Valentrixe wrote:
btw if anyone can give me a pattern suggestion for Kagii's White Another on 00:21:501 ~ 00:35:165
i will really appreciate it
I couldn't reach you ingame so here is my feedback since your words are kinda unclear and i/we don't know how to handle it.
Overall the Part is okay but my suggestion would be to follow only the really clear sounds with LN's what means following LN's should get removed:
00:21:501 (21501|3) -
00:22:690 (22690|0) -
00:23:878 (23878|3) -
00:25:066 (25066|0) -
00:28:779 (28779|2) - <- No LN sound
00:29:224 (29224|2) - <- No LN sound
00:29:521 (29521|0) - <- No LN sound
00:31:600 (31600|3) -
00:32:194 (32194|0) -
00:33:383 (33383|3) -
00:34:571 (34571|0) -
These you could remove. I know there is a LN sound BUT while playing this sound is absolute not noticeable because you follow with your LNs here a clearly different sound. The main melody, what is cool and you should keep it.
If yes, following LN's should be 1/4 LN's
00:26:551 (26551|0) -
00:26:699 (26699|2) -
00:26:996 (26996|1) -
00:27:293 (27293|2) - (Optional]
00:28:927 (28927|1,29076|3,29373|1,29670|1) - and these here to 1/4 LN's
Following the main melody only with LN's make it way more clear what actually get's played and the 1/4 LN's give it a little piece of variety which is pretty cool.
But anyways, i just give the feedback you asked for.
The part is overall okay for me, just 00:28:779 - to 00:31:006 - is
very confusing for me that you follow suddenly the pretty inaudible piano with your LN's. At the first two plays i didn't noticed what you have mapped there with your LN's until i looked into the editor on 25% speed. After i noticed once it's not longer to overhear but still, when you don't know what is mapped it's reaaaally hard to notice.
That's all from my side! Hope this feedback helps you