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LeaF - Arianrhod [OsuMania]

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[ A v a l o n ]
1,977 posts
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[ A v a l o n ]
last replied 7 monhts ago :O

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  • [General]
  1. Song Setup & Metadata
    Song setup has no problem and metadata is fine i guess
  2. Audio & Hitsounds
    192kbps audio is good . . . and not contains any delayed hitsound (+5ms) and all of hitsound is above 100ms
    and i want to ask, why you put clap and whistle ? i don't get it (because actually they are have same kick sound lol)
  3. BPM & Timing
    All fine
  4. Background
    1366x768 (16:9) screen . . . good

    |1|2|3|4|


    [Easy]
  5. Patterns have no problem, but still have lack of hitsound usage issues, it still have so much missing hitsound like 00:27:327 (27327|1) - 00:29:577 - and many more please check this entire diff again by yourself ~

    [Normal]
  6. 00:15:420 - 00:15:608 - add notes, actually this section is still have 1/4 piano sound . . . can you make this section becomes like on this part ? 00:13:827 (13827|0,13920|1,14014|2) -
  7. 00:30:702 (30702|3,30702|2,31077|2,31077|0,31452|0,31452|3) - music condition has been changed here, hmm reduce to 1 note only ? or you can make some variant pattern ? actually i highly recommended you to make a diffrent feels with this section 00:29:202 -
  8. 00:54:139 (54139|0) - 00:54:514 (54514|1) - 00:55:639 (55639|2) - and still many like that, hitsound are kinda not completed in this time ;w;

    [FC's Hard]
  9. 00:38:014 (38014|3) - change this LN into single note only, since this section is didn't have any same sound with 00:38:202 (38202|2,38389|3,38577|2,38764|3) - or 00:37:639 (37639|1,37827|0) -
  10. 00:44:202 - only one note was not really enough for this impact, please add at least one more note
  11. 01:28:170 (88170|1) - this one is not really clear, please delete it . . . and also i suggest to keep the flows consistency with this part 01:25:264 - 01:26:764 -
  12. 01:37:264 (97264|3,97452|3,97639|3,97827|3) - you've just using 4th column too much . . please at least move this 01:37:639 (97639|3) - to 2nd column for more balance

    [Lunatic]
  13. 00:02:452 (2452|2,2514|1) - delete them ? i guess we don't need that pattern for just only on this beginning part, those 1/6 was not really clear when you playing it (at 100% playback)
  14. 00:32:764 - not going to add a note in this time ? i think that impact was really loud
  15. actually i did not really find any important issue on here . . . and the snapping was fine too for me
importantly . . . please check back your hitsound later
call me back when done :)
Aruel
1,891 posts
Joined February 2014
Aruel
Thanks for mod Avava <3

http://puu.sh/q2nd4/21ffb8dd3d.zip

All applied Ava's mod also re-mapped some parts
Ichigaki
1,767 posts
Joined February 2013
Topic Starter
Ichigaki

[ A v a l o n ] wrote:

last replied 7 monhts ago :O

Bubble Check



|1|2|3|4|


  • [General]
  1. Song Setup & Metadata
    Song setup has no problem and metadata is fine i guess
  2. Audio & Hitsounds
    192kbps audio is good . . . and not contains any delayed hitsound (+5ms) and all of hitsound is above 100ms
    and i want to ask, why you put clap and whistle ? i don't get it (because actually they are have same kick sound lol)
  3. BPM & Timing
    All fine
  4. Background
    1366x768 (16:9) screen . . . good

    |1|2|3|4|


    [Easy]
  5. Patterns have no problem, but still have lack of hitsound usage issues, it still have so much missing hitsound like 00:27:327 (27327|1) - 00:29:577 - and many more please check this entire diff again by yourself ~

    [Normal]
  6. 00:15:420 - 00:15:608 - add notes, actually this section is still have 1/4 piano sound . . . can you make this section becomes like on this part ? 00:13:827 (13827|0,13920|1,14014|2) -
  7. 00:30:702 (30702|3,30702|2,31077|2,31077|0,31452|0,31452|3) - music condition has been changed here, hmm reduce to 1 note only ? or you can make some variant pattern ? actually i highly recommended you to make a diffrent feels with this section 00:29:202 -
  8. 00:54:139 (54139|0) - 00:54:514 (54514|1) - 00:55:639 (55639|2) - and still many like that, hitsound are kinda not completed in this time ;w;

    [Lunatic]
  9. 00:02:452 (2452|2,2514|1) - delete them ? i guess we don't need that pattern for just only on this beginning part, those 1/6 was not really clear when you playing it (at 100% playback)
  10. 00:32:764 - not going to add a note in this time ? i think that impact was really loud
  11. actually i did not really find any important issue on here . . . and the snapping was fine too for me
importantly . . . please check back your hitsound later
call me back when done :)
Everything are applied!
[ A v a l o n ]
1,977 posts
Joined July 2014
[ A v a l o n ]
rechecked, hitsound are improved so far . . . and seems all fine
Bubbled congratulations !
Akasha-
Nomination Assessment Team
4,418 posts
Joined April 2013
Akasha-
[Easy]
00:46:077 - better add note on here, sound kinda better for flow
00:46:452 - this one too
01:29:577 - add a note here for kick

[Normal]
01:23:670 (83670|3) - move this to 01:23:764 - sound better if you do

The rest of the map are just well done and enjoyable
No more problems, call me back
Ichigaki
1,767 posts
Joined February 2013
Topic Starter
Ichigaki

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

[Easy]
00:46:077 - better add note on here, sound kinda better for flow
00:46:452 - this one too
01:29:577 - add a note here for kick

[Normal]
01:23:670 (83670|3) - move this to 01:23:764 - sound better if you do

The rest of the map are just well done and enjoyable
No more problems, call me back
owo that's pretty quick :3
Applied all, and updated
Akasha-
Nomination Assessment Team
4,418 posts
Joined April 2013
Akasha-
LeaF - Arianrhod [OsuMania modding]


[Generals]
- BPM: Okay
- Offset: Okay
- AiMod: Okay
- Tags: Okay
- BG: Okay
- Kiai: Okay
- Metadata: Okay
- Folder’s problem: None
- Hitsound: Okay
- Timing: Okay
- Other: Okay

Qualified
(Time Master)

Congratulations!

IRC
2016-07-15 19:39 Kuo Kyoka: gimme ur pikachu else i nuke ur map
2016-07-15 19:39 Kuo Kyoka: jk
2016-07-15 19:39 Kuo Kyoka: all set, right?
2016-07-15 19:39 Ichigaki: lmao
2016-07-15 19:39 Ichigaki: i don't have pikachu
2016-07-15 19:40 Ichigaki: ;A;
2016-07-15 19:40 Ichigaki: already checked
2016-07-15 19:40 Ichigaki: should i make 8,5 hp for lunatic?
2016-07-15 19:41 Kuo Kyoka: hmm idk
2016-07-15 19:41 Kuo Kyoka: let me testplay
2016-07-15 19:41 Kuo Kyoka: lets
2016-07-15 19:41 Ichigaki: but i guess not really necessary
2016-07-15 19:41 Ichigaki: ww
2016-07-15 19:41 Ichigaki: ok
2016-07-15 19:43 Kuo Kyoka: yeah hp 8.5
2016-07-15 19:43 Kuo Kyoka: lol
2016-07-15 19:43 Ichigaki: lol
2016-07-15 19:46 Kuo Kyoka: done?
2016-07-15 19:47 Ichigaki: wait
2016-07-15 19:47 Ichigaki: fixing some ending patterns
2016-07-15 19:47 Ichigaki: to make it not that repetitive
2016-07-15 19:49 Ichigaki: okay done
2016-07-15 19:49 Kuo Kyoka: i see
2016-07-15 19:49 Kuo Kyoka: okay
2016-07-15 19:49 Kuo Kyoka: ending pattern 12 43 kinda hard for me
2016-07-15 19:49 Ichigaki: 01:49:639 -
2016-07-15 19:49 Ichigaki: me neither
2016-07-15 19:50 Ichigaki: wait
2016-07-15 19:50 Ichigaki: found an unnecessary jack lol
2016-07-15 19:50 Kuo Kyoka: lol
2016-07-15 19:50 Ichigaki: 01:53:108 -
2016-07-15 19:50 Ichigaki: ok done
2016-07-15 19:50 Kuo Kyoka: ^ movitation when map being nominated
2016-07-15 19:50 Ichigaki: ww
2016-07-15 19:50 Ichigaki: everyone does
2016-07-15 19:51 Ichigaki: that end parts is killing
2016-07-15 19:51 Ichigaki: some may hate it
2016-07-15 19:51 Kuo Kyoka: change like the bottom part may help
2016-07-15 19:51 Ichigaki: which one?
2016-07-15 19:52 Kuo Kyoka: 00:38:764 - 
2016-07-15 19:52 Kuo Kyoka: 00:46:264 - tbh this part is a litte hard for me
2016-07-15 19:53 Kuo Kyoka: i mean that 13 24
2016-07-15 19:53 Kuo Kyoka: 00:46:639 (46639|2,46639|0,46702|3,46702|1,46764|2,46764|0,46827|1,46827|3) - 
2016-07-15 19:53 Ichigaki: ohh lol
2016-07-15 19:53 Ichigaki: i changed it to [34] [12]
2016-07-15 19:54 Kuo Kyoka: yeah better
2016-07-15 19:54 Ichigaki: 01:51:702 -
2016-07-15 19:55 Ichigaki: do you think it's 1/4 or 1/6?
2016-07-15 19:55 Ichigaki: but i just think 1/4 is match perfectly here, i just noticed that
2016-07-15 19:55 Kuo Kyoka: 01:51:702 - you mean here or 01:51:514 - 
2016-07-15 19:56 Ichigaki: 01:51:889 -
2016-07-15 19:56 Ichigaki: until 01:52:827 -
2016-07-15 19:56 Ichigaki: sorry ww
2016-07-15 19:56 Kuo Kyoka: probably 1/6
2016-07-15 19:56 Kuo Kyoka: also
2016-07-15 19:57 Kuo Kyoka: dont you think offset is a little early
2016-07-15 19:57 Ichigaki: `-`
2016-07-15 19:57 Ichigaki: damn
2016-07-15 19:58 Ichigaki: 2210 or 2212?
2016-07-15 19:58 Kuo Kyoka: i think 2211
2016-07-15 19:58 Kuo Kyoka: topkek
2016-07-15 19:58 Kuo Kyoka: around that
2016-07-15 19:58 Ichigaki: ok good
2016-07-15 19:58 Ichigaki: lol
2016-07-15 20:02 Ichigaki: okay updated
2016-07-15 20:03 Kuo Kyoka: hmm
2016-07-15 20:03 Kuo Kyoka: the ending part if you keep 1/6 maybe better
2016-07-15 20:04 Kuo Kyoka: but your choice
2016-07-15 20:04 Kuo Kyoka: okay all done?
2016-07-15 20:04 Ichigaki: but
2016-07-15 20:05 Ichigaki: 01:53:023 - this part doesn't have 1/6, so i following the hihat only there ww
2016-07-15 20:05 Ichigaki: yeah done
2016-07-15 20:05 Ichigaki: uwu
2016-07-15 20:05 Kuo Kyoka: tell leaf to recompose
2016-07-15 20:05 Kuo Kyoka: kek
2016-07-15 20:05 Ichigaki: i mean drum
2016-07-15 20:05 Ichigaki: lmao
2016-07-15 20:05 Ichigaki: kek
2016-07-15 20:05 Kuo Kyoka: okay qualify now?
2016-07-15 20:05 Ichigaki: #blamecomposer
2016-07-15 20:06 Ichigaki: go go
2016-07-15 20:06 Ichigaki: <3
2016-07-15 20:06 Kuo Kyoka: #blamecomposer
2016-07-15 20:06 Kuo Kyoka: go nuke
2016-07-15 20:06 Ichigaki: ok nuked
2016-07-15 20:06 Ichigaki: lol
2016-07-15 20:06 Ichigaki: ACTION slapped
2016-07-15 20:06 Kuo Kyoka: your wish is my command
2016-07-15 20:06 Ichigaki: holy shit
2016-07-15 20:06 Ichigaki: lmao
2016-07-15 20:07 Kuo Kyoka: anyway
2016-07-15 20:07 Kuo Kyoka: i almost press button but
2016-07-15 20:07 Kuo Kyoka: damn unsnapped notes
2016-07-15 20:08 Kuo Kyoka: on lunatic
2016-07-15 20:08 Ichigaki: where?
2016-07-15 20:08 Kuo Kyoka: 00:00:711 - 
2016-07-15 20:09 Ichigaki: holy shit
2016-07-15 20:09 Ichigaki: aaaand, i'm kinda found something
2016-07-15 20:09 Kuo Kyoka: also preview tine
2016-07-15 20:09 Ichigaki: 00:03:898 (3898|0,4273|0,4648|0) -
2016-07-15 20:09 Ichigaki: all unsnapped
2016-07-15 20:09 Ichigaki: uwu
2016-07-15 20:09 Ichigaki: ACTION slapped
2016-07-15 20:09 Kuo Kyoka: also storyboard hitsound
2016-07-15 20:10 Kuo Kyoka: oh
2016-07-15 20:10 Kuo Kyoka: that's not
2016-07-15 20:10 Kuo Kyoka: check aimod only them
2016-07-15 20:10 Ichigaki: all of the storyboard hitsound?
2016-07-15 20:10 Kuo Kyoka: check
2016-07-15 20:11 Kuo Kyoka: you only need to tab -> ctrl + a -> move them a bit
2016-07-15 20:11 Kuo Kyoka: and they will fix with new offset
2016-07-15 20:13 Ichigaki: gonna add kiai at the 2nd chorus
2016-07-15 20:14 Kuo Kyoka: okay
2016-07-15 20:18 Kuo Kyoka: rip website crashed
2016-07-15 20:18 Ichigaki: aw rip
2016-07-15 20:19 Kuo Kyoka: nah it work again
2016-07-15 20:19 Kuo Kyoka: call me when done
2016-07-15 20:19 Ichigaki: snapped the first note, added some kiai, fixed storyboard hitsounds
2016-07-15 20:20 Kuo Kyoka: okay good 
2016-07-15 20:20 Kuo Kyoka: i hope no more problems now
2016-07-15 20:21 Ichigaki: i hope so
2016-07-15 20:21 Kuo Kyoka: no more change?
2016-07-15 20:23 Ichigaki: yes
2016-07-15 20:23 Ichigaki: huehue
2016-07-15 20:23 Kuo Kyoka: hue
2016-07-15 20:24 Kuo Kyoka: okay its nuke time
Last edited by Akasha- , edited 3 times in total.
Aruel
1,891 posts
Joined February 2014
Aruel
Hi I'm hod
Kyousuke-
1,796 posts
Joined May 2013
Kyousuke-
woah ninja'd

grats ichi~
Feerum
osu! Alumni
2,042 posts
Joined August 2014
Feerum
Hello Ichi.. before this get's ranked i would like to discuss about some Pattern..

[Lunatic]
00:56:351 (56351|2) - Should be 1/6 snapped.
00:56:726 (56726|3) - 1/6 too, heavy kick.
00:57:476 (57476|3) - 1/6 too.
00:58:226 (58226|1) - If this follow kick, 1/6 too.
01:07:273 (67273|1) - Is this a ghost? I can only hear the kick at 01:07:211 (67211|0,67336|2) - .
01:08:773 (68773|2) - ^if yes, here same.

Ok that's all i think. I checked the other difficulty's. There is everything fine.
(Since FC followed Piano, not the Kicks in the part i did mention)
Basically it's just some snapping thing, the map itself is fine. Should you confirm me the snapping issue i'm sure we can get this map pretty fast back to qualify.

Please let me know your Opinion.
Myxo
osu! Alumni
3,103 posts
Joined December 2012
Myxo
Confirmed snap issues, disqualifying it quickly even though I am no mania QAT, to prevent the map from just getting ranked.
Ichigaki
1,767 posts
Joined February 2013
Topic Starter
Ichigaki

Feerum wrote:

Hello Ichi.. before this get's ranked i would like to discuss about some Pattern..

[Lunatic]
00:56:351 (56351|2) - Should be 1/6 snapped.
00:56:726 (56726|3) - 1/6 too, heavy kick.
00:57:476 (57476|3) - 1/6 too.
00:58:226 (58226|1) - If this follow kick, 1/6 too.
01:07:273 (67273|1) - Is this a ghost? I can only hear the kick at 01:07:211 (67211|0,67336|2) - .
01:08:773 (68773|2) - ^if yes, here same.

Ok that's all i think. I checked the other difficulty's. There is everything fine.
(Since FC followed Piano, not the Kicks in the part i did mention)
Basically it's just some snapping thing, the map itself is fine. Should you confirm me the snapping issue i'm sure we can get this map pretty fast back to qualify.

Please let me know your Opinion.

Desperate-kun wrote:

Confirmed snap issues, disqualifying it quickly even though I am no mania QAT, to prevent the map from just getting ranked.
Thanks.
Akasha-
Nomination Assessment Team
4,418 posts
Joined April 2013
Akasha-


(nvm that, I found this match to this song)

Ichigaki call me again when you're done, sorry for mistaken I've made.
Ichigaki
1,767 posts
Joined February 2013
Topic Starter
Ichigaki

Kuo Kyoka wrote:



(nvm that, I found this match to this song)

Ichigaki call me again when you're done, sorry for mistaken I've made.
I updated it already, you can confirm it now ww
[ A v a l o n ]
1,977 posts
Joined July 2014
[ A v a l o n ]
Re-checked whole difficulty
good luck for this time !
Akasha-
Nomination Assessment Team
4,418 posts
Joined April 2013
Akasha-
LeaF - Arianrhod [OsuMania modding]


[Generals]
- BPM: Okay
- Offset: Okay
- AiMod: Okay
- Tags: Okay
- BG: Okay
- Kiai: Okay
- Metadata: Okay
- Folder’s problem: None
- Hitsound: Okay
- Timing: Okay
- Other: Okay

Requalified
(Time Master)

Congratulations!



(halp)
Ichigaki
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Joined February 2013
Topic Starter
Ichigaki
SpectorDG
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Joined June 2014
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Kyouren
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Joined October 2012
Kyouren
Arzenvald
4,033 posts
Joined July 2013
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Ichigaki
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Joined February 2013
Topic Starter
Ichigaki
Much ｖａｐｏｒｗａｖｅ
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