1. Easy (1,51 stars, 87 notes)
2. Hard (2,47 stars, 195 notes)
3. Insane (2,98 stars, 244 notes)
4. Normal (1,83 stars, 138 notes)

Chocox wrote:

Hey , as requested from queue :>

General

1. BPM and Offset : ✓
2. Aimod : × , Kiai isn't snapped.
   
3. Kiai : × , see above ^
4. Metadata : ✓
5. Hitsound : ✓
6. Video : ✓

Normal

1. Just like to state my overall impression of this difficulty first. Don't be offended ._. . I think you dislike blankets , but at some point of the maps , objects looks better blanketed. Well , personally , I'm 'lazy' too , so I don't really 'care' about blankets , but I make it a point to use them as long as it makes the pattern solid. Below is a consolidated list of all the objects I think is better blanketed. Of course I'll only mention blankets in Easy / Normal (part of my policy). However , I suggest you don't change them , because it might ruin DS and make it extremely difficult to fix. Well, I just don't feel "I must have to do blankets" actually blankets is very nice here, but I'll don't add for now.
2. 00:01:674 (1,2,3)
3. 00:11:275 (2,3)
4. 00:13:675 (2,3,1)
5. 00:40:875 (3,5)
6. 00:12:475 (3,1) - Object too close , in Normal I suggest follow DS strictly. I think I followed now...
7. 00:30:075 (2) - Repeated rebound might confuse players at this level. I suggest so changing to 2 sliders instead. Okay changed to something.

Hard

1. The timing point added at this slider 00:00:075 (1) , I don't get the point of it. At first thought maybe it should be slider point acting as a clap sound but I don't hear it and see it and folder doesn't have this file. So I suggest remove. Oh my miss sorry for that.
   
2. 00:10:475 (1,2) - Overlapping these 2 doesn't make it fun to play tbh. That's a nice suggestion, but actually here I tried to do the players here get used to overlaps because there are a lot of on Insane. I'll try to adapt your suggestion later but I'll consider this for now.
3. 00:52:208 (2,3) - Same reason as above^ , the rest looks fine though. Okay, fixed.
4. 00:58:741 (2,1) - Overlapped makes it look really untidy. Shift 00:58:741 (2) , Ctrl-< and shift it more to the right. Changed to something that makes the pattern more clear.

Insane

1. 00:06:341 (1,2) - Weird transition imo , I suggest ctrl-g 00:06:875 (2) and shift it otherwise. Not really a weird transition, since map's flow and the pattern here works very nice and fun here in my opinion.
2. 00:10:875 (1) Unnecessary NC. Changed it.
3. 00:10:875 (1,1) - Not really anything huge to point out , but I'll prefer if both sliders are the same , like ctrl c ctrl v 00:10:875 (1) I didn't get your point here since they are the same here.
4. 00:23:808 (5) - I don't really hear anything here , of course I might be wrong , but it could be overmapped. Well, if I were following the rhythm here then yes I would be overmapping here (and the vocals the same thing) but I took the vocal here and made a 1/3 stream because feel some emptiness without 5. And in this case, overmapping here isn't wrong at all since you're also following the rhythm here and trying to make your diff harder.
5. 00:26:075 (2) - This middle rebounding part same reasoning as ^. ^
6. 00:28:475 (4,1) - There is a distinct sound at the end of 00:28:474 (4) and 00:28:875 (1) , this suggests notes to symbolise them , jump suits too , I suggest you remove the rebound of 00:28:474 (4) , and a note here 00:28:741. Fixed.
7. 00:30:075 (4,1) - Same as above ^ Flow between the two sliders works nice here in this case, so keeping.
8. 01:04:875 (1,4) - I suggesting shifting 01:04:874 (1) down abit , the small overlap bothers me. Fixed to something.

Overall

1. Well ... I guess that's all from me. After a hiatus from modding , it might not be of good quality , so forgive me on that. No problem, you gave good suggestions!
2. I like this mapset overall , and a kawaii song!! <3
3. Good luck~ !

Moeka wrote:

Just a short mod for insane
00:09:275 (4,1) - too far imo Jump here to add fun to the pattern. But I'll consider changing
00:14:341 (5,1) - jump too big for no reason.. ^
00:42:875 - missed clap fixed
00:58:875 (1) - nc really needed? NC here to demonstrate that it is different from the others patterns.
01:04:741 (3,1) - too much spacing imo Fixed to something
01:18:341 (1,2) - confusing spacing.. Isn't confusing imo

well after testplay these are what I found

Hi Im Nathan wrote:

hi from my modding queue

[normal]
01:25:275 (2) - shouldnt this note be at 01:25:141 ? If I made a pattern with a note here, beginner player may not be able to read this note.

[Hard]
00:22:075 (3,1) - reduce the DS a tiny bit? Its one of the biggest in the map and the music doesnt really signify it The jump here is representing the strong instrumental sound, I'll consider changing but not now.
00:39:675 (1) - This slider doesnt really match the music entirely imo . It just seems to act like a cheap combo breaker on top of that, since it is only a hard diff Changed to something
01:08:475 (3) - ^ ^

[Insane]
Couldnt find anything

well thats all from me, this map should be bubbled imo, have a star to boost your chances. I hope this mod was useful, GL

BetaStar wrote:

From my queue

• 
  Insane

1. 00:04:341 (4,5) - Why not blanket like one before (00:04:341 (4,5) - ) to make it look even and nicer? okay
2. 00:06:875 (2) - Bend it the other way to flow nicer? I prefer the actual pattern here, works better with next pattern.
3. 00:11:275 (1) - I would bend this more and blanket with 00:11:675 (2) - . fixed
4. 00:22:341 (1) - ^ with 00:22:875 (2) -
5. 00:26:075 (2,3,4) - This flows nicer http://puu.sh/lezco/201e97cb70.jpg fixed
6. 00:39:675 (3,1) - To be honest, this is too far & and hard to get. I would go half-stack this. fixed
7. 00:53:541 (3,4,5) - This rhythm doesn't really fit. fixed
8. 01:08:475 (2) - Wrong side half stack. Would make more sense if it is the other way http://puu.sh/lezAd/2442587714.jpg
9. 01:13:541 (1,2) - You can make these looks better by polishing more. To be honest, 01:14:075 (2) - doesn't look fitting :c adjusted a bit here
10. 01:25:275 (2) - Would be nice if you curve this as one before( 01:24:475 (1) - ) is curved and two before that is straight (01:22:875 (1,1) - ) Like... being more consistent. I really prefer current one, map looks nicer this way.

• 
  Hard

1. 00:00:075 (1) - There is already drum being near toward at end of the first slider at (00:00:341). You should compensate for this. Changed the pattern here, but not sure if I get your suggestion here or not...
2. 00:10:875 (2) - Maybe you can make it easier to read by doing this?: http://puu.sh/lezTi/6857d906aa.jpg Fixed
3. 00:20:075 (1,2) - ^
4. 00:26:475 (3,4) - ^ Already easy to read imo
5. 00:52:208 (2,3) - ^
6. 01:05:675 (1,2,3) - ^
7. 00:30:475 (1) - I wouldn't tryple reverse suddenly. I would remove all the reverse and just put one more same length slider after this first one. I think this pattern works good at moment so no change
8. 00:39:541 (2) - Delete this and put slider starting at 00:39:275 and end at 00:39:541 Changed to another thing.
9. 00:55:275 (5) - Suddenly full-stack? I would just half stack to be more consistent as one right before was just half stack 00:53:675 (1,2) - Fixed
10. 01:00:741 (1,2) - ^
11. 01:00:341 (2,3) - Bit weird position... I would put somewhere... X:204, Y:244 fixed
12. 01:08:341 (2,3) - Half stack? current stack looks better imo
13. 01:20:341 (5) - ^ changed to something

• 
  Normal

1. Check this out (ONLY FIRST): http://puu.sh/leAqB/2e274464b0.jpg Actually this pattern plays good for normal, and this warning is just to alert me to follow 0,80x ds in previous pattern, if more people start to complain about this I'll change.
2. 00:46:475 (1) - Polish this slider a bit more. Okay, tried, hope I fixed right
3. 01:10:875 (4,5,6) - No reason for stacking the first two. Fixed

Sorry, I ran out of time when I finished modding [Hard] diff, so I couldn't go over for [Normal] as deeply as I liked to. Nice map and good luck!

iedesu wrote:

random mod

general:
no audioleadin? add 2000ms of it When we start to play the map there's already a significant break before map starts so no need to add it.

and nm diff, i can't mod this, because ds is too odd ;w;
use distance snap Erm... yeah I've used ds and isn't odd imo '--'

+keep nc, this is odd too ?


hard
00:32:075 (2,3,4,1,2) - too hard to read, fix this Follows the vocal and instrumental perfectly so... don't need to fix this pattern at moment imo

insane
00:47:275 (5) - blanket ok fixed

okay, overall mapset is fine, but you should keep ds and nc, very important if you want to rank this

good luck

NORMAL
-Some notes on 1/3 rythms like this song are missing (imo),you know.. when i
test this song,At this part 00:39:275 i think if you add 1 circle there,it should
fit the song because emptying 00:39:275 part was a little bit,, you know.. missing.

-(this part is only my opinion and it doesn't have anything to do with your mind set.so feel free to skip this if you think that i changed your map)
I think you've shouldn't end the slider's tail at the first tick of BPM's 00:58:875
example like this:

and you can add hit circle to make the slider starts at the first tick at 00:39:675 like this:


The rest of sliders that similar like this were good as they were.

"RANK THIS LOLI"

wuzzat wrote:

hey,seeing this Loliii Gals on #modhelp
just want to help a bit, but don't expect much okay,,
im no pro modder like others,

NORMAL
-Some notes on 1/3 rythms like this song are missing (imo),you know.. when i
test this song,At this part 00:39:275 i think if you add 1 circle there,it should
fit the song because emptying 00:39:275 part was a little bit,, you know.. missing.

-(this part is only my opinion and it doesn't have anything to do with your mind set.so feel free to skip this if you think that i changed your map)
I think you've shouldn't end the slider's tail at the first tick of BPM's 00:58:875
example like this:

and you can add hit circle to make the slider starts at the first tick at 00:39:675 like this:


The rest of sliders that similar like this were good as they were.

And i think i can only mod Normal mode,and for me (personal),hard diff and insane arrangement seems like there are something's not right or missing like
patterns,jumps,and reverse sliders.Sorry for my knowledge and happy mapping and Goodluck with your map

"RANK THIS LOLI"

Sky Future wrote:

hi~ mod start

Normal

00:06:075 (4,1) - Turn this inot Current works better for me

00:09:275 - add circle If I add a circle here beginner players may be confused about pattern and current already follow the music so...

00:13:675 (2,3,1) - blanket Kay~

00:14:475 (1,2,3) - ^ Don't see a reason to make a blanket here since it's already perfect imo, well will consider this for now

00:20:475 - add clap Whistle is better here because of a sweet sound in the end of slider on the music.

00:30:075 - again add clap Kay~

00:40:875 (4) - slider its long this end 00:41:541 - To make it easier made it long, your suggestion wasn't bad but prefer this current now.


offset not accurate
i think this offset 60 ^^ Current offset sounds better for me

Makyu wrote:

Oh wow, I forgot about this mod lol

Idealism wrote:

oi

Hard

01:00:341 (2) - não precisa de 2 notas aqui, apenas 1 Seguindo o instrumental aquí e acho a pattern bem mais completa da maneira atual.

Insane

00:23:808 (5) - nota desnecessária, dá pra ouvir que aqui são apenas 2 Overmap por razões pessoais, acho que a pattern ficaria bem mais divertida dessa maneira atual do que se eu fosse seguir o original. Gosto do jeito que o gás dessa pattern dá.
00:33:941 (1) - achei que a nota ficou meio tarde, passa ela pra cá: A parte que elas cantam"Chokkan wo", "Cho" começa no final do (3) em 00:33:541 e o "kkan wo" tem sua continuação nessa nota e slider stackado + próximo slider então não creio que esteja tardia, acho que está bem de acordo com a música.
00:35:675 (2) - nota desnecessária, você pode removê-la e ajeitar o slider ao lado: Não entendi o que quis dizer com desnecessária, talvez entenda o que você quis fazer aqui mas não o (1) sozinho não conseguiria seguir o ritmo e o vocal da música, a pattern iria ficar muito estranha sem ela aquí.
00:49:008 (2) - nota desnecessária, dá pra ouvir que teve uma pequena pausa no ritmo da música creio que a pattern ficaria mais interessante da maneira atual, sua sugestão é boa e segue muito bem a música mas é a mesma razão que eu dei em 00:23:808.
01:19:008 (3) - ^
01:21:408 (2) - ^

Chibi Maruko wrote:

Hi. From my queue

What the heck 10 days silenced :/ Have been hard get mods for my maps recently ;--;

Hard

1. 00:48:341 (6) - NC here? Don't think if a NC here would be good

Insane

1. 00:12:741 (1) - I think this overlap doesn't look nice. Blanket or sliderwave slider or something Changed
2. 00:25:541 (1) - This too ^
3. 00:39:541 (2,3) - Maybe, stack is fine I prefer don't stack these two, looks good for me imo
4. 00:46:075 (1) - Why NC here. This are no reason to make new nc Changed

Ok, gl with ur map \:D/
sorry /me run away