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Engi no San Otome - Yuuki Rinrin(TV size)

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Yorita Yoshino
370 posts
Joined April 2014
Topic Starter
Yorita Yoshino

Ultimate Madoka wrote:

[Insane]
00:04:708 (1) - 我不建议这里另起NC，会削弱对称的感觉。说实话从一开始我就准备这么NC，对称的感觉打完自然会看出来 而且这里取消NC后后面全乱了实在没主意改
00:10:194 (1) - 同，NC问题，后面不提了，建议注意一下。。^
00:11:908 (4) - 建议拆成2个note。。√
00:17:565 (1,2,3,4) - 菱形做好。。√
00:19:622 (3,4,5,6,1) - 这个ds是故意的吗？是的话感觉不好看。。感觉这么放挺有段落感的
00:47:222 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - 同这里是感觉音调上比较低所以缩小的
00:31:280 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 我的话会老老实实跟vocal，毕竟这还是首挺有意思的曲子，就点几个重音也许合理，但很无趣。会考虑跟vocalvocal和鼓不应，鼓又太明显，所以还是算了吧Orz
kiai段，节奏下的很合理，对称也没有排版问题，打起来也没问题，很顺。但总有种更高层次上的违和感，我水平没到家还说不出来，只是有这个感觉，无视就可以。我也感觉稍微有点奇怪，但是又不明白该怎么放，所以就放着了- -
初见的话各种老梗会让我有种熟悉的感觉，整个打一遍再细看之后就没了，除了那个尾杀 :D
但我个人很喜欢有人会愿意再用那些已经被大众抛弃的东西，就为了这个diff，来个星吧
我是14年才开始玩的- -，老梗什么的我不是很懂，这图只是根据自己的想法塞出来的罢了=。=
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[Crz]Makii
450 posts
Joined November 2014
[Crz]Makii
还债
[骏马]
  1. 很强
[Gyro]
  1. 看起来好挤啊...
  2. 00:18:594 (1) - 可以不NC
  3. 01:23:394 (1) - 用01:24:080 (2) - 的形状好一点
[巴达兽]
  1. 很强
[cq]
  1. 00:06:594 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - 你前奏这一段 全部放的是圈+折返 圈+折返 圈+折返 就这里不是，建议统一patterns或者把 00:12:080 (1,2,3,4) - 这里改成你放的圈--滑条--圈，显得有规律一些。
  2. 00:18:765 (5) - NC
  3. 00:24:422 (5) - ^
  4. 00:43:622 (5) - ^
  5. 00:47:737 (6) - ^
  6. 00:50:651 (4) - ^
  7. 00:51:851 (8) - ^
    好像还有好多，建议NC切的更细一些，一个大白线一次NC 你下NC有时候两个大白线1NC有时候1个...afraid，如果不想改就把那些1个大白线1NC的取消掉吧
  8. 00:55:965 (1,2) - overlap不好看
  9. 00:58:708 (1,2) - ^,都稍微拉出去点
  10. 01:17:222 (1) - 强烈不建议放一个折返，改成5个圈都比现在好，拉个五角星吧
  11. 01:27:337 (5) - 建议NC，突出这俩圈
[激光]
  1. 尼玛...真的感觉很像老图。许多东西都是横平竖直的，一些五角星也是，都是正五角星，连倾斜度都没...
  2. 00:02:994 (1) - 别NC啊，这里是3个叠，你nc了玩家一愣下面的就接不上了。要不然00:02:480 (1,2,1) - 全NC
  3. 00:04:194 (2,3) - 圈和尾巴有重叠，很不好看。这样的有好多，你把圈挪远一些
  4. 00:19:794 (4) - NC，是不一样的节奏，而且如果你想用anti-jump的话，00:19:622 (3) - 把这个拉远，很明显的00:19:794 (4,5,6) - 这三个音是一起的,采用整体的anti-jump，你现在这么放变成4个圈anti-jump，不合曲玩的也懵逼...
  5. 00:25:108 (5) - ^拉远
  6. 00:31:280 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,1,2,3) - ...太老图风格了，就那么几个地方对称，考虑丰富一下排列
  7. 01:25:965 (4) - 改成5连打吧，初见都看不出来这是4次折返，断的妥妥的
  8. 不是很喜欢这种风格，也不会摸qwq 大概写了一些
GL! :)
Yorita Yoshino
370 posts
Joined April 2014
Topic Starter
Yorita Yoshino

[Crz]Sword wrote:

还债
[激光]
  1. 尼玛...真的感觉很像老图。许多东西都是横平竖直的，一些五角星也是，都是正五角星，连倾斜度都没...
  2. 00:02:994 (1) - 别NC啊，这里是3个叠，你nc了玩家一愣下面的就接不上了。要不然00:02:480 (1,2,1) - 全NC√
  3. 00:04:194 (2,3) - 圈和尾巴有重叠，很不好看。这样的有好多，你把圈挪远一些拉不上去啦
  4. 00:19:794 (4) - NC，是不一样的节奏，而且如果你想用anti-jump的话，00:19:622 (3) - 把这个拉远，很明显的00:19:794 (4,5,6) - 这三个音是一起的,采用整体的anti-jump，你现在这么放变成4个圈anti-jump，不合曲玩的也懵逼...√
  5. 00:25:108 (5) - ^拉远√
  6. 00:31:280 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,1,2,3) - ...太老图风格了，就那么几个地方对称，考虑丰富一下排列就是要 对称
  7. 01:25:965 (4) - 改成5连打吧，初见都看不出来这是4次折返，断的妥妥的其实一开始我用的五连打，觉得有点太难才改的
  8. 不是很喜欢这种风格，也不会摸qwq 大概写了一些
GL! :)
感谢w
moonlightleaf
2,155 posts
Joined September 2011
moonlightleaf
恋姬无双辣么多萌bg不用, 怎么辣么懒, 差评

骏喵和怕她猛的直接pass,不要问我为什么

N H I 都过了一遍

I :

00:15:851 (4) - 感觉刻意,不如 (384,74) ?

00:51:851 (1) - 转盘不合适

最后转盘删了吧

怎么说呢 ,中规中矩 ,能rank ,不过I排版还能提升 ,嘛至少在我看来
Pata-Mon
1,489 posts
Joined March 2015
Pata-Mon
[主难度]
  1. 00:14:822 (1) - 00:15:165 (2) - 这两个滑条可以分别ctrl+G
  2. 00:51:851 (1) - 这个转盘真的很卧槽
  3. 01:01:108 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 01:02:480 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 我觉得这两组有些重几何形状而轻乐曲和图的关联。其实不只是这里，整张图多多少少都有一点这种感觉，这种几何跳驾驭不好其实挺容易忽略一些别的事情。
    这里摆三角的话我随便给一个参考，依据是每拍是轻还是重：
    SPOILER
    6和7反过来也一样
  4. 01:08:308 (2,3,4,5,6) - 也是类似，这里最无脑的摆法当然是五角星顺序跳，完全等距，但如果不想等距的话，你想一下应该是哪几个位置大跳，哪几个位置小跳？重音是246，所以是这样比较好：
    　　６
    　　　　２
    ４
    　　　　３
    　　５
    当然，旋转对称无所谓。01:11:051 (2,3,4,5,6) - 同样
  5. 01:19:280 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - 之前有人提过，这里flow是不舒服。不过这里倒算不上不合曲，所以随便
[Hard]
  1. Hard虽然不要求锁ds，但ds要有很强的逻辑才行（实际上i和ex多多少少也都有，只不过跟低难度不同）
    下列举一些不能接受的ds
  2. 00:02:479 (1,2) -
  3. 00:54:937 (2,3) -
  4. 00:56:651 (2) - 这个滑条头叠到00:55:622 (3) - 的尾巴上，然后包一下00:55:965 (1) - 的头，应该就是一个很完美的位置
  5. 00:59:394 (2) - ^
  6. 01:09:680 (1,2) -
  7. 01:26:994 (4,5,6) -
  8. 总之，1/1要明确地和1/2区分开。stack的话都可以，但别太过分弄得特难读就行
  9. nc建议全曲再检查一遍，我个人还是推荐无脑大白线加。你要是不愿意的话，至少有几组cb都上两位数了（或者是到8、9），太多了，最好稍微加一下
  10. 00:05:222 (1) - 这音效是不是加错了
  11. 00:24:765 (6) - 01:14:480 (7) - 01:26:137 (1) - （可能还有）5次折返打起来可能会有点奇怪
  12. 00:34:880 (2) - 你前面这样的地方全都空的，这里突然跟一下很奇怪
[Normal]
  1. 00:18:937 (2) - 全都大白线nc，只因为两个短滑条就加在前面了吗？我是不喜欢这样。后面还几个地方也是，要改就都改了
  2. 00:44:994 (5) - nc在这儿吧
  3. 转盘好多。其实相对来说，我觉得你现在放转盘的几个地方更适合空着（然后加少量object，跟鼓）倒是结尾01:26:480 - 开始可以放转盘，毕竟你现在这样对于normal玩家本身可能就不太好读
  4. 没啥硬伤，不过排列还是显得有点粗糙。嘛慢慢来吧，多看看图比如前面骏妈和后面我的难度
[骏妈]
00:41:222 (4) - 这里感觉节奏不太舒服，不建议这么跟
Yorita Yoshino
370 posts
Joined April 2014
Topic Starter
Yorita Yoshino

moonlightleaf wrote:

恋姬无双辣么多萌bg不用, 怎么辣么懒, 差评二妹妹老司机给我指条路猴不猴哇

骏喵和怕她猛的直接pass,不要问我为什么

N H I 都过了一遍

I :

00:15:851 (4) - 感觉刻意,不如 (384,74) ?可

00:51:851 (1) - 转盘不合适
最后转盘删了吧可

怎么说呢 ,中规中矩 ,能rank ,不过I排版还能提升 ,嘛至少在我看来
ORZ

Pata-Mon wrote:

[主难度]
  1. 00:14:822 (1) - 00:15:165 (2) - 这两个滑条可以分别ctrl+G可
  2. 00:51:851 (1) - 这个转盘真的很卧槽好了好了我知道了.jpg
  3. 01:01:108 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 01:02:480 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 我觉得这两组有些重几何形状而轻乐曲和图的关联。其实不只是这里，整张图多多少少都有一点这种感觉，这种几何跳驾驭不好其实挺容易忽略一些别的事情。
    这里摆三角的话我随便给一个参考，依据是每拍是轻还是重：
    SPOILER
    6和7反过来也一样馋鸡 阴 卖 尾
  4. 01:08:308 (2,3,4,5,6) - 也是类似，这里最无脑的摆法当然是五角星顺序跳，完全等距，但如果不想等距的话，你想一下应该是哪几个位置大跳，哪几个位置小跳？重音是246，所以是这样比较好：
    　　６
    　　　　２
    ４
    　　　　３
    　　５
    当然，旋转对称无所谓。01:11:051 (2,3,4,5,6) - 同样^
  5. 01:19:280 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - 之前有人提过，这里flow是不舒服。不过这里倒算不上不合曲，所以随便那就不管了(
IamKwaN
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Joined August 2012
IamKwaN
@pata: 那你起碼給個建議啊。。
Pata-Mon
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Joined March 2015
Pata-Mon
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IamKwaN
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IamKwaN
換成別的

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DJMax
112 posts
Joined March 2015
DJMax

[Crz]Sword wrote:

[cq]
  1. 00:06:594 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - 你前奏这一段 全部放的是圈+折返 圈+折返 圈+折返 就这里不是，建议统一patterns或者把 00:12:080 (1,2,3,4) - 这里改成你放的圈--滑条--圈，显得有规律一些。 改了
  2. 00:18:765 (5) - NC
  3. 00:24:422 (5) - ^
  4. 00:43:622 (5) - ^
  5. 00:47:737 (6) - ^
  6. 00:50:651 (4) - ^
  7. 00:51:851 (8) - ^
    好像还有好多，建议NC切的更细一些，一个大白线一次NC 你下NC有时候两个大白线1NC有时候1个...afraid，如果不想改就把那些1个大白线1NC的取消掉吧
  8. 00:55:965 (1,2) - overlap不好看 改了
  9. 00:58:708 (1,2) - ^,都稍微拉出去点 改了
  10. 01:17:222 (1) - 强烈不建议放一个折返，改成5个圈都比现在好，拉个五角星吧
  11. 01:27:337 (5) - 建议NC，突出这俩圈
改了

GL! :)
[Hard]
Hard虽然不要求锁ds，但ds要有很强的逻辑才行（实际上i和ex多多少少也都有，只不过跟低难度不同）
下列举一些不能接受的ds
00:02:479 (1,2) -改了
00:54:937 (2,3) -改了
00:56:651 (2) - 这个滑条头叠到00:55:622 (3) - 的尾巴上，然后包一下00:55:965 (1) - 的头，应该就是一个很完美的位置 改了
00:59:394 (2) - ^ 改了
01:09:680 (1,2) -
01:26:994 (4,5,6) -
总之，1/1要明确地和1/2区分开。stack的话都可以，但别太过分弄得特难读就行
nc建议全曲再检查一遍，我个人还是推荐无脑大白线加。你要是不愿意的话，至少有几组cb都上两位数了（或者是到8、9），太多了，最好稍微加一下 改了
00:05:222 (1) - 这音效是不是加错了 改了
00:24:765 (6) - 01:14:480 (7) - 01:26:137 (1) - （可能还有）5次折返打起来可能会有点奇怪
00:34:880 (2) - 你前面这样的地方全都空的，这里突然跟一下很奇怪 改了
Gyro Zeppeli
94 posts
Joined January 2014
Gyro Zeppeli
Kencho
[Gyro's Normal]
  1. 音效用S:C1組，然後你可以選擇複製一下最高難度的音效 OK
  2. AR+1，HP-1，這樣和前後難度的spread比較好 OK
  3. 01:06:937 (1,2,3,4) - 這幾個物件的DS突然變成1.1x了，估計是不小心調錯了 OK
  4. 01:23:051 (5) - 這滑條什麼鬼 这个怎么了？
  5. 01:25:794 (5) - DS 0.92x，誤差不要超過+-0.05 OK
  6. 01:26:480 (1) - DS 0.94x OK

亚特鲁

Gyro

  1. 这是用的默认音效吧。。建议用其他diff都用了的那组音效，以和谐滑条拉动时的滋滋声。设置在添加绿线的那个界面的左上角。 FIX
  2. 00:10:708 (3) - 尾巴上加个whistle FIX
  3. 01:07:622 (3,4,5) - 听起来不太对，滑条尾把一个小节最重的音压了。。建议把它提前。这是我的思路，可以参考下。（两张图）
    SPOILER


    挺好的，改了

洗啊贼大宝剑
  1. 看起来好挤啊... 。。。
  2. 00:18:594 (1) - 可以不NC FIX
  3. 01:23:394 (1) - 用01:24:080 (2) - 的形状好一点 用了其实反倒不太好看

Pata-Mon
  1. 00:18:937 (2) - 全都大白线nc，只因为两个短滑条就加在前面了吗？我是不喜欢这样。后面还几个地方也是，要改就都改了 ...这倒不是因为滑条的问题，而是在这几个地方我是两句话一个NC
  2. 00:44:994 (5) - nc在这儿吧 好
  3. 转盘好多。其实相对来说，我觉得你现在放转盘的几个地方更适合空着（然后加少量object，跟鼓）倒是结尾01:26:480 - 开始可以放转盘，毕竟你现在这样对于normal玩家本身可能就不太好读 开头转盘感觉不是很合适，Kiai第一个转盘可以改，第二三个那里不适合换掉转盘，最后塞个不够长其实有点坑。
  4. 没啥硬伤，不过排列还是显得有点粗糙。嘛慢慢来吧，多看看图比如前面骏妈和后面我的难度 做了一些改动
- Angelia
118 posts
Joined August 2013
- Angelia
先占个坑 :D
sahuang
2,293 posts
Joined December 2014
sahuang
Mark
800th post

Insane
00:09:680 (2,3) - 这边开始ds完全不对啊，和00:06:937 (2,3) - 比下，建议滑条G
00:11:394 (4) - NC
00:12:080 (8,1) - swap NC
00:19:622 (3,4,5,6,1) - 同学这太误导人了。。。下面一般人初见都以为1/4连打的吧？
00:20:994 (3) - 几把滑条
00:25:622 (3,4,1) - flow略直
这NC也是看不懂
01:10:365 (3,1) - DS崩溃
01:12:765 (6,1,2) - inconsistency
感觉还需要improvement

cq
00:02:479 (1,2) - 00:03:508 (3,4) - ds一样但是1/2和1/1..
01:03:851 (9) - 可NC

巴达兽
00:02:479 (1,2) - 00:03:509 (2,3) - 何不改成滑条。。开头那么多单点吃不消
00:20:308 (1) - 拉好一点啊
Pata-Mon
1,489 posts
Joined March 2015
Pata-Mon
@给皇
开头不改，该是啥就是啥
滑条fixed
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Yorita Yoshino
370 posts
Joined April 2014
Topic Starter
Yorita Yoshino

sahuang wrote:

Mark
800th post

Insane
00:09:680 (2,3) - 这边开始ds完全不对啊，和00:06:937 (2,3) - 比下，建议滑条G可
00:11:394 (4) - NCfix
00:12:080 (8,1) - swap NC这里NC想弄特殊点，和下面00:25:622 (3,4,1) 那个一样的
00:19:622 (3,4,5,6,1) - 同学这太误导人了。。。下面一般人初见都以为1/4连打的吧？真的不想改 :cry:
00:20:994 (3) - 几把滑条确实有点丑...
00:25:622 (3,4,1) - flow略直各种摆法都尝试过了....感觉这个最好了
这NC也是看不懂有点跟vocal的意味
01:10:365 (3,1) - DS崩溃感觉这个呆胶布啊....
01:12:765 (6,1,2) - inconsistency一开始我是前后对应的，然后有人说折返尾部放三连难打才改的，想了想还是改回来
感觉还需要improvement :(
顺便cq那个是我没更新上......已补
Kencho
952 posts
Joined August 2013
Kencho
As request to recheck.
  • Black is Personal comments.
    Bold Black is Highly recommended to fix.
    Red is Unrankable that you should fix.

[Gyro's Normal]
  1. Combo colors are not set. 複製一下別的難度的combo colors吧
  2. 00:20:994 (2) - DS問題，這裡變成1.09x了
  3. 00:56:994 (3) - 同樣DS問題，0.91x
  4. 01:23:394 (6) - 同樣DS問題，1.06x
  5. 01:04:194 (5,1) - 互換NC
  6. 01:15:165 (5) - NC

[Pata-Mon's Advanced]
  1. 01:08:994 (3) - 被我找到了，這裡DS變成1.16x了，唯一一個DS誤差

[Dynamix's hard]
  1. 00:08:651 (4,5) - 這個打起來比較別手，我建議你試試這樣放
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  2. 00:18:937 (6) - NC
  3. 00:24:422 (5) - ^
  4. 後面還有NC問題，我建議一條大白線NC一次，自己改吧
  5. 01:13:108 (3,4,5) - 之前有說過DS不明顯的問題，這個間距太不明顯了，我的建議是4放遠一點，然後456間距在縮小一點，像這樣
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[Insane]
  1. IRC mod
    Log
    2016-08-24 15:40 Kencho: 這難度名
    2016-08-24 15:40 Kencho: hard不是說了要用大寫嗎
    2016-08-24 15:40 -ClariS-: .
    2016-08-24 15:40 -ClariS-: 你都开始看了？
    2016-08-24 15:40 Kencho: 是啊
    2016-08-24 15:40 -ClariS-: 可，我去改
    2016-08-24 15:42 -ClariS-: 改丽
    2016-08-24 15:43 Kencho: 要在遊戲裡面改
    2016-08-24 15:43 Kencho: song setup
    2016-08-24 15:43 -ClariS-: 是在song setup改的啊...
    2016-08-24 15:44 Kencho: 這bg我還是有點畫質太差，等我找個高清點的
    2016-08-24 15:44 -ClariS-: 嗯
    2016-08-24 15:44 -ClariS-: 我没法翻墙
    2016-08-24 15:44 -ClariS-: 你QQ发我好了...
    2016-08-24 15:45 Kencho: 分辨率只有800x600也沒辦法
    2016-08-24 15:45 Kencho: 但我壓個最高清的吧
    2016-08-24 15:45 -ClariS-: 嗯
    2016-08-24 15:47 Kencho: 等等，我可以用waifu2x
    2016-08-24 15:48 -ClariS-: 。
    2016-08-24 15:48 -ClariS-: 昨天也听爱抚说这个
    2016-08-24 15:48 -ClariS-: 是什么啊，放大软件？
    2016-08-24 15:48 Kencho: 對
    2016-08-24 15:48 Kencho: 效果不錯
    2016-08-24 15:48 Kencho: 我發你
    2016-08-24 15:50 -ClariS-: 下次我也去下一个(
    2016-08-24 15:52 -ClariS-: 。你发过了吗
    2016-08-24 15:53 Kencho: 發了
    2016-08-24 15:57 -ClariS-: 你是写摸还是IRC
    2016-08-24 15:57 Kencho: irc吧
    2016-08-24 15:57 -ClariS-: en
    2016-08-24 16:05 Kencho: gd比較多
    2016-08-24 16:05 Kencho: 我看來還是要寫個摸
    2016-08-24 16:05 Kencho: 等我一下吧
    2016-08-24 16:05 -ClariS-: 嗯
Call me back when you are ready :)
IamKwaN
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Pata-Mon
1,489 posts
Joined March 2015
Pata-Mon
thanks
不过改了之后，因为一些麻烦的原因，前后几处依然各有一点误差，以此为代价让排列更好看

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[Metadata]
Title:Yuuki Rinrin(TV size)
TitleUnicode:勇気凛凛(TV size)
Artist:Engi no San Otome
ArtistUnicode:演義ノ三乙女
Creator:-ClariS-
Version:Pata-Mon's Advanced
Source:真・恋姫†無双 〜乙女大乱〜
Tags:Kurokawanami Maeda yukie Komeshima Nozomi IamKwaN Dynamix Pata-Mon Gyro Zeppeli
BeatmapID:1008910
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Kencho
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Kencho
忘了給星標
DJMax
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DJMax
all fixed
Gyro Zeppeli
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Gyro Zeppeli

Kencho wrote:

[Gyro's Normal]
  1. Combo colors are not set. 複製一下別的難度的combo colors吧
  2. 00:20:994 (2) - DS問題，這裡變成1.09x了
  3. 00:56:994 (3) - 同樣DS問題，0.91x
  4. 01:23:394 (6) - 同樣DS問題，1.06x
  5. 01:04:194 (5,1) - 互換NC
  6. 01:15:165 (5) - NC
ALL FIX~~
Kencho
952 posts
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Kencho
Talk with the creator to fix some NC problems and combo colurs.
Let's get it rank!
Bubbled!
Pata-Mon
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Pata-Mon
555555
Pata-Mon
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Pata-Mon
tags里加一下 ED 和 ending 吧
Yorita Yoshino
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Topic Starter
Yorita Yoshino

Pata-Mon wrote:

tags里加一下 ED 和 ending 吧
加了不会戳跑吗0 0 :o
Pata-Mon
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Pata-Mon

-ClariS- wrote:

Pata-Mon wrote:

tags里加一下 ED 和 ending 吧
加了不会戳跑吗0 0 :o
会 不过直接找恳求reb就可，又不耽误你找下一个bn
Yorita Yoshino
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Topic Starter
Yorita Yoshino

Pata-Mon wrote:

会 不过直接找恳求reb就可，又不耽误你找下一个bn
下个BN再fix咯，一块改 8-)
Pata-Mon
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等等……发现unrank问题……
因为有unrank所以顺便再多说点别的吧，毕竟改一次不可避

[Hard]
  1. 01:14:137 (6,7) - 折返箭头被挡！这个unrank
  2. 00:24:765 (2) - 对hard玩家来说这里的4次折返有点难读，之后flow也不算好打，容易断
  3. 00:47:222 (3,4,5) - 这里感觉音效小得太过分，对比前后的音量，几乎听不到
  4. 00:49:794 (3) - 建议稍微拆开一下，至少00:50:480 - 这个音clickable，因为是白线重音+下一句人声开头
  5. 00:52:708 - 00:53:051 - 这里并不适合完全空掉
  6. 01:27:337 (1,2) - 还是觉得跳太大，至少来说，01:27:337 (1) - 跟前面和跟后面的ds差别要明显，如果后面大，前面最好更大
Yorita Yoshino
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Topic Starter
Yorita Yoshino

Pata-Mon wrote:

等等……发现unrank问题……
因为有unrank所以顺便再多说点别的吧，毕竟改一次不可避

[Hard]
  1. 01:14:137 (6,7) - 折返箭头被挡！这个unrank
  2. 00:24:765 (2) - 对hard玩家来说这里的4次折返有点难读，之后flow也不算好打，容易断
  3. 00:47:222 (3,4,5) - 这里感觉音效小得太过分，对比前后的音量，几乎听不到
  4. 00:49:794 (3) - 建议稍微拆开一下，至少00:50:480 - 这个音clickable，因为是白线重音+下一句人声开头
  5. 00:52:708 - 00:53:051 - 这里并不适合完全空掉
  6. 01:27:337 (1,2) - 还是觉得跳太大，至少来说，01:27:337 (1) - 跟前面和跟后面的ds差别要明显，如果后面大，前面最好更大
帮cq改摸
unrank的fix了，其他的我是觉得没什么问题啦(
updated
Kencho
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Kencho
Rebubbled!
Koiyuki
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Koiyuki
咦 泡了
Koiyuki
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Koiyuki
Gyro's Normal
  1. 01:23:394 (1,2) - blanket？
Pata-Mon's Advanced
  1. 不想多挑，吐槽一句kiai节奏都没前面节奏密
Dynamix's Hard
  1. 00:02:994 (1,2,3,1) - 这tm在hard里面有点几把啊
  2. 01:02:822 (6,1) - swap nc
  3. 01:20:651 (1,2) - stack
  4. 01:22:022 (7) - nc

    你这读图难度叫insane完全没啥问题
Insane
  1. 00:02:994 (3) - 可以nc一哈
  2. 00:50:137 (4,1) - stack
  3. 01:14:137 (1) - remove nc
既然收到了req还是来看了看
看了前面的diff感觉还可以 然后看到insane 大失所望
这图我不想点 在我看来最高难度质量不行
对称建议多多学习一下384以及烤老板那张苍彼的op，甚至三妖的图也可以
建议改完上面的找kencho reb

Edit：那就补一下一些吐槽吧

Insane
00:04:022 (1,2,3) - 这种等间距120度的ds梗其实很卡手，但你却在开头地方大数量的使用；而且滑条尾的overlap真的很难看
00:06:594 (3,1,2,3) - 接上面一样，3123这个距离和flow其实是很不舒服的，而且3的stack滑条尾并不好，不如摆个跳
00:12:251 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 这里为什么又不搞对称梗了？
00:18:594 (6,1,2,3) - 这里摆的明显过挤，12滑条的弧度完全没必要这么大
00:19:794 (4) - antijump的开始最好nc，你后面00:25:280 (1) - 都nc了这里为什么不加呢
00:30:594 (8) - nc
00:36:251 (5) - ^
00:42:251 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 同质化滑条严重，且前四和后四的间距完全不同，就算把00:43:622 (1) - 往上移一点到1.5x或者1.6x的都会看上去打起来舒服很多
00:53:222 (1,2,3,4) - 这种07年老梗就不要拿出来了，不论游戏性和观赏性都不好
00:54:594 (1,2,3) - 整张图这种摆法太泛滥了
01:05:908 (2,3,4) - 不如ctrl+j

后半段kiai也是同质化严重

对称不是问题 摆的好的对称图也有很多
关键在于梗的运用和结构的构造
好的对称图看起来就舒服很多 没有过多的overlap 没有过于横平竖直的滑条 note之间的ds调整也合理 这样的对称打起来看起来都赏心悦目
Yorita Yoshino
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Koiyuki wrote:

Insane
  1. 00:02:994 (3) - 可以nc一哈fix
  2. 00:50:137 (4,1) - stackfix
  3. 01:14:137 (1) - remove ncfix
00:04:022 (1,2,3) - 这种等间距120度的ds梗其实很卡手，但你却在开头地方大数量的使用；而且滑条尾的overlap真的很难看故意摆难打的 overlap我真的不觉得难看， 个人审美问题
00:06:594 (3,1,2,3) - 接上面一样，3123这个距离和flow其实是很不舒服的，而且3的stack滑条尾并不好，不如摆个跳fix
00:12:251 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 这里为什么又不搞对称梗了？节奏问题，后面放串的话没法拉滑条，我又想放串
00:18:594 (6,1,2,3) - 这里摆的明显过挤，12滑条的弧度完全没必要这么大fix
00:19:794 (4) - antijump的开始最好nc，你后面00:25:280 (1) - 都nc了这里为什么不加呢fix
00:30:594 (8) - ncfix
00:36:251 (5) - ^fix
00:42:251 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 同质化滑条严重，且前四和后四的间距完全不同，就算把00:43:622 (1) - 往上移一点到1.5x或者1.6x的都会看上去打起来舒服很多所以说啥叫同质化啊.....间距是拉大了
00:53:222 (1,2,3,4) - 这种07年老梗就不要拿出来了，不论游戏性和观赏性都不好不是很懂...
00:54:594 (1,2,3) - 整张图这种摆法太泛滥了改了几处，不过我听歌就是觉得该放这种滑条 :idea:
01:05:908 (2,3,4) - 不如ctrl+jfix

后半段kiai也是同质化严重

对称不是问题 摆的好的对称图也有很多
关键在于梗的运用和结构的构造
好的对称图看起来就舒服很多 没有过多的overlap 没有过于横平竖直的滑条 note之间的ds调整也合理 这样的对称打起来看起来都赏心悦目
我还是修行不够啊...
忙于面对大学新事物，没来得及及时回摸，抱歉
我会去找别人的，总之谢谢摸图 :)
Yorita Yoshino
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Topic Starter
Yorita Yoshino
应GDer要求帮忙改摸
Normal all fix
Hard all fix
updated
Xinely
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Xinely
你好,从queue来

General :
- use custom combo colors?
- also no need anime in tags, it will be setted in genre once get qualify

Easy :
- i think your volume setting is a bit low, i have a bit problem to hear 00:03:851 -'s finish and claps start from 00:04:194 - , i think by increasing 10% for all greenline will solve it
- 00:11:394 (4) - imo this slider is too curvy if comparing with 00:12:422 (1) - 's shape, mind to smoother it a bit?
- 01:19:280 (2) - i guess nc for this?
- kwan lazy copy paste mapper :^)

Normal :
- 00:03:851 - finish? it has cymbal
- 00:09:337 - ^
- 00:12:080 (1) - missing whistle on head?
- 00:14:822 (1) - finish, its clearly have cymbal sound
- 00:16:880 (6) - why not use 2 sliders of 1/2 slider? for consistency with 00:18:594 (4,5) -
- 00:22:365 (5) - similar with above
- 00:24:080 (1) - remove nc for consistency
- 00:25:794 (1) - 428,268? previous slider's repeat is almost covered 1/2 head of this slider, it looks ugly
- 00:32:137 - 00:32:480 - are strong cymbal sounds, that should not be skipped
- 00:37:622 - 00:37:965 - ^
- 00:40:880 (4,5) - broken flow? its suddenly changed with obvious reason why, for me you better to keep circular flow on this part http://puu.sh/rREp5/691cb520ce.jpg
- 00:42:251 - 00:55:965 - 01:06:937 - 01:20:651 - finish
- 01:00:765 (6) - try rotate it 20 degree and put at 92,236 for better flow ayy
- 01:11:737 (6) - literally same as above. rotate 18 degree and put at 480,136
- 01:28:194 - unused greenline

Advanced :
- 00:09:337 (1) - finish
- 00:10:880 (2) - comparing with 00:10:194 (4) - 's slider's flow it feels kinda ruin your flow here, i would say move 00:10:880 (2) - 's tail to 120,304
- 00:14:822 - finish
- 00:20:308 - ^
- 00:46:194 (2,1) - better swap the nc because your rhythm pattern to increase readability
- 01:27:337 (4) - i think use 2 circles is better for this music because both music are cymbal here

Hard :
- 00:03:508 (2,3) - inconsistent spacing when both sounds are clearly same strong

good luck ~
Gyro Zeppeli
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Gyro Zeppeli
改一波
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IamKwaN
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IamKwaN
all fixed, thanks elybaby
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Gyro Zeppeli
94 posts
Joined January 2014
Gyro Zeppeli

Xinely wrote:

你好,从queue来

Normal :
- 00:03:851 - finish? it has cymbal
- 00:09:337 - ^
FIX
- 00:12:080 (1) - missing whistle on head?
yes i missed
- 00:14:822 (1) - finish, its clearly have cymbal sound
OK
- 00:16:880 (6) - why not use 2 sliders of 1/2 slider? for consistency with 00:18:594 (4,5) -
- 00:22:365 (5) - similar with above
- 00:24:080 (1) - remove nc for consistency
FIX
- 00:25:794 (1) - 428,268? previous slider's repeat is almost covered 1/2 head of this slider, it looks ugly
ur too fix
- 00:32:137 - 00:32:480 - are strong cymbal sounds, that should not be skipped
- 00:37:622 - 00:37:965 - ^
- 00:40:880 (4,5) - broken flow? its suddenly changed with obvious reason why, for me you better to keep circular flow on this part http://puu.sh/rREp5/691cb520ce.jpg
FIX
- 00:42:251 - 00:55:965 - 01:06:937 - 01:20:651 - finish
FIX
- 01:00:765 (6) - try rotate it 20 degree and put at 92,236 for better flow ayy
- 01:11:737 (6) - literally same as above. rotate 18 degree and put at 480,136
ur not good,i fixed another better
- 01:28:194 - unused greenline
FIX
Len
2,812 posts
Joined June 2012
Len 
2016-10-29 02:43 Len: ㅇ
2016-10-29 02:43 -ClariS-: 0
2016-10-29 02:43 -ClariS-: do not sleep?
2016-10-29 02:43 Len: throw me which do you want to mod from me
2016-10-29 02:44 Len: do you want to get*
2016-10-29 02:44 -ClariS-: OK
2016-10-29 02:44 Len: right now
2016-10-29 02:44 -ClariS-: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/808775 Engi no San Otome - Yuuki Rinrin(TV size)]
2016-10-29 02:44 -ClariS-: this
2016-10-29 02:44 -ClariS-: www
2016-10-29 02:46 Len: self popped?
2016-10-29 02:46 -ClariS-: there have a koiyuki's mod
2016-10-29 02:46 Len: ok then cant
2016-10-29 02:46 Len: bye
2016-10-29 02:47 -ClariS-: i changed something and its poped
2016-10-29 02:47 -ClariS-: .
2016-10-29 02:47 Len: kencho and koiyuki already did it so
2016-10-29 02:47 -ClariS-: no
2016-10-29 02:47 Len: see you next time
2016-10-29 02:47 -ClariS-: koiyuki said he will not bubble this map= =
2016-10-29 02:48 -ClariS-: .
2016-10-29 02:49 Len: i wanted mod before i go sleep
2016-10-29 02:49 Len: but
2016-10-29 02:49 Len: advanced is a bit mess since it uses ar6.5
2016-10-29 02:50 Len: 01:10:365 (2,3,1,2,3) - etc
2016-10-29 02:50 Len: 01:12:422 (1,2,3,4,5) - 
2016-10-29 02:50 -ClariS-: ok i will recoed it
2016-10-29 02:50 -ClariS-: record
2016-10-29 02:51 Len: in dynamix
2016-10-29 02:51 Len: so many stacks 
2016-10-29 02:51 Len: 00:03:508 (2,3) - i really dont know why s/he did it 
2016-10-29 02:51 Len: 00:07:108 (3,6) - 
2016-10-29 02:51 Len: 00:08:480 (3) - 
2016-10-29 02:52 Len: it makes stop 
2016-10-29 02:52 Len: so it means break the flow
2016-10-29 02:52 Len: for 00:19:622 (3) - 
2016-10-29 02:52 Len: http://puu.sh/rYHnq/e397be67fc.jpg is better for playing
2016-10-29 02:52 Len: 00:19:794 (4) - 
2016-10-29 02:53 Len: it should be emphasized so 3notes or 1/2 slider and note will make awesome
2016-10-29 02:53 Len: 00:22:880 (4,3) - 
2016-10-29 02:53 Len: just do not stack 
2016-10-29 02:53 -ClariS-: uhh
2016-10-29 02:54 Len: 00:44:308 (3) - 
2016-10-29 02:54 Len: jump is too big 
2016-10-29 02:54 -ClariS-: maybe he like stack
2016-10-29 02:54 -ClariS-: i like stack too
2016-10-29 02:54 Len: 00:49:794 (3) - remove whistle on sliderslide
2016-10-29 02:55 Len: 00:55:965 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - 
2016-10-29 02:55 Len: why its easier than beginning ?
2016-10-29 02:55 Len: in kiai
2016-10-29 02:55 Len: really randomly distances 
2016-10-29 02:55 Len: 01:17:222 (1) - just no 
2016-10-29 02:56 Len: 01:20:651 (1,2) - why no stack on here cuz he did a lot before
2016-10-29 02:56 Len: 01:20:651 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - 
2016-10-29 02:56 Len: add newcombo
2016-10-29 02:57 Len: 01:26:137 (1) - i thought it has only 1 rev
2016-10-29 02:57 Len: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/808775 Engi no San Otome - Yuuki Rinrin(TV size) [Insane]]
2016-10-29 02:57 Len: ur diff
2016-10-29 02:57 Len: well 
2016-10-29 02:57 Len: copy and paste is gud for lazies
2016-10-29 02:58 Len: but for this song 
2016-10-29 02:58 Len: if i were you 
2016-10-29 02:58 -ClariS-: its on purpose
2016-10-29 02:58 Len: i did without ctrl cv
2016-10-29 02:58 Len: 00:41:565 (1,2,3,4) - it should be emphasized more than 00:40:880 (1,2,3,4) - 
2016-10-29 02:59 Len: 01:15:165 - why u added break on here
2016-10-29 03:00 Len: other diffs arent added on
2016-10-29 03:00 -ClariS-: you mean more spacing(sorry for my bad english
2016-10-29 03:00 -ClariS-: ?
2016-10-29 03:01 -ClariS-: Umm。。。i just can say i think this is feeling good
2016-10-29 03:02 Len: 00:36:251 (1,2,3) - same as above
2016-10-29 03:03 Len: what do you think about those notes for
2016-10-29 03:03 Len: if it feels good for u 
2016-10-29 03:03 Len: then
2016-10-29 03:03 Len: why
2016-10-29 03:03 Len: u
2016-10-29 03:03 Len: added jumps on 00:14:822 (1,2,3,4) -  this part
2016-10-29 03:03 Len: i think those are no need to emphasis 
2016-10-29 03:04 -ClariS-: ....yeah,you are right
2016-10-29 03:06 Len: i respect all what u did
2016-10-29 03:06 Len: so thats all i can say
2016-10-29 03:06 Len: hope koi will bub or someone comes for :3
2016-10-29 03:06 -ClariS-: w
2016-10-29 03:06 -ClariS-: yhx
2016-10-29 03:06 -ClariS-: thx
2016-10-29 03:07 -ClariS-: moe len=W=
2016-10-29 03:07 Len: kds pls
2016-10-29 03:07 -ClariS-: ok
Ozato Fumika
Beatmap Nominator
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Joined July 2013
Ozato Fumika
Dynamix's Hard is full of stack abuse

Insane is full of flow problems
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