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SoundTeMP - Be Nice 'n Easy [Taiko|Osu]

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Kin
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Kin
Hi there!
I'm kinda late sorry >_>

[Oni]

I'm also joining Oko about some finisher usage on Oni. As he state, maybe just deleting those 2 would be better : 00:01:981 - 00:08:381 -

  1. 00:00:381 - 00:13:181 - Even tho this part is more dense than the muzu, maybe you shouldn't skip those kind of note ? (it's even mapped on muzu) 00:00:781 - 00:03:981 - 00:07:181 - etc...
  2. 00:59:781 (1,2,1,1,2,1) - the kkdk kd flow pretty well, but according to your pattern on the kiai, I'm pretty sure you're following the melody. However, this one is skipping this note : 01:00:181 - . Maybe try kkddk d or another pattern which map this note 01:00:181 - .
  3. 01:01:381 (1,2,1) - this kkd to map this melody note 01:01:481 - is kinda unexpected. You used kd on blue tick to map those kind of melody. This one is the only one on the kiai mapped this way. I'd highly suggest you to just change it into kd starting on blue tick. However, if you do so, it'll flow kinda weird with this 01:01:081 (1,1) - . To avoid this, I'd also suggest you to delete this note 01:01:081 (1) - ; or move it 1/4 earlier (but I think just delete it would be better)
  4. 01:02:381 (1,2) - I can understand why you want to use K K on muzu, but on oni, it's quite weird to me, when those 2 notes have similar pitch 01:01:981 (1,1) - .
  5. 01:48:581 (2) - In my opinion, this note 01:48:581 (2) - could have a better emphasis if the triplet were to be ddk.
  6. 02:01:681 - Maybe add a kat here to represent the unique guitare sound ?
  7. 02:15:981 (1,2,3,4) - 02:03:781 (1,2,3,4,5) - I'd highly suggest you to make those pattern similar.
[Muzukashii]

  1. 00:17:981 (1,2,3,1,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1) - Even if it's easier than Oni, I'd suggest you to delete at least 1 triplet. It's sure currently easier than Oni, but denser.
  2. 00:25:981 (1) - 00:32:381 (1) - Maybe change it into simple note ? you don't use big note on Oni here. (or maybe add it on Oni)
  3. 00:40:381 (1,2,3,4) - I know you're using 1/1 to make a simple pattern, however, I feel like tapping offbeat. Maybe try this ? https://puu.sh/weJJD/0afdec7589.jpg (if you change it, don't forget about similar one)
  4. 00:43:981 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 00:56:781 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Not quite sure about those pattern. I don't really get what you want to follow with this.
  5. 01:41:181 (1,1) - swap finisher ? You used a finisher here on oni : 01:42:781 - . While there's a single note here 01:41:181 -
  6. 01:49:781 (1,1,1) - change it to d d k to emphasis this one ? 01:50:181 (1) -
  7. 01:51:581 (1) - This note a lot of emphasis with this one as k 01:51:381 (2) - . How about just swapping into d k ?
  8. 02:16:181 (1,2,3) - 02:03:981 (1,2) - same thing as Oni. It'd be better to make those 2 patterns similar.
ôwô
OnosakiHito
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OnosakiHito
Download: http://puu.sh/wmLlw/fd05c7cb76.7z

This is the much better Oni version. Will check the Muzu mod very soon!
OnosakiHito
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OnosakiHito

Kin wrote:

Hi there!
I'm kinda late sorry >_> You are not late, I AM.

[Muzukashii]

  1. 00:17:981 (1,2,3,1,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1) - Even if it's easier than Oni, I'd suggest you to delete at least 1 triplet. It's sure currently easier than Oni, but denser. Done.
  2. 00:25:981 (1) - 00:32:381 (1) - Maybe change it into simple note ? you don't use big note on Oni here. (or maybe add it on Oni) Done.
  3. 00:40:381 (1,2,3,4) - I know you're using 1/1 to make a simple pattern, however, I feel like tapping offbeat. Maybe try this ? https://puu.sh/weJJD/0afdec7589.jpg (if you change it, don't forget about similar one) Changed.
  4. 00:43:981 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 00:56:781 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Not quite sure about those pattern. I don't really get what you want to follow with this. Changed and did some more fixed in the whole kiai.
  5. 01:41:181 (1,1) - swap finisher ? You used a finisher here on oni : 01:42:781 - . While there's a single note here 01:41:181 - I would rather keep it since I made it very consistent with the previous finishers.
  6. 01:49:781 (1,1,1) - change it to d d k to emphasis this one ? 01:50:181 (1) - Changed also the rest according to the higher pitched sound.
  7. 01:51:581 (1) - This note a lot of emphasis with this one as k 01:51:381 (2) - . How about just swapping into d k ? ^
  8. 02:16:181 (1,2,3) - 02:03:981 (1,2) - same thing as Oni. It'd be better to make those 2 patterns similar. You are right, done.

    Addition changes
  9. 00:14:181 - Previously I had notes at such placements but removed them so up coming parts become more emphasize with the addition of such notes.
  10. 00:25:981 ~00:31:981 - I changed some kats to dons to have a more consistent beatplacement.
  11. 00:38:381 - deleted this note. I find it's good to have a bigger break to the kiai for a better distinction.
ôwô
Thank you really much for the mod. It was quite helpful. Same goes for the Oni one, but the suggestions of yours were rather reserved to the new Oni.
@ErunamoJAZZ: Please delete the Oni and rename the new one to "Ono's Oni". Also take this file to update the Muzukashii: http://puu.sh/xqr0m/45fd02ea14.7z

Sorry it took me so long (as always) and thank you for your patience!
ErunamoJAZZ
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All updated!
Okoratu
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Okoratu
tag "and"

for the love of god
also do you people need rechecking
ErunamoJAZZ
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Added some few tags, and an and.


btw Ono, did you the background in HD??
OnosakiHito
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OnosakiHito
Yes, now I did it! Gomenasai =w=""

http://puu.sh/xO7VR/9e9f6e49d8.rar
ErunamoJAZZ
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Updated!

2017-11-05: Still waiting
2017-11-23: Still waiting.
2017-12-01: Still waiting..
2017-12-17: Still waiting...(related: https://twitter.com/EruJazz/status/942479604564025344 )
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Stefan
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Stefan
feel free to catch me in Discord if my wording is terrible, ono

[Muzukashii]
00:28:581 (2,1,2,1,1,1,1,1,1) - I honestly miss what 00:34:381 (1,1,1,2,1,1,1) - has, the somewhat more obvious effects aren't coming out really for 00:28:581 - . If you however want to avoid too much similarity you could try this: https://derpovic.s-ul.eu/it18SoJQ.png
01:38:181 (1) - I think you have some valid reasons that the small part here is single-colored but uh, I find that the note shouldn't be a kat note since it does not represent the sounds like the other kat notes. Like 01:39:581 (1) - isn't a kat note as well.

[Oni]
00:12:481 (2) - kat as starter note would be a far more enjoyable entering to the stream pattern. I am prolly bad in Taiko but it feels much better having kat at this point.
00:36:981 (1) - d k k sounds pretty to me and give some an unique touch corresponding to the first loop of 00:32:381 - 00:38:781 - .
00:37:581 - 0.91x has barely any effect here, I also believe it's not intended? Anyway, 0.92x rather seems what you want to have.
01:49:781 - 01:52:181 - Now you gotta explain me the idea or concept of that part. I see the usage of Big Kat notes.. mostly, I guess. but 01:49:781 (2) - for example is out of place, also 01:51:381 (3) - . I also would suggest to swap 01:51:581 (1,1,1,1) - . That would be the proper order since it make sense to stick with the same idea for the next few seconds.


Gonna leave this without an icon since I don't know if Ono wants to get more opinions. I have no objections in approving the taiko part of the mapset, so lemme know what you guys do.
OnosakiHito
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Stefan wrote:

SPOILER
feel free to catch me in Discord if my wording is terrible, ono

[Muzukashii]
00:28:581 (2,1,2,1,1,1,1,1,1) - I honestly miss what 00:34:381 (1,1,1,2,1,1,1) - has, the somewhat more obvious effects aren't coming out really for 00:28:581 - . If you however want to avoid too much similarity you could try this: https://derpovic.s-ul.eu/it18SoJQ.png Yeah, I agree. I used a bit different pattern tho.
01:38:181 (1) - I think you have some valid reasons that the small part here is single-colored but uh, I find that the note shouldn't be a kat note since it does not represent the sounds like the other kat notes. Like 01:39:581 (1) - isn't a kat note as well. I've didn't change it as you suggested, but I think I know where this oddity came from. Down beat at 01:36:381 (1) - had a kat which made it feel weird when having on the next down beat a don. I made it more consistent now by also changing 01:40:181 (2) - to kat.

[Oni]
00:12:481 (2) - kat as starter note would be a far more enjoyable entering to the stream pattern. I am prolly bad in Taiko but it feels much better having kat at this point. I'm not that happy about this, but it does have a distinctive sound at that very timeline, so I will arrange myelf with having a kat here.
00:36:981 (1) - d k k sounds pretty to me and give some an unique touch corresponding to the first loop of 00:32:381 - 00:38:781 - . This is actually a good suggestion, but I can't agree with it because the map is so heavily following the beats that it would contradict to what the dons are actually following and hence disturb the consistency.
00:37:581 - 0.91x has barely any effect here, I also believe it's not intended? Anyway, 0.92x rather seems what you want to have.Oh, yes. Accidently used x0.91
01:49:781 - 01:52:181 - Now you gotta explain me the idea or concept of that part. I see the usage of Big Kat notes.. mostly, I guess. but 01:49:781 (2) - for example is out of place, also 01:51:381 (3) - . I also would suggest to swap 01:51:581 (1,1,1,1) - . That would be the proper order since it make sense to stick with the same idea for the next few seconds. You are actually right, so I will just change it without much text. Only thing I didn't do is swapping the notes because I want to keep it consistent with the previous Ks.


Gonna leave this without an icon since I don't know if Ono wants to get more opinions. I have no objections in approving the taiko part of the mapset, so lemme know what you guys do.
This was quite a good mod. Thank you!
I am mostly fine with how the difficulties are made, but I will give it another check and see if I would consider having another mod.

Download: https://puu.sh/zUG3b/c83e637f9e.7z
ErunamoJAZZ
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I forgot to say here. Updated few hours ago.
Stefan
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Whenever you want me to bubble/qualify the beatmap, lemme know. So far I am happy with the taiko part.
iYiyo
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if you need a std bn to nominate feel free to ask me
OnosakiHito
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I just deleted a note at 00:52:781 (10) - in the Muzukashii since it felt out of place. There was not another note on such stanza before. It's more consistent now. After that I think we are ready. At least I have nothing else to say.

Download: https://puu.sh/AgMO9/203a191572.7z
tatatat
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hi!
ErunamoJAZZ
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Hi xD

Ok, i will to update your diff in few hours.

Oko said he wanted to see the map... But atm looks like he forgot us :(
Stefan
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Okoratu
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oh right sec wait a few hours
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[side]
consider splitting up the following objectchains because they're getting very long:
00:15:581 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 00:16:981 (2) - could be circle and a slider
00:24:181 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - 00:28:181 (4) - could be circles only i think that would fit better too or at least sth like 00:34:581 (4,5,6,7) -
01:29:981 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 01:34:381 (3) - can be deleted 01:30:581 (2) - can be circle slider or whatever variation you want

this will reduce the clutter in the map and make it easier to read while still keping it it more interesting because you vary more

[hard]
use ar 7.5 or 8? i think that fits the density you're using better.

[ono's ono]
00:17:881 (2,1,2,3) - this improvisation is so counter intuitive, the way you were following drums previously kind of fucks up with reading this stuff because it seems to contradict what the song does

https://i.imgur.com/9iHVeZ4.png
would probably be more intuitive to do at this point? i think you should at least not do a quad in that place
Side
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Applied all not all exactly as noted. For example 00:15:581 (4,5) - I changed to two 1/1 notes to reduce slider spam and 00:24:181 (4) - was reduced to a 3/2 slider to get that clap at 00:24:781 - thus also added a 1/2 slider at 00:25:181 (5) -
01:33:781 (2,3,4) - This pattern was also changed due to the suggestions before. Also made a few minor hitsound and anchor point QoL changes.

Thanks obo :v

3 years later oh bby
osu file format v14

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Title:Be Nice 'n Easy
TitleUnicode:Be Nice 'n Easy
Artist:SoundTeMP
ArtistUnicode:SoundTeMP
Creator:ErunamoJAZZ
Version:Side's Normal
Source:Ragnarok Online
Tags:Izlude dungeon and HappyRocket88 Side OnosakiHito
BeatmapID:867138
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ErunamoJAZZ
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Updated AR in hard diff to 7.5, and updated Side's diff. I hope Ono dont take too many days ^^U
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k cya next yr

- ono
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OnosakiHito
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Okoratu wrote:

[ono's ono]
00:17:881 (2,1,2,3) - this improvisation is so counter intuitive, the way you were following drums previously kind of fucks up with reading this stuff because it seems to contradict what the song does

https://i.imgur.com/9iHVeZ4.png
would probably be more intuitive to do at this point? i think you should at least not do a quad in that place
Hm, I'm not quite sure if you ment it like this. Because if so, I would rather keep the pattern as it is since it's consitent to 00:12:481 (1) - and 00:24:281 (2) - and plays and sounds quite fine to me due to this. It is also fitting to those 3/4 sounds. One may argue why I didn't map 00:14:681 - then, but it is for contrast purpose between 1/2 <-> 1/4 sections.
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who's okorin?
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oh my goodness!!
congradulations to everyone involved, it's been a while !
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Okoratu wrote:

who's okorin?
:roll:



Thank you very much, and to everyone who help me with this mapset, >.<!!!!
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Hi Eru! I was checking your map and found an unused file: "Taiko_BG.jpg", RC says that there must not be any unused files.
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True!, I will request a dq to fix this maybe tomorrow (I am a bit busy and out without a PC with osu! today). Thank you Etsu :3
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Disqualified for unused background image. Please remove "Taiko_BG.jpg" from the beatmap folder.
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Nardoxyribonucleic wrote:

Disqualified for unused background image. Please remove "Taiko_BG.jpg" from the beatmap folder.

Fixed!, Thank you Nardo :3
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Rechecked and confirmed with the removal of unused background file.

Rebubbled~
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hi

general -

the offset is 10 ms late

easy -

You use some claps on non-white ticks when generally using them for the 2nd and 4th white ticks (the usual drum pattern) and it kinda sounds messy since it feels like you're using hte same hitsound for various different sounds. I suggest not using a regular soft clap on the following and instead using like a normal clap or a drum-something

00:17:781 - should not have clap
00:24:181 - should not have clap either.
00:27:381 -

isn't 01:31:181 - this little section missing claps? Not sure why you start using them starting on 01:36:381 - instead of on the bookmark since the music doesn't really change anything outside of introducing the melody? but that level of intensity had claps earlier in the map. so this feels really strange to me.

hard -

this is not the reason for the dq mod, but I figure I'll point it out anyway.

rhythm here seems really underwhelming to me. the song has a melody that utilizes blue ticks (with sounds like 00:39:881, 00:43:081 - ) but these are completely ignored in the mapping. I guess this is your choice, but I want to point this out since I think the map will be nicer if you map to the blue tick rhythms instead of skipping them for mapping the background instruments. Your choice though.

like, you even map to it sometimes (like with 00:57:981 (2) - )

01:29:981 - not sure why this section aint using claps when it's the same intensity as some of the earlier sections that used claps. randomly starting them up again for 01:33:581 - when there's no noticeable distinction in the music from the previous section is a very peculiar decision. if you could explain it that would be great.

noteasy -

00:12:871 (8) - if you are meaning to snap this to the piano, the correct snapping looks like this - http://puu.sh/AtDMP/04366c0fca.jpg (those are 1/12th ticks), it becomes obvious when you fix the offset

01:29:971 - like i mentioned in the other diffs, you probably should start using claps here
01:41:171 (1) - this spinner feels really weird to me, like why not just map this out? putting a spinner in the middle of the gameplay when the song is still going is weird to me. but i guess its okay if you really want it.
01:44:971 (3,4,5,6,7) - the 1/4 being this highly spaced in this calm section is odd to me. its so much larger than what you used in the kiai/chorus. i get it for the melody streams, but just some hi-hats like this is excessive
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Muzukashii - 00:53:881 (2) - and 00:57:081 (11) - are really obscure if it's in the song, and the rhythm isn't easily heard

Having nothing at 00:55:981 on Oni as well feels like things were cut abriptly, the music differs from 00:52:781
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Disqualifying so we have some time to address these mods.

Some other things I spotted:
- Easy's combo colour 3 seems to be different to all of the other diffs for some reason.
- Hard: 00:37:081 (1) - 01:54:181 (1) - The ranking critera recommends 1 beat for spinner recovery time. It would be a good idea to adjust these if possible, especially for the latter one as the next note starts near the top edge which may be a little tricky for lower level players.

Also feel like -7 is better for offset instead of -10. The stuff about the claps seem like minor but valid points to me.
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Yeah I checked offset again and -7 or -8 seem good to me.
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ups, I did not noticed the dq... :S sorry.

Applied offset -7
Fixed the combo colour 3 in Easy diff, and clap things in all diffs.


About the spinners in Hard, considering the BPM of this song (150, when the RC use 160 as base), I feel the recovery time appropriate, so I did not changed this.
Other suggestion about rhythm was not applied because I am not agree.

About 01:45:274 (4,5,6) - in the last diff, it is not high spaced, it is 1.0x, the same space used in 01:46:874 (4,5,6) - , I personally find this more comfortable that by example 01:35:974 (7,8,9) - where I used that to make a feeling of jump, but that is not necessary here because the rhythm is more plain.


Thank you, and I am sorry for late response >.<
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neonat wrote:

Muzukashii - 00:53:881 (2) - and 00:57:081 (11) - are really obscure if it's in the song, and the rhythm isn't easily heard What would you suggest? Currently I would keep it like this because in this way it is consistent with the previous patterns. Switching to a full beat could be more problematic considering the rest is not.

Having nothing at 00:55:981 on Oni as well feels like things were cut abriptly, the music differs from 00:52:781 I see your point. However, it is probably better to keep it consistent that way, else I have only one single and distached finisher which doesn't have any connection to any other pattern. It would be also a waste of opportunity if I would delete both finishers just for following a rather unsignificant 3/4 sound since the they give a good contrast to the whole section while the alternation of them is very fitting to the song.

Thank you for your check!
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about the Muzu, all I can suggest is to go for the 1/2 beats in the song in those sections in the kiai
like at 00:47:074 (2) - it already kinda hints that the music has changed slightly as they already added a beat in the song at 00:47:174 -
so I would say for 00:53:874 (2) - 00:57:074 (11) - have beats at 00:53:774 - 00:53:974 - 00:56:974 - and 00:57:174
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