James2250 wrote:

Slightly late~ my bad
I would make sure you either make a difficulty in between these two or get a guest one Ok
Maybe add spinner-spin/clear/osu
Kiai time should be the same on the parts of the maps that are both mapped Fixed

Easy:
Notes are kind of close to the end of the spinners for an easy, but I guess leave them for now
Maybe name this It's Off (or something to do with the song like Hard has )
AR/OD + 1
00:22:890 (2,4) - align
00:26:890 (3) - don't like this being so low, doesn't look good in play either
00:28:490 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - have this entire thing align more (so it makes a diamond with the notes aligned)
00:48:890 (1) - remove new combo
01:42:090 (1) - ^
01:54:890 (1) - ^

It's On:
01:44:290 (1) - unrankable, auto can't get 2000
01:57:090 (1) - ^
01:57:990 (1) - start on red tick
02:27:290 (11) - new combo
02:27:890 (1) - remove new combo
02:36:090 (18) - cut this combo down
Nice map

*star*

Leorda wrote:

Aloha

[General]
Your MP3 Bit rate is 320kbps, it's unrankable. Maximum is 256kbps. You have fix this or find James2250
I'll try to fix this.

[Easy]
00:06:490 (2,3) - Don't stack these, begginer player can't play with stack
00:09:690 (2,3,4) - This pattern are very hard for begginer player
00:19:290 (6,7) - Don't stack these, begginer player can't play with stack
00:44:890 (2,3) - ^

[It's On]
00:10:890 (7) - New combo?
00:19:090 (9) - ^
00:23:890 (9) - ^
00:40:490 (7) - Remove this?
01:39:690 (7) - ^
02:46:290 (x) - Insert break here please, or else, the HP Drain is draining fast
02:49:490 (x) - ^
02:51:290 (4) - New combo?

Nice song
STAR

wmfchris wrote:

[It's On]
0:42:690 (9,10,11) uneven spacing
1:40:490 (1,7,13) (1,13) up 1 grid, (7) down 1 grid, ignore this it you don't want to make (1~13) into a ellipse.
2:42:190 (11,12,1,2,3) imo that's off vocal. Tried to fix it in some way :3
3:31:690 (5,6) down 1 grid

nice spacing, star

James2250 wrote:

"Here cuz of PM about mp3"
Details on mp3 says it is 226kbps (and doing size/length/125 gives same thing)

Did you fix it already?

The mp3 is 320kbps

DiamondCrash wrote:

General;

I might take you up on that guest diff offer. Cool

Easy;

00:34:890 (1) - Too soon after the spinner. (X)
01:21:290 (1) - ^ (X)
01:34:090 (1) - ^ (X)
01:46:890 (1) - ^ (X)
Half mapped easy makes me sadface. Full Mapped~

It's On;

[Hard] would do, you know.
00:19:490 (2,3) - Spacingggg (X)
00:26:890 (6) - Hidden repeat. (X)
00:53:690 (8,1) - Spacingggg (X)
02:23:690 (1) - Hey this should be snapped to 1/3. Make it... uh... 1/12 longer. :3 (Oh yeah )
02:24:490 (3) - ^ (X)
03:08:890 (3) - Reverse this or something, that spacing is silly~ (X)
03:23:690 (4,5) - Spacinggg

ErufenRito wrote:

Why the hell I can't skip intro? I have played maps with merely 2-3 seconds of intro and i could skip it <_<

Easy:

OD could be a bit higher. Errmm... i mean, approach rate? Probably at least +2... (-)
00:26:890 (3) - Dislike this being a bit offmap

00:19:290 (6) - Umm.. this could be moved 1/2 later. Use it as you see fit for your map. Guess i just wanted to tell you that you could do this too.. :X
03:01:290 (7) - Maybe 1/2 ealier? Use it as you see fit for your map. Guess i just wanted to tell you that you could do this too.. :X

03:54:890 - Where's One? Lol

Insane:

After a test play, here's something that caught my attention: 03:57:890 (1,2) - Please, make it clear that (2)is the slider. This is very confusing for people who doesn't have snake thing effect (Well, even with it, it's still way too fast to notice that (2) is actually the slider). Anyways, i believe that this is kinda unrankable? I don't remember.

00:31:290 (5) - This could have been a little bit more symmetrical. Not that it matters a lot.

00:40:490 (7) - This circle sounds out of place, I would move it to 00:40:890 (7) -
00:50:090 (8) - This slider sounds out of place, I would delete it, and change a bit the pattern to adjust the deletion.
00:43:290 (12) - And this slider also sounds a bit odd... Maybe shorten it so it ends at 00:43:490?
These last three are just merely suggestions, because i believe that this way they follows better with the music. If you see the pattern I'm trying to make with these changes, apply them for the other parts as well...

00:44:090 (1) - See the white ticks? I also think that when they say "On" it sounds too dominant to just leave it to the sound of a tick. Meaning to leave the job for a hit circle (or custom hisounds may work too) (-)

01:09:490 - I really expected a circle here
01:25:690 (3,4,5) - Comepletely ignorable again: I don't think these follows well with the music neither
01:44:290 (1,2,3,4) - Me not understand circles here. Same for others.
03:48:090 (3) - This could have been a little bit more symmetrical. (-)

Lol, this turned out to be a bit long...
Remember, all of them are just suggestions, except maybe that thing caught my attention in insane

noneed wrote:

Hi Gonz!

Easy:
00:19:290 (6) - (suggestion) place it on red tick and in the center of the 4 sliders.looks good imo (X)
03:08:090 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 2 grids right?
03:10:490 (1) - That's waaaay to short for an easy spinner..
03:58:090 (5) - Like this? http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot028-13.jpg


Insane:
03:11:090 (1,2) - That jump after a spinner o_O

Very cool spacing Gonz!

IceBeam wrote:

I can't see hitsounds on both difficulties.
You've got to add it. I'm trying to get some help

[Easy]
Distance is changing during the map,so I can't really follow it.
Like this:
00:14:090 (3,4,1,2) - Distance changed,then it back up to normal,but then I can see this pattern: 00:19:490 (6,1,2,3,4) and I could fail cause the distance between 00:18:490 (5) and 00:19:490 (6) looks completely similar to 00:14:090 (3) - 00:15:290 (4).
I really wish you will fix the distance and follow the only chosen.
03:10:490 (1) - Yeah,it passes ranking criteria,but it's short for easy,anyway,maybe change to slider?

[Insane]
00:41:890 (4) - Oh wow,place it under 1 instead? All this pattern looks so hard to read.
01:27:690 (1) - Don't like it,sounds weird.
01:43:290 (1) - Remove this spinner,and map this space.
01:56:090 (1) - ^ Same suggestion.
02:16:090 (2) - Also,I'm not sure if using 1/4 beats is needed in this beatmap.
02:23:690 (1,2,3,4) - That looks okay,however ~_~
02:33:290 (1) - Drums killed me. Lol
03:11:290 (2) - Do you need this note? Sounds better w/o it.
Crazy jumps.

Star~

Joon wrote:

hi

my modding

OMG where hit sound?

Lol I know , Ty :3

Thi is not Easy.... it Normal... Lies.

[Insane]
same Normal
Please put on your own
Will Do.

GL

gyt wrote:

Hello!

[Relaxing]
I think, it's too difficult for easiest diff (It doesn't has many places for rest). + It's a bit monotonous for me.
Is not that difficult
00:15:290 (4) - delete circle? Whhhhy :3?
00:23:690 (5) - delete one repeat + add claps at 00:24:090 and 00:24:490 Ops I missed that.
00:39:290 (2) - add clap at the end?Fixed
00:40:890 (4) - delete circle? Nou
01:10:890 - add circle? I think it's fine w/o it.
01:21:290 (1) - too soon after spinner (maybe) Yup, I agree.
01:23:690 (4) - delete clap at the end and add clap at the start No :3?
01:26:490 (3) - delete clap at the end and add clap at the repeat ^
01:27:690 (1) - delete circle [and add new combo to 01:28:090 (2)] Fixed.
01:32:090 (1,1) - too soon after spinner (maybe) This one is Ok.
02:10:490 (4) - replace with clap circle? Nou the slider is Ok.
02:23:290 (5) - delete circle? "Aha"
02:57:290 (4) - delete one repeat + add claps at 02:57:690 and 02:58:090 I'm following the same hitsound pattern for all the song :S
03:10:690 (1,2) - replace these circles with slider? Ok
03:30:090 (7) - delete circle? Why? This one is following the music
03:36:090 (4) - add clap at the end. Nou that would sound bad.
03:43:290 (6) - delete circle? Why do you want to get rid of my circles

[Difficult]
03:10:090 (5,1,2) - not in stack? Ok.
nice diff

[Crazy]
01:27:690 (1,2) - not in stack? Hmm tried.
01:27:990 (3,4) - reduce spacing Ok.
02:07:690 - add circle? Nah, I'm following the voice in this part.
02:17:690 (2) - delete circle(!) - I always miss it Lol, That's Ok.
02:25:490 - add circle? Ok :3
02:33:290-02:46:090 - awesome, but I lose here. Maybe use 0.8x distance spacing? Lol :3, Nah I like it that way.
03:06:890 (9,10) - reduce spacing? Ok :3
03:22:890 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I'm dead x_x (It doesn't fit music and 0.8x -> ~2.7x -> 0.8x is very evil jump) It's a "zig-zag" jump :3
I suggest use ~2x distance spacing and delete 03:23:490 (3) circle.
03:33:690 (13,1) - reduce spacing Oh cm'on this is pretty easy.
Drums and Jumps make this impossible for me!

Good map. Star!

Why do you want to get rid of my circles

• 
  03:57:890 - 03:58:490: Use soft sound instead of muting the volume (I think it’s better )

• 
  00:19:460 (6): A little confusing for easy
  01:02:090 : Add a circle
  03:38:090 (3,4,5): These are off grid (Put them a little higher)

• 
  00:09:690 (2,3,4): Distance
  01:16:090 (3,4,5): ^
  02:08:690 (4): Move it away~
  02:14:090 (1,2): Too close
  02:52:490 (2): New combo
  02:52:890 (1): Remove new combo
  03:27:690 (1,2,3…11): Oh well,maybe the hardest part

• 
  00:30:090 (3,4): Too far(Ignore this if this is a jump)
  01:02:090 (1): Spinner ends here
  01:27:690 (1,2,3,4):Too confusing
  02:10:290 (1): Spinner ends here
  03:48:090 (3): Increase the volume gradually

impossiblexu wrote:

Hi~

My suggestions:

[General]

• 
  03:57:890 - 03:58:490: Use soft sound instead of muting the volume (I think it’s better ) Ok.

[Relaxing]

• 
  00:19:460 (6): A little confusing for easy Fixed.
  01:02:090 : Add a circle
  03:38:090 (3,4,5): These are off grid (Put them a little higher)

[Diffcult]

• 
  00:09:690 (2,3,4): Distance
  01:16:090 (3,4,5): ^
  02:08:690 (4): Move it away~
  02:14:090 (1,2): Too close Fixed.
  02:52:490 (2): New combo Fixed.
  02:52:890 (1): Remove new combo Fixed.
  03:27:690 (1,2,3…11): Oh well,maybe the hardest part

[Crazy]

• 
  00:30:090 (3,4): Too far(Ignore this if this is a jump) Fixed.
  01:02:090 (1): Spinner ends here
  01:27:690 (1,2,3,4):Too confusing Fixed.
  02:10:290 (1): Spinner ends here
  03:48:090 (3): Increase the volume gradually I tried, but sound better w/o increasing volume.

Krisom wrote:

Ok, let's see...

General-
- osz. should be fine (I had a problem with the mp3's kbps, but checked it with a friend and it's rankeable in the end)
- Tags/source/letterboxing/offset, etc. seems to be the same on all diffs, ok, let's move on...

Relaxing-
01:02:090 - Start the break here? Fixed
01:31:290 (3) - Switch the clap (add it at the start) Fixed
03:58:090 (5) - Silence the end? Fixed

Difficult-
00:10:490 (4) - Whoops, spacing~ Fixed
00:59:490 (1) - Add a finish instead? Fixed
01:02:090 - Start the break here? ...
03:24:490 (5) - If the pattern could be changed, I'd add the new combo here for the emphasis on the Kiai Time. Not mandatory though.
03:58:090 (5) - Silence the end?

Crazy-
00:58:490 (1) - Add a finish instead?
01:02:090 - Start the break here?
03:48:090 (3) - The repeat arrows look weird. Compare them both. There might be more sliders like this one through the diff, but I didint pay too much attention until I saw this one (it's quite long ^^;)
03:58:090 (2) - Silence the end?


General thoughts:
Even though I don't encourage the fact that the breaks are different for all diffs, man... ...you mapping style is becoming quite good x_x! Keep up the good work!

Everything Fixed~
Thank You

CDFA wrote:

<3. <3

I don't have time to really mod this, but I'll just say this.

Camp Rock 2 Cast, not Cast of Camp Rock 2~.

Wiki says it's "Cast of Camp Rock 2: The Final Jam" Oh well I don't know

Ps: I deleted "The Final Jam" because it would be too long.

Sallad4ever wrote:

I am sooo late
but I promise to mod it so here it is
My mod are suggestion ignore it if you don't want to do the change

SPOILER

[Relaxing]
I guessing this normal, cause of the density of notes and some inconsistent spacing but it's not unintuitive
02:01:690 (1) - this will be kinda tricky for novice they might actually hit this sooner because of the "Okay now" on the vocal. I'm not saying you to change it, just saying on of the reason why I called this normal

[Difficult]
increase HP by 2 and +1 or 2 for AR and OD. The current AR doesn't fit the SV
00:12:890 (2) - make this symmetry to 00:12:490 (1)?
00:35:890 (2,4) - swap the position of these 2 it'll flow better imo. if you follow this, change all of the same pattern throughout the map. love this pattern
02:18:090 (1) - maybe move it 1/2 beat latter to the next red tick. it's kinda sudden because it start even before the vocals come in
02:46:090 (x) - add spinner until 02:49:290 ? you have to delete 02:48:290 (1,2) if you follow this
03:30:090 (12) - move this back 1/2 beat

[Crazy]
00:26:690 (4) - unstack this and move it under 00:26:290 (2,3) to get rid of the small jump to 5 ?
01:27:990 (3) - suddenly a 1/4, I suggest you to remove it
01:36:890 (x) - add a note here just like on 00:37:690 (6)
02:20:490 (2) - remove this?
03:09:690 (1) - shorten the spinner 1/2 beat to previous red tick
03:55:290 (6,7) - remove the jump here, fix 03:56:090 (8) if you take this

well I'm not too keen on the last jump either
Please think again if you want to follow my mod or not cause I know it's hard to get a bubble

Anyway I haven't seen your map for a while and here I got a pleasant surprise. Nice song and Great map overall
STAR~

Sakura Hana wrote:

Use combo re-ordering to get a darker colored combo start when there's that pale combo color after a spinner... the spinner flash plus the pale notes right after a spinner make it blindling to see the approach circle http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/34086 .
I also think the sliders on the pale combo color are kinda blinding during kiai, you may consider changing that color instead, seriously this slider is blinding: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/34088

[Crazy]
01:31:090 (9,10) - Not fit for a jump tbh, i think it plays better, if you make this distance the same than between (7,8)
The jump only exceed distance snap for 5 grids, But Ok.
02:07:891 ~ 02:13:690 - The jumps in here dont look like you're adding jumps to make sense with the music and rather making the map harder for the sake of it being harder.
These notes are placed on 1/1 and the jumps are pretty intuitive and easy, I feel confortable with those jumps, So I'll take that as a personal opinion
02:46:090 (5) - New combo. Ok
02:52:490 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - No... just no... this is too excessive really, reduce by maybe 1/4 of their current jump distance. Wh-what? Oh cm'on I love that pattern and this is [I] Even I can do those jumps.
03:00:490 (5) - New combo. I didn't use New Combo for this part on any of the patterns b4, Why would I use it here?
03:23:290 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Once again i think this is a bit too excessive.
03:25:290 (3,4) - ^
03:31:690 (5,6) - Reduce the distance between these 2 a little bit.
03:34:090 (2,3) - this is too excessive as well.
Sorry I really like those patterns, and no one else complained about them, If somebody else tells me that it's too excesive I'll change them.
Edit: Reduced Spacing between those patterns.

[Difficult]
00:20:890 (X) - Add a note. I'm following the guitar for this part and the "Au-Uhh", So I'll leave it like that.
00:21:890 (X) - ^ ^
00:35:890 (2,3,4) - And all copy/pasted parts (Reverse selection flows better imo) You & Sallad are totally right.
00:50:890 (1,2,3,4,5) - How many times do you have to repeat the same pattern? i think this is the 4th time by now?
Lots of copy/paste here that seems to be forced on the patterns for symmetry rather than following the actual song imo.
Well if you listen to the song: "Rock it, rock it, Show me, Show me, Come on, Come on, Lala, Lala, Get Crazy, Crazy"
It's repetitive as well, the pattern fits perfect imo and most importantly I like it and it's not that boring.
Wow longest mod post i've made in a while... sorry but there's so many blinding things in the map, and also a few notes that are
breaking the flow (or missing notes) so i'll have to pop it for now

ouranhshc wrote:

like sakura said, that spacing 2:07 is too large

I know its supposed to be insane. just shrink the spacing some for that section because its kinda unexpected.

Krisom wrote:

Ok, posteo los jumps (o cambios en el spacing) que YO no pude leer bien. Resalto aquellos que son realmente raros o_O

Ojo, leer el jump =/= hacer el jump

(solo vi crazy)
00:47:290 (8,1) -
02:10:290 (10,11,12) - (particularmente de (10) a (11))
03:51:290 (1,2,3,4,5) - (1), (2) y (3) son saltos, pero (4) y (5) no. Particularmente, me cuesta leer entre (3) y (4) para ser mas precisos

Muchos de los jumps que involucran sliders son muy difíciles para mi, pero sin embargo fui capaz de pasar la dificultad, solo que con varios combobreak en estos saltos. La solida estructura de los patrones los hace legibles, asi que no hay un graaan problema... Reducir un poco los saltos es a voluntad propia.

Mod-
Crazy-
02:51:290 (1) - esto empieza 1/2 despues con el bajo. No hay ritmo en 02:51:290

El re-bubble queda en manos de saku ya que ella fue quien reventó la burbuja, yo solo hago un chekeo.