[ExUsagi's Hurricane]
the main point is :
THE LN IS GOOD!! BUT it could be TWICE better if the normal note is not random placing
or you should prioritize the normal notes to be EASIER in playability "WHILE"
LN section COULD follow pitch, sometimes it could follow pattern base only" I hope you got what i mean >w< , here goes nothin :
00:27:815 -
this way, its EASIER in playability, and also it has a good pattern. // won't change this, i can't find any better pattern yet.. plus its meant to be hard
00:30:800 (30800|0) - this could be on 6th column
00:34:412 (34412|6) - 5 // keep this one, 00:34:569 (34569|4,34569|6) - for challenge
00:45:486 (45486|0,45564|3,45564|1,45721|2) - 2 , 1&3 , 2
01:05:512 (65512|0,65590|6) - 6 2
01:05:983 (65983|2,66140|3) - 5 3 // keep
01:39:595 (99595|2,99595|0) - 2 6 // keep, rip legibility
01:44:308 (104308|3) - 3 // keep, i liek symmetrical pattern for this phase c:
01:47:763 (107763|0,107842|6) - 7 6 // whoops also rearranged the LN part.. c:
01:54:438 (114438|0) - 3
01:55:145 (115145|1,115224|3,115302|1) - 5 2 4 // keep
01:57:580 (117580|5,117737|3) - PUCK this note, T^T make this section around 01:57:501 - like :
is twice easier to execute properly // its hand balance already & easy to judge, im right handed so ye xD
02:04:883 (124883|5,124962|4,125040|3) - PLEASE XD , 6 5 4 , twice easier! // FOR SAKE OF SHIELD PATTERN AAA // keep
02:17:135 (137135|4,137135|6,137213|5,137292|6,137292|4) - this bracket is really something, please do something about it... // something easy? i will keep this for challenge..
02:19:020 (139020|2,139020|0,139177|5,139177|6) - tbh, this make things harder here...
left hand, 1 hold 1 short hold 1 single note,
right hand, "2" hold 1 short hold 1 single note and mindblown XD // rearranged, still keep the hardness :T
02:20:119 (140119|5,140276|5) - 7 7 /
00:54:674 - this is where you choke a bit, its not easy at all, the double staccato
i prefer it like this :
// i refers original bms pattern, keep
00:57:815 - this layering is much much perfect in both pattern and playability :
look at the hand balance // not much rearranged for last 4 beat.. ok
01:43:051 (103051|6) - suggest : to remove this and 01:43:130 (103130|5,103208|4,103287|3,103365|2) - 7 6 5 4 , this double stream is easier, even you combine with short LN, its EASIER // this part is meant to be harder & climax, because i ocassionaly use polyrhtyhm in both piano and percussion..
01:48:156 (108156|6) - you can make this LN, thou this section is GOOD just a bit harder here because of this double 01:48:156 (108156|4) - is on right hand while left hand should try to maintain the holds, but it still good and perfect looking LN layering
// rearranged already
01:58:287 - forget about some of double hold, instead, try this
// meant to be hard before next stanza..
02:08:810 - nicely arranged // ayy
02:28:915 - yeah, this spacing of double stream is better, nice layering here.
00:47:763 - this might destroy your stair layering, but this is easier imo // ;w; i want to keep because i always get good acc here
02:06:925 (126925|4,126925|6,127082|4,127082|6) - this two is same, but ... 02:07:239 (127239|4,127239|6) - this is not, and the bracket here make it harder too XD // done
ehm do something?