Blue = OK
Red = NO
Green = Undecided / need a 2nd opinion
Orange = Conditional (or partial)
Other color = idk
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Red = NO
Green = Undecided / need a 2nd opinion
Orange = Conditional (or partial)
Other color = idk
thanks (owo)bAyyri wrote:
[3x's Inner Oni]
- 00:38:071 - Change to k. I don't think ddd really fits here, considering it's the same rhythm as at 00:36:899 - <<< no ... is less sound than next blue note. ... But in consideration
- 00:39:184 - and 00:39:360 - Ctrl+G. The weird rising sound from 00:39:008 - to 00:39:535 - is rising then falling between each note, so I don't think having D D K K really follows that too well. <<< ok ...
- 00:46:684 - and 00:46:860 - Same as above. (Or even D K K D works.) <<< is more fit with D K K K ...
- 00:48:852 - and 00:49:086 - Change to k. As small as the sounds are here, I think emphasizing the sounds on these measures would be a nice change from the "d d d d d d.." <<< is possible, but it would not be right because they were combined with the next note and would be confusing what I follow.
- 00:52:602 - and 00:52:836 - Same as above. <<< Same
- 00:56:352 - and 00:56:586 - ^ <<< Same
- If you did follow the above suggestions, then 01:00:102 - to 01:00:571 - could work as k d k d k as well. <<< Same
- 01:12:758 - If you're following the 1/6 sounds pretty much everywhere else, would it make sense to use 1/6 here too? (The 1/6 ending at 01:12:875 - ) <<< I've been thinking a long time in this section and I found a solution -w-
- 02:19:321 - Change to k. Same reason as the first time. <<< this is possible ...
- 02:20:434 - Change to k. Like in the beginning, I don't think a pattern like dddd fits here, since the last note is higher than the rest of the d's. <<< well.. ok
- 02:27:934 - and 02:28:110 - Same as in the beginning. <<< ok ...
- 02:30:571 - Change to k. Same as 02:19:321 - <<< possible ...
- 02:35:317 - and 02:35:434 - Could be changed the k's. Seems weird to have 02:35:610 - and 02:35:785 - as k's but not follow a similar rhythm beforehand. <<< possible ...
- 02:38:539 - and 02:38:656 - Ctrl+G. At 02:38:656 - kdk doesn't really follow the rhythm nor the melody. <<< some changes ...
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