! Alumni
3,438 posts
Joined April 2013
Seijiro
M4M

[General]
  • Nothing relevant here

[Jingle Bass]
  • At the start of the song it's hard to understand what you're following... For example 00:05:554 (1,2,3) - follows the vocals (above all 00:06:197 (2) - ), while the next combo, 00:07:268 (1,2,3) - , follows the bells. Basically, you didn't use 00:07:911 - even if there was a similar vocal to the previous combo.
    I say this mostly because you start following a lot vocals afterwards. 00:10:697 - From here on...

    00:32:982 (1,2) - I find this spacing really too low, compared to the rest. Since you'd have to use a spacing which doesn't even fit on the playfield I suggest placing the stack under the previous slider and moving 5 the opposite direction, like this

    00:40:268 (2,3) - Just personal flow: Ctrl + G? Most of the times a linear flow isn't the best choice imo. With this said I won't say any more of these suggestions since they are indeed personal, but keep it in mind for the future maybe

    00:43:054 (5,1) - I don't know if this is part of your "personal patterns" on the map, but seeing the strong beat on 1 your pattern feels really off, because you waste the impact you have on 1's head by placing its body in the opposite way from where you came.
    What about something like this ?

    00:58:697 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - You have quartets of notes for each combo, yet you use triangles (triplets). It's not like it's uncomfortable to play, but feels strange when the NC is placed on different places even tho they are the same sound which should fall on the same spot each time imo

    01:17:125 (6,7,8,9) - It seems the same sound as for 01:13:697 (7,3,3) - imo... Either make use the current pattern once more somewhere near this one or convert it into a slider with repeats as before for consistency

    01:19:590 (2) - Why is this the only one with an extra repeat? You used only 2 repeats so far, and now you use 3... is there any particular reason?

    01:23:875 (5,6) - And here your objects' order is reversed... The strong beat is on 01:23:982 - so you should keep using that as the beat to place your slider on

    01:29:982 (3,4) - Since the music is always the same I don't see a point in changing pattern so frequently...

    01:33:197 (2,3,4) - I wonder what's with this pattern... its shape doesn't tell me much and the flow can be biased... What about something like this? At least as a general order...

    01:33:625 (4,5) - Also, this jump kinda stands out... mostly because it looks the same as 01:33:840 (5,6) - while it isn't. 4 --> 5 is x2.84 DS and 5 --> 6 is x1.20 DS... wth... If they were both 1/2 notes I could have understood it, but like this they are just randomly placed...
    Move 5 closer to 4 at least. Making the DS even isn't something I can ask, obviously, but at least make the difference smaller

    01:35:447 (6) - Another beat wasted, or rather, not properly mapped. I'm referring to 01:35:554 - which stands on a repeat... + 01:35:447 (6,7) - random jump in the middle of the combo. Last time I saw a 1/8 slider was at 01:22:375 (4) - and there was no jump at all

    01:36:090 (8,9,10,1) - This curve isn't really defined... Is there any way to improve it?

    01:42:411 (3,1) - I'm not really a fan of this kind of overlaps, but I guess it can pass seeing the SV...

    01:49:911 (5,1) - I already mentioned this above. Same suggestion

    02:28:411 (4,5) - Personal flow I'd rather use: Ctrl + G?

    02:39:947 (1) - Maybe make the spinner end where the sound actually disappears at 02:44:125 - ?

[Hyper]
  • 00:27:197 (5,6,7,1) - When using square patterns you put the same emphasis on each of the 4 notes used to make it, therefore you must have 4 equal beats in the music to support this pattern. Imo 00:27:625 (7) - is way weaker than the others in this square pattern: either remove it or convert 6 and 7 into a slider

    00:32:982 (7,1) - Your NC is on 7 on your Jingle Bass diff. Actually, now that I notice, the Combo-ing here is a bit strange compared to the one I just modded. Why don't you use the 4 measures NC you used on your Jingle Bass diff here too?
    Even the start... you used the vocals to place your NC.. why...

    00:48:840 (2,3) - Clap goes on 2, not 3, following your hitsound pattern.
    In general I would have used the 4th measure to put the Clap, and not the 2nd one... (00:46:268 - instead of 00:45:411 - and so on)

    01:42:411 (3) - This shape isn't really nice...

    01:50:554 (2,3) - Clap on 2's head, not on 3

    02:39:697 (6,1) - Ugh... a bit too large imo

    02:39:947 (1) - Same as for Jingle Bass diff

[FCL's Intermediate]
  • 00:48:840 (3,4) - Same as for the above diff, the Clap should go on 3's head, not on 4, following your hitsounding pattern

    01:07:697 - The lead in effect of the break is intended to mean something particular or... Imo, if you really want to use it, place it at least on a spot where there is some rhythm starting... like 01:07:911 - (1/4 snap)

    01:11:340 (5,6,1,1) - Apart from the 2 first objects which I can leave there even if they are standing out a bit too much for their speed, I 'm more concerned about the Combo-ing: the NC should go on 01:11:554 (6) - and all the other NCs are just useless...
    Now that I look carefully, even on this diff the Combo-ing goes a bit nuts for some reason... You should follow the 4 measures concept here too, since the song is practically the same for 3 minutes.
    NC goes on these objects only: 01:08:982 (1,1,1,1,1,3) - And so on... (I won't comment on NCs any more since you just have to place a NC every 4 measures, that's all)

    01:21:625 (6,7,1) - Really cramped and not really clean compared to the beginning of the map. Can't we improve it a little more?

    01:35:340 (5,6) - I'd rather have 2 circles stacked on 6 instead of that misleading mini-slider

    01:50:554 (3,4) - Same as above, the Clap goes on 3's head

    01:56:125 (3,4) - Kinda uncool overlap :v

    02:26:840 (3,4,5,6,7) - Why only the first note is stacked? Also, I find the whole pattern a bit too hard compared to the others...

    02:30:268 - I wonder why you skip the beat in places like 02:30:268 - or 02:19:982 -

    02:39:268 (1,2,3,4) - Again, I don't understand the meaning behind the stack between the first 2 notes...

    02:39:840 - I'd rather put a circle here, and place the spinner 1/4 later

    02:39:840 (1) - As for the other diffs, I'd rather make this finish at 02:44:125 -

[Advanced]
  • 00:48:411 (1,3) - Clap on 1's tail

    00:50:125 (1,3) - Same ^

    01:50:125 (1,3) - Same ^

    02:40:125 (1) - Same as for the other diffs

[Basic]
  • 00:50:125 (1,2) - Clap on 2's head

    01:22:268 - Break o.O? Come on, you just have to place a couple of sliders to get to the spinner anyways lol

    02:39:982 (1) - Same as for the other diffs

That's all from me I guess.
Make sure to re-check your NCs on all diffs, since it looks like they were placed a bit randomly. Each 4 measure (8 for Easy and Normal maybe) should be a good meter.
Good luck~
FCL
1,478 posts
Joined July 2014
FCL
01:56:125 (3,4) - Kinda uncool overlap :v no, it's cool
Other fixed, thanks for the mod!
SPOILER
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[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 115268
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
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DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 3
GridSize: 4
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[Metadata]
Title:Jingle Bells
TitleUnicode:Jingle Bells
Artist:Basshunter
ArtistUnicode:Basshunter
Creator:ohyeahitsjustme
Version:FCL's Intermediate
Source:
Tags:christmas dnb winter drum bass new year
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Slayed_old_1
Topic Starter
Slayed_old_1

MrSergio wrote:

M4M

[General]
  • Nothing relevant here

[Hyper]
  • 00:27:197 (5,6,7,1) - When using square patterns you put the same emphasis on each of the 4 notes used to make it, therefore you must have 4 equal beats in the music to support this pattern. Imo 00:27:625 (7) - is way weaker than the others in this square pattern: either remove it or convert 6 and 7 into a slider like this way, 5,6,7 beats are similar, 1 - not, so NC

    00:32:982 (7,1) - Your NC is on 7 on your Jingle Bass diff. Actually, now that I notice, the Combo-ing here is a bit strange compared to the one I just modded. Why don't you use the 4 measures NC you used on your Jingle Bass diff here too?
    Even the start... you used the vocals to place your NC.. why... really dont wanna work on NC right now

    00:48:840 (2,3) - Clap goes on 2, not 3, following your hitsound pattern.
    In general I would have used the 4th measure to put the Clap, and not the 2nd one... (00:46:268 - instead of 00:45:411 - and so on) fixed

    01:42:411 (3) - This shape isn't really nice... like it

    01:50:554 (2,3) - Clap on 2's head, not on 3 fixed

    02:39:697 (6,1) - Ugh... a bit too large imo its ok

    02:39:947 (1) - Same as for Jingle Bass diff fixed

[Advanced]
  • 00:48:411 (1,3) - Clap on 1's tail fixed

    00:50:125 (1,3) - Same ^ fixed

    01:50:125 (1,3) - Same ^ fixed

    02:40:125 (1) - Same as for the other diffs fixed

[Basic]
  • 00:50:125 (1,2) - Clap on 2's head fixed

    01:22:268 - Break o.O? Come on, you just have to place a couple of sliders to get to the spinner anyways lol like this break

    02:39:982 (1) - Same as for the other diffs fixed

That's all from me I guess.
Make sure to re-check your NCs on all diffs, since it looks like they were placed a bit randomly. Each 4 measure (8 for Easy and Normal maybe) should be a good meter.
Good luck~
didnt check Insane caz its WIP.

thanks.
Vovan
547 posts
Joined March 2014
Vovan
Hi, NM from my modding queue

Basic

00:29:554 (1,2) - Slider with reverse & circle.

01:08:982 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Not any circle here ? o_O

01:51:840 (3) - A smallest slider with reverse sound better.

Advanced



00:54:197 (2) - The circle touch the slider :c

01:01:054 (2) - ^

This map need to be ranked before the 25th December ♥♥♥
Slayed_old_1
Topic Starter
Slayed_old_1

Dono027 wrote:

Hi, NM from my modding queue

Basic

00:29:554 (1,2) - Slider with reverse & circle.

01:08:982 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Not any circle here ? o_O

01:51:840 (3) - A smallest slider with reverse sound better.

Advanced



00:54:197 (2) - The circle touch the slider :c

01:01:054 (2) - ^

This map need to be ranked before the 25th December ♥♥♥
Thanks! :)
Starset
652 posts
Joined April 2015
Starset
Hey M4M

[Basic]
-so in genral hitsounds are not placed properly ill tell u how u may fix
-00:44:982 - from this part why not:

and then put clap on every slider's head and tail
-wat happened to claps for the rest of the song? specially kiai (u should put clap every Upbeat)
-02:14:982 (2) - could barely see the changing of shape u should move the red point up a bit
-02:36:411 - i recommend u put hitfinish here

[Advanced]
-00:08:982 (4) - can do better slider shape here :3 improvise
-00:11:125 (2) - not really sure if this follows anything
-00:29:554 (1,1) - blanket need impovements
-00:46:268 - 00:47:982 - 00:49:697 - 00:50:554 - 00:51:411 - no claps here? o.o
-00:50:125 - 00:50:982 - why claps here o.o
-no claps for kiai o_O
-00:50:982 - can move this slider tail a bit to the right:

so the overlap with 2 will look more intentionally made ;)
-put claps in all of the song pls o.o (every upbeat)
-01:20:768 (3,4) - those are touching each other looks bad imo
-01:27:840 (1,2,3) - dont like the flow here should put 2 in front of 1 and then improvise for the rest :p
-01:31:268 (3,5) - could seperate them apart a bit
-01:40:697 (3,1) - ^
-01:50:125 - 01:50:982 - 01:52:268 - i said every upbeat pls this does not sound gud to my ear
-02:25:125 (5) - can stack tail on 02:23:554 (2) - 's tail
-02:36:411 - hitfinish here

[FCL's Intermediate]
-00:33:411 (7,8) - hmm a lille bit confusing here maybe NC here 00:33:732 (8) - or remap that part :s
-also wat happened to claps in this diff too (pls read wat i said for other diffs)
-01:19:268 (1,2) - looks bad imo, blanket it
-01:52:911 (1) - remove NC here
-01:53:554 (2) - NC
-02:13:411 - missing note

[Hyper]
-00:14:768 (2,4) - if u look closely its not stacked properly
-00:38:768 (3,5) - stack
-00:57:840 (3) - sry but i dont like this slider shape
-01:36:411 (1) - finish
-01:44:125 (3,1) - bad overlap
-01:48:840 (2,3) - hmm not flowing great here

Guess that's all gud luck and starrrr :3
FCL
1,478 posts
Joined July 2014
FCL
all fixed, thanks. Тоже не знаю что там с клапами, вообщем пофиксишь, скопируешь
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Slayed_old_1
Topic Starter
Slayed_old_1

HB24 wrote:

Hey M4M

.
[Basic]
-so in genral hitsounds are not placed properly ill tell u how u may fix
-00:44:982 - from this part why not:

and then put clap on every slider's head and tail
-wat happened to claps for the rest of the song? specially kiai (u should put clap every Upbeat)
-02:14:982 (2) - could barely see the changing of shape u should move the red point up a bit
-02:36:411 - i recommend u put hitfinish here

[Advanced]
-00:08:982 (4) - can do better slider shape here :3 improvise
-00:11:125 (2) - not really sure if this follows anything
-00:29:554 (1,1) - blanket need impovements
-00:46:268 - 00:47:982 - 00:49:697 - 00:50:554 - 00:51:411 - no claps here? o.o
-00:50:125 - 00:50:982 - why claps here o.o
-no claps for kiai o_O
-00:50:982 - can move this slider tail a bit to the right:

so the overlap with 2 will look more intentionally made ;)
-put claps in all of the song pls o.o (every upbeat)
-01:20:768 (3,4) - those are touching each other looks bad imo
-01:27:840 (1,2,3) - dont like the flow here should put 2 in front of 1 and then improvise for the rest :p
-01:31:268 (3,5) - could seperate them apart a bit
-01:40:697 (3,1) - ^
-01:50:125 - 01:50:982 - 01:52:268 - i said every upbeat pls this does not sound gud to my ear
-02:25:125 (5) - can stack tail on 02:23:554 (2) - 's tail
-02:36:411 - hitfinish here

[FCL's Intermediate]
-00:33:411 (7,8) - hmm a lille bit confusing here maybe NC here 00:33:732 (8) - or remap that part :s
-also wat happened to claps in this diff too (pls read wat i said for other diffs)
-01:19:268 (1,2) - looks bad imo, blanket it
-01:52:911 (1) - remove NC here
-01:53:554 (2) - NC
-02:13:411 - missing note

[Hyper]
-00:14:768 (2,4) - if u look closely its not stacked properly
-00:38:768 (3,5) - stack
-00:57:840 (3) - sry but i dont like this slider shape
-01:36:411 (1) - finish
-01:44:125 (3,1) - bad overlap
-01:48:840 (2,3) - hmm not flowing great here

Guess that's all gud luck and starrrr :3
fixed hitsounds.. maybe.
thanks a lot! :)
Yumeko
65 posts
Joined November 2014
Yumeko
beep boop m4m

[Hyper]

looks good

[Another]

this diff is amazing.

00:30:840 (7,8) - Increase the SV of the kicksliders ? 1.3x+ (applies to all kickslider on this diff)
00:33:197 (2,3,4,5) - Blanket
02:37:268 (3,4,5,6) - Doesn't flow well for me

[Jingle Bass]

alternators heaven

00:04:697 (2) - I don't like this slider D: Make a curved slider instead?
e1
00:23:982 (6,7,8,9) - These could be kicksliders. Some of the triplets too around here too but those are fine for now, turning them into kicksliders just add more variety
00:26:768 (3,4,5) - Kickslider into singles instead of triplets if you want.
00:41:340 (4,1,2,3) - Doesn't flow well imo. I turned 4,1,2 into a triangle and it feels alot better
00:46:697 (1) - Move this down a bit so it plays like 00:45:411 (2,3,4) - ?
01:09:411 - 01:36:518 - I thought the spacing was too op but then I remembered this is a extra. Try turning some of these into triangles/squares ? Flows pretty well regardless. Really fun
02:08:982 (1) - I feel this is too far up. Reduce the jump a bit?
02:14:125 (1,2,3,4) - Doesn't flow well for me
02:28:125 (2,3,4,5,6) - This is pretty hard
02:30:411 (3,4,5,6) - ^ maybe move 5 to 192,0

sorry if my mods weren't helpful :c my mapping style isn't really compatible with yours at all

great map though, especially Another diff. Really fun
Slayed_old_1
Topic Starter
Slayed_old_1

Yumeko wrote:

beep boop m4m

[Hyper]

looks good

[Another]

this diff is amazing.

00:30:840 (7,8) - Increase the SV of the kicksliders ? 1.3x+ (applies to all kickslider on this diff)
00:33:197 (2,3,4,5) - Blanket
02:37:268 (3,4,5,6) - Doesn't flow well for me

[Jingle Bass]

alternators heaven

00:04:697 (2) - I don't like this slider D: Make a curved slider instead?
e1
00:23:982 (6,7,8,9) - These could be kicksliders. Some of the triplets too around here too but those are fine for now, turning them into kicksliders just add more variety
00:26:768 (3,4,5) - Kickslider into singles instead of triplets if you want.
00:41:340 (4,1,2,3) - Doesn't flow well imo. I turned 4,1,2 into a triangle and it feels alot better
00:46:697 (1) - Move this down a bit so it plays like 00:45:411 (2,3,4) - ?
01:09:411 - 01:36:518 - I thought the spacing was too op but then I remembered this is a extra. Try turning some of these into triangles/squares ? Flows pretty well regardless. Really fun
02:08:982 (1) - I feel this is too far up. Reduce the jump a bit?
02:14:125 (1,2,3,4) - Doesn't flow well for me
02:28:125 (2,3,4,5,6) - This is pretty hard
02:30:411 (3,4,5,6) - ^ maybe move 5 to 192,0

sorry if my mods weren't helpful :c my mapping style isn't really compatible with yours at all

great map though, especially Another diff. Really fun
thanks.
Mikii
393 posts
Joined August 2013
Mikii
M4M request

Hyper


  1. 00:27:197 (5) - Consider nerfing this square pattern slightly
  2. 01:33:840 (3) - put this closer to the repeater for readability
  3. 01:35:982 (4) - Feel like this should be on the white tick to make it easier to read

Another

  1. 00:13:911 (2) - Space this slightly to the right
  2. 01:35:340 (5) - Slider because of polarity on the previous blue tick slider
  3. In general during the normal 140bpm rhythm, you can make some nice circle patterns or at least polish the basic circle patterns to look nicer. I just did a quick example like here 01:53:554 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
    SPOILER
    Here are a few example of places you can polish
    00:26:982 (3) -
    00:38:125 (1) - star pattern maybe?
    00:43:268 (1) - 1 and 2 have a weird path maybe like this
    SPOILER
    00:45:840 (3) -


Jingle Bass

    1. 00:06:197 (4) - I feel that blanketing here ruins the flow and should be placed near the sliderend of 3.
    2. 01:08:982 (1) - I don't know, I feel the spike in diff to tap at 280bpm isn't appropriate or at least the spacing might be too large between each circle. It at leasts needs some sliders in between to ease the tapping a little without the need to keep the difficulty down. Straight circle spam is not the answer imo.
      02:12:411 (1) - see at this part the rhythm interval is much slower and so using circles like this is more playable than what it is here
    3. 01:20:982 (1,2) - Ctrl+g this so the slider starts on the white tick. Its actually best that most of the sliders start on white/red ticks when appropriate like
      01:09:304 (2) - 01:10:161 (2) - 01:11:018 (2) - should not be on blue ticks
    4. 01:44:125 (3) - Weird slider curve
    5. 02:16:982 (5) - Just a preference place at x:160 y:20 for symmetry pattern
    6. 02:27:268 (5) - same here maybe

I took at look at advanced and easy and they look like they're fine. I don't have any comments for those
Merry christmas :)
Slayed_old_1
Topic Starter
Slayed_old_1

Mikii wrote:

M4M request

Hyper


  1. 00:27:197 (5) - Consider nerfing this square pattern slightly
  2. 01:33:840 (3) - put this closer to the repeater for readability
  3. 01:35:982 (4) - Feel like this should be on the white tick to make it easier to read

Another

  1. 00:13:911 (2) - Space this slightly to the right
  2. 01:35:340 (5) - Slider because of polarity on the previous blue tick slider
  3. In general during the normal 140bpm rhythm, you can make some nice circle patterns or at least polish the basic circle patterns to look nicer. I just did a quick example like here 01:53:554 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
    SPOILER
    Here are a few example of places you can polish
    00:26:982 (3) -
    00:38:125 (1) - star pattern maybe?
    00:43:268 (1) - 1 and 2 have a weird path maybe like this
    SPOILER
    00:45:840 (3) -


Jingle Bass

    1. 00:06:197 (4) - I feel that blanketing here ruins the flow and should be placed near the sliderend of 3.
    2. 01:08:982 (1) - I don't know, I feel the spike in diff to tap at 280bpm isn't appropriate or at least the spacing might be too large between each circle. It at leasts needs some sliders in between to ease the tapping a little without the need to keep the difficulty down. Straight circle spam is not the answer imo.
      02:12:411 (1) - see at this part the rhythm interval is much slower and so using circles like this is more playable than what it is here
    3. 01:20:982 (1,2) - Ctrl+g this so the slider starts on the white tick. Its actually best that most of the sliders start on white/red ticks when appropriate like
      01:09:304 (2) - 01:10:161 (2) - 01:11:018 (2) - should not be on blue ticks
    4. 01:44:125 (3) - Weird slider curve
    5. 02:16:982 (5) - Just a preference place at x:160 y:20 for symmetry pattern
    6. 02:27:268 (5) - same here maybe

I took at look at advanced and easy and they look like they're fine. I don't have any comments for those
Merry christmas :)
thanks!
merry christmas :)
Lama Poluna
796 posts
Joined June 2014
Lama Poluna
SPOILER
14:22 Lama Poluna: беба
14:22 Lama Poluna: го
14:23 Lama Poluna: че ты там модишь
14:23 Slayed: дава
14:24 *Lama Poluna is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/830155 Basshunter - Jingle Bells [Basic]]
14:24 Lama Poluna: Я чекать
14:24 Lama Poluna: Даже не буду
14:24 Lama Poluna: Ибо всегда в изи все намана
14:24 Lama Poluna: Хера ты в изи
14:24 Lama Poluna: Хс не поставил?
14:24 Slayed: я нигде не поставил
14:24 Slayed: я не умею блин
14:24 *Lama Poluna is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/827595 Basshunter - Jingle Bells [Advanced]]
14:24 Lama Poluna: Тут есть хс
14:24 Lama Poluna: Там нет
14:25 Slayed: да
14:25 Slayed: разве
14:25 Slayed: ну бля
14:25 Slayed: орни неправильные
14:25 Slayed: наверно
14:25 Slayed: хз
14:25 Slayed: научите
14:25 Slayed: ставить хс
14:25 Slayed: ;_;
14:25 Lama Poluna: Ноту выбираешь
14:25 Lama Poluna: И ставишь
14:25 Slayed: а как понять куда свисток куда финиш а куда хлопок по сраке
14:26 Lama Poluna: 00:34:268 (3) -
14:26 Lama Poluna: Тут бит мисаешь
14:26 Lama Poluna: ноту ставь
14:26 Slayed: где
14:26 Slayed: в адванседе
14:26 Lama Poluna: НУ ДААААААААААААа
14:26 Slayed: а че нахуя ноту туда там слайдер
14:27 Lama Poluna: Ты тупой да?
14:27 Lama Poluna: 00:34:268 -
14:27 Lama Poluna: Тут ничего нет
14:27 Lama Poluna: Вот тут
14:27 Lama Poluna: Тут ноту нада
14:27 Lama Poluna: Ибо бит сильный
14:27 Lama Poluna: НОТУ СТАВЬ КОМУ ГОВОРЮ
14:28 Slayed: ок
14:28 *Lama Poluna is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/830740 Basshunter - Jingle Bells [FCL's Intermediate]]
14:28 Lama Poluna: Это хард тип?
14:29 Slayed: да но не моя дифа
14:29 Lama Poluna: 00:34:268 (3,4,1) -
14:29 Lama Poluna: Сдвинь эту кучу
14:29 Lama Poluna: В другой бок
14:29 Lama Poluna: Похер
14:29 Lama Poluna: Он не против будет
14:29 Slayed: че значит в другой бок
14:29 Lama Poluna: http://puu.sh/lHEne/c750fb6dd3.jpg
14:29 Lama Poluna: В другой бок
14:29 Lama Poluna: Вот так
14:30 Lama Poluna: 01:01:268 (5) -
14:30 Lama Poluna: Клеп
14:30 Lama Poluna: В конец
14:30 Lama Poluna: Катю Клеп
14:30 Slayed: http://cs629407.vk.me/v629407809/28e78/n3UoG5xQmL4.jpg
14:30 Slayed: стоп бля
14:30 Slayed: вот с той кучей
14:30 Slayed: так норм
14:30 Lama Poluna: Чет близко
14:30 Slayed: ли ни
14:30 Lama Poluna: Чуть дальше
14:30 Lama Poluna: Как у меня
14:31 Slayed: катюху засунул
14:31 Slayed: дальшы
14:32 Lama Poluna: 01:57:411 (2) -
14:32 Lama Poluna: гавно
14:32 Lama Poluna: какашка
14:32 Lama Poluna: Ктрл
14:32 Lama Poluna: +
14:32 Lama Poluna: J
14:32 Slayed: сука тут еще спейсинг такой ебанутый ааа
14:33 Lama Poluna: 01:58:697 (1,2,3,4) -
14:33 Lama Poluna: Это че
14:33 Lama Poluna: вообще
14:33 Slayed: я че ебу бля
14:34 Lama Poluna: Это назвается
14:34 Lama Poluna: МНЕ ЛЕНЬ МАПАТЬ
14:34 Lama Poluna: И Я СДЕЛАЮ ТАК
14:34 Lama Poluna: 02:07:268 (1) -
14:34 Lama Poluna: Тут спейсинг
14:34 Lama Poluna: Чуть больше
14:34 Lama Poluna: чем везде
14:34 Slayed: лан про то скажу ему штоб сам
14:35 Lama Poluna: 02:39:268 (4,5,6,7,1) -
14:35 Lama Poluna: Жепа
14:35 Lama Poluna: хый
14:35 Lama Poluna: мача
14:35 Slayed: +
14:35 Slayed: ладно передам ему
14:35 Slayed: про \то
14:35 Slayed: пусть сам
14:35 Lama Poluna: 02:39:268 (4,5,6,7,1) -
14:36 Lama Poluna: http://puu.sh/lHEBn/9c5ae994be.jpg
14:36 Lama Poluna: Вот так нада
14:36 *Lama Poluna is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/825985 Basshunter - Jingle Bells [Hyper]]
14:36 Lama Poluna: Хупер зло мапала?
14:36 Slayed: нет я
14:36 Slayed: полностью
14:36 Lama Poluna: 00:05:554 (3) -
14:36 Lama Poluna: Просто...
14:36 Lama Poluna: Это Злодейка.
14:37 Lama Poluna: о.о
14:37 Slayed: 0_0
14:37 Lama Poluna: Кароче
14:37 Lama Poluna: По всему началу
14:37 Lama Poluna: Я бы сказал что это РЕАЛЬНО МАПАЛА ЗЛО
14:37 Lama Poluna: 00:44:125 (4) -
14:38 Lama Poluna: До этого момента
14:38 Lama Poluna: Зло такую хуйню не сделает
14:38 Lama Poluna: Кулибяку эту
14:38 Slayed: да мне тоже не нравится
14:38 Slayed: чето мне совсем лень было наверно
14:39 Lama Poluna: Ну тут намана
14:39 Lama Poluna: Вроде
14:39 Lama Poluna: все
14:40 *Lama Poluna is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/837560 Basshunter - Jingle Bells [Another]]
14:40 Slayed: да
14:40 Lama Poluna: Чувак
14:40 Lama Poluna: Умоляю
14:40 Lama Poluna: Не ведись с чуваком
14:40 Lama Poluna: HB24
14:41 Slayed: почему
14:41 Lama Poluna: B его другом, ща ник вспомню
14:41 Lama Poluna: CoachUmbrellas
14:41 Lama Poluna: Никогда не ведись с ними.
14:41 Lama Poluna: Они пиздец убогие, серьезно.
14:41 Slayed: а че токои
14:42 Slayed: ну хб24 норм
14:42 Lama Poluna: CoachUmbrellas
14:42 Slayed: а че с ними не так
14:42 Lama Poluna: Сворова мою мапу
14:42 Slayed: че чечечече с ним
14:42 Lama Poluna: Целую
14:42 Lama Poluna: И выложил
14:42 Slayed: лол
14:42 Lama Poluna: А я ее удалил
14:42 Lama Poluna: С сервера
14:42 Slayed: какую
14:42 Slayed: лол
14:42 Lama Poluna: С хс и т.д
14:42 Lama Poluna: Я его ненавижу
14:42 Lama Poluna: А это его друг
14:42 Slayed: хыавхзваыхзывахз
14:43 Slayed: ебать лох!
14:43 Slayed: нах ты мапы удоляешь
14:43 Lama Poluna: Они старые
14:43 Lama Poluna: Я уже так не мапаю ибо
14:43 *Lama Poluna is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/808565 ONE OK ROCK - Memories]
14:43 Lama Poluna: Мое
14:43 Lama Poluna: Инсайн
14:43 Lama Poluna: Мой
14:43 Lama Poluna: Это дерьмо никогда бы так не замапало
14:43 Slayed: о
14:43 Slayed: я помню
14:43 Lama Poluna: Оно только может сосать свой хуй и убого мапать
14:43 Lama Poluna: Сука
14:44 Lama Poluna: ЧТОБ ЗДОХ НАХУЙ МРАЗОТА ТУРЕЦКАЯ
14:44 Slayed: да да я помню эту мапу
14:44 Lama Poluna: ДА ЕЕ ВСЕ ПОМНЯТ
14:44 Lama Poluna: Я с ней всех доебал
14:45 Lama Poluna: 01:57:103 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4) -
14:45 Lama Poluna: Изменил
14:45 Lama Poluna: ВОт это
14:45 Lama Poluna: Я так не мапал
14:45 Lama Poluna: А нет
14:45 *Lama Poluna is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/720313 ONE OK ROCK - Memories [Insane]]
14:45 Lama Poluna: Мапал так хд
14:45 Lama Poluna: Он только обратил их
14:46 Lama Poluna: Вернемся к твоей карте крч
14:46 Slayed: go on and fuck urself
14:46 Lama Poluna: Не общайся с ними
14:46 Lama Poluna: Лучше я тебе помогать буду
14:46 Lama Poluna: Главное шли нахуй
14:47 Slayed: а хб то тебе что сделал
14:47 Lama Poluna: Тоже дерьмо
14:47 Lama Poluna: Терция против рашки
14:47 Lama Poluna: ты чо
14:47 Lama Poluna: ЗА ТУРЦИЮ
14:47 Lama Poluna: ИРАК СУКА ЕБАНЫЙ
14:47 Lama Poluna: ЙЦ*ТА
14:47 Lama Poluna: =йцта8т
14:47 Slayed: сука
14:47 Lama Poluna: Я даже это смотреть не буду
14:47 Lama Poluna: Его части
14:47 Lama Poluna: УБогие
14:47 Lama Poluna: Полностью
14:47 Lama Poluna: Все менять
14:48 Lama Poluna: Все удалить
14:48 Slayed: sl;dk;asd;lask';dkas'k;asksadks'ka;'kadsk'asd'k;asd';as'sdak'ad's
14:48 Lama Poluna: Твоя
14:48 Lama Poluna: Ахуенна
14:48 Lama Poluna: Часть
14:48 Slayed: 1/3 там потому что
14:48 Lama Poluna: 02:16:840 (6) -
14:48 Lama Poluna: Го квадрат
14:49 Lama Poluna: http://puu.sh/lHF2C/8e52b7cf8f.jpg
14:49 Lama Poluna: Только не такой
14:49 Lama Poluna: Корявый
14:49 Slayed: ок
14:49 *Lama Poluna is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/825984 Basshunter - Jingle Bells [Jingle Bass]]
14:50 Slayed: ща
14:51 Lama Poluna: 01:08:982 -
14:51 Lama Poluna: Вы чн
14:51 Lama Poluna: е
14:51 Lama Poluna: Холов Вингс
14:51 Lama Poluna: Что ле
14:51 Slayed: да
14:51 Slayed: konichiwa
14:51 Lama Poluna: 01:20:447 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) -
14:51 Lama Poluna: Чет страшно
14:51 Lama Poluna: Очень
14:52 Slayed: норм 280 бпм
14:52 Lama Poluna: Из меня
14:52 Lama Poluna: Дерьмовый модер
14:52 Lama Poluna: Ну по мне все номр
14:53 Slayed: можешь это злодейке сказать кстати она в сети
14:54 Lama Poluna: http://puu.sh/lHFbV/8212522218.jpg
14:54 Slayed: :D:D;
14:56 Slayed: ладн пости свой ирк давай1
14:57 Lama Poluna: Это пиздец
14:57 Lama Poluna: Если кто то прочитает

irc
Slayed_old_1
Topic Starter
Slayed_old_1

Lama Poluna wrote:

SPOILER
14:22 Lama Poluna: беба
14:22 Lama Poluna: го
14:23 Lama Poluna: че ты там модишь
14:23 Slayed: дава
14:24 *Lama Poluna is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/830155 Basshunter - Jingle Bells [Basic]]
14:24 Lama Poluna: Я чекать
14:24 Lama Poluna: Даже не буду
14:24 Lama Poluna: Ибо всегда в изи все намана
14:24 Lama Poluna: Хера ты в изи
14:24 Lama Poluna: Хс не поставил?
14:24 Slayed: я нигде не поставил
14:24 Slayed: я не умею блин
14:24 *Lama Poluna is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/827595 Basshunter - Jingle Bells [Advanced]]
14:24 Lama Poluna: Тут есть хс
14:24 Lama Poluna: Там нет
14:25 Slayed: да
14:25 Slayed: разве
14:25 Slayed: ну бля
14:25 Slayed: орни неправильные
14:25 Slayed: наверно
14:25 Slayed: хз
14:25 Slayed: научите
14:25 Slayed: ставить хс
14:25 Slayed: ;_;
14:25 Lama Poluna: Ноту выбираешь
14:25 Lama Poluna: И ставишь
14:25 Slayed: а как понять куда свисток куда финиш а куда хлопок по сраке
14:26 Lama Poluna: 00:34:268 (3) -
14:26 Lama Poluna: Тут бит мисаешь
14:26 Lama Poluna: ноту ставь
14:26 Slayed: где
14:26 Slayed: в адванседе
14:26 Lama Poluna: НУ ДААААААААААААа
14:26 Slayed: а че нахуя ноту туда там слайдер
14:27 Lama Poluna: Ты тупой да?
14:27 Lama Poluna: 00:34:268 -
14:27 Lama Poluna: Тут ничего нет
14:27 Lama Poluna: Вот тут
14:27 Lama Poluna: Тут ноту нада
14:27 Lama Poluna: Ибо бит сильный
14:27 Lama Poluna: НОТУ СТАВЬ КОМУ ГОВОРЮ
14:28 Slayed: ок
14:28 *Lama Poluna is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/830740 Basshunter - Jingle Bells [FCL's Intermediate]]
14:28 Lama Poluna: Это хард тип?
14:29 Slayed: да но не моя дифа
14:29 Lama Poluna: 00:34:268 (3,4,1) -
14:29 Lama Poluna: Сдвинь эту кучу
14:29 Lama Poluna: В другой бок
14:29 Lama Poluna: Похер
14:29 Lama Poluna: Он не против будет
14:29 Slayed: че значит в другой бок
14:29 Lama Poluna: http://puu.sh/lHEne/c750fb6dd3.jpg
14:29 Lama Poluna: В другой бок
14:29 Lama Poluna: Вот так
14:30 Lama Poluna: 01:01:268 (5) -
14:30 Lama Poluna: Клеп
14:30 Lama Poluna: В конец
14:30 Lama Poluna: Катю Клеп
14:30 Slayed: http://cs629407.vk.me/v629407809/28e78/n3UoG5xQmL4.jpg
14:30 Slayed: стоп бля
14:30 Slayed: вот с той кучей
14:30 Slayed: так норм
14:30 Lama Poluna: Чет близко
14:30 Slayed: ли ни
14:30 Lama Poluna: Чуть дальше
14:30 Lama Poluna: Как у меня
14:31 Slayed: катюху засунул
14:31 Slayed: дальшы
14:32 Lama Poluna: 01:57:411 (2) -
14:32 Lama Poluna: гавно
14:32 Lama Poluna: какашка
14:32 Lama Poluna: Ктрл
14:32 Lama Poluna: +
14:32 Lama Poluna: J
14:32 Slayed: сука тут еще спейсинг такой ебанутый ааа
14:33 Lama Poluna: 01:58:697 (1,2,3,4) -
14:33 Lama Poluna: Это че
14:33 Lama Poluna: вообще
14:33 Slayed: я че ебу бля
14:34 Lama Poluna: Это назвается
14:34 Lama Poluna: МНЕ ЛЕНЬ МАПАТЬ
14:34 Lama Poluna: И Я СДЕЛАЮ ТАК
14:34 Lama Poluna: 02:07:268 (1) -
14:34 Lama Poluna: Тут спейсинг
14:34 Lama Poluna: Чуть больше
14:34 Lama Poluna: чем везде
14:34 Slayed: лан про то скажу ему штоб сам
14:35 Lama Poluna: 02:39:268 (4,5,6,7,1) -
14:35 Lama Poluna: Жепа
14:35 Lama Poluna: хый
14:35 Lama Poluna: мача
14:35 Slayed: +
14:35 Slayed: ладно передам ему
14:35 Slayed: про \то
14:35 Slayed: пусть сам
14:35 Lama Poluna: 02:39:268 (4,5,6,7,1) -
14:36 Lama Poluna: http://puu.sh/lHEBn/9c5ae994be.jpg
14:36 Lama Poluna: Вот так нада
14:36 *Lama Poluna is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/825985 Basshunter - Jingle Bells [Hyper]]
14:36 Lama Poluna: Хупер зло мапала?
14:36 Slayed: нет я
14:36 Slayed: полностью
14:36 Lama Poluna: 00:05:554 (3) -
14:36 Lama Poluna: Просто...
14:36 Lama Poluna: Это Злодейка.
14:37 Lama Poluna: о.о
14:37 Slayed: 0_0
14:37 Lama Poluna: Кароче
14:37 Lama Poluna: По всему началу
14:37 Lama Poluna: Я бы сказал что это РЕАЛЬНО МАПАЛА ЗЛО
14:37 Lama Poluna: 00:44:125 (4) -
14:38 Lama Poluna: До этого момента
14:38 Lama Poluna: Зло такую хуйню не сделает
14:38 Lama Poluna: Кулибяку эту
14:38 Slayed: да мне тоже не нравится
14:38 Slayed: чето мне совсем лень было наверно
14:39 Lama Poluna: Ну тут намана
14:39 Lama Poluna: Вроде
14:39 Lama Poluna: все
14:40 *Lama Poluna is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/837560 Basshunter - Jingle Bells [Another]]
14:40 Slayed: да
14:40 Lama Poluna: Чувак
14:40 Lama Poluna: Умоляю
14:40 Lama Poluna: Не ведись с чуваком
14:40 Lama Poluna: HB24
14:41 Slayed: почему
14:41 Lama Poluna: B его другом, ща ник вспомню
14:41 Lama Poluna: CoachUmbrellas
14:41 Lama Poluna: Никогда не ведись с ними.
14:41 Lama Poluna: Они пиздец убогие, серьезно.
14:41 Slayed: а че токои
14:42 Slayed: ну хб24 норм
14:42 Lama Poluna: CoachUmbrellas
14:42 Slayed: а че с ними не так
14:42 Lama Poluna: Сворова мою мапу
14:42 Slayed: че чечечече с ним
14:42 Lama Poluna: Целую
14:42 Lama Poluna: И выложил
14:42 Slayed: лол
14:42 Lama Poluna: А я ее удалил
14:42 Lama Poluna: С сервера
14:42 Slayed: какую
14:42 Slayed: лол
14:42 Lama Poluna: С хс и т.д
14:42 Lama Poluna: Я его ненавижу
14:42 Lama Poluna: А это его друг
14:42 Slayed: хыавхзваыхзывахз
14:43 Slayed: ебать лох!
14:43 Slayed: нах ты мапы удоляешь
14:43 Lama Poluna: Они старые
14:43 Lama Poluna: Я уже так не мапаю ибо
14:43 *Lama Poluna is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/808565 ONE OK ROCK - Memories]
14:43 Lama Poluna: Мое
14:43 Lama Poluna: Инсайн
14:43 Lama Poluna: Мой
14:43 Lama Poluna: Это дерьмо никогда бы так не замапало
14:43 Slayed: о
14:43 Slayed: я помню
14:43 Lama Poluna: Оно только может сосать свой хуй и убого мапать
14:43 Lama Poluna: Сука
14:44 Lama Poluna: ЧТОБ ЗДОХ НАХУЙ МРАЗОТА ТУРЕЦКАЯ
14:44 Slayed: да да я помню эту мапу
14:44 Lama Poluna: ДА ЕЕ ВСЕ ПОМНЯТ
14:44 Lama Poluna: Я с ней всех доебал
14:45 Lama Poluna: 01:57:103 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4) -
14:45 Lama Poluna: Изменил
14:45 Lama Poluna: ВОт это
14:45 Lama Poluna: Я так не мапал
14:45 Lama Poluna: А нет
14:45 *Lama Poluna is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/720313 ONE OK ROCK - Memories [Insane]]
14:45 Lama Poluna: Мапал так хд
14:45 Lama Poluna: Он только обратил их
14:46 Lama Poluna: Вернемся к твоей карте крч
14:46 Slayed: go on and fuck urself
14:46 Lama Poluna: Не общайся с ними
14:46 Lama Poluna: Лучше я тебе помогать буду
14:46 Lama Poluna: Главное шли нахуй
14:47 Slayed: а хб то тебе что сделал
14:47 Lama Poluna: Тоже дерьмо
14:47 Lama Poluna: Терция против рашки
14:47 Lama Poluna: ты чо
14:47 Lama Poluna: ЗА ТУРЦИЮ
14:47 Lama Poluna: ИРАК СУКА ЕБАНЫЙ
14:47 Lama Poluna: ЙЦ*ТА
14:47 Lama Poluna: =йцта8т
14:47 Slayed: сука
14:47 Lama Poluna: Я даже это смотреть не буду
14:47 Lama Poluna: Его части
14:47 Lama Poluna: УБогие
14:47 Lama Poluna: Полностью
14:47 Lama Poluna: Все менять
14:48 Lama Poluna: Все удалить
14:48 Slayed: sl;dk;asd;lask';dkas'k;asksadks'ka;'kadsk'asd'k;asd';as'sdak'ad's
14:48 Lama Poluna: Твоя
14:48 Lama Poluna: Ахуенна
14:48 Lama Poluna: Часть
14:48 Slayed: 1/3 там потому что
14:48 Lama Poluna: 02:16:840 (6) -
14:48 Lama Poluna: Го квадрат
14:49 Lama Poluna: http://puu.sh/lHF2C/8e52b7cf8f.jpg
14:49 Lama Poluna: Только не такой
14:49 Lama Poluna: Корявый
14:49 Slayed: ок
14:49 *Lama Poluna is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/825984 Basshunter - Jingle Bells [Jingle Bass]]
14:50 Slayed: ща
14:51 Lama Poluna: 01:08:982 -
14:51 Lama Poluna: Вы чн
14:51 Lama Poluna: е
14:51 Lama Poluna: Холов Вингс
14:51 Lama Poluna: Что ле
14:51 Slayed: да
14:51 Slayed: konichiwa
14:51 Lama Poluna: 01:20:447 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) -
14:51 Lama Poluna: Чет страшно
14:51 Lama Poluna: Очень
14:52 Slayed: норм 280 бпм
14:52 Lama Poluna: Из меня
14:52 Lama Poluna: Дерьмовый модер
14:52 Lama Poluna: Ну по мне все номр
14:53 Slayed: можешь это злодейке сказать кстати она в сети
14:54 Lama Poluna: http://puu.sh/lHFbV/8212522218.jpg
14:54 Slayed: :D:D;
14:56 Slayed: ладн пости свой ирк давай1
14:57 Lama Poluna: Это пиздец
14:57 Lama Poluna: Если кто то прочитает

irc
arigato lama poluna sempaii :)
Airachi
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Joined January 2014
Airachi
hai m4m thing ✿

BASIC:
  1. sorry for blanket mod, if they are intended not to be then ignore, the easy is p good :]
00:53:554 (1,2) - keep ur sliders warm for the winter with blankets!!
01:22:697 (1,2) - ^
01:39:840 (1) -

fcl intermediate:
  1. this is the only distance inconsistency http://puu.sh/lIJqk.png
00:33:411 (7,1,2) - not to sure if stacking this would be the best idea
00:50:125 (1,2) - this will be confusing after stacked notes before it
01:03:840 (7,8) - i think it would be kinda cool to use 01:02:982 (5,6) - again, but mirror 5 whaddya think? http://puu.sh/lIN1r.jpg
nice diff:3

Hyper:
both of these go together for the part
01:32:768 (5,1) - better to be same distance as 01:33:197 (2,3) - and 01:34:054 (4,1) -
01:32:768 (5,1) - 01:32:982 (1,2) - 01:33:840 (3,4) - think these would be better as the same distances

Another:
00:38:125 (1,2,3,4,5) - this could totally be a star, also all the distances are different
02:39:411 (4,5,6,1) - you are some kind of evil, i think ur gonna have to nerf this, its not even the hardest diff lol
  1. I dont really understand this difficulties spacings sometimes, im kinda scared to look at the next difficulty lol
jingle bass:
00:06:197 (4,5) - think would be better stacked like 00:08:768 (3,4) -
I am not too sure how to mod this difficulty
This is an interesting mapset for the song but it fits. hope my mod could be of help, best wishes and merry christmas!!☆ :)
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