Misato Aki - Glitter · forum

Misure

951 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

Misure 2015-11-10T11:30:18+00:00

update

Fushimi Rio

Fushimi Rio 2015-11-10T16:10:53+00:00

等等啊 video不是露胖次了
啊顺便我忘了加video

video video video video video video

233 我的意思是我拼错了一万次video这个词不是在催你

Last edited by Fushimi Rio 2015-11-11T13:56:46+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Misure

951 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

Misure 2015-11-10T16:18:36+00:00

imoutosan wrote:
等等啊 vedio是不是露胖次了
啊顺便我忘了加vedio

纳尼不是不露欧派就行passable吗(๑• . •๑)
视频随手加啊
vedio这词怎么看上去这么别扭

Feb

1,027 posts

Joined June 2014

Feb 2015-11-10T17:31:41+00:00

yo man m4m

will prolly point out cruel stuff which can be fixed - everything else should be cool. I'm not really that cringy about blankets and stuff so yeah.

[General]

everythings fine

[imouto]

at least od8 as it has higher sr than misures insane.

00:22:353 (3) - yo i think you wanted this stacked no?
00:33:020 (7) - no nc for new pattern? I mean i usually don't care to much in higher diffs, but i think this needs a nc
01:11:936 (6) - idk just to grant better visibility to that spacing you should nc this like you did before.

[insane]

00:53:353 (2) - are you sure you wanna stack it? it kinda breaks the flow
01:11:519 (1) - you kinda have to know this is not a circle on first try. Super hard to see the pattern would flow with regular 1/4 shape tho lel, welp i thnk it's fine tho, just pointing it out as it might be a concerning point for an BN idk lol

[narcissu insane]

00:54:186 (2) - kinda hard to tell you map vocals suddenly same one later. i think you should just regular map the beats.

yo man cool diff.

[garden insane]

00:08:520 (5) - yo man its super awkward to play a strong beat on slidertail pls just 00:08:187 (3,4,5) - ctrl+g this one and you fine.
00:10:853 (4) - stack it?
01:10:519 (7,8,1) - i think the last time i saw a double on a circle was ... right never. I am not quite sure ppl can read this as a double and 1 note. I'd just space 7 away and making it a stop for 8 on this note.

[hard]

00:11:520 (2) - theres no beat on sliderhead to map to. 00:11:353 (1) - 1/1 or 1/2 and note instead.
00:16:020 (2,3,4) - about that I have no idea if triplets are allowed if they are lonely in hard diffs.
00:17:437 (3,4) - geez i'd would avoid this in lower diffs just bcs ppl can't read this much...
00:27:353 (1) - I think you need at least 1/1 beat recovery according to RC.
t/241019
00:49:353 (2) - would flow better if you stack it on 00:49:520 (1) -
01:00:519 (4,1) - yo man those shapes don't fit quite the way you want. I don't usually care about shapes but this is not good looking.
01:17:019 (4) - when playfield is to short sth like this happens.

01:18:853 (5) - no sound on the head again. same like the last time. Check the other times where this sound is similar bcs the red tick before is more potent than anything else in that section.

[Normal]

00:24:520 (3) - shape of the slider is not really visible as you curved it to much - change it as far as I know this is not very "liked" in lower diffs.
00:29:853 (3) - ^same just check on all.
01:11:519 (6) - don't end the beat on slidertail plssssss

[narcissu easy]

00:08:520 (3,4) - I'm not quite sure stacks are allowed in easy diffs. I don't think they are. I heard they are "okay" in advanced diffs, but this is not even an normal tho...

rythm wise this is absolutely fine tho.

good luck mate. have a star as well as u gave me one too lel

Misure

951 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

Misure 2015-11-11T11:09:22+00:00

Feb wrote:
yo man m4m

will prolly point out cruel stuff which can be fixed - everything else should be cool. I'm not really that cringy about blankets and stuff so yeah.

[General]

everythings fine

[insane]

00:53:353 (2) - are you sure you wanna stack it? it kinda breaks the flow yea I'm sure here after a long after a long time thinking
01:11:519 (1) - you kinda have to know this is not a circle on first try. Super hard to see the pattern would flow with regular 1/4 shape tho lel, welp i thnk it's fine tho, just pointing it out as it might be a concerning point for an BN idk lol well I think it's fun, will check it with BN later. ty for pointing out

[hard]

00:11:520 (2) - theres no beat on sliderhead to map to. 00:11:353 (1) - 1/1 or 1/2 and note instead. yea reverse slider and note
00:16:020 (2,3,4) - about that I have no idea if triplets are allowed if they are lonely in hard diffs. I think I have played patterns like these in Hard diffs many times lol
00:17:437 (3,4) - geez i'd would avoid this in lower diffs just bcs ppl can't read this much... ^ and it goes well with the rhythm isn't it?
00:27:353 (1) - I think you need at least 1/1 beat recovery according to RC. Got it! change the spinner to a long slider (tho I didn't get a proper shape yet)
t/241019
00:49:353 (2) - would flow better if you stack it on 00:49:520 (1) - whatever imo, preserve for now
01:00:519 (4,1) - yo man those shapes don't fit quite the way you want. I don't usually care about shapes but this is not good looking. however.. it's fine for me... can't understand ;_;
01:17:019 (4) - when playfield is to short sth like this happens. I think it's not bad
01:18:853 (5) - no sound on the head again. same like the last time. Check the other times where this sound is similar bcs the red tick before is more potent than anything else in that section. will do something... reserve this time (I'm lazy) ;_;

[Normal]

00:24:520 (3) - shape of the slider is not really visible as you curved it to much - change it as far as I know this is not very "liked" in lower diffs. I think it's fine maybe
00:29:853 (3) - ^same just check on all. maybe fine for me... wll will considerate them more, if it's surely confirmed as a problem, will fix them
01:11:519 (6) - don't end the beat on slidertail plssssss okkkkkkkkkkkkkkk

good luck mate. have a star as well as u gave me one too lel

thank you sir!
thx for mod

Misure

951 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

Misure 2015-11-11T11:29:16+00:00

imoutosan wrote:
等等啊 video不是露胖次了
啊顺便我忘了加video

video video video video video video

233 我的意思是我拼错了一万次video这个词不是在催你

啊我没当成你在催我啊 233
话说不就是露个胖次吗，感觉作为一个gal的OP不露点已经是很难得了（思考）

Shad0w1and

1,588 posts

Joined April 2011

Shad0w1and 2015-11-13T13:30:24+00:00

[imouto]
00:06:520 (2,3) - 没有节奏支撑的高DS，(3,4)还行
00:12:187 (5,6) - 总之我觉得这个梗有点反人类，而且遮挡太多有点危险
00:23:520 (9,1) - nc swap
00:25:853 (1,3) - ^，不如说这里用这个梗不是很合曲
00:28:520 (2) - 略危险
00:29:353 - 鼓声放过么？
00:34:187 (1) - ？这也是么
01:09:353 (5) - 4.7 DS不和曲

[Insane]
00:03:020 (4,1) - 之间真不加东西就应该重叠。(1)不是重音你给的高DS不和曲
00:04:187 (4) - 此处滑条DS前后翻倍过分了，减少一点比较好（你听听背景不是重音啊）
00:08:187 (3,4) - 对调吧。。那个三连你放成这样节奏没对啊，00:10:853 (3) - 这里你又对了。。
00:14:020 (5,1) - ^
00:14:687 - 这是琴音的位置，填上
00:18:520 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - 这一段的音效太乱了。。听不懂。。不如说这段安静的地方你的音效节奏感不强不如不下
00:53:353 (2) - 滑条尾部的note是切断flow用的，也就是说在一段音乐完成后准备下一个小节才用，在背景音这种情况会如鲠在喉

00:43:520 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 建议重下节奏，具体可以参考nichiyouki的难度的下法和Narcissu的下法（imouto是在创节奏，我建议先别碰那玩意，他的好歹走形状路线，但你的图基本没有任何支撑硬打下来是乱的）
00:51:519 (1,2) - 没跟鼓没跟人声
00:56:852 (1,2,3,4) - ^
每个note都必须有意义，问题有点大。。

[Narcissu Insane]
00:06:853 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 太吵了拉，降低音量也好
00:07:187 (6,7,8,1) - 三连接大跳即使是滑条我觉得也有点过高了一点，降低一点点会好些*
00:54:186 (2) - 如鲠在喉，否则nc
00:57:852 (2,3,4) - 不完美，再微调一下角度
01:04:185 (1,2) - 和前面一样
总之很好，除了两个空挡影响判断

[Garden]
00:17:687 (2,3) - 给nc啊
00:10:520 (3) - 没意义的高ds
00:28:353 (2) - nc（跟人声到鼓声并且DS陷阱
不太喜欢的排列方法，但是图应该不错

[Hard]
00:21:853 (4) - 跟人声不是该后移么？00:22:020 -
00:32:187 (3) - 不该放这个
00:34:187 (1,2) - nc swap
00:54:186 (1,2) - 举个栗子，这种就应该Ctrl+G
。。节奏问题太突出。。要改节奏基本就要re了。。你确定一下跟哪个音轨吧。。至少每个大节你别一直切鼓声和人声啊。。

Nichi的set整体目前质量好得多，他经验老道，你看看他的节奏会有帮助

Misure

951 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

Misure 2015-11-13T14:39:04+00:00

Shad0w1and wrote:
[Insane]
00:03:020 (4,1) - 之间真不加东西就应该重叠。(1)不是重音你给的高DS不和曲这里确实是问题烤老板也提了然而我比较弱还得反省一下...
00:04:187 (4) - 此处滑条DS前后翻倍过分了，减少一点比较好（你听听背景不是重音啊）~~其实我是排列上美观为主虽然觉得这里音也不轻~~ 同上吧再反省反省。。
00:08:187 (3,4) - 对调吧。。那个三连你放成这样节奏没对啊，00:10:853 (3) - 这里你又对了。。节奏弱如狗手动再见QAQ
00:14:020 (5,1) - ^ 稍微变化一下不改了
00:14:687 - 这是琴音的位置，填上填了
00:18:520 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - 这一段的音效太乱了。。听不懂。。不如说这段安静的地方你的音效节奏感不强不如不下嗯回头
00:53:353 (2) - 滑条尾部的note是切断flow用的，也就是说在一段音乐完成后准备下一个小节才用，在背景音这种情况会如鲠在喉这里虽然也有其他人说有问题但是我思考之后还是想这样

00:43:520 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 建议重下节奏，具体可以参考nichiyouki的难度的下法和Narcissu的下法（imouto是在创节奏，我建议先别碰那玩意，他的好歹走形状路线，但你的图基本没有任何支撑硬打下来是乱的）我打的时候感觉没问题(可能是有问题但自己打感觉不出来) 但是这里我听到基本就是这个样子的滑条头基本都是鼓总之不改(主要是我改也不知道怎么改) 至于参考nich 暂时不大想没有抄的动力不知道为什么。。（所以难于进步啊唉）
00:51:519 (1,2) - 没跟鼓没跟人声其实我听不出什么感觉还是没什么经验暂且这样吧也是尽力了。。
00:56:852 (1,2,3,4) - ^ ^
每个note都必须有意义，问题有点大。。虽然自我感觉良好233 我觉得我每个note都有意义啊大概和一般人想得不太一样(认真) 我还是继续磨炼吧

[Hard]
00:21:853 (4) - 跟人声不是该后移么？00:22:020 -
00:32:187 (3) - 不该放这个
00:34:187 (1,2) - nc swap 长白线的话大概没问题
00:54:186 (1,2) - 举个栗子，这种就应该Ctrl+G
。。节奏问题太突出。。要改节奏基本就要re了。。你确定一下跟哪个音轨吧。。至少每个大节你别一直切鼓声和人声啊。。不大懂什么是"节奏"啊（认真）感觉我是同时跟人声和鼓声实际上就是音轨跟乱了（然而我自己听不出这个是主要问题）暂时无解因为我就是听不出来啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊（掀桌）

Nichi的set整体目前质量好得多，他经验老道，你看看他的节奏会有帮助嗯

辛苦啦谢mod！

（不禁思考我怎么这么弱233）

Lily Bread

1,228 posts

Joined December 2014

Lily Bread 2015-11-13T15:15:33+00:00

m4m from pm

[Narcissu's Easy]
00:08:520 (3,4) - 一般来说easy里不能有堆叠
00:29:520 (3,4) - 这个BPM的easy...一般也不会有隔着1/2的物件吧...不太清楚 Narcissu应该比我懂

[Normal]
类似的地方我一般只提一次

00:10:853 (7) - 有点难看...弄直一点吧
00:14:020 (3) - ctrl+j再调整一下，避免跟- 00:12:853 (1) - 刮蹭
00:21:687 (3,4) - 建议：我的话可能会用一根滑条..当然这只是建议
00:48:353 (3) - 这个应该要是直的，不止是不好看，还有flow问题
00:57:186 (2,3) - 这里可能叠起来比较好，有点难

[Hard]
00:20:020 (1) - 建议：ctrl+g再调整一下，因为音乐很明显的有转折
看起来HARD很有意思...

[Garden's Insane]
什么也没找到

[Narcissu's Insane]
01:05:019 (3,4) - 这里干嘛突然跳这么大，- 01:04:852 (2) - 这个音才是重的

[Insane]
感觉- 01:22:186 (3,4) - 应该拆开

感觉相当好玩 gl!

Misure

951 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

Misure 2015-11-13T15:57:20+00:00

Lily Bread wrote:
m4m from pm

[Normal]
类似的地方我一般只提一次

00:10:853 (7) - 有点难看...弄直一点吧
00:14:020 (3) - ctrl+j再调整一下，避免跟- 00:12:853 (1) - 刮蹭嗯确实但是我有点想要向上再向右的flow 所以暂时保留了;w;
00:21:687 (3,4) - 建议：我的话可能会用一根滑条..当然这只是建议突出vocal啊放在滑条尾就没感觉了QAQ
00:48:353 (3) - 这个应该要是直的，不止是不好看，还有flow问题大概...没问题吧0.0
00:57:186 (2,3) - 这里可能叠起来比较好，有点难好

[Hard]
00:20:020 (1) - 建议：ctrl+g再调整一下，因为音乐很明显的有转折感觉没啥问题微调了一下位置
看起来HARD很有意思... wa

[Insane]
感觉- 01:22:186 (3,4) - 应该拆开 l两个音效都是一样的重叠起来那个叫什么相得益彰（

感觉相当好玩 gl! 谢谢鼓励啊

谢摸 thx for mod!

Narcissu

1,744 posts

Joined August 2012

Narcissu 2015-11-14T02:00:51+00:00

DreaM117er wrote:
還摸，拖太久了 …… 回摸，拖太久了

[Narcissu's Easy]
喂喂...這個不是Easy吧...怎麼看都跟Normal一樣 …… 我自己set的話就會改成normal 名字然後hard直奔3.75了233
[Narcissu's Insane]
沒啥問題，就是有些地方很遠罷了 …… 為了PP我也是相當做作……

Doormat wrote:
Narcissu’s Easy
I think you forgot to turn on the video for this difficulty lol …… fix
00:08:520 (3,4) – Two things here. First, don’t stack these notes; apparently that’s frowned upon on Easies. Second thing is, don’t place a note half a beat after another; apparently that’s also frowned upon on Easies.. Mainly because beginners might not be able to read these that well, or that it might be too fast for beginners. Maybe just delete the (3)?
SPOILER
Yeah this is apparently a big no-no

your are right , but there's no better way to do it . i add click here to follow drum/voice
00:13:853 (3,4) – ^
00:16:520 (2,3) – ^; Okay since I’m going to bloat this post for every time I have to do this, this is the last one I’m going to point out, but you get the picture, right?
00:29:520 (3,4) – 3/2 repeat slider here maybe? There’s plenty of ways you can fix this, but try to avoid the half beat thing I mentioned above
SPOILER
01:18:686 (4) – I think this blanket is a little off; make it a little less curved to fix that……fix kukuku
01:22:686 (1) – I’m not sure about placing a circle right before a spinner for an Easy; it’s really your call, but try having the spinner start at 01:22:686 instead and see if you like that more
Narcissu’s Insane
00:06:853 (3,4,5,6,7,8) – I’m pretty sure this is a stream part and not triples; place circles at 00:07:103 and at 00:07:437 and make this into a stream, but delete 00:06:937 (4), since the stream doesn’t start until 00:07:020 (5) …… triples easily than stream ……
00:17:687 (5) – Don’t make this a repeat slider; there’s no distinct beat at 00:18:020, and having that short break places some more emphasis on the downbeat ……
00:38:020 (1,2) – The instrumentals are pretty powerful here; maybe you can try following that instead of the vocals by replacing these with 1/2 sliders? What you have is totally fine though, so you don’t need to take this suggestion…… missed beat to follow voice better ……
SPOILER
00:45:353 – Circle here; you missed a pretty strong beat …… missed beat to follow voice better ……
00:46:020 – ^
01:03:186 (2) – Fix this blanket by making it a little bit less curved…… ok
01:11:519 (2,3) – Another part that I think should be a stream; similar suggestion to 00:06:853 (3,4,5,6,7,8) …… jump + stream too hard …… jump = pp , so i give up stream
Insane
00:19:353 (4,5) – I’d follow the vocals here instead of the piano; reverse the order of these notes (slider before circle)
00:24:687 (4,1) – ^
00:32:020 (2,3) – ^; beat on 00:32:353 is stronger than 00:32:187 in my opinion
00:57:186 (2,3) – I’d also reverse the order of these notes
01:19:352 – Maybe add a circle here? There’s a fairly strong beat here

Feb wrote:
[imouto]

at least od8 as it has higher sr than misures insane.

he is a Tsundere , you should say “OD6 plz” , then he use OD8
[narcissu insane]

00:54:186 (2) - kinda hard to tell you map vocals suddenly same one later. i think you should just regular map the beats. …… antijump have fun lol

[narcissu easy]

00:08:520 (3,4) - I'm not quite sure stacks are allowed in easy diffs. I don't think they are. I heard they are "okay" in advanced diffs, but this is not even an normal tho... …… your are right , it's not good in easy/normal diffs , but it's follow music . if i
skip it , simple and weird?

Misure wrote:
imoutosan wrote:
等等啊 video不是露胖次了
啊顺便我忘了加video

video video video video video video

233 我的意思是我拼错了一万次video这个词不是在催你
啊我没当成你在催我啊 233
话说不就是露个胖次吗，感觉作为一个gal的OP不露点已经是很难得了（思考）

上层人士认为玩osu的玩家都是看见胖次就会犯罪的变态呢

Shad0w1and wrote:
[Narcissu Insane]
00:06:853 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 太吵了拉，降低音量也好……大丈夫
00:07:187 (6,7,8,1) - 三连接大跳即使是滑条我觉得也有点过高了一点，降低一点点会好些*……没关系的，这个都断后面就没救了
00:54:186 (2) - 如鲠在喉，否则nc……好
00:57:852 (2,3,4) - 不完美，再微调一下角度……嘛，我看不清楚
01:04:185 (1,2) - 和前面一样
总之很好，除了两个空挡影响判断

Lily Bread wrote:
[Narcissu's Easy]
00:08:520 (3,4) - 一般来说easy里不能有堆叠……是啊是啊
00:29:520 (3,4) - 这个BPM的easy...一般也不会有隔着1/2的物件吧...不太清楚 Narcissu应该比我懂……也许……吧？

[Narcissu's Insane]
01:05:019 (3,4) - 这里干嘛突然跳这么大，- 01:04:852 (2) - 这个音才是重的……~~强行包起来~~。后面那个空拍了啊……飞再远也没用

easy

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Misato Aki - Glitter.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 50103
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.3

[Metadata]
Title:Glitter
TitleUnicode:Glitter
Artist:Misato Aki
ArtistUnicode:美郷あき
Creator:Misure
Version:Narcissu's Easy
Source:月に寄り添う乙女の作法2
Tags:Garden imoutosan Narcissu Tsuki ni Yorisou Otome no Sahou 2 opening eroge hentai galgame visual novel Navel
BeatmapID:819420
BeatmapSetID:365826

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:0.8
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
854,333.333333333333,4,2,1,60,1,0
50853,333.333333333333,4,2,1,60,1,1
61186,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
61519,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
72186,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
82852,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
83519,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
84186,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
84852,-100,4,2,1,20,0,0
85519,-100,4,2,1,10,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,0,128
Combo2 : 128,128,255
Combo3 : 255,128,192
Combo4 : 0,128,255

[HitObjects]
88,84,2187,6,0,P|56:160|72:256,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,320,3353,2,0,L|296:316,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,276,4187,1,2,0:0:0:0:
424,336,4520,1,2,0:0:0:0:
504,304,4853,6,0,P|520:232|488:128,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,40,6020,2,0,B|372:68|372:68|216:56,1,200,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,100,7187,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,144,7520,6,0,P|240:188|224:252,1,80,4|8,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,284,8187,1,0,1:0:0:0:
236,344,8520,1,8,0:0:0:0:
236,344,8687,2,0,L|376:336,1,120,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,304,9520,2,0,P|448:268|448:220,1,80,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,172,10187,6,0,P|356:100|372:8,1,160,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
260,92,11353,2,0,L|108:100,1,120,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,52,12187,1,0,1:0:0:0:
12,124,12520,1,8,0:0:0:0:
88,172,12853,6,0,P|88:220|68:268,1,80,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
4,300,13520,1,0,1:0:0:0:
84,336,13853,1,8,0:0:0:0:
84,336,14020,2,0,L|224:328,1,120,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,292,14853,2,0,L|380:296,1,80,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,348,15520,6,0,P|408:288|440:176,1,160,4|0,1:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
496,140,16520,1,8,0:0:0:0:
496,140,16687,2,0,L|488:36,1,80,0|4,1:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
216,120,18187,6,0,P|132:112|64:52,2,160,2|0|2,0:0|3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,68,19853,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,108,20187,2,0,L|372:208,1,80,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,212,20853,6,0,L|468:24,2,160,2|0|2,0:0|3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,268,22520,2,0,P|384:312|396:356,2,80,0|0|0,0:0|3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,212,23520,6,0,L|284:224,1,160,2|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
220,180,24520,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,184,24853,2,0,P|92:256|136:340,1,160,2|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
180,260,25853,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,180,26187,6,0,L|224:88,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,76,26853,2,0,L|304:155,1,80,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,128,27520,2,2,B|424:156|424:156|424:192|424:192|464:264|440:364,1,240,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,308,28853,5,2,0:0:0:0:
288,352,29187,1,8,0:0:0:0:
248,276,29520,2,0,P|208:264|156:272,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,300,30020,2,0,P|84:328|0:296,1,120,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,240,30853,2,0,L|64:148,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
4,96,31520,5,2,0:0:0:0:
72,40,31853,1,8,0:0:0:0:
132,104,32187,2,0,P|172:108|240:88,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,76,32687,2,0,L|240:224,1,120,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,248,33520,2,0,P|168:288|184:336,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,280,34187,5,2,0:0:0:0:
336,320,34520,1,8,0:0:0:0:
416,288,34853,2,0,L|424:176,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,184,35353,2,0,P|460:120|428:56,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,40,36187,1,2,0:0:0:0:
284,88,36520,1,8,0:0:0:0:
204,52,36853,6,0,L|64:48,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,108,37687,1,8,0:0:0:0:
104,136,38020,2,0,P|120:196|96:272,1,120,8|8,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,308,38853,2,0,L|-16:316,2,40,8|8|4,0:3|0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
107,251,39520,6,0,P|184:240|256:268,1,120,4|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,320,40353,1,2,0:0:0:0:
280,320,40520,2,0,P|360:336|444:308,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
484,240,41520,1,2,0:0:0:0:
420,180,41853,1,8,0:0:0:0:
484,120,42187,6,0,P|504:64|476:-4,1,120,4|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,64,43020,1,2,0:0:0:0:
420,64,43187,2,0,P|336:64|248:52,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,108,44187,2,0,L|188:172,2,40,8|8|4,0:3|0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
120,60,44853,6,0,P|80:48|28:60,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,136,45520,2,0,P|45:164|30:215,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,212,46187,2,0,B|144:252|144:252|148:380,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,300,47520,6,0,L|440:308,2,120,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,256,48853,2,0,P|220:212|224:152,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,152,49520,1,4,0:2:0:0:
388,124,49853,1,4,0:2:0:0:
472,156,50187,2,0,P|480:200|472:236,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,300,50853,6,0,L|232:308,1,160,4|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,260,51853,1,8,0:0:0:0:
180,260,52019,2,0,P|116:252|44:284,1,120,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
8,204,52853,2,0,L|0:104,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,60,53519,5,2,0:0:0:0:
144,100,53853,1,8,0:0:0:0:
216,52,54186,1,2,0:0:0:0:
292,96,54519,1,8,0:0:0:0:
292,96,54686,2,0,P|364:92|424:48,1,120,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,124,55519,2,0,P|484:164|476:212,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,172,56186,6,0,B|376:216|376:216|388:344,1,160,2|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,304,57186,1,8,0:0:0:0:
300,304,57352,2,0,L|152:296,1,120,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,340,58186,1,2,0:0:0:0:
56,268,58519,1,8,0:0:0:0:
132,224,58852,6,0,B|140:144|140:144|112:84,2,120,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,268,60186,1,2,0:0:0:0:
56,180,60519,1,8,0:0:0:0:
132,224,60852,2,2,P|172:228|224:212,1,80,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,148,61519,6,0,P|344:132|436:156,1,160,2|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,216,62519,1,8,0:0:0:0:
476,216,62686,2,0,L|488:364,1,120,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,332,63519,2,0,L|372:232,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
385,166,64186,5,2,0:0:0:0:
305,130,64519,1,8,0:0:0:0:
246,195,64853,1,2,0:0:0:0:
290,271,65186,1,8,0:0:0:0:
290,271,65352,2,0,B|248:284|248:284|140:272,1,120,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,312,66186,2,0,L|32:316,2,40,4|8|8,0:3|0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
152,248,66852,6,0,P|156:160|116:72,1,160,4|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,20,68186,2,0,P|288:108|328:196,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,208,69186,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,136,69519,6,0,L|452:72,2,40,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,216,70186,2,0,L|500:320,1,80,8|4,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
468,328,70686,2,0,B|324:304|324:304|240:312,1,200,4|8,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,360,71852,1,8,0:0:0:0:
116,336,72186,6,0,P|96:304|92:244,1,80,4|8,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,200,72853,1,0,1:0:0:0:
80,148,73186,1,8,0:0:0:0:
80,148,73353,2,0,L|72:8,1,120,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,60,74186,2,0,P|200:60|252:40,1,80,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,84,74853,6,0,P|396:72|480:96,1,160,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
448,220,76019,2,0,L|296:212,1,120,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,160,76853,1,0,1:0:0:0:
212,232,77186,1,8,0:0:0:0:
156,164,77519,6,0,P|112:156|64:176,1,80,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,244,78186,1,0,1:0:0:0:
64,312,78519,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,312,78686,2,0,P|120:332|196:288,1,120,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,232,79519,2,0,L|308:236,1,80,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,304,80186,6,0,P|320:248|336:144,1,160,4|8,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,104,81186,1,8,0:0:0:0:
404,104,81352,2,0,P|352:68|284:76,1,120,4|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,112,82186,2,0,L|164:104,1,40,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,120,82686,5,2,1:2:0:0:
256,192,82852,12,0,85519,0:0:0:0:

insane

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Misato Aki - Glitter.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 50103
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2

[Metadata]
Title:Glitter
TitleUnicode:Glitter
Artist:Misato Aki
ArtistUnicode:美郷あき
Creator:Misure
Version:Narcissu's Insane
Source:月に寄り添う乙女の作法2
Tags:Garden imoutosan Narcissu Tsuki ni Yorisou Otome no Sahou 2 opening eroge hentai galgame visual novel Navel
BeatmapID:819842
BeatmapSetID:365826

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7.5
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
854,333.333333333333,4,2,1,60,1,0
2187,-71.4285714285714,4,2,1,60,0,0
7520,-62.5,4,2,1,60,0,0
18187,-83.3333333333333,4,2,1,30,0,0
27687,-76.9230769230769,4,2,1,30,0,0
28020,-71.4285714285714,4,2,1,30,0,0
28353,-66.6666666666667,4,2,1,30,0,0
28853,-62.5,4,2,1,60,0,0
50853,333.333333333333,4,2,1,70,1,1
50853,-58.8235294117647,4,2,1,70,0,1
61186,-58.8235294117647,4,2,1,70,0,0
61519,-58.8235294117647,4,2,1,70,0,1
72186,-62.5,4,2,1,60,0,0
82852,-62.5,4,2,1,50,0,0
83519,-62.5,4,2,1,40,0,0
84186,-62.5,4,2,1,30,0,0
84852,-62.5,4,2,1,20,0,0
85519,-62.5,4,2,1,10,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,0,128
Combo2 : 128,128,255
Combo3 : 255,128,192
Combo4 : 0,128,255

[HitObjects]
168,168,2187,6,0,L|98:165,1,69.9999978637696,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
242,105,2520,1,2,0:0:0:0:
330,197,2687,2,0,P|366:201|422:185,1,69.9999978637696,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
242,105,3020,2,0,L|236:20,1,69.9999978637696,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,260,3353,6,0,B|116:252|116:252|228:268,1,139.999995727539,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,368,3853,2,0,P|312:336|304:280,1,69.9999978637696,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
242,105,4187,2,0,P|246:141|234:185,1,69.9999978637696,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,212,4520,2,0,L|472:220,1,69.9999978637696,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,136,4853,6,0,L|-4:140,2,139.999995727539,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,56,5687,2,0,L|48:48,1,69.9999978637696,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,160,6020,6,0,P|192:240|164:316,1,139.999995727539,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,128,6520,2,0,L|284:24,1,69.9999978637696,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,208,6853,1,8,0:0:0:0:
412,208,6937,1,8,0:0:0:0:
412,208,7020,1,8,0:0:0:0:
236,232,7187,1,8,0:0:0:0:
236,232,7271,1,8,0:0:0:0:
236,232,7354,1,8,0:0:0:0:
468,124,7520,6,0,P|504:188|464:296,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,208,8020,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,128,8187,2,0,L|180:124,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,68,8520,1,10,0:0:0:0:
316,228,8687,6,0,L|120:236,1,160,2|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,208,9187,2,0,B|28:252|28:252|40:380,1,160,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,264,9687,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,100,9853,1,2,0:0:0:0:
180,148,10020,1,2,0:0:0:0:
180,148,10103,1,2,0:0:0:0:
180,148,10187,6,0,P|256:144|344:88,2,160,2|8|2,1:2|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,152,11020,2,0,P|444:148|504:160,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,304,11353,1,2,0:0:0:0:
420,304,11437,1,2,0:0:0:0:
420,304,11520,5,2,0:0:0:0:
280,188,11687,1,2,0:0:0:0:
236,300,11853,1,2,0:0:0:0:
392,216,12020,2,0,P|416:132|404:48,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,128,12520,1,8,0:0:0:0:
260,128,12687,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,40,12853,6,0,L|124:224,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,264,13353,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,296,13520,2,0,L|196:388,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,199,13853,1,2,0:0:0:0:
308,192,14020,6,0,B|324:240|324:240|308:376,1,160,2|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,288,14520,2,0,L|492:296,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,184,14853,1,2,0:0:0:0:
408,184,15020,1,2,0:0:0:0:
404,84,15187,2,0,L|496:48,1,80,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,192,15520,6,0,P|224:200|140:140,1,160,4|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,76,16020,1,8,0:0:0:0:
252,76,16103,1,8,0:0:0:0:
252,76,16187,1,8,0:0:0:0:
200,316,16353,1,8,0:0:0:0:
120,184,16520,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,236,16687,6,0,L|476:232,1,160,2|8,1:2|0:3,0:0:0:0:
220,168,17187,1,8,0:3:0:0:
220,168,17270,1,8,0:3:0:0:
220,168,17353,2,0,P|208:120|220:64,1,80,4|4,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
380,120,17687,2,0,P|392:168|380:224,2,80,4|4|4,0:3|0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
100,216,18187,1,6,0:3:0:0:
124,240,18520,6,0,L|128:328,1,59.9999981689454,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,336,18853,2,0,L|20:180,1,119.999996337891,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,136,19353,6,0,P|112:80|96:0,2,119.999996337891,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,116,20187,2,0,L|276:120,1,59.9999981689454,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,32,20520,2,0,L|296:28,1,59.9999981689454,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,88,20853,6,0,P|388:104|468:88,1,119.999996337891,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,212,21353,2,0,P|432:196|352:212,1,119.999996337891,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,340,21853,1,2,0:0:0:0:
280,340,21937,1,2,0:0:0:0:
280,340,22020,6,0,L|273:220,1,119.999996337891,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
201,177,22520,1,2,0:0:0:0:
345,177,22687,1,2,0:0:0:0:
305,81,22853,1,2,0:0:0:0:
274,221,23020,1,2,0:0:0:0:
269,69,23187,1,2,0:0:0:0:
274,221,23353,1,2,0:0:0:0:
233,57,23520,1,2,0:0:0:0:
40,256,23853,6,0,L|108:256,1,59.9999981689454,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,320,24186,2,0,P|204:332|286:308,1,119.999996337891,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,248,24686,6,0,P|383:240|440:256,2,119.999996337891,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,172,25520,2,0,L|476:96,1,59.9999981689454,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,148,25853,2,0,L|380:72,1,59.9999981689454,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,160,26186,6,0,L|276:12,1,119.999996337891,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,188,26686,2,0,L|112:56,1,119.999996337891,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,12,27187,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,56,27353,6,0,L|32:60,2,29.9999990844727,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,100,27687,2,0,L|284:104,2,32.4999985122681,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,140,28020,2,0,L|12:144,2,34.9999989318848,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,184,28353,1,0,1:0:0:0:
148,244,28520,2,0,L|144:348,1,75.0000028610231,8|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
400,304,28853,6,0,P|320:316|224:276,1,160,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,136,29353,1,2,0:0:0:0:
332,136,29520,2,0,L|328:215,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,76,29853,1,8,0:0:0:0:
484,160,30020,6,0,L|492:328,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
491,319,30520,1,8,0:0:0:0:
392,240,30687,2,0,P|312:244|248:316,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,328,31187,1,10,0:0:0:0:
236,264,31353,1,2,0:0:0:0:
164,328,31520,6,0,L|60:336,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,236,31853,1,10,0:0:0:0:
112,168,32020,2,0,L|24:160,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,334,32353,2,0,L|-20:342,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,352,32687,6,0,P|200:284|232:176,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,152,33187,1,8,0:0:0:0:
440,232,33353,1,2,0:0:0:0:
292,276,33520,1,2,0:0:0:0:
328,132,33687,1,2,0:0:0:0:
384,320,33853,1,10,0:0:0:0:
356,112,34020,1,2,0:0:0:0:
292,276,34187,6,0,P|212:296|116:272,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,224,34687,1,2,0:0:0:0:
60,224,34854,2,0,L|56:145,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,320,35187,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,260,35354,6,0,L|167:100,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,24,35854,1,8,0:0:0:0:
260,88,36021,2,0,P|344:80|424:28,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,128,36521,1,10,0:0:0:0:
352,120,36687,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,176,36854,6,0,P|460:216|456:272,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,152,37187,1,10,0:0:0:0:
224,236,37353,2,0,P|212:276|216:332,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
459,253,37687,2,0,P|471:293|467:349,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,184,38020,6,0,B|332:220|332:220|344:252|344:252|336:368,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,288,38520,1,8,0:0:0:0:
432,216,38687,1,2,0:0:0:0:
292,92,38853,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,200,39020,2,0,P|132:208|80:200,2,80,8|8|4,3:0|3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
52,120,39520,6,0,P|4:184|36:276,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
97,204,40020,2,0,P|161:251|253:219,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,156,40520,2,0,P|228:92|196:0,1,160,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,72,41020,5,2,0:0:0:0:
308,152,41187,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,68,41353,1,2,0:0:0:0:
220,112,41520,1,2,0:0:0:0:
332,244,41687,1,2,0:0:0:0:
420,176,41853,2,0,L|504:172,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,272,42187,6,0,L|112:264,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
8,304,42687,2,0,L|204:296,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,164,43187,2,0,L|184:336,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,136,43687,5,2,0:0:0:0:
48,216,43853,1,8,0:0:0:0:
236,248,44020,1,2,0:0:0:0:
140,108,44187,2,0,P|132:64|140:12,2,80,8|8|4,3:0|3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
224,64,44687,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,64,44770,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,64,44853,6,0,P|304:44|408:68,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,332,45520,2,0,P|384:352|280:328,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,148,46187,5,8,0:3:0:0:
308,148,46353,1,8,0:3:0:0:
380,256,46520,1,8,0:3:0:0:
380,256,46686,1,8,0:3:0:0:
468,188,46853,1,4,0:3:0:0:
468,188,47019,1,4,0:3:0:0:
212,232,47187,1,4,0:3:0:0:
212,232,47353,1,4,0:3:0:0:
344,136,47520,6,0,L|348:36,2,80,0|0|0,3:0|3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
212,232,48020,2,0,L|204:64,1,160,0|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
48,100,48520,5,0,3:0:0:0:
164,152,48687,1,0,3:0:0:0:
16,212,48853,1,0,3:0:0:0:
188,264,49020,2,0,L|360:256,1,160,0|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
452,296,49520,2,0,L|440:392,1,80,0|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
476,48,49853,2,0,L|488:144,1,80,0|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
372,220,50187,2,0,P|316:168|332:56,1,160
400,128,50687,1,2,0:0:0:0:
400,128,50770,1,2,0:0:0:0:
400,128,50853,6,0,L|204:140,1,170.000003242493,4|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,240,51353,1,2,0:0:0:0:
144,272,51519,2,0,P|160:316|152:372,1,85.0000016212464,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,240,51853,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,196,52019,6,0,P|236:104|208:8,1,170.000003242493,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,72,52519,2,0,L|336:184,1,85.0000016212464,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,116,52853,2,0,L|92:112,1,85.0000016212464,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,168,53186,2,0,L|468:164,1,85.0000016212464,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,368,53519,6,0,B|256:328|256:328|268:184,1,170.000003242493,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,176,54186,5,2,0:0:0:0:
416,252,54353,1,2,0:0:0:0:
168,288,54519,1,10,0:0:0:0:
368,168,54686,6,0,L|372:360,1,170.000003242493,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,184,55186,2,0,L|496:88,1,85.0000016212464,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,16,55519,1,2,0:0:0:0:
408,16,55602,1,2,0:0:0:0:
408,16,55686,1,2,0:0:0:0:
300,96,55852,1,10,0:0:0:0:
216,40,56019,1,2,0:0:0:0:
88,88,56186,6,0,L|80:264,1,170.000003242493,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,304,56686,1,2,0:0:0:0:
280,304,56852,2,0,L|276:192,1,85.0000016212464,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,340,57186,1,2,0:0:0:0:
356,368,57352,6,0,B|376:324|376:324|372:168,1,170.000003242493,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,48,57852,2,0,P|451:89|447:131,1,85.0000016212464,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
281,60,58186,2,0,P|320:73|355:99,1,85.0000016212464,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,204,58519,2,0,P|236:176|274:159,1,85.0000016212464,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
457,253,58852,6,0,P|375:273|292:260,1,170.000003242493,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,320,59352,2,0,P|122:299|205:313,1,170.000003242493,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
274,159,59852,2,0,L|264:64,1,85.0000016212464,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,36,60186,5,2,0:0:0:0:
156,120,60352,1,2,0:0:0:0:
116,212,60519,1,8,0:0:0:0:
376,156,60686,1,2,0:0:0:0:
468,232,60852,1,2,0:0:0:0:
479,209,60935,1,2,0:0:0:0:
486,184,61018,1,2,0:0:0:0:
488,159,61102,1,0,0:0:0:0:
485,133,61185,1,2,0:0:0:0:
478,109,61268,1,2,0:0:0:0:
466,87,61352,1,2,0:0:0:0:
450,67,61435,1,0,0:0:0:0:
430,50,61519,6,0,L|248:64,1,170.000003242493,4|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,120,62019,1,2,0:0:0:0:
156,120,62185,2,0,L|56:112,1,85.0000016212464,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,192,62519,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,280,62685,6,0,L|36:288,1,170.000003242493,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,192,63185,2,0,P|308:224|316:288,1,85.0000016212464,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,308,63519,2,0,L|508:304,1,85.0000016212464,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,168,63852,2,0,L|296:68,1,85.0000016212464,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,216,64185,6,0,P|460:144|448:32,1,170.000003242493,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,28,64852,5,2,0:0:0:0:
336,176,65019,1,2,0:0:0:0:
116,104,65185,1,10,0:0:0:0:
196,16,65352,6,0,P|236:84|188:192,1,170.000003242493,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,232,65852,2,0,P|100:272|100:328,1,85.0000016212464,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,288,66186,1,8,0:3:0:0:
196,288,66269,1,8,0:3:0:0:
196,288,66352,1,4,0:3:0:0:
184,168,66519,1,4,0:3:0:0:
28,236,66686,1,4,0:3:0:0:
272,224,66852,6,0,B|292:180|292:180|276:28,2,170.000003242493,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,72,67852,1,0,3:0:0:0:
420,72,68019,1,0,3:0:0:0:
420,72,68186,6,0,B|400:116|400:116|416:268,1,170.000003242493,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,360,68852,2,0,B|120:316|120:316|104:164,1,170.000003242493,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,48,69519,6,0,P|244:88|252:156,1,85.0000016212464,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,160,69769,1,8,0:0:0:0:
276,160,69852,1,8,0:0:0:0:
220,264,70019,1,8,0:0:0:0:
156,104,70186,1,8,0:3:0:0:
384,136,70352,1,8,0:3:0:0:
107,195,70519,1,4,0:3:0:0:
456,212,70686,6,0,P|480:136|432:32,2,170.000003242493,4|4|0,0:0|0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,136,71519,2,0,L|332:132,2,42.5000008106232,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,304,71852,2,0,L|360:308,2,42.5000008106232,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,280,72186,6,0,L|324:288,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,348,72686,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,348,72853,2,0,P|68:316|68:244,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,188,73186,1,10,0:0:0:0:
100,184,73353,6,0,L|76:8,1,160,2|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,156,73853,2,0,B|388:144,1,160,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,36,74353,1,2,0:0:0:0:
360,124,74519,1,2,0:0:0:0:
468,192,74686,1,2,0:0:0:0:
468,192,74769,1,2,0:0:0:0:
468,192,74853,6,0,P|488:268|452:368,2,160,2|8|2,1:2|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,236,75686,2,0,P|292:276|304:320,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,272,76019,1,2,0:0:0:0:
388,272,76103,1,2,0:0:0:0:
388,272,76186,5,2,0:0:0:0:
276,212,76353,1,2,0:0:0:0:
180,296,76519,1,2,0:0:0:0:
72,256,76686,2,0,L|60:88,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,32,77186,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,32,77352,1,8,0:0:0:0:
436,80,77519,6,0,P|368:108|256:96,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,172,78019,1,0,0:0:0:0:
108,172,78186,2,0,P|146:173|196:188,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,312,78519,1,2,0:0:0:0:
328,248,78686,6,0,B|336:64,1,160,2|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,272,79186,2,0,L|436:180,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,248,79519,1,2,0:0:0:0:
328,248,79686,1,2,0:0:0:0:
236,220,79853,2,0,L|232:128,1,80,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,72,80186,6,0,B|460:96|460:96|328:108,1,160,4|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,56,80686,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,56,80769,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,56,80853,1,8,0:0:0:0:
124,164,81019,1,8,0:0:0:0:
368,128,81186,1,8,0:0:0:0:
236,220,81353,6,0,P|224:308|252:380,1,160,2|8,1:2|0:3,0:0:0:0:
344,288,81853,1,8,0:3:0:0:
344,288,81936,1,8,0:3:0:0:
344,288,82019,1,4,0:3:0:0:
368,128,82186,1,4,0:0:0:0:
64,236,82352,1,4,0:0:0:0:
60,268,82686,5,4,0:1:0:0:
256,192,82852,12,0,85519,0:0:0:0:

我去问问kibb 这个easy和op 的胖次……

Misure

951 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

Misure 2015-11-14T06:24:48+00:00

Narcissu wrote:
我去问问kibb 这个easy和op 的胖次……

好辛苦啦 ~~是男的啊！~~

update

Garden

Nomination Assessment Team

1,343 posts

Joined June 2013

Garden 2015-11-14T07:03:40+00:00

Feb wrote:
[garden insane]
00:08:520 (5) - yo man its super awkward to play a strong beat on slidertail pls just 00:08:187 (3,4,5) - ctrl+g this one and you fine. yes man
00:10:853 (4) - stack it? auto-stacked
01:10:519 (7,8,1) - i think the last time i saw a double on a circle was ... right never. I am not quite sure ppl can read this as a double and 1 note. I'd just space 7 away and making it a stop for 8 on this note. well i think it is fine now, and ppl can read this

Shad0w1and wrote:
[Garden]
00:17:687 (2,3) - 给nc啊好
00:10:520 (3) - 没意义的高ds 就减小了点间距
00:28:353 (2) - nc（跟人声到鼓声并且DS陷阱好
不太喜欢的排列方法，但是图应该不错谢谢鼓励，各方面确实还需要努力

Thx for modding!

SPOILER

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Misato Aki - Glitter.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 50103
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.6
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.3

[Metadata]
Title:Glitter
TitleUnicode:Glitter
Artist:Misato Aki
ArtistUnicode:美郷あき
Creator:Misure
Version:Garden's Insane
Source:月に寄り添う乙女の作法2
Tags:Garden imoutosan Narcissu Tsuki ni Yorisou Otome no Sahou 2 opening eroge hentai galgame visual novel Navel
BeatmapID:808359
BeatmapSetID:365826

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:8.8
SliderMultiplier:1.7
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
Video,0,"Tsuki ni Yorisou Otome no Sahou 2 OP.flv"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
854,333.333333333333,4,2,1,50,1,0
2187,-125,4,2,1,50,0,0
3020,-111.111111111111,4,2,1,50,0,0
5687,-111.111111111111,4,2,1,50,0,0
5853,-111.111111111111,4,2,1,50,0,0
6020,-111.111111111111,4,2,1,50,0,0
6520,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
6853,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
7187,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
7353,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
7520,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
18187,-100,4,2,7,30,0,0
18520,-142.857142857143,4,2,2,50,0,0
23520,-142.857142857143,4,2,7,30,0,0
23853,-142.857142857143,4,2,2,50,0,0
27353,-200,4,2,2,50,0,0
27853,-200,4,2,2,50,0,0
28187,-200,4,2,1,50,0,0
28853,-111.111111111111,4,2,1,60,0,0
39520,-111.111111111111,4,2,1,60,0,0
44853,-125,4,2,1,60,0,0
47520,-111.111111111111,6,2,1,60,0,0
49520,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,60,0,0
49853,-111.111111111111,4,2,1,60,0,0
50187,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
50520,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
50853,333.333333333333,4,2,1,70,1,1
60852,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
61186,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
61352,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
61519,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
66852,-125,4,2,1,70,0,1
70686,-125,4,2,1,70,0,1
71019,-125,4,2,1,70,0,1
71352,-125,4,2,1,70,0,1
71519,-125,4,2,1,70,0,1
71686,-125,4,2,1,70,0,1
71852,-125,4,2,1,70,0,1
72019,-125,4,2,1,70,0,1
72186,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
82186,-100,4,2,2,55,0,0
82686,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
82852,-100,4,2,1,45,0,0
84186,-100,4,2,1,35,0,0
85519,-100,4,2,1,25,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,0,128
Combo2 : 128,128,255
Combo3 : 255,128,192
Combo4 : 0,128,255

[HitObjects]
160,72,2187,6,0,P|136:108|136:148,1,68,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,248,2520,2,0,P|248:196|224:164,1,68,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,252,2853,1,8,0:0:0:0:
188,336,3020,2,0,P|244:352|326:307,1,152.999995330811,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
438,189,3520,6,0,P|476:248|444:336,1,152.999995330811,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,264,4020,1,0,1:0:0:0:
332,176,4187,2,0,P|344:136|384:100,1,76.4999976654053,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,264,4520,2,0,P|346:294|296:300,1,76.4999976654053,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,272,4853,5,4,1:2:0:0:
332,176,5020,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,176,5187,2,0,P|320:128|300:112,1,76.4999976654053,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,68,5520,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,204,5687,1,8,0:0:0:0:
300,112,5853,1,8,0:0:0:0:
152,156,6020,6,0,P|132:216|140:280,1,114.749996498108,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
135,266,6353,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,384,6520,2,0,P|244:340|232:292,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,156,6853,1,8,0:0:0:0:
152,156,7020,2,0,L|168:116,1,42.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,92,7187,1,8,0:0:0:0:
284,80,7270,1,8,0:0:0:0:
312,76,7353,1,8,0:0:0:0:
340,80,7437,1,8,0:0:0:0:
368,92,7520,6,0,P|435:70|477:86,1,85,4|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,212,7853,2,0,P|244:164|236:120,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,212,8187,2,0,P|420:281|386:309,1,85,8|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
296,340,8520,1,0,1:0:0:0:
296,212,8686,1,0,1:0:0:0:
168,328,8853,5,0,0:0:0:0:
128,152,9020,1,0,1:0:0:0:
296,212,9187,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,236,9353,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,128,9520,2,0,P|248:72|320:52,1,127.5
320,72,9853,2,0,P|352:120|384:132,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,208,10187,5,0,1:0:0:0:
375,130,10353,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,308,10520,2,0,P|348:268|352:220,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,136,10853,1,0,1:0:0:0:
264,152,11020,1,0,1:0:0:0:
268,48,11187,2,0,P|220:56|168:104,1,85,8|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
168,104,11437,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,104,11520,6,0,L|84:100,1,85,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
232,212,11853,1,8,0:0:0:0:
232,212,12020,2,0,B|184:196|96:244|44:192,1,170,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
116,108,12520,1,8,0:0:0:0:
228,100,12687,1,0,1:0:0:0:
304,188,12853,6,0,P|304:236|280:272,1,85,4|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,340,13187,2,0,P|160:292|184:256,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,124,13520,1,0,1:0:0:0:
304,188,13687,1,0,1:0:0:0:
416,80,13853,1,8,0:0:0:0:
312,68,14020,2,0,P|332:152|436:176,1,170,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
312,68,14520,6,0,P|256:68|216:76,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,164,14853,1,0,0:0:0:0:
227,73,15020,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,248,15187,1,8,0:0:0:0:
312,160,15353,2,0,L|348:132,1,42.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,96,15520,6,0,P|452:160|428:196,1,85,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,248,15853,1,8,0:0:0:0:
472,304,16020,1,0,1:0:0:0:
448,332,16103,1,0,1:0:0:0:
416,352,16187,1,0,1:0:0:0:
316,336,16353,1,0,1:0:0:0:
232,380,16520,1,8,0:0:0:0:
148,364,16687,1,0,1:0:0:0:
148,364,17020,5,0,1:0:0:0:
88,232,17687,5,0,1:0:0:0:
144,368,17853,1,0,1:0:0:0:
88,232,18187,5,2,0:0:0:0:
88,232,18520,2,0,P|72:276|48:308,1,59.4999981842042,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,156,18853,2,0,P|64:100|116:64,1,118.999996368408,0|0,1:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
168,176,19353,2,0,B|192:228|168:280|168:280|192:272,1,118.999996368408,0|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
304,312,19853,1,0,3:0:0:0:
304,312,20020,6,0,P|268:360|196:364,1,118.999996368408
304,312,20520,2,0,L|384:296,1,59.4999981842042,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,244,20853,2,0,P|476:308|444:376,1,118.999996368408,0|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
460,244,21353,2,0,P|440:180|456:124,1,118.999996368408,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,124,21853,2,0,P|324:144|288:148,1,59.4999981842042,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
306,147,22353,5,0,0:0:0:0:
240,116,22520,1,0,3:0:0:0:
163,117,22687,1,0,0:0:0:0:
44,56,22853,1,0,1:0:0:0:
96,159,23020,1,0,0:0:0:0:
163,117,23187,1,0,3:0:0:0:
240,116,23353,1,0,0:0:0:0:
318,27,23520,5,2,0:0:0:0:
318,27,23853,2,0,P|362:35|402:27,1,59.4999981842042,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
238,67,24187,2,0,P|234:127|200:200,1,118.999996368408,0|0,1:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
150,67,24687,2,0,P|94:87|24:76,2,118.999996368408,0|0|0,0:0|3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
35,80,25520,6,0,L|0:155,1,59.4999981842042,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,176,25853,2,0,L|84:248,1,59.4999981842042,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,232,26187,2,0,P|200:296|240:344,1,118.999996368408,0|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
372,344,26687,2,0,P|356:280|316:232,1,118.999996368408
320,224,27103,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,208,27187,1,0,3:0:0:0:
424,200,27353,6,0,B|459:224|492:228|492:228|520:160|460:92,1,212.5,2|0,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,200,28353,5,0,1:0:0:0:
363,35,28520,1,8,0:0:0:0:
204,221,28853,5,4,0:0:0:0:
204,221,29187,2,0,P|146:253|118:252,1,76.4999976654053,8|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
287,266,29520,2,0,P|337:242|381:239,1,76.4999976654053,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
465,264,29853,1,8,0:0:0:0:
385,146,30020,2,0,B|349:100|381:43|381:43|334:77,1,152.999995330811,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
263,170,30520,1,8,0:0:0:0:
467,98,30687,2,0,P|471:193|402:244,1,152.999995330811,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
317,262,31187,2,0,P|276:249|226:250,1,76.4999976654053,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,232,31520,6,0,B|84:240|60:268|60:268|88:300|136:304,1,152.999995330811
243,281,32020,2,0,P|277:267|339:263,1,76.4999976654053,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,296,32353,2,0,P|434:310|388:316,1,76.4999976654053,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,261,32687,1,0,1:0:0:0:
410,136,32853,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,128,33020,1,0,1:0:0:0:
396,62,33187,2,0,P|412:110|398:162,1,76.4999976654053,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
297,7,33520,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,128,33687,1,0,1:0:0:0:
176,36,33853,1,8,0:0:0:0:
260,128,34020,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,12,34187,5,0,1:0:0:0:
458,222,34520,2,0,P|493:269|529:279,1,76.4999976654053,8|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
359,240,34853,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,152,35020,1,0,0:0:0:0:
174,290,35187,1,8,0:0:0:0:
264,309,35353,2,0,P|251:231|174:197,1,152.999995330811,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
88,325,35853,1,8,0:0:0:0:
92,193,36020,2,0,B|113:150|144:139|144:139|180:159|193:204,1,152.999995330811,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
264,309,36520,2,0,P|300:276|342:262,1,76.4999976654053,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
447,111,36853,6,0,P|455:173|435:264,1,152.999995330811,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,324,37353,1,0,1:0:0:0:
448,364,37520,1,0,0:0:0:0:
436,260,37687,2,0,P|394:225|345:221,1,76.4999976654053,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,211,38020,1,0,1:0:0:0:
187,114,38187,6,0,P|166:45|176:20,1,76.4999976654053,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
286,157,38520,2,0,P|236:209|210:213,1,76.4999976654053,8|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
271,57,38853,2,0,P|341:73|357:94,1,76.4999976654053,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
427,206,39187,1,0,1:0:0:0:
441,183,39270,1,0,0:0:0:0:
447,157,39353,1,0,1:0:0:0:
450,130,39437,1,0,0:0:0:0:
443,104,39520,6,0,P|448:26|522:8,1,152.999995330811,4|0,0:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
443,104,40020,2,0,P|372:78|280:88,1,152.999995330811,8|8,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
188,188,40520,2,0,P|156:148|156:112,1,76.4999976654053,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,168,40853,1,0,1:0:0:0:
188,188,41020,1,0,1:0:0:0:
124,256,41187,2,0,L|100:340,1,76.4999976654053,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,272,41520,1,0,1:0:0:0:
188,188,41687,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,100,41853,2,0,L|288:48,1,76.4999976654053,0|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,56,42187,6,0,B|60:104|79:178|79:178|104:160,1,152.999995330811,4|0,1:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
216,100,42687,2,0,B|248:80|248:80|320:104|384:48,1,152.999995330811,8|8,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
424,136,43187,2,0,B|376:184|304:184|304:184|336:208,1,152.999995330811,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
440,248,43687,1,0,1:0:0:0:
440,248,43853,2,0,P|468:288|472:324,1,76.4999976654053,8|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,280,44187,1,8,1:2:0:0:
308,300,44353,1,0,1:0:0:0:
304,320,44520,2,0,P|236:312|208:316,1,76.4999976654053,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,332,44853,6,0,P|76:296|76:220,1,136,4|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,252,45353,1,0,1:0:0:0:
168,252,45520,2,0,P|238:236|298:184,1,136,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
276,48,46020,1,8,1:2:0:0:
276,48,46187,2,0,P|300:104|316:116,1,68,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,152,46520,1,0,1:0:0:0:
468,152,46687,1,0,0:0:0:0:
508,348,46853,2,0,P|468:328|452:308,1,68,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,228,47187,1,0,1:0:0:0:
468,152,47353,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,100,47520,6,0,L|288:188,1,76.4999976654053,4|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,232,47853,1,0,1:0:0:0:
289,175,48020,2,0,P|359:149|427:178,1,152.999995330811
356,116,48520,2,0,P|352:80|356:40,1,76.4999976654053,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,206,48853,2,0,P|460:240|454:281,1,76.4999976654053,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
355,247,49187,1,0,1:0:0:0:
452,84,49353,1,0,0:0:0:0:
340,132,49520,6,0,P|293:142|246:137,1,95.6250036478044,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,172,49853,6,0,P|224:220|164:232,1,114.749996498108,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
135,222,50187,6,0,B|104:211|76:227|76:227|105:141|91:121,1,170
113,93,50853,6,0,P|125:145|117:189,1,85,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,332,51186,2,0,P|36:280|44:236,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
121,175,51519,2,0,B|168:184|244:144|272:184,1,127.5,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,184,51853,2,0,P|320:140|308:92,1,85,8|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
416,32,52186,2,0,L|472:124,1,85,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
408,204,52519,2,0,L|428:296,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,352,52853,5,0,0:0:0:0:
176,304,53019,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,156,53186,1,8,0:0:0:0:
280,260,53353,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,184,53519,2,0,P|176:132|184:52,1,127.5,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,80,53853,2,0,P|136:80|108:60,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,44,54186,6,0,L|12:228,1,170,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,296,54686,1,0,1:0:0:0:
248,256,54852,2,0,P|200:244|152:264,1,85,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
207,361,55186,2,0,P|247:372|288:360,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,268,55519,6,0,P|400:316|400:360,1,85,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
248,256,55852,2,0,P|256:216|284:184,1,85,8|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
396,180,56186,2,0,B|468:152|508:156|508:156|464:148|432:112,1,170,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,8,56686,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,96,56852,6,0,B|304:88|284:24|284:24|232:40|184:24,1,170,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,76,57352,2,0,P|142:117|134:159,1,85,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,212,57686,1,0,1:0:0:0:
48,296,57852,2,0,P|164:284|220:292,1,170,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,360,58352,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,260,58519,2,0,P|332:212|300:180,1,85,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,152,58852,5,4,1:2:0:0:
240,264,59019,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,80,59186,1,8,0:0:0:0:
428,200,59352,1,12,1:2:0:0:
428,200,59686,5,0,1:0:0:0:
240,264,59852,2,0,P|224:204|236:160,1,85,12|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,300,60186,1,0,1:0:0:0:
168,352,60352,1,0,1:0:0:0:
145,172,60519,2,0,P|189:167|249:203,1,85,8|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,268,60852,6,0,P|32:220|32:168,1,127.5,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,168,61186,2,0,P|36:264|16:308,1,127.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
8,308,61519,6,0,P|48:340|100:344,1,85,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,312,61852,1,8,0:0:0:0:
268,348,62019,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,304,62186,2,0,P|380:248|372:176,1,127.5,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,192,62519,2,0,P|424:184|448:160,1,85,8|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
368,64,62852,5,0,1:0:0:0:
272,136,63019,1,0,1:0:0:0:
220,16,63186,1,8,0:0:0:0:
144,124,63352,1,0,1:0:0:0:
56,44,63519,2,0,P|20:116|40:176,1,127.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,188,63852,2,0,P|84:208|108:252,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,384,64186,6,0,P|4:344|16:288,1,85,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,328,64519,1,8,0:0:0:0:
196,384,64686,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,328,64852,2,0,P|300:248|276:144,1,170,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,92,65352,2,0,P|404:80|460:92,1,85,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,256,65685,1,0,1:0:0:0:
416,256,65852,2,0,P|404:216|415:162,1,85,8|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
508,296,66186,1,0,1:0:0:0:
424,348,66352,1,0,1:0:0:0:
336,316,66519,2,0,P|280:308|240:320,1,85,8|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,344,66852,6,0,P|104:292|120:216,1,136,4|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,220,67352,2,0,L|196:260,1,68,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,84,67852,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,140,68019,1,8,0:0:0:0:
100,140,68186,6,0,P|140:160|172:160,1,68,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,140,68519,1,0,0:0:0:0:
316,84,68686,1,0,1:0:0:0:
365,161,68852,2,0,P|367:199|356:232,1,68,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,288,69186,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,300,69352,1,0,1:0:0:0:
132,248,69519,6,0,P|128:224|136:168,1,68,4|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,180,69769,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,180,69852,1,8,0:0:0:0:
232,40,70019,1,8,0:0:0:0:
232,216,70186,1,8,1:2:0:0:
120,84,70352,1,0,1:0:0:0:
300,128,70519,1,0,1:0:0:0:
300,128,70686,1,0,1:0:0:0:
300,128,71019,5,8,1:2:0:0:
332,224,71186,2,0,P|368:260|400:264,1,68,8|0,1:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
484,216,71519,2,0,L|492:176,3,34,0|0|8|8,1:0|1:0|1:2|1:2,1:0:0:0:
512,144,71852,2,0,L|508:108,3,34,8|8|8|8,1:2|1:2|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,80,72186,6,0,P|472:32|440:8,1,85,4|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,108,72519,2,0,L|368:192,1,85
260,264,72852,1,0,1:0:0:0:
208,80,73019,1,0,1:0:0:0:
284,156,73186,1,8,0:0:0:0:
184,180,73352,2,0,P|116:140|112:44,1,170,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
16,144,73852,6,0,P|12:196|-4:244,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,320,74186,1,0,0:0:0:0:
108,240,74352,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,368,74519,2,0,P|168:340|196:336,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,248,74852,6,0,P|224:188|180:160,1,85,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,300,75186,2,0,P|376:292|408:256,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,144,75519,1,0,1:0:0:0:
328,196,75686,1,0,1:0:0:0:
280,12,75852,1,8,0:0:0:0:
228,128,76019,1,0,1:0:0:0:
228,128,76102,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,128,76186,6,0,P|184:112|168:68,2,85,0|0|8,0:0|1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,104,76686,2,0,P|321:185|248:232,1,170,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
328,104,77186,2,0,P|368:92|416:100,1,85,8|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
512,236,77519,6,0,L|493:147,1,85,4|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,300,77852,2,0,L|453:383,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,272,78186,1,0,1:0:0:0:
512,236,78352,1,0,0:0:0:0:
436,300,78519,1,8,0:0:0:0:
340,272,78686,2,0,P|284:240|172:248,1,170,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
96,300,79186,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,300,79352,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,132,79519,6,0,L|44:220,1,85,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,52,79852,2,0,L|168:136,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
181,244,80186,6,0,P|248:184|340:176,1,170,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,224,80686,1,0,1:0:0:0:
444,252,80769,1,0,1:0:0:0:
424,276,80852,1,0,1:0:0:0:
392,88,81019,1,0,1:0:0:0:
324,173,81186,1,8,1:2:0:0:
228,16,81352,1,0,1:0:0:0:
228,16,81686,5,0,1:0:0:0:
300,88,81852,2,0,P|348:100|392:96,1,85,8|0,1:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
484,60,82186,5,0,3:2:0:0:
484,60,82352,1,0,3:2:0:0:
256,192,82686,5,0,1:0:0:0:
256,192,82852,12,0,85519,0:0:0:0:

MondoKuma

221 posts

Joined May 2015

MondoKuma 2015-11-14T07:28:13+00:00

Woo! thanks for applying for our forum! You'll be my first mod for this new forum!

Easy: Good
Normal:00:09:520 (4) - This goes really low on the map you should put it up a bit (thats about it)
Hard:00:16:353 (5) - Put this as a fourth to the previous stack of three
00:17:687 (5) - Add this to the previous stack
00:48:353 (3) - This is really close to the health bar
Gardeners insane: Good
Narcissus insane: 00:06:981 - Put these stacks closer together
00:22:853 (4) - 00:23:020 (5) - 00:23:187 (6) - I really like this part. Props
00:27:687 (2) - 00:28:020 (3) - Put these closer together

Misure

951 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

Misure 2015-11-14T07:43:25+00:00

MondoKuma wrote:
Woo! thanks for applying for our forum! You'll be my first mod for this new forum!

Normal:00:09:520 (4) - This goes really low on the map you should put it up a bit (thats about it) yea you are right, fixed
Hard:00:16:353 (5) - Put this as a fourth to the previous stack of three I know what you mean but it's not bad imo :3
00:17:687 (5) - Add this to the previous stack nope here
00:48:353 (3) - This is really close to the health bar fixed

thx for mod!

TtmnZk

Elite Mapper

597 posts

Joined March 2013

TtmnZk 2015-11-14T08:39:19+00:00

稍后

Feb

1,027 posts

Joined June 2014

Feb 2015-11-14T13:21:08+00:00

he is a Tsundere , you should say “OD6 plz” , then he use OD8

OD6 plz

Wing My Way

186 posts

Joined September 2013

Wing My Way 2015-11-14T15:41:16+00:00

来晚了抱歉

imouto's Insane

00:02:687 (4,1) - 试试Ctrl+g，感觉00:02:687 (4) - 这个滑条以重音来结尾不太好
00:11:353 (1) - 距离有点不够
00:12:687 (6) - 变速NC提示，~~好几把啊~~
00:14:520 (6) - 前面的slider开头都是跟电音而这个是跟鼓，显得不协调，建议改成两个单点
00:13:187 (2) - 加whistle，00:13:520 (3) - 删whistle
00:16:687 (1) - 不好看，还有00:18:853 (3) - 没包好
00:22:353 (3) - 这个overlap有点莫名
00:41:187 (4,5,6) - 这里鼓明显要强，我建议DS加大
00:43:853 (4,5,6,7) - ^
00:51:186 (2) - 这个节奏特怪……反正要我肯定就用1/4节奏了
01:04:186 (1) - 重音没音效
01:16:186 (3) - 滑条改成跳吧，不然跟后面的4很违和
01:20:103 (1,2) - 这个flow也不太好……打着很别扭
从00:07:520 - 到00:16:687 - 和01:12:186 - 到01:22:186 - 两段节奏类型一样，但是后面那段空拍明显就多，我是感觉不太好。
排列就不仔细摸了，毕竟for JB 看不太懂2333

Insane

00:03:020 (4,1) - 这个flow不太顺，4是往下弯的，而1是高于4，如果想良心还是稍微改一下吧
00:03:853 (2) - 为啥不包一下
依据节奏来说00:05:520 (3,4,5) - 这个是逐渐增强，00:05:353 (2,3) - 这两个的DS这么大，而345显得比较局促
00:08:187 (3) - 这个折返的重音正好落在结尾，当然你可能是跟的电音但我还是不建议这么放
00:09:853 (2) - 为啥不包一下
如果00:13:853 (4,5) - 跟电音，那00:14:187 (6) - 这里明显是没有这个多余的节奏的
00:16:687 (1) - 补个finish
00:22:353 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1) - 太不人性了后面kiai都没这么跳
00:24:187 (3) - 碰到00:24:853 (5) - 折返的地方了，好像是unrankable
00:28:187 (2) - 这里没有音
00:29:520 (3,4) - 角度不太好，我建议做一个类似对称的结构
00:34:853 (3,4) - 这段前面跟鼓点比较多，而且这个人声不是很明显，建议使用1/2节奏
00:43:020 (3) - 这个距离不是特别好，还不如叠到2上
00:48:020 (4) - 漏的也不好，如果你真想跟电音我建议去掉滑条，改成单点，然后中间空一拍00:48:353 - 再加单点
00:48:520 (5) - 前面的跳都跟了电音这个也别例外吧
00:52:519 (5) - overmap
00:57:186 (2) - 还是不如但点好，因为这音的节奏比较明显，使用滑条一带而过给人的感觉不好。
01:12:186 (1) - 结尾漏clap
01:21:352 (6) - 补个finish
结尾那段和前面的节奏类型一样，问题也差不多和上面一样

Narcissu's Insane

检查tag
nice diff! <3

Garden's Insane

00:03:020 (4,1) - 音错了，4提前1/2结束，1提前1/2放，向后延1/2结束
00:05:187 (3) - 这个滑条有点莫名，按照旁边的跳的位置来比较和前面太近，按照一致性建议换成单点
00:10:853 (4) - stack歪了，如果是故意的不建议这么做。
00:10:353 (2) - 这个可以往上点和00:09:853 (6) - 做blanket
00:27:103 (5,6) - 这方向也是有点奇怪，还不如都叠上
00:44:187 (6,7,8) - 这么近不好，因为鼓点强弱和00:41:520 (7,8,9) - 是一样的
00:46:187 (5) - NC, 00:46:853 (8) - 这里也可以加一个NC
00:51:853 (4) - 一个滑条跟两种声音给人感觉很违和，而且结尾的音还比开头要重，改掉
根据你前面00:53:519 (5,6) - 这种节奏我建议00:54:686 (2,3) - 变成一个滑条
排列看不太明白……rank倒是没啥大问题Orz

下面的都还行。美丽

good luck!

Garden

Nomination Assessment Team

1,343 posts

Joined June 2013

Garden 2015-11-15T04:55:42+00:00

Wing My Way wrote:
Garden's Insane

00:03:020 (4,1) - 音错了，4提前1/2结束，1提前1/2放，向后延1/2结束改了
00:05:187 (3) - 这个滑条有点莫名，按照旁边的跳的位置来比较和前面太近，按照一致性建议换成单点行
00:10:853 (4) - stack歪了，如果是故意的不建议这么做。自动stack上去就是不靠谱
00:10:353 (2) - 这个可以往上点和00:09:853 (6) - 做blanket 干脆改了一点
00:27:103 (5,6) - 这方向也是有点奇怪，还不如都叠上好
00:44:187 (6,7,8) - 这么近不好，因为鼓点强弱和00:41:520 (7,8,9) - 是一样的第一拍下去比前面重，作为到下一段的过渡我比较喜欢现在这样
00:46:187 (5) - NC, 00:46:853 (8) - 这里也可以加一个NC 前面那个给nc了
00:51:853 (4) - 一个滑条跟两种声音给人感觉很违和，而且结尾的音还比开头要重，改掉改成两个圈了
根据你前面00:53:519 (5,6) - 这种节奏我建议00:54:686 (2,3) - 变成一个滑条可以
排列看不太明白……rank倒是没啥大问题Orz 我也看不明白Orz，说到底还是太弱

谢摸图

SPOILER

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Misato Aki - Glitter.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 50103
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.7
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.3

[Metadata]
Title:Glitter
TitleUnicode:Glitter
Artist:Misato Aki
ArtistUnicode:美郷あき
Creator:Misure
Version:Garden's Insane
Source:月に寄り添う乙女の作法2
Tags:Garden imoutosan Narcissu Tsuki ni Yorisou Otome no Sahou 2 opening eroge hentai galgame visual novel Navel
BeatmapID:808359
BeatmapSetID:365826

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:8.8
SliderMultiplier:1.7
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
Video,0,"Tsuki ni Yorisou Otome no Sahou 2 OP.flv"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
854,333.333333333333,4,2,1,50,1,0
2187,-125,4,2,1,50,0,0
3020,-111.111111111111,4,2,1,50,0,0
5687,-111.111111111111,4,2,1,50,0,0
5853,-111.111111111111,4,2,1,50,0,0
6020,-111.111111111111,4,2,1,50,0,0
6520,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
6853,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
7187,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
7353,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
7520,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
18187,-100,4,2,7,30,0,0
18520,-142.857142857143,4,2,2,50,0,0
23520,-142.857142857143,4,2,7,30,0,0
23853,-142.857142857143,4,2,2,50,0,0
27353,-200,4,2,2,50,0,0
27853,-200,4,2,2,50,0,0
28187,-200,4,2,1,50,0,0
28853,-111.111111111111,4,2,1,60,0,0
39520,-111.111111111111,4,2,1,60,0,0
44853,-125,4,2,1,60,0,0
47520,-111.111111111111,6,2,1,60,0,0
49520,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,60,0,0
49853,-111.111111111111,4,2,1,60,0,0
50187,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
50520,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
50853,333.333333333333,4,2,1,70,1,1
60852,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
61186,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
61352,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
61519,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
66852,-125,4,2,1,70,0,1
70686,-125,4,2,1,70,0,1
71019,-125,4,2,1,70,0,1
71352,-125,4,2,1,70,0,1
71519,-125,4,2,1,70,0,1
71686,-125,4,2,1,70,0,1
71852,-125,4,2,1,70,0,1
72019,-125,4,2,1,70,0,1
72186,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
82186,-100,4,2,2,55,0,0
82686,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
82852,-100,4,2,1,45,0,0
84186,-100,4,2,1,35,0,0
85519,-100,4,2,1,25,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,0,128
Combo2 : 128,128,255
Combo3 : 255,128,192
Combo4 : 0,128,255

[HitObjects]
160,72,2187,6,0,P|136:108|136:148,1,68,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,248,2520,2,0,P|248:196|224:164,1,68,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,272,2853,1,8,0:0:0:0:
216,340,3020,2,0,P|256:360|304:360,1,76.4999976654053,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,360,3353,6,0,P|451:329|474:258,1,152.999995330811,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,168,3853,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,264,4020,1,0,1:0:0:0:
320,168,4187,2,0,P|328:128|348:96,1,76.4999976654053,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,264,4520,2,0,P|346:294|296:300,1,76.4999976654053,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,272,4853,5,4,1:2:0:0:
212,100,5020,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,188,5187,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,188,5353,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,100,5520,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,272,5687,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,100,5853,1,8,0:0:0:0:
126,206,6020,6,0,P|102:166|102:90,1,114.749996498108,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
99,99,6353,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,264,6520,2,0,P|152:296|100:292,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,168,6853,1,8,0:0:0:0:
212,168,7020,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,140,7103,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,120,7187,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,104,7270,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,96,7353,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,92,7437,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,96,7520,6,0,P|419:74|461:90,1,85,4|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,227,7853,2,0,P|216:179|208:135,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,240,8187,2,0,P|396:309|362:337,1,85,8|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
252,364,8520,1,0,1:0:0:0:
268,227,8686,1,0,1:0:0:0:
140,312,8853,5,0,0:0:0:0:
116,148,9020,1,0,1:0:0:0:
268,227,9187,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,224,9353,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,136,9520,2,0,P|252:80|324:60,1,127.5
320,72,9853,2,0,P|347:122|378:137,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,156,10187,5,0,1:0:0:0:
424,44,10353,1,0,0:0:0:0:
488,156,10520,2,0,P|468:208|440:232,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
370,135,10853,1,0,1:0:0:0:
264,152,11020,1,0,1:0:0:0:
268,48,11187,2,0,P|220:56|168:104,1,85,8|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
168,104,11437,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,104,11520,6,0,L|84:100,1,85,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
232,216,11853,1,8,0:0:0:0:
232,216,12020,2,0,B|184:200|96:248|44:196,1,170,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
116,108,12520,1,8,0:0:0:0:
228,100,12687,1,0,1:0:0:0:
304,192,12853,6,0,P|304:240|280:276,1,85,4|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,340,13187,2,0,P|160:292|184:256,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,124,13520,1,0,1:0:0:0:
304,192,13687,1,0,1:0:0:0:
416,80,13853,1,8,0:0:0:0:
312,68,14020,2,0,P|332:152|436:176,1,170,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
312,68,14520,6,0,P|256:68|216:76,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,156,14853,1,0,0:0:0:0:
227,73,15020,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,240,15187,1,8,0:0:0:0:
312,160,15353,2,0,L|348:132,1,42.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,96,15520,6,0,P|452:160|428:196,1,85,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,248,15853,1,8,0:0:0:0:
472,304,16020,1,0,1:0:0:0:
448,332,16103,1,0,1:0:0:0:
416,352,16187,1,0,1:0:0:0:
316,336,16353,1,0,1:0:0:0:
232,380,16520,1,8,0:0:0:0:
148,364,16687,1,0,1:0:0:0:
148,364,17020,5,0,1:0:0:0:
88,232,17687,5,0,1:0:0:0:
144,368,17853,1,0,1:0:0:0:
88,232,18187,5,2,0:0:0:0:
88,232,18520,2,0,P|72:276|48:308,1,59.4999981842042,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,156,18853,2,0,P|64:100|116:64,1,118.999996368408,0|0,1:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
168,176,19353,2,0,B|192:228|168:280|168:280|192:272,1,118.999996368408,0|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
304,312,19853,1,0,3:0:0:0:
304,312,20020,6,0,P|268:360|196:364,1,118.999996368408
304,312,20520,2,0,L|384:296,1,59.4999981842042,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,244,20853,2,0,P|476:308|444:376,1,118.999996368408,0|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
460,244,21353,2,0,P|440:180|456:124,1,118.999996368408,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,124,21853,2,0,P|324:144|288:148,1,59.4999981842042,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
306,147,22353,5,0,0:0:0:0:
240,116,22520,1,0,3:0:0:0:
163,117,22687,1,0,0:0:0:0:
44,56,22853,1,0,1:0:0:0:
96,159,23020,1,0,0:0:0:0:
163,117,23187,1,0,3:0:0:0:
240,116,23353,1,0,0:0:0:0:
318,27,23520,5,2,0:0:0:0:
318,27,23853,2,0,P|362:35|402:27,1,59.4999981842042,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
238,67,24187,2,0,P|234:127|200:200,1,118.999996368408,0|0,1:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
150,67,24687,2,0,P|94:87|24:76,2,118.999996368408,0|0|0,0:0|3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
35,80,25520,6,0,L|0:155,1,59.4999981842042,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,176,25853,2,0,L|84:248,1,59.4999981842042,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,232,26187,2,0,P|200:296|240:344,1,118.999996368408,0|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
372,344,26687,2,0,P|356:280|316:232,1,118.999996368408
324,238,27103,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,238,27187,1,0,3:0:0:0:
424,200,27353,6,0,B|459:224|492:228|492:228|520:160|460:92,1,212.5,2|0,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,200,28353,5,0,1:0:0:0:
363,35,28520,1,8,0:0:0:0:
204,221,28853,5,4,0:0:0:0:
204,221,29187,2,0,P|146:253|118:252,1,76.4999976654053,8|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
287,266,29520,2,0,P|337:242|381:239,1,76.4999976654053,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
465,264,29853,1,8,0:0:0:0:
385,146,30020,2,0,B|349:100|381:43|381:43|334:77,1,152.999995330811,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
263,170,30520,1,8,0:0:0:0:
467,98,30687,2,0,P|471:193|402:244,1,152.999995330811,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
317,262,31187,2,0,P|276:249|226:250,1,76.4999976654053,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,232,31520,6,0,B|84:240|60:268|60:268|88:300|136:304,1,152.999995330811
243,281,32020,2,0,P|277:267|339:263,1,76.4999976654053,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,296,32353,2,0,P|434:310|388:316,1,76.4999976654053,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,261,32687,1,0,1:0:0:0:
410,136,32853,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,128,33020,1,0,1:0:0:0:
396,62,33187,2,0,P|412:110|398:162,1,76.4999976654053,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
297,7,33520,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,128,33687,1,0,1:0:0:0:
176,36,33853,1,8,0:0:0:0:
260,128,34020,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,12,34187,5,0,1:0:0:0:
458,222,34520,2,0,P|493:269|529:279,1,76.4999976654053,8|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
359,240,34853,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,152,35020,1,0,0:0:0:0:
174,290,35187,1,8,0:0:0:0:
264,309,35353,2,0,P|251:231|174:197,1,152.999995330811,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
88,325,35853,1,8,0:0:0:0:
92,193,36020,2,0,B|113:150|144:139|144:139|180:159|193:204,1,152.999995330811,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
264,309,36520,2,0,P|300:276|342:262,1,76.4999976654053,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
447,111,36853,6,0,P|455:173|435:264,1,152.999995330811,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,324,37353,1,0,1:0:0:0:
448,364,37520,1,0,0:0:0:0:
436,260,37687,2,0,P|394:225|345:221,1,76.4999976654053,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,211,38020,1,0,1:0:0:0:
187,114,38187,6,0,P|166:45|176:20,1,76.4999976654053,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
286,157,38520,2,0,P|236:209|210:213,1,76.4999976654053,8|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
271,57,38853,2,0,P|341:73|357:94,1,76.4999976654053,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
427,206,39187,1,0,1:0:0:0:
441,183,39270,1,0,0:0:0:0:
447,157,39353,1,0,1:0:0:0:
450,130,39437,1,0,0:0:0:0:
443,104,39520,6,0,P|448:26|522:8,1,152.999995330811,4|0,0:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
443,104,40020,2,0,P|372:78|280:88,1,152.999995330811,8|8,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
188,188,40520,2,0,P|156:148|156:112,1,76.4999976654053,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,168,40853,1,0,1:0:0:0:
188,188,41020,1,0,1:0:0:0:
124,256,41187,2,0,L|100:340,1,76.4999976654053,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,272,41520,1,0,1:0:0:0:
188,188,41687,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,100,41853,2,0,L|288:48,1,76.4999976654053,0|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,56,42187,6,0,B|60:104|79:178|79:178|104:160,1,152.999995330811,4|0,1:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
216,100,42687,2,0,B|248:80|248:80|320:104|384:48,1,152.999995330811,8|8,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
424,136,43187,2,0,B|376:184|304:184|304:184|336:208,1,152.999995330811,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
440,248,43687,1,0,1:0:0:0:
440,248,43853,2,0,P|468:288|472:324,1,76.4999976654053,8|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,280,44187,1,8,1:2:0:0:
308,300,44353,1,0,1:0:0:0:
304,320,44520,2,0,P|236:312|208:316,1,76.4999976654053,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,332,44853,6,0,P|76:296|76:220,1,136,4|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,252,45353,1,0,1:0:0:0:
168,252,45520,2,0,P|238:236|298:184,1,136,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
276,48,46020,1,8,1:2:0:0:
276,48,46187,6,0,P|300:104|316:116,1,68,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,152,46520,1,0,1:0:0:0:
468,152,46687,1,0,0:0:0:0:
508,348,46853,2,0,P|468:328|452:308,1,68,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,228,47187,1,0,1:0:0:0:
468,152,47353,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,100,47520,6,0,L|288:188,1,76.4999976654053,4|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,232,47853,1,0,1:0:0:0:
289,175,48020,2,0,P|359:149|427:178,1,152.999995330811
356,116,48520,2,0,P|352:80|356:40,1,76.4999976654053,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,206,48853,2,0,P|460:240|454:281,1,76.4999976654053,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
355,247,49187,1,0,1:0:0:0:
452,84,49353,1,0,0:0:0:0:
340,132,49520,6,0,P|293:142|246:137,1,95.6250036478044,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,172,49853,6,0,P|224:220|164:232,1,114.749996498108,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
135,222,50187,6,0,B|104:211|76:227|76:227|105:141|91:121,1,170
113,93,50853,6,0,P|125:145|117:189,1,85,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,332,51186,2,0,P|36:280|44:236,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
121,175,51519,2,0,B|168:184|244:144|272:184,1,127.5,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,176,51853,1,8,0:0:0:0:
328,28,52019,1,0,1:0:0:0:
424,52,52186,2,0,L|480:144,1,85,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
416,208,52519,2,0,L|436:300,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,352,52853,5,0,0:0:0:0:
176,304,53019,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,156,53186,1,8,0:0:0:0:
280,260,53353,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,184,53519,2,0,P|176:132|184:52,1,127.5,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,80,53853,2,0,P|136:80|108:60,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,48,54186,6,0,L|12:232,1,170,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,280,54686,2,0,B|201:245|176:199|176:199|116:200|97:254,1,170,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
207,361,55186,2,0,P|247:372|288:360,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,268,55519,6,0,P|400:316|400:360,1,85,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
248,256,55852,2,0,P|256:216|284:184,1,85,8|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
396,180,56186,2,0,B|468:152|508:156|508:156|464:148|432:112,1,170,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,8,56686,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,96,56852,6,0,B|304:88|284:24|284:24|232:40|184:24,1,170,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,76,57352,2,0,P|142:117|134:159,1,85,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,212,57686,1,0,1:0:0:0:
48,296,57852,2,0,P|164:284|220:292,1,170,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,360,58352,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,260,58519,2,0,P|332:212|300:180,1,85,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,152,58852,5,4,1:2:0:0:
240,264,59019,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,80,59186,1,8,0:0:0:0:
428,200,59352,1,12,1:2:0:0:
428,200,59686,5,0,1:0:0:0:
240,264,59852,2,0,P|224:204|236:160,1,85,12|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,300,60186,1,0,1:0:0:0:
168,352,60352,1,0,1:0:0:0:
145,172,60519,2,0,P|189:167|249:203,1,85,8|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,268,60852,6,0,P|32:220|32:168,1,127.5,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,168,61186,2,0,P|36:264|16:308,1,127.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
8,308,61519,6,0,P|48:340|100:344,1,85,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,312,61852,1,8,0:0:0:0:
268,348,62019,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,304,62186,2,0,P|380:248|372:176,1,127.5,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,192,62519,2,0,P|424:184|448:160,1,85,8|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
368,64,62852,5,0,1:0:0:0:
272,136,63019,1,0,1:0:0:0:
220,16,63186,1,8,0:0:0:0:
144,124,63352,1,0,1:0:0:0:
56,44,63519,2,0,P|20:116|40:176,1,127.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,188,63852,2,0,P|84:208|108:252,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,384,64186,6,0,P|4:344|16:288,1,85,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,328,64519,1,8,0:0:0:0:
196,384,64686,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,328,64852,2,0,P|300:248|276:144,1,170,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,92,65352,2,0,P|404:80|460:92,1,85,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,256,65685,1,0,1:0:0:0:
416,256,65852,2,0,P|404:216|415:162,1,85,8|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
508,296,66186,1,0,1:0:0:0:
424,348,66352,1,0,1:0:0:0:
336,316,66519,2,0,P|280:308|240:320,1,85,8|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,344,66852,6,0,P|104:292|120:216,1,136,4|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,220,67352,2,0,L|196:260,1,68,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,84,67852,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,140,68019,1,8,0:0:0:0:
100,140,68186,6,0,P|140:160|172:160,1,68,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,140,68519,1,0,0:0:0:0:
316,84,68686,1,0,1:0:0:0:
365,161,68852,2,0,P|367:199|356:232,1,68,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,288,69186,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,300,69352,1,0,1:0:0:0:
132,248,69519,6,0,P|128:224|136:168,1,68,4|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,180,69769,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,180,69852,1,8,0:0:0:0:
232,40,70019,1,8,0:0:0:0:
232,216,70186,1,8,1:2:0:0:
120,84,70352,1,0,1:0:0:0:
300,128,70519,1,0,1:0:0:0:
300,128,70686,1,0,1:0:0:0:
300,128,71019,5,8,1:2:0:0:
332,224,71186,2,0,P|368:260|400:264,1,68,8|0,1:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
484,216,71519,2,0,L|492:176,3,34,0|0|8|8,1:0|1:0|1:2|1:2,1:0:0:0:
512,144,71852,2,0,L|508:108,3,34,8|8|8|8,1:2|1:2|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,80,72186,6,0,P|472:32|440:8,1,85,4|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,108,72519,2,0,L|368:192,1,85
260,264,72852,1,0,1:0:0:0:
208,80,73019,1,0,1:0:0:0:
284,156,73186,1,8,0:0:0:0:
184,180,73352,2,0,P|116:140|112:44,1,170,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
16,144,73852,6,0,P|12:196|-4:244,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,320,74186,1,0,0:0:0:0:
108,240,74352,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,368,74519,2,0,P|168:340|196:336,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,248,74852,6,0,P|224:188|180:160,1,85,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,300,75186,2,0,P|376:292|408:256,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,144,75519,1,0,1:0:0:0:
328,196,75686,1,0,1:0:0:0:
280,12,75852,1,8,0:0:0:0:
228,128,76019,1,0,1:0:0:0:
228,128,76102,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,128,76186,6,0,P|184:112|168:68,2,85,0|0|8,0:0|1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,104,76686,2,0,P|321:185|248:232,1,170,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
328,104,77186,2,0,P|368:92|416:100,1,85,8|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
512,236,77519,6,0,L|493:147,1,85,4|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,300,77852,2,0,L|453:383,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,272,78186,1,0,1:0:0:0:
512,236,78352,1,0,0:0:0:0:
436,300,78519,1,8,0:0:0:0:
340,272,78686,2,0,P|284:240|172:248,1,170,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
96,300,79186,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,300,79352,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,132,79519,6,0,L|44:220,1,85,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,52,79852,2,0,L|168:136,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
181,244,80186,6,0,P|248:184|340:176,1,170,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,224,80686,1,0,1:0:0:0:
444,252,80769,1,0,1:0:0:0:
424,276,80852,1,0,1:0:0:0:
392,88,81019,1,0,1:0:0:0:
324,173,81186,1,8,1:2:0:0:
228,16,81352,1,0,1:0:0:0:
228,16,81686,5,0,1:0:0:0:
300,88,81852,2,0,P|348:100|392:96,1,85,8|0,1:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
484,60,82186,5,0,3:2:0:0:
484,60,82352,1,0,3:2:0:0:
256,192,82686,5,0,1:0:0:0:
256,192,82852,12,0,85519,0:0:0:0:

Misure

951 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

Misure 2015-11-15T07:19:09+00:00

Wing My Way wrote:
来晚了抱歉不晚不晚
Insane

00:03:020 (4,1) - 这个flow不太顺，4是往下弯的，而1是高于4，如果想良心还是稍微改一下吧方向没改位置稍微把4弄高了点
00:03:853 (2) - 为啥不包一下啊确实不想想让flow往右上去
依据节奏来说00:05:520 (3,4,5) - 这个是逐渐增强，00:05:353 (2,3) - 这两个的DS这么大，而345显得比较局促因为感觉上345是一组所以就这样了..
00:08:187 (3) - 这个折返的重音正好落在结尾，当然你可能是跟的电音但我还是不建议这么放分出去了个note
00:09:853 (2) - 为啥不包一下 flow为主了。
如果00:13:853 (4,5) - 跟电音，那00:14:187 (6) - 这里明显是没有这个多余的节奏的。。。其实我节奏比较弱听大不懂都是凭感觉这里也有人提过我的回复就是 “稍微变化一下”... 暂时这样
00:16:687 (1) - 补个finish 之前有考虑过感觉有点太响了不加也差不多吧大概结尾也是
00:22:353 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1) - 太不人性了后面kiai都没这么跳还行吧...最开始其实比这更跳主要前面空了一拍这应该还好？
00:24:187 (3) - 碰到00:24:853 (5) - 折返的地方了，好像是unrankable 这个不会吧好像不完全重叠就行吧回头问问BN
00:28:187 (2) - 这里没有音是...但是我觉得从打击感上来看隔刚好1/1拍效果比较好
00:29:520 (3,4) - 角度不太好，我建议做一个类似对称的结构来点变化啊;w;不改了
00:34:853 (3,4) - 这段前面跟鼓点比较多，而且这个人声不是很明显，建议使用1/2节奏感觉差不多改了
00:43:020 (3) - 这个距离不是特别好，还不如叠到2上我感觉还行主要叠起来和前面不一致Orz
00:48:020 (4) - 漏的也不好，如果你真想跟电音我建议去掉滑条，改成单点，然后中间空一拍00:48:353 - 再加单点这里比较纠结啊最开始差不多全是1/2单点中间有个折返后来改成空了一拍后来是现在这样不大想空拍了现在先这样了
00:48:520 (5) - 前面的跳都跟了电音这个也别例外吧 ^ 突出一下后面四个note的跳吧
00:52:519 (5) - overmap 大概是但是我觉得问题不大..
00:57:186 (2) - 还是不如但点好，因为这音的节奏比较明显，使用滑条一带而过给人的感觉不好。偏向用滑条
01:12:186 (1) - 结尾漏clap。。。怎么听出来的太强了
01:21:352 (6) - 补个finish
结尾那段和前面的节奏类型一样，问题也差不多和上面一样

Narcissu's Insane

检查tag 咦好像没问题啊
nice diff! <3
下面的都还行。美丽

good luck!

虽然节奏相关都没怎么改但那确实是我节奏弱听不大懂，呜喵王你不要介意（趴
thx for modding！

Raose

698 posts

Joined July 2012

Raose 2015-11-15T08:55:33+00:00

I haven't updated this map since a day ago, so some things may already be changed D:
everyone's diffs needs more finishes

[imouto's Insane]

00:07:020 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - i don't think the stream flows very well, either make it all straight, or all curvy
00:12:187 (5,6) - as cool as this pattern is, i break everytime maybe move 6 a bit so it's not completely stacked?
00:16:687 (1) - add whistle/finish to tail, it sounds very empty right now
00:45:353 - add beat here to fit music?
00:52:853 (7) - the whistle here sounds very random and unfitting imo. if you want to include it, maybe it'd be better to put in places like 00:53:519 (1)
00:55:519 (6) - ^ and all other places in chorus
01:14:852 (1) - i think a different slider would look neater and fitting: http://puu.sh/lm6wk/a81ae883c2.jpg or http://puu.sh/lm6y2/2c82ae90e6.jpg
01:16:519 (4,5) - to better fit the guitar, how about this rhythm? http://puu.sh/lm6AN/61f85449b3.jpg
01:19:186 (2) - ctrl+G for more circular flow with 1 and 3
01:22:186 (1,2) - ctrl+G (or switch positions on timeline) for a larger jump to 1 (fits the music better) and it flows better also

[Insane]

needs more finishes

00:03:353 (1) - how about rotating it a different direction? i think this would make it flow better: http://puu.sh/lm6Si/c1b893f9a4.jpg
00:08:187 (3) - consider curving it the other way for better flow from 2: http://puu.sh/lm6XW/3cbe8d3314.jpg
00:12:020 (3,4,5,6) - imo this pattern doesn't flow very well, how about ctrl+G 3 so the pattern is rotating the same direction as 00:12:020 (3)? and then switching 4 and 5: url]http://puu.sh/lm74j/27c9b41181.jpg[/url] i think this would make it flow a bit nicer
00:14:020 (5) - add finish
00:15:520 (1) - ^
00:16:687 (1) - ^
00:21:853 (4) - to better fit vocals, consider shortening by 1/2, moving it to 00:22:020, and adding a circle at 00:21:853. It would also keep the momentum of the map going, because the pause right now is weird
00:25:687 (2,1) - the sudden change in rotation from clockwise to counterclockwise makes the pattern awkward to play D: try removing the repeat on 2 and adding a circle, maybe like this? http://puu.sh/lm7gC/8441fe74e1.jpg
00:28:187 (2) - there is no sound here LOL so it'd be very hard for the player to tell where to click. There is no need for a circle here, but if you want to map this part, you should extend the slider 00:27:353 (1)
00:33:437 - add a note?
00:54:519 (2,3) - ctrl+G to better fit vocals
00:57:186 (2,3) - ^
00:58:186 (5) - this slider isn't very pretty D: if you're trying to represent the vocals, it's better to use 2 1/2 sliders. if you want to keep it, try a regular curved slider, or one of the sharply angled sliders
00:59:352 (3) - i recommend changing this to a slider, because having a 1/1 pause here at the climax really doesn't fit the strong and powerful section, and it kills the momentum D:
01:10:686 (1) - soft finish on head
01:11:519 (1) - make it less curved so it looks nicer and better to play: http://puu.sh/lm87R/a5fc2997b7.jpg
01:13:352 (4) - soft finish on head
01:14:852 (1) - i think it would play better as a regularly curved slider, but if you want to make it very sharp and edgy, how about this? http://puu.sh/lm8kH/fe218da3cd.jpg
01:15:519 (3) - i don't think it plays very well when it curves so sharply D:
01:16:019 (4) - add finish on head
01:18:686 (5) - ^
01:21:352 (6) - ^

[Narcissu's Insane]

00:06:853 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - could make it a stream?
00:40:520 (3) - i think a soft finish would be cooler
00:42:187 (1) - ^
00:44:853 (1) - ^
00:46:020 - add note?
01:00:852 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - the stream is not in the music at all D: i think the rhythm is only 1/2
01:08:186 (1) - since there's a beat in the red tick, how about moving this over 1/2 later, and adding a circle here?

[Garden's Insane]

00:14:020 (6) - add finish on head
00:17:353 - i hear a drum here, how about adding a note?
00:27:103 (5) - i don't hear anything in the music that needs this note D:
00:39:437 (7) - ^
00:40:520 (3) - add finish on head
00:44:187 (6,7,8) - it's possible some people might break here because of sudden small distance D: maybe space it out more?
01:10:686 (8) - add finish, also i think it would suit the song better if this was unstacked
01:16:019 (6) - finish

[Hard]

00:14:853 (1) - NC not needed
00:24:187 (3) - i think the jump is sudden and random, how about this? http://puu.sh/lmakC/8cb00bcb7a.jpg
00:33:520 (3) - this is a huge jump, and i think it may be too big for a hard (especially since it's not kiai yet). consider ctrl+G to decrease the distance
00:42:187 (1) - this is a weirdly shaped slider D: how about making it only have 1/2 red nodes or making it normally curved?
00:48:853 (1) - NC not needed
00:54:686 (3) - i think reducing the nodes would make the slider look cleaner: http://puu.sh/lmavb/401232ac0c.jpg
00:57:353 (2) - ^ http://puu.sh/lmax3/410cef0108.jpg maybe
00:58:186 (4,5) - is a bit awkward to play because 4 curves to the left but 5 is on the right
01:00:853 (1,2) - SV change and NC seem a bit random and unnecessary imo, since the song doesn't get more intense

[Normal]

your combos are not consistent; in the beginning you combo every 2 white ticks, but it changes to every 1 in the chorus

00:10:187 (5) - NC here and remove NC on 00:11:353 (1) for consistency
01:19:519 (4) - move down a bit so 1 doesn't overlap with 3 and it looks cleaner: http://puu.sh/lmaOf/62b8f1f414.jpg

[Narcissu's Easy]

this is pretty hard for an easy :O
nothing here, but make sure to apply any hitsound changes from other diff

hope my mod is helpful

goodluck with the map!!

Narcissu

1,744 posts

Joined August 2012

Narcissu 2015-11-15T09:19:03+00:00

Raose wrote:
[Narcissu's Insane]
00:06:853 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - could make it a stream? …… i'm sorry i skip the stream …… my acc need triplet >_<
00:40:520 (3) - i think a soft finish would be cooler …… all add
00:42:187 (1) - ^
00:44:853 (1) - ^
00:46:020 - add note? …… skip beat follow voice better ??
01:00:852 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - the stream is not in the music at all D: i think the rhythm is only 1/2 …… ok , 1/2 jump to get pp
01:08:186 (1) - since there's a beat in the red tick, how about moving this over 1/2 later, and adding a circle here? …… same as above …… i think skip the beat better followe voice XD
[Narcissu's Easy]

this is pretty hard for an easy :O …… i know Orz
nothing here, but make sure to apply any hitsound changes from other diff …… ~~hitsound by hitsoundcopyer ?? i try remap hitsound ……~~ …… i fail ……

stream rip , so od 7.7 now

easy

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Misato Aki - Glitter.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 50103
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.3

[Metadata]
Title:Glitter
TitleUnicode:Glitter
Artist:Misato Aki
ArtistUnicode:美郷あき
Creator:Misure
Version:Narcissu's Easy
Source:月に寄り添う乙女の作法2
Tags:Garden imoutosan Narcissu Tsuki ni Yorisou Otome no Sahou 2 opening eroge hentai galgame visual novel Navel
BeatmapID:819420
BeatmapSetID:365826

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:0.8
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
854,333.333333333333,4,2,1,60,1,0
50853,333.333333333333,4,2,1,60,1,1
61186,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
61519,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
72186,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
82852,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
83519,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
84186,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
84852,-100,4,2,1,20,0,0
85519,-100,4,2,1,10,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,0,128
Combo2 : 128,128,255
Combo3 : 255,128,192
Combo4 : 0,128,255

[HitObjects]
88,84,2187,6,0,P|56:160|72:256,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,320,3353,2,0,L|296:316,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,276,4187,1,2,0:0:0:0:
424,336,4520,1,2,0:0:0:0:
504,304,4853,6,0,P|520:232|488:128,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,40,6020,2,0,B|372:68|372:68|216:56,1,200,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,100,7187,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,144,7520,6,0,P|240:188|224:252,1,80,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,284,8187,1,0,1:0:0:0:
236,344,8520,1,8,0:0:0:0:
236,344,8687,2,0,L|376:336,1,120,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,304,9520,2,0,P|448:268|448:220,1,80,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,172,10187,6,0,P|356:100|372:8,1,160,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
260,92,11353,2,0,L|108:100,1,120,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,52,12187,1,0,1:0:0:0:
12,124,12520,1,8,0:0:0:0:
88,172,12853,6,0,P|88:220|68:268,1,80,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
4,300,13520,1,0,1:0:0:0:
84,336,13853,1,8,0:0:0:0:
84,336,14020,2,0,L|224:328,1,120,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,292,14853,2,0,L|380:296,1,80,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,348,15520,6,0,P|408:288|440:176,1,160,4|0,1:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
496,140,16520,1,8,0:0:0:0:
496,140,16687,2,0,L|488:36,1,80,0|4,1:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
216,120,18187,6,0,P|132:112|64:52,2,160,2|0|2,0:0|3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,68,19853,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,108,20187,2,0,L|372:208,1,80,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,212,20853,6,0,L|468:24,2,160,2|0|2,0:0|3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,268,22520,2,0,P|384:312|396:356,2,80,0|0|0,0:0|3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,212,23520,6,0,L|284:224,1,160,2|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
220,180,24520,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,184,24853,2,0,P|92:256|136:340,1,160,2|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
180,260,25853,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,180,26187,6,0,L|224:88,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,76,26853,2,0,L|304:155,1,80,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,128,27520,2,2,B|424:156|424:156|424:192|424:192|464:264|440:364,1,240,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,308,28853,5,2,0:0:0:0:
288,352,29187,1,8,0:0:0:0:
248,276,29520,2,0,P|208:264|156:272,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,300,30020,2,0,P|84:328|0:296,1,120,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,240,30853,2,0,L|64:148,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
4,96,31520,5,2,0:0:0:0:
72,40,31853,1,8,0:0:0:0:
132,104,32187,2,0,P|172:108|240:88,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,76,32687,2,0,L|240:224,1,120,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,248,33520,2,0,P|168:288|184:336,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,280,34187,5,2,0:0:0:0:
336,320,34520,1,8,0:0:0:0:
416,288,34853,2,0,L|424:176,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,184,35353,2,0,P|460:120|428:56,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,40,36187,1,2,0:0:0:0:
284,88,36520,1,8,0:0:0:0:
204,52,36853,6,0,L|64:48,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,108,37687,1,8,0:0:0:0:
104,136,38020,2,0,P|120:196|96:272,1,120,8|8,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,308,38853,2,0,L|-16:316,2,40,8|8|4,0:3|0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
107,251,39520,6,0,P|184:240|256:268,1,120,4|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,320,40353,1,2,0:0:0:0:
280,320,40520,2,0,P|360:336|444:308,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
484,240,41520,1,2,0:0:0:0:
420,180,41853,1,8,0:0:0:0:
484,120,42187,6,0,P|504:64|476:-4,1,120,4|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,64,43020,1,2,0:0:0:0:
420,64,43187,2,0,P|336:64|248:52,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,108,44187,2,0,L|188:172,2,40,8|8|4,0:3|0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
120,60,44853,6,0,P|80:48|28:60,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,136,45520,2,0,P|45:164|30:215,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,212,46187,2,0,B|144:252|144:252|148:380,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,300,47520,6,0,L|440:308,2,120,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,256,48853,2,0,P|220:212|224:152,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,152,49520,1,4,0:2:0:0:
388,124,49853,1,4,0:2:0:0:
472,156,50187,2,0,P|480:200|472:236,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,300,50853,6,0,L|232:308,1,160,4|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,260,51853,1,8,0:0:0:0:
180,260,52019,2,0,P|116:252|44:284,1,120,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
8,204,52853,2,0,L|0:104,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,60,53519,5,2,0:0:0:0:
144,100,53853,1,8,0:0:0:0:
216,52,54186,1,2,0:0:0:0:
292,96,54519,1,8,0:0:0:0:
292,96,54686,2,0,P|364:92|424:48,1,120,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,124,55519,2,0,P|484:164|476:212,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,172,56186,6,0,B|376:216|376:216|388:344,1,160,2|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,304,57186,1,8,0:0:0:0:
300,304,57352,2,0,L|152:296,1,120,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,340,58186,1,2,0:0:0:0:
56,268,58519,1,8,0:0:0:0:
132,224,58852,6,0,B|140:144|140:144|112:84,2,120,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,268,60186,1,2,0:0:0:0:
56,180,60519,1,8,0:0:0:0:
132,224,60852,2,2,P|172:228|224:212,1,80,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,148,61519,6,0,P|344:132|436:156,1,160,2|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,216,62519,1,8,0:0:0:0:
476,216,62686,2,0,L|488:364,1,120,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,332,63519,2,0,L|372:232,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
385,166,64186,5,2,0:0:0:0:
305,130,64519,1,8,0:0:0:0:
246,195,64853,1,2,0:0:0:0:
290,271,65186,1,8,0:0:0:0:
290,271,65352,2,0,B|248:284|248:284|140:272,1,120,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,312,66186,2,0,L|32:316,2,40,4|8|8,0:3|0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
152,248,66852,6,0,P|156:160|116:72,1,160,4|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,20,68186,2,0,P|288:108|328:196,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,208,69186,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,136,69519,6,0,L|452:72,2,40,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,216,70186,2,0,L|500:320,1,80,8|4,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
468,328,70686,2,0,B|324:304|324:304|240:312,1,200,4|8,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,360,71852,1,8,0:0:0:0:
116,336,72186,6,0,P|96:304|92:244,1,80,4|8,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,200,72853,1,0,1:0:0:0:
80,148,73186,1,8,0:0:0:0:
80,148,73353,2,0,L|72:8,1,120,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,60,74186,2,0,P|200:60|252:40,1,80,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,84,74853,6,0,P|396:72|480:96,1,160,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
448,220,76019,2,0,L|296:212,1,120,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,160,76853,1,0,1:0:0:0:
212,232,77186,1,8,0:0:0:0:
156,164,77519,6,0,P|112:156|64:176,1,80,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,244,78186,1,0,1:0:0:0:
64,312,78519,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,312,78686,2,0,P|120:332|196:288,1,120,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,232,79519,2,0,L|308:236,1,80,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,304,80186,6,0,P|320:248|336:144,1,160,4|8,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,104,81186,1,8,0:0:0:0:
404,104,81352,2,0,P|352:68|284:76,1,120,4|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,112,82186,2,0,L|164:104,1,40,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,120,82686,5,2,1:2:0:0:
256,192,82852,12,0,85519,0:0:0:0:

insane

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Misato Aki - Glitter.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 50103
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2

[Metadata]
Title:Glitter
TitleUnicode:Glitter
Artist:Misato Aki
ArtistUnicode:美郷あき
Creator:Misure
Version:Narcissu's Insane
Source:月に寄り添う乙女の作法2
Tags:Garden imoutosan Narcissu Tsuki ni Yorisou Otome no Sahou 2 opening eroge hentai galgame visual novel Navel
BeatmapID:819842
BeatmapSetID:365826

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7.7
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
854,333.333333333333,4,2,1,60,1,0
2187,-71.4285714285714,4,2,1,60,0,0
7520,-62.5,4,2,1,60,0,0
18187,-83.3333333333333,4,2,1,30,0,0
27687,-76.9230769230769,4,2,1,30,0,0
28020,-71.4285714285714,4,2,1,30,0,0
28353,-66.6666666666667,4,2,1,30,0,0
28853,-62.5,4,2,1,60,0,0
50853,333.333333333333,4,2,1,70,1,1
50853,-58.8235294117647,4,2,1,70,0,1
61186,-58.8235294117647,4,2,1,70,0,0
61519,-58.8235294117647,4,2,1,70,0,1
72186,-62.5,4,2,1,60,0,0
82852,-62.5,4,2,1,50,0,0
83519,-62.5,4,2,1,40,0,0
84186,-62.5,4,2,1,30,0,0
84852,-62.5,4,2,1,20,0,0
85519,-62.5,4,2,1,10,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,0,128
Combo2 : 128,128,255
Combo3 : 255,128,192
Combo4 : 0,128,255

[HitObjects]
168,168,2187,6,0,L|98:165,1,69.9999978637696,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
242,105,2520,1,2,0:0:0:0:
330,197,2687,2,0,P|366:201|422:185,1,69.9999978637696,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
242,105,3020,2,0,L|236:20,1,69.9999978637696,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,260,3353,6,0,B|116:252|116:252|228:268,1,139.999995727539,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,368,3853,2,0,P|312:336|304:280,1,69.9999978637696,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
242,105,4187,2,0,P|246:141|234:185,1,69.9999978637696,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,212,4520,2,0,L|472:220,1,69.9999978637696,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,136,4853,6,0,L|-4:140,2,139.999995727539,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,56,5687,2,0,L|48:48,1,69.9999978637696,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,160,6020,6,0,P|192:240|164:316,1,139.999995727539,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,128,6520,2,0,L|284:24,1,69.9999978637696,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,208,6853,1,8,0:0:0:0:
412,208,6937,1,8,0:0:0:0:
412,208,7020,1,8,0:0:0:0:
236,232,7187,1,8,0:0:0:0:
236,232,7271,1,8,0:0:0:0:
236,232,7354,1,8,0:0:0:0:
468,124,7520,6,0,P|504:188|464:296,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,208,8020,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,128,8187,2,0,L|180:124,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,68,8520,1,10,0:0:0:0:
316,228,8687,6,0,L|120:236,1,160,2|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,208,9187,2,0,B|28:252|28:252|40:380,1,160,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,264,9687,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,100,9853,1,2,0:0:0:0:
180,148,10020,1,2,0:0:0:0:
180,148,10103,1,2,0:0:0:0:
180,148,10187,6,0,P|256:144|344:88,2,160,2|8|2,1:2|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,152,11020,2,0,P|444:148|504:160,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,304,11353,1,2,0:0:0:0:
420,304,11437,1,2,0:0:0:0:
420,304,11520,5,2,0:0:0:0:
280,188,11687,1,2,0:0:0:0:
236,300,11853,1,2,0:0:0:0:
392,216,12020,2,0,P|416:132|404:48,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,128,12520,1,8,0:0:0:0:
260,128,12687,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,40,12853,6,0,L|124:224,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,264,13353,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,296,13520,2,0,L|196:388,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,199,13853,1,2,0:0:0:0:
308,192,14020,6,0,B|324:240|324:240|308:376,1,160,2|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,288,14520,2,0,L|492:296,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,184,14853,1,2,0:0:0:0:
408,184,15020,1,2,0:0:0:0:
404,84,15187,2,0,L|496:48,1,80,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,192,15520,6,0,P|224:200|140:140,1,160,4|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,76,16020,1,8,0:0:0:0:
252,76,16103,1,8,0:0:0:0:
252,76,16187,1,8,0:0:0:0:
200,316,16353,1,8,0:0:0:0:
120,184,16520,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,236,16687,6,0,L|476:232,1,160,2|8,1:2|0:3,0:0:0:0:
220,168,17187,1,8,0:3:0:0:
220,168,17270,1,8,0:3:0:0:
220,168,17353,2,0,P|208:120|220:64,1,80,4|4,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
380,120,17687,2,0,P|392:168|380:224,2,80,4|4|4,0:3|0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
100,216,18187,1,6,0:3:0:0:
124,240,18520,6,0,L|128:328,1,59.9999981689454,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,336,18853,2,0,L|20:180,1,119.999996337891,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,136,19353,6,0,P|112:80|96:0,2,119.999996337891,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,116,20187,2,0,L|276:120,1,59.9999981689454,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,32,20520,2,0,L|296:28,1,59.9999981689454,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,88,20853,6,0,P|388:104|468:88,1,119.999996337891,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,212,21353,2,0,P|432:196|352:212,1,119.999996337891,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,340,21853,1,2,0:0:0:0:
280,340,21937,1,2,0:0:0:0:
280,340,22020,6,0,L|273:220,1,119.999996337891,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
201,177,22520,1,2,0:0:0:0:
345,177,22687,1,2,0:0:0:0:
305,81,22853,1,2,0:0:0:0:
274,221,23020,1,2,0:0:0:0:
269,69,23187,1,2,0:0:0:0:
274,221,23353,1,2,0:0:0:0:
233,57,23520,1,2,0:0:0:0:
40,256,23853,6,0,L|108:256,1,59.9999981689454,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,320,24186,2,0,P|204:332|286:308,1,119.999996337891,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,248,24686,6,0,P|383:240|440:256,2,119.999996337891,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,172,25520,2,0,L|476:96,1,59.9999981689454,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,148,25853,2,0,L|380:72,1,59.9999981689454,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,160,26186,6,0,L|276:12,1,119.999996337891,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,188,26686,2,0,L|112:56,1,119.999996337891,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,12,27187,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,56,27353,6,0,L|32:60,2,29.9999990844727,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,100,27687,2,0,L|284:104,2,32.4999985122681,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,140,28020,2,0,L|12:144,2,34.9999989318848,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,184,28353,1,0,1:0:0:0:
148,244,28520,2,0,L|144:348,1,75.0000028610231,8|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
400,304,28853,6,0,P|320:316|224:276,1,160,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,136,29353,1,2,0:0:0:0:
332,136,29520,2,0,L|328:215,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,76,29853,1,8,0:0:0:0:
484,160,30020,6,0,L|492:328,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
491,319,30520,1,8,0:0:0:0:
392,240,30687,2,0,P|312:244|248:316,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,328,31187,1,10,0:0:0:0:
236,264,31353,1,2,0:0:0:0:
164,328,31520,6,0,L|60:336,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,236,31853,1,10,0:0:0:0:
112,168,32020,2,0,L|24:160,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,334,32353,2,0,L|-20:342,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,352,32687,6,0,P|200:284|232:176,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,152,33187,1,8,0:0:0:0:
440,232,33353,1,2,0:0:0:0:
292,276,33520,1,2,0:0:0:0:
328,132,33687,1,2,0:0:0:0:
384,320,33853,1,10,0:0:0:0:
356,112,34020,1,2,0:0:0:0:
292,276,34187,6,0,P|212:296|116:272,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,224,34687,1,2,0:0:0:0:
60,224,34854,2,0,L|56:145,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,320,35187,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,260,35354,6,0,L|167:100,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,24,35854,1,8,0:0:0:0:
260,88,36021,2,0,P|344:80|424:28,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,128,36521,1,10,0:0:0:0:
352,120,36687,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,176,36854,6,0,P|460:216|456:272,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,152,37187,1,10,0:0:0:0:
224,236,37353,2,0,P|212:276|216:332,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
459,253,37687,2,0,P|471:293|467:349,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,184,38020,6,0,B|332:220|332:220|344:252|344:252|336:368,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,288,38520,1,8,0:0:0:0:
432,216,38687,1,2,0:0:0:0:
292,92,38853,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,200,39020,2,0,P|132:208|80:200,2,80,8|8|4,3:0|3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
52,120,39520,6,0,P|4:184|36:276,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
97,204,40020,2,0,P|161:251|253:219,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,156,40520,2,0,P|228:92|196:0,1,160,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,72,41020,5,2,0:0:0:0:
308,152,41187,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,68,41353,1,2,0:0:0:0:
220,112,41520,1,2,0:0:0:0:
332,244,41687,1,2,0:0:0:0:
420,176,41853,2,0,L|504:172,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,272,42187,6,0,L|112:264,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
8,304,42687,2,0,L|204:296,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,164,43187,2,0,L|184:336,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,136,43687,5,2,0:0:0:0:
48,216,43853,1,8,0:0:0:0:
236,248,44020,1,2,0:0:0:0:
140,108,44187,2,0,P|132:64|140:12,2,80,8|8|4,3:0|3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
224,64,44687,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,64,44770,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,64,44853,6,0,P|304:44|408:68,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,332,45520,2,0,P|384:352|280:328,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,148,46187,5,8,0:3:0:0:
308,148,46353,1,8,0:3:0:0:
380,256,46520,1,8,0:3:0:0:
380,256,46686,1,8,0:3:0:0:
468,188,46853,1,4,0:3:0:0:
468,188,47019,1,4,0:3:0:0:
212,232,47187,1,4,0:3:0:0:
212,232,47353,1,4,0:3:0:0:
344,136,47520,6,0,L|348:36,2,80,0|0|0,3:0|3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
212,232,48020,2,0,L|204:64,1,160,0|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
48,100,48520,5,0,3:0:0:0:
164,152,48687,1,0,3:0:0:0:
16,212,48853,1,0,3:0:0:0:
188,264,49020,2,0,L|360:256,1,160,0|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
452,296,49520,2,0,L|440:392,1,80,0|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
476,48,49853,2,0,L|488:144,1,80,0|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
372,220,50187,2,0,P|316:168|332:56,1,160
400,128,50687,1,2,0:0:0:0:
400,128,50770,1,2,0:0:0:0:
400,128,50853,6,0,L|204:140,1,170.000003242493,4|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,240,51353,1,2,0:0:0:0:
144,272,51519,2,0,P|160:316|152:372,1,85.0000016212464,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,240,51853,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,196,52019,6,0,P|236:104|208:8,1,170.000003242493,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,72,52519,2,0,L|336:184,1,85.0000016212464,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,116,52853,2,0,L|92:112,1,85.0000016212464,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,168,53186,2,0,L|468:164,1,85.0000016212464,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,368,53519,6,0,B|256:328|256:328|268:184,1,170.000003242493,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,176,54186,5,2,0:0:0:0:
416,252,54353,1,2,0:0:0:0:
168,288,54519,1,10,0:0:0:0:
368,168,54686,6,0,L|372:360,1,170.000003242493,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,184,55186,2,0,L|496:88,1,85.0000016212464,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,16,55519,1,2,0:0:0:0:
408,16,55602,1,2,0:0:0:0:
408,16,55686,1,2,0:0:0:0:
300,96,55852,1,10,0:0:0:0:
216,40,56019,1,2,0:0:0:0:
88,88,56186,6,0,L|80:264,1,170.000003242493,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,340,56686,1,2,0:0:0:0:
280,304,56852,2,0,L|276:192,1,85.0000016212464,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,340,57186,1,2,0:0:0:0:
356,368,57352,6,0,B|376:324|376:324|372:168,1,170.000003242493,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,48,57852,2,0,P|451:89|447:131,1,85.0000016212464,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
281,60,58186,2,0,P|320:73|355:99,1,85.0000016212464,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,204,58519,2,0,P|236:176|274:159,1,85.0000016212464,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
457,253,58852,6,0,P|375:273|292:260,1,170.000003242493,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,320,59352,2,0,P|122:299|205:313,1,170.000003242493,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,204,59852,2,0,L|87:91,1,85.0000016212464,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
199,54,60186,5,2,0:0:0:0:
321,152,60352,1,2,0:0:0:0:
204,172,60519,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,35,60685,1,2,0:0:0:0:
442,152,60852,1,2,0:0:0:0:
321,152,61019,1,2,0:0:0:0:
477,39,61186,1,8,0:0:0:0:
477,39,61269,1,2,0:0:0:0:
477,39,61352,1,2,0:0:0:0:
442,152,61519,6,0,L|448:340,2,170.000003242493,4|8|2,0:1|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,83,62352,1,2,0:0:0:0:
296,83,62519,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,280,62685,6,0,L|36:288,1,170.000003242493,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,192,63185,2,0,P|308:224|316:288,1,85.0000016212464,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,308,63519,2,0,L|508:304,1,85.0000016212464,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,168,63852,2,0,L|296:68,1,85.0000016212464,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,216,64185,6,0,P|460:144|448:32,1,170.000003242493,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,28,64852,5,2,0:0:0:0:
336,176,65019,1,2,0:0:0:0:
116,104,65185,1,10,0:0:0:0:
196,16,65352,6,0,P|236:84|188:192,1,170.000003242493,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,232,65852,2,0,P|100:272|100:328,1,85.0000016212464,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,288,66186,1,8,0:3:0:0:
196,288,66269,1,8,0:3:0:0:
196,288,66352,1,4,0:3:0:0:
184,168,66519,1,4,0:3:0:0:
28,236,66686,1,4,0:3:0:0:
272,224,66852,6,0,B|292:180|292:180|276:28,2,170.000003242493,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,72,67852,1,0,3:0:0:0:
420,72,68019,1,0,3:0:0:0:
420,72,68186,6,0,B|400:116|400:116|416:268,1,170.000003242493,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,360,68852,2,0,B|120:316|120:316|104:164,1,170.000003242493,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,48,69519,6,0,P|244:88|252:156,1,85.0000016212464,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,160,69769,1,8,0:0:0:0:
276,160,69852,1,8,0:0:0:0:
220,264,70019,1,8,0:0:0:0:
156,104,70186,1,8,0:3:0:0:
384,136,70352,1,8,0:3:0:0:
96,192,70519,1,4,0:3:0:0:
456,212,70686,6,0,P|480:136|432:32,2,170.000003242493,4|4|0,0:0|0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,136,71519,2,0,L|332:132,2,42.5000008106232,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,304,71852,2,0,L|360:308,2,42.5000008106232,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,280,72186,6,0,L|324:288,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,348,72686,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,348,72853,2,0,P|68:316|68:244,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,188,73186,1,10,0:0:0:0:
100,184,73353,6,0,L|76:8,1,160,2|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,156,73853,2,0,B|388:144,1,160,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,36,74353,1,2,0:0:0:0:
360,124,74519,1,2,0:0:0:0:
468,192,74686,1,2,0:0:0:0:
468,192,74769,1,2,0:0:0:0:
468,192,74853,6,0,P|488:268|452:368,2,160,2|8|2,1:2|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,236,75686,2,0,P|292:276|304:320,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,272,76019,1,2,0:0:0:0:
388,272,76103,1,2,0:0:0:0:
388,272,76186,5,2,0:0:0:0:
276,212,76353,1,2,0:0:0:0:
180,296,76519,1,2,0:0:0:0:
72,256,76686,2,0,L|60:88,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,32,77186,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,32,77352,1,8,0:0:0:0:
436,80,77519,6,0,P|368:108|256:96,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,172,78019,1,0,0:0:0:0:
108,172,78186,2,0,P|146:173|196:188,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,312,78519,1,2,0:0:0:0:
328,248,78686,6,0,B|336:64,1,160,2|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,272,79186,2,0,L|436:180,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,248,79519,1,2,0:0:0:0:
328,248,79686,1,2,0:0:0:0:
236,220,79853,2,0,L|232:128,1,80,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,72,80186,6,0,B|460:96|460:96|328:108,1,160,4|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,56,80686,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,56,80769,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,56,80853,1,8,0:0:0:0:
124,164,81019,1,8,0:0:0:0:
368,128,81186,1,8,0:0:0:0:
236,220,81353,6,0,P|224:308|252:380,1,160,2|8,1:2|0:3,0:0:0:0:
344,288,81853,1,8,0:3:0:0:
344,288,81936,1,8,0:3:0:0:
344,288,82019,1,4,0:3:0:0:
368,128,82186,1,4,0:0:0:0:
64,236,82352,1,4,0:0:0:0:
60,268,82686,5,4,0:1:0:0:
256,192,82852,12,0,85519,0:0:0:0:

Last edited by Narcissu 2015-11-15T10:02:32+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Garden

Nomination Assessment Team

1,343 posts

Joined June 2013

Garden 2015-11-15T09:37:41+00:00

Raose wrote:
[Garden's Insane]
00:14:020 (6) - add finish on head Thx for detailing! fix all finishes
00:17:353 - i hear a drum here, how about adding a note? it seems not so obvious compared to the previous ones, i didn't even notice this while mapping this part, and simply adding a note may play awkward, while i don't wanna overmap it
00:27:103 (5) - i don't hear anything in the music that needs this note D: deleted
00:39:437 (7) - ^ oh i do hear something here, i listen to it again and maybe you mean no particular sound appears on 5, but i think a short stream here plays more smooth
00:40:520 (3) - add finish on head
00:44:187 (6,7,8) - it's possible some people might break here because of sudden small distance D: maybe space it out more? I'd like to keep this cuz the beat becomes harder here and i wanna make it as a transition to the next slower part will reconsider
01:10:686 (8) - add finish, also i think it would suit the song better if this was unstacked sry but i like it stacked cuz they hear like the same type of drum for me
01:16:019 (6) - finish
hope my mod is helpful goodluck with the map!!

Thank you for modding!

SPOILER

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Misato Aki - Glitter.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 50103
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.7
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.3

[Metadata]
Title:Glitter
TitleUnicode:Glitter
Artist:Misato Aki
ArtistUnicode:美郷あき
Creator:Misure
Version:Garden's Insane
Source:月に寄り添う乙女の作法2
Tags:Garden imoutosan Narcissu Tsuki ni Yorisou Otome no Sahou 2 opening eroge hentai galgame visual novel Navel
BeatmapID:808359
BeatmapSetID:365826

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:8.8
SliderMultiplier:1.7
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
Video,0,"Tsuki ni Yorisou Otome no Sahou 2 OP.flv"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
854,333.333333333333,4,2,1,50,1,0
2187,-125,4,2,1,50,0,0
3020,-111.111111111111,4,2,1,50,0,0
5687,-111.111111111111,4,2,1,50,0,0
5853,-111.111111111111,4,2,1,50,0,0
6020,-111.111111111111,4,2,1,50,0,0
6520,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
6853,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
7187,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
7353,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
7520,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
18187,-100,4,2,7,30,0,0
18520,-142.857142857143,4,2,2,50,0,0
23520,-142.857142857143,4,2,7,30,0,0
23853,-142.857142857143,4,2,2,50,0,0
27353,-200,4,2,2,50,0,0
27853,-200,4,2,2,50,0,0
28187,-200,4,2,1,50,0,0
28853,-111.111111111111,4,2,1,60,0,0
39520,-111.111111111111,4,2,1,60,0,0
44853,-125,4,2,1,60,0,0
47520,-111.111111111111,6,2,1,60,0,0
49520,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,60,0,0
49853,-111.111111111111,4,2,1,60,0,0
50187,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
50520,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
50853,333.333333333333,4,2,1,70,1,1
60852,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
61186,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
61352,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
61519,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
66852,-125,4,2,1,70,0,1
70686,-125,4,2,1,70,0,1
71019,-125,4,2,1,70,0,1
71352,-125,4,2,1,70,0,1
71519,-125,4,2,1,70,0,1
71686,-125,4,2,1,70,0,1
71852,-125,4,2,1,70,0,1
72019,-125,4,2,1,70,0,1
72186,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
82186,-100,4,2,2,55,0,0
82686,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
82852,-100,4,2,1,45,0,0
84186,-100,4,2,1,35,0,0
85519,-100,4,2,1,25,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,0,128
Combo2 : 128,128,255
Combo3 : 255,128,192
Combo4 : 0,128,255

[HitObjects]
160,72,2187,6,0,P|136:108|136:148,1,68,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,248,2520,2,0,P|248:196|224:164,1,68,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,272,2853,1,8,0:0:0:0:
216,340,3020,2,0,P|256:360|304:360,1,76.4999976654053,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,360,3353,6,0,P|451:329|474:258,1,152.999995330811,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,168,3853,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,264,4020,1,0,1:0:0:0:
320,168,4187,2,0,P|328:128|348:96,1,76.4999976654053,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,264,4520,2,0,P|346:294|296:300,1,76.4999976654053,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,272,4853,5,4,1:2:0:0:
212,100,5020,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,188,5187,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,188,5353,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,100,5520,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,272,5687,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,100,5853,1,8,0:0:0:0:
126,206,6020,6,0,P|102:166|102:90,1,114.749996498108,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
99,99,6353,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,264,6520,2,0,P|152:296|100:292,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,168,6853,1,8,0:0:0:0:
212,168,7020,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,140,7103,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,120,7187,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,104,7270,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,96,7353,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,92,7437,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,96,7520,6,0,P|419:74|461:90,1,85,4|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,227,7853,2,0,P|216:179|208:135,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,240,8187,2,0,P|396:309|362:337,1,85,8|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
252,364,8520,1,0,1:0:0:0:
268,227,8686,1,0,1:0:0:0:
140,312,8853,5,0,0:0:0:0:
116,148,9020,1,0,1:0:0:0:
268,227,9187,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,224,9353,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,136,9520,2,0,P|252:80|324:60,1,127.5
320,72,9853,2,0,P|347:122|378:137,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,156,10187,5,0,1:0:0:0:
424,44,10353,1,0,0:0:0:0:
488,156,10520,2,0,P|468:208|440:232,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
370,135,10853,1,0,1:0:0:0:
264,152,11020,1,0,1:0:0:0:
268,48,11187,2,0,P|220:56|168:104,1,85,8|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
168,104,11437,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,104,11520,6,0,L|84:100,1,85,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
232,216,11853,1,8,0:0:0:0:
232,216,12020,2,0,B|184:200|96:248|44:196,1,170,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
116,108,12520,1,8,0:0:0:0:
228,100,12687,1,0,1:0:0:0:
304,192,12853,6,0,P|304:240|280:276,1,85,4|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,340,13187,2,0,P|160:292|184:256,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,124,13520,1,0,1:0:0:0:
304,192,13687,1,0,1:0:0:0:
416,80,13853,1,8,0:0:0:0:
312,68,14020,2,0,P|332:152|436:176,1,170,4|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
312,68,14520,6,0,P|256:68|216:76,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,156,14853,1,0,0:0:0:0:
227,73,15020,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,240,15187,1,8,0:0:0:0:
312,160,15353,2,0,L|348:132,1,42.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,96,15520,6,0,P|452:160|428:196,1,85,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,248,15853,1,8,0:0:0:0:
472,304,16020,1,0,1:0:0:0:
448,332,16103,1,0,1:0:0:0:
416,352,16187,1,0,1:0:0:0:
316,336,16353,1,0,1:0:0:0:
232,380,16520,1,8,0:0:0:0:
148,364,16687,1,0,1:0:0:0:
148,364,17020,5,0,1:0:0:0:
88,232,17687,5,0,1:0:0:0:
144,368,17853,1,0,1:0:0:0:
88,232,18187,5,2,0:0:0:0:
88,232,18520,2,0,P|72:276|48:308,1,59.4999981842042,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,156,18853,2,0,P|64:100|116:64,1,118.999996368408,0|0,1:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
168,176,19353,2,0,B|192:228|168:280|168:280|192:272,1,118.999996368408,0|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
304,312,19853,1,0,3:0:0:0:
304,312,20020,6,0,P|268:360|196:364,1,118.999996368408
304,312,20520,2,0,L|384:296,1,59.4999981842042,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,244,20853,2,0,P|476:308|444:376,1,118.999996368408,0|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
460,244,21353,2,0,P|440:180|456:124,1,118.999996368408,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,124,21853,2,0,P|324:144|288:148,1,59.4999981842042,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
306,147,22353,5,0,0:0:0:0:
240,116,22520,1,0,3:0:0:0:
163,117,22687,1,0,0:0:0:0:
44,56,22853,1,0,1:0:0:0:
96,159,23020,1,0,0:0:0:0:
163,117,23187,1,0,3:0:0:0:
240,116,23353,1,0,0:0:0:0:
318,27,23520,5,2,0:0:0:0:
318,27,23853,2,0,P|362:35|402:27,1,59.4999981842042,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
238,67,24187,2,0,P|234:127|200:200,1,118.999996368408,0|0,1:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
150,67,24687,2,0,P|94:87|24:76,2,118.999996368408,0|0|0,0:0|3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
35,80,25520,6,0,L|0:155,1,59.4999981842042,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,176,25853,2,0,L|84:248,1,59.4999981842042,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,232,26187,2,0,P|200:296|240:344,1,118.999996368408,0|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
372,344,26687,2,0,P|356:280|316:232,1,118.999996368408
416,192,27187,1,0,3:0:0:0:
424,200,27353,6,0,B|459:224|492:228|492:228|520:160|460:92,1,212.5,2|0,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,200,28353,5,0,1:0:0:0:
363,35,28520,1,8,0:0:0:0:
204,221,28853,5,4,0:0:0:0:
204,221,29187,2,0,P|146:253|118:252,1,76.4999976654053,8|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
287,266,29520,2,0,P|337:242|381:239,1,76.4999976654053,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
465,264,29853,1,8,0:0:0:0:
385,146,30020,2,0,B|349:100|381:43|381:43|334:77,1,152.999995330811,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
263,170,30520,1,8,0:0:0:0:
467,98,30687,2,0,P|471:193|402:244,1,152.999995330811,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
317,262,31187,2,0,P|276:249|226:250,1,76.4999976654053,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,232,31520,6,0,B|84:240|60:268|60:268|88:300|136:304,1,152.999995330811
243,281,32020,2,0,P|277:267|339:263,1,76.4999976654053,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,296,32353,2,0,P|434:310|388:316,1,76.4999976654053,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,261,32687,1,0,1:0:0:0:
410,136,32853,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,128,33020,1,0,1:0:0:0:
396,62,33187,2,0,P|412:110|398:162,1,76.4999976654053,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
297,7,33520,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,128,33687,1,0,1:0:0:0:
176,36,33853,1,8,0:0:0:0:
260,128,34020,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,12,34187,5,0,1:0:0:0:
458,222,34520,2,0,P|493:269|529:279,1,76.4999976654053,8|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
359,240,34853,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,152,35020,1,0,0:0:0:0:
174,290,35187,1,8,0:0:0:0:
264,309,35353,2,0,P|251:231|174:197,1,152.999995330811,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
88,325,35853,1,8,0:0:0:0:
92,193,36020,2,0,B|113:150|144:139|144:139|180:159|193:204,1,152.999995330811,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
264,309,36520,2,0,P|300:276|342:262,1,76.4999976654053,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
447,111,36853,6,0,P|455:173|435:264,1,152.999995330811,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,324,37353,1,0,1:0:0:0:
448,364,37520,1,0,0:0:0:0:
436,260,37687,2,0,P|394:225|345:221,1,76.4999976654053,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,211,38020,1,0,1:0:0:0:
187,114,38187,6,0,P|166:45|176:20,1,76.4999976654053,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
286,157,38520,2,0,P|236:209|210:213,1,76.4999976654053,8|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
271,57,38853,2,0,P|341:73|357:94,1,76.4999976654053,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
427,206,39187,1,0,1:0:0:0:
441,183,39270,1,0,0:0:0:0:
447,157,39353,1,0,1:0:0:0:
450,130,39437,1,0,0:0:0:0:
443,104,39520,6,0,P|448:26|522:8,1,152.999995330811,4|0,0:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
443,104,40020,2,0,P|372:78|280:88,1,152.999995330811,8|8,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
188,188,40520,2,0,P|156:148|156:112,1,76.4999976654053,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,168,40853,1,0,1:0:0:0:
188,188,41020,1,0,1:0:0:0:
124,256,41187,2,0,L|100:340,1,76.4999976654053,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,272,41520,1,0,1:0:0:0:
188,188,41687,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,100,41853,2,0,L|288:48,1,76.4999976654053,0|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,56,42187,6,0,B|60:104|79:178|79:178|104:160,1,152.999995330811,4|0,1:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
216,100,42687,2,0,B|248:80|248:80|320:104|384:48,1,152.999995330811,8|8,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
424,136,43187,2,0,B|376:184|304:184|304:184|336:208,1,152.999995330811,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
440,248,43687,1,0,1:0:0:0:
440,248,43853,2,0,P|468:288|472:324,1,76.4999976654053,8|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,280,44187,1,8,1:2:0:0:
308,300,44353,1,0,1:0:0:0:
304,320,44520,2,0,P|236:312|208:316,1,76.4999976654053,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,332,44853,6,0,P|76:296|76:220,1,136,4|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,252,45353,1,0,1:0:0:0:
168,252,45520,2,0,P|238:236|298:184,1,136,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
276,48,46020,1,8,1:2:0:0:
276,48,46187,6,0,P|300:104|316:116,1,68,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,152,46520,1,0,1:0:0:0:
468,152,46687,1,0,0:0:0:0:
508,348,46853,2,0,P|468:328|452:308,1,68,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,228,47187,1,0,1:0:0:0:
468,152,47353,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,100,47520,6,0,L|288:188,1,76.4999976654053,4|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,232,47853,1,0,1:0:0:0:
289,175,48020,2,0,P|359:149|427:178,1,152.999995330811
356,116,48520,2,0,P|352:80|356:40,1,76.4999976654053,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,206,48853,2,0,P|460:240|454:281,1,76.4999976654053,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
355,247,49187,1,0,1:0:0:0:
452,84,49353,1,0,0:0:0:0:
340,132,49520,6,0,P|293:142|246:137,1,95.6250036478044,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,172,49853,6,0,P|224:220|164:232,1,114.749996498108,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
135,222,50187,6,0,B|104:211|76:227|76:227|105:141|91:121,1,170
113,93,50853,6,0,P|125:145|117:189,1,85,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,332,51186,2,0,P|36:280|44:236,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
121,175,51519,2,0,B|168:184|244:144|272:184,1,127.5,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,176,51853,1,8,0:0:0:0:
328,28,52019,1,0,1:0:0:0:
424,52,52186,2,0,L|480:144,1,85,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
416,208,52519,2,0,L|436:300,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,352,52853,5,0,0:0:0:0:
176,304,53019,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,156,53186,1,8,0:0:0:0:
280,260,53353,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,184,53519,2,0,P|176:132|184:52,1,127.5,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,80,53853,2,0,P|136:80|108:60,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,48,54186,6,0,L|12:232,1,170,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,280,54686,2,0,B|201:245|176:199|176:199|116:200|97:254,1,170,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
207,361,55186,2,0,P|247:372|288:360,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,268,55519,6,0,P|400:316|400:360,1,85,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
248,256,55852,2,0,P|256:216|284:184,1,85,8|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
396,180,56186,2,0,B|468:152|508:156|508:156|464:148|432:112,1,170,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,8,56686,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,96,56852,6,0,B|304:88|284:24|284:24|232:40|184:24,1,170,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,76,57352,2,0,P|142:117|134:159,1,85,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,212,57686,1,0,1:0:0:0:
48,296,57852,2,0,P|164:284|220:292,1,170,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,360,58352,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,260,58519,2,0,P|332:212|300:180,1,85,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,152,58852,5,4,1:2:0:0:
240,264,59019,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,80,59186,1,8,0:0:0:0:
428,200,59352,1,12,1:2:0:0:
428,200,59686,5,0,1:0:0:0:
240,264,59852,2,0,P|224:204|236:160,1,85,12|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,300,60186,1,0,1:0:0:0:
168,352,60352,1,0,1:0:0:0:
145,172,60519,2,0,P|189:167|249:203,1,85,8|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,268,60852,6,0,P|32:220|32:168,1,127.5,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,168,61186,2,0,P|36:264|16:308,1,127.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
8,308,61519,6,0,P|48:340|100:344,1,85,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,312,61852,1,8,0:0:0:0:
268,348,62019,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,304,62186,2,0,P|380:248|372:176,1,127.5,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,192,62519,2,0,P|424:184|448:160,1,85,8|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
368,64,62852,5,0,1:0:0:0:
272,136,63019,1,0,1:0:0:0:
220,16,63186,1,8,0:0:0:0:
144,124,63352,1,0,1:0:0:0:
56,44,63519,2,0,P|20:116|40:176,1,127.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,188,63852,2,0,P|84:208|108:252,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,384,64186,6,0,P|4:344|16:288,1,85,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,328,64519,1,8,0:0:0:0:
196,384,64686,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,328,64852,2,0,P|300:248|276:144,1,170,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,92,65352,2,0,P|404:80|460:92,1,85,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,256,65685,1,0,1:0:0:0:
416,256,65852,2,0,P|404:216|415:162,1,85,8|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
508,296,66186,1,0,1:0:0:0:
424,348,66352,1,0,1:0:0:0:
336,316,66519,2,0,P|280:308|240:320,1,85,8|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,344,66852,6,0,P|104:292|120:216,1,136,4|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,220,67352,2,0,L|196:260,1,68,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,84,67852,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,140,68019,1,8,0:0:0:0:
100,140,68186,6,0,P|140:160|172:160,1,68,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,140,68519,1,0,0:0:0:0:
316,84,68686,1,0,1:0:0:0:
365,161,68852,2,0,P|367:199|356:232,1,68,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,288,69186,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,300,69352,1,0,1:0:0:0:
132,248,69519,6,0,P|128:224|136:168,1,68,4|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,180,69769,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,180,69852,1,8,0:0:0:0:
232,40,70019,1,8,0:0:0:0:
232,216,70186,1,8,1:2:0:0:
120,84,70352,1,0,1:0:0:0:
300,128,70519,1,0,1:0:0:0:
300,128,70686,1,4,1:0:0:0:
300,128,71019,5,8,1:2:0:0:
332,224,71186,2,0,P|368:260|400:264,1,68,8|0,1:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
484,216,71519,2,0,L|492:176,3,34,0|0|8|8,1:0|1:0|1:2|1:2,1:0:0:0:
512,144,71852,2,0,L|508:108,3,34,8|8|8|8,1:2|1:2|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,80,72186,6,0,P|472:32|440:8,1,85,4|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,108,72519,2,0,L|368:192,1,85
260,264,72852,1,0,1:0:0:0:
208,80,73019,1,0,1:0:0:0:
284,156,73186,1,8,0:0:0:0:
184,180,73352,2,0,P|116:140|112:44,1,170,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
16,144,73852,6,0,P|12:196|-4:244,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,320,74186,1,0,0:0:0:0:
108,240,74352,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,368,74519,2,0,P|168:340|196:336,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,248,74852,6,0,P|224:188|180:160,1,85,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,300,75186,2,0,P|376:292|408:256,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,144,75519,1,0,1:0:0:0:
328,196,75686,1,0,1:0:0:0:
280,12,75852,1,8,0:0:0:0:
228,128,76019,1,4,1:0:0:0:
228,128,76102,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,128,76186,6,0,P|184:112|168:68,2,85,0|0|8,0:0|1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,104,76686,2,0,P|321:185|248:232,1,170,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
328,104,77186,2,0,P|368:92|416:100,1,85,8|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
512,236,77519,6,0,L|493:147,1,85,4|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,300,77852,2,0,L|453:383,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,272,78186,1,0,1:0:0:0:
512,236,78352,1,0,0:0:0:0:
436,300,78519,1,8,0:0:0:0:
340,272,78686,2,0,P|284:240|172:248,1,170,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
96,300,79186,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,300,79352,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,132,79519,6,0,L|44:220,1,85,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,52,79852,2,0,L|168:136,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
181,244,80186,6,0,P|248:184|340:176,1,170,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,224,80686,1,0,1:0:0:0:
444,252,80769,1,0,1:0:0:0:
424,276,80852,1,0,1:0:0:0:
392,88,81019,1,0,1:0:0:0:
324,173,81186,1,8,1:2:0:0:
228,16,81352,1,0,1:0:0:0:
228,16,81686,5,0,1:0:0:0:
300,88,81852,2,0,P|348:100|392:96,1,85,8|0,1:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
484,60,82186,5,0,3:2:0:0:
484,60,82352,1,0,3:2:0:0:
256,192,82686,5,0,1:0:0:0:
256,192,82852,12,0,85519,0:0:0:0:

Misure

951 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

Misure 2015-11-15T11:04:38+00:00

Raose wrote:
I haven't updated this map since a day ago, so some things may already be changed D: nothing important changed, don't worry
everyone's diffs needs more finishes

[Insane]

needs more finishes in fact I don't want too much finishes because I think it's too loud D: just fixed some of them

00:03:353 (1) - how about rotating it a different direction? i think this would make it flow better: sure!http://puu.sh/lm6Si/c1b893f9a4.jpg
00:08:187 (3) - consider curving it the other way for better flow from 2: http://puu.sh/lm6XW/3cbe8d3314.jpg changed a little
00:12:020 (3,4,5,6) - imo this pattern doesn't flow very well, how about ctrl+G 3 so the pattern is rotating the same direction as 00:12:020 (3)? and then switching 4 and 5: url]http://puu.sh/lm74j/27c9b41181.jpg[/url] i think this would make it flow a bit nicer nice
00:14:020 (5) - add finish
00:15:520 (1) - ^
00:16:687 (1) - ^ added on the later two
00:21:853 (4) - to better fit vocals, consider shortening by 1/2, moving it to 00:22:020, and adding a circle at 00:21:853. It would also keep the momentum of the map going, because the pause right now is weird well I know that but I don't want it too indense like that will considerate it more
00:25:687 (2,1) - the sudden change in rotation from clockwise to counterclockwise makes the pattern awkward to play D: try removing the repeat on 2 and adding a circle, maybe like this? http://puu.sh/lm7gC/8441fe74e1.jpg ok
00:28:187 (2) - there is no sound here LOL so it'd be very hard for the player to tell where to click. There is no need for a circle here, but if you want to map this part, you should extend the slider 00:27:353 (1) some others also says that but I insist because it's fit for playing imo, at least for me ;_;
00:33:437 - add a note? you're right but it's difficult to change the pattern ;_; it's not bad at least imo...
00:54:519 (2,3) - ctrl+G to better fit vocals maybe but I don't like two sliders the same flow, just my own style
00:57:186 (2,3) - ^ ^
00:58:186 (5) - this slider isn't very pretty D: if you're trying to represent the vocals, it's better to use 2 1/2 sliders. if you want to keep it, try a regular curved slider, or one of the sharply angled sliders will considerate it more owo
00:59:352 (3) - i recommend changing this to a slider, because having a 1/1 pause here at the climax really doesn't fit the strong and powerful section, and it kills the momentum D: sure
01:10:686 (1) - soft finish on head seems sort of sudden... just add a clap here
01:11:519 (1) - make it less curved so it looks nicer and better to play: http://puu.sh/lm87R/a5fc2997b7.jpg fixed a little
01:13:352 (4) - soft finish on head
01:14:852 (1) - i think it would play better as a regularly curved slider, but if you want to make it very sharp and edgy, how about this? http://puu.sh/lm8kH/fe218da3cd.jpg changed the shape and move it to another position
01:15:519 (3) - i don't think it plays very well when it curves so sharply D: fine for me
01:16:019 (4) - add finish on head
01:18:686 (5) - ^
01:21:352 (6) - ^
[Hard]
00:14:853 (1) - NC not needed I think a NC after pause here has no problem
00:24:187 (3) - i think the jump is sudden and random, how about this? http://puu.sh/lmakC/8cb00bcb7a.jpg well yours is good but I think mine is not bad at least... no change
00:33:520 (3) - this is a huge jump, and i think it may be too big for a hard (especially since it's not kiai yet). consider ctrl+G to decrease the distance sure
00:42:187 (1) - this is a weirdly shaped slider D: how about making it only have 1/2 red nodes or making it normally curved? it's fine for me just my own love
00:48:853 (1) - NC not needed fixed
00:54:686 (3) - i think reducing the nodes would make the slider look cleaner: http://puu.sh/lmavb/401232ac0c.jpg nice!
00:57:353 (2) - ^ http://puu.sh/lmax3/410cef0108.jpg maybe this shape is not bad for me lol
00:58:186 (4,5) - is a bit awkward to play because 4 curves to the left but 5 is on the right maybe you're right but I don't want to break the shape
01:00:853 (1,2) - SV change and NC seem a bit random and unnecessary imo, since the song doesn't get more intense yea removed that
[Normal]

your combos are not consistent; in the beginning you combo every 2 white ticks, but it changes to every 1 in the chorus you're right... I fixed some (but still not sure whether they are proper)
00:10:187 (5) - NC here and remove NC on 00:11:353 (1) for consistency
01:19:519 (4) - move down a bit so 1 doesn't overlap with 3 and it looks cleaner: http://puu.sh/lmaOf/62b8f1f414.jpg did something to reduce the area of overlap
hope my mod is helpful goodluck with the map!!

Thank you for modding! that helps a lot!

Misure

951 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

Misure 2015-11-15T11:12:14+00:00

update
妹桑来改图啊111

厚你加油

Last edited by Misure 2015-11-16T01:41:26+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Fushimi Rio

Fushimi Rio 2015-11-16T00:51:06+00:00

Misure wrote:
update
妹桑来改图啊111

在考试不要急

TtmnZk

Elite Mapper

597 posts

Joined March 2013

TtmnZk 2015-11-16T16:01:23+00:00

[imouto's Insane]
00:37:520 (4) - 哨音这里感觉好违和

00:28:520 (2,1) - 不懂为啥这样摆，感觉好容易断，要不试一下类似这种拐回来的？
[Insane]
00:05:520 (3,4) - ctrl+g?

00:27:187 (4,1) - 有点远，拉近一点

00:53:353 (2) - 这个建议不要叠在下面，卡flow，不如直接00:53:353 放三连
[Narcissu's Insane]

00:21:853 (3,4,1) - 这个三连没懂为啥会有

[Garden's Insane]

00:02:853 (3,4) - 可以使者加大ds来体现一下重音的感觉？

00:52:186 (6) - ctrl+g?

00:57:352 (2,3,4) - 这里前后ds一致
[Hard]

00:43:853 (2) - 这个拉的略多余

感觉有些滑条没必要扭那么多下，也不好看，有些地方flow待提高，比如01:10:686 (1,2,3,4,1) - 这里就感觉摆的很牵强

[Normal]

NM很好啊;3

ez扫了一下没啥大问题，就这样吧，有点水的感觉

Fushimi Rio

Fushimi Rio 2015-11-16T16:44:52+00:00

Doormat wrote:
imouto’s Insane
00:12:187 (5) – I’d divide up this 1/1 slider; you skipped a rather strong beat at 00:12:353 it still follows the song's feeling so I think it's fine
00:18:853 (3) – Curve this inwards a little more so it blankets 00:18:520 (1) more nicely actually it's nicely now
00:28:853 (1) – Why a 1/1 repeat slider? I mean it’s not terrible, but it’s inconsistent with the rest of this part since you’re following the vocals; this repeat slider is the only thing not mapped to the vocals. On the other hand, if you’re following the drums, then you shouldn’t skip the drum beat at 00:29:353 ...I don't know how to follow the beats better, so I keep it now.
00:34:187 (1) – ^ ^
00:45:353 – Circle here? You skipped a pretty strong drum beat prefer following vocal here
01:16:853 (5) - Similar suggestion to 00:12:187 (5)
[/list]

Feb wrote:
[imouto]

at least od8 as it has higher sr than misures insane. I didn't intend to make highest diff...

00:22:353 (3) - yo i think you wanted this stacked no? fixed
00:33:020 (7) - no nc for new pattern? I mean i usually don't care to much in higher diffs, but i think this needs a nc I think it's fine
01:11:936 (6) - idk just to grant better visibility to that spacing you should nc this like you did before. fixed

Shad0w1and wrote:
[imouto]
00:06:520 (2,3) - 没有节奏支撑的高DS，(3,4)还行有道理
00:12:187 (5,6) - 总之我觉得这个梗有点反人类，而且遮挡太多有点危险哎大清亡了
00:23:520 (9,1) - nc swap 改不改不差太多
00:25:853 (1,3) - ^，不如说这里用这个梗不是很合曲是但是搞不出新梗了
00:28:520 (2) - 略危险很simple
00:29:353 - 鼓声放过么？放吧这鼓跟着也没感觉……
00:34:187 (1) - ？这也是么也是
01:09:353 (5) - 4.7 DS不和曲是这样改了

Narcissu wrote:
??? tsun ge dan

Wing My Way wrote:
imouto's Insane

00:02:687 (4,1) - 试试Ctrl+g，感觉00:02:687 (4) - 这个滑条以重音来结尾不太好感觉上4是要hold一下所以就这样了花滑条尾接鼓是osu的先天缺陷没办法
00:11:353 (1) - 距离有点不够有道理让我思考一下怎么搞
00:12:687 (6) - 变速NC提示，~~好几把啊~~ 行
00:14:520 (6) - 前面的slider开头都是跟电音而这个是跟鼓，显得不协调，建议改成两个单点其实前三个滑条跟电音和跟鼓是一样的
00:13:187 (2) - 加whistle，00:13:520 (3) - 删whistle 行
00:16:687 (1) - 不好看，还有00:18:853 (3) - 没包好包是包好了的滑条就这样我也没办法
00:22:353 (3) - 这个overlap有点莫名没叠好
00:41:187 (4,5,6) - 这里鼓明显要强，我建议DS加大再强也没vocal强啊
00:43:853 (4,5,6,7) - ^
00:51:186 (2) - 这个节奏特怪……反正要我肯定就用1/4节奏了个人喜好
01:04:186 (1) - 重音没音效加了
01:16:186 (3) - 滑条改成跳吧，不然跟后面的4很违和改了改前面这里没必要
01:20:103 (1,2) - 这个flow也不太好……打着很别扭我觉得可以啊
从00:07:520 - 到00:16:687 - 和01:12:186 - 到01:22:186 - 两段节奏类型一样，但是后面那段空拍明显就多，我是感觉不太好。关爱断尾心脏病患者从我做起
排列就不仔细摸了，毕竟for JB 看不太懂2333

Raose wrote:
[imouto's Insane]
00:07:020 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - i don't think the stream flows very well, either make it all straight, or all curvy players won't care it I guess
00:12:187 (5,6) - as cool as this pattern is, i break everytime maybe move 6 a bit so it's not completely stacked? it's already split enough imo
00:16:687 (1) - add whistle/finish to tail, it sounds very empty right now added something
00:45:353 - add beat here to fit music? not very fit imo...
00:52:853 (7) - the whistle here sounds very random and unfitting imo. if you want to include it, maybe it'd be better to put in places like 00:53:519 (1) fixed
00:55:519 (6) - ^ and all other places in chorus
01:14:852 (1) - i think a different slider would look neater and fitting: http://puu.sh/lm6wk/a81ae883c2.jpg or http://puu.sh/lm6y2/2c82ae90e6.jpg it will change the pattern... and I prefer the current flow
01:16:519 (4,5) - to better fit the guitar, how about this rhythm? http://puu.sh/lm6AN/61f85449b3.jpg I just used same rhythm as the first part
01:19:186 (2) - ctrl+G for more circular flow with 1 and 3 no
01:22:186 (1,2) - ctrl+G (or switch positions on timeline) for a larger jump to 1 (fits the music better) and it flows better also fixed

TT Mouse wrote:
[imouto's Insane]
00:37:520 (4) - 哨音这里感觉好违和有道理

00:28:520 (2,1) - 不懂为啥这样摆，感觉好容易断，要不试一下类似这种拐回来的？不太容易断而且这里想要这个比较强的1/4跳

SPOILER

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Misato Aki - Glitter.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 50103
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.3

[Metadata]
Title:Glitter
TitleUnicode:Glitter
Artist:Misato Aki
ArtistUnicode:美郷あき
Creator:Misure
Version:imouto's Insane
Source:月に寄り添う乙女の作法2
Tags:Garden imoutosan Narcissu Tsuki ni Yorisou Otome no Sahou 2 opening eroge hentai galgame visual novel Navel
BeatmapID:813930
BeatmapSetID:365826

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7.2
CircleSize:4.2
OverallDifficulty:7.2
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
Video,0,"Tsuki ni Yorisou Otome no Sahou 2 OP.flv"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
854,333.333333333333,4,2,1,70,1,0
2187,-125,4,2,1,70,0,0
7520,-100,4,2,1,74,0,1
7603,-100,4,2,1,74,0,0
12687,-66.6666666666667,4,2,1,74,0,0
12853,-100,4,2,1,74,0,0
15520,-66.6666666666667,4,2,1,74,0,0
16687,-100,4,2,1,74,0,0
18187,-166.666666666667,4,2,2,62,0,0
22020,-166.666666666667,4,2,1,62,0,0
25353,-166.666666666667,4,2,2,62,0,0
26187,-166.666666666667,4,2,2,42,0,0
26687,-166.666666666667,4,2,2,62,0,0
27353,-166.666666666667,4,2,2,32,0,0
27520,-166.666666666667,4,2,2,42,0,0
27853,-166.666666666667,4,2,2,52,0,0
28520,-66.6666666666667,4,2,1,62,0,0
28770,-66.6666666666667,4,2,2,5,0,0
28853,-100,4,2,1,62,0,0
30020,-100,4,2,2,62,0,0
30270,-100,4,2,1,62,0,0
33520,-100,4,2,2,62,0,0
33853,-100,4,2,1,62,0,0
39520,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,72,0,0
47520,-100,6,2,1,74,0,0
49520,-50,4,2,1,76,0,0
50186,-100,4,2,1,68,0,0
50520,-100,4,2,1,74,0,0
50853,333.333333333333,4,2,1,80,1,1
50853,-83.3333333333333,4,2,1,80,0,1
53519,-83.3333333333333,4,2,2,80,0,1
53603,-83.3333333333333,4,2,1,80,0,1
56186,-83.3333333333333,4,2,2,80,0,1
56269,-83.3333333333333,4,2,1,80,0,1
56853,-83.3333333333333,4,2,2,80,0,1
56894,-83.3333333333333,4,2,1,80,0,1
59853,-100,4,2,1,80,0,1
60853,-100,4,2,1,68,0,1
61186,-95.2380952380952,4,2,1,62,0,0
61519,-83.3333333333333,4,2,1,80,0,1
63519,-83.3333333333333,4,2,2,80,0,1
63561,-83.3333333333333,4,2,1,80,0,1
66519,-83.3333333333333,4,2,2,80,0,1
66853,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,80,0,1
67853,-133.333333333333,4,2,2,80,0,1
67894,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,80,0,1
70686,-83.3333333333333,4,2,1,76,0,1
71019,-83.3333333333333,4,2,1,68,0,1
71353,-83.3333333333333,4,2,1,64,0,1
71519,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
71686,-100,4,2,1,64,0,1
71853,-100,4,2,1,68,0,1
72019,-100,4,2,1,72,0,1
72186,-95.2380952380952,4,2,1,76,0,0
81353,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,76,0,0
82186,-95.2380952380952,4,2,2,80,0,0
82686,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
82853,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
83519,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
84186,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
84853,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
85519,-100,4,2,1,20,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,0,128
Combo2 : 128,128,255
Combo3 : 255,128,192
Combo4 : 0,128,255

[HitObjects]
112,56,2187,5,4,0:0:0:0:
172,116,2353,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,136,2520,1,2,0:0:0:0:
130,212,2687,2,0,L|191:195,1,64,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,140,3020,5,0,0:0:0:0:
252,136,3187,1,2,0:0:0:0:
169,285,3353,2,0,L|292:251,1,128,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,304,3853,1,2,0:0:0:0:
88,308,4187,1,8,0:0:0:0:
84,312,4520,1,2,0:0:0:0:
80,316,4853,6,0,P|112:276|116:372,1,224,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,360,5520,2,0,P|8:320|16:280,1,64,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,216,5853,1,8,0:0:0:0:
137,373,6020,6,0,P|135:308|163:251,1,128,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,184,6520,1,8,0:0:0:0:
56,236,6687,1,0,0:0:0:0:
140,148,6853,1,8,0:0:0:0:
194,310,7020,1,0,0:0:0:0:
201,331,7103,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,352,7187,5,8,0:0:0:0:
159,336,7270,1,8,0:0:0:0:
159,284,7353,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,269,7437,1,8,0:0:0:0:
238,310,7520,6,0,P|285:338|335:334,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
478,366,7853,2,0,P|447:340|431:304,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
367,139,8187,1,2,0:0:0:0:
309,339,8353,1,0,0:0:0:0:
512,291,8520,1,8,0:0:0:0:
323,256,8687,6,0,L|222:233,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,356,9020,1,0,0:0:0:0:
215,321,9187,2,0,L|114:298,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,204,9520,1,2,0:0:0:0:
309,339,9687,1,0,0:0:0:0:
367,139,9853,1,8,0:0:0:0:
215,321,10020,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,280,10187,6,0,L|496:276,2,80,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
122,289,10687,1,0,0:0:0:0:
309,339,10853,1,0,0:0:0:0:
258,152,11020,1,0,0:0:0:0:
215,321,11187,1,8,0:0:0:0:
137,203,11353,5,2,0:0:0:0:
122,191,11437,1,2,0:0:0:0:
105,178,11520,2,0,P|61:164|13:175,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,212,11853,2,0,P|206:166|172:130,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
247,283,12187,2,0,L|400:236,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,288,12687,6,0,L|324:264,1,60.0000022888184,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,240,12853,6,0,L|480:217,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,358,13187,2,0,L|368:335,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
202,207,13520,2,0,L|282:183,1,80
164,288,13853,1,8,0:0:0:0:
232,30,14020,2,0,L|278:184,1,160,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,60,14520,2,0,L|354:136,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,0,14853,2,0,L|154:76,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,340,15187,2,0,L|61:263,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,164,15437,5,0,0:0:0:0:
36,188,15520,2,0,P|100:220|180:160,1,180.000006866455,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,80,15853,1,8,0:0:0:0:
260,308,16020,1,8,0:0:0:0:
264,324,16103,1,8,0:0:0:0:
268,340,16187,1,0,0:0:0:0:
84,340,16353,1,8,0:0:0:0:
348,144,16520,1,8,0:0:0:0:
261,357,16687,6,0,B|242:372|218:380|218:380|226:356|223:325|223:325|181:349|146:348|146:348|167:321|182:274|182:274|122:298|72:295|18:256|18:256|103:248|179:212|227:152|227:152|225:190,1,720,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
226,190,18520,5,0,0:0:0:0:
164,228,18687,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,120,18853,2,0,P|264:128|300:172,1,95.9999970703126
144,132,19353,2,0,P|152:84|244:52,1,143.999995605469,0|0,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
332,228,20020,2,0,P|368:248|432:236,1,95.9999970703126,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,192,20520,1,0,0:3:0:0:
460,304,20687,1,0,0:3:0:0:
384,176,20853,6,0,P|348:155|284:168,1,95.9999970703126,0|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,244,21353,2,0,P|281:279|342:300,2,95.9999970703126
260,244,22353,1,0,0:0:0:0:
196,296,22520,1,0,0:3:0:0:
116,304,22687,1,0,0:0:0:0:
20,234,22853,2,0,L|68:240,1,47.9999985351563,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,200,23187,1,0,0:0:0:0:
68,160,23353,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,304,23520,1,0,0:3:0:0:
68,160,23853,5,0,0:0:0:0:
140,200,24019,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,80,24187,2,0,B|176:60|176:60|200:92|241:91,1,95.9999970703126
388,88,24687,2,0,B|352:60|304:60|304:60|316:88|308:116,1,143.999995605469
256,260,25353,2,0,L|256:164,1,95.9999970703126,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,276,25853,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,292,26020,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,308,26187,6,2,P|296:336|348:332,1,95.9999970703126,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,308,26687,2,2,P|216:336|164:332,1,95.9999970703126,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,268,27187,1,0,0:0:0:0:
196,268,27353,2,2,B|124:264|96:192|96:192|160:204|208:188,1,239.999992675781,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,340,28353,5,4,0:3:0:0:
280,212,28520,2,0,L|442:78,1,180.000006866455,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,224,28853,6,0,P|324:184|312:80,2,160,0|8|0,1:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,248,29687,1,0,1:0:0:0:
292,224,29853,1,8,0:0:0:0:
296,344,30020,2,0,L|296:392,2,40,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,224,30353,1,0,0:0:0:0:
196,248,30520,1,8,0:2:0:0:
392,204,30687,2,0,L|488:182,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,224,31020,1,0,1:0:0:0:
439,87,31187,2,0,L|497:32,1,80,8|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,224,31520,6,0,P|240:240|180:212,1,120,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,176,31853,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,340,32020,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,176,32187,2,0,L|140:264,1,80,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
60,288,32520,1,8,0:0:0:0:
236,218,32687,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,218,33020,1,0,1:0:0:0:
171,281,33187,1,8,0:0:0:0:
276,299,33353,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,176,33520,1,2,0:0:0:0:
325,205,33687,1,0,0:0:0:0:
325,205,33770,1,0,0:0:0:0:
325,205,33853,1,8,0:0:0:0:
252,129,34020,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,218,34187,6,0,P|280:216|344:112,2,160,0|8|0,1:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,176,35020,1,0,1:0:0:0:
276,299,35187,1,8,0:0:0:0:
252,129,35353,2,0,L|240:46,1,80
236,218,35687,2,0,L|212:250,2,40,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
339,80,36020,2,0,L|389:12,1,80
236,218,36353,1,0,1:0:0:0:
240,49,36520,1,8,0:0:0:0:
335,249,36687,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,140,36853,6,0,P|108:160|72:212,1,120
52,280,37187,1,8,0:0:0:0:
0,176,37353,1,0,1:0:0:0:
52,280,37520,2,0,L|104:384,2,80,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,176,38020,5,2,0:0:0:0:
117,183,38187,1,0,0:0:0:0:
52,280,38353,1,0,1:0:0:0:
64,120,38520,5,8,0:0:0:0:
161,184,38687,1,0,0:0:0:0:
57,236,38853,1,8,0:0:0:0:
147,103,39020,5,8,0:0:0:0:
280,193,39187,1,8,1:2:0:0:
190,326,39353,1,0,0:0:0:0:
169,220,39520,6,0,L|147:103,1,120.000004577637,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,260,40020,2,0,P|160:292|216:276,1,120.000004577637,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
43,226,40520,2,0,B|42:318|42:318|108:260,1,180.000006866455,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
213,180,41187,2,0,L|168:220,1,60.0000022888184,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,144,41520,1,0,0:0:0:0:
241,256,41687,1,0,1:0:0:0:
140,144,41853,2,0,L|100:99,1,60.0000022888184,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
241,256,42187,6,0,L|319:347,1,120.000004577637,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
274,189,42687,2,0,P|212:187|172:229,1,120.000004577637,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
347,187,43187,2,0,B|301:106|301:106|273:190,1,180.000006866455,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
222,312,43853,2,0,L|240:255,1,60.0000022888184,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,344,44187,2,0,L|154:287,1,60.0000022888184,8|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
64,368,44520,1,0,1:0:0:0:
112,224,44687,1,0,1:0:0:0:
208,384,44853,6,0,P|258:376|292:304,1,120.000004577637,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
472,324,45520,2,0,P|420:296|408:239,1,120.000004577637,8|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
436,168,46020,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,328,46187,5,8,0:0:0:0:
280,364,46353,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,360,46520,1,0,1:0:0:0:
144,308,46687,1,0,1:0:0:0:
0,256,46853,5,8,0:0:0:0:
144,308,47020,1,0,1:0:0:0:
56,324,47187,1,0,1:0:0:0:
180,228,47353,1,0,1:0:0:0:
112,384,47520,5,4,0:0:0:0:
76,180,47686,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,328,47853,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,228,48020,2,0,P|184:168|264:116,1,160,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,352,48520,5,4,0:0:0:0:
48,204,48686,1,8,0:0:0:0:
252,240,48853,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,276,49020,2,0,P|168:208|236:152,1,160,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,352,49520,6,0,L|140:184,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,32,49853,2,0,L|372:200,1,160,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,296,50186,5,0,0:0:0:0:
392,288,50520,5,0,0:0:0:0:
376,276,50853,6,0,B|332:244|276:248|276:248|312:288,1,143.999995605469,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
425,356,51186,2,0,P|407:311|375:275,1,95.9999970703126,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,100,51520,2,0,P|201:147|222:190,1,95.9999970703126,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
301,276,51853,1,8,0:0:0:0:
104,124,52020,2,0,P|48:140|124:184,1,191.999994140625,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,24,52520,2,0,P|301:66|306:114,1,95.9999970703126,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,284,52853,2,0,B|177:223|221:179|221:179|224:192|217:211,1,143.999995605469
124,328,53186,2,0,P|166:306|214:301,1,95.9999970703126,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,320,53519,6,0,P|352:288|344:156,2,191.999994140625,2|8|0,0:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
436,216,54353,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,308,54519,1,8,0:0:0:0:
436,216,54686,2,0,B|480:144|448:64|448:64|428:108,1,191.999994140625,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,224,55186,2,0,P|321:167|290:130,1,95.9999970703126,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,296,55519,2,0,B|235:266|179:285|179:285|192:298|211:301,1,143.999995605469,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,320,55853,2,0,P|448:312|492:292,1,95.9999970703126,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
191,379,56186,6,0,P|135:355|87:283,1,143.999995605469,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
89,195,56519,2,0,P|97:242|89:289,1,95.9999970703126,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,384,56853,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,264,57019,1,0,0:0:0:0:
0,148,57186,1,8,0:0:0:0:
89,289,57353,2,0,P|84:208|144:112,1,191.999994140625,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,280,57853,2,0,P|176:348|156:376,1,95.9999970703126,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,196,58186,2,0,P|124:164|180:144,1,95.9999970703126,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
368,184,58519,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,0,58686,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,296,58853,6,0,L|256:136,1,143.999995605469,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,76,59186,1,8,0:0:0:0:
101,308,59353,6,0,L|214:194,1,143.999995605469,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,152,59686,1,8,0:0:0:0:
48,248,59853,6,0,B|4:264|-32:256|-32:256|-20:224|40:188,1,160,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
0,344,60353,1,8,0:0:0:0:
0,108,60519,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,384,60686,1,0,1:0:0:0:
48,248,60853,5,8,0:0:0:0:
41,236,60936,1,8,0:0:0:0:
35,224,61019,1,8,0:0:0:0:
28,213,61103,1,8,0:0:0:0:
22,201,61186,5,8,0:0:0:0:
84,256,61269,1,8,0:0:0:0:
149,288,61353,1,8,0:0:0:0:
219,304,61436,1,8,0:0:0:0:
289,303,61519,6,0,B|352:296|384:240|384:240|368:238|348:248,1,143.999995605469,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
206,347,61853,2,0,P|243:317|289:303,1,95.9999970703126,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
497,383,62186,2,0,P|453:366|420:332,1,95.9999970703126,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,152,62519,1,8,0:0:0:0:
206,347,62686,2,0,P|137:342|188:272,1,191.999994140625,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
383,352,63186,2,0,P|335:347|292:328,1,95.9999970703126,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
107,73,63519,2,0,P|111:120|132:164,1,95.9999970703126,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,152,63853,2,0,P|312:113|273:85,1,95.9999970703126,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,272,64186,6,0,P|184:308|312:308,2,191.999994140625,0|8|0,1:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,176,65019,1,0,1:0:0:0:
20,352,65186,1,8,0:0:0:0:
260,232,65353,2,0,B|328:204|400:224|400:224|376:240|352:248,1,191.999994140625,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,220,65853,2,0,P|177:171|222:132,1,95.9999970703126,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
67,287,66186,2,0,P|50:235|54:175,1,95.9999970703126,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,360,66519,1,2,0:2:0:0:
0,120,66686,1,0,0:0:0:0:
269,132,66853,6,0,P|320:160|356:208,1,120.000004577637,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,288,67353,1,0,1:0:0:0:
408,136,67519,1,8,0:0:0:0:
324,356,67853,6,0,P|296:372|268:376,1,60.0000022888184,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,360,68186,1,0,1:0:0:0:
247,265,68353,2,0,B|243:281|227:297|227:297|191:313|180:360,1,120.000004577637,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,228,68853,2,0,P|220:196|296:208,1,120.000004577637,8|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
247,265,69353,1,0,0:0:0:0:
372,148,69519,6,0,B|357:93|293:42|293:42|410:20|553:149|479:319|360:339|360:339|391:279|386:223,1,720.000027465821,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,214,71603,1,8,0:0:0:0:
381,204,71686,1,8,0:0:0:0:
377,195,71769,1,8,0:0:0:0:
374,186,71852,5,8,0:0:0:0:
348,225,71936,1,8,0:0:0:0:
377,262,72019,1,8,0:0:0:0:
421,244,72103,1,8,0:0:0:0:
419,197,72186,6,0,P|388:152|328:128,1,83.9999974365235,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,336,72519,2,0,P|361:359|425:350,1,83.9999974365235,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,116,72853,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,276,73019,1,0,1:0:0:0:
377,262,73186,5,8,0:0:0:0:
200,276,73353,2,0,L|100:284,1,83.9999974365235
328,184,73686,1,0,1:0:0:0:
151,198,73853,2,0,L|51:206,1,83.9999974365235,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
285,266,74186,1,0,1:0:0:0:
186,128,74353,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,282,74519,1,8,0:0:0:0:
186,128,74686,1,0,1:0:0:0:
285,266,74853,6,0,B|312:312|306:346|306:346|276:332|244:292,2,167.999994873047,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,348,75686,1,0,1:0:0:0:
364,208,75853,1,8,0:0:0:0:
188,220,76020,5,2,0:0:0:0:
168,212,76103,1,2,0:0:0:0:
148,204,76186,2,0,P|112:176|92:144,1,83.9999974365235,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
228,300,76519,2,0,P|182:305|145:297,1,83.9999974365235,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,224,76853,2,0,P|320:276|284:376,1,167.999994873047,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,140,77353,5,8,0:0:0:0:
336,120,77436,1,8,0:0:0:0:
344,96,77519,2,0,B|356:64|356:64|392:112|384:188,1,125.999996154785,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
410,228,77853,2,0,P|390:190|384:149,1,83.9999974365235,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,16,78186,1,0,0:0:0:0:
476,276,78353,1,0,1:0:0:0:
268,156,78519,1,8,0:0:0:0:
240,329,78686,6,0,B|248:368|276:384|276:384|332:300,1,167.999994873047
80,384,79186,2,0,L|177:351,1,83.9999974365235,8|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
0,212,79519,2,0,L|77:280,1,83.9999974365235,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,56,79853,2,0,L|87:156,1,83.9999974365235,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
62,267,80103,5,8,0:0:0:0:
88,252,80186,2,0,P|144:240|199:329,1,167.999994873047,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
91,138,80686,1,8,0:0:0:0:
91,138,80769,1,8,0:0:0:0:
91,138,80853,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,312,81019,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,160,81186,1,8,0:0:0:0:
19,335,81353,6,0,P|77:342|127:312,1,120.000004577637,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,232,81853,1,8,0:0:0:0:
60,256,82019,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,384,82186,5,4,0:0:0:0:
91,138,82353,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,82686,12,0,85519,0:0:0:0:

以上 thanks for modding!

Misure

951 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

Misure 2015-11-16T17:09:43+00:00

TT Mouse wrote:
[Insane]
00:05:520 (3,4) - ctrl+g? interesting ;w;

00:27:187 (4,1) - 有点远，拉近一点拉近了一点点

00:53:353 (2) - 这个建议不要叠在下面，卡flow，不如直接00:53:353 放三连诶怎么这里都说不好(虽然我就是想这样子) 嘛下次再有人提这里我就改:3
[Hard]

00:43:853 (2) - 这个拉的略多余这其实我觉得还好

感觉有些滑条没必要扭那么多下，也不好看，有些地方flow待提高，比如01:10:686 (1,2,3,4,1) - 这里就感觉摆的很牵强啊这换了个节奏...虽然大概还是挺牵强

有点想尝试滑条艺术有点失败了QAQ 这次就原谅我吧厚不厚下次我注意

[Normal]

NM很好啊;3 诶诶有吗有吗><
ez扫了一下没啥大问题，就这样吧，有点水的感觉不不十分感谢啊;w;

谢谢ttm摸图！

Misure

951 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

Misure 2015-11-16T17:22:23+00:00

妹桑辛苦了半夜来改图

imoutosan wrote:
Narcissu wrote:
??? tsun ge dan

Garden

Nomination Assessment Team

1,343 posts

Joined June 2013

Garden 2015-11-18T10:18:31+00:00

TT Mouse wrote:
[Garden's Insane]

00:02:853 (3,4) - 可以使者加大ds来体现一下重音的感觉？把12拉上去了

00:52:186 (6) - ctrl+g? 好

00:57:352 (2,3,4) - 这里前后ds一致 fixed

谢摸！

SPOILER

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Misato Aki - Glitter.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 50103
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.7
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.3

[Metadata]
Title:Glitter
TitleUnicode:Glitter
Artist:Misato Aki
ArtistUnicode:美郷あき
Creator:Misure
Version:Garden's Insane
Source:月に寄り添う乙女の作法2
Tags:Garden imoutosan Narcissu Tsuki ni Yorisou Otome no Sahou 2 opening eroge hentai galgame visual novel Navel
BeatmapID:808359
BeatmapSetID:365826

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:8.8
SliderMultiplier:1.7
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
Video,0,"Tsuki ni Yorisou Otome no Sahou 2 OP.flv"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
854,333.333333333333,4,2,1,50,1,0
2187,-125,4,2,1,50,0,0
3020,-111.111111111111,4,2,1,50,0,0
5687,-111.111111111111,4,2,1,50,0,0
5853,-111.111111111111,4,2,1,50,0,0
6020,-111.111111111111,4,2,1,50,0,0
6520,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
6853,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
7187,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
7353,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
7520,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
18187,-100,4,2,7,30,0,0
18520,-142.857142857143,4,2,2,50,0,0
23520,-142.857142857143,4,2,7,30,0,0
23853,-142.857142857143,4,2,2,50,0,0
27353,-200,4,2,2,50,0,0
27853,-200,4,2,2,50,0,0
28187,-200,4,2,1,50,0,0
28853,-111.111111111111,4,2,1,60,0,0
39520,-111.111111111111,4,2,1,60,0,0
44853,-125,4,2,1,60,0,0
47520,-111.111111111111,6,2,1,60,0,0
49520,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,60,0,0
49853,-111.111111111111,4,2,1,60,0,0
50187,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
50520,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
50853,333.333333333333,4,2,1,70,1,1
60852,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
61186,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
61352,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
61519,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
66852,-125,4,2,1,70,0,1
70686,-125,4,2,1,70,0,1
71019,-125,4,2,1,70,0,1
71352,-125,4,2,1,70,0,1
71519,-125,4,2,1,70,0,1
71686,-125,4,2,1,70,0,1
71852,-125,4,2,1,70,0,1
72019,-125,4,2,1,70,0,1
72186,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
82186,-100,4,2,2,55,0,0
82686,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
82852,-100,4,2,1,45,0,0
84186,-100,4,2,1,35,0,0
85519,-100,4,2,1,25,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,0,128
Combo2 : 128,128,255
Combo3 : 255,128,192
Combo4 : 0,128,255

[HitObjects]
140,32,2187,6,0,P|116:68|116:108,1,68,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,204,2520,2,0,P|228:152|204:120,1,68,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,276,2853,1,8,0:0:0:0:
216,340,3020,2,0,P|256:360|304:360,1,76.4999976654053,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,360,3353,6,0,P|451:329|474:258,1,152.999995330811,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,168,3853,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,264,4020,1,0,1:0:0:0:
320,168,4187,2,0,P|328:128|348:96,1,76.4999976654053,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,264,4520,2,0,P|346:294|296:300,1,76.4999976654053,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,272,4853,5,4,1:2:0:0:
212,100,5020,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,188,5187,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,188,5353,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,100,5520,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,272,5687,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,100,5853,1,8,0:0:0:0:
126,206,6020,6,0,P|102:166|102:90,1,114.749996498108,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
99,99,6353,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,264,6520,2,0,P|152:296|100:292,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,168,6853,1,8,0:0:0:0:
212,168,7020,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,140,7103,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,120,7187,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,104,7270,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,96,7353,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,92,7437,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,96,7520,6,0,P|419:74|461:90,1,85,4|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,227,7853,2,0,P|216:179|208:135,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,240,8187,2,0,P|396:309|362:337,1,85,8|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
252,364,8520,1,0,1:0:0:0:
268,227,8686,1,0,1:0:0:0:
140,312,8853,5,0,0:0:0:0:
116,148,9020,1,0,1:0:0:0:
268,227,9187,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,224,9353,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,136,9520,2,0,P|252:80|324:60,1,127.5
320,72,9853,2,0,P|347:122|378:137,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,156,10187,5,0,1:0:0:0:
424,44,10353,1,0,0:0:0:0:
488,156,10520,2,0,P|468:208|440:232,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
370,135,10853,1,0,1:0:0:0:
264,152,11020,1,0,1:0:0:0:
268,48,11187,2,0,P|220:56|168:104,1,85,8|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
168,104,11437,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,104,11520,6,0,L|84:100,1,85,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
232,216,11853,1,8,0:0:0:0:
232,216,12020,2,0,B|184:200|96:248|44:196,1,170,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
116,108,12520,1,8,0:0:0:0:
228,100,12687,1,0,1:0:0:0:
304,192,12853,6,0,P|304:240|280:276,1,85,4|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,340,13187,2,0,P|160:292|184:256,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,124,13520,1,0,1:0:0:0:
304,192,13687,1,0,1:0:0:0:
416,80,13853,1,8,0:0:0:0:
312,68,14020,2,0,P|332:152|436:176,1,170,4|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
312,68,14520,6,0,P|256:68|216:76,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,156,14853,1,0,0:0:0:0:
227,73,15020,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,240,15187,1,8,0:0:0:0:
312,160,15353,2,0,L|348:132,1,42.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,96,15520,6,0,P|452:160|428:196,1,85,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,248,15853,1,8,0:0:0:0:
472,304,16020,1,0,1:0:0:0:
448,332,16103,1,0,1:0:0:0:
416,352,16187,1,0,1:0:0:0:
316,336,16353,1,0,1:0:0:0:
232,380,16520,1,8,0:0:0:0:
148,364,16687,1,0,1:0:0:0:
148,364,17020,5,0,1:0:0:0:
88,232,17687,5,0,1:0:0:0:
144,368,17853,1,0,1:0:0:0:
88,232,18187,5,2,0:0:0:0:
88,232,18520,2,0,P|72:276|48:308,1,59.4999981842042,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,156,18853,2,0,P|64:100|116:64,1,118.999996368408,0|0,1:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
168,176,19353,2,0,B|192:228|168:280|168:280|192:272,1,118.999996368408,0|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
304,312,19853,1,0,3:0:0:0:
304,312,20020,6,0,P|268:360|196:364,1,118.999996368408
304,312,20520,2,0,L|384:296,1,59.4999981842042,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,244,20853,2,0,P|476:308|444:376,1,118.999996368408,0|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
460,244,21353,2,0,P|440:180|456:124,1,118.999996368408,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,124,21853,2,0,P|324:144|288:148,1,59.4999981842042,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
306,147,22353,5,0,0:0:0:0:
240,116,22520,1,0,3:0:0:0:
163,117,22687,1,0,0:0:0:0:
44,56,22853,1,0,1:0:0:0:
96,159,23020,1,0,0:0:0:0:
163,117,23187,1,0,3:0:0:0:
240,116,23353,1,0,0:0:0:0:
318,27,23520,5,2,0:0:0:0:
318,27,23853,2,0,P|362:35|402:27,1,59.4999981842042,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
238,67,24187,2,0,P|234:127|200:200,1,118.999996368408,0|0,1:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
150,67,24687,2,0,P|94:87|24:76,2,118.999996368408,0|0|0,0:0|3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
35,80,25520,6,0,L|0:155,1,59.4999981842042,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,176,25853,2,0,L|84:248,1,59.4999981842042,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,232,26187,2,0,P|200:296|240:344,1,118.999996368408,0|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
372,344,26687,2,0,P|356:280|316:232,1,118.999996368408
416,192,27187,1,0,3:0:0:0:
424,200,27353,6,0,B|459:224|492:228|492:228|520:160|460:92,1,212.5,2|0,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,200,28353,5,0,1:0:0:0:
363,35,28520,1,8,0:0:0:0:
204,221,28853,5,4,0:0:0:0:
204,221,29187,2,0,P|146:253|118:252,1,76.4999976654053,8|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
287,266,29520,2,0,P|337:242|381:239,1,76.4999976654053,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
465,264,29853,1,8,0:0:0:0:
385,146,30020,2,0,B|349:100|381:43|381:43|334:77,1,152.999995330811,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
263,170,30520,1,8,0:0:0:0:
467,98,30687,2,0,P|471:193|402:244,1,152.999995330811,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
317,262,31187,2,0,P|276:249|226:250,1,76.4999976654053,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,232,31520,6,0,B|84:240|60:268|60:268|88:300|136:304,1,152.999995330811
243,281,32020,2,0,P|277:267|339:263,1,76.4999976654053,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,296,32353,2,0,P|434:310|388:316,1,76.4999976654053,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,261,32687,1,0,1:0:0:0:
410,136,32853,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,128,33020,1,0,1:0:0:0:
396,62,33187,2,0,P|412:110|398:162,1,76.4999976654053,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
297,7,33520,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,128,33687,1,0,1:0:0:0:
176,36,33853,1,8,0:0:0:0:
260,128,34020,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,12,34187,5,0,1:0:0:0:
458,222,34520,2,0,P|493:269|529:279,1,76.4999976654053,8|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
359,240,34853,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,152,35020,1,0,0:0:0:0:
174,290,35187,1,8,0:0:0:0:
264,309,35353,2,0,P|251:231|174:197,1,152.999995330811,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
88,325,35853,1,8,0:0:0:0:
92,193,36020,2,0,B|113:150|144:139|144:139|180:159|193:204,1,152.999995330811,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
264,309,36520,2,0,P|300:276|342:262,1,76.4999976654053,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
447,111,36853,6,0,P|455:173|435:264,1,152.999995330811,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,324,37353,1,0,1:0:0:0:
448,364,37520,1,0,0:0:0:0:
436,260,37687,2,0,P|394:225|345:221,1,76.4999976654053,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,211,38020,1,0,1:0:0:0:
187,114,38187,6,0,P|166:45|176:20,1,76.4999976654053,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
286,157,38520,2,0,P|236:209|210:213,1,76.4999976654053,8|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
271,57,38853,2,0,P|341:73|357:94,1,76.4999976654053,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
427,206,39187,1,0,1:0:0:0:
441,183,39270,1,0,0:0:0:0:
447,157,39353,1,0,1:0:0:0:
450,130,39437,1,0,0:0:0:0:
443,104,39520,6,0,P|448:26|522:8,1,152.999995330811,4|0,0:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
443,104,40020,2,0,P|372:78|280:88,1,152.999995330811,8|8,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
188,188,40520,2,0,P|156:148|156:112,1,76.4999976654053,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,168,40853,1,0,1:0:0:0:
188,188,41020,1,0,1:0:0:0:
124,256,41187,2,0,L|100:340,1,76.4999976654053,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,272,41520,1,0,1:0:0:0:
188,188,41687,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,100,41853,2,0,L|288:48,1,76.4999976654053,0|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,56,42187,6,0,B|60:104|79:178|79:178|104:160,1,152.999995330811,4|0,1:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
216,100,42687,2,0,B|248:80|248:80|320:104|384:48,1,152.999995330811,8|8,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
424,136,43187,2,0,B|376:184|304:184|304:184|336:208,1,152.999995330811,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
440,248,43687,1,0,1:0:0:0:
440,248,43853,2,0,P|468:288|472:324,1,76.4999976654053,8|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,280,44187,1,8,1:2:0:0:
308,300,44353,1,0,1:0:0:0:
304,320,44520,2,0,P|236:312|208:316,1,76.4999976654053,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,332,44853,6,0,P|76:296|76:220,1,136,4|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,252,45353,1,0,1:0:0:0:
168,252,45520,2,0,P|238:236|298:184,1,136,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
276,48,46020,1,8,1:2:0:0:
276,48,46187,6,0,P|300:104|316:116,1,68,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,152,46520,1,0,1:0:0:0:
468,152,46687,1,0,0:0:0:0:
508,348,46853,2,0,P|468:328|452:308,1,68,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,228,47187,1,0,1:0:0:0:
468,152,47353,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,100,47520,6,0,L|288:188,1,76.4999976654053,4|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,232,47853,1,0,1:0:0:0:
289,175,48020,2,0,P|359:149|427:178,1,152.999995330811
356,116,48520,2,0,P|352:80|356:40,1,76.4999976654053,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,206,48853,2,0,P|460:240|454:281,1,76.4999976654053,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
355,247,49187,1,0,1:0:0:0:
452,84,49353,1,0,0:0:0:0:
340,132,49520,6,0,P|293:142|246:137,1,95.6250036478044,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,172,49853,6,0,P|224:220|164:232,1,114.749996498108,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
135,222,50187,6,0,B|104:211|76:227|76:227|105:141|91:121,1,170
113,93,50853,6,0,P|125:145|117:189,1,85,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,332,51186,2,0,P|36:280|44:236,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
121,175,51519,2,0,B|168:184|244:144|272:184,1,127.5,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,176,51853,1,8,0:0:0:0:
360,28,52019,1,0,1:0:0:0:
492,136,52186,2,0,L|464:48,1,85,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
404,204,52519,2,0,L|429:284,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,352,52853,5,0,0:0:0:0:
176,304,53019,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,156,53186,1,8,0:0:0:0:
280,260,53353,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,184,53519,2,0,P|176:132|184:52,1,127.5,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,80,53853,2,0,P|136:80|108:60,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,48,54186,6,0,L|12:232,1,170,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,280,54686,2,0,B|201:245|176:199|176:199|116:200|97:254,1,170,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
207,361,55186,2,0,P|247:372|288:360,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,268,55519,6,0,P|400:316|400:360,1,85,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
248,256,55852,2,0,P|256:216|284:184,1,85,8|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
396,180,56186,2,0,B|468:152|508:156|508:156|464:148|432:112,1,170,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,8,56686,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,96,56852,6,0,B|304:88|284:24|284:24|232:40|184:24,1,170,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,76,57352,2,0,P|142:117|134:159,1,85,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,204,57686,1,0,1:0:0:0:
48,296,57852,2,0,P|164:284|220:292,1,170,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,360,58352,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,260,58519,2,0,P|332:212|300:180,1,85,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,152,58852,5,4,1:2:0:0:
240,264,59019,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,80,59186,1,8,0:0:0:0:
428,200,59352,1,12,1:2:0:0:
428,200,59686,5,0,1:0:0:0:
240,264,59852,2,0,P|224:204|236:160,1,85,12|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,300,60186,1,0,1:0:0:0:
168,352,60352,1,0,1:0:0:0:
145,172,60519,2,0,P|189:167|249:203,1,85,8|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,268,60852,6,0,P|32:220|32:168,1,127.5,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,168,61186,2,0,P|36:264|16:308,1,127.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
8,308,61519,6,0,P|48:340|100:344,1,85,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,312,61852,1,8,0:0:0:0:
268,348,62019,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,304,62186,2,0,P|380:248|372:176,1,127.5,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,192,62519,2,0,P|424:184|448:160,1,85,8|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
368,64,62852,5,0,1:0:0:0:
272,136,63019,1,0,1:0:0:0:
220,16,63186,1,8,0:0:0:0:
144,124,63352,1,0,1:0:0:0:
56,44,63519,2,0,P|20:116|40:176,1,127.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,188,63852,2,0,P|84:208|108:252,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,384,64186,6,0,P|4:344|16:288,1,85,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,328,64519,1,8,0:0:0:0:
196,384,64686,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,328,64852,2,0,P|300:248|276:144,1,170,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,92,65352,2,0,P|404:80|460:92,1,85,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,256,65685,1,0,1:0:0:0:
416,256,65852,2,0,P|404:216|415:162,1,85,8|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
508,296,66186,1,0,1:0:0:0:
424,348,66352,1,0,1:0:0:0:
336,316,66519,2,0,P|280:308|240:320,1,85,8|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,344,66852,6,0,P|104:292|120:216,1,136,4|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,220,67352,2,0,L|196:260,1,68,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,84,67852,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,140,68019,1,8,0:0:0:0:
100,140,68186,6,0,P|140:160|172:160,1,68,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,140,68519,1,0,0:0:0:0:
316,84,68686,1,0,1:0:0:0:
365,161,68852,2,0,P|367:199|356:232,1,68,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,288,69186,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,300,69352,1,0,1:0:0:0:
132,248,69519,6,0,P|128:224|136:168,1,68,4|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,180,69769,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,180,69852,1,8,0:0:0:0:
232,40,70019,1,8,0:0:0:0:
232,216,70186,1,8,1:2:0:0:
120,84,70352,1,0,1:0:0:0:
300,128,70519,1,0,1:0:0:0:
300,128,70686,1,4,1:0:0:0:
300,128,71019,5,8,1:2:0:0:
332,224,71186,2,0,P|368:260|400:264,1,68,8|0,1:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
484,216,71519,2,0,L|492:176,3,34,0|0|8|8,1:0|1:0|1:2|1:2,1:0:0:0:
512,144,71852,2,0,L|508:108,3,34,8|8|8|8,1:2|1:2|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,80,72186,6,0,P|472:32|440:8,1,85,4|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,108,72519,2,0,L|368:192,1,85
260,264,72852,1,0,1:0:0:0:
208,80,73019,1,0,1:0:0:0:
284,156,73186,1,8,0:0:0:0:
184,180,73352,2,0,P|116:140|112:44,1,170,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
16,144,73852,6,0,P|12:196|-4:244,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,320,74186,1,0,0:0:0:0:
108,240,74352,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,368,74519,2,0,P|168:340|196:336,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,248,74852,6,0,P|224:188|180:160,1,85,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,300,75186,2,0,P|376:292|408:256,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,144,75519,1,0,1:0:0:0:
328,196,75686,1,0,1:0:0:0:
280,12,75852,1,8,0:0:0:0:
228,128,76019,1,4,1:0:0:0:
228,128,76102,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,128,76186,6,0,P|184:112|168:68,2,85,0|0|8,0:0|1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,104,76686,2,0,P|321:185|248:232,1,170,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
328,104,77186,2,0,P|368:92|416:100,1,85,8|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
512,236,77519,6,0,L|493:147,1,85,4|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,300,77852,2,0,L|453:383,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,272,78186,1,0,1:0:0:0:
512,236,78352,1,0,0:0:0:0:
436,300,78519,1,8,0:0:0:0:
340,272,78686,2,0,P|284:240|172:248,1,170,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
96,300,79186,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,300,79352,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,132,79519,6,0,L|44:220,1,85,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,52,79852,2,0,L|168:136,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
181,244,80186,6,0,P|248:184|340:176,1,170,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,224,80686,1,0,1:0:0:0:
444,252,80769,1,0,1:0:0:0:
424,276,80852,1,0,1:0:0:0:
392,88,81019,1,0,1:0:0:0:
324,173,81186,1,8,1:2:0:0:
228,16,81352,1,0,1:0:0:0:
228,16,81686,5,0,1:0:0:0:
300,88,81852,2,0,P|348:100|392:96,1,85,8|0,1:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
484,60,82186,5,0,3:2:0:0:
484,60,82352,1,0,3:2:0:0:
256,192,82686,5,0,1:0:0:0:
256,192,82852,12,0,85519,0:0:0:0:

Koiyuki

2,531 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2015-11-18T14:33:21+00:00

M4M from my queue ~

Just some complaints.
My personal suggestions.
Highly recommended.
Unrankable, you have to fix it.

Narcissu's Easy

没视频
Easy扫了一眼，偏难，几个梗建议全局修改：
00:53:519 (1,2,3,4) - 改一个slider进去
00:08:187 (2,3,4) - 类似这种的，23并成一个slider

图集中需要包含Easy或Normal难度。

Normal

00:17:020 (1,2) - 这里节奏对新手不好抓，1改成个滑条直接拉到2的头，然后00:17:853 - 放个note？
01:22:186 (5) - 这里additions不用soft finish？
01:22:686 - 加个note，转盘延后1/4吧？

除了看上去有点乱之外没啥问题。

Hard

有点看不懂nc的下法，你就是跟着歌词下的吗，每拍中间换nc总觉得比较蛋疼
00:08:520 (4) - 漏clap？
00:49:520 (1,2,3) - 都是1/4为啥间距不一样啊？http://puu.sh/lpUv3/bc154cb8fa.jpg 这样不是更清楚了？
01:07:353 (2,3) - 这个最好能摆远点，这还是有点近，容易被读成1/2
01:11:519 (1) - remove nc

Garden's Insane

00:03:020 (4,1) - 这里竟然不跳，不高兴
00:06:853 (4) - 衷心建议把这个移到另一个地方去，对后面的连打增大了不少迷惑性
00:04:020 (3,5) - 这是故意不stack？但这不stack也没啥意义啊
00:16:187 (5,6,7,8) - 我倒觉得你这里不如间距逐渐拉大
00:28:353 (1,2) - ctrl+g？这样不卡手吗？反正我初见打的是有点不顺。

Narcissu's Insane

没视频

打下来最顺的Insane。

Insane

00:39:020 (6) - 这里加个nc做提醒？另外我觉得这里应该用drum系列的hitsound更加合适
00:55:186 (5) - stack在00:55:852 (2) - 的尾巴？
00:55:519 (1) - 讲真，这里用这种弧度的slider是不是更顺flow一点？ http://puu.sh/lpXgn/55efe157df.jpg
01:00:852 (1) - ^
01:18:852 (6,1) - swap nc
01:20:852 (4,5) - 这个距离也拉大一点，跳起来更加舒服
01:22:186 (3,4) - 同normal，不用finish?

imouto's Insane

00:12:187 (5,1,1,2,3) - 全是一个方向的再加上一个遮挡1/4 slider jump特别容易引起断尾，我觉得把00:13:187 (2) - ctrl+g会好很多
00:16:520 (8) - 打的时候觉得这个8远的太突然了，不过不动也没啥问题
00:28:520 (2,1) - 断尾地狱
00:33:020 (7) - nc?
00:55:519 (6,7,1) - 断尾地狱2
01:00:853 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 打的时候虽然接上了但是吓了一跳，这1/4是不是大的太突然了点啊=.=
01:22:186 (1,2) - 越后面越萎，不来个http://puu.sh/lpXTY/09c2b1d2c1.jpg ？

Good luck with the mapset !

Fushimi Rio

Fushimi Rio 2015-11-18T14:56:07+00:00

Minakami Yuki wrote:
imouto's Insane
00:12:187 (5,1,1,2,3) - 全是一个方向的再加上一个遮挡1/4 slider jump特别容易引起断尾，我觉得把00:13:187 (2) - ctrl+g会好很多我觉得要ctrl+g的话1比2好
00:16:520 (8) - 打的时候觉得这个8远的太突然了，不过不动也没啥问题那就没问题吧
00:28:520 (2,1) - 断尾地狱第二遍就不会断了
00:33:020 (7) - nc? 数字大一点也没啥……
00:55:519 (6,7,1) - 断尾地狱2 我看了看别人不会断这个……
01:00:853 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 打的时候虽然接上了但是吓了一跳，这1/4是不是大的太突然了点啊=.= ~~吓你一大跳~~能接上就行啦不要在意细节
01:22:186 (1,2) - 越后面越萎，不来个http://puu.sh/lpXTY/09c2b1d2c1.jpg ？ ~~图片加载不出来~~ 加载出来了既然star比insane高了我就勉为其难改大跳吧

Good luck with the mapset !

SPOILER

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Misato Aki - Glitter.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 50103
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.3

[Metadata]
Title:Glitter
TitleUnicode:Glitter
Artist:Misato Aki
ArtistUnicode:美郷あき
Creator:Misure
Version:imouto's Insane
Source:月に寄り添う乙女の作法2
Tags:Garden imoutosan Narcissu Tsuki ni Yorisou Otome no Sahou 2 opening eroge hentai galgame visual novel Navel
BeatmapID:813930
BeatmapSetID:365826

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7.2
CircleSize:4.2
OverallDifficulty:7.2
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
Video,0,"Tsuki ni Yorisou Otome no Sahou 2 OP.flv"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
854,333.333333333333,4,2,1,70,1,0
2187,-125,4,2,1,70,0,0
7520,-100,4,2,1,74,0,1
7603,-100,4,2,1,74,0,0
12687,-66.6666666666667,4,2,1,74,0,0
12853,-100,4,2,1,74,0,0
15520,-66.6666666666667,4,2,1,74,0,0
16687,-100,4,2,1,74,0,0
18187,-166.666666666667,4,2,2,62,0,0
22020,-166.666666666667,4,2,1,62,0,0
25353,-166.666666666667,4,2,2,62,0,0
26187,-166.666666666667,4,2,2,42,0,0
26687,-166.666666666667,4,2,2,62,0,0
27353,-166.666666666667,4,2,2,32,0,0
27520,-166.666666666667,4,2,2,42,0,0
27853,-166.666666666667,4,2,2,52,0,0
28520,-66.6666666666667,4,2,1,62,0,0
28770,-66.6666666666667,4,2,2,5,0,0
28853,-100,4,2,1,62,0,0
30020,-100,4,2,2,62,0,0
30270,-100,4,2,1,62,0,0
33520,-100,4,2,2,62,0,0
33853,-100,4,2,1,62,0,0
39520,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,72,0,0
47520,-100,6,2,1,74,0,0
49520,-50,4,2,1,76,0,0
50186,-100,4,2,1,68,0,0
50520,-100,4,2,1,74,0,0
50853,333.333333333333,4,2,1,80,1,1
50853,-83.3333333333333,4,2,1,80,0,1
53519,-83.3333333333333,4,2,2,80,0,1
53603,-83.3333333333333,4,2,1,80,0,1
56186,-83.3333333333333,4,2,2,80,0,1
56269,-83.3333333333333,4,2,1,80,0,1
56853,-83.3333333333333,4,2,2,80,0,1
56894,-83.3333333333333,4,2,1,80,0,1
59853,-100,4,2,1,80,0,1
60853,-100,4,2,1,68,0,1
61186,-95.2380952380952,4,2,1,62,0,0
61519,-83.3333333333333,4,2,1,80,0,1
63519,-83.3333333333333,4,2,2,80,0,1
63561,-83.3333333333333,4,2,1,80,0,1
66519,-83.3333333333333,4,2,2,80,0,1
66853,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,80,0,1
67853,-133.333333333333,4,2,2,80,0,1
67894,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,80,0,1
70686,-83.3333333333333,4,2,1,76,0,1
71019,-83.3333333333333,4,2,1,68,0,1
71353,-83.3333333333333,4,2,1,64,0,1
71519,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
71686,-100,4,2,1,64,0,1
71853,-100,4,2,1,68,0,1
72019,-100,4,2,1,72,0,1
72186,-95.2380952380952,4,2,1,76,0,0
81353,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,76,0,0
82186,-133.333333333333,4,2,2,80,0,0
82686,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
82853,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
83519,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
84186,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
84853,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
85519,-100,4,2,1,20,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,0,128
Combo2 : 128,128,255
Combo3 : 255,128,192
Combo4 : 0,128,255

[HitObjects]
112,56,2187,5,4,0:0:0:0:
172,116,2353,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,136,2520,1,2,0:0:0:0:
130,212,2687,2,0,L|191:195,1,64,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,140,3020,5,0,0:0:0:0:
252,136,3187,1,2,0:0:0:0:
169,285,3353,2,0,L|292:251,1,128,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,304,3853,1,2,0:0:0:0:
88,308,4187,1,8,0:0:0:0:
84,312,4520,1,2,0:0:0:0:
80,316,4853,6,0,P|112:276|116:372,1,224,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,360,5520,2,0,P|8:320|16:280,1,64,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,216,5853,1,8,0:0:0:0:
137,373,6020,6,0,P|135:308|163:251,1,128,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,184,6520,1,8,0:0:0:0:
56,236,6687,1,0,0:0:0:0:
140,148,6853,1,8,0:0:0:0:
194,310,7020,1,0,0:0:0:0:
201,331,7103,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,352,7187,5,8,0:0:0:0:
159,336,7270,1,8,0:0:0:0:
159,284,7353,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,269,7437,1,8,0:0:0:0:
238,310,7520,6,0,P|285:338|335:334,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
478,366,7853,2,0,P|447:340|431:304,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
367,139,8187,1,2,0:0:0:0:
309,339,8353,1,0,0:0:0:0:
512,291,8520,1,8,0:0:0:0:
323,256,8687,6,0,L|222:233,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,356,9020,1,0,0:0:0:0:
215,321,9187,2,0,L|114:298,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,204,9520,1,2,0:0:0:0:
309,339,9687,1,0,0:0:0:0:
367,139,9853,1,8,0:0:0:0:
215,321,10020,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,280,10187,6,0,L|496:276,2,80,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
122,289,10687,1,0,0:0:0:0:
309,339,10853,1,0,0:0:0:0:
258,152,11020,1,0,0:0:0:0:
215,321,11187,1,8,0:0:0:0:
137,203,11353,5,2,0:0:0:0:
122,191,11437,1,2,0:0:0:0:
105,178,11520,2,0,P|61:164|13:175,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,212,11853,2,0,P|206:166|172:130,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
247,283,12187,2,0,L|400:236,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,288,12687,6,0,L|324:264,1,60.0000022888184,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,217,12853,6,0,L|404:240,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,358,13187,2,0,L|368:335,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
202,207,13520,2,0,L|282:183,1,80
164,288,13853,1,8,0:0:0:0:
232,30,14020,2,0,L|278:184,1,160,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,60,14520,2,0,L|354:136,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,0,14853,2,0,L|154:76,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,340,15187,2,0,L|61:263,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,164,15437,5,0,0:0:0:0:
36,188,15520,2,0,P|100:220|180:160,1,180.000006866455,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,80,15853,1,8,0:0:0:0:
260,308,16020,1,8,0:0:0:0:
264,324,16103,1,8,0:0:0:0:
268,340,16187,1,0,0:0:0:0:
84,340,16353,1,8,0:0:0:0:
348,144,16520,1,8,0:0:0:0:
261,357,16687,6,0,B|242:372|218:380|218:380|226:356|223:325|223:325|181:349|146:348|146:348|167:321|182:274|182:274|122:298|72:295|18:256|18:256|103:248|179:212|227:152|227:152|225:190,1,720,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
226,190,18520,5,0,0:0:0:0:
164,228,18687,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,120,18853,2,0,P|264:128|300:172,1,95.9999970703126
144,132,19353,2,0,P|152:84|244:52,1,143.999995605469,0|0,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
332,228,20020,2,0,P|368:248|432:236,1,95.9999970703126,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,192,20520,1,0,0:3:0:0:
460,304,20687,1,0,0:3:0:0:
384,176,20853,6,0,P|348:155|284:168,1,95.9999970703126,0|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,244,21353,2,0,P|281:279|342:300,2,95.9999970703126
260,244,22353,1,0,0:0:0:0:
196,296,22520,1,0,0:3:0:0:
116,304,22687,1,0,0:0:0:0:
20,234,22853,2,0,L|68:240,1,47.9999985351563,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,200,23187,1,0,0:0:0:0:
68,160,23353,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,304,23520,1,0,0:3:0:0:
68,160,23853,5,0,0:0:0:0:
140,200,24019,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,80,24187,2,0,B|176:60|176:60|200:92|241:91,1,95.9999970703126
388,88,24687,2,0,B|352:60|304:60|304:60|316:88|308:116,1,143.999995605469
256,260,25353,2,0,L|256:164,1,95.9999970703126,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,276,25853,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,292,26020,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,308,26187,6,2,P|296:336|348:332,1,95.9999970703126,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,308,26687,2,2,P|216:336|164:332,1,95.9999970703126,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,268,27187,1,0,0:0:0:0:
196,268,27353,2,2,B|124:264|96:192|96:192|160:204|208:188,1,239.999992675781,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,340,28353,5,4,0:3:0:0:
280,212,28520,2,0,L|442:78,1,180.000006866455,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,224,28853,6,0,P|324:184|312:80,2,160,0|8|0,1:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,248,29687,1,0,1:0:0:0:
292,224,29853,1,8,0:0:0:0:
296,344,30020,2,0,L|296:392,2,40,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,224,30353,1,0,0:0:0:0:
196,248,30520,1,8,0:2:0:0:
392,204,30687,2,0,L|488:182,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,224,31020,1,0,1:0:0:0:
439,87,31187,2,0,L|497:32,1,80,8|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,224,31520,6,0,P|240:240|180:212,1,120,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,176,31853,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,340,32020,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,176,32187,2,0,L|140:264,1,80,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
60,288,32520,1,8,0:0:0:0:
236,218,32687,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,218,33020,1,0,1:0:0:0:
171,281,33187,1,8,0:0:0:0:
276,299,33353,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,176,33520,1,2,0:0:0:0:
325,205,33687,1,0,0:0:0:0:
325,205,33770,1,0,0:0:0:0:
325,205,33853,1,8,0:0:0:0:
252,129,34020,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,218,34187,6,0,P|280:216|344:112,2,160,0|8|0,1:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,176,35020,1,0,1:0:0:0:
276,299,35187,1,8,0:0:0:0:
252,129,35353,2,0,L|240:46,1,80
236,218,35687,2,0,L|212:250,2,40,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
339,80,36020,2,0,L|389:12,1,80
236,218,36353,1,0,1:0:0:0:
240,49,36520,1,8,0:0:0:0:
335,249,36687,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,140,36853,6,0,P|108:160|72:212,1,120
52,280,37187,1,8,0:0:0:0:
0,176,37353,1,0,1:0:0:0:
52,280,37520,2,0,L|104:384,2,80,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,176,38020,5,2,0:0:0:0:
117,183,38187,1,0,0:0:0:0:
52,280,38353,1,0,1:0:0:0:
64,120,38520,5,8,0:0:0:0:
161,184,38687,1,0,0:0:0:0:
57,236,38853,1,8,0:0:0:0:
147,103,39020,5,8,0:0:0:0:
280,193,39187,1,8,1:2:0:0:
190,326,39353,1,0,0:0:0:0:
169,220,39520,6,0,L|147:103,1,120.000004577637,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,260,40020,2,0,P|160:292|216:276,1,120.000004577637,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
43,226,40520,2,0,B|42:318|42:318|108:260,1,180.000006866455,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
213,180,41187,2,0,L|168:220,1,60.0000022888184,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,144,41520,1,0,0:0:0:0:
241,256,41687,1,0,1:0:0:0:
140,144,41853,2,0,L|100:99,1,60.0000022888184,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
241,256,42187,6,0,L|319:347,1,120.000004577637,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
274,189,42687,2,0,P|212:187|172:229,1,120.000004577637,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
347,187,43187,2,0,B|301:106|301:106|273:190,1,180.000006866455,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
222,312,43853,2,0,L|240:255,1,60.0000022888184,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,344,44187,2,0,L|154:287,1,60.0000022888184,8|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
64,368,44520,1,0,1:0:0:0:
112,224,44687,1,0,1:0:0:0:
208,384,44853,6,0,P|258:376|292:304,1,120.000004577637,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
472,324,45520,2,0,P|420:296|408:239,1,120.000004577637,8|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
436,168,46020,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,328,46187,5,8,0:0:0:0:
280,364,46353,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,360,46520,1,0,1:0:0:0:
144,308,46687,1,0,1:0:0:0:
0,256,46853,5,8,0:0:0:0:
144,308,47020,1,0,1:0:0:0:
56,324,47187,1,0,1:0:0:0:
180,228,47353,1,0,1:0:0:0:
112,384,47520,5,4,0:0:0:0:
76,180,47686,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,328,47853,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,228,48020,2,0,P|184:168|264:116,1,160,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,352,48520,5,4,0:0:0:0:
48,204,48686,1,8,0:0:0:0:
252,240,48853,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,276,49020,2,0,P|168:208|236:152,1,160,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,352,49520,6,0,L|140:184,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,32,49853,2,0,L|372:200,1,160,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,296,50186,5,0,0:0:0:0:
392,288,50520,5,0,0:0:0:0:
376,276,50853,6,0,B|332:244|276:248|276:248|312:288,1,143.999995605469,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
425,356,51186,2,0,P|407:311|375:275,1,95.9999970703126,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,100,51520,2,0,P|201:147|222:190,1,95.9999970703126,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
301,276,51853,1,8,0:0:0:0:
104,124,52020,2,0,P|48:140|124:184,1,191.999994140625,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,24,52520,2,0,P|301:66|306:114,1,95.9999970703126,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,284,52853,2,0,B|177:223|221:179|221:179|224:192|217:211,1,143.999995605469
124,328,53186,2,0,P|166:306|214:301,1,95.9999970703126,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,320,53519,6,0,P|352:288|344:156,2,191.999994140625,2|8|0,0:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
436,216,54353,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,308,54519,1,8,0:0:0:0:
436,216,54686,2,0,B|480:144|448:64|448:64|428:108,1,191.999994140625,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,224,55186,2,0,P|321:167|290:130,1,95.9999970703126,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,296,55519,2,0,B|235:266|179:285|179:285|192:298|211:301,1,143.999995605469,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,320,55853,2,0,P|448:312|492:292,1,95.9999970703126,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
191,379,56186,6,0,P|135:355|87:283,1,143.999995605469,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
89,195,56519,2,0,P|97:242|89:289,1,95.9999970703126,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,384,56853,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,264,57019,1,0,0:0:0:0:
0,148,57186,1,8,0:0:0:0:
89,289,57353,2,0,P|84:208|144:112,1,191.999994140625,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,280,57853,2,0,P|176:348|156:376,1,95.9999970703126,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,196,58186,2,0,P|124:164|180:144,1,95.9999970703126,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
368,184,58519,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,0,58686,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,296,58853,6,0,L|256:136,1,143.999995605469,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,76,59186,1,8,0:0:0:0:
101,308,59353,6,0,L|214:194,1,143.999995605469,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,152,59686,1,8,0:0:0:0:
48,248,59853,6,0,B|4:264|-32:256|-32:256|-20:224|40:188,1,160,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
0,344,60353,1,8,0:0:0:0:
0,108,60519,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,384,60686,1,0,1:0:0:0:
48,248,60853,5,8,0:0:0:0:
41,236,60936,1,8,0:0:0:0:
35,224,61019,1,8,0:0:0:0:
28,213,61103,1,8,0:0:0:0:
22,201,61186,5,8,0:0:0:0:
84,256,61269,1,8,0:0:0:0:
149,288,61353,1,8,0:0:0:0:
219,304,61436,1,8,0:0:0:0:
289,303,61519,6,0,B|352:296|384:240|384:240|368:238|348:248,1,143.999995605469,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
206,347,61853,2,0,P|243:317|289:303,1,95.9999970703126,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
497,383,62186,2,0,P|453:366|420:332,1,95.9999970703126,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,152,62519,1,8,0:0:0:0:
206,347,62686,2,0,P|137:342|188:272,1,191.999994140625,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
383,352,63186,2,0,P|335:347|292:328,1,95.9999970703126,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
107,73,63519,2,0,P|111:120|132:164,1,95.9999970703126,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,152,63853,2,0,P|312:113|273:85,1,95.9999970703126,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,272,64186,6,0,P|184:308|312:308,2,191.999994140625,0|8|0,1:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,176,65019,1,0,1:0:0:0:
20,352,65186,1,8,0:0:0:0:
260,232,65353,2,0,B|328:204|400:224|400:224|376:240|352:248,1,191.999994140625,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,220,65853,2,0,P|177:171|222:132,1,95.9999970703126,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
67,287,66186,2,0,P|50:235|54:175,1,95.9999970703126,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,360,66519,1,2,0:2:0:0:
0,120,66686,1,0,0:0:0:0:
269,132,66853,6,0,P|320:160|356:208,1,120.000004577637,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,288,67353,1,0,1:0:0:0:
408,136,67519,1,8,0:0:0:0:
324,356,67853,6,0,P|296:372|268:376,1,60.0000022888184,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,360,68186,1,0,1:0:0:0:
247,265,68353,2,0,B|243:281|227:297|227:297|191:313|180:360,1,120.000004577637,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,228,68853,2,0,P|220:196|296:208,1,120.000004577637,8|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
247,265,69353,1,0,0:0:0:0:
372,148,69519,6,0,B|357:93|293:42|293:42|410:20|553:149|479:319|360:339|360:339|391:279|386:223,1,720.000027465821,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,214,71603,1,8,0:0:0:0:
381,204,71686,1,8,0:0:0:0:
377,195,71769,1,8,0:0:0:0:
374,186,71852,5,8,0:0:0:0:
348,225,71936,1,8,0:0:0:0:
377,262,72019,1,8,0:0:0:0:
421,244,72103,1,8,0:0:0:0:
419,197,72186,6,0,P|388:152|328:128,1,83.9999974365235,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,336,72519,2,0,P|361:359|425:350,1,83.9999974365235,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,116,72853,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,276,73019,1,0,1:0:0:0:
377,262,73186,5,8,0:0:0:0:
200,276,73353,2,0,L|100:284,1,83.9999974365235
328,184,73686,1,0,1:0:0:0:
151,198,73853,2,0,L|51:206,1,83.9999974365235,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
285,266,74186,1,0,1:0:0:0:
186,128,74353,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,282,74519,1,8,0:0:0:0:
186,128,74686,1,0,1:0:0:0:
285,266,74853,6,0,B|312:312|306:346|306:346|276:332|244:292,2,167.999994873047,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,348,75686,1,0,1:0:0:0:
364,208,75853,1,8,0:0:0:0:
188,220,76020,5,2,0:0:0:0:
168,212,76103,1,2,0:0:0:0:
148,204,76186,2,0,P|112:176|92:144,1,83.9999974365235,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
228,300,76519,2,0,P|182:305|145:297,1,83.9999974365235,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,224,76853,2,0,P|320:276|284:376,1,167.999994873047,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,140,77353,5,8,0:0:0:0:
336,120,77436,1,8,0:0:0:0:
344,96,77519,2,0,B|356:64|356:64|392:112|384:188,1,125.999996154785,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
410,228,77853,2,0,P|390:190|384:149,1,83.9999974365235,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,16,78186,1,0,0:0:0:0:
476,276,78353,1,0,1:0:0:0:
268,156,78519,1,8,0:0:0:0:
240,329,78686,6,0,B|248:368|276:384|276:384|332:300,1,167.999994873047
80,384,79186,2,0,L|177:351,1,83.9999974365235,8|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
0,212,79519,2,0,L|77:280,1,83.9999974365235,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,56,79853,2,0,L|87:156,1,83.9999974365235,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
62,267,80103,5,8,0:0:0:0:
88,252,80186,2,0,P|144:240|199:329,1,167.999994873047,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
91,138,80686,1,8,0:0:0:0:
91,138,80769,1,8,0:0:0:0:
91,138,80853,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,312,81019,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,160,81186,1,8,0:0:0:0:
19,335,81353,6,0,P|77:342|127:312,1,120.000004577637,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,232,81852,1,8,0:0:0:0:
60,256,82019,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,136,82186,5,4,0:0:0:0:
68,384,82353,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,82686,12,0,85519,0:0:0:0:

Last edited by Fushimi Rio 2015-11-18T15:04:26+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Misure

951 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

Misure 2015-11-18T15:00:43+00:00

诶 edit个啥好呢来讲个冷笑话吧

Minakami Yuki wrote:
今天Fycho和我说：“放学来我家找我。”我有些紧张：“我是不是GD没做，是不是排列难看了，难道我节奏下错了？”我怀着忐忑的心情来到空无一人的Fycho家，看见桌子留了一张纸条：“我AFK了！来上我呀！”

Last edited by Misure 2015-11-18T16:21:17+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Misure

951 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

Misure 2015-11-18T16:14:21+00:00

Minakami Yuki wrote:
M4M from my queue ~

Just some complaints.
My personal suggestions.
Highly recommended.
Unrankable, you have to fix it.

Normal
00:17:020 (1,2) - 这里节奏对新手不好抓，1改成个滑条直接拉到2的头，然后00:17:853 - 放个note？好
01:22:186 (5) - 这里additions不用soft finish？不想用了感觉有点吵
01:22:686 - 加个note，转盘延后1/4吧？好

除了看上去有点乱之外没啥问题。QAQ
Hard
有点看不懂nc的下法，你就是跟着歌词下的吗，每拍中间换nc总觉得比较蛋疼其实是但主体还是改成长白线NC了衔接的地方突出一下没怎么变 Insane就不改了
00:08:520 (4) - 漏clap？ Orz
00:49:520 (1,2,3) - 都是1/4为啥间距不一样啊？http://puu.sh/lpUv3/bc154cb8fa.jpg 这样不是更清楚了？
01:07:353 (2,3) - 这个最好能摆远点，这还是有点近，容易被读成1/2 ok
01:11:519 (1) - remove nc 这里还是想留NC 突出一下变化什么的。。
Insane
00:39:020 (6) - 这里加个nc做提醒？另外我觉得这里应该用drum系列的hitsound更加合适诶 NC了不过感觉hitsound大概还好毕竟normal都是当鼓用的全图1号音效也没用过drum
00:55:186 (5) - stack在00:55:852 (2) - 的尾巴？好
00:55:519 (1) - 讲真，这里用这种弧度的slider是不是更顺flow一点？ http://puu.sh/lpXgn/55efe157df.jpg
01:00:852 (1) - ^
01:18:852 (6,1) - swap nc 加了个NC 没有swap
01:20:852 (4,5) - 这个距离也拉大一点，跳起来更加舒服大了一点点
01:22:186 (3,4) - 同normal，不用finish? 不了

Good luck with the mapset !

图暂时没刷出来回头我再改
thanks for modding m-chan！

@水仙姐姐：视频我先帮你加上了，话说这个视频究竟能不能用啊111111（难道是不能用你才弄下去的？）

Narcissu

1,744 posts

Joined August 2012

Narcissu 2015-11-19T02:28:58+00:00

没视频是我这里没有啊Orz , 我复制了故事版关于视频那行的代码看来并没有用。講道理說，视频不能用……先放著吧233

----------

@ttm : 因为其他地方已经overmap 放了很多三连

@yuki：

长单点换了

那个二连的话……难打和难听我选择难打

easy

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Misato Aki - Glitter.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 50103
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.3

[Metadata]
Title:Glitter
TitleUnicode:Glitter
Artist:Misato Aki
ArtistUnicode:美郷あき
Creator:Misure
Version:Narcissu's Easy
Source:月に寄り添う乙女の作法2
Tags:Garden imoutosan Narcissu Tsuki ni Yorisou Otome no Sahou 2 opening eroge hentai galgame visual novel Navel
BeatmapID:819420
BeatmapSetID:365826

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:0.8
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
Video,0,"Tsuki ni Yorisou Otome no Sahou 2 OP.flv"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
854,333.333333333333,4,2,1,60,1,0
50853,333.333333333333,4,2,1,60,1,1
61186,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
61519,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
72186,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
82852,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
83519,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
84186,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
84852,-100,4,2,1,20,0,0
85519,-100,4,2,1,10,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,0,128
Combo2 : 128,128,255
Combo3 : 255,128,192
Combo4 : 0,128,255

[HitObjects]
88,84,2187,6,0,P|56:160|72:256,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,320,3353,2,0,L|296:316,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,276,4187,1,2,0:0:0:0:
424,336,4520,1,2,0:0:0:0:
504,304,4853,6,0,P|520:232|488:128,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,40,6020,2,0,B|372:68|372:68|216:56,1,200,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,100,7187,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,144,7520,6,0,P|240:188|224:252,1,80,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,284,8187,1,0,1:0:0:0:
236,344,8520,1,8,0:0:0:0:
236,344,8687,2,0,L|376:336,1,120,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,304,9520,2,0,P|448:268|448:220,1,80,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,172,10187,6,0,P|356:100|372:8,1,160,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
260,92,11353,2,0,L|108:100,1,120,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,52,12187,1,0,1:0:0:0:
12,124,12520,1,8,0:0:0:0:
88,172,12853,6,0,P|88:220|68:268,1,80,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
4,300,13520,1,0,1:0:0:0:
84,336,13853,1,8,0:0:0:0:
84,336,14020,2,0,L|224:328,1,120,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,292,14853,2,0,L|380:296,1,80,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,348,15520,6,0,P|408:288|440:176,1,160,4|0,1:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
496,140,16520,1,8,0:0:0:0:
496,140,16687,2,0,L|488:36,1,80,0|4,1:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
216,120,18187,6,0,P|132:112|64:52,2,160,2|0|2,0:0|3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,68,19853,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,108,20187,2,0,L|372:208,1,80,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,212,20853,6,0,L|468:24,2,160,2|0|2,0:0|3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,268,22520,2,0,P|384:312|396:356,2,80,0|0|0,0:0|3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,212,23520,6,0,L|284:224,1,160,2|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
220,180,24520,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,184,24853,2,0,P|92:256|136:340,1,160,2|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
180,260,25853,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,180,26187,6,0,L|224:88,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,76,26853,2,0,L|304:155,1,80,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,128,27520,2,2,B|424:156|424:156|424:192|424:192|464:264|440:364,1,240,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,308,28853,5,2,0:0:0:0:
288,352,29187,1,8,0:0:0:0:
248,276,29520,2,0,P|208:264|156:272,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,300,30020,2,0,P|84:328|0:296,1,120,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,240,30853,2,0,L|64:148,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
4,96,31520,5,2,0:0:0:0:
72,40,31853,1,8,0:0:0:0:
132,104,32187,2,0,P|172:108|240:88,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,76,32687,2,0,L|240:224,1,120,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,248,33520,2,0,P|168:288|184:336,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,280,34187,5,2,0:0:0:0:
336,320,34520,1,8,0:0:0:0:
416,288,34853,2,0,L|424:176,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,184,35353,2,0,P|460:120|428:56,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,40,36187,1,2,0:0:0:0:
284,88,36520,1,8,0:0:0:0:
204,52,36853,6,0,L|64:48,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,108,37687,1,8,0:0:0:0:
104,136,38020,2,0,P|120:196|96:272,1,120,8|8,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,308,38853,2,0,L|-16:316,2,40,8|8|4,0:3|0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
107,251,39520,6,0,P|184:240|256:268,1,120,4|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,320,40353,1,2,0:0:0:0:
280,320,40520,2,0,P|360:336|444:308,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
484,240,41520,1,2,0:0:0:0:
420,180,41853,1,8,0:0:0:0:
484,120,42187,6,0,P|504:64|476:-4,1,120,4|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,64,43020,1,2,0:0:0:0:
420,64,43187,2,0,P|336:64|248:52,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,108,44187,2,0,L|188:172,2,40,8|8|4,0:3|0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
120,60,44853,6,0,P|80:48|28:60,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,136,45520,2,0,P|45:164|30:215,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,212,46187,2,0,B|144:252|144:252|148:380,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,300,47520,6,0,L|440:308,2,120,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,256,48853,2,0,P|220:212|224:152,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,152,49520,1,4,0:2:0:0:
388,124,49853,1,4,0:2:0:0:
472,156,50187,2,0,P|480:200|472:236,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,300,50853,6,0,L|232:308,1,160,4|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,260,51853,1,8,0:0:0:0:
180,260,52019,2,0,P|116:252|44:284,1,120,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
8,204,52853,2,0,L|0:104,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,60,53519,6,2,P|104:84|156:88,1,80,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,52,54186,1,2,0:0:0:0:
292,96,54519,1,8,0:0:0:0:
292,96,54686,2,0,P|364:92|424:48,1,120,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,124,55519,2,0,P|484:164|476:212,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,172,56186,6,0,B|376:216|376:216|388:344,1,160,2|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,304,57186,1,8,0:0:0:0:
300,304,57352,2,0,L|152:296,1,120,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,340,58186,1,2,0:0:0:0:
56,268,58519,1,8,0:0:0:0:
132,224,58852,6,0,B|140:144|140:144|112:84,2,120,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,268,60186,1,2,0:0:0:0:
56,180,60519,1,8,0:0:0:0:
132,224,60852,2,2,P|172:228|224:212,1,80,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,148,61519,6,0,P|344:132|436:156,1,160,2|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,216,62519,1,8,0:0:0:0:
476,216,62686,2,0,L|488:364,1,120,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,332,63519,2,0,L|372:232,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
385,166,64186,6,0,P|352:144|288:136,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
246,195,64853,1,2,0:0:0:0:
290,271,65186,1,8,0:0:0:0:
290,271,65352,2,0,B|248:284|248:284|140:272,1,120,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,312,66186,2,0,L|32:316,2,40,4|8|8,0:3|0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
152,248,66852,6,0,P|156:160|116:72,1,160,4|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,20,68186,2,0,P|288:108|328:196,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,208,69186,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,136,69519,6,0,L|452:72,2,40,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,216,70186,2,0,L|500:320,1,80,8|4,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
468,328,70686,2,0,B|324:304|324:304|240:312,1,200,4|8,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,360,71852,1,8,0:0:0:0:
116,336,72186,6,0,P|96:304|92:244,1,80,4|8,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,200,72853,1,0,1:0:0:0:
80,148,73186,1,8,0:0:0:0:
80,148,73353,2,0,L|72:8,1,120,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,60,74186,2,0,P|200:60|252:40,1,80,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,84,74853,6,0,P|396:72|480:96,1,160,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
448,220,76019,2,0,L|296:212,1,120,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,160,76853,1,0,1:0:0:0:
212,232,77186,1,8,0:0:0:0:
156,164,77519,6,0,P|112:156|64:176,1,80,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,244,78186,1,0,1:0:0:0:
64,312,78519,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,312,78686,2,0,P|120:332|196:288,1,120,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,232,79519,2,0,L|308:236,1,80,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,304,80186,6,0,P|320:248|336:144,1,160,4|8,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,104,81186,1,8,0:0:0:0:
404,104,81352,2,0,P|352:68|284:76,1,120,4|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,112,82186,2,0,L|164:104,1,40,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,120,82686,5,2,1:2:0:0:
256,192,82852,12,0,85519,0:0:0:0:

Karen

2,860 posts

Joined August 2013

Karen 2015-11-19T13:26:45+00:00

IRCCCCCCCCCCCCCC

2015-11-19 20:48 Karen: 好啊np我下
2015-11-19 20:48 Misure: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/808360 Misato Aki - Glitter [Hard]]
2015-11-19 20:55 Karen: 01:11:519 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - 这东西好难吧
2015-11-19 20:56 Karen: 你的in
2015-11-19 20:56 Karen: 要么渐变一下弄个缓冲，突然隔开有点坑
2015-11-19 20:57 Misure: 额 应该怎么做QAQ
2015-11-19 20:57 Misure: 直接贴上？
2015-11-19 20:58 Karen: http://puu.sh/lr4FA/270d41f53a.jpg
2015-11-19 20:58 Karen: 这种感觉
2015-11-19 20:58 Karen: 爽
2015-11-19 21:01 Misure: 这样你觉得怎么样..
2015-11-19 21:01 Misure: http://puu.sh/lr4Ni/7e406150ed.jpg
2015-11-19 21:01 Karen: 可以啊
2015-11-19 21:02 Karen: 没啥问题感觉找摸找bn好了
2015-11-19 21:04 Karen: 00:58:852 (1,2) -  对了这个一般用在1/2间距上
2015-11-19 21:04 Karen: 3/4滑条后面跟这个有些不好
2015-11-19 21:11 Misure: 挪了半天感觉不怎么好改了 跌起来感觉效果也还行..
2015-11-19 21:12 Karen: 行
2015-11-19 21:12 Karen: 没啥问题
2015-11-19 21:12 Misure: 嗯..
2015-11-19 21:24 Misure: 啊人格至少post个irc mod啊;w;
2015-11-19 21:24 Karen: 就这也可以混kd吗
2015-11-19 21:24 Karen: 我脸皮好厚

Garden

Nomination Assessment Team

1,343 posts

Joined June 2013

Garden 2015-11-19T14:59:33+00:00

抱歉..我笔记本有点问题送修了，最近眼睛也有点毛病估计是时候a一阵子了，如果急的话可以考虑替我改。

Misure

951 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

Misure 2015-11-19T15:24:05+00:00

Garden wrote:
抱歉..我笔记本有点问题送修了，最近眼睛也有点毛病估计是时候a一阵子了，如果急的话可以考虑替我改。

不急不急身体重要你注意休息

Garden

Nomination Assessment Team

1,343 posts

Joined June 2013

Garden 2015-11-21T07:32:20+00:00

Minakami Yuki wrote:
Garden's Insane
00:03:020 (4,1) - 这里竟然不跳，不高兴改了一下
00:06:853 (4) - 衷心建议把这个移到另一个地方去，对后面的连打增大了不少迷惑性好
00:04:020 (3,5) - 这是故意不stack？但这不stack也没啥意义啊我太粗心了…
00:16:187 (5,6,7,8) - 我倒觉得你这里不如间距逐渐拉大过渡到慢的一段，我感觉稍减小比较好
00:28:353 (1,2) - ctrl+g？这样不卡手吗？反正我初见打的是有点不顺。确实，改了

Thx!

SPOILER

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Misato Aki - Glitter.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 50103
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.7
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.3

[Metadata]
Title:Glitter
TitleUnicode:Glitter
Artist:Misato Aki
ArtistUnicode:美郷あき
Creator:Misure
Version:Garden's Insane
Source:月に寄り添う乙女の作法2
Tags:Garden imoutosan Narcissu Tsuki ni Yorisou Otome no Sahou 2 opening eroge hentai galgame visual novel Navel
BeatmapID:808359
BeatmapSetID:365826

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:8.8
SliderMultiplier:1.7
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
Video,0,"Tsuki ni Yorisou Otome no Sahou 2 OP.flv"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
854,333.333333333333,4,2,1,50,1,0
2187,-125,4,2,1,50,0,0
3020,-111.111111111111,4,2,1,50,0,0
5687,-111.111111111111,4,2,1,50,0,0
5853,-111.111111111111,4,2,1,50,0,0
6020,-111.111111111111,4,2,1,50,0,0
6520,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
6853,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
7187,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
7353,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
7520,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
18187,-100,4,2,7,30,0,0
18520,-142.857142857143,4,2,2,50,0,0
23520,-142.857142857143,4,2,7,30,0,0
23853,-142.857142857143,4,2,2,50,0,0
27353,-200,4,2,2,50,0,0
27853,-200,4,2,2,50,0,0
28187,-200,4,2,1,50,0,0
28853,-111.111111111111,4,2,1,60,0,0
39520,-111.111111111111,4,2,1,60,0,0
44853,-125,4,2,1,60,0,0
47520,-111.111111111111,6,2,1,60,0,0
49520,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,60,0,0
49853,-111.111111111111,4,2,1,60,0,0
50187,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
50520,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
50853,333.333333333333,4,2,1,70,1,1
60852,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
61186,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
61352,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
61519,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
66852,-125,4,2,1,70,0,1
70686,-125,4,2,1,70,0,1
71019,-125,4,2,1,70,0,1
71352,-125,4,2,1,70,0,1
71519,-125,4,2,1,70,0,1
71686,-125,4,2,1,70,0,1
71852,-125,4,2,1,70,0,1
72019,-125,4,2,1,70,0,1
72186,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
82186,-100,4,2,2,55,0,0
82686,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
82852,-100,4,2,1,45,0,0
84186,-100,4,2,1,35,0,0
85519,-100,4,2,1,25,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,0,128
Combo2 : 128,128,255
Combo3 : 255,128,192
Combo4 : 0,128,255

[HitObjects]
140,32,2187,6,0,P|116:68|116:108,1,68,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,204,2520,2,0,P|228:152|204:120,1,68,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,276,2853,1,8,0:0:0:0:
216,340,3020,2,0,P|256:360|304:360,1,76.4999976654053,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
473,257,3353,6,0,P|451:328|384:360,1,152.999995330811,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,264,3853,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,264,4020,1,0,1:0:0:0:
320,168,4187,2,0,P|328:128|348:96,1,76.4999976654053,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,264,4520,2,0,P|342:294|292:300,1,76.4999976654053
216,272,4853,5,4,1:2:0:0:
212,100,5020,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,188,5187,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,188,5353,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,100,5520,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,272,5687,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,100,5853,1,8,0:0:0:0:
126,206,6020,6,0,P|102:166|102:90,1,114.749996498108,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
99,99,6353,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,264,6520,2,0,P|152:296|100:292,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,264,6853,1,8,0:0:0:0:
212,168,7020,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,140,7103,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,120,7187,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,104,7270,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,96,7353,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,92,7437,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,96,7520,6,0,P|419:74|461:90,1,85,4|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,227,7853,2,0,P|216:179|208:135,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,240,8187,2,0,P|396:309|362:337,1,85,8|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
252,364,8520,1,0,1:0:0:0:
268,227,8686,1,0,1:0:0:0:
140,312,8853,5,0,0:0:0:0:
116,148,9020,1,0,1:0:0:0:
268,227,9187,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,224,9353,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,136,9520,2,0,P|252:80|324:60,1,127.5
320,72,9853,2,0,P|347:122|378:137,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,156,10187,5,0,1:0:0:0:
424,44,10353,1,0,0:0:0:0:
488,156,10520,2,0,P|468:208|440:232,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
370,135,10853,1,0,1:0:0:0:
264,152,11020,1,0,1:0:0:0:
268,48,11187,2,0,P|220:56|168:104,1,85,8|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
168,104,11437,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,104,11520,6,0,L|84:100,1,85,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
232,216,11853,1,8,0:0:0:0:
232,216,12020,2,0,B|184:200|96:248|44:196,1,170,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
116,108,12520,1,8,0:0:0:0:
228,100,12687,1,0,1:0:0:0:
304,192,12853,6,0,P|304:240|280:276,1,85,4|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,340,13187,2,0,P|160:292|184:256,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,124,13520,1,0,1:0:0:0:
304,192,13687,1,0,1:0:0:0:
416,80,13853,1,8,0:0:0:0:
312,68,14020,2,0,P|332:152|436:176,1,170,4|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
312,68,14520,6,0,P|256:68|216:76,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,156,14853,1,0,0:0:0:0:
227,73,15020,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,240,15187,1,8,0:0:0:0:
312,160,15353,2,0,L|348:132,1,42.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,96,15520,6,0,P|452:160|428:196,1,85,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,248,15853,1,8,0:0:0:0:
472,304,16020,1,0,1:0:0:0:
448,332,16103,1,0,1:0:0:0:
416,352,16187,1,0,1:0:0:0:
316,336,16353,1,0,1:0:0:0:
232,380,16520,1,8,0:0:0:0:
148,364,16687,1,0,1:0:0:0:
148,364,17020,5,0,1:0:0:0:
88,232,17687,5,0,1:0:0:0:
144,368,17853,1,0,1:0:0:0:
88,232,18187,5,2,0:0:0:0:
88,232,18520,2,0,P|72:276|48:308,1,59.4999981842042,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,156,18853,2,0,P|64:100|116:64,1,118.999996368408,0|0,1:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
168,176,19353,2,0,B|192:228|168:280|168:280|192:272,1,118.999996368408,0|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
304,312,19853,1,0,3:0:0:0:
304,312,20020,6,0,P|268:360|196:364,1,118.999996368408
304,312,20520,2,0,L|384:296,1,59.4999981842042,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,244,20853,2,0,P|476:308|444:376,1,118.999996368408,0|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
460,244,21353,2,0,P|440:180|456:124,1,118.999996368408,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,124,21853,2,0,P|324:144|288:148,1,59.4999981842042,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
306,147,22353,5,0,0:0:0:0:
240,116,22520,1,0,3:0:0:0:
163,117,22687,1,0,0:0:0:0:
44,56,22853,1,0,1:0:0:0:
96,159,23020,1,0,0:0:0:0:
163,117,23187,1,0,3:0:0:0:
240,116,23353,1,0,0:0:0:0:
318,27,23520,5,2,0:0:0:0:
318,27,23853,2,0,P|362:35|402:27,1,59.4999981842042,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
238,67,24187,2,0,P|234:127|200:200,1,118.999996368408,0|0,1:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
150,67,24687,2,0,P|94:87|24:76,2,118.999996368408,0|0|0,0:0|3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
35,80,25520,6,0,L|0:155,1,59.4999981842042,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,176,25853,2,0,L|84:248,1,59.4999981842042,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,232,26187,2,0,P|200:296|240:344,1,118.999996368408,0|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
372,344,26687,2,0,P|356:280|316:232,1,118.999996368408
416,192,27187,1,0,3:0:0:0:
424,200,27353,6,0,B|459:224|492:228|492:228|520:160|460:92,1,212.5,2|0,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
363,35,28353,5,0,1:0:0:0:
424,200,28520,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,221,28853,5,4,0:0:0:0:
204,221,29187,2,0,P|146:253|118:252,1,76.4999976654053,8|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
287,266,29520,2,0,P|337:242|381:239,1,76.4999976654053,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
465,264,29853,1,8,0:0:0:0:
385,146,30020,2,0,B|349:100|381:43|381:43|334:77,1,152.999995330811,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
263,170,30520,1,8,0:0:0:0:
467,98,30687,2,0,P|471:193|402:244,1,152.999995330811,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
317,262,31187,2,0,P|276:249|226:250,1,76.4999976654053,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,232,31520,6,0,B|84:240|60:268|60:268|88:300|136:304,1,152.999995330811
243,281,32020,2,0,P|277:267|339:263,1,76.4999976654053,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,296,32353,2,0,P|434:310|388:316,1,76.4999976654053,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,261,32687,1,0,1:0:0:0:
410,136,32853,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,128,33020,1,0,1:0:0:0:
396,62,33187,2,0,P|412:110|398:162,1,76.4999976654053,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
297,7,33520,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,128,33687,1,0,1:0:0:0:
176,36,33853,1,8,0:0:0:0:
260,128,34020,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,12,34187,5,0,1:0:0:0:
458,222,34520,2,0,P|493:269|529:279,1,76.4999976654053,8|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
359,240,34853,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,152,35020,1,0,0:0:0:0:
174,290,35187,1,8,0:0:0:0:
264,309,35353,2,0,P|251:231|174:197,1,152.999995330811,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
88,325,35853,1,8,0:0:0:0:
92,193,36020,2,0,B|113:150|144:139|144:139|180:159|193:204,1,152.999995330811,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
264,309,36520,2,0,P|300:276|342:262,1,76.4999976654053,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
447,111,36853,6,0,P|455:173|435:264,1,152.999995330811,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,324,37353,1,0,1:0:0:0:
448,364,37520,1,0,0:0:0:0:
436,260,37687,2,0,P|394:225|345:221,1,76.4999976654053,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,211,38020,1,0,1:0:0:0:
187,114,38187,6,0,P|166:45|176:20,1,76.4999976654053,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
286,157,38520,2,0,P|236:209|210:213,1,76.4999976654053,8|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
271,57,38853,2,0,P|341:73|357:94,1,76.4999976654053,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
427,206,39187,1,0,1:0:0:0:
441,183,39270,1,0,0:0:0:0:
447,157,39353,1,0,1:0:0:0:
450,130,39437,1,0,0:0:0:0:
443,104,39520,6,0,P|448:26|522:8,1,152.999995330811,4|0,0:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
443,104,40020,2,0,P|372:78|280:88,1,152.999995330811,8|8,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
188,188,40520,2,0,P|156:148|156:112,1,76.4999976654053,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,168,40853,1,0,1:0:0:0:
188,188,41020,1,0,1:0:0:0:
124,256,41187,2,0,L|100:340,1,76.4999976654053,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,272,41520,1,0,1:0:0:0:
188,188,41687,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,100,41853,2,0,L|288:48,1,76.4999976654053,0|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,56,42187,6,0,B|60:104|79:178|79:178|104:160,1,152.999995330811,4|0,1:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
216,100,42687,2,0,B|248:80|248:80|320:104|384:48,1,152.999995330811,8|8,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
424,136,43187,2,0,B|376:184|304:184|304:184|336:208,1,152.999995330811,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
440,248,43687,1,0,1:0:0:0:
440,248,43853,2,0,P|468:288|472:324,1,76.4999976654053,8|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,280,44187,1,8,1:2:0:0:
308,300,44353,1,0,1:0:0:0:
304,320,44520,2,0,P|236:312|208:316,1,76.4999976654053,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,332,44853,6,0,P|76:296|76:220,1,136,4|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,252,45353,1,0,1:0:0:0:
168,252,45520,2,0,P|238:236|298:184,1,136,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
276,48,46020,1,8,1:2:0:0:
276,48,46187,6,0,P|300:104|316:116,1,68,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,152,46520,1,0,1:0:0:0:
468,152,46687,1,0,0:0:0:0:
508,348,46853,2,0,P|468:328|452:308,1,68,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,228,47187,1,0,1:0:0:0:
468,152,47353,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,100,47520,6,0,L|288:188,1,76.4999976654053,4|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,232,47853,1,0,1:0:0:0:
289,175,48020,2,0,P|359:149|427:178,1,152.999995330811
356,116,48520,2,0,P|352:80|356:40,1,76.4999976654053,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,206,48853,2,0,P|460:240|454:281,1,76.4999976654053,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
355,247,49187,1,0,1:0:0:0:
452,84,49353,1,0,0:0:0:0:
340,132,49520,6,0,P|293:142|246:137,1,95.6250036478044,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,172,49853,6,0,P|224:220|164:232,1,114.749996498108,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
135,222,50187,6,0,B|104:211|76:227|76:227|105:141|91:121,1,170
113,93,50853,6,0,P|125:145|117:189,1,85,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,332,51186,2,0,P|36:280|44:236,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
121,175,51519,2,0,B|168:184|244:144|272:184,1,127.5,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,176,51853,1,8,0:0:0:0:
360,28,52019,1,0,1:0:0:0:
492,136,52186,2,0,L|464:48,1,85,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
404,204,52519,2,0,L|429:284,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,352,52853,5,0,0:0:0:0:
172,284,53019,1,0,0:0:0:0:
316,160,53186,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,256,53353,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,184,53519,2,0,P|176:132|184:52,1,127.5,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,80,53853,2,0,P|136:80|108:60,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,48,54186,6,0,L|12:232,1,170,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,280,54686,2,0,B|201:245|176:199|176:199|116:200|97:254,1,170,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
207,361,55186,2,0,P|247:372|288:360,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,268,55519,6,0,P|400:316|400:360,1,85,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
248,256,55852,2,0,P|256:216|284:184,1,85,8|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
396,180,56186,2,0,B|468:152|508:156|508:156|464:148|432:112,1,170,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,8,56686,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,96,56852,6,0,B|304:88|284:24|284:24|232:40|184:24,1,170,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,76,57352,2,0,P|142:117|134:159,1,85,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,204,57686,1,0,1:0:0:0:
48,296,57852,2,0,P|164:284|220:292,1,170,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,360,58352,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,260,58519,2,0,P|332:212|300:180,1,85,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,152,58852,5,4,1:2:0:0:
240,264,59019,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,80,59186,1,8,0:0:0:0:
428,200,59352,1,12,1:2:0:0:
428,200,59686,5,0,1:0:0:0:
240,264,59852,2,0,P|224:204|236:160,1,85,12|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,300,60186,1,0,1:0:0:0:
168,352,60352,1,0,1:0:0:0:
145,172,60519,2,0,P|189:167|249:203,1,85,8|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,268,60852,6,0,P|32:220|32:168,1,127.5,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,168,61186,2,0,P|36:264|16:308,1,127.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
8,308,61519,6,0,P|48:340|100:344,1,85,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,312,61852,1,8,0:0:0:0:
268,348,62019,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,304,62186,2,0,P|380:248|372:176,1,127.5,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,192,62519,2,0,P|424:184|448:160,1,85,8|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
368,76,62852,5,0,1:0:0:0:
272,136,63019,1,0,1:0:0:0:
220,28,63186,1,8,0:0:0:0:
144,124,63352,1,0,1:0:0:0:
56,44,63519,2,0,P|20:116|40:176,1,127.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,188,63852,2,0,P|84:208|108:252,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,384,64186,6,0,P|4:344|16:288,1,85,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,328,64519,1,8,0:0:0:0:
196,384,64686,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,328,64852,2,0,P|300:248|276:144,1,170,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,92,65352,2,0,P|404:80|460:92,1,85,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,256,65685,1,0,1:0:0:0:
416,256,65852,2,0,P|404:216|415:162,1,85,8|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
508,296,66186,1,0,1:0:0:0:
424,348,66352,1,0,1:0:0:0:
336,316,66519,2,0,P|280:308|240:320,1,85,8|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,344,66852,6,0,P|104:292|120:216,1,136,4|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,220,67352,2,0,L|196:260,1,68,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,84,67852,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,140,68019,1,8,0:0:0:0:
100,140,68186,6,0,P|140:160|172:160,1,68,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,140,68519,1,0,0:0:0:0:
316,84,68686,1,0,1:0:0:0:
365,161,68852,2,0,P|367:199|356:232,1,68,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,288,69186,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,300,69352,1,0,1:0:0:0:
132,248,69519,6,0,P|128:224|136:168,1,68,4|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,180,69769,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,180,69852,1,8,0:0:0:0:
232,40,70019,1,8,0:0:0:0:
232,216,70186,1,8,1:2:0:0:
120,84,70352,1,0,1:0:0:0:
300,128,70519,1,0,1:0:0:0:
300,128,70686,1,4,1:0:0:0:
300,128,71019,5,8,1:2:0:0:
332,224,71186,2,0,P|368:260|400:264,1,68,8|0,1:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
484,216,71519,2,0,L|492:176,3,34,0|0|8|8,1:0|1:0|1:2|1:2,1:0:0:0:
512,144,71852,2,0,L|508:108,3,34,8|8|8|8,1:2|1:2|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,80,72186,6,0,P|472:32|440:8,1,85,4|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,108,72519,2,0,L|368:192,1,85
260,264,72852,1,0,1:0:0:0:
208,80,73019,1,0,1:0:0:0:
284,156,73186,1,8,0:0:0:0:
184,180,73352,2,0,P|116:140|112:44,1,170,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
16,144,73852,6,0,P|12:196|-4:244,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,320,74186,1,0,0:0:0:0:
108,240,74352,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,368,74519,2,0,P|168:340|196:336,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,248,74852,6,0,P|224:188|180:160,1,85,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,300,75186,2,0,P|376:292|408:256,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,144,75519,1,0,1:0:0:0:
328,196,75686,1,0,1:0:0:0:
280,12,75852,1,8,0:0:0:0:
228,128,76019,1,4,1:0:0:0:
228,128,76102,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,128,76186,6,0,P|184:112|168:68,2,85,0|0|8,0:0|1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,104,76686,2,0,P|321:185|248:232,1,170,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
328,104,77186,2,0,P|368:92|416:100,1,85,8|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
512,236,77519,6,0,L|493:147,1,85,4|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,300,77852,2,0,L|453:383,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,272,78186,1,0,1:0:0:0:
512,236,78352,1,0,0:0:0:0:
436,300,78519,1,8,0:0:0:0:
340,272,78686,2,0,P|284:240|172:248,1,170,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
96,300,79186,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,300,79352,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,132,79519,6,0,L|44:220,1,85,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,52,79852,2,0,L|168:136,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
181,244,80186,6,0,P|248:184|340:176,1,170,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,224,80686,1,0,1:0:0:0:
444,252,80769,1,0,1:0:0:0:
424,276,80852,1,0,1:0:0:0:
392,88,81019,1,0,1:0:0:0:
324,173,81186,1,8,1:2:0:0:
228,16,81352,1,0,1:0:0:0:
228,16,81686,5,0,1:0:0:0:
300,88,81852,2,0,P|348:100|392:96,1,85,8|0,1:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
484,60,82186,5,0,3:2:0:0:
484,60,82352,1,0,3:2:0:0:
256,192,82686,5,0,1:0:0:0:
256,192,82852,12,0,85519,0:0:0:0:

Misato Aki - Glitter

Sign In To Proceed

Don't have an account?

Misato Aki - Glitter

imoutosan wrote:

Feb wrote:

imoutosan wrote:

Shad0w1and wrote:

Lily Bread wrote:

DreaM117er wrote:

Doormat wrote:

Feb wrote:

Misure wrote:

imoutosan wrote:

Shad0w1and wrote:

Lily Bread wrote:

Narcissu wrote:

Feb wrote:

Shad0w1and wrote:

MondoKuma wrote:

imouto's Insane

Insane

Narcissu's Insane

Garden's Insane

Wing My Way wrote:

Garden's Insane

Wing My Way wrote:

Insane

Narcissu's Insane

Raose wrote:

Raose wrote:

Raose wrote:

Misure wrote:

Doormat wrote:

Feb wrote:

Shad0w1and wrote:

Narcissu wrote:

Wing My Way wrote:

imouto's Insane

Raose wrote:

TT Mouse wrote:

TT Mouse wrote:

imoutosan wrote:

Narcissu wrote:

TT Mouse wrote:

Minakami Yuki wrote:

Minakami Yuki wrote:

Minakami Yuki wrote:

Garden wrote:

Minakami Yuki wrote:

New reply