1. Winter (5.52 stars, 1229 notes)

Gear wrote:

Nice one

[Sc4v4ng3r] wrote:

Oh I will not lose to that, incoming star stream~
And yea, GL with the map Love this song a lot

AdielAdrellos wrote:

http://miyuki-yoshiharu.deviantart.com/art/BiBi-Fuyu-ga-Kureta-Yokan-503823294

Suggestion for map BG

1. 00:43:471 (4,1) – I think you should reverse the order of these (place the circle at 00:43:471 and slider at 00:43:624; the beat at 00:43:624 is stronger than the beat at 00:43:777, so I think it should be clickable
   
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   basically do this instead
   
2. 00:45:920 (4,1) – ^; reverse order of these as well
3. 00:54:032 (4) – I don’t think this beat is very strong, and thus making it a circle isn’t the best choice in my opinion; maybe make 00:53:879 (3) a 1/4 slider?
   
4. 00:55:562 (4) – I don’t think the 1/8 slider makes sense here; I’m fairly certain the whistles start at 00:55:715 (5). At the very least, don’t make the (4) a 1/8 slider
5. 00:58:930 (4) – Similar suggestion to 00:54:032 (4)
6. 01:01:379 (4) – ^
7. 01:05:511 (4,1) – Similar suggestion to 00:43:471 (4,1)
8. 01:14:389 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) – I know this is a stream, but the combo count here is really long and inconsistent with how your combo placement is done throughout the song. Maybe place a new combo at the (9)?
9. 01:16:226 (1) – This new combo is fine, but in my opinion, I think having no new combo here would fit the song better? I don’t think there’s a need to emphasize this point, but it’s your call
10. 01:20:358 (1,2) – Similar suggestion to 00:43:471 (4,1); if you take this suggestion, fix the new combo so that it starts at 01:20:511
11. 01:27:552 (4,1) – I think combining these into a 1/2 slider would fit the rhythm more nicely, but what you have is also fine, so you don’t really need to take this suggestion
12. 01:30:920 (4,5) – I think combining these into a 1/4 slider would be a better idea, since the beat at 01:31:073 (5) isn’t strong enough that it should be clickable, in my opinion
13. 01:39:950 (1,2) – Similar suggestion to 01:20:358 (1,2)
14. 01:47:144 (4,1) – Similar suggestion to 01:27:552 (4,1)
15. 01:50:511 (4,5) – Similar suggestion to 01:30:920 (4,5)
16. 02:10:715 (1,4) – Are the slider ends here intentionally not stacked? ._.
17. 02:18:522 (2,3) – Maybe reverse the order of these (slider first, then circle). You were following the piano before, now you follow the guitar; it’s a little jarring in my opinion
18. 02:20:971 (2,3) – ^
19. 02:23:420 (2,3) – ^
20. 02:36:124 (4,1) – ^; similar reasoning to why I suggested it at 00:43:471 (4,1)
21. 02:38:573 (4,1) – ^
22. 02:48:215 (4) – Similar suggestion to 00:55:562 (4)
23. 03:08:879 (1) – Again, I think NC is unnecessary, but it works, so it’s your call
24. 03:13:011 (1,2) – Yeah same thing as 01:20:358 (1,2)
25. 03:20:205 (4,1) – Same thing as 01:27:552 (4,1)
26. 03:23:573 (4,5) – Same thing as 01:30:920 (4,5)
27. 03:32:756 (1) – I think making this a 1/2 slider rather than a repeat 1/4 slider is a better idea, mainly because it’s consistent with the slowed down parts like 03:29:083 (1), but it’s up to you
28. 03:38:879 (1,2,3,4) – I think this part is being overmapped; I’m not hearing any beats at 03:39:644. Maybe try something like this?
    
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    for reference the (1) in the image is at 03:38:879
    
29. 03:41:328 (1,2,3,4) – ^
30. 03:43:777 (1,2,3,4) – ^
31. 03:46:838 (3,4) – I think combining these into a 1/4 slider would help it flow into the stream a lot nicer; it’s feeling a little segmented right now
32. 03:51:124 (1,2) – Reverse order (circle first, then 1/4 slider) yadayadayada
33. 03:52:042 (5,1) – ^
34. 04:32:144 (1) – See this NC makes sense because it’s highlighting and emphasizing the clap you have on it
35. 04:36:277 (1,2) – Oh hey same thing as 01:20:358 (1,2)
36. 04:43:471 (4,1) – Basically the same thing I suggested at 01:27:552 (4,1)
37. 04:51:736 (9) – NC here to fix that ridiculously long stream combo
38. 05:06:430 (5,6) – Very close to each other to the point where they’re almost touching; I’d move them a little farther apart but it’s up to you
39. 05:11:634 (6,7) – Make these into a 1/4 slider to help the player ease into the slowed down part? I think the current transition from fast to slow is a little bit much
40. 05:19:279 (1) – Maybe you can have this spinner quietly fade out, e.g. 40% -> 30% -> 20% -> 10% or something like that

Doormat wrote:

Hey, from my NM queue- sorry this took so long! Got caught up with school and Fallout 4 lol hey sorry for the late reply

Winter

1. 00:43:471 (4,1) – I think you should reverse the order of these (place the circle at 00:43:471 and slider at 00:43:624; the beat at 00:43:624 is stronger than the beat at 00:43:777, so I think it should be clickable nope, if u reduce the playback rate to 25%, there's no beat there, the beat is silenced,
   
   SPOILER

   basically do this instead
   
2. 00:45:920 (4,1) – ^; reverse order of these as well ^
3. 00:54:032 (4) – I don’t think this beat is very strong, and thus making it a circle isn’t the best choice in my opinion; maybe make 00:53:879 (3) a 1/4 slider? I'll need more opinion on this before changing, bcoz i use small spacing here to indicate the weak beat
   
4. 00:55:562 (4) – I don’t think the 1/8 slider makes sense here; I’m fairly certain the whistles start at 00:55:715 (5). At the very least, don’t make the (4) a 1/8 slider nope, reduce to 25% speed LOL, u will definitely hear the whistles here, although its a bit soft compare to the rest
5. 00:58:930 (4) – Similar suggestion to 00:54:032 (4) ^
6. 01:01:379 (4) – ^ ^
7. 01:05:511 (4,1) – Similar suggestion to 00:43:471 (4,1) yeah this time it has beat, but a weak beat, so i think its ok to let it be a slider end
8. 01:14:389 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) – I know this is a stream, but the combo count here is really long and inconsistent with how your combo placement is done throughout the song. Maybe place a new combo at the (9)? fixed
9. 01:16:226 (1) – This new combo is fine, but in my opinion, I think having no new combo here would fit the song better? I don’t think there’s a need to emphasize this point, but it’s your call I 'll leave it here first then, see what other modders will say about this
10. 01:20:358 (1,2) – Similar suggestion to 00:43:471 (4,1); if you take this suggestion, fix the new combo so that it starts at 01:20:511 I prefer this rhythm, bcoz of i heard both of the point on the slider have constant beat, and its to build up bfore the 3 continuously strong beat after this slider
11. 01:27:552 (4,1) – I think combining these into a 1/2 slider would fit the rhythm more nicely, but what you have is also fine, so you don’t really need to take this suggestion ok, i'll think about this,
12. 01:30:920 (4,5) – I think combining these into a 1/4 slider would be a better idea, since the beat at 01:31:073 (5) isn’t strong enough that it should be clickable, in my opinion I just want to have variety of rhythm instead of all copy pasta rhythm, and i've use smaller spacing for this to shows the weak beat here
13. 01:39:950 (1,2) – Similar suggestion to 01:20:358 (1,2) ^
14. 01:47:144 (4,1) – Similar suggestion to 01:27:552 (4,1) ^
15. 01:50:511 (4,5) – Similar suggestion to 01:30:920 (4,5) ^
16. 02:10:715 (1,4) – Are the slider ends here intentionally not stacked? ._. ok fixed, although rip blanket LOL
17. 02:18:522 (2,3) – Maybe reverse the order of these (slider first, then circle). You were following the piano before, now you follow the guitar; it’s a little jarring in my opinion tbh, i prefer the current rhythm, it covers all of the strong sound, as for the previous one , its bcoz it dont have the guitar sound, so i cant really follow,
18. 02:20:971 (2,3) – ^ ^
19. 02:23:420 (2,3) – ^ ^
20. 02:36:124 (4,1) – ^; similar reasoning to why I suggested it at 00:43:471 (4,1) ^
21. 02:38:573 (4,1) – ^ ^
22. 02:48:215 (4) – Similar suggestion to 00:55:562 (4) ^
23. 03:08:879 (1) – Again, I think NC is unnecessary, but it works, so it’s your call I'll think about it
24. 03:13:011 (1,2) – Yeah same thing as 01:20:358 (1,2) ^
25. 03:20:205 (4,1) – Same thing as 01:27:552 (4,1) ^
26. 03:23:573 (4,5) – Same thing as 01:30:920 (4,5) ^
27. 03:32:756 (1) – I think making this a 1/2 slider rather than a repeat 1/4 slider is a better idea, mainly because it’s consistent with the slowed down parts like 03:29:083 (1), but it’s up to you I'll think about this >< , need more opinion bfore i change this
28. 03:38:879 (1,2,3,4) – I think this part is being overmapped; I’m not hearing any beats at 03:39:644. Maybe try something like this? tbh, i think its ok, since its not a circle, its the slider end, slider end dont emphasizes anything
    
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    for reference the (1) in the image is at 03:38:879
    
29. 03:41:328 (1,2,3,4) – ^ ^
30. 03:43:777 (1,2,3,4) – ^ ^
31. 03:46:838 (3,4) – I think combining these into a 1/4 slider would help it flow into the stream a lot nicer; it’s feeling a little segmented right now maybe no, bcoz i want to emphasizes (3) more, and i think (4) has strong beat, it need jump for emphasizing
32. 03:51:124 (1,2) – Reverse order (circle first, then 1/4 slider) yadayadayada fixed
33. 03:52:042 (5,1) – ^ fixed but a little different
34. 04:32:144 (1) – See this NC makes sense because it’s highlighting and emphasizing the clap you have on it yeah
35. 04:36:277 (1,2) – Oh hey same thing as 01:20:358 (1,2) ^
36. 04:43:471 (4,1) – Basically the same thing I suggested at 01:27:552 (4,1) ^
37. 04:51:736 (9) – NC here to fix that ridiculously long stream combo fixed
38. 05:06:430 (5,6) – Very close to each other to the point where they’re almost touching; I’d move them a little farther apart but it’s up to you mm, maybe no, i dont want to mess up the stacking
39. 05:11:634 (6,7) – Make these into a 1/4 slider to help the player ease into the slowed down part? I think the current transition from fast to slow is a little bit much nope, since this is the end of the kiai, i want to make it exciting
40. 05:19:279 (1) – Maybe you can have this spinner quietly fade out, e.g. 40% -> 30% -> 20% -> 10% or something like that okay

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Haha, again sorry it’s so late. Hope this helps

samosita wrote:

hi short nm from #modreqs

:3

[Winter]

1. 00:05:205 (1,1) - maybe stack? spaced out will be better imo, that sound is strong
2. 00:56:022 (7,1) - distance and flow is a bit weird here since you started to map the drums at (1) i think it should have a different spacing as 00:55:562 (4,5,6,7) it is similar to this 02:48:215 (4,5,6,7,1) - but yea, i might change this whole pattern tbh, sometimes they're hard to play xD,anyway will think about this
3. 00:57:246 (1) - curve this a bit since you did the same for the other finishes i think they're fine and some slider variations will be nice imo xD
4. 01:02:144 (1) - ^ ^
5. 01:11:940 (1) - ^ plus it had vocals^
6. 01:15:307 - strong vocal here so i think replace 01:15:307 (3,4) with slider same as 01:15:613 (1,2) the instruments sound is still here,
   its better to map them imo, compare to 01:15:613 (1,2) - that instrument sound has ended, thus 1/2 slider
7. 03:07:960 (1) - same^^
8. 01:24:185 (1) - curve this like 01:19:287 (1) i think they're fine imo
9. 01:29:083 (1) - slider i too curvy to emphasize that sound i'll think about it, its fine to me tbh, lets see what others wil say about this

Mir wrote:

hi
[Winter]
- 00:23:879 (4,1) - Probably you can make here a reverse because 00:24:185 - feels like it's mapped to nothing due to 00:24:338 - being a drum and whatnot. i'll think about this, its fine now imo. will see what others say about this
- 00:32:756 (1,2,3) - I have an issue with this mainly cuz the guitar is 4 distinct notes that would be quite nice if mapped with circles. There's also 00:33:062 (2) - which has 2 vocals on it. Essentially I'm suggesting just use 4 circles here and use a slider on 00:33:368 - applied for all 00:35:205 (1,2,3) - etc i'll keep this i guess, single tapping 4 notes in a row is a bit much in such a calm part imo.
- 00:53:573 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - The synth in the back stops but you have the same spacing as 00:48:828 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - even tho intensity suddenly dropped. I recommend nerfing spacing here. Same for 00:58:471 - and so on fixed, nerfed them
- 00:55:562 (4) - Circle here since the chimes don't start until 00:55:715 - the chimes is actually there, i've listened to it very carefully and confirmed it a few times, its there, lower the effect and u will hear it.
- 01:17:756 (4,1,2) - Ctrl+g rhythm for vocals might work nicer but up to you I guess. will think about this, i dont want to skip that clickable rhythm on 01:18:215 (2) -
- 01:53:573 - Whistle. fixed
All this stuff repeats until after second kiai.

- 03:38:266 (1) - Remove NC? 03:38:879 - Loses relevance cuz if that being NCd imo.
- 03:54:491 - Guitar is soft but PP jumps nice. will nerf it abit i guess xD
- 04:01:838 (6,7,1) - Pixel overlap :gun:did something :s
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