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Engi no San Otome - Yuuki Rinrin(TV size)

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DJMax
112 posts
Joined March 2015
DJMax
all fixed
Gyro Zeppeli
94 posts
Joined January 2014
Gyro Zeppeli

Kencho wrote:

[Gyro's Normal]
  1. Combo colors are not set. 複製一下別的難度的combo colors吧
  2. 00:20:994 (2) - DS問題，這裡變成1.09x了
  3. 00:56:994 (3) - 同樣DS問題，0.91x
  4. 01:23:394 (6) - 同樣DS問題，1.06x
  5. 01:04:194 (5,1) - 互換NC
  6. 01:15:165 (5) - NC
ALL FIX~~
Kencho
952 posts
Joined August 2013
Kencho
Talk with the creator to fix some NC problems and combo colurs.
Let's get it rank!
Bubbled!
Pata-Mon
1,489 posts
Joined March 2015
Pata-Mon
555555
Pata-Mon
1,489 posts
Joined March 2015
Pata-Mon
tags里加一下 ED 和 ending 吧
Yorita Yoshino
370 posts
Joined April 2014
Topic Starter
Yorita Yoshino

Pata-Mon wrote:

tags里加一下 ED 和 ending 吧
加了不会戳跑吗0 0 :o
Pata-Mon
1,489 posts
Joined March 2015
Pata-Mon

-ClariS- wrote:

Pata-Mon wrote:

tags里加一下 ED 和 ending 吧
加了不会戳跑吗0 0 :o
会 不过直接找恳求reb就可，又不耽误你找下一个bn
Yorita Yoshino
370 posts
Joined April 2014
Topic Starter
Yorita Yoshino

Pata-Mon wrote:

会 不过直接找恳求reb就可，又不耽误你找下一个bn
下个BN再fix咯，一块改 8-)
Pata-Mon
1,489 posts
Joined March 2015
Pata-Mon
等等……发现unrank问题……
因为有unrank所以顺便再多说点别的吧，毕竟改一次不可避

[Hard]
  1. 01:14:137 (6,7) - 折返箭头被挡！这个unrank
  2. 00:24:765 (2) - 对hard玩家来说这里的4次折返有点难读，之后flow也不算好打，容易断
  3. 00:47:222 (3,4,5) - 这里感觉音效小得太过分，对比前后的音量，几乎听不到
  4. 00:49:794 (3) - 建议稍微拆开一下，至少00:50:480 - 这个音clickable，因为是白线重音+下一句人声开头
  5. 00:52:708 - 00:53:051 - 这里并不适合完全空掉
  6. 01:27:337 (1,2) - 还是觉得跳太大，至少来说，01:27:337 (1) - 跟前面和跟后面的ds差别要明显，如果后面大，前面最好更大
Yorita Yoshino
370 posts
Joined April 2014
Topic Starter
Yorita Yoshino

Pata-Mon wrote:

等等……发现unrank问题……
因为有unrank所以顺便再多说点别的吧，毕竟改一次不可避

[Hard]
  1. 01:14:137 (6,7) - 折返箭头被挡！这个unrank
  2. 00:24:765 (2) - 对hard玩家来说这里的4次折返有点难读，之后flow也不算好打，容易断
  3. 00:47:222 (3,4,5) - 这里感觉音效小得太过分，对比前后的音量，几乎听不到
  4. 00:49:794 (3) - 建议稍微拆开一下，至少00:50:480 - 这个音clickable，因为是白线重音+下一句人声开头
  5. 00:52:708 - 00:53:051 - 这里并不适合完全空掉
  6. 01:27:337 (1,2) - 还是觉得跳太大，至少来说，01:27:337 (1) - 跟前面和跟后面的ds差别要明显，如果后面大，前面最好更大
帮cq改摸
unrank的fix了，其他的我是觉得没什么问题啦(
updated
Kencho
952 posts
Joined August 2013
Kencho
Rebubbled!
Koiyuki
2,531 posts
Joined March 2013
Koiyuki
咦 泡了
Koiyuki
2,531 posts
Joined March 2013
Koiyuki
Gyro's Normal
  1. 01:23:394 (1,2) - blanket？
Pata-Mon's Advanced
  1. 不想多挑，吐槽一句kiai节奏都没前面节奏密
Dynamix's Hard
  1. 00:02:994 (1,2,3,1) - 这tm在hard里面有点几把啊
  2. 01:02:822 (6,1) - swap nc
  3. 01:20:651 (1,2) - stack
  4. 01:22:022 (7) - nc

    你这读图难度叫insane完全没啥问题
Insane
  1. 00:02:994 (3) - 可以nc一哈
  2. 00:50:137 (4,1) - stack
  3. 01:14:137 (1) - remove nc
既然收到了req还是来看了看
看了前面的diff感觉还可以 然后看到insane 大失所望
这图我不想点 在我看来最高难度质量不行
对称建议多多学习一下384以及烤老板那张苍彼的op，甚至三妖的图也可以
建议改完上面的找kencho reb

Edit：那就补一下一些吐槽吧

Insane
00:04:022 (1,2,3) - 这种等间距120度的ds梗其实很卡手，但你却在开头地方大数量的使用；而且滑条尾的overlap真的很难看
00:06:594 (3,1,2,3) - 接上面一样，3123这个距离和flow其实是很不舒服的，而且3的stack滑条尾并不好，不如摆个跳
00:12:251 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 这里为什么又不搞对称梗了？
00:18:594 (6,1,2,3) - 这里摆的明显过挤，12滑条的弧度完全没必要这么大
00:19:794 (4) - antijump的开始最好nc，你后面00:25:280 (1) - 都nc了这里为什么不加呢
00:30:594 (8) - nc
00:36:251 (5) - ^
00:42:251 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 同质化滑条严重，且前四和后四的间距完全不同，就算把00:43:622 (1) - 往上移一点到1.5x或者1.6x的都会看上去打起来舒服很多
00:53:222 (1,2,3,4) - 这种07年老梗就不要拿出来了，不论游戏性和观赏性都不好
00:54:594 (1,2,3) - 整张图这种摆法太泛滥了
01:05:908 (2,3,4) - 不如ctrl+j

后半段kiai也是同质化严重

对称不是问题 摆的好的对称图也有很多
关键在于梗的运用和结构的构造
好的对称图看起来就舒服很多 没有过多的overlap 没有过于横平竖直的滑条 note之间的ds调整也合理 这样的对称打起来看起来都赏心悦目
Yorita Yoshino
370 posts
Joined April 2014
Topic Starter
Yorita Yoshino

Koiyuki wrote:

Insane
  1. 00:02:994 (3) - 可以nc一哈fix
  2. 00:50:137 (4,1) - stackfix
  3. 01:14:137 (1) - remove ncfix
00:04:022 (1,2,3) - 这种等间距120度的ds梗其实很卡手，但你却在开头地方大数量的使用；而且滑条尾的overlap真的很难看故意摆难打的 overlap我真的不觉得难看， 个人审美问题
00:06:594 (3,1,2,3) - 接上面一样，3123这个距离和flow其实是很不舒服的，而且3的stack滑条尾并不好，不如摆个跳fix
00:12:251 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 这里为什么又不搞对称梗了？节奏问题，后面放串的话没法拉滑条，我又想放串
00:18:594 (6,1,2,3) - 这里摆的明显过挤，12滑条的弧度完全没必要这么大fix
00:19:794 (4) - antijump的开始最好nc，你后面00:25:280 (1) - 都nc了这里为什么不加呢fix
00:30:594 (8) - ncfix
00:36:251 (5) - ^fix
00:42:251 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 同质化滑条严重，且前四和后四的间距完全不同，就算把00:43:622 (1) - 往上移一点到1.5x或者1.6x的都会看上去打起来舒服很多所以说啥叫同质化啊.....间距是拉大了
00:53:222 (1,2,3,4) - 这种07年老梗就不要拿出来了，不论游戏性和观赏性都不好不是很懂...
00:54:594 (1,2,3) - 整张图这种摆法太泛滥了改了几处，不过我听歌就是觉得该放这种滑条 :idea:
01:05:908 (2,3,4) - 不如ctrl+jfix

后半段kiai也是同质化严重

对称不是问题 摆的好的对称图也有很多
关键在于梗的运用和结构的构造
好的对称图看起来就舒服很多 没有过多的overlap 没有过于横平竖直的滑条 note之间的ds调整也合理 这样的对称打起来看起来都赏心悦目
我还是修行不够啊...
忙于面对大学新事物，没来得及及时回摸，抱歉
我会去找别人的，总之谢谢摸图 :)
Yorita Yoshino
370 posts
Joined April 2014
Topic Starter
Yorita Yoshino
应GDer要求帮忙改摸
Normal all fix
Hard all fix
updated
Xinely
5,014 posts
Joined April 2012
Xinely
你好,从queue来

General :
- use custom combo colors?
- also no need anime in tags, it will be setted in genre once get qualify

Easy :
- i think your volume setting is a bit low, i have a bit problem to hear 00:03:851 -'s finish and claps start from 00:04:194 - , i think by increasing 10% for all greenline will solve it
- 00:11:394 (4) - imo this slider is too curvy if comparing with 00:12:422 (1) - 's shape, mind to smoother it a bit?
- 01:19:280 (2) - i guess nc for this?
- kwan lazy copy paste mapper :^)

Normal :
- 00:03:851 - finish? it has cymbal
- 00:09:337 - ^
- 00:12:080 (1) - missing whistle on head?
- 00:14:822 (1) - finish, its clearly have cymbal sound
- 00:16:880 (6) - why not use 2 sliders of 1/2 slider? for consistency with 00:18:594 (4,5) -
- 00:22:365 (5) - similar with above
- 00:24:080 (1) - remove nc for consistency
- 00:25:794 (1) - 428,268? previous slider's repeat is almost covered 1/2 head of this slider, it looks ugly
- 00:32:137 - 00:32:480 - are strong cymbal sounds, that should not be skipped
- 00:37:622 - 00:37:965 - ^
- 00:40:880 (4,5) - broken flow? its suddenly changed with obvious reason why, for me you better to keep circular flow on this part http://puu.sh/rREp5/691cb520ce.jpg
- 00:42:251 - 00:55:965 - 01:06:937 - 01:20:651 - finish
- 01:00:765 (6) - try rotate it 20 degree and put at 92,236 for better flow ayy
- 01:11:737 (6) - literally same as above. rotate 18 degree and put at 480,136
- 01:28:194 - unused greenline

Advanced :
- 00:09:337 (1) - finish
- 00:10:880 (2) - comparing with 00:10:194 (4) - 's slider's flow it feels kinda ruin your flow here, i would say move 00:10:880 (2) - 's tail to 120,304
- 00:14:822 - finish
- 00:20:308 - ^
- 00:46:194 (2,1) - better swap the nc because your rhythm pattern to increase readability
- 01:27:337 (4) - i think use 2 circles is better for this music because both music are cymbal here

Hard :
- 00:03:508 (2,3) - inconsistent spacing when both sounds are clearly same strong

good luck ~
Gyro Zeppeli
94 posts
Joined January 2014
Gyro Zeppeli
改一波
Last edited by Gyro Zeppeli , edited 1 time in total.
IamKwaN
osu! Alumni
3,905 posts
Joined August 2012
IamKwaN
all fixed, thanks elybaby
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179,204,54937,2,0,P|228:198|279:204,1,99.9999999999999,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
357,247,55622,1,8,0:0:0:0:
429,193,55965,6,0,P|447:146|448:94,1,99.9999999999999,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
373,46,56651,2,0,P|323:51|272:45,1,99.9999999999999,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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162,285,58365,1,8,0:0:0:0:
90,340,58708,6,0,P|71:294|81:246,1,99.9999999999999,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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342,66,61108,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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Gyro Zeppeli
94 posts
Joined January 2014
Gyro Zeppeli

Xinely wrote:

你好,从queue来

Normal :
- 00:03:851 - finish? it has cymbal
- 00:09:337 - ^
FIX
- 00:12:080 (1) - missing whistle on head?
yes i missed
- 00:14:822 (1) - finish, its clearly have cymbal sound
OK
- 00:16:880 (6) - why not use 2 sliders of 1/2 slider? for consistency with 00:18:594 (4,5) -
- 00:22:365 (5) - similar with above
- 00:24:080 (1) - remove nc for consistency
FIX
- 00:25:794 (1) - 428,268? previous slider's repeat is almost covered 1/2 head of this slider, it looks ugly
ur too fix
- 00:32:137 - 00:32:480 - are strong cymbal sounds, that should not be skipped
- 00:37:622 - 00:37:965 - ^
- 00:40:880 (4,5) - broken flow? its suddenly changed with obvious reason why, for me you better to keep circular flow on this part http://puu.sh/rREp5/691cb520ce.jpg
FIX
- 00:42:251 - 00:55:965 - 01:06:937 - 01:20:651 - finish
FIX
- 01:00:765 (6) - try rotate it 20 degree and put at 92,236 for better flow ayy
- 01:11:737 (6) - literally same as above. rotate 18 degree and put at 480,136
ur not good,i fixed another better
- 01:28:194 - unused greenline
FIX
Len
2,812 posts
Joined June 2012
Len 
2016-10-29 02:43 Len: ㅇ
2016-10-29 02:43 -ClariS-: 0
2016-10-29 02:43 -ClariS-: do not sleep?
2016-10-29 02:43 Len: throw me which do you want to mod from me
2016-10-29 02:44 Len: do you want to get*
2016-10-29 02:44 -ClariS-: OK
2016-10-29 02:44 Len: right now
2016-10-29 02:44 -ClariS-: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/808775 Engi no San Otome - Yuuki Rinrin(TV size)]
2016-10-29 02:44 -ClariS-: this
2016-10-29 02:44 -ClariS-: www
2016-10-29 02:46 Len: self popped?
2016-10-29 02:46 -ClariS-: there have a koiyuki's mod
2016-10-29 02:46 Len: ok then cant
2016-10-29 02:46 Len: bye
2016-10-29 02:47 -ClariS-: i changed something and its poped
2016-10-29 02:47 -ClariS-: .
2016-10-29 02:47 Len: kencho and koiyuki already did it so
2016-10-29 02:47 -ClariS-: no
2016-10-29 02:47 Len: see you next time
2016-10-29 02:47 -ClariS-: koiyuki said he will not bubble this map= =
2016-10-29 02:48 -ClariS-: .
2016-10-29 02:49 Len: i wanted mod before i go sleep
2016-10-29 02:49 Len: but
2016-10-29 02:49 Len: advanced is a bit mess since it uses ar6.5
2016-10-29 02:50 Len: 01:10:365 (2,3,1,2,3) - etc
2016-10-29 02:50 Len: 01:12:422 (1,2,3,4,5) - 
2016-10-29 02:50 -ClariS-: ok i will recoed it
2016-10-29 02:50 -ClariS-: record
2016-10-29 02:51 Len: in dynamix
2016-10-29 02:51 Len: so many stacks 
2016-10-29 02:51 Len: 00:03:508 (2,3) - i really dont know why s/he did it 
2016-10-29 02:51 Len: 00:07:108 (3,6) - 
2016-10-29 02:51 Len: 00:08:480 (3) - 
2016-10-29 02:52 Len: it makes stop 
2016-10-29 02:52 Len: so it means break the flow
2016-10-29 02:52 Len: for 00:19:622 (3) - 
2016-10-29 02:52 Len: http://puu.sh/rYHnq/e397be67fc.jpg is better for playing
2016-10-29 02:52 Len: 00:19:794 (4) - 
2016-10-29 02:53 Len: it should be emphasized so 3notes or 1/2 slider and note will make awesome
2016-10-29 02:53 Len: 00:22:880 (4,3) - 
2016-10-29 02:53 Len: just do not stack 
2016-10-29 02:53 -ClariS-: uhh
2016-10-29 02:54 Len: 00:44:308 (3) - 
2016-10-29 02:54 Len: jump is too big 
2016-10-29 02:54 -ClariS-: maybe he like stack
2016-10-29 02:54 -ClariS-: i like stack too
2016-10-29 02:54 Len: 00:49:794 (3) - remove whistle on sliderslide
2016-10-29 02:55 Len: 00:55:965 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - 
2016-10-29 02:55 Len: why its easier than beginning ?
2016-10-29 02:55 Len: in kiai
2016-10-29 02:55 Len: really randomly distances 
2016-10-29 02:55 Len: 01:17:222 (1) - just no 
2016-10-29 02:56 Len: 01:20:651 (1,2) - why no stack on here cuz he did a lot before
2016-10-29 02:56 Len: 01:20:651 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - 
2016-10-29 02:56 Len: add newcombo
2016-10-29 02:57 Len: 01:26:137 (1) - i thought it has only 1 rev
2016-10-29 02:57 Len: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/808775 Engi no San Otome - Yuuki Rinrin(TV size) [Insane]]
2016-10-29 02:57 Len: ur diff
2016-10-29 02:57 Len: well 
2016-10-29 02:57 Len: copy and paste is gud for lazies
2016-10-29 02:58 Len: but for this song 
2016-10-29 02:58 Len: if i were you 
2016-10-29 02:58 -ClariS-: its on purpose
2016-10-29 02:58 Len: i did without ctrl cv
2016-10-29 02:58 Len: 00:41:565 (1,2,3,4) - it should be emphasized more than 00:40:880 (1,2,3,4) - 
2016-10-29 02:59 Len: 01:15:165 - why u added break on here
2016-10-29 03:00 Len: other diffs arent added on
2016-10-29 03:00 -ClariS-: you mean more spacing(sorry for my bad english
2016-10-29 03:00 -ClariS-: ?
2016-10-29 03:01 -ClariS-: Umm。。。i just can say i think this is feeling good
2016-10-29 03:02 Len: 00:36:251 (1,2,3) - same as above
2016-10-29 03:03 Len: what do you think about those notes for
2016-10-29 03:03 Len: if it feels good for u 
2016-10-29 03:03 Len: then
2016-10-29 03:03 Len: why
2016-10-29 03:03 Len: u
2016-10-29 03:03 Len: added jumps on 00:14:822 (1,2,3,4) -  this part
2016-10-29 03:03 Len: i think those are no need to emphasis 
2016-10-29 03:04 -ClariS-: ....yeah,you are right
2016-10-29 03:06 Len: i respect all what u did
2016-10-29 03:06 Len: so thats all i can say
2016-10-29 03:06 Len: hope koi will bub or someone comes for :3
2016-10-29 03:06 -ClariS-: w
2016-10-29 03:06 -ClariS-: yhx
2016-10-29 03:06 -ClariS-: thx
2016-10-29 03:07 -ClariS-: moe len=W=
2016-10-29 03:07 Len: kds pls
2016-10-29 03:07 -ClariS-: ok
Ozato Fumika
Beatmap Nominator
3,379 posts
Joined July 2013
Ozato Fumika
Dynamix's Hard is full of stack abuse

Insane is full of flow problems
Karen
2,860 posts
Joined August 2013
Karen
Insane
  1. 对称很不成熟，很多地方强行对称忽略了flow
  2. 00:11:394 (1,2,3,4) - 这flow不像是四个重音应该有的，应该是左左右右 或者 左右左右那种，像00:14:137 (1,2,3,4) - 这个看起来就好多了
  3. 00:12:594 (3,1,2,3) - flow辣鸡
  4. 00:13:451 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 串上加clap或者drum之类的
  5. 00:16:022 - 这种地方的clap呢
  6. 00:17:051 - ^ 后面不讲了
  7. 00:17:565 (1,2,3,4) - 你真喜欢这种东西，其实不好玩也不顺手
  8. 00:19:280 (1) - 为何nc
  9. 00:25:622 (3,1) - 既然这里都分开了为什么00:20:137 (3,1) - 这里还是贴着的
  10. 00:53:565 (2,3) - 这两个换个位置试试
  11. 01:01:794 - 这部分漏了很多clap
  12. 多在三连和串上加些音效
gl
这歌好听啊，为何我之前没发现，早知道蹭个gd
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