1. Hard - 4Key (2,72 stars, 1625 notes)
2. Normal - 4Key (1,71 stars, 950 notes)
3. Pony - 4Key (3,78 stars, 2233 notes)

Kawawa | Dellvangel

Edwin Wijaya wrote:

b-but u said it's cancerous c':

Wind_14 wrote:

Okay, mod here >_<
Column : 0|1|2|3

Normal

• 00:17:393 (17393|3) - move to 2 - Nope, because the pattern before using the same pattern. and it wasn't very comfortable to hit
  00:39:589 (39589|3) - how about move it so that it won't be too focused in one finger ?
  00:58:838 (58838|0,59011|3,59185|1,59358|2) - & 00:59:531 (59531|0,59705|3,59878|1,60052|2) - repeating pattern ? Flowing the pattern - 00:59:878 (59878|1,60052|2) - with - 01:00:225 (60225|0,60398|1) -
  00:59:705 (59705|3) - move to 2, Nope, it'll be too repetitive because - 00:59:358 (59358|2,60052|2) - also on col 2
  01:00:052 (60052|2) - move to 3, i think that'll fix it.The same reason about your "repeating pattern" up there. it's for flowing the pattern
  01:36:468 (96468|3) - move to 2, or
  01:35:254 (95254|3) - move to 1,01:35:601 (95601|1) - move to 3,01:35:948 (95948|3) - move to 1 Seems too monotonous for me. keep
  01:55:543 (115543|1,115716|3,115890|0,116063|2,116237|1,116410|3,116583|0,116757|2) - another repeating pattern? Same reason above
  02:11:150 (131150|0) - it look like a jack, how about move this to 1 ? even more horrible because it'll made jack with - 02:10:803 (130803|1) - and the pattern seems quite dull. xD
  02:18:896 (138896|3) - delete Hear this on 25% playback. there's actualy a synth+kick noise
  02:20:167 (140167|2) - move to 3
  02:20:514 (140514|3) - move to 2
  02:20:687 (140687|2) - move to 0
  02:20:861 (140861|0) - move to 3
  those 4 is because from 6 notes, notes 1-2 and 5-6 sounds same, so i move notes 2,3,4,5 Kinda see what you've pointed. but quite confused when you say "4,5,6" and I made me think for 5 minutes before applying the mod :v
  02:31:439 (151439|2,151612|0) - how about move it to column 3 & 1 respectively ? Its a same drum pitch like - 02:31:092 (151092|2,151265|0) -
  02:31:699 (151699|2) - Isn't it better to start LN at red line ? but its up to you to start the LN using piano or guitar sound. Actually, this LN wasn't following guitar nor piano. it's a drum roll
  02:59:011 (179011|3,179011|2,179011|1) - how about delete one of them ? it's not really different from the rest.
  03:14:965 (194965|3) - move this to 2, or 03:14:965 (194965|1) - to 3. do that on purpose, to made a simlar pattern like - 03:14:618 (194618|2,194618|0) - etc....

Hard

• 00:12:884 (12884|2) - add note here
  00:13:578 (13578|1) - add here,
  00:14:271 (14271|1) - add here too,
  00:20:514 (20514|3) - here,
  00:21:208 (21208|2) - here too,
  --------------------------------------------------^^^ nope for all. already made the double notes in "pony" diff and it wasn't necessary to have it too here.
  00:21:728 (21728|3) - move to 1, 00:21:815 (21815|3) - add note here Not comfortable too hit cuz it'll made a triple jack with - 00:21:555 (21555|1,21901|1) -
  00:24:503 (24503|2) - add , not necessary
  00:41:150 (41150|2) - add here too, ^
  00:45:832 (45832|1) - delete it? the sound wasn't as significant as it's friend after it. actually it's a kick noise. try to heard it at 25% or 50% playback
  00:47:913 (47913|2,47913|3) - delete one of them? the sound wasn't really loud. actually it's the same sound like - 00:44:965 (44965|0,44965|1) -
  00:48:260 (48260|2,48260|0) - delete one of them ?you only use one for the same sound before. On purpose because it contains cymbal noise and literally more louder than before
  00:53:462 (53462|1,53462|2) - delete one of them actually it's the same sound like - 00:44:965 (44965|0,44965|1) -
  00:55:023 (55023|0) - move the LN to column 3 to not to make the pattern monotonous. well.... it became monotonous with this - 00:54:503 (54503|3,55370|3) - either
  -------------------------------------------------------
  01:04:734 (64734|0) - move to column 1
  01:04:907 (64907|1) - move to column 3
  01:05:254 (65254|3) - move to column 2
  01:05:427 (65427|0) - move to column 3
  -----------------------------------------^^^It's on purpose to avoid jack as best as possible. because your mod made jack that isn't really fit with the music.
  01:05:601 (65601|3,65601|2) - Ctrl+H, those 3 stack them based by the pitch Not balanced.......
  01:05:774 (65774|1) - move to column 3 It'll made triple jack, really uncomfortable
  01:18:607 (78607|2,78780|1,78780|3) - -> 01:18:607 (78607|2,78693|1,78780|2) - the sound is closer to this. I don't get it :/
  ------------------------------------------------
  01:20:861 (80861|1) - add
  01:21:555 (81555|2) - add
  01:22:248 (82248|2) - add
  01:29:705 (89705|0) - move to 2, 01:29:792 (89792|0) - add note here.
  --------------------------------------------------^^^ nope for all. already made the double notes in "pony" diff and it wasn't necessary to have it too here.
  01:51:901 (111901|3) - move LN to column 0 keep
  02:32:913 (152913|3) - move it to the red line below. The guitar synth it's totally in here.

Pony

• 00:45:832 (45832|3) - delete this.Keep, there's a noise
  00:58:318 (58318|3) - delete, the sound wasn't loud. Loud drum. just like the other triple I mapped in this kiai times
  01:42:711 (102711|0) - delete this, but if you want to use it, it's fine, only weak guitar sound there. Can't even heard it if not really focusing on that part. yea, just heard it on 25% playback if you wasn't sure. and also use headphones/headset xD
  02:35:774 (155774|0,155774|2) - & 02:36:468 (156468|0,156468|2) - & 02:37:161 (157161|1,157161|3) - & 02:37:855 (157855|1,157855|3) -
  the sound is lowering gradually, better change the pattern to make them 23-13-12-02 or 01, the number is the column.well, consider this........

Well, most of them is good, my mod mostly to make a different pattern (you said that the first 80 secs is taken from the ranked, right ?)

in case of Pony, the pattern good, but too common ( i mean, after some times, you'll find the same pattern ), better to wait for a better modder. Sorry for not give you any quality mods !!

oh, yeah, delete means that the sound of the notes is too weak, and add means that the sound is pretty loud / you use the same amount of notes for the same sound in the same difficulty before.

NlHIL wrote:

4K=|1|2|3|4|
[NM]
01:35:081 - add to 2?
01:36:294 - ^ keep for this
02:18:433 - add?
02:18:780 (138780|2,138896|3,138953|0,139040|1,139127|2,139213|0,139300|2,139387|3,139474|1) - if i were you, used 5 LNs
02:23:809 - 02:24:156 - 02:24:502 - change to 2 notes?
02:32:609 (152609|3,152609|2,152913|1,152913|2) - unsnapped on purpose??? 1/8
02:47:046 (167046|1,167046|2) - haha np :v
03:21:901 (201901|0,201901|1) - ^ :v
[HD]
02:32:913 (152913|3) - remove this and add LN?
[Pony]
01:54:676 (114676|0,114763|0) - change to 2 notes? Nope
02:17:046 (137046|0,137046|3) - remove one and resnap?Seems it's already fit
02:32:913 (152913|3) - start from 02:32:826 -
02:56:237 - 02:56:930 - add? rearrange a bit

ahahahahahaha wkwkwkwkw :V

LordRaika wrote:

Its done :
http://puu.sh/lq0pW.zip

Special Hitsound made for all difficulty for you
put zip inside song folder, extract and REPLACE/overwrite everything....

-delete the zip after that...
-AND KEEP THE "HITSOUND" diff , until the time its getting bubble, you are free to remove it when its going for bubble
but keep it for now... its going to be there for "REFERENCE" on how to efficiently hitsound...
and to demonstrating this tool >>> t/385832/start=0


you can listen to the hitsound diff with 100% effect and 75% volume to hear the hitsound clearly~







TIme to complete the hitsound :
15minutes listen to the song... again and again...
10minutes finding and making the hitsound matching to the song...
190minutes hitsound and making 1 hitsound diff...
3minutes to copy it to all of your 3 difficulty "perfectly"....

OwO
thanks to the tool

[Normal]

SPOILER

HP +1
OD +1

00:05:254 (5254|1,5601|2,5948|3,6294|1) - I think is better to become this LN's in simple notes

[Hard]

SPOILER

HP +1
00:00:745 (745|1) - Move to 4
01:24:156 (84156|3,84242|2,84329|1,84329|0) - Ctrl + H

[Pony]

SPOILER

01:34:040 Add note
01:46:699 (106699|1) - Move to 3
02:21:728 For consistensy in your pattern do the same as 02:22:075

Danielslz9 wrote:

Hi You ask for mod in my Queue
Song: Yumemiru! Shinjiru! Mirai Kanaete!
Keys: 4K
Column Format: |1|2|3|4|

[Normal]

SPOILER

HP +1
OD +1

00:05:254 (5254|1,5601|2,5948|3,6294|1) - I think is better to become this LN's in simple notes Refer to the ranked TV Size one, i don't think I should change this xD

[Hard]

SPOILER

HP +1 +0,5 instead
00:00:745 (745|1) - Move to 4 For low pitch drum, I prefer like this tbh
01:24:156 (84156|3,84242|2,84329|1,84329|0) - Ctrl + H different pitch with - 01:24:676 (84676|2,84676|3) - so it isn't necessary to have them in the same col

[Pony]

SPOILER

01:34:040 Add note Following synth noise. 1 note is enough
01:46:699 (106699|1) - Move to 3
02:21:728 For consistensy in your pattern do the same as 02:22:075 Keep, same pattern isn't necessary here since the music pitch is different

Good Map!!

Frim4503 wrote:

Col : 1,2,3,4,5,6,7


[General]
-BG : ok
-Mp3 : ok
-Hitsound : pls generalized the hs eh..how :/
-Difficulty : ok
-AI Mod : ok

Pony

00:56:757 - it will be good if you make something like this http://puu.sh/lrRMe/a56c1e373b.png >> cuz following that song it move from left to right or vice versa Rearrange a bit
01:53:635 - ^much same just mirror it :v http://puu.sh/lrRZs/3817d1fe5c.png
02:36:381 - add note for hithat sound
02:46:526 (166526|2) - just move this to 4
then this 02:46:872 (166872|3,166872|1) - move 1 col. to left
02:52:595 - is my ear that wrong or just what ? i didn't see any note but i can hear hs come out fro this http://puu.sh/lrSeR/10a0b7c5c9.png Fixed+repattern
02:56:930 (176930|2,176930|3,177104|0,177190|1,177277|0,177277|2) - hitsound in this section is too loud and causing lag. recommend to lower the hs Does this - 00:10:456 (10456|3,10456|2) - should be the same thing? but you didn't mention this :/
02:59:184 - same like before. no note but have hs Imo there shouldn't be HS here, but because LordRaika who made this "Hitsound" Diff, idk why the reason why he put that HS here. I'll ask him later. Besides on that, This 2/4 Break was on purpose to fit in with the music
03:16:352 - hs too loud Imo, biar lebih berasa lah nadanya :v

Hard

00:00:745 (745|0) - move to for. too many note in left hand
00:55:716 - too boring. try this http://puu.sh/lrSPl/6cffad199c.png As this diff is for intermediate players, I found that quite hard to hit because of suddenly changing pattern
01:18:953 - add note to follow the ryhtm. cuz it break here
01:19:300 - ^
01:26:237 (86237|0) - change with note 01:26:237 (86237|0) - Following guitar, i think is LN is more suitable
01:52:422 - same like before ^
01:54:763 (114763|3,114849|1) - move to 2,3 This - 01:54:676 (114676|3,114763|3) - is literally on the same pitch, so jack notes here are acceptable
02:36:381 - add note I don't think this is necessary

Frim4503 wrote:

pls delete that hitsound diff.

LordRaika wrote:

-AND KEEP THE "HITSOUND" diff , until the time its getting bubble, you are free to remove it when its going for bubble
but keep it for now... its going to be there for "REFERENCE" on how to efficiently hitsound...
and to demonstrating this tool >>> t/385832/start=0

Frim4503 wrote:

also if you use hitsound copier pls just using "clap" or "cymbal" (use sample hs nmae) don't use custom hs name. This Hitsound copying are using the tool that Raika tested on this map, so I'm not really know how to deal with this)
if you need help about that hs thing, you can pm me in game and i will expalin in more detail Will catch you in game when I need it xD )

Frim4503 wrote:

pls delete that hitsound diff. also if you use hitsound copier pls just using "clap" or "cymbal" (use sample hs nmae) don't use custom hs name.
if you need help about that hs thing, you can pm me in game and i will expalin in more detail

-BANGKE- wrote:

hi valz, another pony hmm, nm req from t/388270&start=0

tavvur boz

mapnya udah bagus, dan juga lu udh pernah bikin yg tv size dan rank, hmm little suggestion

1|2|3|4

hard
00:59:011 (59011|0,59011|2,59185|1,59358|1,59358|0,59531|2,59705|3,59705|0,59878|1) - hmm try this http://puu.sh/lxDOB/4e922016e0.jpg
01:00:572 (60572|1,60745|2) - hmm, move it to 1|3 Keep
01:54:763 (114763|3) - move to 3 Same Pitch, Keep

ponytail
00:28:838 - hmm, add 1? for cymbal Keep
00:34:387 - same ^ ^
00:39:936 - ^ ^
00:49:820 (49820|2) - move to 2
01:12:190 (72190|1) - move to 3
01:54:763 (114763|0) - move to 2 Same Pitch, Keep
02:49:994 (169994|0) - move to 2? ^
03:00:572 (180572|2) - hmm, move to 2? keep

dont give kds if my mod doesnt helping, good luck have fun

Verniy_Chan wrote:

Hi Rival

Mod Via ★☭ Верный Mania Queue ★☭

4K = |1|2|3|4|

(Focus : Pattern , Pitch, Hitsounds)

General

1. Seem nothing issue

Normal

OD : 7
HP : 7

1. 00:46:526 - add note for consistency mapping snare drum sounds & if you didn't mapping sound like that, it will be empty pattern 1/1 snap + pitch like 00:40:977 (40977|1) - & 00:55:543 (55543|3) - also check here :
   00:47:913 -
   00:49:300 -
   00:52:075 -
   00:53:462 -
   01:43:404 -
   01:44:791 -
   01:46:179 -
   01:48:953 -
   01:50:341 -
   02:41:669 -
   02:43:056 -
   ^All of this break was Intended, and I believe all the novice players can still recognize what sound that will be followed since the doubles that will come is on 1/2
2. 01:00:745 - still hear cimbal here, i think pitch like 01:02:133 - and you mapping sound like that here 02:11:497 - same reason like :
   01:09:069 -
   01:11:844 -
   01:18:780 -
   02:05:948 -
   02:08:722 -
   02:48:779 -
   02:50:340 -
   ---------------------------------------------------
   02:51:727 -
   02:52:074 -
   02:52:421 -
   02:52:767 -
   02:53:114 -
   ------------------^Not for this, The music is like the first part of the song
3. 01:34:387 (94387|2) - missing LR3_Hat_CRS here for hat synth sounds like 01:33:693 (93693|0) -
4. 01:54:676 (114676|0) - move to 4, then 01:54:763 (114763|3) - move to 1, pattern easy/enjoyable R-L-R hand
5. 02:03:000 (123000|2) - missing LR_Hat Synth here, pitch like 02:01:265 (121265|0,121612|2,121959|1,122306|3) -
6. 02:17:046 - no need 2 note, pitch still low
7. 02:18:896 (138896|2,138953|0,139040|1,139127|2,139213|3,139300|0,139387|1,139474|2) - are you sure with pattern like this? pattern too hard for easy diff, full stair pattern 1/3 & 1/4. And you didn't mapping sound like that here 02:23:028 - 02:23:201 - xD Intended for SR? maybe, for now I keep this
8. 02:46:871 (166871|3) - move to 1, for pitch relevancy, pattern like 01:53:635 (113635|0,113809|1,113982|2,114156|3) -
9. 03:20:860 (200860|3) - you make LN here, it mean you following long synth, change LR_Drum Rpd x2 to LR_FxSVRc like 03:21:900 (201900|0,201900|1) -

Hard

OD : 7,5
HP : 7,5

1. 00:53:462 (53462|1) - move to 4 for hand & pattern balance
2. 01:15:832 (75832|3) - move to 2, 01:16:005 (76005|1,76005|0) - move to right 3-4, 01:16:179 (76179|2) - move to 1 for pattern balance, so many note in collum 4
3. 01:18:953 (78953|2,79127|2,79127|1,79300|1) - better arrange this pattern, i don't like this ;w; sorry
4. 01:29:358 (89358|0,89445|1,89531|3,89531|2,89705|0,89792|1,89878|2,89878|3) - need to change pattern, because different rhytim
5. 01:31:265 - add note for cimbal sounds Weak cymbal doesn't need for two notes
6. 01:34:387 (94387|3) - missing LR3_Hat_CRS here too
7. 01:50:341 (110341|2) - move to 1 for hand & pattern balance
8. 02:03:000 (123000|2) - missing LR_Hat Synth here too
9. 02:23:808 - seem add note for pitch still stronnkk, also check here :
   02:44:790 -
10. 02:43:056 (163056|1) - move to 4 for hand & pattern balance
11. 03:04:733 (184733|3,185079|3,185426|3) - i feel dejavu here xD
12. 03:18:952 (198952|3,199039|2,199126|0,199126|1,199299|3,199386|2,199473|1,199473|0) - ^

Pony


OD : 8
HP : 8

1. 01:34:387 (94387|3) - missing LR3_Hat_CRS here
2. 02:03:000 - missing LR_Hat Synth here
3. 02:54:328 - missing hitsounds here maybe like 02:53:114 -
4. 03:21:900 (201900|2) - move to 2, make different from Hard diff, xD
5. Really tired 3min+ x 3diff ;w; sorrywkwkw oke (y)

Verniy_Chan wrote:

My Rating

84,75

(1-100)

please ignore it, just for fun only

Хорошо~Good Luck..

sherrysina wrote:

hi, rivals~ request from queue (lol, kuhaku and bangke's queue)

Mod

[Normal]
02:09:589 (129589|1,129763|0) - swap collumn? for a better flow
02:17:046 - kayanya salah satu note enak dijadikan LN Gini aja cukup kok :>
02:47:045 (167045|1) - move to 4. for comfortable

[Hard]
00:04:560 (4560|3,4907|2) - ctrl+J? for a better flow Keep for now
00:06:121 (6121|2) - move to 1, ^ Keep, to give player some "drum feeling"
01:04:734 (64734|0,65081|0,65427|0) - balance this please..
01:54:763 (114763|3) - move to 3 Keep, same pitch as - 01:54:676 (114676|3) - and hit-able
02:01:612 (121612|3,121959|3,122306|3) - balance this too

maaf kalo nggak membantu ;w;
good luck!

-SoraGami- wrote:

Hi Rivalss!~~

here's my mod
"more ponies" xD

just a quick look

Column = 1|2|3|4

[General]

BG : OK, just ponies xD
Audio : consider lowering the volume in this kinds of sounds 00:09:763 because it is too loud
Timing : OK
Spread : OK
Etc. : OK

[Normal]

- 00:02:306 (2306|2) - maybe move this in 4? so that it feels like the pitch goes high after 00:01:786 (1786|2) and then 00:04:560 (4560|3) move this to 3 so that the flow goes down as the pitch goes down also and same pitch with 00:01:786
- 00:21:208 - pattern suggestion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4053569 , a mirror pattern for this one 00:20:514 is good i think and from here 00:21:901 just accordance to the pitch, but it's up to you Hmm I'll keep this :3
- 01:57:624 - add note for consistency, cuz you added note here 01:00:745
- 03:01:438 - same case with ^

[Hard]

- 00:22:248 (22248|3,22248|2) - move to left? to have some flow, making it jack is not fitting i guess This was following the kick and it's on the same pitch.Also this will made a "double-minijack-in-different-hand" pattern which is I don't really like to use it here
- 01:01:786 (61786|3,61959|2,62046|3) - move to 3,4,3 for some balance and comfortable flow
- 01:01:959 - why did you make a 1/4 here while 01:13:057 - is not?
- 01:19:300 (79300|3,79474|2,79647|3,79734|2,79820|1) - move to 3,4,2,3,4 so that some plyers in this level can hit this section more accurately, because here 01:19:820 in this cutted 1/4 flow they both end and started at the left hand, and some players might just stair it
- 01:23:982 (83982|1) - move to 1 for some balnce, because the flow has some right-sided
- 01:30:225 (90225|0,90225|1) - put it in the middle like my reason in the 1st one? same as my first red note then
- 01:54:763 (114763|3) - move to 3, because that 1/4 jack is too sudden for the middle part, cuz you dont have it before It's relevant to the kick noise, and they're also on the same pitch
- 01:58:664 (118664|0,118838|1,118924|0) - move to 1,2,1 for more comfortable flow
- 02:10:023 - and 03:02:738 - add like 01:01:959
- 02:16:352 (136352|1,136526|0,136612|1,136699|2,136872|3) - move to 1,2,3,4,3 like i was said before about cutted stairs that started and ended in both hands
- 03:13:577 (193577|2) - move to 4? for balance
- 03:19:819 (199819|3,199819|2,199993|0,199993|1) - move to [23][14] for some impact? Nope, I'll just make it consistent

[Pony pony~~~ PONY]

- 01:08:029 (68029|0,68202|1) - swap columns for equal number of jcks and blance flow
- 01:16:699 (76699|1) - move to 1 for balance and comfortability hard to [24] it cuz of 01:16:352 (76352|1,76526|1,76699|1)
- 01:54:763 - move to 2? ummm... maybe it is just good if you didnt make it a jack???? Acceptable because of the same pitch
- 02:00:225 (120225|0,120312|1,120398|0) - move to 2,1,3 for more good flow and balance
- 02:04:734 (124734|3) - move to 1 for a sweet balance xD It seems like nothing change to me :/
- 02:13:578 (133578|2) - move to 4, cuz of 02:13:231 (133231|2,133404|2,133578|2) hard to [24] it...
- 03:01:785 (181785|2) - move to 2
- i hear some loud hs.... maybe made it lower...
also i hear some extremely loud hs but i dont know where it came from... maybe it is just my editor xD

Nice map rivals~
Good Luck on your ponies!

Mei-chan wrote:

Cancelled sorry because i'm too busy with school i don't have enough time to do it T.T

[ A v a l o n ] wrote:

Hi Rivals_7
Here is my mod as requested from

|1|2|3|4|

mod inside

• 
  all general stuff was fine :'D
  
  edit: "Normal" he said

1. 00:00:745 (745|3) - would be nice if you change this note into LN, according on long sound in this time
2. 00:05:254 (5254|1,5601|2,5948|3,6294|1) - move this LN to 4 2 3 1 . . . it's more fit with the song itself
3. 00:06:641 (6641|2,6988|3) - Ctrl G, more better imo
4. 00:07:335 (7335|0,7682|0) - 00:08:029 (8029|1,8375|1) - i can't understand this note, not realted to any pitch imo @_@ It's a kick, not following any pitch here. I'm mostly following on beats, as long as they're playable, there will be no issues.
5. 00:09:069 (9069|2,9069|0) - delete this note ? and make 1 or 2 LN here for expressing the drum roll start here 00:08:896 -
6. 00:14:618 (14618|1,14965|1) - 00:15:312 (15312|2,15659|2) - what the purpose of this note ? . . . well i think this pattern is better 00:12:190 (12190|1,12537|1,12537|0) - hear the sound carefully same reason as above
7. 00:18:086 (18086|3,18433|3) - etc, same reason as above . . . maybe try this http://puu.sh/lSFak/07ee1ea7c9.jpg it can be applied start on here 00:18:086 -
8. 00:23:289 (23289|0,23289|2) - move to 1 and 4 after that^ (swictch LN)
9. 00:32:826 (32826|1,32826|3,33173|0,33173|2,33520|3,33520|1) - make it into 12 34 12 column Mope, too monotonous for me
10. 00:33:867 - & 00:34:214 - you've missing intrument sound here . . . add note
11. 00:46:179 (46179|1) - why no LN here ? it's exactly same sound as 00:45:485 (45485|3) -
12. 00:48:953 - & 00:51:728 - same reason as above^
13. 00:49:647 (49647|3,49647|0,49820|1,49820|2) - Ctrl G . . . fits perfectly with vocal and impact sound Accepting your suggest about adding an LN here - 00:48:953 - . If I ctrl+g this, it'll be overlapped
14. 01:11:670 - still have clear sound here, suggest to add note
15. 01:19:734 - add a note here if you following kick in this part (but i suggest you to following vocal here, its more easy to hit) In purpose for easier readability to newbies
16. 01:36:294 - & 01:36:641 - please add note here, you've missing instrument sound here
17. 01:41:844 - & 01:42:190 - same reason as ^
18. 02:08:563 - still have clear sound here, suggest to add note
19. 02:18:780 (138780|3) - low sound, and very hard to hit newbie player . . . i suggest you to delete that, and move this 02:18:896 (138896|2) - to 4
20. 03:12:189 (192189|1,192536|1) - & 03:12:883 (192883|2,193230|2) - what the purpose of this pattern ? i don't understand . . . pls make another form if you want
21. 03:15:657 (195657|3,196004|3) - 03:16:351 (196351|1,196698|1) - 03:17:045 (197045|2,197392|2) - not fits perfectly with music and play feels . . . try to re-arrange that Same concern as above
    
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22. 00:08:896 (8896|2,9069|3,9069|1,9242|2) - better to remove this, and make a LN for exchange drum roll here . . . example http://puu.sh/lSFJC/65c87338d2.jpg
23. 00:09:763 (9763|1,10456|2) - move to 4 and 1 for better balance
24. 00:10:630 (10630|3,10716|2,10803|1) - arrange to 3 2 4 . . . its more fit i think
25. 00:12:017 - add a note for kick sound here, you've missing that Ignored on purpose, you see i'm doing the same thing here - 00:11:323 - and - 00:11:670 -
26. 00:14:705 - have same sound with 00:14:878 (14878|1) - well i suggest to add note here (on 3rd column)
27. 00:20:601 - 00:21:294 - can you hear drum roll is still exist here ? . . . here is my suggestion for your pattern http://puu.sh/lSG1E/13827ecfe6.jpg neat and more fit with the sound
28. 00:22:075 (22075|2,22075|3,22248|3,22248|2,22422|1,22422|0) - according on jack sound on this part, try this ? http://puu.sh/lSG59/b1a105e1a0.jpg
    - 00:21:901 (21901|1,21901|0) - These are low pitch -> - 00:22:075 (22075|3,22075|2) - These are high pitch -> - 00:22:248 (22248|3,22248|2) - These are more higher pitch (but I put in the same column because of column limit) -> and this - 00:22:422 (22422|1,22422|0) - are low pitch. same as - 00:21:901 (21901|1,21901|0) - . It's more fit this way.
29. 00:24:936 (24936|1) - move to 3, fits perfectly when you play it
30. 00:27:277 (27277|2) - what is this ? make it short is more better imo . . . because there is no long sound reached more than 1 beat here I don't think this is a really big deal, I copied this from ranked TV Size one, And it feels like I have to do this for uniqueness sake (?). When I change to SN, it's just feel...... Monotonous :/
31. 00:43:925 (43925|0) - cut this LN to 00:44:271 - this sound is no more longer on that timing Lemme just say that this is my style of LN here(somewhat similar like yoshilove did in a map like "Gotou mai - Funwari Fuwari" (see the thread)). Extending the LN (even though the pitch are changing) is still acceptable as long as they playable (See TV Size version of this map. I using this kind of pattern too).
32. 00:44:618 - where is the LN ? pls do a consistency like LN on this part 00:44:271 (44271|1) - Added an LN on 4
33. 00:50:688 (50688|2) - wrong snapped . . . here is my fix http://puu.sh/lSGhm/400fb495af.jpg actually LN start here 00:50:514 - Extending the LN but I'm not adding any note here - 00:50:688 - For easier readability
34. 00:53:809 (53809|0,53809|1,53809|3,53982|2,54156|0,54329|1,54503|3,54676|1,54849|2,55023|0) - WTF this LN . . pls change that into single note only, no long sound on this part . . . but you can start LN invasion on here 00:55:196 - because it's correct long sound (which yours is right) Ah this..... I following a buildup noises (heard at 25%) and the pitch are changing every 1/2 . I think this "LN Invasion" starting from here is more fit
35. 01:00:572 (60572|1) - actually you can make a jack on first column, because of kick sound (hear it carefully) OR you can just add note on that because of kick sound Umm... keep this. I just don't want snare and hat noises in the same column
36. 01:03:693 (63693|2,63867|2) - this jack is not fit with music itself, move it to 4th column . . . works great (hear the sound carefully)
37. 01:04:907 (64907|2,65081|2) - hmmmm, this jack is not really fit too, try to move that to 4th column ? because i can hear 01:05:254 (65254|3) - is same synth sound Rearranged this section
38. 01:12:797 - add note, you've missing a note for drum here . . . do like 01:13:144 (73144|1) - Ignored on purpose for easier readabilty sake. Just as the same thing i do here - 01:01:699 -
39. 01:14:531 (74531|1) - delete this, because you didn't following any drum roll in this part It is, because that is the tom sound. xD
40. 01:16:612 - 01:16:959 - 01:17:306 - add note for drum sound . . . here is my suggestion http://puu.sh/lSGGD/627affd195.jpg it can be applied start on here 01:16:179 - 0-0 Too dense, Let the "Pony" diff do this instead. tbh Drumroll is not the focus of this diff
41. 01:22:682 - add a note on 2nd column,s till have synth sound like others
42. 01:28:144 - start on that, same as my suggestion on this part 00:19:994 -
43. 01:50:687 (110687|2,110861|1,111034|3,111208|2,111381|0,111554|2,111728|1,111901|3) - better to change that mini LN with single note, same reason as this part 00:53:809 - Same reason as above
44. the rest seems same . . . you can check it by yourself :v K :v

OK mod end huehue
good luck

oh i almost forgot, plz mod this map https://osu.ppy.sh/s/381397 :v