saradisk - 168 - 401 · forum

Okoratu

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Okoratu 2016-02-10T18:41:53+00:00

blablabla we irc'd

Nozhomi

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Nozhomi 2016-02-10T19:37:29+00:00

Okoratu wrote:
blablabla we irc'd

le irc avec Oko

2016-02-10 18:12 Okoratu: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/803418 saradisk - 168 - 401 [Torpedo]]
2016-02-10 18:12 Okoratu: do i need like
2016-02-10 18:12 Okoratu: gorilla hands to accu this or what
2016-02-10 18:12 Nozhomi: Rumia- did a 96% if I remember
2016-02-10 18:13 Nozhomi: still have screen of the differents tries
2016-02-10 18:13 Okoratu: i don't like your hitnormal
2016-02-10 18:13 Okoratu: like for most thingsi t just seems unfitting
2016-02-10 18:14 Okoratu: and that you layer things like 00:37:575 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - into the same stream
2016-02-10 18:14 Okoratu: like
2016-02-10 18:15 Okoratu: 00:37:575 (1,2,3,4,5) - have drums 00:37:950 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - have melody
2016-02-10 18:15 Nozhomi: I don't have anything elso who could fit hitnormal :/
2016-02-10 18:15 Okoratu: 2 completely different things mashed together into one chain of circles
2016-02-10 18:16 Okoratu: 00:56:775 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - is same thing but slightly different
2016-02-10 18:17 Nozhomi: it that a real problem ? For me it's just following 1/4 and I have when streams are separated and I don't the idea to increase spacing
2016-02-10 18:18 Okoratu: you didn't even get what i was trying to say
2016-02-10 18:18 Okoratu: can you not do continuous 1/4 by combining drums and melody into huge chains of 1/4 :x
2016-02-10 18:19 Nozhomi: so you want me to do kick sliders or 2 differents streams ?
2016-02-10 18:21 Okoratu: example woudl be something like http://puu.sh/n2Vzy/816279717f.jpg
2016-02-10 18:22 Nozhomi: o
2016-02-10 18:22 Nozhomi: I see
2016-02-10 18:22 Okoratu: gives a small rest and separates 2 different kinds of stream
2016-02-10 18:24 Okoratu: some of your triplets have their stacks broken btw
2016-02-10 18:24 Nozhomi: like ?
2016-02-10 18:24 Okoratu: 00:00:525 (3,4,5) -
2016-02-10 18:24 Okoratu: 00:02:175 (8,9,1) -
2016-02-10 18:25 Okoratu: 00:08:400 (9,1) -
2016-02-10 18:26 Nozhomi: I like how triplet broken themselves
2016-02-10 18:26 Nozhomi: orz
2016-02-10 18:26 Okoratu: 00:15:675 (1,7,1) - this looks a bit dumb ingame, how about moving 00:18:675 (7,1,2,3,4,1) - by 4x 4y to have 00:18:375 (3,4,5,6,7) - as a straight line
2016-02-10 18:26 Okoratu: http://puu.sh/n2VRZ/18a1d5998b.jpg -> http://puu.sh/n2VSO/01945a5015.jpg
2016-02-10 18:27 Okoratu: i'd recommend doing the same kind of 1/4 short sliders instead of doublets in the kiai
2016-02-10 18:28 Nozhomi: you mean 00:41:325 (4,5) - ?
2016-02-10 18:28 Okoratu: like 00:31:725 (5,6) - is far easier to comprehend than playing doublets doublet doublet triplet triplet circle 5plet doublet doublet
2016-02-10 18:29 Okoratu: and if you simplify doublets you can do bigger spaced streams for 00:42:675 (1,2,3) - which would be cool
2016-02-10 18:29 Nozhomi: so why I put doublets in kiai :
2016-02-10 18:30 Okoratu: idk i think they play like ass
2016-02-10 18:30 Nozhomi: simply because I put 1/4 sliders before. It's the same rhythm but harder because it's the highest diff of the set
2016-02-10 18:30 Nozhomi: I can try but think it will just be zzz
2016-02-10 18:30 Okoratu: like if that was taiko i'd see doublets all over the place but
2016-02-10 18:30 Okoratu: i really think spamming doublets and triplets with only circles in quick succession will make ppl hate you lol
2016-02-10 18:31 Nozhomi: well they already hate me lol
2016-02-10 18:31 Nozhomi: will do some test for this tho
2016-02-10 18:32 Okoratu: http://puu.sh/n2Wdo/e4e263c48c.jpg
2016-02-10 18:32 Okoratu: ew
2016-02-10 18:33 Okoratu: you seemed to care a lot about how your triplets stack so
2016-02-10 18:33 Okoratu: 01:00:975 (8,5,6,7) -
2016-02-10 18:33 Okoratu: 01:06:675 (3,6,7,1) -
2016-02-10 18:36 Nozhomi: sry I'm still trying with 00:18:975 (1,2,3,4,1) - lol
2016-02-10 18:37 Nozhomi: because k it solve it for 00:18:375 (3,4,5,6,7) - but destroy 2nd one
2016-02-10 18:41 Okoratu: do you still want taikos XD
2016-02-10 18:42 Nozhomi: no
2016-02-10 18:42 Nozhomi: lel
2016-02-10 18:42 Okoratu: sad
2016-02-10 18:42 Nozhomi: you wanted to do taiko really ? cmon
2016-02-10 18:42 Nozhomi: it's really late lol
2016-02-10 18:43 Okoratu: i just found an intuitive way to map this song
2016-02-10 18:43 Okoratu: :d:d
2016-02-10 18:45 Nozhomi: :c
2016-02-10 18:45 Nozhomi: well fixed these stupid stacks
2016-02-10 18:52 Okoratu: wtf are the 1/8 in extra
2016-02-10 18:53 Nozhomi: 00:38:475 - from this point, it's Enon part
2016-02-10 18:53 Nozhomi: don't blame me
2016-02-10 18:53 Okoratu: kill enon's 1/8
2016-02-10 18:53 Okoratu: and 01:11:625 (1) -
2016-02-10 18:54 Okoratu: 00:08:775 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1) - same as what i talked about in torpedo
2016-02-10 18:54 Okoratu: 00:19:275 (1,2,3,5) - looks a bit dumb if your skin is half-transparent
2016-02-10 18:55 Okoratu: 00:30:375 (4,5) - i don't think a jump this big is warranted by the song
2016-02-10 18:57 Okoratu: why does she say "bathing is nice"
2016-02-10 18:57 Okoratu: the whole time
2016-02-10 18:59 Nozhomi: how I could know ??? XD
2016-02-10 18:59 Nozhomi: I didn't play the game lol
2016-02-10 18:59 Nozhomi: it's some of her quotes
2016-02-10 19:01 Okoratu: tell aia to not mix different length repeat sliders
2016-02-10 19:02 Okoratu: like she has http://puu.sh/n2Y53/24678ea5d9.jpg
2016-02-10 19:02 Okoratu: http://puu.sh/n2Y6A/fe1435eb96.jpg
2016-02-10 19:02 Okoratu: noone who just comes from a normal will be able to comprehend how long to hold each
2016-02-10 19:02 Nozhomi: k
2016-02-10 19:03 Okoratu: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/841828 Last Note. feat.mirin - Fake out [Seikatu's Hyper]]
2016-02-10 19:03 Okoratu: had the same issue
2016-02-10 19:03 Nozhomi: oh
2016-02-10 19:03 Okoratu: and we just made all repeat sliders the same length
2016-02-10 19:03 Okoratu: so whenever you see a repeat slider there it'll be the same thing and that actually made the diff wayy more intuitive
2016-02-10 19:04 Okoratu: and doublecheck her comboing with her
2016-02-10 19:05 Nozhomi: okay~
2016-02-10 19:05 Okoratu: can you do less spacing for 00:16:875 (1,2,3,4,1) - in insane
2016-02-10 19:05 Okoratu: that way it's more obvious that these are 1/4
2016-02-10 19:06 Okoratu: because other sliders look similar in terms of spacing but are 1/2 from each other
2016-02-10 19:06 Okoratu: 00:57:075 (1,2) - pls
2016-02-10 19:06 Okoratu: pls
2016-02-10 19:06 Okoratu: pl s
2016-02-10 19:06 Nozhomi: pls 2s
2016-02-10 19:07 Nozhomi: for 00:16:875 (1) - 
2016-02-10 19:07 Nozhomi: my problem is
2016-02-10 19:07 Nozhomi: do I have to kill stacks for the sake of spacing or do you have an idea in mind ?
2016-02-10 19:10 Okoratu: somethin like http://puu.sh/n2YyJ/d880bf5c6f.jpg
2016-02-10 19:10 Nozhomi: uh
2016-02-10 19:10 Nozhomi: rip aesthetic
2016-02-10 19:11 Nozhomi: also where the fk start 00:16:875 (1) - ?
2016-02-10 19:11 Nozhomi: did you stack it with 00:16:725 (5) - ?
2016-02-10 19:12 Okoratu: i didn't move it from where it is now
2016-02-10 19:13 Nozhomi: o_o
2016-02-10 19:16 Nozhomi: so I guess
2016-02-10 19:16 Okoratu: use AR 6 in normal, really lol.
2016-02-10 19:16 Nozhomi: I have to rearange this 00:18:075 (1,2,3,4) - 
2016-02-10 19:17 Okoratu: having to read like 6 objects at a time is not something a normal player can do easily
2016-02-10 19:19 Okoratu: easy
2016-02-10 19:19 Okoratu: 01:15:975 (2,3) -
2016-02-10 19:19 Okoratu: wtat hte fuck happened
2016-02-10 19:19 Okoratu: 00:10:875 (2,3,4,1) - seems super forced
2016-02-10 19:20 Nozhomi: k lol spacing rip
2016-02-10 19:20 Okoratu: can you avoid 1/2 repeat sliders, you have like 3 of them in the whole diff
2016-02-10 19:20 Okoratu: and short sliders aren't thaat intuitive for news since they don't really know how many times these repeat or how these sliders work exactly
2016-02-10 19:21 Nozhomi: 00:11:475 (4) - If I ctrl+g it's feel less forced ?
2016-02-10 19:21 Okoratu: yes
2016-02-10 19:21 Nozhomi: k
2016-02-10 19:22 Nozhomi: for repeat sliders...one repeat is not like okay in theory ?
2016-02-10 19:22 Okoratu: the problem i observed with these is that
2016-02-10 19:22 Okoratu: people don't know how long to hold them
2016-02-10 19:22 Okoratu: when they start playing
2016-02-10 19:23 Nozhomi: so
2016-02-10 19:23 Nozhomi: 00:52:275 (3) - these kind have to rip too ?
2016-02-10 19:23 Nozhomi: I mean
2016-02-10 19:23 Nozhomi: yeah
2016-02-10 19:24 Okoratu: uh
2016-02-10 19:24 Nozhomi: there is 2 of them
2016-02-10 19:24 Okoratu: if the slider is long enough they can follow through
2016-02-10 19:24 Nozhomi: yeah k
2016-02-10 19:24 Okoratu: rest of the diff is cool
2016-02-10 19:27 Nozhomi: k

@Enon

@Aia

Also I have to :

Try 1/4 sliders instead of doublets on Torpedo
Double check NC with Aia on Hard.

Thx dude

Enon

2,690 posts

Joined November 2012

Enon 2016-02-10T19:50:42+00:00

Bonsai wrote:
Ahoy, from m4m'ing

Enozho's Extra
00:38:773 (3,4) - All spacings like this one seem a bit too low bc of slider-leniency, the next note isn't emphasized at all, I'd raise them all : \ This section seems cramped anyways since there is so much overlapping although they are far away in the timeline, raising the spacing would help that too ✔ Increased distance between 3, 4
Good luck!

Edit: My 100th kudosu, wheeeeeeeeeeeeee!

Nozhomi wrote:
@Enon

✐ I don't understand why I have to fix the 1/8 objects on my diff.
there are distinct 1/8 sounds at that part. so, I mapped those sounds.

What's wrong?

Thank you for modding, guys

I changed my part a bit

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Okoratu

Nomination Assessment Team / Elite Nominator

4,913 posts

Joined May 2012

Okoratu 2016-02-10T19:53:16+00:00

you map sounds that torpedo doesn't and the sv makes these misreadable as 1/4, also 1/8 sliders are wayy easier to break on and noz's part has the same sounds as circles only

it's your decision in the end, those are the reasons why i'd personally like them gone

Enon

2,690 posts

Joined November 2012

Enon 2016-02-10T20:23:52+00:00

ok done

rip 1/8

osu file format v14

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384,104,55275,6,0,P|360:72|324:56,3,53.9999983520508,8|8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,140,55575,2,0,P|461:101|450:63,3,53.9999983520508,8|8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,216,55875,2,0,P|503:197|525:165,3,53.9999983520508,8|8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,284,56175,2,0,P|468:299|507:295,3,53.9999983520508,8|8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,340,56475,2,0,P|356:288|376:228,1,107.999996704102,0|8,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
508,122,56775,2,0,P|475:163|424:176,1,107.999996704102,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,180,57075,2,0,P|264:157|316:168,1,107.999996704102,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,184,57300,1,0,0:0:0:0:
372,200,57375,6,0,L|144:216,1,180,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,316,57675,6,0,L|158:324,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
305,277,57975,2,0,L|216:284,1,90,0|2,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
45,213,58275,2,0,L|159:221,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
306,174,58575,2,0,L|216:180,1,90,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,96,58875,5,8,0:0:0:0:
216,180,59025,1,0,0:0:0:0:
306,174,59175,1,0,3:0:0:0:
162,102,59325,2,0,L|72:108,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
306,174,59625,2,0,L|395:167,1,90,0|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
432,84,59925,1,0,0:0:0:0:
341,89,60075,6,0,L|252:96,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,181,60375,2,0,L|305:174,1,90,0|2,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
483,215,60675,2,0,L|476:126,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
395,166,60975,2,0,L|402:255,1,90,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
342,337,61275,6,0,P|383:354|427:353,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,290,61575,2,0,P|222:272|178:273,1,90,0|2,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,299,61875,1,0,0:0:0:0:
92,299,62025,1,2,0:0:0:0:
157,361,62175,1,0,3:0:0:0:
157,361,62325,1,2,0:0:0:0:
178,273,62475,6,0,L|197:157,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
121,127,62775,2,0,L|102:243,1,90,0|2,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
157,361,63075,2,0,L|245:346,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
266,259,63375,2,0,L|177:273,1,90,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
17,201,63675,2,0,L|105:215,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
121,127,63975,2,0,L|32:112,1,90,0|2,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,36,64275,2,0,B|196:56|196:56|264:24,1,180,0|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
332,72,64725,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,72,64875,6,0,L|236:120,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,156,65175,2,0,L|412:115,1,90,0|2,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,36,65475,2,0,P|500:88|496:140,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
510,259,65775,2,0,P|476:230|463:188,1,90,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,344,66075,6,0,L|391:362,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
325,298,66375,2,0,L|413:279,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,212,66675,2,0,B|272:228|272:228|180:152,1,180,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,96,67275,6,0,P|152:148|144:192,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,224,67725,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,224,67875,2,0,P|112:276|120:320,1,90,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,352,68325,1,8,0:0:0:0:
136,352,68475,2,0,L|192:344,1,45,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,356,68775,2,0,L|280:348,1,45,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,360,69075,2,0,P|304:320|336:268,1,90,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,248,69525,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,248,69675,6,0,B|384:264|384:264|384:328,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,368,70125,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,368,70275,2,0,L|448:296,1,90,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,268,70725,1,8,0:0:0:0:
476,268,70875,2,0,P|460:228|464:180,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,140,71325,1,0,0:0:0:0:
500,100,71475,1,0,3:0:0:0:
420,68,71625,6,0,L|392:64,5,22.5
420,68,72075,6,0,L|326:81,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,88,72525,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,88,72675,2,0,L|381:101,1,90,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,108,73125,1,8,0:0:0:0:
420,108,73275,2,0,P|428:136|420:164,1,45,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,196,73575,2,0,P|404:224|412:252,1,45,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,280,73875,1,0,3:0:0:0:
428,280,74025,2,0,L|480:288,2,45,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,336,74475,6,0,P|364:288|352:240,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,208,74925,1,0,0:0:0:0:
316,172,75075,2,0,P|307:128|315:84,1,90,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,44,75525,1,8,0:0:0:0:
292,64,75675,2,0,P|264:72|240:68,1,45
208,52,75975,2,0,P|216:80|212:104,1,45,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,136,76275,2,0,P|224:128|248:132,1,45,0|2,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
283,118,76575,2,0,P|281:153|293:186,1,67.5,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

Nozhomi

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Nozhomi 2016-02-11T13:50:35+00:00

Updated Ovoui and Collab diffs~

Enon

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Enon 2016-02-11T16:47:27+00:00

Is it time to get bubble? XD

Ovoui

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Joined January 2013

Ovoui 2016-02-11T17:35:10+00:00

Exa

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Exa 2016-02-11T21:45:00+00:00

Hello, here I am again!

Aia's Hard:

00:01:275 (1,2) - This...
00:06:075 (1) - Is inconsistent with this! The first rhythm that you've used seems to work much better.
00:20:475 (3,4) - And this...
00:22:875 (6,7,8) - Is inconsistent with this. I get that this part is pretty monotone, but you've already provided a nice variety of rhythms that follow the song well. Now the least you can do is be consistent throughout this part.
00:29:475 (4) - How about doing something like this instead? Changing the horizontal direction while you advance upwards seems like a better way to "spice things up" than keeping an almost linear path. Of course you should select and move the patterns afterwards accordingly.
00:30:075 (7) - NC here...
00:32:475 (6) - And here. Up until now you kept your combos rather small, please continue to do that so there are no HP regain spikes.
00:34:875 (1,2,3,4) - Justifying the change of combos from before. Look at this one.
// Read but don't apply yet //
00:40:275 (8,9) - All of this should be a 1/4 reverse slider as is...
00:42:675 (8,9) - This one. There's even 1/4 bass beats in that which you skip atm.
00:45:075 (8,9) - And for the sake of consistency, again, change this accordingly.
00:49:875 (3,4) - I notice that you stay consistent throughout the kiais on that part. Which made me think twice if whether or not my suggestions to change the patterns before were right. Since you stay consistent, it's objectively ok; therfore it turns into a subjective matter. Try out the rhythms I suggested and if you don't like them, don't use them. But if you do use them, change the ones in the whole of the second kiai afterwards.
// Now you shall apply //
00:59:475 (8) - I would really like to see this as 2 1/2 sliders, one starting at this one's head and the other one at it's tail. Since it's clearly two separate sounds. Heck, there's even a strong enough beat on the red tick which you currently skip as it's in the body of the slider!
01:00:375 (2) - Be consistent! This should be 2 notes. (Or the notes before should be a 1/2 slider, both seem fine).
01:08:775 (6,7) - Either unstack those...
01:11:175 (7,8) - Or stack these ones. Stay kinetically consistent as well since you are given the option to.
01:13:575 (6,7) - After seeing that, I suggest that you better unstack the ones on my previous suggestion.
01:16:125 (8) - I also would rather see that become 2 1/2 sliders since there are two separate sounds contained within this one. One of them completely stops in the sliderbody if this slider, so it's unclear what it actually follows.

Nozhomi

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Nozhomi 2016-02-12T00:02:36+00:00

Enon wrote:
Is it time to get bubble? XD

Still want some more mods on both Extra tbh from pro modders (don't even know how to catch one lol).

And I have too see things on Hard with Aia too.

Enon

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Enon 2016-02-12T09:14:10+00:00

c:

Gloria Guard

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Gloria Guard 2016-02-14T07:12:42+00:00

Hello I just try this map modding for M4M :3

[General]

■ Ovoui's Insane the timing point is 00:19:123. You are a change timing move 00:19:125

[Easy]

■ 00:16:875 (1) - The spinner is too short. Ithink, this should be changed spinner and this point add long 1/1 slider here
example 00:26:475 (1) here.
■ 00:36:075 (1) - ^ Same
■ 00:45:675 (1) - The slider is overscreen. You a little move this slider
■ 00:55:275 (1) - You already know this spinner
■ 01:07:275 (1) - You check this slider spcing. you need change this spacing is wrong

[Normal]

■ 00:16:875 (1) - This is spinner end move to 00:18:675 ?
■ 00:36:075 (1) - ^ The same spinner issue
■ 00:40:275 (4,5,6) - I think, this slider rhythm a little strange. I felt a little confused this sliders rhythm,
remove 00:39:975 (5) repeat and (6) note, next 00:40:275 this point add 1/4 slider and repeat here.

SPOILER

■ 01:07:275 (1) - Easy same the spacing issue here.

[Aia's Hard]

■ 00:01:725 (3) - I don't think the add 1/8 slider rhythm here, it's not. also I can't heard 1/8 rhythms.
I think, this section add 1/4 slider and repeat
■ 00:07:075 (1) - Why you this slider end to 00:00:300 here? I don't think it. I recommend this slider rhythm to drum
■ 00:09:375 (1) - Remove NC. You don't consistency NCs
■ 00:09:675 (2) - Add NC
■ 00:11:475 (3,4,5) - I think, this rhythm to follow electric(?) sound here. I just recommend this part add 1/2 sliders

SPOILER

■ 00:16:125 (3,4,5) - ^ Same
■ 00:54:975 (4) - Ctrl+G?
■ 00:58:875 (6,7,8) - You are ignore a lot of rhythm and Here are other beats are emphasized.
I recommend change this rhythms. You can try this

SPOILER

■ 01:01:425 (6,7,8) - ^
■ 01:03:675 (6,7,8) - The same this part rhythm issue

Your fix this diff NCs issue

SPOILER

00:19:875 (1) Remove NC.
00:20:475 (3) Add NC
00:22:875 (6) ^
00:23:475 (1) Remove NC
00:24:075 (3) Add NC
00:30:075 (7) ^
00:32:475 (6) ^
00:39:675 (6) ^
00:42:075 (6) ^
00:44:475 (6) ^
00:51:675 (6) ^
00:58:875 (6) ^
01:01:275 (5) ^

[Insane]

■ 00:14:025 (1) - Please consistency new combo. remove NC please
■ 00:18:975 (5) - ^
■ 00:28:575 (1) - ^
■ 00:32:475 (6) - Add New combo
■ 00:33:075 (1) - Remove New combo
■ 00:42:675 (1) - ^
■ 00:47:775 (1) - ^
■ 00:57:075 (1) - ^
■ 01:08:475 (6) - Add new combo here
■ 01:10:875 (6) - ^
■ 01:13:275 (6) - ^
■ 01:15:675 (6) - ^

Ovoui's Insane and Extra it's fine imo Good Luck

Ovoui

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Ovoui 2016-02-17T00:33:16+00:00

Thanks for the mod o/

Noz tu peux fixer pour moi ? Merci jtm

Nozhomi

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Nozhomi 2016-02-18T19:13:00+00:00

Gloria Guard wrote:
Hello I just try this map modding for M4M :3

[General]

■ Ovoui's Insane the timing point is 00:19:123. You are a change timing move 00:19:125 - Fix

[Easy]

■ 00:16:875 (1) - The spinner is too short. Ithink, this should be changed spinner and this point add long 1/1 slider here
example 00:26:475 (1) here. - The minimum score is ok, and recovery time too. Should be k.
■ 00:36:075 (1) - ^ Same - ^
■ 00:45:675 (1) - The slider is overscreen. You a little move this slider - Fix
■ 00:55:275 (1) - You already know this spinner
■ 01:07:275 (1) - You check this slider spcing. you need change this spacing is wrong - It's due to SV change so that's k.

[Normal]

■ 00:16:875 (1) - This is spinner end move to 00:18:675 ? - No for recovery time.
■ 00:36:075 (1) - ^ The same spinner issue - ^
■ 00:40:275 (4,5,6) - I think, this slider rhythm a little strange. I felt a little confused this sliders rhythm,
remove 00:39:975 (5) repeat and (6) note, next 00:40:275 this point add 1/4 slider and repeat here. - Just changed circle for a 1/2 slider.
SPOILER
■ 01:07:275 (1) - Easy same the spacing issue here. - Same as Easy.

[Insane]

■ 00:14:025 (1) - Please consistency new combo. remove NC please
■ 00:18:975 (5) - ^
■ 00:28:575 (1) - ^
■ 00:32:475 (6) - Add New combo
■ 00:33:075 (1) - Remove New combo
■ 00:42:675 (1) - ^
■ 00:47:775 (1) - ^
■ 00:57:075 (1) - ^
■ 01:08:475 (6) - Add new combo here
■ 01:10:875 (6) - ^
■ 01:13:275 (6) - ^
■ 01:15:675 (6) - ^

- I fixed the unconsistent NC only~

Ovoui's Insane and Extra it's fine imo Good Luck

Thx for mod~

Zectro

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Zectro 2016-02-29T11:28:11+00:00

Hellooo M4M

[Enozho's Extra]

A visual thing is 00:23:475 (4,5,6,7,8) - can be curved better around 00:23:175 (3) -
00:24:825 (5) - 's sliderend is confusing because it ends on an important sound
00:30:225 (2,3,4,5) - This rythm would fit better imo: http://puu.sh/npAOX/2dab90e12e.jpg
00:43:125 (6) - to x240y219 works way better imo
This diff is pretty messy in general because all the hitobjects are extremely close together. Maybe you want to clean it up, that's up to you though

[Ovoui's Insane]

00:17:325 (2) - Should end at 00:17:475 -
00:18:450 (3) - There is a very important sound on this sliders' sliderend, which makes it very confusing.
00:18:825 (4,5,6,7) - Imo this rythm would work better http://puu.sh/npB9c/9ee6b387bc.jpg
You ignore a lot of sounds by placing sliders over them, like 00:37:275 (1) - . This does not work too well. I recommend you change this!

[Insane]
I feel like, instead of what you are currently doing, you should focus more on the melody in this diff, since the melody is incredibly loud but you still decide to focus on the drums.

Following the melody can be done by for example moving 00:02:775 (3) - to 00:02:700 - and deleting 00:02:625 (2) - . If you focus more on patterns like this and make it fit in the map it will turn out way better.

[Torpedo]

00:16:875 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1) - Stream shape/positioning/spacing is not visually appealing at all imo.
00:17:475 (9) - you can probably nc this if you want to
Uh I've noticed few of NC inconsistencies here, so let me try to help you:
NCs
00:22:725 (8) - NC
00:32:325 (8) - NC
I thought there were gonna be more but w/e
00:31:425 (2,3,4,5) - Uhh this does neither look good nor flow well
00:37:950 - skipping a sound here by putting a slider over it; confusing
01:06:075 (1,2,3) - You should probably NC these for clarity
01:11:625 - Skipping sound, and no, the slider shape does not make up for it because it's not even synced properly
Try to work on your stream shapes a bit more in this diff. Most of them are already good to go but a few longer ones like 00:16:875 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - have some parts that can be curved better etc, like 00:17:700 (12,13,14,15,16) - 00:16:875 (1,2,3) - 3

00:26:475 (1,2,3,4,5) - can be curved better

00:36:825 (11,12,13,14,15,16,1) - Can really have more consistent spacing, aswell as better curving

00:38:100 (6) - why is this behind the slider? D:

00:57:075 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - can also be curved better
00:58:125 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - ^

Good luck!

Ovoui

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Ovoui 2016-03-01T12:22:55+00:00

Zectro wrote:
Hellooo M4M

hello

[Ovoui's Insane]
00:17:325 (2) - Should end at 00:17:475 - no
00:18:450 (3) - There is a very important sound on this sliders' sliderend, which makes it very confusing. i will consider it, but it's ok how it is because i do not want to make a gap between 00:18:450 - 00:18:675 - to show the difference between those two moment : 00:18:450 - 00:18:675 ; 00:18:675 - 00:18:825
00:18:825 (4,5,6,7) - Imo this rythm would work better http://puu.sh/npB9c/9ee6b387bc.jpg no because i mapped on the vocal during the whole song
You ignore a lot of sounds by placing sliders over them, like 00:37:275 (1) - . This does not work too well. I recommend you change this! i'm allowed to undermap some stuff in insane^^

Good luck!

thanks for the mod !

Ozato Fumika

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Ozato Fumika 2016-03-03T13:56:23+00:00

double shioi

Nozhomi

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Nozhomi 2016-03-03T15:25:59+00:00

Zectro wrote:
Hellooo M4M

[Enozho's Extra]
A visual thing is 00:23:475 (4,5,6,7,8) - can be curved better around 00:23:175 (3) - - Done around (1) due to stacked notes.
00:24:825 (5) - 's sliderend is confusing because it ends on an important sound - Fixed
00:30:225 (2,3,4,5) - This rythm would fit better imo: http://puu.sh/npAOX/2dab90e12e.jpg - No because triplet fit on vocal.
00:43:125 (6) - to x240y219 works way better imo - Stacking them would break the dynamic of this part.
This diff is pretty messy in general because all the hitobjects are extremely close together. Maybe you want to clean it up, that's up to you though - Don't really thing that's messy ^^'
[Insane]
I feel like, instead of what you are currently doing, you should focus more on the melody in this diff, since the melody is incredibly loud but you still decide to focus on the drums.

Following the melody can be done by for example moving 00:02:775 (3) - to 00:02:700 - and deleting 00:02:625 (2) - . If you focus more on patterns like this and make it fit in the map it will turn out way better. - I prefer keep stuff like this, simply because focusing rhythm drums here is on purpose to have a low Insane, to fil the gap with Hard and Ovoui's Insane. Doing rhythm like you mention would be way too hard in the end, and that's not what I'm looking for.

[Torpedo]
00:16:875 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1) - Stream shape/positioning/spacing is not visually appealing at all imo. - Don't see any problem here.
00:17:475 (9) - you can probably nc this if you want to - K
Uh I've noticed few of NC inconsistencies here, so let me try to help you: - They are on purpose because of close NC soon after.
NCs
00:22:725 (8) - NC
00:32:325 (8) - NC
I thought there were gonna be more but w/e
00:31:425 (2,3,4,5) - Uhh this does neither look good nor flow well - Wtf happend here :/ fixed.
00:37:950 - skipping a sound here by putting a slider over it; confusing - Was on purpose to emphasis the sound in the middle.
01:06:075 (1,2,3) - You should probably NC these for clarity - Ok fair.
01:11:625 - Skipping sound, and no, the slider shape does not make up for it because it's not even synced properly - Follow vocal here that's good.
Try to work on your stream shapes a bit more in this diff. Most of them are already good to go but a few longer ones like 00:16:875 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - have some parts that can be curved better etc, like 00:17:700 (12,13,14,15,16) - 00:16:875 (1,2,3) - 3

00:26:475 (1,2,3,4,5) - can be curved better

00:36:825 (11,12,13,14,15,16,1) - Can really have more consistent spacing, aswell as better curving

00:38:100 (6) - why is this behind the slider? D:

00:57:075 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - can also be curved better
00:58:125 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - ^ - Fixed some of them.
Good luck!

Thx~

Enon

2,690 posts

Joined November 2012

Enon 2016-03-03T17:43:01+00:00

Zectro wrote:
Hellooo M4M

[Enozho's Extra]
00:43:125 (6) - to x240y219 works way better imo ✘ It would make this map more messy than now
This diff is pretty messy in general because all the hitobjects are extremely close together. Maybe you want to clean it up, that's up to you though ✘ I could be known my mapping skill is not good enough to satisfy for you(or more). However, Did you consider that if that was more far than now on this map? That'd clean than now, Really? I don't think like that?
Good luck!

thank you for modding!

Moeka wrote:
double shioi

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Last edited by Enon 2016-03-04T07:20:11+00:00, edited 5 times in total.

Enon

2,690 posts

Joined November 2012

Enon 2016-03-03T17:45:47+00:00

double posting

Aia

181 posts

Joined October 2013

Aia 2016-03-08T00:08:54+00:00

Exa wrote:
Hello, here I am again!

Aia's Hard:

00:01:275 (1,2) - This...
00:06:075 (1) - Is inconsistent with this! The first rhythm that you've used seems to work much better.
00:20:475 (3,4) - And this...
00:22:875 (6,7,8) - Is inconsistent with this. I get that this part is pretty monotone, but you've already provided a nice variety of rhythms that follow the song well. Now the least you can do is be consistent throughout this part.
00:29:475 (4) - How about doing something like this instead? Changing the horizontal direction while you advance upwards seems like a better way to "spice things up" than keeping an almost linear path. Of course you should select and move the patterns afterwards accordingly.
00:30:075 (7) - NC here...
00:32:475 (6) - And here. Up until now you kept your combos rather small, please continue to do that so there are no HP regain spikes.
00:34:875 (1,2,3,4) - Justifying the change of combos from before. Look at this one.
// Read but don't apply yet //
00:40:275 (8,9) - All of this should be a 1/4 reverse slider as is...
00:42:675 (8,9) - This one. There's even 1/4 bass beats in that which you skip atm.
00:45:075 (8,9) - And for the sake of consistency, again, change this accordingly.
00:49:875 (3,4) - I notice that you stay consistent throughout the kiais on that part. Which made me think twice if whether or not my suggestions to change the patterns before were right. Since you stay consistent, it's objectively ok; therfore it turns into a subjective matter. Try out the rhythms I suggested and if you don't like them, don't use them. But if you do use them, change the ones in the whole of the second kiai afterwards.
// Now you shall apply //
00:59:475 (8) - I would really like to see this as 2 1/2 sliders, one starting at this one's head and the other one at it's tail. Since it's clearly two separate sounds. Heck, there's even a strong enough beat on the red tick which you currently skip as it's in the body of the slider!
01:00:375 (2) - Be consistent! This should be 2 notes. (Or the notes before should be a 1/2 slider, both seem fine).
01:08:775 (6,7) - Either unstack those...
01:11:175 (7,8) - Or stack these ones. Stay kinetically consistent as well since you are given the option to.
01:13:575 (6,7) - After seeing that, I suggest that you better unstack the ones on my previous suggestion.
01:16:125 (8) - I also would rather see that become 2 1/2 sliders since there are two separate sounds contained within this one. One of them completely stops in the sliderbody if this slider, so it's unclear what it actually follows.

Too much writing if I start answering every single one separately, basically I don't agree with most things here since I've mapped everything the way I want it to be, everything follows something.

Fixed some of the inconsistencies though.

Gloria Guard wrote:
[Aia's Hard]

■ 00:01:725 (3) - I don't think the add 1/8 slider rhythm here, it's not. also I can't heard 1/8 rhythms.
I think, this section add 1/4 slider and repeat
■ 00:07:075 (1) - Why you this slider end to 00:00:300 here? I don't think it. I recommend this slider rhythm to drum
■ 00:09:375 (1) - Remove NC. You don't consistency NCs
■ 00:09:675 (2) - Add NC
■ 00:11:475 (3,4,5) - I think, this rhythm to follow electric(?) sound here. I just recommend this part add 1/2 sliders
SPOILER
■ 00:16:125 (3,4,5) - ^ Same
■ 00:54:975 (4) - Ctrl+G?
■ 00:58:875 (6,7,8) - You are ignore a lot of rhythm and Here are other beats are emphasized.
I recommend change this rhythms. You can try this
SPOILER
■ 01:01:425 (6,7,8) - ^
■ 01:03:675 (6,7,8) - The same this part rhythm issue

Your fix this diff NCs issue

SPOILER
00:19:875 (1) Remove NC.
00:20:475 (3) Add NC
00:22:875 (6) ^
00:23:475 (1) Remove NC
00:24:075 (3) Add NC
00:30:075 (7) ^
00:32:475 (6) ^
00:39:675 (6) ^
00:42:075 (6) ^
00:44:475 (6) ^
00:51:675 (6) ^
00:58:875 (6) ^
01:01:275 (5) ^

Basically don't agree with any of the "rhythm issues" you pointed out, I think the rhythm is just fine.

Nozhomi fixed NC issues.

Sorry for taking so long to answer D:

update

osu file format v14

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Nozhomi

Global Moderator

4,568 posts

Joined May 2013

Topic Starter

Nozhomi 2016-03-08T14:05:46+00:00

Aia diff updated.

If you think Aia didn't answer older mods than Exa recheck, it's because Aia did a remap so mod could not apply to the new version.

Stjpa

886 posts

Joined July 2013

Stjpa 2016-03-16T20:11:20+00:00

not a bn and not a pro modder but wanna give a mod anyway

[General]
Maybe rename Easy to Normal and Normal to Advanced? The Easy diff looks quite hard so it wouldn't be such a bad idea. (and sorry if somebody already suggested it, too lazy to read the other mods lol)

[Easy]
• 00:11:175 (3,4,1) - Isn't something like this unrankable in an Easy / Normal diffs? I mean (1) is visible really really early, a few seconds before you even click (3).
• 01:03:675 (2,1) - ^
• 01:07:275 (1,1) - Overlap is barely visible but fixing it isn't such a big thing though.

[Normal]
• 00:09:375 (5) - Feels better on the previous red tick imo. Kinda weird to map the second syllable of the word or whatever it is, first one is stronger anyway here.

[Aia's Hard]
• Might wanna check DS consistency? I see that you used a system here, but sometimes they are like more than 0,1x off, if I'm not mistaken. :v
• 00:50:775 (2,3) - 01:05:325 (3,4) - 01:12:075 (1,2) - So you pretty much mapped with (more or less, if the point above is right) constant DS but here you decided to emphasize a random sound for no reason. I might be wrong though, didn't read the previous mods.
• 01:07:275 - This part is just slighty less intense than the previous one but you decrease quite much. This also causes some weird overlaps like 01:10:275 (3,5) - 01:12:975 (4,6) -

[Insane]
• 00:02:925 (4,5,6) - Maybe a stronger "zigzag" flow? Music allows it so why not.
• 00:47:475 (3) - Why not at least a 1/2 slider here for the syllable?

[Ovoui's Insane]
• 01:09:075 - 01:13:875 - Wouldn't ignore these sounds, you can easily just add them atm. You mixed melody mapping with vocal mapping, and those 2 are a part of the melody so eh... D:

[Torpedo]
• 00:09:375 (7,8,9,10,1) - I know that it's symmetrical mapping right here but the spacing here just makes no sense at all. I keep missing here because the spacing is not supposed to be like this. :v

Nozhomi

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Topic Starter

Nozhomi 2016-03-17T15:31:01+00:00

Stjpa wrote:
not a bn and not a pro modder but wanna give a mod anyway

[General]
Maybe rename Easy to Normal and Normal to Advanced? The Easy diff looks quite hard so it wouldn't be such a bad idea. (and sorry if somebody already suggested it, too lazy to read the other mods lol) - Ok seems fair enough. Up OD and AR a little on purpose for the new diffname.

[Easy]
• 00:11:175 (3,4,1) - Isn't something like this unrankable in an Easy / Normal diffs? I mean (1) is visible really really early, a few seconds before you even click (3).
• 01:03:675 (2,1) - ^ - Both are ok, because the combo color helps to read the pattern.
• 01:07:275 (1,1) - Overlap is barely visible but fixing it isn't such a big thing though. - Fix

[Normal]
• 00:09:375 (5) - Feels better on the previous red tick imo. Kinda weird to map the second syllable of the word or whatever it is, first one is stronger anyway here. - It's worst, and drums are much stronger imo.

[Insane]
• 00:02:925 (4,5,6) - Maybe a stronger "zigzag" flow? Music allows it so why not. - Because a 1/4 reverse is way enough for a 'now' Insane.
• 00:47:475 (3) - Why not at least a 1/2 slider here for the syllable? - Same, it's just for the pattern and works.

[Torpedo]
• 00:09:375 (7,8,9,10,1) - I know that it's symmetrical mapping right here but the spacing here just makes no sense at all. I keep missing here because the spacing is not supposed to be like this. :v - Ok did a consistant DS for it.

Thx for the mod~

Aia

181 posts

Joined October 2013

Aia 2016-03-17T16:12:57+00:00

[Aia's Hard]
• Might wanna check DS consistency? I see that you used a system here, but sometimes they are like more than 0,1x off, if I'm not mistaken. :v
• 00:50:775 (2,3) - 01:05:325 (3,4) - 01:12:075 (1,2) - So you pretty much mapped with (more or less, if the point above is right) constant DS but here you decided to emphasize a random sound for no reason. I might be wrong though, didn't read the previous mods.
• 01:07:275 - This part is just slighty less intense than the previous one but you decrease quite much. This also causes some weird overlaps like 01:10:275 (3,5) - 01:12:975 (4,6) -

Fixed everything.

update

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Ovoui

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Ovoui 2016-03-17T16:14:21+00:00

Stjpa wrote:
[Ovoui's Insane]
• 01:09:075 - 01:13:875 - Wouldn't ignore these sounds, you can easily just add them atm. You mixed melody mapping with vocal mapping, and those 2 are a part of the melody so eh... D:

I don't feel that those two 1/1 gap are weird when i play the diff + when i try to put object 01:09:075 - 01:13:875 it's ankward to play

thanks for the mod btw

Nozhomi

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Nozhomi 2016-03-17T16:24:12+00:00

Updated~

Avishay

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Avishay 2016-03-17T18:03:50+00:00

BOSKIRI BOBOBO

[General]

01:16:275 (3) - (or the last slider in any diff for that matter) I strongly recommend ending that slider on the white tick at 01:16:575, since the vocals don't really end, they just get cut by the sound file, which makes it really odd, ending it on 01:16:575 plays great with the music itself and gives space for the vocals right afterwards.

[Normal]

00:44:475 (2) - Spacing needs to be consistent here, if you manage to get perfect alignment with 00:43:275 (1) - that'd be great.
01:15:975 (2) - Less crucial, but even spacing would be nicer. In addition, placing the circle in the right side of the sliders would be a better transition rather than current placement, something like this - http://puu.sh/nJVeT/71c4227537.jpg

[Advanced]

00:06:075 (3,4) - Perfect alignment would be nice.
Overall this diff is cool but it feels a bit too dense compared to the previous diff, but I guess it can't be avoided with that kind of song.

[Aia's Hard]

00:59:025 (2,3) - Felt awkward to play, yeah the instrument on the blue tick is stronger than the red tick, but it feels too long and 00:59:475 (3) - is too weak to pick up the previous rhythm, a solution could be imitating the rhythm from before http://puu.sh/nJXvg/4cd5bbfbcd.jpg Oh, this pattern repeats and appears again two times, and this comment applies to those as well, so if you decide to change anything here, please do for the others, as I checked those and my concerns could be applied to those as well.
01:06:525 (2) - Pretty random and doesn't go well with the song at all, there's nothing on the head of the slider, and there's a clear change of instruments in the middle of it, try this pattern instead - http://puu.sh/nJXLg/5e6f550c5a.jpg (deleting 4 here works too)
01:11:175 (6,7) - In comparasion to 01:08:775 (6,7) - (which gets supported by the vocals), this pattern does not get a clear support from neither the vocals nor instruments.
01:13:575 (6,7) - This is supported by the vocals, but I feel like mapping the next white tick is necessary to keep hold of the vocals, otherwise it's awkward.

[Insane]

00:03:825 (2,3) - Nothing suggests those sliders (actually something does, but that's really minor and the other instruments overtake it easily, anyway..), 5 repeats is not intuitive at all and it does not really fit the song, try this instead http://puu.sh/nJYdu/3d18a6cb4f.jpg
00:13:575 (3,5) - The blue ticks right after those sliders start are overmapped and this does not compliment this diff too much.. try this instead http://puu.sh/nJYqx/76abc76d04.jpg
00:18:375 (3,4) - This is definitely misleading, sightreading it felt like the beatgap was 1/4, the mapped objects are definitely strong, but audible 1/4 still exist inbetween those, so if you want to keep this pattern I'd suggest increasing the spacing so it won't be interpreted as 1/4.
00:22:725 (6) - Only sliderend as downbeat in this section, and honestly it doesn't play that well, I'd change the pattern here.

[Ovoui's Insane]

00:03:825 (2,3) - Same like at the Insane.
00:22:575 (7,8,1) - Yeah well uhm that's a bit too much fior an Insane, I am completely fine with 00:20:175 (7,8,1) - since the movement is well done, however here the movement has some really sharp turns and it's more hard than necessary. 00:24:975 (7,8,1) - 00:26:175 (7,8,1) - are just fine too.
00:27:375 (2) - http://puu.sh/nJZfR/1d0e4617a3.jpg Would be less confusing since there are no reverses on the second slider and it goes really well with the song! I suggest stacking the circles on the next slider.
00:35:775 (7,8,1) - Same like before, movement is poor. Furthermore, this looks really really tight overall, overlaps with too much stuff and doesn't look nice at all.
00:36:975 (2) - Like before as well.
00:37:275 (1) - Unnecessarily too long, compared to the last same slider, it should be 1/4 shorter and it does work better indeed.
00:44:175 (7,8,1) - Kinda okay, but I'd move it to something like this - http://puu.sh/nJZww/2ebd4afafb.jpg to make it more intuitive.
00:45:375 (7,8,1,2) - Like before blah blah.
00:54:975 (7,8,1,2) - Same (movement in the first objects here is really overkill)
00:56:475 (1,2,3) - What are you following here? It feels really odd to play.
00:59:025 (7,8) - 01:01:425 (7) - 01:03:825 (7) - etcetc - A triplet in the end would play much better.

[Enozho's Extra]

00:03:825 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Extra diff could use something much more interesting here, give attention to the stronger drums.
00:21:975 (3,4,5) - Sudden 1/2 only rhythm seem really inappropriate here, especially with the sliderend of 5, which should be pressable imo.
01:11:475 (7,1) - As 1 is overmapping anyway, starting the slider on 7 would be much nicer (and this way it sounds much better as a 2 beat stream rather than 1.5)
Really cool kiai, I love it.

[Torpedo]

00:09:675 (1,4,5,6) - Either stack those or avoid the weird overlap.
00:19:725 (3,4) - Talking generally about this pattern (sliders only, circles doubles were really fun), I can't say I enjoyed it, it just feel really odd with such a fast paced song, especially when they could have bigger spacing to support them.
00:55:275 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - Is that Monstrata hiding there?

Okoratu

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Okoratu 2016-03-17T18:23:55+00:00

I like how motivated new bns are

Nozhomi

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Nozhomi 2016-03-17T19:07:16+00:00

Okoratu wrote:
I like how motivated new bns are

I like you /me runs

Avishay wrote:
BOSKIRI BOBOBO - What is this lol XD

[General]
01:16:275 (3) - (or the last slider in any diff for that matter) I strongly recommend ending that slider on the white tick at 01:16:575, since the vocals don't really end, they just get cut by the sound file, which makes it really odd, ending it on 01:16:575 plays great with the music itself and gives space for the vocals right afterwards. - Ok fair and sounds k.
[Normal]
00:44:475 (2) - Spacing needs to be consistent here, if you manage to get perfect alignment with 00:43:275 (1) - that'd be great. - Wooooooooow wtf. Fixed.
01:15:975 (2) - Less crucial, but even spacing would be nicer. In addition, placing the circle in the right side of the sliders would be a better transition rather than current placement, something like this - http://puu.sh/nJVeT/71c4227537.jpg - So I did smth different because your slider was k before the general fix.
[Advanced]
00:06:075 (3,4) - Perfect alignment would be nice. - Well I don't really how to align them more than that.
Overall this diff is cool but it feels a bit too dense compared to the previous diff, but I guess it can't be avoided with that kind of song. - Yeah I tried to makes it simple as possible, but now it's Advanced, I think it fit quite well on the spread.
[Insane]
00:03:825 (2,3) - Nothing suggests those sliders (actually something does, but that's really minor and the other instruments overtake it easily, anyway..), 5 repeats is not intuitive at all and it does not really fit the song, try this instead http://puu.sh/nJYdu/3d18a6cb4f.jpg - Take your idea and adapted to mine :>
00:13:575 (3,5) - The blue ticks right after those sliders start are overmapped and this does not compliment this diff too much.. try this instead http://puu.sh/nJYqx/76abc76d04.jpg - Ok nice.
00:18:375 (3,4) - This is definitely misleading, sightreading it felt like the beatgap was 1/4, the mapped objects are definitely strong, but audible 1/4 still exist inbetween those, so if you want to keep this pattern I'd suggest increasing the spacing so it won't be interpreted as 1/4. - Yep should be better now.
00:22:725 (6) - Only sliderend as downbeat in this section, and honestly it doesn't play that well, I'd change the pattern here. - Agree, fixed.
[Enozho's Extra]
00:03:825 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Extra diff could use something much more interesting here, give attention to the stronger drums. - Tried something more interesting.
00:21:975 (3,4,5) - Sudden 1/2 only rhythm seem really inappropriate here, especially with the sliderend of 5, which should be pressable imo. - Yeah ok redo the pattern.
[Torpedo]
00:09:675 (1,4,5,6) - Either stack those or avoid the weird overlap. - Look what happend if I use stacking option http://puu.sh/nKnUp/79f99ed3d8.jpg .
00:19:725 (3,4) - Talking generally about this pattern (sliders only, circles doubles were really fun), I can't say I enjoyed it, it just feel really odd with such a fast paced song, especially when they could have bigger spacing to support them. - Well I think they're ok. The diff is already enough hard to have more added on it like spaced them. Should be ok no ?
00:55:275 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - Is that Monstrata hiding there? - LOL I wonder but no sadly I don't think so ^^'

Thx a lot ♥ Waiting for GDs~

Avishay wrote:
lazy prick

Ayyyyyyyyyyy #shotfired !!!

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Avishay

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Avishay 2016-03-17T22:41:06+00:00

Okoratu wrote:
I like how motivated new bns are

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Ovoui 2016-03-18T17:54:11+00:00

Avishay wrote:
BOSKIRI BOBOBO

[Ovoui's Insane]
00:03:825 (2,3) - Same like at the Insane. I do not agree with you, you can cleary hear some 1/4 sounds and a pitch change
00:22:575 (7,8,1) - Yeah well uhm that's a bit too much fior an Insane, I am completely fine with 00:20:175 (7,8,1) - since the movement is well done, however here the movement has some really sharp turns and it's more hard than necessary. 00:24:975 (7,8,1) - 00:26:175 (7,8,1) - are just fine too. It's a triangle so it should be ok
00:27:375 (2) - http://puu.sh/nJZfR/1d0e4617a3.jpg Would be less confusing since there are no reverses on the second slider and it goes really well with the song! I suggest stacking the circles on the next slider. It's not really confused because it follows the music + it's consistent, moreover it's really easy to play thanks to the ar9imo
00:35:775 (7,8,1) - Same like before, movement is poor. Furthermore, this looks really really tight overall, overlaps with too much stuff and doesn't look nice at all. Why it does not lokk nice ?
00:36:975 (2) - Like before as well.
00:37:275 (1) - Unnecessarily too long, compared to the last same slider, it should be 1/4 shorter and it does work better indeed. The slider is folowing a held sound + there's a sound here 00:37:800 - so it's ok i think
00:44:175 (7,8,1) - Kinda okay, but I'd move it to something like this - http://puu.sh/nJZww/2ebd4afafb.jpg to make it more intuitive. it'll break the stack with 00:44:175 (7,4) -
00:45:375 (7,8,1,2) - Like before blah blah. i don't see any problem here, Triangles are ok, isn't them ?
00:54:975 (7,8,1,2) - Same (movement in the first objects here is really overkill)
00:56:475 (1,2,3) - What are you following here? It feels really odd to play. Fixed the rhythm
00:59:025 (7,8) - 01:01:425 (7) - 01:03:825 (7) - etcetc - A triplet in the end would play much better. i wanted to only map the vocal here

thanks for the mod, sorry the amount of red :c
It's not like i do not want to change anything, you did not give me explanations enough to convince me

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Last edited by Ovoui 2016-03-19T19:12:06+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Rumia-

2,513 posts

Joined July 2012

Rumia- 2016-03-19T12:06:30+00:00

[General]
offset should be 82

[Torpedo]
this diff has a lot of stacks , i suggest to use stack leniency 5 , would totally make your stacks looks more tidy
00:17:475 (1) - remove nc to keep consistency with 00:27:075 (9) - , 00:36:675 (9) - ,00:46:275 (9) - ,00:55:875 (9) - .
00:23:482 (1,2,3,4,5) - why are these 1.2x , and 00:33:082 (1,2,3,4,5) - are 1.0x? make them similar ds
00:31:732 (5) - suggest you move this near to 00:32:182 (7) - , the beat is strong , require more spacing from prev object , maybe you can place them like this http://puu.sh/nM2mR.jpg would look symmetry and plays better
00:22:132 (5,6) - and 00:34:132 (5,6) - this gap is misleading , plz add more spacing ,it looks like 1/2 .. 00:19:732 (3,4) - spacing like this should be fine
00:42:682 (1,2) - suggestion , psychological matter , it makes it easier to read

SPOILER

00:56:625 (2,3,4,5) - according to the song it should be a continuous stream until 00:57:675 - suggest to change it to some kick slider would fit the part even better
00:57:082 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - untidy circular stream pattern , can do better
01:16:425 (9) - i think you picked the wrong instrument , 01:16:425 - the sound that starts here should end at 01:16:575 - instead , the cute fart sound ( lol , starts at 01:16:275 -

hand buffer

[Enozho]
00:04:200 - imo it makes no sense to ignore , suggest to split this into 2 1/4 sliders would fit the song more
00:03:975 (4) - same as abov
00:29:100 (2) - you catched this , so why not 00:29:550 - here too , can just stack on 5
00:31:950 - same as above
00:34:350 - ^
00:42:600 (3) - imo better just delete this , give a bit room + gives better transition , like you did at 00:52:125 (2,3) - is nice
00:47:175 (3,4,5,6,7) - move this more to the left side ,so distance between 00:47:475 (7,1) - is not confused

cool speedups

[Ovoui]
00:01:875 (3,4) - cool pattern but i feel like the beat is better to map it like this instead , just a suggestion though , also at 00:06:675 (3,4) - too

SPOILER

00:03:825 (2) - maybe try this rhythm?

SPOILER

00:13:425 (2) - ^ , but maybe instead of 2 circle , can use 1/4 slider too
00:24:975 (7,8,1) - keep the ds consistent
00:26:475 (1) - hmm this rhythm is particularly wrong it should be like

SPOILER

cool patterns , just some beat choices bugs me a little xD

[Insane]
00:20:175 (5,4) - stack them ?

nothing to suggest , pretty solid to me

[Aia's]
00:03:975 (3,4,5) - make them look equal spacing
01:06:525 (2) - this should be on white tick just like 00:59:475 (3) - , suggest you to add a circle on the current red tick instead

gl~
i managed not to lazy \o/

Aia

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Joined October 2013

Aia 2016-03-19T19:11:26+00:00

Avishay wrote:
[Aia's Hard]
00:59:025 (2,3) - Felt awkward to play, yeah the instrument on the blue tick is stronger than the red tick, but it feels too long and 00:59:475 (3) - is too weak to pick up the previous rhythm, a solution could be imitating the rhythm from before http://puu.sh/nJXvg/4cd5bbfbcd.jpg Oh, this pattern repeats and appears again two times, and this comment applies to those as well, so if you decide to change anything here, please do for the others, as I checked those and my concerns could be applied to those as well.
01:06:525 (2) - Pretty random and doesn't go well with the song at all, there's nothing on the head of the slider, and there's a clear change of instruments in the middle of it, try this pattern instead - http://puu.sh/nJXLg/5e6f550c5a.jpg (deleting 4 here works too)
01:11:175 (6,7) - In comparasion to 01:08:775 (6,7) - (which gets supported by the vocals), this pattern does not get a clear support from neither the vocals nor instruments. I can definitely hear the sound to which this one is mapped to.
01:13:575 (6,7) - This is supported by the vocals, but I feel like mapping the next white tick is necessary to keep hold of the vocals, otherwise it's awkward.

Rumia- wrote:
[Aia's]
00:03:975 (3,4,5) - make them look equal spacing I actually like it reducing by just a bit, I made it better than it was.
01:06:525 (2) - this should be on white tick just like 00:59:475 (3) - , suggest you to add a circle on the current red tick instead

Everything but the ones I wrote on fixed.

update

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: 401.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 19123
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.65
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.7

[Metadata]
Title:168 - 401
TitleUnicode:168 - 401
Artist:saradisk
ArtistUnicode:saradisk
Creator:Nozhomi
Version:Aia's Hard
Source:艦隊これくしょん -艦これ-
Tags:kancolle kantai collection shioi Aia Ovoui Enon
BeatmapID:817720
BeatmapSetID:366079

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5.6
CircleSize:3.5
OverallDifficulty:6.5
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"401.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Enon

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Enon 2016-03-19T20:42:52+00:00

Avishay wrote:
BOSKIRI BOBOBO

[Enozho's Extra]
01:11:475 (7,1) - As 1 is overmapping anyway, starting the slider on 7 would be much nicer (and this way it sounds much better as a 2 beat stream rather than 1.5) ✔ I moved (1) to 01:11:482 - and made longer than before
FIXED
Really cool kiai, I love it. thank you

Rumia- wrote:
[Enozho]
00:42:600 (3) - imo better just delete this , give a bit room + gives better transition , like you did at 00:52:125 (2,3) - is nice ✔ Okay, I gonna follow 00:52:125 (2,3)
00:47:175 (3,4,5,6,7) - move this more to the left side ,so distance between 00:47:475 (7,1) - is not confused ✔ Well, I fixed these stuffs in my way

cool speedups XD

gl~
i managed not to lazy \o/

Thanks for modding

Nozhomi

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Nozhomi 2016-03-19T21:10:46+00:00

Rumia- wrote:
[General]
offset should be 82 - Sure moe~

[Torpedo]
this diff has a lot of stacks , i suggest to use stack leniency 5 , would totally make your stacks looks more tidy - Fix
00:17:475 (1) - remove nc to keep consistency with 00:27:075 (9) - , 00:36:675 (9) - ,00:46:275 (9) - ,00:55:875 (9) - . - Fix
00:23:482 (1,2,3,4,5) - why are these 1.2x , and 00:33:082 (1,2,3,4,5) - are 1.0x? make them similar ds - Fix
00:31:732 (5) - suggest you move this near to 00:32:182 (7) - , the beat is strong , require more spacing from prev object , maybe you can place them like this http://puu.sh/nM2mR.jpg would look symmetry and plays better - Fix
00:22:132 (5,6) - and 00:34:132 (5,6) - this gap is misleading , plz add more spacing ,it looks like 1/2 .. 00:19:732 (3,4) - spacing like this should be fine
00:42:682 (1,2) - suggestion , psychological matter , it makes it easier to read - Fix
SPOILER
00:56:625 (2,3,4,5) - according to the song it should be a continuous stream until 00:57:675 - suggest to change it to some kick slider would fit the part even better - Fix
00:57:082 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - untidy circular stream pattern , can do better - Fix as much as I can.
01:16:425 (9) - i think you picked the wrong instrument , 01:16:425 - the sound that starts here should end at 01:16:575 - instead , the cute fart sound ( lol , starts at 01:16:275 - - WOOOOPS fixed.

hand buffer

[Enozho]
00:04:200 - imo it makes no sense to ignore , suggest to split this into 2 1/4 sliders would fit the song more - Fix
00:03:975 (4) - same as abov - Fix
00:29:100 (2) - you catched this , so why not 00:29:550 - here too , can just stack on 5 - Fix
00:31:950 - same as above - Fix
00:34:350 - ^ - Fix

cool speedups

[Ovoui]
00:01:875 (3,4) - cool pattern but i feel like the beat is better to map it like this instead , just a suggestion though , also at 00:06:675 (3,4) - too - I prefer keep the patterns live ^^
SPOILER
00:03:825 (2) - maybe try this rhythm? - I think week it like other reverse is better.
SPOILER
00:13:425 (2) - ^ , but maybe instead of 2 circle , can use 1/4 slider too - Keep it like that.
00:24:975 (7,8,1) - keep the ds consistent - It is right...?
00:26:475 (1) - hmm this rhythm is particularly wrong it should be like - Really nice one.
SPOILER

cool patterns , just some beat choices bugs me a little xD - Ovoui authorize me to fix his diff so there you go.

[Insane]
00:20:175 (5,4) - stack them ? - Fix

nothing to suggest , pretty solid to me

gl~
i managed not to lazy \o/

GG Rumia ♥ and thx~
Every diffs updated !

Avishay

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Avishay 2016-03-20T14:36:26+00:00

Recheck time!

[Advanced]

00:25:732 (2,3,4,1) - I am not 100% sure it's suitable for new players, it does go well with the music, but if you are not insistent on having it I'll suggest something more friendly.

[Aia's Hard]

00:03:982 (3,4,5) - Consistent spacing would make it look and play much nicer.

[Ovoui's Insane]

00:26:482 (1,2,3) - Spacing looks like 1/4, quite misleading, an easy solution would be rotating those sliders to something similar to this http://puu.sh/nNlJZ/0e95229b15.jpg

[Enozho's Extra]

01:16:432 (2) - For some reason this was changed in all other diffs except this, use a circle or snap it to the previous white tick.

Everything is alright!

Nozhomi

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Nozhomi 2016-03-20T15:30:06+00:00

Everything fixed~
Tell me if the change in advance and Ovoui's Insane is ok.

Thx :3

Avishay

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Avishay 2016-03-20T16:13:29+00:00

BO BO BO BOSKIRI (I need lyrics for this plz t.t)

LETS DO THIS

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