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Topic Starter
For all of the sliders in the beginning, starting with 00:07:353 (2) - , there song has a little 4 note burst, and the slider only goes twice. Not that it needs to totally follow the song, but maybe try doubling the slider a few times, and maybe switching it to 4 regular notes so the sliders don't get too repetitive.
For a positive I really love 00:57:126 (3) - . Its a totally fitting way to start the chorus.
The only other thing that stood out to me was that I feel 01:07:742 (5) - 01:07:937 (6) - and 01:08:132 (7) - should be space a tad bit further apart. Again at 02:10:080 (6) - .
And obviously finish the map. That piano part has a lot of potential. Also I love the BG. Fits the song.
8/10
For a positive I really love 00:57:126 (3) - . Its a totally fitting way to start the chorus.
The only other thing that stood out to me was that I feel 01:07:742 (5) - 01:07:937 (6) - and 01:08:132 (7) - should be space a tad bit further apart. Again at 02:10:080 (6) - .
And obviously finish the map. That piano part has a lot of potential. Also I love the BG. Fits the song.
8/10
Topic Starter
thanks for the mod ~OhItsAPumbloom wrote:
For all of the sliders in the beginning, starting with 00:07:353 (2) - , there song has a little 4 note burst, and the slider only goes twice. Not that it needs to totally follow the song, but maybe try doubling the slider a few times, and maybe switching it to 4 regular notes so the sliders don't get too repetitive. i asked a friend if it was repetitive but they said it was fine so ill just leave it for now but im most likely going to change it later \O/
For a positive I really love 00:57:126 (3) - . Its a totally fitting way to start the chorus. thank you >w<
The only other thing that stood out to me was that I feel 01:07:742 (5) - 01:07:937 (6) - and 01:08:132 (7) - should be space a tad bit further apart. Again at 02:10:080 (6) - . fixed ~
And obviously finish the map. That piano part has a lot of potential. Also I love the BG. Fits the song.
8/10
General
Aaaa, are you sure you don't want to map the rest? It seems like a weird place to end the map!! ;A; BUT GOOD JOB OTHERWISE! <3
Easy
Use distance snap! This is an Easy diff, so it's important that your hitobjects flow at a steady pace for new players!!
00:00:778 (1,2) - Fix blanket!
00:03:894 (1,2) - ^
00:19:479 (1,2) - ^ (It's just a tiiiny bit off)
00:36:622 (2,3) - Avoid overlaps in Easy diff!
00:53:765 (5,6) - Fix blanket!
01:03:115 (1,2) - ^
01:09:349 (1,2) - ^
00:00:778 (1,2) - Fix blanket!
00:03:894 (1,2) - ^
00:19:479 (1,2) - ^ (It's just a tiiiny bit off)
00:36:622 (2,3) - Avoid overlaps in Easy diff!
00:53:765 (5,6) - Fix blanket!
01:03:115 (1,2) - ^
01:09:349 (1,2) - ^
Sakura
00:00:778 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I would really suggest using distance snap here! Makes it a little nicer to read, and you wouldn't have to change the placement of the hitobjects much.
00:12:466 (9) - Generally you'd want to avoid sliders that repeat more than once if they're this length. Try this:
00:45:193 (2) - Make this like 00:44:414 (1) - ! It'll look better!
00:53:570 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - The music at this part seems to emphasize individual notes. I'd suggest remapping this section to better accent the music. (And also, I would add a new combo on the big white tick instead of on the hitcircle before it.)
00:56:492 (1) - The chorus doesn't really pack much of a punch because your slider ends on the big white tick! I'd remove this and remap this part so that you have a hitobject that starts on the big white tick. Try either of these:
00:58:050 (4,5,6) - Blanket is a little off!
00:58:829 (7,8) - That being said, if you blanket this around 00:58:440 (5,6) - , it would probably look nice. ;D Then you could blanket 00:59:414 (9,1) - around that!
01:03:115 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This is overmapping! D: This song in general isn't really a streamy song. There's nothing in the music during this part that should be mapped with a stream... :< Same goes for 01:09:349 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 01:15:583 (1,2,3,4) - 02:02:336 (2,3,4,5) - 02:05:453 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 02:11:687 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 02:14:803 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
01:10:128 (10,11) - Fix blanket... Or, if this wasn't meant to be a blanket, it would look nicer if you did make it a blanket!
01:12:076 (7,8) - I would suggest changing this so you have a hitobject starting on the big white tick!
01:12:661 (8,9) - Fix blanket (that is, if you're not remapping this part).
01:20:842 (4,1) - I think the spinner works better if it started where your kiai ends. So change the slider to a hitcircle and move the spinner to the white tick!(But the spinner should still end on the big white tick too, so it should be a little longer than you have it here!)
01:44:609 (4,5,1) - Fix blanket.
01:47:531 (2) - Would look better if you used the same slider as 01:46:752 (1) - !
01:58:829 (1,2,3) - Same deal as the previous chorus.
02:23:375 (9,1) - Move slider to the white tick (and make sure it still ends where it does now).
00:12:466 (9) - Generally you'd want to avoid sliders that repeat more than once if they're this length. Try this:
00:45:193 (2) - Make this like 00:44:414 (1) - ! It'll look better!
00:53:570 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - The music at this part seems to emphasize individual notes. I'd suggest remapping this section to better accent the music. (And also, I would add a new combo on the big white tick instead of on the hitcircle before it.)
00:56:492 (1) - The chorus doesn't really pack much of a punch because your slider ends on the big white tick! I'd remove this and remap this part so that you have a hitobject that starts on the big white tick. Try either of these:
00:58:050 (4,5,6) - Blanket is a little off!
00:58:829 (7,8) - That being said, if you blanket this around 00:58:440 (5,6) - , it would probably look nice. ;D Then you could blanket 00:59:414 (9,1) - around that!
01:03:115 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This is overmapping! D: This song in general isn't really a streamy song. There's nothing in the music during this part that should be mapped with a stream... :< Same goes for 01:09:349 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 01:15:583 (1,2,3,4) - 02:02:336 (2,3,4,5) - 02:05:453 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 02:11:687 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 02:14:803 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
01:10:128 (10,11) - Fix blanket... Or, if this wasn't meant to be a blanket, it would look nicer if you did make it a blanket!
01:12:076 (7,8) - I would suggest changing this so you have a hitobject starting on the big white tick!
01:12:661 (8,9) - Fix blanket (that is, if you're not remapping this part).
01:20:842 (4,1) - I think the spinner works better if it started where your kiai ends. So change the slider to a hitcircle and move the spinner to the white tick!(But the spinner should still end on the big white tick too, so it should be a little longer than you have it here!)
01:44:609 (4,5,1) - Fix blanket.
01:47:531 (2) - Would look better if you used the same slider as 01:46:752 (1) - !
01:58:829 (1,2,3) - Same deal as the previous chorus.
02:23:375 (9,1) - Move slider to the white tick (and make sure it still ends where it does now).
Topic Starter
phew, that was a lot xDKaivu wrote:
GeneralAaaa, are you sure you don't want to map the rest? It seems like a weird place to end the map!! ;A; BUT GOOD JOB OTHERWISE! <3EasyUse distance snap! This is an Easy diff, so it's important that your hitobjects flow at a steady pace for new players!! went over w distance snap on >W<
00:00:778 (1,2) - Fix blanket! fixed ~
00:03:894 (1,2) - ^ ^
00:19:479 (1,2) - ^ (It's just a tiiiny bit off) ^
00:36:622 (2,3) - Avoid overlaps in Easy diff! ^
00:53:765 (5,6) - Fix blanket! ^
01:03:115 (1,2) - ^ ^
01:09:349 (1,2) - ^ ^Sakura00:00:778 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I would really suggest using distance snap here! Makes it a little nicer to read, and you wouldn't have to change the placement of the hitobjects much. fixed
00:12:466 (9) - Generally you'd want to avoid sliders that repeat more than once if they're this length. Try this:
00:45:193 (2) - Make this like 00:44:414 (1) - ! It'll look better!
00:53:570 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - The music at this part seems to emphasize individual notes. I'd suggest remapping this section to better accent the music. (And also, I would add a new combo on the big white tick instead of on the hitcircle before it.) ^
00:56:492 (1) - The chorus doesn't really pack much of a punch because your slider ends on the big white tick! I'd remove this and remap this part so that you have a hitobject that starts on the big white tick. Try either of these:^
00:58:050 (4,5,6) - Blanket is a little off!^
00:58:829 (7,8) - That being said, if you blanket this around 00:58:440 (5,6) - , it would probably look nice. ;D Then you could blanket 00:59:414 (9,1) - around that!^
01:03:115 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This is overmapping! D: This song in general isn't really a streamy song. There's nothing in the music during this part that should be mapped with a stream... :< Same goes for 01:09:349 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 01:15:583 (1,2,3,4) - 02:02:336 (2,3,4,5) - 02:05:453 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 02:11:687 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 02:14:803 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
01:10:128 (10,11) - Fix blanket... Or, if this wasn't meant to be a blanket, it would look nicer if you did make it a blanket!
01:12:076 (7,8) - I would suggest changing this so you have a hitobject starting on the big white tick!^
01:12:661 (8,9) - Fix blanket (that is, if you're not remapping this part).^
01:20:842 (4,1) - I think the spinner works better if it started where your kiai ends. So change the slider to a hitcircle and move the spinner to the white tick!(But the spinner should still end on the big white tick too, so it should be a little longer than you have it here!)^
01:44:609 (4,5,1) - Fix blanket.^
01:47:531 (2) - Would look better if you used the same slider as 01:46:752 (1) - !^
01:58:829 (1,2,3) - Same deal as the previous chorus.^
02:23:375 (9,1) - Move slider to the white tick (and make sure it still ends where it does now). theres.. no .. slider..
thank you so much for the mod and everything else you helped me on <3
ah, i want to give you more kudos but i cant Dx
Topic Starter
kudos are kudos :')OhItsAPumbloom wrote:
I feel bad that I got more kudos for that much effort
I MEANT "SPINNER," SORRY LOLMaphi wrote:
02:23:375 (9,1) - Move slider to the white tick (and make sure it still ends where it does now). theres.. no .. slider..
Also, I forgot to mention in my mod. >< Streams do work in certain places in the song, just not where you had them before (imo). So you could do that if you wanted. :>
Topic Starter
alright then ~Kaivu wrote:
I MEANT "SPINNER," SORRY LOLMaphi wrote:
02:23:375 (9,1) - Move slider to the white tick (and make sure it still ends where it does now). theres.. no .. slider..fixed
Also, I forgot to mention in my mod. >< Streams do work in certain places in the song, just not where you had them before (imo). So you could do that if you wanted. :>
MORE KUDOS
easy
00:08:570 (2) - use two single tap or a slider.it sound a bit weird now.
00:30:388 (2) - 1/4 rhythm is not allowed in easy.
00:37:401 (3) - make it two single tap would be better.
highly recommended not use green line to change sv in easy.
01:45:193 (6) - reverse more than once is not allowed in easy.
02:08:570 (1) - ^
02:11:687 (1) - the shape here is not so readable to newbies.
02:21:037 (1) - ^
some place in this diff sounds weird because the rhythm is not united like 00:43:635 (3) - dont change the meter so offen.its just a easy diff. use 1/1 or 2/1 instead.
sakura
00:18:115 (2) - its 1/6 here not 1/4
00:24:933 (1,2,3,4,5) - distance here would be the same to be neatly
00:53:765 (2,3) - cause the sound here,make the distance bigger?
00:08:570 (2) - use two single tap or a slider.it sound a bit weird now.
00:30:388 (2) - 1/4 rhythm is not allowed in easy.
00:37:401 (3) - make it two single tap would be better.
highly recommended not use green line to change sv in easy.
01:45:193 (6) - reverse more than once is not allowed in easy.
02:08:570 (1) - ^
02:11:687 (1) - the shape here is not so readable to newbies.
02:21:037 (1) - ^
some place in this diff sounds weird because the rhythm is not united like 00:43:635 (3) - dont change the meter so offen.its just a easy diff. use 1/1 or 2/1 instead.
sakura
00:18:115 (2) - its 1/6 here not 1/4
00:24:933 (1,2,3,4,5) - distance here would be the same to be neatly
00:53:765 (2,3) - cause the sound here,make the distance bigger?
from my queue :3
Easy
00:09:349 (3,1) - do not overlap on easy difficulty, its very confusing for new players
00:21:037 (2,1) - ^
00:38:959 (1,2) - fix blanket
00:53:765 (5,6) - fix blanket
00:56:881 (1) - too confusing since the difficulty is easy, if your gonna put one of those sliders make sure there is a hole in the loop and its a long slider
01:59:219 (1) - ^
02:11:687 (1) - ^
Sakura
00:00:778 - 00:06:816 - use 1/3 beat snap divisor ( 00:01:037 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - and 00:04:187 (2,3,4,5) needs to be on 1/3 snap divisor)
00:09:544 - make a triplet here
00:18:894 - add a note here
00:22:011 - make a triplet here
00:28:245 - make a triplet here
00:35:063 (1,2) - change into hit circles
01:41:687 (6,1) - might as well blanket this part
02:12:466 (8,1) - fix blanket
02:14:998 (10,11) - fix blanket
done :3
Easy
00:09:349 (3,1) - do not overlap on easy difficulty, its very confusing for new players
00:21:037 (2,1) - ^
00:38:959 (1,2) - fix blanket
00:53:765 (5,6) - fix blanket
00:56:881 (1) - too confusing since the difficulty is easy, if your gonna put one of those sliders make sure there is a hole in the loop and its a long slider
01:59:219 (1) - ^
02:11:687 (1) - ^
Sakura
00:00:778 - 00:06:816 - use 1/3 beat snap divisor ( 00:01:037 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - and 00:04:187 (2,3,4,5) needs to be on 1/3 snap divisor)
00:09:544 - make a triplet here
00:18:894 - add a note here
00:22:011 - make a triplet here
00:28:245 - make a triplet here
00:35:063 (1,2) - change into hit circles
01:41:687 (6,1) - might as well blanket this part
02:12:466 (8,1) - fix blanket
02:14:998 (10,11) - fix blanket
done :3
Topic Starter
Mollon wrote:
easy
00:08:570 (2) - use two single tap or a slider.it sound a bit weird now. fixed
00:30:388 (2) - 1/4 rhythm is not allowed in easy. ^
00:37:401 (3) - make it two single tap would be better. i think its fine
highly recommended not use green line to change sv in easy.
01:45:193 (6) - reverse more than once is not allowed in easy. fixed
02:08:570 (1) - ^ ^
02:11:687 (1) - the shape here is not so readable to newbies. ^
02:21:037 (1) - ^ ^
some place in this diff sounds weird because the rhythm is not united like 00:43:635 (3) - dont change the meter so offen.its just a easy diff. use 1/1 or 2/1 instead. alright ;w; ill go over it later ><
sakura
00:18:115 (2) - its 1/6 here not 1/4 i think its fine
00:24:933 (1,2,3,4,5) - distance here would be the same to be neatly ^
00:53:765 (2,3) - cause the sound here,make the distance bigger?fixed !
thanks for the mod ~Term Akatski wrote:
from my queue :3
Easy
00:09:349 (3,1) - do not overlap on easy difficulty, its very confusing for new players fixed
00:21:037 (2,1) - ^ ^
00:38:959 (1,2) - fix blanket ^
00:53:765 (5,6) - fix blanket ^
00:56:881 (1) - too confusing since the difficulty is easy, if your gonna put one of those sliders make sure there is a hole in the loop and its a long slider ^
01:59:219 (1) - ^ ^
02:11:687 (1) - ^ ^
Sakura
00:00:778 - 00:06:816 - use 1/3 beat snap divisor ( 00:01:037 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - and 00:04:187 (2,3,4,5) needs to be on 1/3 snap divisor) fixed
00:09:544 - make a triplet here ^
00:18:894 - add a note here i think its fine ;w;
00:22:011 - make a triplet here ^
00:28:245 - make a triplet here ^
00:35:063 (1,2) - change into hit circles ^
01:41:687 (6,1) - might as well blanket this part fixed
02:12:466 (8,1) - fix blanket ^
02:14:998 (10,11) - fix blanket ^
done :3
& sorry for the late response ^^'