1. Firmato's Expert (4.2 stars, 457 notes)
2. Gero's Easy (1.38 stars, 96 notes)
3. Hard (3.17 stars, 277 notes)
4. Insane (3.94 stars, 374 notes)
5. Normal (1.75 stars, 188 notes)

ReFaller wrote:

It will be a short mod.
[Normal]
00:37:548 (3) - try toalign a distance between tail and head of 00:36:610 (2) . the same with mirrored copy-ninja jutsu. i mean about 01:38:485 (2,3)
[Hard]
00:22:313 (6) - stack this head with tail from 00:20:438 (2)
01:22:313 (2,6) - same
[Insane]
CLEAR!

Pereira006 wrote:

[Firmato's Little Extra]

Gameplay:

1. 00:01:923 (1,2,3,4,5) - the spacing is random there anti-spacing and big spacing, I can't understand you style to follow this song, but could better if you fix all this part 1.20x //this is somewhat a fade-in pattern, making the player acknowledge the cs and ar - you wouldn't want to start clicking small circles at some huge spacing, would you? The (3) is a jump because it's both clap and start of vocal line; i changed the spacing a bit around (5)
2. 00:03:563 (1,4) - the overlaps, i don't like this, this could clean overlap //or right, no one uses sneaking sliders
3. 00:07:313 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - again spacing is random. try improve spacing like you did in 00:03:563 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) //it's not random, the (4) in this occasion is noticably lower and quieter than (4) in the occasion you're referring to
4. 00:11:063 (1,4) - the blanket look off for me //fixed, along with the next one
5. 00:17:626 (4,5) - try use same shape //done
6. 00:33:563 (8,1) - as kiai time, the spacing 1.00x look not good as test play, 1.20x would be nice //it's a triangle center, part of a pattern, do I really need to break it?
7. 00:41:063 (7,1,2) - ^ same //ok
8. 00:49:969 (7,8) - I feel this need CTRL+G this make good jump and flow IMO //but won't follow the intensity of vocals
9. 01:18:563 (7,1) - I don't like this anti-spacing because this don't make sense to follow normal song, I don't feel quiet song part, this could keep i normal spacing //it was a broken stack, and I've finally found how to fix it
10. 01:35:438 (8,1,2) - same happen before. 1.20x would be nice //pattern, sorry
11. 01:42:938 (7,1,2) - ^ same //fixed the triangle, but patterns again
12. 01:50:438 (8,1,2) - ^ same //same

this need more work, real problem is spacing //it may look like random spacing; it does, however, follow some rules, mainly the vocal intensity. Thanks for the mod! :3

• 
  00:15:751 (6,1) - Might want to put a slightly bigger space here; same spacing for twice the time gap isn't good for a low difficulty.
  00:23:719 (6,7) - ^
  00:18:329 (5,1) - Alternatively, this gap might be a bit too big.
  01:59:579 (6,1) - ^
  00:28:407 (3,4) - Blanket could be improved. ;p
  01:57:235 (2,3) - Blanket the end of 2?

• 
  00:03:563 (3,5) - Blanket could be improved.
  00:15:751 (7,8,9) - ^ Could be improved slightly, but I wouldn't stress over it.
  00:41:298 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - The way this is spaced doesn't look very good; each one is ever so slightly off from the last and it's weird to look at.
  00:56:298 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - In direct contrast to the above comment, this one is flawless! Love it.
  01:07:782 (1,2) - Improve blanket for sure.
  01:12:001 (3,4) - ^ (with this one, just move the first point one unit to the right on the tiny grid)
  01:13:876 (7,8,9) - ^
  01:41:298 (1,2) - 01:56:298 (1,2) - BEAUTIFUL! I love stuff like this~

• 
  00:13:407 (1,2) - Improve blanket (I think move the last point of 2 up and to the left one on the small grid)
  00:31:454 (1,2,3,4,5) - Looks a bit weird, but maybe that's just me. Perhaps move 3 down a tad?
  00:46:454 (1,2,3,4,1) - This is odd. You could try moving
  
  these up...

  
  or if that overlap is too weird, perhaps try making it more of a
  
  fluid curve,

  
  
  instead. If you want the pattern to stay how it is, at least move the blue slider 1 (and of course its mirroring slider) down a unit or move the pinks up a unit to correct the slight obtuse angle between 4 and 1.
  00:55:594 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Soo pretty~ I love this. (But please make all three sliders the same; 3 is slightly different from 7 and 8.)
  01:42:469 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ saaaaame~
  01:15:282 (1,2) - Improve blanket.
  01:50:673 (4) - I might move this beat down a tad.
  01:51:610 (8,10) - Blanket!

• 
  I probably won't be able to find much here. ^^' I are not skill'd enough Played through it and nothing is sticking out to me. Firmatorenio, if you want me to take a second look, please let me know!

1. Can you get a better background? I have a feeling that the current one is just a screenshot from the series, which doesn't look too good.
2. Extend soft-hitwhistle.wav a little, so it goes over 100ms long reventing any possible issues with soundcards.
3. normal-hitfinish.wav has a slight delay. Consider fixing it before pushing the map forward.

1. Try to reduce AR to 4,5 or something around that. The difficulty itself, the BPM and the fact that this is the easiest diff are screaming for something easier in terms of settings.
2. 00:09:188 (3) - 00:24:188 (7) - just to simplify the rhythm, I'd use 1/2 sliders instead of these circles. So, the downbeat is clickable and players are not confused by 3/2 gaps.
   Note: 00:24:188 (7) - probably a circle here, as well. Same goes for some similar patterns later on in the song, care to look into that if you agree.
3. 00:15:751 (6,1) - the spacing reduction is confusing here. It can be read as 3/4 or 1/2, besides, it looks pretty untidy.
4. 00:33:798 (3) - this would sound better as an 1/2 slider as there is a strong beat and some kind of a glitchy sound in the vocals, that would sound insanely well with a slider.
5. 00:50:673 (1,2) - try to unstack their tails. As the diff is meant to be the easiest in the set, a bit of simplification wouldn't hurt.
   Note: 01:52:548 (1,2) - same.
6. 01:39:423 (3) - the second repeat here might be confusing for the easiest diffs. There is not enough time to read that properly.
   
   Looks alright, actually. Just needs a little bit of polishing and maybe a spacing check, as I felt like things were a tiny bit inconsistent in the beginning.

1. 00:30:985 (1,2,3) - exactly the same pattern before the second kiai has some jumpy DS here. Do the same for this one?
2. 01:08:719 (3,5) - is there any way to keep the reverse-arrow more visible? Give that a try, it can help some players who are learning how to play Hards.
3. 01:40:829 (5,6,3,4) - see the inconsistency in spacings? And here 01:46:454 (5,6) - it is completely stacked. Try to emphasise patterns with the similar sounds in a similar way?
   Note: same goes for the second part of the kiai.
   
   Just a couple of minor fixes and this will look hot!

1. 00:26:063 (7,8) - it's better to give a jump after the slider, so, players don't feel a sudden slow-down/stop.
2. 00:34:149 (6) - 00:41:649 (7) - 00:46:571 (2,4) - 00:49:149 (3) - those and some other 1/4s feel overmapped. I see where they come from, but I ca not agree with the 1/4s.
3. 00:50:673 (1,2) - minor - let me complain about blankets,as those like they are meant to be blankets.
4. 01:02:860 (2,3,4,5) - try a 3/4 slider and a circle, as this will fix the polarity without overmapping.
5. 01:11:063 (9,1) - probably a bit of an overkill for an 1/2 pattern. Try to lower the DS here?
   
   My main concern is the overmapping with those 1/4 beats. Have a look at them and think whether you really want them to be here.

1. 00:03:563 (1) - I disagree with the extended sliders here and the way you use them. These sliders ignore strong and audible downbeats just for the sake of some hardly audible vocals. Please, get more opinions on them and consider re-working them.
2. can not agree with your usage of 1/4s neither. I don't see the reason in music to keep them. THey do not really follow the vocals and seem to be artificially pulling the difficulty higher.
   
   Feel free to contact me if you want to talk about that with extra details.

Bakari wrote:

Hey, professor!

[General]

1. Can you get a better background? I have a feeling that the current one is just a screenshot from the series, which doesn't look too good.
2. Extend soft-hitwhistle.wav a little, so it goes over 100ms long reventing any possible issues with soundcards.
3. normal-hitfinish.wav has a slight delay. Consider fixing it before pushing the map forward.

[Normal]

1. Try to reduce AR to 4,5 or something around that. The difficulty itself, the BPM and the fact that this is the easiest diff are screaming for something easier in terms of settings.
2. 00:09:188 (3) - 00:24:188 (7) - just to simplify the rhythm, I'd use 1/2 sliders instead of these circles. So, the downbeat is clickable and players are not confused by 3/2 gaps.
   Note: 00:24:188 (7) - probably a circle here, as well. Same goes for some similar patterns later on in the song, care to look into that if you agree.
3. 00:15:751 (6,1) - the spacing reduction is confusing here. It can be read as 3/4 or 1/2, besides, it looks pretty untidy.
4. 00:33:798 (3) - this would sound better as an 1/2 slider as there is a strong beat and some kind of a glitchy sound in the vocals, that would sound insanely well with a slider.
5. 00:50:673 (1,2) - try to unstack their tails. As the diff is meant to be the easiest in the set, a bit of simplification wouldn't hurt.
   Note: 01:52:548 (1,2) - same.
6. 01:39:423 (3) - the second repeat here might be confusing for the easiest diffs. There is not enough time to read that properly.
   
   Looks alright, actually. Just needs a little bit of polishing and maybe a spacing check, as I felt like things were a tiny bit inconsistent in the beginning.

[Hard]

1. 00:30:985 (1,2,3) - exactly the same pattern before the second kiai has some jumpy DS here. Do the same for this one?
2. 01:08:719 (3,5) - is there any way to keep the reverse-arrow more visible? Give that a try, it can help some players who are learning how to play Hards.
3. 01:40:829 (5,6,3,4) - see the inconsistency in spacings? And here 01:46:454 (5,6) - it is completely stacked. Try to emphasise patterns with the similar sounds in a similar way?
   Note: same goes for the second part of the kiai.
   
   Just a couple of minor fixes and this will look hot!

[Insane]

1. 00:26:063 (7,8) - it's better to give a jump after the slider, so, players don't feel a sudden slow-down/stop.
2. 00:34:149 (6) - 00:41:649 (7) - 00:46:571 (2,4) - 00:49:149 (3) - those and some other 1/4s feel overmapped. I see where they come from, but I ca not agree with the 1/4s.
3. 00:50:673 (1,2) - minor - let me complain about blankets,as those like they are meant to be blankets.
4. 01:02:860 (2,3,4,5) - try a 3/4 slider and a circle, as this will fix the polarity without overmapping.
5. 01:11:063 (9,1) - probably a bit of an overkill for an 1/2 pattern. Try to lower the DS here?
   
   My main concern is the overmapping with those 1/4 beats. Have a look at them and think whether you really want them to be here.

[Extra]

1. 00:03:563 (1) - I disagree with the extended sliders here and the way you use them. These sliders ignore strong and audible downbeats just for the sake of some hardly audible vocals. Please, get more opinions on them and consider re-working them.
2. can not agree with your usage of 1/4s neither. I don't see the reason in music to keep them. THey do not really follow the vocals and seem to be artificially pulling the difficulty higher.
   
   Feel free to contact me if you want to talk about that with extra details.

Could use more mods, in my opinion.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Best of luck!

TheVileOne wrote:

Normal

I had fun playing and modding it. The kiais are the best part.

00:21:376 (5) - Not really a fan of repeat sliders that go on this long. But I'm not so sure though. It might be because of the pattern you chose because I think 01:23:251 (5,6,7) - is nicer to look at and play, especially since you have stacks on both sliders. I would have mapped this combo differently in general and our mapping styles are pretty different though.
00:28:407 (3,4) - Fix blanket.
00:54:423 (1,2) - Doesn't seem to be positioned in a meaningful way. http://puu.sh/n8ol4/4a3d7376a3.jpg Here is an example of me doing some slight tweaks to the shape and position to give it a more natural look. Alternatively you could go for a more symmetrical look. I'm not sure what you were going for here.
01:30:282 (3,4) - Fix blanket.

Hard

00:03:329 (2,3,4,5) - If you're going to have weird blanket flow like this, at least make the spacing consistently 0.9. also I find it strange to have 1 and three curving in the same direction the way you have it when the pattern is so close to the right side of the screen.
00:20:438 (2,3) - Could you make this blanket width more like the other widths?
00:33:798 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - You can clean this up. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4537048 you can position it so that the slider is pointing directly at the next combo rather than at an angle to it. Also note that 7 is not parallel with 5,6 in the ss.
01:12:938 (5) - Make cleaner. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4537099 Probably can tweak this part even more to make it look better.
01:22:313 (2,3) - Make the blanket width more like the other widths.
01:44:110 (5) - 256 y

Insane

00:07:313 (4,5,6) - Please make the same spacing here.
00:17:391 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Pattern is too horizontal for my tastes. Why not downward slant the pattern some?
00:20:673 (4) - Seems like you wanted this to be a blanket. It makes sense as one.
00:27:938 (2) - I'd be happier if this were symmetrical.
00:32:157 (6,7,1) - Does it really need to change spacing here?
01:02:391 - This section is hitsounded in the Hard, but not in the Insane.
01:03:563 (5,6,1) - What's wrong with making it sort of like this? http://puu.sh/n8tl2/a368d39ac6.jpg
01:21:844 (1,2,3,4) - if you're going to have this pattern, I suggest making 1,2,4 distances the same.
01:49:032 (2,3,1) - Does it really need to change spacing here?

I'll mod the guest diff tomorrow.

TheVileOne wrote:

Recheck Don't need to give kudosu I guess.

Normal

00:01:923 (1,2,3,4) - Very small but using grid 3 means you can't center this. It's 1 grid 4 unit from being perfect.
01:03:798 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:18:798 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I think you can move such that 00:21:141 (4) - is in the same spot as 00:18:329 (5) -
I think this pattern feels cluttered in general due to all the blankets. I think it would be much better if you made the notes spread out towards the end of it, and maybe stack 00:21:141 (4,5) - so you could blanket the sliders without having to blanket the object in between the sliders as well. Another thing you might consider is skipping this beat 00:23:016 - just to make it feel less cluttered. Eh I haven't messed with that prospect too much. Also the combo is a bit long compared to the other combos in the difficulty.
00:25:126 (2) - Not sure what you're going to do with this in the above mod, but you should probably adjust the shape to complement the round slider after it. It's kind of ugly the way you currently have it. If you take this suggestion, apply same idea here 01:27:001 (2,3) -
00:31:923 - As a note in general, where you start your combos changes from the start of this part compared to end of this section. It's not a terribly big deal.
00:35:204 (5,2) - The overlap here just bothers me so much. If you can get it these objects in the same place, then I think it will look much better.
00:54:423 (1,2,3) - This part breaks the pattern consistency you were keeping with the music. Up until here you always accentuated the first two sliders in somewhat symmetrical way. Here the first two sliders are disconnected in their shapes and flow. I don't agree with the pairing you made with 3, which should have been made with the first slider. Not to mention the unusual angle that the latter two sliders are positioned.
01:04:735 - Maybe whistles every other tick. It's better than nothing?
01:56:298 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I think this could be cleaner? i'm thinking rotating the slider further away from 01:54:423 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - might look better.
01:58:173 (3,4,5,6,1) - I think the flow is lacking here. Also you didn't need to change spacing in the first kiai. There is no need to change spacing.

Hard

Is it intentional that you don't have any claps until 00:21:141 -?

I'm not sure if you realize it. This difficulty tends to shift between 0.9 and 0.95 plus spacing quite a bit. Although I guess 0.9 is a tad too short for my taste and that's why I think the parts where the spacing is marginally wider feel more pleasant. If you end up seeing a part that seems to have spacing shifts around, consider trying to make it consistent. It might even be better if you chose the decimal spacing over forcing more patterns to use 0.90.

00:01:923 (1,2,3) - I wanted to mention this in my first mod and talked myself out of it. I don't like how this combo doesn't have any coherency at all. I think it makes sense to make 1 a similar shape as other sliders in the combo and start the combo somewhere on the left area of the screen and transition over to the right. It's weird when you start a map and immediately send the player into the edge of the screen.
00:13:407 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - Another example of noticeable spacing inconsistency. It starts out with 0.9 and then by the end it's 0.95 - 1.0
00:15:516 (6) - 295, 192 looks like a better blanket to me.
00:27:469 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - I just want to comment at how good this pattern is. Great job.
00:34:969 (7,1) - This could be made parallel. Just need to move 7 a bit more to the right so you can straighten it.
00:41:298 (2,3) - Spacing too close.
00:54:423 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Surprisingly clean spacing. It's a shame I can't say this 00:41:298 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - looks or plays as amazing as this part.
01:04:266 (1,2) - Another thing I talked myself out of mentioning. I think the gap is sort of awkward and I sometimes hit early because I'm impatient. Coherency is marginally better than how you started the map at least. It's not throwing the player into a corner.
01:10:594 (6,7,8) - Spacing is inconsistent and this doesn't look like the first iteration of this pattern. Tweak 8 to maintain 0.95 spacing like the first section.
01:11:532 (1,2,3,4,5) - Compared with the first version of this part, I find this open approach nice. The 5 blanket seems slightly out of place given the surrounding shapes, but the flow is good.
01:15:751 (3,4,5) - Tweak spacing?
01:45:048 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Plays very good.

I need a fresh start to mod the hardest difficulties. I'll rain check them to probably tomorrow.

Spagett wrote:

Offset shoud be 68, might want to confirm with someone else, but I think that's about correct. //just my two bits, offset should be moved 4 beats to the right imo

[Little Extra]
Circle Size should be 4, or at least 5 //needed more explanation to try to follow through this
AR should be in the 9's //no it shouldn't, this is dt map too lowbpm and it doesn't have difficult reading patterns to have that high ar, so it just doesn't fit
00:07:099 (4) - This should be more behind the upcoming slider, not on top //i probably would apply this, but i have this problem of not having enough space on the grid even with small hitobjects. This reads, and certainly flows, fine considering this is an extra diff.
01:24:208 (1) - This should be more visible, hard to see and hard to follow. Same here 01:26:083 (9) - //i don't see what you're pointing at. The first (1) is close to the (7) nearby and is easy to see, the second (9) is a slider that is immediately coming to attention while playing, also both are a part of a star pattern uhhh... i see an imperfect blanket out of that (9) though, will fix that if/when i update
02:01:943 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This is really, really hard to do with the CS (because of spacing). I suggest maybe halfing the D snap here? //it may be quite hard, but it's justified by the song, and is mapped consistently among the map (it happens 4 times in the song and all with the same spacing). Also halving the ds would make them antijumps, wth
Overall looking pretty good //Yea thanks, and sorry.

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TheVileOne wrote:

Firmato's Expert

There are a lot of minor things, but overall it's a good map. Most of these are just suggestions. //

00:18:563 (1) - Curve more? //yes okay
00:19:969 (4) - If you can, try to move all of these objects to the center. //uh it's not like there's any symmetry going on around
00:22:313 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Not all the sides of this shape are the same length. //moved (3) and (8) a bit, not sure if there's more
00:26:063 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This part just doesn't seem as well structured as other parts of the song. I suppose the first combo is okay, and the flow is fine. 00:27:938 (2,3,4,5,6) - This just bothers me. Even though you stack the object on the end, I still think it feels like the slider should be stacked instead. What do you think? //tbh, i have mixed feelings about it, but if you're voting for sliderend, so be it
01:01:923 (1) - Move to 312, 16 for a better blanket, adjust pattern accordingly. //moved to 312:18
01:03:798 (1,2,3) - This could probably be improved. Although I guess it's okay as it is. //uh what's wrong with this?
01:05:438 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This carries really good flow. The spacing is good too. //:3
01:18:798 (1,2,3) - I don't care for this. If you're going to space it out, it should be pointing where the slider end is pointed. //spaced it back in
01:21:141 (2) - Shouldn't you have all these objects positioned near here in the same place like you did in the first section? //well, in the first section the stack is on (4), not on (2), if that's what you're pointing at, to do the same i could make the (2,3) of the following combo placed so (2)'s head was on this combo's (3)'s end and (3) on this combo's (4), but (3)'s already stacked with its combo's (6).. i could move (4) there and straight out the other (2) a bit so i could place (3) as the beginning of its curve, but the symmetry built around newfound (4) will screw up the following star pattern, not to mention the entire construction doesn't read well, so sorry, but no. i hope you understood at least something
01:59:813 (9) - I think this should be stacked on the end of that slider. yes it should

Kathex wrote:

Firmato's Ex -pert
00:01:923 (1,2) - x228 y192 follow the slider curve //too small angle, looks meh
i feel the stack leniency so bad for this speed.. , use 3? //what
00:04:032 (2) - x401 y84 follow the slider curve //403:86
00:18:563 (1) - add a anchor point in middle of slider and make it simetrical... //yours looks worse, but i adjusted it a bit
00:36:844 (6) - x328 y160 follow the slider curve //pls triangle
00:39:423 (1,2,3) - ; 00:54:423 (1,2,3) - ; 01:41:298 (1,2,3) - ; 01:56:298 (1,2,3) - why u dont use 0,3x at triples? looks better because u're not doing stack at sequences like 00:32:626 (5,6) - //i want to kill the movement on them, not encourage it, a single note under slider doesn't read well enough to me
00:53:719 (6) - x416 y200 follow the slider curve //it's good enough
00:55:126 (4,5) - why stack?? //00:54:423 (1,2,3,4,5) - pattern
01:33:563 (7) - x464 y100 follow the slider curve //it's good enough
01:38:719 (6) - x308 y128 follow the slider curve.... //triangle
01:40:594 (6) - x336 y160 ^ //342:158
01:42:469 (5) - x160 y236^^ //good enough
01:46:219 (6) - x320 y180^^^ //moved a bit
01:48:563 (7) - x276 y184^^^^ //281:175
01:49:969 (6) - x88 y124^^^^^... //triangle
01:53:719 (6) - x160 y240^^^^^...... //good enough
01:55:594 (6) - x96 y184^^^^^^^^ ;=; //triangle
02:01:219 (6) - x180 y12 WHY IS SO HARD FOLLOW THE SLIDER CURVE FIRMA?? //i wonder why you follow them in a straight line after they ended when you say to follow the curve
Ctrl+A= ur map is using too much the middle and top right corner, u forgot to distribuite the patterns arround the screen //wth what did you drink, it's most dense in the center; to matter would be density, not area, but in fact, it doesn't matter at all

TheVileOne wrote:

Gero's Easy

Some of the combos feel too long. I think this is okay as is since it's not a big deal.

00:31:923 - Good lines and shapes during the kiai. Good to know.
01:03:798 - Not sure what I feel about this break since it is where the preview point is and all. I've added a break time at this part since this kind of difficulties always need breaks, at the least once, otherwise it would be difficult for beginners.
01:11:298 - Just empty space for an entire measure after the spinner. Is this how people map after spinners nowadays? There's a rule that talks about this, so that's why I found more appropriate to leave a space of 4 white beats without notes.

Map is pretty clean, mainly because it was mostly copy pasta. But yea... flows okay. Thanks.

Gero wrote:

TheVileOne wrote:

Gero's Easy

Some of the combos feel too long. I think this is okay as is since it's not a big deal.

00:31:923 - Good lines and shapes during the kiai. Good to know.
01:03:798 - Not sure what I feel about this break since it is where the preview point is and all. I've added a break time at this part since this kind of difficulties always need breaks, at the least once, otherwise it would be difficult for beginners.
01:11:298 - Just empty space for an entire measure after the spinner. Is this how people map after spinners nowadays? There's a rule that talks about this, so that's why I found more appropriate to leave a space of 4 white beats without notes.

Map is pretty clean, mainly because it was mostly copy pasta. But yea... flows okay. Thanks.