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L.E.D. vs S-C-U - Confiserie [Taiko]

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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, November 22, 2015 at 12:08:04 PM

Artist: L.E.D. vs S-C-U
Title: Confiserie
Source: jubeat saucer
Tags: jubeat plus Original Soundtrack - Gourzaemon - dance dance revolution DDR サウンドトラック beatmania IIDX 20 tricoro Toshiyuki Kakuta Shigeharu Saeki
BPM: 185
Filesize: 3031kb
Play Time: 01:44
Difficulties Available:
  1. Futsuu (2.32 stars, 256 notes)
  2. Inner Oni (6.62 stars, 945 notes)
  3. Kantan (1.76 stars, 164 notes)
  4. Muzukashii (3.21 stars, 422 notes)
  5. Oni (4.13 stars, 643 notes)
Download: L.E.D. vs S-C-U - Confiserie
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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>.0
for rank(?)
17/11 bubbled >w<
29/11 Qualified >w<<<<<!! 6/12 Ranked \:D/
where is baka nardo ;w;
HR map of TWC2016 Final? ;w;" I can't play HR T.T
click here for the original inner oni \:D/
I am such a kind mapper
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First!

[General]
Preview Point在哪裡
01:44:864 - 這裡為什麼只有inner有綠線

[Kantan]
00:02:540 (5) - 把這個note放到 00:02:378 - 這裡來如何, 如果你抓的是00:02:540 - 這裡的音那我也沒話說
00:03:837 (7) - ^如果上面這條要改的話這個note也應該改一下
00:05:135 (9) - ^或者這個note可以不用改, 因為 00:05:459 - 這裡有高音會顯得比較奇怪
00:07:729 (14,15) - 這兩個note加一下finish吧, 因為你13也加了finish而且這兩個note和13是一樣的音
00:09:027 (16) - ^也可以不加, 照顧一下新手嘛, 而且16加了finish的話後面的18和19也應該一起加
00:11:297 - 這裡沒有音. 可以刪掉
00:12:270 (23,24) - Ctrl+G, 23的音明顯比24要低啊, 如果你抓的是別的音那也沒話說
00:13:567 (25,26) - 移到這裡來 00:13:405 - 如果移了可以把26改成k
00:14:864 (27) - 這個音要比28低吧, 改成d
00:16:810 (31) - 同25, 如果改的話加個note在這裡 00:17:135 - 也可以不加
00:17:459 - 也是只有d的音, 刪的話把 00:17:783 (33) - 放到 00:17:621 - 這裡
00:18:108 (34) - ^要移的話可以改成k, 也可以不改. 只是音稍微比33高一點
00:18:756 (35) - ^移了的話35也移到這裡來吧 00:18:594 -
00:20:702 (38) - 同33, 00:20:540 -
00:22:648 - 到 00:32:378 - 這裡和上面都是一樣的, 自己看著改吧. 如果真的只是抓白線上的音那就算了可以不用改
00:33:675 (60) - 移動到 00:33:513 - 這裡吧, 和開頭一樣.
00:34:973 (62) - ^, 00:34:810 -
00:36:270 (64) - ^, 00:36:108 -
00:38:864 (69,71,73) - ^, 00:38:702 -
00:44:054 (78,80,82) - ^, 00:43:891 -
00:49:243 (87,89) - ^, 和上面一樣, 也可以不用改, 這裡那個音比較重.
01:00:594 - 這裡沒有音. 可以刪掉
01:03:189 - ^
01:10:000 (32) - 既然前後都加了finish而且音都是一樣的為什麼這裡不加個finish呢
01:10:973 - 同 01:00:594 -
01:35:945 (14) - 同 01:10:000 (32) - 如果上面不加的話這裡也不用加
抓音問題只是個人喜好. 如果不喜可以無視.

[Futsuu]
1/2的三連放多了吧.
00:07:729 (19,20) - finish.同kantan
00:53:783 - 這裡kiai開始1/1放得有點長了, 適量的刪一點吧
除了1/2的三連多了點和kiai裡面1/1有點長之外沒什麼問題了

[Muzukashii]
00:04:162 (17) - 和 00:02:864 (12) - 一樣, 可以改成d
00:06:756 (28) - 和27差不多高吧, 可以改成k
同樣沒什麼問題.

[Oni]
我覺得Oni可以再改難一點來平衡一下難度的.
00:00:594 - 到 00:01:892 - 這一段我覺得你還不如放魚蛋 (誤
00:05:135 - 這裡可以加個note
00:05:540 - ^如果加了note可以在這裡也加一個
00:07:081 - ^如果兩個都加了的話可以在這一段加點難度
00:09:270 - 這裡可以加個k變成kkkkd
00:33:027 - 到 00:51:189 - 這一段可以適當加一些二連, 如果覺得kiai已經足夠難可以不用加
00:37:891 - 這裡可以變成kdddk或者kkddk
00:48:270 - 同上
以上只是純屬加大難度的, 不喜可以無視.
00:12:432 (86,87,88) - 這裡應該kdk比較好吧.

以上.摸不動inner了.
Topic Starter
-xNaCLx-
SPOILER

BrainBurst wrote:

First!

[General]
Preview Point在哪裡 - fixed
01:44:864 - 這裡為什麼只有inner有綠線 - fixed

[Kantan]
00:02:540 (5) - 把這個note放到 00:02:378 - 這裡來如何, 如果你抓的是00:02:540 - 這裡的音那我也沒話說
00:03:837 (7) - ^如果上面這條要改的話這個note也應該改一下
00:05:135 (9) - ^或者這個note可以不用改, 因為 00:05:459 - 這裡有高音會顯得比較奇怪
00:07:729 (14,15) - 這兩個note加一下finish吧, 因為你13也加了finish而且這兩個note和13是一樣的音
00:09:027 (16) - ^也可以不加, 照顧一下新手嘛, 而且16加了finish的話後面的18和19也應該一起加
00:11:297 - 這裡沒有音. 可以刪掉
00:12:270 (23,24) - Ctrl+G, 23的音明顯比24要低啊, 如果你抓的是別的音那也沒話說
00:13:567 (25,26) - 移到這裡來 00:13:405 - 如果移了可以把26改成k
00:14:864 (27) - 這個音要比28低吧, 改成d
00:16:810 (31) - 同25, 如果改的話加個note在這裡 00:17:135 - 也可以不加
00:17:459 - 也是只有d的音, 刪的話把 00:17:783 (33) - 放到 00:17:621 - 這裡
00:18:108 (34) - ^要移的話可以改成k, 也可以不改. 只是音稍微比33高一點
00:18:756 (35) - ^移了的話35也移到這裡來吧 00:18:594 -
00:20:702 (38) - 同33, 00:20:540 -
00:22:648 - 到 00:32:378 - 這裡和上面都是一樣的, 自己看著改吧. 如果真的只是抓白線上的音那就算了可以不用改
00:33:675 (60) - 移動到 00:33:513 - 這裡吧, 和開頭一樣.
00:34:973 (62) - ^, 00:34:810 -
00:36:270 (64) - ^, 00:36:108 -
00:38:864 (69,71,73) - ^, 00:38:702 -
00:44:054 (78,80,82) - ^, 00:43:891 -
00:49:243 (87,89) - ^, 和上面一樣, 也可以不用改, 這裡那個音比較重.
01:00:594 - 這裡沒有音. 可以刪掉
01:03:189 - ^
01:10:000 (32) - 既然前後都加了finish而且音都是一樣的為什麼這裡不加個finish呢
01:10:973 - 同 01:00:594 -
01:35:945 (14) - 同 01:10:000 (32) - 如果上面不加的話這裡也不用加
抓音問題只是個人喜好. 如果不喜可以無視.

as there're too many items and many are repeated/related with each other i'll just generalize what i changed here :3
pitch problem -> mostly fixed
deleting the middle note of X X X pattern for X X X X sound -> unchange because leaving it empty sounds strange
00:12:270 - 00:32:378 - unchange because following the music would be very messy as the rhythm is pretty complicated not friendly to new players
other similar suggestions -> fixed
[Futsuu]
1/2的三連放多了吧.
00:07:729 (19,20) - finish.同kantan -changed the one on first beat to finish cuz i dont want to use too many finishes
00:53:783 - 這裡kiai開始1/1放得有點長了, 適量的刪一點吧
除了1/2的三連多了點和kiai裡面1/1有點長之外沒什麼問題了
will discuss the difficulty problem later, unchange atm.
[Muzukashii]
00:04:162 (17) - 和 00:02:864 (12) - 一樣, 可以改成d - the sound here is a bit different so i would prefer a different pattern here, i.e. the k
00:06:756 (28) - 和27差不多高吧, 可以改成k - ^
同樣沒什麼問題.

[Oni]
我覺得Oni可以再改難一點來平衡一下難度的. - it's ok for me :D
00:00:594 - 到 00:01:892 - 這一段我覺得你還不如放魚蛋 (誤 - Nope :D
00:05:135 - 這裡可以加個note - but i made this empty all over the map
00:05:540 - ^如果加了note可以在這裡也加一個 - fixed as it fits better
00:07:081 - ^如果兩個都加了的話可以在這一段加點難度 - not very sure about this
00:09:270 - 這裡可以加個k變成kkkkd - fixed
00:33:027 - 到 00:51:189 - 這一段可以適當加一些二連, 如果覺得kiai已經足夠難可以不用加 - yup, so nope
00:37:891 - 這裡可以變成kdddk或者kkddk
00:48:270 - 同上 - no because if so it will be inconsistent with the later two
以上只是純屬加大難度的, 不喜可以無視.
00:12:432 (86,87,88) - 這裡應該kdk比較好吧. - i think dkd sounds better :3

以上.摸不動inner了.
thanks for mod :)
stu00608
Hi~ 不負責任的mod :D


[Muzukashii]

[Oni ]

  • 00:37:243 d
    00:47:621 ^
    其他感覺沒什麼了\:D/


[Inner Oni ]

  • 00:03:837 (34,35,36,37,38) - 改成kdkkd 試試
    00:15:837 k
    00:16:000 ^
    00:26:216 ^
    00:26:378 ^

    00:31:081 d
    00:31:162 del

    00:57:432 d?
    01:07:810 ^
    01:33:756 ^

    這麼虐人的譜真的行嗎qwq!?
Topic Starter
-xNaCLx-
SPOILER

stu00608 wrote:

Hi~ 不負責任的mod :D


[Muzukashii]

  • 00:04:162 d - explained why in previous mod lol
    00:16:162 k - 嘛我個人不太喜歡太多連續的k/d
    00:26:540 k 感覺比較適合 -^

    00:54:756 01:30:108 要不要試試看放這樣? - 這樣也不錯可是我想試一下像現在這樣比較吻合旋律(?
    https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3871099

[Oni ]

  • 00:37:243 d - this beat here is quite hard and same reason as i dont like so many d in a row so i'd prefer a k
    00:47:621 ^
    其他感覺沒什麼了\:D/


[Inner Oni ]

  • 00:03:837 (34,35,36,37,38) - 改成kdkkd 試試 - but the pitch at the last 3 notes is "down up down" , imo kkdkd is better
    00:15:837 k - i think d makes the flow better as i dont want to make the next few notes become "k d k"... "d d k" fits my thought better.
    00:16:000 ^
    00:26:216 ^
    00:26:378 ^

    00:31:081 d
    00:31:162 del - imo the duplets fits the stopping feeling between these two notes

    00:57:432 d?
    01:07:810 ^
    01:33:756 ^ - i prefer the pattern now =w=..for both my mapping and playing style \:D/

    這麼虐人的譜真的行嗎qwq!? 不知道>w<

thanks for mod :)
Kurokotei
Hi! Here is the mod you requested (M4M)

[General]

  1. According to RemyWiki, Confiserie also appeared in jubeat plus and beatmania IIDX 20 tricoro, so add them in tags? (you can remove jubeat saucer from tags since it's already written as source btw)
  2. You can also add Toshiyuki Kakuta and Shigeharu Saeki in tags since it's L.E.D. and S-C-U's real names
  3. Maybe rise up the volume of hitsounds a bit?

[Kantan]

  1. I think you can put SV 1.40 since the BPM is not that fast (185 BPM)
  2. 00:11:297 (21,22) - delete? to leave a break to players, it's a Kantan so 4/1 breaks are needed
  3. 00:42:432 (77,78) - ^
  4. 00:43:405 (79) - add finisher if ou followed the suggestion above
  5. 00:46:000 (83) - add finisher? there is a cymbal sound here

[Futsuu]

  1. Use SV 1.40? Same reason as Kantan
  2. 00:11:297 (28,29,30) - - wow that's pretty hard for a Futsuu (don't compare to AC pls), I think you can delete 28 and 29 to give some break to the player
  3. 00:13:405 (35) - dkd seems a bit hard imo, so change this note to d maybe?
  4. 00:16:162 (44) - ^
  5. 00:20:864 (56) - change to k? dk seems a bit hard
  6. 00:23:783 (63) - change to d?
  7. 00:26:540 (72) - ^
  8. 00:31:405 (85) - ^
  9. etc... I'm not going to focus on all 1/2s lol
  10. 00:21:351 (58) - imo that slider doesn't really fit, maybe change it to notes?
  11. 00:31:729 (86) - ^
  12. 00:43:081 (116) - delete to give some break to the player?
  13. 01:03:189 (25) - hmm, that finisher sounds weird since it should be placed 1/4 before, so delete it maybe?
  14. 01:10:000 (43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56,57) - that 1/1 streamis pretty long, consider cutting it?
  15. 01:14:540 (58) - end that slider at 01:15:513 - ?
  16. 01:35:946 (17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31) - same as 01:10:000 -

[Muzukashii]

Muzu seems nice to me, but maybe try to add more 2/1 breaks? I feel like it lacks of them

[Oni]

Everything seems okay!

[Inner Oni]

NCL stop being pro at mapping hard maps orz

That's all, Inner Oni is really nice!
Good luck for rank!
Topic Starter
-xNaCLx-
SPOILER

Sayaka- wrote:

Hi! Here is the mod you requested (M4M)

[General]

  1. According to RemyWiki, Confiserie also appeared in jubeat plus and beatmania IIDX 20 tricoro, so add them in tags? (you can remove jubeat saucer from tags since it's already written as source btw)
  2. You can also add Toshiyuki Kakuta and Shigeharu Saeki in tags since it's L.E.D. and S-C-U's real names fixed
  3. Maybe rise up the volume of hitsounds a bit?
maybe not? imo is ok :Dhmm.. fixed :D
 

[Kantan]

  1. I think you can put SV 1.40 since the BPM is not that fast (185 BPM) fixed
  2. 00:11:297 (21,22) - delete? to leave a break to players, it's a Kantan so 4/1 breaks are needed
  3. 00:42:432 (77,78) - ^
  4. 00:43:405 (79) - add finisher if ou followed the suggestion above
  5. 00:46:000 (83) - add finisher? there is a cymbal sound here fixed and worked on the pattern here a bit

[Futsuu]

  1. Use SV 1.40? Same reason as Kantan fixed
  2. 00:11:297 (28,29,30) - - wow that's pretty hard for a Futsuu (don't compare to AC pls), I think you can delete 28 and 29 to give some break to the player fixed
  3. 00:13:405 (35) - dkd seems a bit hard imo, so change this note to d maybe? fixed
  4. 00:16:162 (44) - ^ change into kkk instead
  5. 00:20:864 (56) - change to k? dk seems a bit hard fixed
  6. 00:23:783 (63) - change to d?
  7. 00:26:540 (72) - ^
  8. 00:31:405 (85) - ^ changed as mentioned above
  9. etc... I'm not going to focus on all 1/2s lol ya worked on it a bit lol
  10. 00:21:351 (58) - imo that slider doesn't really fit, maybe change it to notes?
  11. 00:31:729 (86) - ^ cant really think of a pattern that is easy and fit x_x...
  12. 00:43:081 (116) - delete to give some break to the player? fixed
  13. 01:03:189 (25) - hmm, that finisher sounds weird since it should be placed 1/4 before, so delete it maybe? fixed
  14. 01:10:000 (43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56,57) - that 1/1 streamis pretty long, consider cutting it? fixed
  15. 01:14:540 (58) - end that slider at 01:15:513 - ? fixed
  16. 01:35:946 (17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31) - same as 01:10:000 -

[Muzukashii]

Muzu seems nice to me, but maybe try to add more 2/1 breaks? I feel like it lacks of them changed some notes in non-kiai part, hopefully could be better

[Oni]

Everything seems okay!

[Inner Oni]

NCL stop being pro at mapping hard maps orz >w<

That's all, Inner Oni is really nice!
Good luck for rank!
thanks for mod :)
Topic Starter
-xNaCLx-
#delete notes and reduce complexity to increase star rating
sigh sr..
Nardoxyribonucleic
Hi, here comes a taiko mod as requested in TNA queue.

  • [General]
  1. It would be better to set the offset to 594 as the first note appears at the main beat.
  2. Disable countdown, widescreen suppport and letterbox for all diffs.
  3. 00:52:486 - try to increase the volume of this timing point to 50% so that spinners could give an audible feedback.
  • [Kantan]

    HP+2 ? The current setting is too low imo.
    You may set SV as 1.2 since the song BPM is relatively high.
  1. 00:21:351 (39) - consider deleting this slider for a break ? Currently the pattern chain is too long from 00:12:270 to 00:42:108 -
  2. 00:31:729 (58) - same as ^
  3. 00:38:216 (67) - maybe remove finish ? A bit overemphasized imo.
  4. 01:06:108 (25) - d would fit the pitch drop well.
  • [Futsuu]

    HP+2 and OD+1 ? Refer to Kantan.
  1. 00:06:594 - consider adding d here for a better spread with Muzukashii ?
  2. 00:10:000 and 00:10:648 - same as ^
  3. 00:19:567 and 00:29:946 - ^
  4. 00:33:027 (85) - maybe K as you did in Kantan ?
  5. 00:43:081 - adding d here would help cohere with 00:37:891 (99) -
  6. 00:43:405 (114) - same as 00:33:027 (85) -
  7. 00:48:270 (128) - k would be better as the pitch is rather high.
  8. 00:48:594 (129) and 00:49:891 (133) - same as 00:33:027 (85) -
  9. 00:54:919 - same as 00:06:594 -
  10. 00:56:864 - similar to ^ , you may add k here.
  11. 01:05:297 and 01:07:567 - same as 00:06:594 -
  12. 01:30:108 (3) - same as 00:33:027 (85) -
  13. 01:31:243 - same as 00:06:594 -
  14. 01:33:189 - same as 00:56:864 -
  • [Muzukashii]
  1. 00:07:891 - add d and 00:08:054 - add k to reduce the gap with Oni ?
  2. 00:09:108 - similar to ^ , adding d here would work better for the spread.
  3. 00:18:919 (75,76,77,78,79,80,81,82) - maybe try d k k d k d k d to follow the pitch of music accordingly ?
  4. 00:29:297 (120,121,122,123,124,125,126,127) - same as ^
  5. 01:01:729 - same as 00:09:108 -
  6. 01:03:837 and 01:04:000 - ^
  7. 01:06:594 - ^
  8. 01:09:675 - 01:09:837 - 01:10:324 - add k d d respectively for the same reason as ^ ?
  9. From 01:17:135 to 01:22:324 - this part is nearly the same as Oni and the difficulty gap with Futsuu is too big imo. Try to reduce the note density in this session.
  10. 01:34:324 - consider adding k here ? The 2/1 break seems unnecessary and is too simple compared with Oni.
  11. From 01:40:486 to 01:41:621 - again, this part is too similar to Oni. You may try the following pattern for the sake of a more balanced spread: (cursor at 01:41:135 - )
  • [Oni]
  1. 00:05:702 (38) - consider moving this note to 00:05:135 - for a smoother flow ?
  2. 00:35:297 (221,222) - swapping these notes to k d would follow the pitch decrease there.
  3. 00:45:675 (284,285) - same as ^
  4. 00:45:999 (286) - 00:47:297 (293) - 00:48:594 (301) and 00:49:891 (309) - add finish as you did in Muzukashii ?
  5. From 01:10:486 to 01:10:891 - kdk dk as you did at 01:00:108 - ?
  • [Inner Oni]
  1. 00:31:081 (261) - add k and move 00:31:000 (260) - to 00:31:324 - for a smoother flow ? It seems that xx-xx pattern does not fit very well here.
  2. 00:57:513 (44,45) - swapping these notes to kd would fit the pitch drop there.
  3. 01:07:891 (159,160) - same as ^
  4. 01:33:837 (369,370) - ^
You may call me back after that~ :D
Topic Starter
-xNaCLx-

Nardoxyribonucleic wrote:

Hi, here comes a taiko mod as requested in TNA queue.

  • [General]
  1. It would be better to set the offset to 594 as the first note appears at the main beat. fixed
  2. Disable countdown, widescreen suppport and letterbox for all diffs. fixed
  3. 00:52:486 - try to increase the volume of this timing point to 50% so that spinners could give an audible feedback. fixed
  • [Kantan]

    HP+2 ? The current setting is too low imo. fixed
    You may set SV as 1.2 since the song BPM is relatively high. fixed
  1. 00:21:351 (39) - consider deleting this slider for a break ? Currently the pattern chain is too long from 00:12:270 to 00:42:108 - fixed
  2. 00:31:729 (58) - same as ^
  3. 00:38:216 (67) - maybe remove finish ? A bit overemphasized imo. fixed
  4. 01:06:108 (25) - d would fit the pitch drop well. fixed
  • [Futsuu]

    HP+2 and OD+1 ? Refer to Kantan. fixed
  1. 00:06:594 - consider adding d here for a better spread with Muzukashii ? fixed
  2. 00:10:000 and 00:10:648 - same as ^ fixed
  3. 00:19:567 and 00:29:946 - ^ fixed
  4. 00:33:027 (85) - maybe K as you did in Kantan ? sure
  5. 00:43:081 - adding d here would help cohere with 00:37:891 (99) - //i would like to have a break here as starting from here its a repetition of 00:33:027 - .
  6. 00:43:405 (114) - same as 00:33:027 (85) - fixed
  7. 00:48:270 (128) - k would be better as the pitch is rather high. fixed
  8. 00:48:594 (129) and 00:49:891 (133) - same as 00:33:027 (85) - fixed
  9. 00:54:919 - same as 00:06:594 - fixed
  10. 00:56:864 - similar to ^ , you may add k here. fixed
  11. 01:05:297 and 01:07:567 - same as 00:06:594 - fixed
  12. 01:30:108 (3) - same as 00:33:027 (85) - fixed
  13. 01:31:243 - same as 00:06:594 - fixed
  14. 01:33:189 - same as 00:56:864 - fixed
  • [Muzukashii]
  1. 00:07:891 - add d and 00:08:054 - add k to reduce the gap with Oni ? fixed
  2. 00:09:108 - similar to ^ , adding d here would work better for the spread. fixed
  3. 00:18:919 (75,76,77,78,79,80,81,82) - maybe try d k k d k d k d to follow the pitch of music accordingly ? //i think the music gives me a feeling of d d k k because of the "on going" feeling and hard beat on the last note. but i made 00:19:891 (83) - d to fit the pitch and feeling better.
  4. 00:29:297 (120,121,122,123,124,125,126,127) - same as ^ //^
  5. 01:01:729 - same as 00:09:108 - fixed
  6. 01:03:837 and 01:04:000 - ^ //feeling having a break here is better as the coming sentence is quite long
  7. 01:06:594 - ^ fixed
  8. 01:09:675 - 01:09:837 - 01:10:324 - add k d d respectively for the same reason as ^ ? //fixed except the first one as there is no melody there and not really want to put notes there. and imo it is also nice.
  9. From 01:17:135 to 01:22:324 - this part is nearly the same as Oni and the difficulty gap with Futsuu is too big imo. Try to reduce the note density in this session. deleted some notes and it now looks a bit like the part before kiai in futsuu, but this is a calm part so i think its ok to make it easier
  10. 01:34:324 - consider adding k here ? The 2/1 break seems unnecessary and is too simple compared with Oni.
  11. From 01:40:486 to 01:41:621 - again, this part is too similar to Oni. You may try the following pattern for the sake of a more balanced spread: (cursor at 01:41:135 - )
    fixed, but i prefer an opposite placement of d and k
  • [Oni]
  1. 00:05:702 (38) - consider moving this note to 00:05:135 - for a smoother flow ? //i would like to keep the duplet pattern only for the first part of these 3/4 spacing notes, the note at 00:05:378 (35) - is due to the existence of melody.
  2. 00:35:297 (221,222) - swapping these notes to k d would follow the pitch decrease there. fixed
  3. 00:45:675 (284,285) - same as ^ fixed
  4. 00:45:999 (286) - 00:47:297 (293) - 00:48:594 (301) and 00:49:891 (309) - add finish as you did in Muzukashii ? fixed
  5. From 01:10:486 to 01:10:891 - kdk dk as you did at 01:00:108 - ? fixed
  • [Inner Oni]
  1. 00:31:081 (261) - add k and move 00:31:000 (260) - to 00:31:324 - for a smoother flow ? It seems that xx-xx pattern does not fit very well here. fixed
  2. 00:57:513 (44,45) - swapping these notes to kd would fit the pitch drop there. //maybe for the pitch, yes, but to me here is like a xx-xx sound but with an extra note in between, so i'd prefer this kkdkk pattern more
  3. 01:07:891 (159,160) - same as ^ //^
  4. 01:33:837 (369,370) - ^ //^
You may call me back after that~ :D
really, really thanks for mod :)
Nardoxyribonucleic
The set looks fine now with a more balanced spread. Lower difficulties have enough breaks and pattern arrangements are nice in general.

Bubbled~
Yuzeyun
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[Inner Oni]
I think current OD is a notch too low. Increase it to a flat 6; you have complex patterns with 1/6 1/4 and possible notelocking going on.
01:27:512 - If nothing changes here, better leave that out.
Nwolf
hype?
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_Gezo_ wrote:

58.44g/mol


[Inner Oni]
I think current OD is a notch too low. Increase it to a flat 6; you have complex patterns with 1/6 1/4 and possible notelocking going on.
01:27:512 - If nothing changes here, better leave that out.
fixed . _ . although i still prefer OD5

thanks for mod
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Great map
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