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rui
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015年12月7日 at 22:44:26

Artist: Suara
Title: Fuantei na Kamisama
Source: うたわれるもの 偽りの仮面
Tags: utawarerumono itsuwari no kamen opening aquaplus Tv Size
BPM: 156
Filesize: 19700kb
Play Time: 01:29
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.51 stars, 99 notes)
  2. Hard (3.17 stars, 194 notes)
  3. Insane (4.08 stars, 282 notes)
  4. Normal (2.22 stars, 140 notes)
Download: Suara - Fuantei na Kamisama
Download: Suara - Fuantei na Kamisama (no video)
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osu! need more Suara
Sieg
timing check:

offset needs -10, bpm is fine
Topic Starter
rui

Sieg wrote:

timing check:

offset needs -10, bpm is fine
Thank you timing check
pkhg
yo

[General]
  1. you may want to get a better bg, this one looks like you resized it from one with lower resolution
  2. uncheck widescreen support on easy, normal and hard
  3. 01:13:011 (1) - add finish, its the same sound as 01:14:549 - so makes sense to add it
  4. 01:22:242 (1) - ^
    thats for all diffs
[Easy]
  1. 00:13:011 (1,1) - my map got dq'd recently cuz it had 1/2 sliders so better to ask someone experienced if those are ok on this map
  2. 00:29:934 (3,4) - fix spacing
[Normal]

  • OD and HP -1 so it makes a better spread also the settings seems too high for this difficulty
  1. 00:29:549 (3) - this doesnt seem to be following something even the easy diff has a better rhythm for this,its better if you do this http://puu.sh/kSQTT/66c84bd4e2.jpg
  2. 00:36:088 (5,1) - i dont think its a good idea to stack them, you can already see (1) after finishing (5) kinda confusing for this difficulty
  3. 00:46:472 (1) - this isnt a good rhythm choice, try this http://puu.sh/kSRa5/fb2e2c6f27.jpg so the downbeat will be clickable which its good for a proper emphasis while you can keep the nc consistency ncing here 00:46:857 -
  4. 00:48:203 (4) - same thing about emphasis, this fixes it http://puu.sh/kSRj3/71b9818ff7.jpg
  5. 01:03:011 (1,2,3,4) - this is too much considering how the easy is mapped you can use 1/2 sliders instead
  6. 01:26:280 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/kSRXn/d3dc47debb.jpg doing this you'll give a better emphasis to 01:26:857 -

[Hard]
  1. 01:25:318 (2,3) - what about http://puu.sh/kSScH/2c5789afcf.jpg?
[Insane]
  1. 01:25:703 (3) - you can change it to a 1/2 + circle so this 01:26:088 - will be properly emphasized
not so much stuff, nice map

gl \w/
Topic Starter
rui

pkhg wrote:

yo Hi o/

[General]
  1. you may want to get a better bg, this one looks like you resized it from one with lower resolution I'll consider it'll consider it[/color]
  2. uncheck widescreen support on easy, normal and hard fixed
  3. 01:13:011 (1) - add finish, its the same sound as 01:14:549 - so makes sense to add it fixed
  4. 01:22:242 (1) - ^
    thats for all diffs
[Easy]
  1. 00:13:011 (1,1) - my map got dq'd recently cuz it had 1/2 sliders so better to ask someone experienced if those are ok on this map I see. but kept it
  2. 00:29:934 (3,4) - fix spacing omg
[Normal]

  • OD and HP -1 so it makes a better spread also the settings seems too high for this difficulty ok
  1. 00:29:549 (3) - this doesnt seem to be following something even the easy diff has a better rhythm for this,its better if you do this fixed http://puu.sh/kSQTT/66c84bd4e2.jpg
  2. 00:36:088 (5,1) - i dont think its a good idea to stack them, you can already see (1) after finishing (5) kinda confusing for this difficulty keep
  3. 00:46:472 (1) - this isnt a good rhythm choice, try this http://puu.sh/kSRa5/fb2e2c6f27.jpg so the downbeat will be clickable which its good for a proper emphasis while you can keep the nc consistency ncing here 00:46:857 - fixed
  4. 00:48:203 (4) - same thing about emphasis, this fixes it http://puu.sh/kSRj3/71b9818ff7.jpg - fixed
  5. 01:03:011 (1,2,3,4) - this is too much considering how the easy is mapped you can use 1/2 sliders instead nope. this part is climax in Normal diff
  6. 01:26:280 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/kSRXn/d3dc47debb.jpg doing this you'll give a better emphasis to 01:26:857 - ok

[Hard]
  1. 01:25:318 (2,3) - what about http://puu.sh/kSScH/2c5789afcf.jpg? Good!
[Insane]
  1. 01:25:703 (3) - you can change it to a 1/2 + circle so this 01:26:088 - will be properly emphasized fixed
not so much stuff, nice map :)

gl \w/
Thank you pkhg :3
jieusieu

rui wrote:

osu! need more Suara
ikr
Ozato Fumika
I'm sure you can find a better quality bg...

[Easy]
  1. 00:16:857 (1) - you can make this 1/1 to avoid 1/2 rhythms
  2. 00:18:780 (3,1) - obviously not a good blanket
    I just noticed that NC in the beginning is too short. I don't know if it was on purpose x.x
normal seems fine other than NCs... I don't get it
[Hard]
  1. maybe raise AR a little bit? since you have some stacks and pause
  2. 00:09:550 (2,1) - jump too big and sudden?
  3. 01:08:395 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - feels a bit too empty considering this is kiai
[Insane]
  1. 00:12:049 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - not the best flow for stream imo.. too awkward to play
  2. 00:12:915 (6) - I find it better without this circle. it's more natural to play and emphasizes 00:13:011 (1,2) - better imo
  3. 00:29:934 (1,2,3,4) - 00:33:011 (3,4,5,1) - I think the 3/4 sliders here are too much in the quiet part of the music
  4. 00:57:626 (1,2,3) - these seem to be way too far away compared to others
  5. 01:13:780 (1,2,3) - these too

Nice map and interesting flow. I liked it
Topic Starter
rui

Moeka wrote:

I'm sure you can find a better quality bg...

[Easy]
  1. 00:16:857 (1) - you can make this 1/1 to avoid 1/2 rhythms umm...fixed
  2. 00:18:780 (3,1) - obviously not a good blanket fixed
    I just noticed that NC in the beginning is too short. I don't know if it was on purpose x.x
normal seems fine other than NCs... I don't get it
[Hard]
  1. maybe raise AR a little bit? since you have some stacks and pause nope
  2. 00:09:550 (2,1) - jump too big and sudden? sorry I don't have other good placement
  3. 01:08:395 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - feels a bit too empty considering this is kiai ok. add some notes
[Insane]
  1. 00:12:049 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - not the best flow for stream imo.. too awkward to play not changed
  2. 00:12:915 (6) - I find it better without this circle. it's more natural to play and emphasizes 00:13:011 (1,2) - better imo same
  3. 00:29:934 (1,2,3,4) - 00:33:011 (3,4,5,1) - I think the 3/4 sliders here are too much in the quiet part of the music I think too
  4. 00:57:626 (1,2,3) - these seem to be way too far away compared to others fixed
  5. 01:13:780 (1,2,3) - these too keep

Nice map and interesting flow. I liked it
Thank you Moeka X3
Topic Starter
rui

jieusieu wrote:

rui wrote:

osu! need more Suara
ikr
( ´∀`)人(´∀` )
Strategas
hi, from my queue

[insane]

00:12:434 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - this whole thing is not very even
00:15:511 (2,3,4) - this isn't even either
00:16:857 (1,2) - I hear 1/8 here not 1/4
00:18:780 (3,4,5) - this isn't even either
00:21:665 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
do you use slider to stream conversion tool?
00:36:088 (7) - if you intended blanket, improve it
00:40:511 (4,1) - ^
00:48:203 (1,2,3) - uneven
well I'll stop checking for those then

[hard]

00:44:357 (2,3) - weird flow
00:56:665 (2) - improve blanket
00:58:203 (2) - ^

[normal]

seems good

[easy]

00:13:011 (1) - risky to have 1/2 in easy
00:16:088 (1) - repeat 1/2 sliders even have a higher chance of not passing through qat

Good luck!
Topic Starter
rui

Strategas wrote:

hi, from my queue

[insane]

00:12:434 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - this whole thing is not very even np
00:15:511 (2,3,4) - this isn't even either fixed
00:16:857 (1,2) - I hear 1/8 here not 1/4fixed
00:18:780 (3,4,5) - this isn't even either fixed
00:21:665 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ fixed
do you use slider to stream conversion tool? Yes. use slider to stream conversion tool or Distance
00:36:088 (7) - if you intended blanket, improve it ok
00:40:511 (4,1) - ^ ok
00:48:203 (1,2,3) - uneven ok
well I'll stop checking for those then I see

[hard]

00:44:357 (2,3) - weird flow ok
00:56:665 (2) - improve blanket ok
00:58:203 (2) - ^ ok

[normal]

seems good

[easy]

00:13:011 (1) - risky to have 1/2 in easy keep
00:16:088 (1) - repeat 1/2 sliders even have a higher chance of not passing through qat keep

Good luck!
Thank you Strategas :3
Reol
일본어로
as your req

[General]
  1. no take my star

[Easy]
  1. 01:01:857 - ここはCircle一つ入れても大丈夫だと思います :3

[Normal]
  1. GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD

[Hard]
  1. 00:09:550 (2,1) - Distanceがちょっと大きいじゃないかと思いますGA...


  • [Insane]
  1. 00:14:549 (4) - 流れが変わったからNC?
  2. 00:16:857 (1) - 1/1で離れていますから、ここもNCを...
  3. 01:05:318 (5) - ここは 01:17:626 (1) - こことおんなじようにNCを追加するのはいかがでしょう

NIIIICEEEMAPPSEEETT
がんばってください!
Topic Starter
rui

[ HalLoWeeN ] wrote:

일본어로
as your req

[General]
  1. no take my star ありがとう~

[Easy]
  1. 01:01:857 - ここはCircle一つ入れても大丈夫だと思います :3 入れました!

[Normal]
  1. GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD

[Hard]
  1. 00:09:550 (2,1) - Distanceがちょっと大きいじゃないかと思いますGA... 頑張ってもらいましょう


  • [Insane]
  1. 00:14:549 (4) - 流れが変わったからNC? はい
  2. 00:16:857 (1) - 1/1で離れていますから、ここもNCを... ok わかった
  3. 01:05:318 (5) - ここは 01:17:626 (1) - こことおんなじようにNCを追加するのはいかがでしょう 入れる

NIIIICEEEMAPPSEEETT
がんばってください!
HalLoWeeN さん modありがとうございました
Wingmann
Hi!
Normal:
00:23:588 (3) - Move to x68 y220 if you want a blanket
00:52:241 (2) - Seems a little too close to the bottom of the screen in my opinion

Easy seems fine.
So does Hard!
Sorry if this was a useless mod, but I really did try to look for things.
Good luck with ranking!! :)
Topic Starter
rui

Wingmann wrote:

Hi!
Normal:
00:23:588 (3) - Move to x68 y220 if you want a blanket move to x68,y216
00:52:241 (2) - Seems a little too close to the bottom of the screen in my opinion keep

Easy seems fine.
So does Hard!
Sorry if this was a useless mod, but I really did try to look for things.
Good luck with ranking!! :)
Thank you Wingmann
Squichu
hey there!
mod from my queue :3
just making suggestions, feel free to disagree!

General
all fine!

Easy
just some nitpicking from my side here, cause the diff looks pretty good~
  1. 00:09:934 (2,3,1) - consider smoothening out the movement by curving it differently? http://puu.sh/l3i8u.jpg
  2. 00:16:088 (1) - seems weird to only have the first white tick clickable. the red tick has the same sound, but not any effect on gameplay. I prefer circle + slider here
  3. 00:43:780 (1,2) - movement could be better, imo. how about placing (2) like this instead http://puu.sh/l3ilN.jpg ? you'd have to move the following circle, then, too, but tht's just a really minor adjustment
  4. 00:48:011 (3,1) - somehow the gap in-between feels weird. the beat's just weak, but I still think it could be mapped. you could just turn (3) into a short slider, the rhythm is still appropiate for an Easy, imo
  5. 01:15:318 (3) - consider moving this to 239109? better movement
  6. 01:27:242 (1) - it'd be alright to move the spinner to the red tick before. the mini-gap between circle and spinner seems weird cause the vocals don't have any break but continue right after hitting the circle
Normal
  1. 00:17:626 (3) - 1/2 slider + 1/1 slider matches the melody better, imo, because of the beat at 00:17:818 -
  2. 00:34:165 (1) - the downbeat should be clickable, consider removing the reverse and adding a circle instead
  3. 00:36:088 (5,1) - the stack is pretty uncommon for Normal difficulty, cause it's even harder to read than stacks below circles.. since stacks just got introduced in this diff, I prefer if they were unstacked.
  4. 00:56:088 (1,2) - movement is rather awkward, have you tried placing (2) differently? example: http://puu.sh/l3iXD.jpg
  5. 01:27:242 (1) - same as in Easy
Hard
  1. 00:12:434 (1) - so many reverses in the beginning feel kinda un-intuitive to play, imo.. I prefer a stream here, but you might consider that too hard O:
  2. 00:14:549 (1) - why ignore the beat on the red tick here? a 1/2 reverse-slider works nicely here, imo~
  3. 00:15:318 (2) - similar here, why ignore the beats on the red ticks? two 1/2 sliders and a circle on the blue tick match better, imo
Insane
  1. 00:26:472 (2,3) - I miss something on the red tick in-between.. there's clearly a piano sound so consider adding a circle or turning (2) into a 1/2 slider?
  2. 00:37:434 - you've been following the vocals before with some circles (like 00:28:203 (1) - for example), so I expected another circle here. add one?
  3. 01:02:626 (3) - how about turning this into a 1/4 repeat-slider? cause there are sounds on the following blue and red ticks
  4. 01:15:126 - there's a beat here and pretty strong vocals so why isn't this mapped? :c I think you could add a circl here
  5. 01:20:703 (1) - consider ctrl+g for better flow. you can also ctrl+g 01:21:472 (2) - to keep the flow further going~
    you'd just have to move 01:22:049 (3) - then, but that plays slightly better, imo
nothing much to say, looks pretty good. :3
hope I could help a little.. and good luck with the set!!
//squee
Topic Starter
rui

Squirrel wrote:

hey there!
mod from my queue :3
just making suggestions, feel free to disagree!

General
all fine!

Easy
just some nitpicking from my side here, cause the diff looks pretty good~
  1. 00:09:934 (2,3,1) - consider smoothening out the movement by curving it differently? http://puu.sh/l3i8u.jpg nope. This idea so interesting. but I priority to follow.
  2. 00:16:088 (1) - seems weird to only have the first white tick clickable. the red tick has the same sound, but not any effect on gameplay. I prefer circle + slider here I don't like it in Easy
  3. 00:43:780 (1,2) - movement could be better, imo. how about placing (2) like this instead http://puu.sh/l3ilN.jpg ? you'd have to move the following circle, then, too, but tht's just a really minor adjustment fixed
  4. 00:48:011 (3,1) - somehow the gap in-between feels weird. the beat's just weak, but I still think it could be mapped. you could just turn (3) into a short slider, the rhythm is still appropiate for an Easy, imo keep it
  5. 01:15:318 (3) - consider moving this to 239109? better movement good!
  6. 01:27:242 (1) - it'd be alright to move the spinner to the red tick before. the mini-gap between circle and spinner seems weird cause the vocals don't have any break but continue right after hitting the circle I see
Normal
  1. 00:17:626 (3) - 1/2 slider + 1/1 slider matches the melody better, imo, because of the beat at 00:17:818 - fixed
  2. 00:34:165 (1) - the downbeat should be clickable, consider removing the reverse and adding a circle instead
  3. 00:36:088 (5,1) - the stack is pretty uncommon for Normal difficulty, cause it's even harder to read than stacks below circles.. since stacks just got introduced in this diff, I prefer if they were unstacked. I see. change placement
  4. 00:56:088 (1,2) - movement is rather awkward, have you tried placing (2) differently? example: http://puu.sh/l3iXD.jpg
  5. 01:27:242 (1) - same as in Easy ok
Hard
  1. 00:12:434 (1) - so many reverses in the beginning feel kinda un-intuitive to play, imo.. I prefer a stream here, but you might consider that too hard O: I know but keep it
  2. 00:14:549 (1) - why ignore the beat on the red tick here? a 1/2 reverse-slider works nicely here, imo~ fixe
  3. 00:15:318 (2) - similar here, why ignore the beats on the red ticks? two 1/2 sliders and a circle on the blue tick match better, imo fixe
Insane
  1. 00:26:472 (2,3) - I miss something on the red tick in-between.. there's clearly a piano sound so consider adding a circle or turning (2) into a 1/2 slider? add note
  2. 00:37:434 - you've been following the vocals before with some circles (like 00:28:203 (1) - for example), so I expected another circle here. add one? nope
  3. 01:02:626 (3) - how about turning this into a 1/4 repeat-slider? cause there are sounds on the following blue and red ticks nope
  4. 01:15:126 - there's a beat here and pretty strong vocals so why isn't this mapped? :c I think you could add a circl here nope
  5. 01:20:703 (1) - consider ctrl+g for better flow. you can also ctrl+g 01:21:472 (2) - to keep the flow further going~ nope. keep blanket
    you'd just have to move 01:22:049 (3) - then, but that plays slightly better, imo
nothing much to say, looks pretty good. :3
hope I could help a little.. and good luck with the set!!
//squee
Thank you Squirrel
DeletedUser_1574070
  • Insane
  1. 00:12:915 (6,1) - ここだけspacing違ってて違和感感じた
  2. 00:16:857 (3,4,5) - 6分の1に聞こえるがわざとならこれで良いかも
  3. 00:57:434 - ドラムはっきり聞こえてサークル一個入れてもいいんじゃないかなと
  4. 01:02:049 (4,1) - は01:02:145 - ここがドラムまた聞こえてて3連打ジャンプとかはどうかなと思いました
  5. 01:04:549 (3,4) - 何か形一緒にしてもいいかも
  6. 01:24:934 (1,2) - swap NC


  • Hard
  1. 00:12:434 (1,1,2) - spacing若干減らした方がいいかも
  2. 00:23:780 (1) - 形の提案http://puu.sh/l9ui2/cd944f13ad.jpg
  3. 00:29:549 (3,4) - 外しても良いとhttp://puu.sh/l9urc/630d30c574.jpg 他のも同じく
  4. 00:57:434 - insaneと同じ

  • Normal
  1. 00:08:395 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - いくらパターンだとしてもNormalの割りにリズム細かくspacingもきつい環する

くらいかな

がんばです
Topic Starter
rui

Kloyd wrote:

  • Insane
  1. 00:12:915 (6,1) - ここだけspacing違ってて違和感感じた わざとだったけど直した
  2. 00:16:857 (3,4,5) - 6分の1に聞こえるがわざとならこれで良いかも 1/6ならスライダーにします。1/8だと思ってた・・・
  3. 00:57:434 - ドラムはっきり聞こえてサークル一個入れてもいいんじゃないかなと 追加した
  4. 01:02:049 (4,1) - は01:02:145 - ここがドラムまた聞こえてて3連打ジャンプとかはどうかなと思いました 確かに音は聞こえるけど今の流れ気にっているので無視します
  5. 01:04:549 (3,4) - 何か形一緒にしてもいいかも あえてそのままで
  6. 01:24:934 (1,2) - swap NC 直した

  • Hard
  1. 00:12:434 (1,1,2) - spacing若干減らした方がいいかも 気持ち減らした
  2. 00:23:780 (1) - 形の提案http://puu.sh/l9ui2/cd944f13ad.jpg (・∀・)イイネ!!
  3. 00:29:549 (3,4) - 外しても良いとhttp://puu.sh/l9urc/630d30c574.jpg 他のも同じく このぐらい極端なほうが好きなのでそのままで
  4. 00:57:434 - insaneと同じ 追加した

  • Normal
  1. 00:08:395 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - いくらパターンだとしてもNormalの割りにリズム細かくspacingもきつい環する スペーシング違うのはDQされそうだから直した。音を減らすつもりはないです

くらいかな

がんばです
がんばります。Kloydさんmodありがとうございました
Sidetail

  • Easy
  1. Add slider at 00:47:242 to 00:47:626 and delete the circle (00:47:626 (4) - )
  2. 01:00:703 (3) - At the end of slider, vocal says another word. You can try this:
    Before: http://puu.sh/lkM4l/2dfc42e648.jpg
    After: http://puu.sh/lkM8q/892d4db9e8.jpg
    I left (01:02:626) blank, because there is not much going on with the music.
  3. 01:06:857 (1) - Cut slider in half (length) and put circle at (01:07:626)
  4. Feels empty here (01:14:934), you can try removing that reverse and placing identical length (or two circles) slider after it. http://puu.sh/lkLQV/5e1a15b1fd.jpg
  5. 01:24:933 (4,1) - Blanket bothered me a bit because every other blanket was nice.
  6. 01:25:318 (1) - No reverse. / AND / put circle at (01:26:088) / AND / remove 01:26:472 (2) - .. Simple is nicer with easy :D


  • Normal
  1. 00:28:395 (2) - Remove reverse, one circle at (00:28:972) and one slider at (00:28:972) http://puu.sh/lkMH4/d2f8dc0091.jpg
  2. 00:38:395 (3) - One 1/4 slider for "shi", one circle "ii" and one more circle "ke" http://puu.sh/lkMyB/ded9bcbca0.jpg
  3. 00:40:318 (7) - Remove slider, put circle at (00:40:511) http://puu.sh/lkMB7/371cdd5c3d.jpg
  4. Put circle here (00:43:588). There is vocal saying "mi."
  5. 00:46:472 (5) - Half this slider and put reverse. "tsu-na-ga"
  6. 00:54:165 (3) - Remove / AND / Put slider at (00:53:972) and end slider at (00:54:165) and put reverse. http://puu.sh/lkN2q/069d5fe057.jpg
  7. 00:50:895 (3) - ^ maybe you can do it here too if you want to be more consistent. (Although the vocal on this particular part is weaker than previous one)
  8. 01:00:318 (3) - Remove / Change this to slider: 00:59:934 (2) - / (Fits vocal better) http://puu.sh/lkNbY/b4faa31245.jpg
  9. 01:01:472 (1) - Circle / AND / 01:01:857 (6) - move to (01:01:665) slider with reverse. / AND / 01:02:242 (7) - No reverse. / AND / Circle at (01:02:626) and another circle at (01:02:818) / http://puu.sh/lkNsZ/963410bf17.jpg (This goes along with next objects (01:03:011 (1,2,3,1) - ) and seems better with music instruments in the music.
  10. 01:06:857 (1) - At reverse part of slider, it doesn't emphasize enough on "ko-to." Try CTRL + G, and remove reverse. Place circle at (01:07:434) and (01:07:626) stack these two. http://puu.sh/lkNSH/bc502d28cf.jpg
  11. 01:17:626 (3,4) - I think remove both of these and one long would be better. Nothing in the music for two 1/4s :c


  • Hard
  1. 00:25:318 (1) - Would be better if you map the things that is ignored by slider. Half the slider / AND /circle at (00:25:895) / AND / 1/4 slider at (00:26:088) / AND / circle at (00:26:665) http://puu.sh/lkOLt/3c7a250b66.jpg
  2. 00:28:395 (2) - Same with above. Half the slider / AND / Circle at (00:28:972) / AND / 1/4 slider at (00:29:165) http://puu.sh/lkOWF/7b624e375d.jpg
  3. 00:31:472 (1) - ^ Half the slider -> circle -> slider http://puu.sh/lkP1H/3e48463e55.jpg
  4. 00:21:857 (4) - Bend this looks seamless with previous slider 00:21:472 (3) - Because you did 00:23:011 (3,4) - straight two here, why not bend both there ;D
  5. 00:46:472 (1,2,3) - 00:46:472 (1) - Half this slider / AND / 00:47:049 (2) - move to (00:46:857)
  6. 01:15:318 (1) - Stack under 01:14:934 (3) -
  7. 01:04:549 (3,4) - The blanket bother a little XD because other sliders like 01:07:626 (3,4) - has nice blanket
  8. Start last spinner at (01:26:953)


  • Insane
  1. 01:08:203 (7) - Weird flow http://puu.sh/lkPr6/eeb48351bb.jpg
  2. 01:15:703 (3) - At (x:132, y:228) / AND / 01:15:895 (4) - (x:288, y:316)


    Suggestions:
  3. 00:24:549 (1) - Ctrl + G
  4. 00:24:934 (3) - Ctrl + G

    rui's Insane is too good >v< I can't mod anything on this insane

Nice Map~
Topic Starter
rui

BetaStar wrote:


  • Easy
  1. Add slider at 00:47:242 to 00:47:626 and delete the circle (00:47:626 (4) - ) fixed
  2. 01:00:703 (3) - At the end of slider, vocal says another word. You can try this: nope because I think I can vocal follow now. 00:59:165 (1,2,3,4) - "na-ku-shi-ta-ku-ha-na-i" finished as word.
    Before: http://puu.sh/lkM4l/2dfc42e648.jpg
    After: http://puu.sh/lkM8q/892d4db9e8.jpg
    I left (01:02:626) blank, because there is not much going on with the music.
  3. 01:06:857 (1) - Cut slider in half (length) and put circle at (01:07:626) fixed
  4. Feels empty here (01:14:934), you can try removing that reverse and placing identical length (or two circles) slider after it. http://puu.sh/lkLQV/5e1a15b1fd.jpg
  5. 01:24:933 (4,1) - Blanket bothered me a bit because every other blanket was nice. ok
  6. 01:25:318 (1) - No reverse. / AND / put circle at (01:26:088) / AND / remove 01:26:472 (2) - .. Simple is nicer with easy :D yay:D


  • Normal
    I'm not vocal follow Normal diff. I put emphasis easily rhythm.
    Sorry. I do not almost fix your mod.
  1. 00:28:395 (2) - Remove reverse, one circle at (00:28:972) and one slider at (00:28:972) http://puu.sh/lkMH4/d2f8dc0091.jpg
  2. 00:38:395 (3) - One 1/4 slider for "shi", one circle "ii" and one more circle "ke" http://puu.sh/lkMyB/ded9bcbca0.jpg
  3. 00:40:318 (7) - Remove slider, put circle at (00:40:511) http://puu.sh/lkMB7/371cdd5c3d.jpg
  4. Put circle here (00:43:588). There is vocal saying "mi."
  5. 00:46:472 (5) - Half this slider and put reverse. "tsu-na-ga"
  6. 00:54:165 (3) - Remove / AND / Put slider at (00:53:972) and end slider at (00:54:165) and put reverse. http://puu.sh/lkN2q/069d5fe057.jpg
  7. 00:50:895 (3) - ^ maybe you can do it here too if you want to be more consistent. (Although the vocal on this particular part is weaker than previous one)
  8. 01:00:318 (3) - Remove / Change this to slider: 00:59:934 (2) - / (Fits vocal better) http://puu.sh/lkNbY/b4faa31245.jpg
  9. 01:01:472 (1) - Circle / AND / 01:01:857 (6) - move to (01:01:665) slider with reverse. / AND / 01:02:242 (7) - No reverse. / AND / Circle at (01:02:626) and another circle at (01:02:818) / http://puu.sh/lkNsZ/963410bf17.jpg (This goes along with next objects (01:03:011 (1,2,3,1) - ) and seems better with music instruments in the music.
  10. 01:06:857 (1) - At reverse part of slider, it doesn't emphasize enough on "ko-to." Try CTRL + G, and remove reverse. Place circle at (01:07:434) and (01:07:626) stack these two. http://puu.sh/lkNSH/bc502d28cf.jpg
  11. 01:17:626 (3,4) - I think remove both of these and one long would be better. Nothing in the music for two 1/4s :c my bad fixed :(


  • Hard
  1. 00:25:318 (1) - Would be better if you map the things that is ignored by slider. Half the slider / AND /circle at (00:25:895) / AND / 1/4 slider at (00:26:088) / AND / circle at (00:26:665) http://puu.sh/lkOLt/3c7a250b66.jpg I don't want muny sound this part. so I take sound beginning and end of the words. so no fixed
  2. 00:28:395 (2) - Same with above. Half the slider / AND / Circle at (00:28:972) / AND / 1/4 slider at (00:29:165) http://puu.sh/lkOWF/7b624e375d.jpg color=#0000FF]same[/color]
  3. 00:31:472 (1) - ^ Half the slider -> circle -> slider http://puu.sh/lkP1H/3e48463e55.jpg same
  4. 00:21:857 (4) - Bend this looks seamless with previous slider 00:21:472 (3) - Because you did 00:23:011 (3,4) - straight two here, why not bend both there ;D 00:21:857 (4) - band this slider
  5. 00:46:472 (1,2,3) - 00:46:472 (1) - Half this slider / AND / 00:47:049 (2) - move to (00:46:857) not changed
  6. 01:15:318 (1) - Stack under 01:14:934 (3) - this diff low AR. Stack under is bad imo
  7. 01:04:549 (3,4) - The blanket bother a little XD because other sliders like 01:07:626 (3,4) - has nice blanket ok
  8. Start last spinner at (01:26:953)


  • Insane
  1. 01:08:203 (7) - Weird flow http://puu.sh/lkPr6/eeb48351bb.jpg fixed good folw!
  2. 01:15:703 (3) - At (x:132, y:228) / AND / 01:15:895 (4) - (x:288, y:316) keep


    Suggestions:
  3. 00:24:549 (1) - Ctrl + G keep
  4. 00:24:934 (3) - Ctrl + G keep

    rui's Insane is too good >v< I can't mod anything on this insane

Nice Map~
Thank you BetaStar san :3
Satellite
Fuantei na Mod here

[General]
  1. PreviewTime: 62630 is not snapped please changed 62626
  2. 00:21:472 - all diff forgot soft - finish please add.
[Easy]
  1. fine to me
[Normal]
  1. 00:13:972 (1) - remove Nc
  2. 00:32:626 (2) - 歌詞に合わせて 00:29:549 (3) - こことパターンを統一したほうが好ましいです
  3. 00:43:588 - add note 歌詞にあわせていれたほうがいいです
  4. 00:46:472 (1) - 音にあってないです。以下の音取りを試してみてください
  5. 01:06:857 (1,2,3,4) - 音にあってないです。以下の音取りを試してみてください
  6. 01:16:665 - 01:18:972 - 01:22:049 - add note 00:43:588 - ここと同様の理由で
  7. 01:26:280 (1) - 長いスライダーからの単発はリズムがとりづらいです。手前のスライダーの終点に強い音が入っているため、それを引き立てる意味合いも兼ねてremove note
[Hard]
  1. Hp drain changed 5.5. 7.5は高いです
  2. 00:12:434 (1,1) - ジャンプが大きいです。00:12:242 (3) - ここにスタックさせるのはどうですか?
  3. 00:31:280 (6) - add whistle 付け忘れです
  4. 00:33:011 (1) - 隠れすぎなので違ったパターンに変更してください。提案もおいておきます!
  5. 00:39:165 (6) - パターンならここでNcが入るはず?
  6. 00:46:472 (1) - Normalと同様に音にあってないです。
  7. 00:59:934 (3) - ここは3/4使うと面白いかも、ここみたいに。00:15:318 (2,3) -
  8. 01:02:242 (1,2) - ここは1/2 sliderに変えてあげたら優しいruiさん優しい!
  9. 01:19:742 (2,3) - 流れが悪いかも、このままの状態だったら2をCtrl+Gしたほうがよくなると思う
  10. 01:25:318 (2,3) - ここだけはしっかり音に合わせたほうがいいかも
  11. 01:26:280 (1,2,3,4) - 重なってて見づらい印象がありました、違ったパターンが好ましいです。
[Insane]
  1. 00:41:280 (2,3) - ちょっと流れ悪いかも2をx326 y198あたりにもってくるといいかも
  2. 01:02:818 - 歌詞がある以上ここに音がないのは結構違和感があります。前後のパターンを変えて追加したほうが好ましいです
  3. 01:15:703 (3,4) - 3から4への流れがあまりよくないと思います、4の位置を画像の位置あたりにあると叩きやすくなるかも
  4. 01:25:703 (2) - ここは3/4じゃないよ!1/2だよ!
call me back ~
Topic Starter
rui

Satellite wrote:

Fuantei na Mod here

[General]
  1. PreviewTime: 62630 is not snapped please changed 62626 直しました
  2. 00:21:472 - all diff forgot soft - finish please add. 足しました
[Easy]
  1. fine to me
[Normal]
  1. 00:13:972 (1) - remove Nc 直しました
  2. 00:32:626 (2) - 歌詞に合わせて 00:29:549 (3) - こことパターンを統一したほうが好ましいです 直した~
  3. 00:43:588 - add note 歌詞にあわせていれたほうがいいです 直した~
  4. 00:46:472 (1) - 音にあってないです。以下の音取りを試してみてください 直した~
  5. 01:06:857 (1,2,3,4) - 音にあってないです。以下の音取りを試してみてください 提案どおりではないですが直しました
  6. 01:16:665 - 01:18:972 - 01:22:049 - add note 00:43:588 - ここと同様の理由で 直した~
  7. 01:26:280 (1) - 長いスライダーからの単発はリズムがとりづらいです。手前のスライダーの終点に強い音が入っているため、それを引き立てる意味合いも兼ねてremove note 直した~
[Hard]
  1. Hp drain changed 5.5. 7.5は高いです 直した~
  2. 00:12:434 (1,1) - ジャンプが大きいです。00:12:242 (3) - ここにスタックさせるのはどうですか? 距離を縮めました
  3. 00:31:280 (6) - add whistle 付け忘れです 直した~
  4. 00:33:011 (1) - 隠れすぎなので違ったパターンに変更してください。提案もおいておきます! 提案にのります
  5. 00:39:165 (6) - パターンならここでNcが入るはず? 直した~
  6. 00:46:472 (1) - Normalと同様に音にあってないです。 直した~
  7. 00:59:934 (3) - ここは3/4使うと面白いかも、ここみたいに。00:15:318 (2,3) - 直した~
  8. 01:02:242 (1,2) - ここは1/2 sliderに変えてあげたら優しいruiさん優しい! やさしいから直した
  9. 01:19:742 (2,3) - 流れが悪いかも、このままの状態だったら2をCtrl+Gしたほうがよくなると思う
  10. 01:25:318 (2,3) - ここだけはしっかり音に合わせたほうがいいかも 直した~
  11. 01:26:280 (1,2,3,4) - 重なってて見づらい印象がありました、違ったパターンが好ましいです。 01:26:857 (4) - は移動した
[Insane]
  1. 00:41:280 (2,3) - ちょっと流れ悪いかも2をx326 y198あたりにもってくるといいかも 少し違うけど修正しました
  2. 01:02:818 - 歌詞がある以上ここに音がないのは結構違和感があります。前後のパターンを変えて追加したほうが好ましいです そのままで
  3. 01:15:703 (3,4) - 3から4への流れがあまりよくないと思います、4の位置を画像の位置あたりにあると叩きやすくなるかも 直した~
  4. 01:25:703 (2) - ここは3/4じゃないよ!1/2だよ!直した~
call me back ~
さててさんありがとうございました
Satellite
Recheck

[Metadata]
  1. Romanised title must be changed " Fuantei na Kamisama "
  2. Title must be changed " 不安定な神様 "

    http://fixrecords.com/kicm3305/?artist=suara
thank you check Gamu
Topic Starter
rui

Satellite wrote:

Recheck

[Metadata]
  1. Romanised title must be changed " Fuantei na Kamisama "
  2. Title must be changed " 不安定な神様 "

    http://fixrecords.com/kicm3305/?artist=suara
修正しました。

そのほかに 全Diff 00:47:626 をsampleset N Addition S で笛つけました
Satellite
looks fine so bubbled ~

gl :3/
Topic Starter
rui
ありがとうございます
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