Thank you timing checkSieg wrote:
timing check:
offset needs -10, bpm is fine
Thank you timing checkSieg wrote:
timing check:
offset needs -10, bpm is fine
Thank you pkhg :3pkhg wrote:
yo Hi o/
[General][Easy]
- you may want to get a better bg, this one looks like you resized it from one with lower resolution I'll consider it'll consider it[/color]
- uncheck widescreen support on easy, normal and hard fixed
- 01:13:011 (1) - add finish, its the same sound as 01:14:549 - so makes sense to add it fixed
- 01:22:242 (1) - ^
thats for all diffs[Normal]
- 00:13:011 (1,1) - my map got dq'd recently cuz it had 1/2 sliders so better to ask someone experienced if those are ok on this map I see. but kept it
- 00:29:934 (3,4) - fix spacing omg
OD and HP -1 so it makes a better spread also the settings seems too high for this difficulty ok
- 00:29:549 (3) - this doesnt seem to be following something even the easy diff has a better rhythm for this,its better if you do this fixed http://puu.sh/kSQTT/66c84bd4e2.jpg
- 00:36:088 (5,1) - i dont think its a good idea to stack them, you can already see (1) after finishing (5) kinda confusing for this difficulty keep
- 00:46:472 (1) - this isnt a good rhythm choice, try this http://puu.sh/kSRa5/fb2e2c6f27.jpg so the downbeat will be clickable which its good for a proper emphasis while you can keep the nc consistency ncing here 00:46:857 - fixed
- 00:48:203 (4) - same thing about emphasis, this fixes it http://puu.sh/kSRj3/71b9818ff7.jpg - fixed
- 01:03:011 (1,2,3,4) - this is too much considering how the easy is mapped you can use 1/2 sliders instead nope. this part is climax in Normal diff
- 01:26:280 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/kSRXn/d3dc47debb.jpg doing this you'll give a better emphasis to 01:26:857 - ok
[Hard][Insane]
- 01:25:318 (2,3) - what about http://puu.sh/kSScH/2c5789afcf.jpg? Good!
not so much stuff, nice map
- 01:25:703 (3) - you can change it to a 1/2 + circle so this 01:26:088 - will be properly emphasized fixed
gl \w/
Thank you Moeka X3Moeka wrote:
I'm sure you can find a better quality bg...
[Easy]normal seems fine other than NCs... I don't get it
- 00:16:857 (1) - you can make this 1/1 to avoid 1/2 rhythms umm...fixed
- 00:18:780 (3,1) - obviously not a good blanket fixed
I just noticed that NC in the beginning is too short. I don't know if it was on purpose x.x
[Hard][Insane]
- maybe raise AR a little bit? since you have some stacks and pause nope
- 00:09:550 (2,1) - jump too big and sudden? sorry I don't have other good placement
- 01:08:395 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - feels a bit too empty considering this is kiai ok. add some notes
- 00:12:049 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - not the best flow for stream imo.. too awkward to play not changed
- 00:12:915 (6) - I find it better without this circle. it's more natural to play and emphasizes 00:13:011 (1,2) - better imo same
- 00:29:934 (1,2,3,4) - 00:33:011 (3,4,5,1) - I think the 3/4 sliders here are too much in the quiet part of the music I think too
- 00:57:626 (1,2,3) - these seem to be way too far away compared to others fixed
- 01:13:780 (1,2,3) - these too keep
Nice map and interesting flow. I liked it
( ´∀`)人(´∀` )jieusieu wrote:
ikrrui wrote:
osu! need more Suara
Thank you Strategas :3Strategas wrote:
hi, from my queue
[insane]
00:12:434 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - this whole thing is not very even np
00:15:511 (2,3,4) - this isn't even either fixed
00:16:857 (1,2) - I hear 1/8 here not 1/4fixed
00:18:780 (3,4,5) - this isn't even either fixed
00:21:665 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ fixed
do you use slider to stream conversion tool? Yes. use slider to stream conversion tool or Distance
00:36:088 (7) - if you intended blanket, improve it ok
00:40:511 (4,1) - ^ ok
00:48:203 (1,2,3) - uneven ok
well I'll stop checking for those then I see
[hard]
00:44:357 (2,3) - weird flow ok
00:56:665 (2) - improve blanket ok
00:58:203 (2) - ^ ok
[normal]
seems good
[easy]
00:13:011 (1) - risky to have 1/2 in easy keep
00:16:088 (1) - repeat 1/2 sliders even have a higher chance of not passing through qat keep
Good luck!
HalLoWeeN さん modありがとうございました[ HalLoWeeN ] wrote:
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as your req[General]
- no take my star ありがとう~
[Easy]
- 01:01:857 - ここはCircle一つ入れても大丈夫だと思います :3 入れました!
[Normal]
- GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD
[Hard]
- 00:09:550 (2,1) - Distanceがちょっと大きいじゃないかと思いますGA... 頑張ってもらいましょう
[Insane]
- 00:14:549 (4) - 流れが変わったからNC? はい
- 00:16:857 (1) - 1/1で離れていますから、ここもNCを... ok わかった
- 01:05:318 (5) - ここは 01:17:626 (1) - こことおんなじようにNCを追加するのはいかがでしょう 入れる
NIIIICEEEMAPPSEEETT
がんばってください!
Thank you WingmannWingmann wrote:
Hi!
Normal:
00:23:588 (3) - Move to x68 y220 if you want a blanket move to x68,y216
00:52:241 (2) - Seems a little too close to the bottom of the screen in my opinion keep
Easy seems fine.
So does Hard!
Sorry if this was a useless mod, but I really did try to look for things.
Good luck with ranking!!
Thank you SquirrelSquirrel wrote:
hey there!
mod from my queue :3
just making suggestions, feel free to disagree!
General
all fine!
Easy
just some nitpicking from my side here, cause the diff looks pretty good~Normal
- 00:09:934 (2,3,1) - consider smoothening out the movement by curving it differently? http://puu.sh/l3i8u.jpg nope. This idea so interesting. but I priority to follow.
- 00:16:088 (1) - seems weird to only have the first white tick clickable. the red tick has the same sound, but not any effect on gameplay. I prefer circle + slider here I don't like it in Easy
- 00:43:780 (1,2) - movement could be better, imo. how about placing (2) like this instead http://puu.sh/l3ilN.jpg ? you'd have to move the following circle, then, too, but tht's just a really minor adjustment fixed
- 00:48:011 (3,1) - somehow the gap in-between feels weird. the beat's just weak, but I still think it could be mapped. you could just turn (3) into a short slider, the rhythm is still appropiate for an Easy, imo keep it
- 01:15:318 (3) - consider moving this to 239109? better movement good!
- 01:27:242 (1) - it'd be alright to move the spinner to the red tick before. the mini-gap between circle and spinner seems weird cause the vocals don't have any break but continue right after hitting the circle I see
Hard
- 00:17:626 (3) - 1/2 slider + 1/1 slider matches the melody better, imo, because of the beat at 00:17:818 - fixed
- 00:34:165 (1) - the downbeat should be clickable, consider removing the reverse and adding a circle instead
- 00:36:088 (5,1) - the stack is pretty uncommon for Normal difficulty, cause it's even harder to read than stacks below circles.. since stacks just got introduced in this diff, I prefer if they were unstacked. I see. change placement
- 00:56:088 (1,2) - movement is rather awkward, have you tried placing (2) differently? example: http://puu.sh/l3iXD.jpg
- 01:27:242 (1) - same as in Easy ok
Insane
- 00:12:434 (1) - so many reverses in the beginning feel kinda un-intuitive to play, imo.. I prefer a stream here, but you might consider that too hard O: I know but keep it
- 00:14:549 (1) - why ignore the beat on the red tick here? a 1/2 reverse-slider works nicely here, imo~ fixe
- 00:15:318 (2) - similar here, why ignore the beats on the red ticks? two 1/2 sliders and a circle on the blue tick match better, imo fixe
nothing much to say, looks pretty good. :3
- 00:26:472 (2,3) - I miss something on the red tick in-between.. there's clearly a piano sound so consider adding a circle or turning (2) into a 1/2 slider? add note
- 00:37:434 - you've been following the vocals before with some circles (like 00:28:203 (1) - for example), so I expected another circle here. add one? nope
- 01:02:626 (3) - how about turning this into a 1/4 repeat-slider? cause there are sounds on the following blue and red ticks nope
- 01:15:126 - there's a beat here and pretty strong vocals so why isn't this mapped? :c I think you could add a circl here nope
- 01:20:703 (1) - consider ctrl+g for better flow. you can also ctrl+g 01:21:472 (2) - to keep the flow further going~ nope. keep blanket
you'd just have to move 01:22:049 (3) - then, but that plays slightly better, imo
hope I could help a little.. and good luck with the set!!
//squee
がんばります。KloydさんmodありがとうございましたKloyd wrote:
- Insane
- 00:12:915 (6,1) - ここだけspacing違ってて違和感感じた わざとだったけど直した
- 00:16:857 (3,4,5) - 6分の1に聞こえるがわざとならこれで良いかも 1/6ならスライダーにします。1/8だと思ってた・・・
- 00:57:434 - ドラムはっきり聞こえてサークル一個入れてもいいんじゃないかなと 追加した
- 01:02:049 (4,1) - は01:02:145 - ここがドラムまた聞こえてて3連打ジャンプとかはどうかなと思いました 確かに音は聞こえるけど今の流れ気にっているので無視します
- 01:04:549 (3,4) - 何か形一緒にしてもいいかも あえてそのままで
- 01:24:934 (1,2) - swap NC 直した
- Hard
- 00:12:434 (1,1,2) - spacing若干減らした方がいいかも 気持ち減らした
- 00:23:780 (1) - 形の提案http://puu.sh/l9ui2/cd944f13ad.jpg (・∀・)イイネ!!
- 00:29:549 (3,4) - 外しても良いとhttp://puu.sh/l9urc/630d30c574.jpg 他のも同じく このぐらい極端なほうが好きなのでそのままで
- 00:57:434 - insaneと同じ 追加した
- Normal
- 00:08:395 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - いくらパターンだとしてもNormalの割りにリズム細かくspacingもきつい環する スペーシング違うのはDQされそうだから直した。音を減らすつもりはないです
くらいかな
がんばです
Thank you BetaStar san :3BetaStar wrote:
Easy
- Add slider at 00:47:242 to 00:47:626 and delete the circle (00:47:626 (4) - ) fixed
- 01:00:703 (3) - At the end of slider, vocal says another word. You can try this: nope because I think I can vocal follow now. 00:59:165 (1,2,3,4) - "na-ku-shi-ta-ku-ha-na-i" finished as word.
Before: http://puu.sh/lkM4l/2dfc42e648.jpg
After: http://puu.sh/lkM8q/892d4db9e8.jpg
I left (01:02:626) blank, because there is not much going on with the music.- 01:06:857 (1) - Cut slider in half (length) and put circle at (01:07:626) fixed
- Feels empty here (01:14:934), you can try removing that reverse and placing identical length (or two circles) slider after it. http://puu.sh/lkLQV/5e1a15b1fd.jpg
- 01:24:933 (4,1) - Blanket bothered me a bit because every other blanket was nice. ok
- 01:25:318 (1) - No reverse. / AND / put circle at (01:26:088) / AND / remove 01:26:472 (2) - .. Simple is nicer with easy yay:D
Normal
I'm not vocal follow Normal diff. I put emphasis easily rhythm.
Sorry. I do not almost fix your mod.
- 00:28:395 (2) - Remove reverse, one circle at (00:28:972) and one slider at (00:28:972) http://puu.sh/lkMH4/d2f8dc0091.jpg
- 00:38:395 (3) - One 1/4 slider for "shi", one circle "ii" and one more circle "ke" http://puu.sh/lkMyB/ded9bcbca0.jpg
- 00:40:318 (7) - Remove slider, put circle at (00:40:511) http://puu.sh/lkMB7/371cdd5c3d.jpg
- Put circle here (00:43:588). There is vocal saying "mi."
- 00:46:472 (5) - Half this slider and put reverse. "tsu-na-ga"
- 00:54:165 (3) - Remove / AND / Put slider at (00:53:972) and end slider at (00:54:165) and put reverse. http://puu.sh/lkN2q/069d5fe057.jpg
- 00:50:895 (3) - ^ maybe you can do it here too if you want to be more consistent. (Although the vocal on this particular part is weaker than previous one)
- 01:00:318 (3) - Remove / Change this to slider: 00:59:934 (2) - / (Fits vocal better) http://puu.sh/lkNbY/b4faa31245.jpg
- 01:01:472 (1) - Circle / AND / 01:01:857 (6) - move to (01:01:665) slider with reverse. / AND / 01:02:242 (7) - No reverse. / AND / Circle at (01:02:626) and another circle at (01:02:818) / http://puu.sh/lkNsZ/963410bf17.jpg (This goes along with next objects (01:03:011 (1,2,3,1) - ) and seems better with music instruments in the music.
- 01:06:857 (1) - At reverse part of slider, it doesn't emphasize enough on "ko-to." Try CTRL + G, and remove reverse. Place circle at (01:07:434) and (01:07:626) stack these two. http://puu.sh/lkNSH/bc502d28cf.jpg
- 01:17:626 (3,4) - I think remove both of these and one long would be better. Nothing in the music for two 1/4s :c my bad fixed
Hard
- 00:25:318 (1) - Would be better if you map the things that is ignored by slider. Half the slider / AND /circle at (00:25:895) / AND / 1/4 slider at (00:26:088) / AND / circle at (00:26:665) http://puu.sh/lkOLt/3c7a250b66.jpg I don't want muny sound this part. so I take sound beginning and end of the words. so no fixed
- 00:28:395 (2) - Same with above. Half the slider / AND / Circle at (00:28:972) / AND / 1/4 slider at (00:29:165) http://puu.sh/lkOWF/7b624e375d.jpg color=#0000FF]same[/color]
- 00:31:472 (1) - ^ Half the slider -> circle -> slider http://puu.sh/lkP1H/3e48463e55.jpg same
- 00:21:857 (4) - Bend this looks seamless with previous slider 00:21:472 (3) - Because you did 00:23:011 (3,4) - straight two here, why not bend both there ;D 00:21:857 (4) - band this slider
- 00:46:472 (1,2,3) - 00:46:472 (1) - Half this slider / AND / 00:47:049 (2) - move to (00:46:857) not changed
- 01:15:318 (1) - Stack under 01:14:934 (3) - this diff low AR. Stack under is bad imo
- 01:04:549 (3,4) - The blanket bother a little XD because other sliders like 01:07:626 (3,4) - has nice blanket ok
- Start last spinner at (01:26:953)
Insane
- 01:08:203 (7) - Weird flow http://puu.sh/lkPr6/eeb48351bb.jpg fixed good folw!
- 01:15:703 (3) - At (x:132, y:228) / AND / 01:15:895 (4) - (x:288, y:316) keep
Suggestions:- 00:24:549 (1) - Ctrl + G keep
- 00:24:934 (3) - Ctrl + G keep
rui's Insane is too good >v< I can't mod anything on this insane
Nice Map~
さててさんありがとうございましたSatellite wrote:
Fuantei na Mod here
[General][Easy]
- PreviewTime: 62630 is not snapped please changed 62626 直しました
- 00:21:472 - all diff forgot soft - finish please add. 足しました
[Normal]
- fine to me
[Hard]
- 00:13:972 (1) - remove Nc 直しました
- 00:32:626 (2) - 歌詞に合わせて 00:29:549 (3) - こことパターンを統一したほうが好ましいです 直した~
- 00:43:588 - add note 歌詞にあわせていれたほうがいいです 直した~
- 00:46:472 (1) - 音にあってないです。以下の音取りを試してみてください 直した~
- 01:06:857 (1,2,3,4) - 音にあってないです。以下の音取りを試してみてください 提案どおりではないですが直しました
- 01:16:665 - 01:18:972 - 01:22:049 - add note 00:43:588 - ここと同様の理由で 直した~
- 01:26:280 (1) - 長いスライダーからの単発はリズムがとりづらいです。手前のスライダーの終点に強い音が入っているため、それを引き立てる意味合いも兼ねてremove note 直した~
[Insane]
- Hp drain changed 5.5. 7.5は高いです 直した~
- 00:12:434 (1,1) - ジャンプが大きいです。00:12:242 (3) - ここにスタックさせるのはどうですか? 距離を縮めました
- 00:31:280 (6) - add whistle 付け忘れです 直した~
- 00:33:011 (1) - 隠れすぎなので違ったパターンに変更してください。提案もおいておきます! 提案にのります
- 00:39:165 (6) - パターンならここでNcが入るはず? 直した~
- 00:46:472 (1) - Normalと同様に音にあってないです。 直した~
- 00:59:934 (3) - ここは3/4使うと面白いかも、ここみたいに。00:15:318 (2,3) - 直した~
- 01:02:242 (1,2) - ここは1/2 sliderに変えてあげたら優しいruiさん優しい! やさしいから直した
- 01:19:742 (2,3) - 流れが悪いかも、このままの状態だったら2をCtrl+Gしたほうがよくなると思う
- 01:25:318 (2,3) - ここだけはしっかり音に合わせたほうがいいかも 直した~
- 01:26:280 (1,2,3,4) - 重なってて見づらい印象がありました、違ったパターンが好ましいです。 01:26:857 (4) - は移動した
call me back ~
- 00:41:280 (2,3) - ちょっと流れ悪いかも2をx326 y198あたりにもってくるといいかも 少し違うけど修正しました
- 01:02:818 - 歌詞がある以上ここに音がないのは結構違和感があります。前後のパターンを変えて追加したほうが好ましいです そのままで
- 01:15:703 (3,4) - 3から4への流れがあまりよくないと思います、4の位置を画像の位置あたりにあると叩きやすくなるかも 直した~
- 01:25:703 (2) - ここは3/4じゃないよ!1/2だよ!直した~
修正しました。Satellite wrote:
Recheck
[Metadata]
- Romanised title must be changed " Fuantei na Kamisama "
- Title must be changed " 不安定な神様 "
http://fixrecords.com/kicm3305/?artist=suara
alacatさんmodありがとう~alacat wrote:
やっほーるいさん
[General][Easy]
- タグに"Tv Size"を入れましょう 入れました
[Hard]
- 00:25:318 - Easyなので音量40%くらい欲しいです。
[Insane]
- 00:40:318 (2) - NormalやInsaneでは付いていたので、終点にfinishを追加? 追加しました
- 01:24:934 (1) - この辺01:22:242 (1,2,3) - を見るとNew combo01:25:318 (2) - ここからだと思います。直しました
- 00:55:703 (3) - ここのジャンプが少し大きいと感じました。次の00:56:088 (1) - ここの音がでかいので(2,3)の間隔を減らし、(3,1)でジャンプさせるとより音に合っていると思います。 まさにその通りなので配置を変えました
以上です 修正終わったら呼んでください~
- 00:16:857 (3) - ここの音は1/6ではなく1/8だと思います。
http://puu.sh/lMtuX/e8fe808a3a.png 1/6ぽい1/8らしいですね。修正ついでにやりやすくする為に00:17:145 (5) - の音もとることにしました