EvoLvE CyBerNaTiON-
00:01:573- I think the song only starts here, maybe can start your slider there and extend to 00:03:107
- This song starts at there, and if I start from there, this map can't approve due to drain time matter.00:25:758 (2) - maybe stack on 00:25:527 (1) -
- NOpe00:25:989 (3,4,1) - I would move this whole thing downwards by a lot because music changes
- ah....I don't like that00:41:220 (1) - would curve
- I don't feel....00:41:912 (3) - would move sliderhead to somewhere around x:8 y:288 and 00:41:681 (2) - to the right
- move (2) instead.00:41:912 (3,4,5,6,7) - this is actually really hard to sightread
- More opinion.00:43:066 (1) - I know you have a pattern..but I feel like it's better to end slider here 00:43:758
- Fixed. and that slider isnt' mine (someone made for me XD)00:48:333 (8) - maybe stack with 00:47:641 (5) -
- prefer triangle pattern00:52:025 (5) - maybe stack with 00:51:795 (4) - but move next pattern 00:52:256 (1,2,3,4) - further
- I don't like that00:57:102 (4,5,6) - ctrl+g seems good
- Changed pattern00:59:179 (5,6,1) - -
http://puu.sh/mmB7o/197f3b47f0.jpg seems good
- I like now01:01:487 (1) - ctrl+g
- ^01:14:410 - sure you don't want short break time?
- Since drain time matter, I don't put the breaktime here01:23:239 (3) - maybe x:152 y:128? so that it's between 01:22:913 (1,2) -
- not bad. Fixed01:34:978 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 01:36:282 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - nice, like
- Thanks!01:41:744 (3,4) - maybe make it have bigger spacing, this one 01:44:108 (2,3,4) - seems good
- In that part song is not strong enough, but 01:44:108 (2,3,4) - here is quite big, so keep now01:56:499 (6) - maybe you can consider changing some of these to 1/4 sliders too so you can pattern with the one before 01:56:336 (5) -
- that 1/4 sliders feel me weird...02:02:532 (5,6,1) - for triplets similar such as 02:10:358 (5,6,1) - would prefer either more spacing or just stack
- I make triple pattern like stack->unstack->stack and that unstacks have different with stack triple.02:14:434 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - nice
- XD02:17:695 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - nice.
- XD02:19:488 (2) - maybe move down so that it doesn't touch 02:18:999 (1) -
- I don't care that touch, and I like overlap with 02:19:977 (4) - 02:19:977 (4) - maybe make this 3/4 with one circle near slidertail
- more opinion02:26:010 (2) - prefer 3 circles
- no02:27:314- note
- I can't find big enough sound...02:35:630 (7,8,1) - space 8 and 1 the same like 7 and 8 maybe
- Circles on that pattern is hexagon pattern03:04:325 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - very nice.
- XDXD03:06:445 (3) - hmm maybe ctrl+g and curve and move slightly further away
- I want to put jump there03:09:053 (3) - normal curve/straight line? I prefer straight line
- uh....No03:16:227 (3,4) - maybe can select both and move to x:192 y:256
- I prefer now03:22:912 (1) - would change to normal slight curve
- I like that03:29:434 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - the only stream I couldn't FC in the map, maybe my bad reading/aim
- idk it's bad for reading or aim....03:30:738 (1) - maybe change to 2 1/4 sliders
- That part has no piano sound on 1/4 timing03:32:369 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - very nice, like
- Thanks!!03:37:260 (1,2,3) - a little hard to read
- I don't think so...03:42:477 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - oh I forgot, I couldn't do this too. maaybe remove the jump
- jumps between NCs? Okay, fixed03:43:782 (1) - quite easy to sliderbreak on.
- ^04:01:227 (4,5,1,2) - hmm..I tried making this 04:01:064 (3,4,5,1,2) - a triangle (moving 2 to around x:360 y:240), then ctrl+g-ing 04:01:716 (3,4) - and moving 3 closer
- I don't aim to triangle, and this also good imo04:24:868 (1) - sure you don't wanna place this riiiight at the centre?
- I don't care 04:27:640 (2) - would stack with 04:27:477 (1) -
- I want jump on that part04:30:737 (1) - wtf there is still song
- yep lol #