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Tchaikovsky - Piano Concerto No.1

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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年4月30日 at 2:18:42

Artist: Tchaikovsky
Title: Piano Concerto No.1
Source: DJMax
Tags: vivicat xinhe samiljul -kevincela- Aleks719 classic
BPM: 156
Filesize: 7579kb
Play Time: 01:55
Difficulties Available:
  1. 31's Taiko (4.83 stars, 957 notes)
  2. Aleks' NM (3.7 stars, 173 notes)
  3. -kevincela-'s HD (4.89 stars, 299 notes)
  4. MX (4.94 stars, 620 notes)
  5. vivicat's Concerto (5 stars, 439 notes)
  6. xinhe's EZ (1.95 stars, 117 notes)
Download: Tchaikovsky - Piano Concerto No.1
Download: Tchaikovsky - Piano Concerto No.1 (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My first beatmap xD


Progress
xinhe's EZ: 100%
-kevincela-'s HD :100%
MX: 100%
vivicat's concerto:100%
31's Taiko:100%
Aleks'sNM:100%

Now Pending!

Thx For Mod!!
1 vivicat
2 kino77
4.NatsumeRin
5 .TTTTTTTTTTTT
6.selee
7.kurohacker
8.nicktoons
9.Nymph_
10._Gezo_
11.-kevincela-
12.Sallad4ever
13.OzzyOzrock
14.Mystica
15.Numbers 596108
16.Gonzvlo
17.Aleks719
XSH_old
woshi 13
vivicat
加油lol
kino77
Alace
revived
Explosive
略觉得有点单调,MX难度 58s后建议改下 我不是专业mod就不多啥了ww

star ;)
Furudo_Erika_old
>wwwwwwwww<
NatsumeRin
Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
BG超过1M,不合格。resize或者换个格式或者索性换张都可以
文件夹里是否还有Insane和Insane Hitsounds的两个osu文件?我不确定是不是我之前下过,所以请再检查一下文件夹(反正也要改bg)有的话删掉。
各难度的preview time均没有设置
歌开始的很早,countdown是一定没有用的,请移除
EZ和MX的BG指向错了,请重新指到正确BG
难度分布很尴尬,我认为这属于3个Insane,而现在的EZ也绝对没有最低难度应有的简单度

[EZ]
一堆circle堆那么高有人能看懂吗,还有slider的折返是不允许被遮挡的,请注意。另外结合General的最后一句,请砍了重练吧
AR至少到3。如果定位是3星Normal,HP和OD也请设置到2,用拉低难度的方法降星是没有意义的。
节奏过密。还有请注意circle和slider的结合运用,几十circle连用会很无聊。我的看法是只能砍掉重练所以只说总括了。

[kino's HD]
建议减一些note(主要是1/4折返slider和一些过多的三连),稍微拉低难度,降星。
00:33:723 (8,1) - 感觉是应该在动而不是这拍定上就原路返回了
01:49:108 (8,1) - ^
有的部分有些过于单调了(8小节内连续重复4次),如果是降星的话正好趁这时候改一些吧。

[MX]
AR-1谢谢。OD也-1更好。BPM 156有哪里值得AR9吗
clap连续放实在太难听了
00:07:762 (8,9) - spacing
00:35:646 (2) - 挡slider折返的unrankable
01:03:339 (10,1) - 这中间break太短了,去掉
01:26:223 (1,2) - 你确定这样合适吗
01:40:839 (2,1) - spacing
我觉得这难度很多地方是在故意难为人,而这歌并不需要你这样。

[vivicat's concerto]
00:24:589 (3,4) - 建议别这样,挡的还是有些过分了
00:33:146 (5) - new combo标一下,不然难读
00:58:531 (1) - 说一下这段,重音很明显的是在3/2的那几个音(O o o o o o O),这样摆slider会不会不太好?因为玩家并没有根据音乐在打击(全是1/1),只是听起来如此罢了。
01:01:608 (1,6) - 都用1/2 slider,然后补circle
01:03:531 (2) - ^
xinhe
TTTTTTTTTTTT
1231563这个图片大小需要剪裁,改为1024x768

另外这个难度分布不太好。。EIII不太符合rank标准,EHII好像可以

xinhe's EZ

OD-1,HP Drain -1

不加hitsound?

00:50:839(1) - 做的对称些
01:26:223(1) - 和下一个slider的重叠不太美观吧

kino's HD

建议降到。。HD,大概4.5星就可以了吧
AR+1

00:38:820~00:35:358

这里(1)(2)用原来的音量,每两个加大10%的音效
00:35:454(1) - 大于前面那个circle 10%的音效

MX

00:03:531(1) - 这个位置调整下,有些近
00:04:877(2) - 昨移一个格子,下移2个格子(lv3)使这5个circle间距离都为2X
00:31:223(1) - 下移两个格子(lv3)
00:36:608(x) - 加个circle
00:36:800(1) - 如果上面那个circle加了,这个可以删了,也可以不删
后面几个相同的部分同00:36:608和00:36:800,但这可能设计到要重新排note了
01:12:377(4) - 换个样子?
01:16:031(2) - 换成等距的?使1,2,3的间距都为1.3
01:18:146(4) - 左移一格(lv3)
01:20:454(5) - 和前面的(1)对称

01:32:185(4)(5)(6) - 改下3连的排向,我觉得之前的可能有些不顺手(个人打图习惯。。=A=)图为上面那张
01:33:339(4)(5)(6) - 同上

vivicat's concerto

00:45:070(3) - 改成对称的好些?
这个难度原来看到过。。
和原来变化不大
就不多说了

总体说MX这难度,比我第一次看时好很多了

starrrrrrrrrrrr
Kami
:D
macttt
:)
Saten ruiko
STAR
Asakura Naoko
nice map
kino77
Rin和H-boy的mod基本都改了,只是降星实在是降不下来了...虽然显示的是I,但我觉得符合普遍的H水平.
Download: Tchikovsky - Piano Concerto No.1 (Night_Side) [kino's HD].osu
Playing
Star :)
Starbreeze
star~
lbh15174
star XD
LQX
:D
asus10tu
star~ :) 长条连打的轨迹能灵活点就好了... 某些距离切换要明显. 我不是mapper star好了...
xinhe
Selee
[General]

Have to say the difficulty spread is pretty bad..Easy--30k Hard-4M...

...我强烈建议你去听听MoonF的音效 偷一套过来

BG resize...?


[xinhe's EZ]

whistle slider body.. sounds noisy to me..

00:09:300 (1) - remove whistle body?
00:12:377 (1) - ^
00:14:685 (3) - ^
00:23:916 (2) - ^...etc
00:53:916 (1,1,1) - Remove whistle at 2nd reverse?
00:58:531 (1) - Finish?
01:24:685 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:27:762 (1) - ^

[kino's HD]

Looks like a Hard+ to me.. jump+stream..

01:55:454 (1) - Finish?

Nice~

[MX]

一些Normal到Soft的转接听着不是很舒服...

00:04:493 (9) - 1 grid down
00:58:531~01:03:339 (T) - I suggest to use Normal hitsounds here..so the transition would be better..
01:26:223 (1,2) - Spacing?
01:55:454 (1) - Finish?

[vivicat's concerto]

Nice..remove kiaitime?


不是很会mod这种的...基本纯Nazi..帮不上忙抱歉...音效不是很舒服...MX打不动
Mapper 31
:D Hi
May I make taiko diff?
Mapper 31
Topic Starter
Night_Side

samiljul wrote:

:)
OK~>.<
Hakeru
star ><
Topic Starter
Night_Side

TTTTTTTTTTTT wrote:

1231563这个图片大小需要剪裁,改为1024x768

另外这个难度分布不太好。。EIII不太符合rank标准,EHII好像可以

xinhe's EZ

OD-1,HP Drain -1

不加hitsound?

00:50:839(1) - 做的对称些
01:26:223(1) - 和下一个slider的重叠不太美观吧

kino's HD

建议降到。。HD,大概4.5星就可以了吧
AR+1

00:38:820~00:35:358

这里(1)(2)用原来的音量,每两个加大10%的音效
00:35:454(1) - 大于前面那个circle 10%的音效

MX

00:03:531(1) - 这个位置调整下,有些近
00:04:877(2) - 昨移一个格子,下移2个格子(lv3)使这5个circle间距离都为2X
00:31:223(1) - 下移两个格子(lv3)
00:36:608(x) - 加个circle
00:36:800(1) - 如果上面那个circle加了,这个可以删了,也可以不删
后面几个相同的部分同00:36:608和00:36:800,但这可能设计到要重新排note了
01:12:377(4) - 换个样子?
01:16:031(2) - 换成等距的?使1,2,3的间距都为1.3
01:18:146(4) - 左移一格(lv3)
01:20:454(5) - 和前面的(1)对称
[attachment=0:d697b]1.png[/attachment:d697b]
01:32:185(4)(5)(6) - 改下3连的排向,我觉得之前的可能有些不顺手(个人打图习惯。。=A=)图为上面那张
01:33:339(4)(5)(6) - 同上

vivicat's concerto

00:45:070(3) - 改成对称的好些?
这个难度原来看到过。。
和原来变化不大
就不多说了

总体说MX这难度,比我第一次看时好很多了

starrrrrrrrrrrr

NatsumeRin wrote:

Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
BG超过1M,不合格。resize或者换个格式或者索性换张都可以
文件夹里是否还有Insane和Insane Hitsounds的两个osu文件?我不确定是不是我之前下过,所以请再检查一下文件夹(反正也要改bg)有的话删掉。
各难度的preview time均没有设置
歌开始的很早,countdown是一定没有用的,请移除
EZ和MX的BG指向错了,请重新指到正确BG
难度分布很尴尬,我认为这属于3个Insane,而现在的EZ也绝对没有最低难度应有的简单度

[EZ]
一堆circle堆那么高有人能看懂吗,还有slider的折返是不允许被遮挡的,请注意。另外结合General的最后一句,请砍了重练吧
AR至少到3。如果定位是3星Normal,HP和OD也请设置到2,用拉低难度的方法降星是没有意义的。
节奏过密。还有请注意circle和slider的结合运用,几十circle连用会很无聊。我的看法是只能砍掉重练所以只说总括了。

[kino's HD]
建议减一些note(主要是1/4折返slider和一些过多的三连),稍微拉低难度,降星。
00:33:723 (8,1) - 感觉是应该在动而不是这拍定上就原路返回了
01:49:108 (8,1) - ^
有的部分有些过于单调了(8小节内连续重复4次),如果是降星的话正好趁这时候改一些吧。

[MX]
AR-1谢谢。OD也-1更好。BPM 156有哪里值得AR9吗
clap连续放实在太难听了
00:07:762 (8,9) - spacing
00:35:646 (2) - 挡slider折返的unrankable
01:03:339 (10,1) - 这中间break太短了,去掉
01:26:223 (1,2) - 你确定这样合适吗
01:40:839 (2,1) - spacing
我觉得这难度很多地方是在故意难为人,而这歌并不需要你这样。

[vivicat's concerto]
00:24:589 (3,4) - 建议别这样,挡的还是有些过分了
00:33:146 (5) - new combo标一下,不然难读
00:58:531 (1) - 说一下这段,重音很明显的是在3/2的那几个音(O o o o o o O),这样摆slider会不会不太好?因为玩家并没有根据音乐在打击(全是1/1),只是听起来如此罢了。
01:01:608 (1,6) - 都用1/2 slider,然后补circle
01:03:531 (2) - ^
thx ~nice mod :)
Topic Starter
Night_Side
kino moded in game~ :) so kudosu~thx~
Topic Starter
Night_Side

Selee wrote:

[General]

Have to say the difficulty spread is pretty bad..Easy--30k Hard-4M...

...我强烈建议你去听听MoonF的音效 偷一套过来

BG resize...?

BG
[attachment=0:70e57]1231563.jpg[/attachment:70e57]

[xinhe's EZ]

whistle slider body.. sounds noisy to me..

00:09:300 (1) - remove whistle body?
00:12:377 (1) - ^
00:14:685 (3) - ^
00:23:916 (2) - ^...etc
00:53:916 (1,1,1) - Remove whistle at 2nd reverse?
00:58:531 (1) - Finish?
01:24:685 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:27:762 (1) - ^

[kino's HD]

Looks like a Hard+ to me.. jump+stream..

01:55:454 (1) - Finish?

Nice~

[MX]

一些Normal到Soft的转接听着不是很舒服...

00:04:493 (9) - 1 grid down
00:58:531~01:03:339 (T) - I suggest to use Normal hitsounds here..so the transition would be better..
01:26:223 (1,2) - Spacing?
01:55:454 (1) - Finish?

[vivicat's concerto]

Nice..remove kiaitime?


不是很会mod这种的...基本纯Nazi..帮不上忙抱歉...音效不是很舒服...MX打不动
我也錯了○| ̄|_remap~
Kurowolfe
OMG, this song! I love to play this one when I was still playing DJMax before (not now though, my laptop can't take the pressure XD).
Here's the mod you've asked for:
kurohacker's mod(^^)
[General]
The name of this song's composer is Tchaikovsky, with an extra 'a'. Please change this.
Maybe add ECO, classical music and Wavfactory in the tags.
Also, the kiai time for all the maps are different. Is this intentional?

[xinhe's EZ]
0:03:146 [3] - Shorten the slider so that it ends at 0:04:108 instead.
0:09:300 [1] - Only use whistle for the beginning of the slider.
0:10:454 [2&3] - I suggest that you change their positions like this --->http://puu.sh/1jME
Also, for the slider, use whistle on at the beginning, and for the circle, use a finish instead.
0:20:070 [2] - This one could be change into this, to suit the song better --->http://puu.sh/1jMG
Also, change the end of [2] to a clap, add a clap to [3] and copy-paste [2]'s hitsounds to [4].
0:22:377 [5] - Start new combo here.
0:26:223 - Add a circle here.
0:28:146 [2] - Add a clap to the reverse note, and remove the one at the end.
0:30:839 [2] - Change the hitsound at the beginning from a whistle to a clap.
0:41:993 [3] - Add a whistle at the end of the slider.
0:46:993 [1] - I'm not sure which part are you following, but try having no hitsounds at the beginning of the slider, a whistle at the reverse, and a clap at the end.
0:48:531 [3] - Add a whistle here.
0:50:454 [3] - Start a new combo here and...
0:50:839 [1] - ... delete new combo here.
0:53:916 [all 1] - I think it's better if you remove one reverse from every slider, move them and add another similar slider at the end, like this --->http://puu.sh/1jMH
1:11:223 [2] - Add a clap at the first reverse.
1:22:377 [6] - Add a clap here.
1:23:146 [all 1] - The whistle sliders are kinda annoying here, consider changing them so that only the beginnings and the ends of the sliders have whistle sounds.
1:30:839 [4] - Change this to a clap instead.
1:32:377 [2] - Change the hitsounds to a clap only at the beginning of the slider.
1:33:146 [3] - Change this to a clap also.
1:35:454 [2&3] - I think it's better for these two to switch places. Also, for the old [2], change to a clap.

[31's Taiko]
The hitsounds volume should be louder, coz I can only hear them barely.
The map seems OK, only the notes' placing are quite random at a few places. But maybe that's just me.
Oh, and for the yellow note at the end, maybe you can extend it so that it ends at 1:56:987 instead?

[MX]
I like the fact that you mapped this to follow the DJMax's style.
But, maybe just increase the hitsound volume just a bit, so that we can actually hear the notes being played, although I know you wanted to emphasis the notes of the song for this map.

0:20:262 [7] - This one is too far up, and it's under the health bar. Maybe you can move it lower?
0:26:223-0:27:570 - Try arranging all the notes in a smooth curve. Also, add another circle with a clap 1/4 beat after this period to match the music.
0:26:416 [3,6, next 2, 5, 7] - Maybe add claps to all these notes?
0:26:896 [1] - Delete new combo here, and...
0:27:089 [2] - ... start a new one here instead.
0:52:377 [6] - Start a new combo here.
1:06:223 [1] - It's better to arrange this one horizontally, coz the change in direction is kinda weird.
1:22:377 [6,7,8] - How about arranging them so that they become like this? --->http://puu.sh/1jMI
You will need to change the placings of the notes after these ones, though..
1:42:185 [13]- Start new combo here.

[vivicat's concerto]
0:05:454 [5] - Add a clap only at the beginning.
0:10:052 [5] - Add a clap here?
0:22:954 [5] - Maybe remove the clap here, and..
0:23:146 [6] - Add it here instead?
0:31:223 [5] - Maybe add a clap at the end?

I really hope this gets ranked, so one star for you~
All the best! :)

P/S: For those of you who didn't know, this is actually a remix of a classical piece, Piano Concerto No. 1 Movement III. If you're interested, you can check out the real deal here --->http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=f7MAriotZyE&feature=related
Sorry for posting a link here though, I can't help it! xD
Topic Starter
Night_Side

kurohacker wrote:

OMG, this song! I love to play this one when I was still playing DJMax before (not now though, my laptop can't take the pressure XD).
Here's the mod you've asked for:
kurohacker's mod(^^)
[General]
The name of this song's composer is Tchaikovsky, with an extra 'a'. Please change this.
Maybe add ECO, classical music and Wavfactory in the tags.
Also, the kiai time for all the maps are different. Is this intentional?(This may be true)

[xinhe's EZ]
0:03:146 [3] - Shorten the slider so that it ends at 0:04:108 instead.
0:09:300 [1] - Only use whistle for the beginning of the slider.
0:10:454 [2&3] - I suggest that you change their positions like this --->http://puu.sh/1jME
Also, for the slider, use whistle on at the beginning, and for the circle, use a finish instead.
0:20:070 [2] - This one could be change into this, to suit the song better --->http://puu.sh/1jMG
Also, change the end of [2] to a clap, add a clap to [3] and copy-paste [2]'s hitsounds to [4].
0:22:377 [5] - Start new combo here.
0:26:223 - Add a circle here.
0:28:146 [2] - Add a clap to the reverse note, and remove the one at the end.
0:30:839 [2] - Change the hitsound at the beginning from a whistle to a clap.
0:41:993 [3] - Add a whistle at the end of the slider.
0:46:993 [1] - I'm not sure which part are you following, but try having no hitsounds at the beginning of the slider, a whistle at the reverse, and a clap at the end.
0:48:531 [3] - Add a whistle here.
0:50:454 [3] - Start a new combo here and...
0:50:839 [1] - ... delete new combo here.
0:53:916 [all 1] - I think it's better if you remove one reverse from every slider, move them and add another similar slider at the end, like this --->http://puu.sh/1jMH
1:11:223 [2] - Add a clap at the first reverse.
1:22:377 [6] - Add a clap here.
1:23:146 [all 1] - The whistle sliders are kinda annoying here, consider changing them so that only the beginnings and the ends of the sliders have whistle sounds.
1:30:839 [4] - Change this to a clap instead.
1:32:377 [2] - Change the hitsounds to a clap only at the beginning of the slider.
1:33:146 [3] - Change this to a clap also.
1:35:454 [2&3] - I think it's better for these two to switch places. Also, for the old [2], change to a clap.

[31's Taiko]
The hitsounds volume should be louder, coz I can only hear them barely.
The map seems OK, only the notes' placing are quite random at a few places. But maybe that's just me.
Oh, and for the yellow note at the end, maybe you can extend it so that it ends at 1:56:987 instead?

[MX]
I like the fact that you mapped this to follow the DJMax's style.
But, maybe just increase the hitsound volume just a bit, so that we can actually hear the notes being played, although I know you wanted to emphasis the notes of the song for this map.

0:20:262 [7] - This one is too far up, and it's under the health bar. Maybe you can move it lower?
0:26:223-0:27:570 - Try arranging all the notes in a smooth curve. Also, add another circle with a clap 1/4 beat after this period to match the music.
0:26:416 [3,6, next 2, 5, 7] - Maybe add claps to all these notes?
0:26:896 [1] - Delete new combo here, and...
0:27:089 [2] - ... start a new one here instead.
0:52:377 [6] - Start a new combo here.
1:06:223 [1] - It's better to arrange this one horizontally, coz the change in direction is kinda weird.
1:22:377 [6,7,8] - How about arranging them so that they become like this? --->http://puu.sh/1jMI(nice idea!)
You will need to change the placings of the notes after these ones, though..
1:42:185 [13]- Start new combo here.
yes~all fiexd!
[vivicat's concerto]
0:05:454 [5] - Add a clap only at the beginning.
0:10:052 [5] - Add a clap here?
0:22:954 [5] - Maybe remove the clap here, and..
0:23:146 [6] - Add it here instead?
0:31:223 [5] - Maybe add a clap at the end?

I really hope this gets ranked, so one star for you~
All the best! :)

P/S: For those of you who didn't know, this is actually a remix of a classical piece, Piano Concerto No. 1 Movement III. If you're interested, you can check out the real deal here --->http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=f7MAriotZyE&feature=related
Sorry for posting a link here though, I can't help it! xD
wow~thx you very much~it's helped for me:D
nicktoons
easy:
well... i know that easy maps must be easy, but isn't it to simple... there is no rythm =/
MX and vivicat's concerto. Well i have a rule, if i can't pass through you'r map withou Nofail, i won't mod it. Sry. i was able to pass them till half, and didn't see anything wrong.
and star, for interesting song
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nicktoons wrote:

easy:
well... i know that easy maps must be easy, but isn't it to simple... there is no rythm =/
MX and vivicat's concerto. Well i have a rule, if i can't pass through you'r map withou Nofail, i won't mod it. Sry. i was able to pass them till half, and didn't see anything wrong.
and star, for interesting song
ok~thanks:D
Nymph
Hi~ 这里是Nymph_~

xinhe's EZ:

00:03:146 (3) - 开头这几个滑条我打的时候有点迷惑. 这里如果跟音乐走 应该是从00:02:954 - 00:03:916结束
00:06:223 (1) - 结束的是不是早了点? 00:07:377 停这里试试
00:09:300 (1) - 00:08:916 在这里开始试试?
00:11:993 - 这里加个note怎么样
00:13:916 (2) - 这个移到00:13:531?
00:14:300 -这里加个note?
00:15:839 -这里也加一个note?

这样感觉就能让前面的旋律丰富起来>.< 刚开始打的时候觉得这里好空.不过还是个人意见而已.

MX:
vivicat's concerto:

...这两个DIF 不开NF活不下来..
不过打了几遍 节奏很棒 hitsound也很动听~ 我是发现不出这里有什么问题了呢...只能等待触手来看了.


不好意思 只发现这么点内容.. 扔个星.我闪 >.<
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