Hi Im Nathan wrote:

hi from my modding queue

[normal]
01:25:275 (2) - shouldnt this note be at 01:25:141 ? If I made a pattern with a note here, beginner player may not be able to read this note.

[Hard]
00:22:075 (3,1) - reduce the DS a tiny bit? Its one of the biggest in the map and the music doesnt really signify it The jump here is representing the strong instrumental sound, I'll consider changing but not now.
00:39:675 (1) - This slider doesnt really match the music entirely imo . It just seems to act like a cheap combo breaker on top of that, since it is only a hard diff Changed to something
01:08:475 (3) - ^ ^

[Insane]
Couldnt find anything

well thats all from me, this map should be bubbled imo, have a star to boost your chances. I hope this mod was useful, GL

BetaStar wrote:

From my queue

• 
  Insane

1. 00:04:341 (4,5) - Why not blanket like one before (00:04:341 (4,5) - ) to make it look even and nicer? okay
2. 00:06:875 (2) - Bend it the other way to flow nicer? I prefer the actual pattern here, works better with next pattern.
3. 00:11:275 (1) - I would bend this more and blanket with 00:11:675 (2) - . fixed
4. 00:22:341 (1) - ^ with 00:22:875 (2) -
5. 00:26:075 (2,3,4) - This flows nicer http://puu.sh/lezco/201e97cb70.jpg fixed
6. 00:39:675 (3,1) - To be honest, this is too far & and hard to get. I would go half-stack this. fixed
7. 00:53:541 (3,4,5) - This rhythm doesn't really fit. fixed
8. 01:08:475 (2) - Wrong side half stack. Would make more sense if it is the other way http://puu.sh/lezAd/2442587714.jpg
9. 01:13:541 (1,2) - You can make these looks better by polishing more. To be honest, 01:14:075 (2) - doesn't look fitting :c adjusted a bit here
10. 01:25:275 (2) - Would be nice if you curve this as one before( 01:24:475 (1) - ) is curved and two before that is straight (01:22:875 (1,1) - ) Like... being more consistent. I really prefer current one, map looks nicer this way.

• 
  Hard

1. 00:00:075 (1) - There is already drum being near toward at end of the first slider at (00:00:341). You should compensate for this. Changed the pattern here, but not sure if I get your suggestion here or not...
2. 00:10:875 (2) - Maybe you can make it easier to read by doing this?: http://puu.sh/lezTi/6857d906aa.jpg Fixed
3. 00:20:075 (1,2) - ^
4. 00:26:475 (3,4) - ^ Already easy to read imo
5. 00:52:208 (2,3) - ^
6. 01:05:675 (1,2,3) - ^
7. 00:30:475 (1) - I wouldn't tryple reverse suddenly. I would remove all the reverse and just put one more same length slider after this first one. I think this pattern works good at moment so no change
8. 00:39:541 (2) - Delete this and put slider starting at 00:39:275 and end at 00:39:541 Changed to another thing.
9. 00:55:275 (5) - Suddenly full-stack? I would just half stack to be more consistent as one right before was just half stack 00:53:675 (1,2) - Fixed
10. 01:00:741 (1,2) - ^
11. 01:00:341 (2,3) - Bit weird position... I would put somewhere... X:204, Y:244 fixed
12. 01:08:341 (2,3) - Half stack? current stack looks better imo
13. 01:20:341 (5) - ^ changed to something

• 
  Normal

1. Check this out (ONLY FIRST): http://puu.sh/leAqB/2e274464b0.jpg Actually this pattern plays good for normal, and this warning is just to alert me to follow 0,80x ds in previous pattern, if more people start to complain about this I'll change.
2. 00:46:475 (1) - Polish this slider a bit more. Okay, tried, hope I fixed right
3. 01:10:875 (4,5,6) - No reason for stacking the first two. Fixed

Sorry, I ran out of time when I finished modding [Hard] diff, so I couldn't go over for [Normal] as deeply as I liked to. Nice map and good luck!

iedesu wrote:

random mod

general:
no audioleadin? add 2000ms of it When we start to play the map there's already a significant break before map starts so no need to add it.

and nm diff, i can't mod this, because ds is too odd ;w;
use distance snap Erm... yeah I've used ds and isn't odd imo '--'

+keep nc, this is odd too ?


hard
00:32:075 (2,3,4,1,2) - too hard to read, fix this Follows the vocal and instrumental perfectly so... don't need to fix this pattern at moment imo

insane
00:47:275 (5) - blanket ok fixed

okay, overall mapset is fine, but you should keep ds and nc, very important if you want to rank this

good luck

NORMAL
-Some notes on 1/3 rythms like this song are missing (imo),you know.. when i
test this song,At this part 00:39:275 i think if you add 1 circle there,it should
fit the song because emptying 00:39:275 part was a little bit,, you know.. missing.

-(this part is only my opinion and it doesn't have anything to do with your mind set.so feel free to skip this if you think that i changed your map)
I think you've shouldn't end the slider's tail at the first tick of BPM's 00:58:875
example like this:

and you can add hit circle to make the slider starts at the first tick at 00:39:675 like this:


The rest of sliders that similar like this were good as they were.

"RANK THIS LOLI"

wuzzat wrote:

hey,seeing this Loliii Gals on #modhelp
just want to help a bit, but don't expect much okay,,
im no pro modder like others,

NORMAL
-Some notes on 1/3 rythms like this song are missing (imo),you know.. when i
test this song,At this part 00:39:275 i think if you add 1 circle there,it should
fit the song because emptying 00:39:275 part was a little bit,, you know.. missing.

-(this part is only my opinion and it doesn't have anything to do with your mind set.so feel free to skip this if you think that i changed your map)
I think you've shouldn't end the slider's tail at the first tick of BPM's 00:58:875
example like this:

and you can add hit circle to make the slider starts at the first tick at 00:39:675 like this:


The rest of sliders that similar like this were good as they were.

And i think i can only mod Normal mode,and for me (personal),hard diff and insane arrangement seems like there are something's not right or missing like
patterns,jumps,and reverse sliders.Sorry for my knowledge and happy mapping and Goodluck with your map

"RANK THIS LOLI"

Sky Future wrote:

hi~ mod start

Normal

00:06:075 (4,1) - Turn this inot Current works better for me

00:09:275 - add circle If I add a circle here beginner players may be confused about pattern and current already follow the music so...

00:13:675 (2,3,1) - blanket Kay~

00:14:475 (1,2,3) - ^ Don't see a reason to make a blanket here since it's already perfect imo, well will consider this for now

00:20:475 - add clap Whistle is better here because of a sweet sound in the end of slider on the music.

00:30:075 - again add clap Kay~

00:40:875 (4) - slider its long this end 00:41:541 - To make it easier made it long, your suggestion wasn't bad but prefer this current now.


offset not accurate
i think this offset 60 ^^ Current offset sounds better for me

Makyu wrote:

Oh wow, I forgot about this mod lol

Idealism wrote:

oi

Hard

01:00:341 (2) - não precisa de 2 notas aqui, apenas 1 Seguindo o instrumental aquí e acho a pattern bem mais completa da maneira atual.

Insane

00:23:808 (5) - nota desnecessária, dá pra ouvir que aqui são apenas 2 Overmap por razões pessoais, acho que a pattern ficaria bem mais divertida dessa maneira atual do que se eu fosse seguir o original. Gosto do jeito que o gás dessa pattern dá.
00:33:941 (1) - achei que a nota ficou meio tarde, passa ela pra cá: A parte que elas cantam"Chokkan wo", "Cho" começa no final do (3) em 00:33:541 e o "kkan wo" tem sua continuação nessa nota e slider stackado + próximo slider então não creio que esteja tardia, acho que está bem de acordo com a música.
00:35:675 (2) - nota desnecessária, você pode removê-la e ajeitar o slider ao lado: Não entendi o que quis dizer com desnecessária, talvez entenda o que você quis fazer aqui mas não o (1) sozinho não conseguiria seguir o ritmo e o vocal da música, a pattern iria ficar muito estranha sem ela aquí.
00:49:008 (2) - nota desnecessária, dá pra ouvir que teve uma pequena pausa no ritmo da música creio que a pattern ficaria mais interessante da maneira atual, sua sugestão é boa e segue muito bem a música mas é a mesma razão que eu dei em 00:23:808.
01:19:008 (3) - ^
01:21:408 (2) - ^

Chibi Maruko wrote:

Hi. From my queue

What the heck 10 days silenced :/ Have been hard get mods for my maps recently ;--;

Hard

1. 00:48:341 (6) - NC here? Don't think if a NC here would be good

Insane

1. 00:12:741 (1) - I think this overlap doesn't look nice. Blanket or sliderwave slider or something Changed
2. 00:25:541 (1) - This too ^
3. 00:39:541 (2,3) - Maybe, stack is fine I prefer don't stack these two, looks good for me imo
4. 00:46:075 (1) - Why NC here. This are no reason to make new nc Changed

Ok, gl with ur map \:D/
sorry /me run away

[ Nemesis ] wrote:

First Sry for my English

Second i cant mod the normal diff because i dont know how i should do this, sry for that ;-;

Hard

00:10:475 (1,2) - looks bit weird Changed something
00:26:475 (3,4) - too Works fine for me imo, but increased the ds here a bit
01:21:675 (1,1) - this break is to long
This diff looks very strong, theres only some things which LOOKS weird, but dont are weird, all in one its a nice map

Insane

00:10:341 (3,1) - maybe overlap this slider under the hit for better style Prefer my current one, nice suggestion but I still thinking my current one is better.
00:39:541 (2) - why you use not same distance like 00:37:541 (2) - here Kay
00:39:675 (3,1) - the distance between this and 00:53:675 (4,5) - this, is different, maybe a bit weird Don't think is weird... I'll consider later.
00:55:141 (3,4) - why you often change the distance To make the diff harder and fun to play
01:06:875 (1) - after this there is missing a hit Added a one in 01:08:741
01:06:875 (1,1) - this long break is weird, maybe use a spinner or a long slider? No reason to add one since after that there's nothing to map after there just one word at 01:08:075 and instrumental at 01:08:741, and since I don't want to map vocals that much I preferred to add a note in 01:08:741.
01:12:341 (2,3) - this is basicly ok, but its weird to play if you understand ^^ Kay, changed a thing.
01:21:541 (3,1) - this break is to long This break fits perfectly with the song, I don't see reasons to change this break.

Gerneral

all in one, its a good map, youve got many mods so i can say theres no really big problem, but the long breaks which i said on the insane diff maybe you should change this
The normal diff looks good too, but its how i said, i dont know whats are right and whats wrong, but it plays good

1. Maybe it'd be better removing the * from romanised title, since it doesn't have any relation to the song name, I know you tried to do that cuz of the song symbol in japanese title, but it feels weird. Anyways, I'd recommend you ask a QAT or IamKwaN since he/she is pro on metadata XD

1. AR 5 seems to be a better choice imo. Try it and see what fits better to your difficult level.
2. Your comboing in very inconsistent in this diff, easier diffs should have a consistent combo in most part of the song, generally mappers use 1 or 2 stanzas for a Normal, and I can see here that you don't have a default.
   
   I'll suggest some comboing improving here and you should apply same to the rest of the diff, always following 2 or 1 stanzas pattern. (I'd recommend 2 for the song and for your difficulty :>)
   00:03:675 (4) - Remove NC here
   00:05:275 (6) - Add here
   00:06:341 (3) - Remove here
   00:10:875 (1,2) - Swap here (remove for 1 and add on 2)
   00:12:741 (1) - Since song has a strong change here, you could keep it, but, you could remove it too XD Anyways, try to follow this style of comboing and it should be fine, ask me ingame if you have doubts.
   
3. About rhythm, one of the first issues that I noticed were the quantity of improtant beats you ignored (called downbeats), you let a lot of sliders ending on them, which is not good at all for rhythm and gameplay. Look:
   
   00:04:075 (2) - As you can see, the end of this slider have a start of a new vocal and beat is very strong, ending sliders on it, makes the beat unclickable, so player lost the essence of the gameplay. You could remove reverse of slider and add a note on the downbeat.
   00:07:675 (3) - Same
   00:16:875 (2) -
   00:26:475 (2) -
   00:38:075 (2) -
   00:39:675 (2) - Strong case here XD The start of kiai is usually very strong in all songs, and you made it unclickable :<
   00:52:075 (3) -
   
   You made it in another parts too, I don't like of repeat myself too much in mods so XD Just go over your map and see where you can improve rhythm based on what I've said :>
   
4. 00:40:875 (4) - 2/1 here feels too easy in the song, you didn't use it in any place before kiai, and especially on kiai you used it XD Just made a 1/1 slider here then add a note, it represent songs much better.
5. 00:53:675 (2) - Currently position of this slider makes a weird flow, in this way, players have to go left to click (2) head and then go to the right again. Just move (2) more to the right, so that won't happen and it'll flow much better.

1. 00:22:875 (2) - I don't see a real reason for make spacing higher in this part, beat isn't really strong as (3) is, make (2) consistent spacing and make a jump on (3). Fits better song.
2. 00:45:941 (8) - Remove NC here, i didn't see you doing that in any other parts, just on this one, it feels inconsistent.
3. 00:46:475 (3) - Stacking that feels weird, especially by the fact that this has a strong beat. I'd unstack it. Btw, add a NC on this note, you missed it!
4. 00:49:275 (7) - Remove NC there and add it here 00:49:675 (1) -
5. 00:52:208 (2) - I don't see any sounds in the start of slider, you should move it too 00:52:341 then it would not be overmapped. (You'll need to re passionate next rhytms after doing that, ofc)

1. 00:13:675 (4) - This is very subjective but I found this shape very bad. I'd recommend something smoother, that would keep map clean :3 Look http://puu.sh/nJ5hn/a0ac81769b.jpg
2. 00:14:475 (1) - What a bad position you find to put this note. The fact of it's being a strong beat, makes a bad decision stack on (4) head, cuz it makes a ''tight'' patterning, what is not the intention for a strong beat part. Maybe you could move it too x:108 y:103
3. 00:23:808 (5) - Overmapped, there is currently no song on this note, deleting it would be the best choice.
4. 00:35:808 (3) - Same thing here, slider head is overmapped, which is very bad. Just remove that slider and add a note where it should be slider end.
5. 00:52:075 (3) - This NC is useless at this part, it doesn't represent nothing in special.

MkGuh wrote:

Hey, from my queue!

[General]

1. Maybe it'd be better removing the * from romanised title, since it doesn't have any relation to the song name, I know you tried to do that cuz of the song symbol in japanese title, but it feels weird. Anyways, I'd recommend you ask a QAT or IamKwaN since he/she is pro on metadata XD

[Normal]

1. AR 5 seems to be a better choice imo. Try it and see what fits better to your difficult level.
2. Your comboing in very inconsistent in this diff, easier diffs should have a consistent combo in most part of the song, generally mappers use 1 or 2 stanzas for a Normal, and I can see here that you don't have a default.
   
   I'll suggest some comboing improving here and you should apply same to the rest of the diff, always following 2 or 1 stanzas pattern. (I'd recommend 2 for the song and for your difficulty :>)
   00:03:675 (4) - Remove NC here
   00:05:275 (6) - Add here
   00:06:341 (3) - Remove here
   00:10:875 (1,2) - Swap here (remove for 1 and add on 2)
   00:12:741 (1) - Since song has a strong change here, you could keep it, but, you could remove it too XD Anyways, try to follow this style of comboing and it should be fine, ask me ingame if you have doubts.
   
3. About rhythm, one of the first issues that I noticed were the quantity of improtant beats you ignored (called downbeats), you let a lot of sliders ending on them, which is not good at all for rhythm and gameplay. Look:
   
   00:04:075 (2) - As you can see, the end of this slider have a start of a new vocal and beat is very strong, ending sliders on it, makes the beat unclickable, so player lost the essence of the gameplay. You could remove reverse of slider and add a note on the downbeat.
   00:07:675 (3) - Same
   00:16:875 (2) -
   00:26:475 (2) -
   00:38:075 (2) -
   00:39:675 (2) - Strong case here XD The start of kiai is usually very strong in all songs, and you made it unclickable :<
   00:52:075 (3) -
   
   You made it in another parts too, I don't like of repeat myself too much in mods so XD Just go over your map and see where you can improve rhythm based on what I've said :>
   
4. 00:40:875 (4) - 2/1 here feels too easy in the song, you didn't use it in any place before kiai, and especially on kiai you used it XD Just made a 1/1 slider here then add a note, it represent songs much better.
5. 00:53:675 (2) - Currently position of this slider makes a weird flow, in this way, players have to go left to click (2) head and then go to the right again. Just move (2) more to the right, so that won't happen and it'll flow much better.

Well, diff needs more imrpovement, especially on comboing and rhythm, try to go over the diff and fix things based on what I've said and especially get more mods. Depois de ler e analisar tudo o que você apontou nesse mod, vou dar clear nela e remapear porque acabei vendo coisas bem mais erradas que eu fiz e não reparei até agora, foi bem útil brigada ^^

[Hard]

1. 00:22:875 (2) - I don't see a real reason for make spacing higher in this part, beat isn't really strong as (3) is, make (2) consistent spacing and make a jump on (3). Fits better song. Ok
2. 00:45:941 (8) - Remove NC here, i didn't see you doing that in any other parts, just on this one, it feels inconsistent. Ok
3. 00:46:475 (3) - Stacking that feels weird, especially by the fact that this has a strong beat. I'd unstack it. Btw, add a NC on this note, you missed it! Ok
4. 00:49:275 (7) - Remove NC there and add it here 00:49:675 (1) - Ok
5. 00:52:208 (2) - I don't see any sounds in the start of slider, you should move it too 00:52:341 then it would not be overmapped. (You'll need to re passionate next rhytms after doing that, ofc) Sim existe um instrumental não tão forte mas ainda tem, só estou enfatizando ele.

Not that bad! But I still feel you should focus on comboing a bit more, it feels very inconsistent at some parts.

[Insane]

1. 00:13:675 (4) - This is very subjective but I found this shape very bad. I'd recommend something smoother, that would keep map clean :3 Look http://puu.sh/nJ5hn/a0ac81769b.jpg Não consegui deixar do jeito que pediu kkkk mas eu tentei.
2. 00:14:475 (1) - What a bad position you find to put this note. The fact of it's being a strong beat, makes a bad decision stack on (4) head, cuz it makes a ''tight'' patterning, what is not the intention for a strong beat part. Maybe you could move it too x:108 y:103 Ok
3. 00:23:808 (5) - Overmapped, there is currently no song on this note, deleting it would be the best choice. Ok
4. 00:35:808 (3) - Same thing here, slider head is overmapped, which is very bad. Just remove that slider and add a note where it should be slider end. Eu queria deixar isso intacto, posso até analisar depois e considerar mudar porque eu não vi muito problema aquí ou algo overmapped aquí, eu usei isso pra agitar um pouco mais a beatmap tentando de alguma forma deixar mais divertida e de acordo com a música (no caso com o vocal).
5. 00:52:075 (3) - This NC is useless at this part, it doesn't represent nothing in special. Ok

Good! But getting some more mods wouldn't hurt :3 The only diff I think it really need improvements here is Normal, try to get more mods and feedback to improve more and more your map