Definitely fitting to see you map this song, Well done have a star <3
Anxient wrote:if this gets ranked I'm gonna Ascend to Heaven
No fun allowed squad!
This is a map!
m4mnormal mod idc
I hate to be REAL picky but that diff name sounds kinda... uninspiring, if you know what I mean. "moment" is pretty dull. Go for something more big, Last Instance or smth. rip
00:05:825 - Very, very clickable. Please end that spinner earlier, and add a hittable beat here. Added for slider to note consistency throughout this section.
00:24:350 (3) - No sound here, can you remove this and start the stream at 00:24:425 - ? It also makes sense because #bigwhiteticks# There's actually a very very faint noise here. I don't like the idea of starting the stream with slider but if it gets brought up again, then maybe I will.
00:33:425 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - If you are gonna NC in sets of four and have a little bit of angle change between them, please do the same for 00:34:250 (4,5) - this bit here for consistency, a NC and a slight edginess to hit it. Not set of 4 but following different noises.
(00:34:625 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I spotted the copypaste) oh, interesting, it is lmao. wasn't intended but oh wells
00:52:625 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1) - I like that the first half is higher in spacing than the last streams, but I think the last half should be slightly lower. You use 0.8 for the regular streams, so you can start this spacing increase with 1x DS, and the second half with 0.9. That way there is some indication of that lowering intensity. can't because design
00:56:825 (4,5,6) - I'd make this spacing more even, the jump to 6 is realllllly small, and the jump to 5 is hella big, esp with the angle made. remapped this section
01:05:825 (1,2,3,4,5) - Fix the line here, the slider start is not on a straight line! oh woops. fixed
01:21:725 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This should start high spacing, and get lower, how about instead of 1.1 -> 1.2 -> 1.3, you flip it around? I imagined it the opposite really. Sort of a like a last burst of streams before you settle down into the calm part of the song. Yours makes sense too though.
02:32:225 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - Would be much preferred if the stack was of length 5, so you start moving on the strong beat wait, stack of 5 would mean that the 6th beat would be the strong beat but here I follow the strong piano that starts on the 5th note so I stacked 4 instead.. ;; now that I'm looking at this some more, I'm not sure what I should do. I might change the stream layout instead.
Since this is gonna be hard streams after here, I left out pitch-relevancy because it would be too hectic and confusing.
02:53:825 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Definately, by far the sharpest stream angle like... everrrrrr. This is a difficulty spike and a half to play right. I'd really try making the angle not so backing on itself. will look more into this, this doesn't pose a problem to the people I've given this map to play. I agree it's very sharp however, though, the overlapping makes it so you have enough time to catch yourself.
03:21:425 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1) - No mean to be a party pooper, but this stream is wayyyyyy too much of a fast diffspike. I'd like it if the previous section was a bit harder so it wasn't so diffspiking (hint hint) but as of now it literally goes to near double DS at the end. That's DQ bait . I mean like, this map is hella deathstream already, this wouldn't be DQ bait at all. The notes are place to follow the music's intensity. That's all it is, just following the music.
04:01:025 - This whole kiai has a higher pitch than the last kiai but the spacing is basically the same. (remap) can you use like, 1.1 DS? (yes thats fully spaced but it makes sense and is justified to use) Okay, so I actually tried to do this entire kiai at 1.1 DS because I agree it's justifiable, but after a while, it gets ridiculously hard to utilize the editor for the type of streams I'm making because the extra DS ruins a lot of my curves and in summary, it looks terrible. I may try again, but I doubt I'll ever fix this kiai to accommodate the extra DS. I used 1.05 DS because it adds space (barely) but at least I'm able to make some streamy streams without rolling my face around the editor like it was with 1.1.
04:28:625 (1,2,3,4) - Are you sure about this? I'm actually not, so I fixed it. Others pointed it out as well.
04:38:450 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1) - Ya same thing as before, but I feel this is better, due to it already starting pretty hard. I changed the ending a bit to make this feel more welcoming. This kiai should end more intensely than the last.
I r8 out of 8...
6/8! (7.5/10) for nice looking streams, some cool gameplay with sliders, and general niceness overall. Cool.
pishifat wrote:if you're gonna use pitched hitsounds, you'll need them to have some sort of feedback besides the exact pitches (like combining the piano sounds with the default soft hitnormal or something)
believe it or not, hitsounds that copy the songs exact pitches blend in with the song
especially when they're at 20% volume like 01:55:942 (2) - please sorta kinda editing them atm
00:25:867 (6) - 00:35:467 (6) - 00:30:667 (6) - by using spaced 1/4 everywhere around this it's a pain to tell that object after a 1/4 slider is 1/2 away (especially since people play 1/4 sliders more often than not as if they're circles). a differnet rhythm > idk man theyre hittable
00:28:642 (1,2) - hello 1/2 spacing that looks like it should be 1/4 based on everything prior fixed to circle
00:29:092 (3) - 03:53:692 (5) - 03:58:342 (6) - p sure this is 1/8 dood. i probably missed more like this but yea that bzzz sound isn't 1/6. 00:42:592 (8) - is right probably
00:32:092 (8) - 00:27:292 (8) - whats with the different snappings on same sounds the little electronic noise comes in at the 2nd snapping and the piano at the 3rd. just buildup really.
00:42:592 (8,9) - starting a stream on a blue tick and ending the repeat slider on the emphasized sound you're basically a murderer now have fun in jail damn u xi
03:52:642 (1,2) - sameasthe first thingzzzz fixed
everything else is constant streams
what do i even do here
mostly stuff in the beginning I see but idk, rhythm is hard, feel like you have to undermap in order to play it well otherwise its shit