1. Non-Linear (5.4 stars, 1086 notes)
2. Remap (5.4 stars, 1130 notes)

Left wrote:

From M4M~~

First, check AiMod pls~ and fix them
and like Bigjoe97's opinion, i'd add a note at the very beginning... I would but the note just gets deleted immediately.

Marathon

00:00:167 (1,2,3,4) - ugly square.....i think you should fix it fixed
00:05:139 (1,2,3,4,5) - not straight i think fixed
00:06:167 (3) - i think it's not intentional overlap... fixed
00:13:196 (8,9) - Blanket fixed
00:18:682 (8,9) - Blanket fixed
00:23:482 (5,6) - Blanket would be more pretty i think fixed
00:24:682 (1,2) - these two overlapped..you did it intentionally i guess, but i think it looks a bit dirty fixed
00:25:368 (3,4) - these too fixed
00:25:711 (4,6) - overlapped..looks not good too fixed
00:48:682 (7,1) - perfectly stack this slider's tail and circle http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3854464 example fixed
00:55:196 (2,3) - i think it's not good for playing fixed
01:15:425 (5,7) - not good shape i think http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3854476 and beat is strong, so you'd be better to use more distance fixed
02:30:511 (10,1) - intentional? fixed
02:33:597 (1,2) - it's my suggestion, http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3854510 symmetry fixed
02:36:253 (8,1) - i think to hard to pass here with no combobreak....cursor speed should be VERY fast here....i think it's 7star speed fixed
02:40:454 (6,7) - I can't mention it all, overlap like this makes your map looks dirty...you should consider overlap fixed
02:51:081 (4,6) - perfectly stack it would be better fixed
03:53:053 (1,1) - same reason as 02:36:253 (8,1) fixed
04:49:710 (8) - how about using same slider shape with 04:49:368 (7) - this? fixed
04:50:568 (11,2) - perfectly stack it would be better fixed

Good Luck!

bigjoe97 wrote:

Marathon

I'd add a note at the very beginning (-4 ms), since right now you're starting the map in the middle of a measure and that makes it really hard to figure out the beat.

00:00:167 (1,2,3,4) - Is this supposed to be a square? It'd be cool if it was. fixed
00:13:367 (9) - Ctrl+G for better circular flow. fixed
00:18:853 (9) - See above. fixed
00:23:482 (5) - Blanket 00:23:825 (6)? fixed
00:26:225 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - I'd mirror this whole pattern so that the stack is on the right with increasing jumps to the left, since right now you're increasing size and then suddenly after 00:27:254 (11) the cursor barely moves at all to transition into 00:27:425 (1). If you mirrored this, the transition into the next slider would be a perfect extension of the back and forth motion that you're already doing. fixed
00:32:653 (4,5,6,7) - This is a bit too exaggerated, iimo. Accelerating streams are cool, but this just looks odd. fixed
00:36:510 (3,4,5) - I see the style you're trying to go for with the long sliders. It looks like you're already doing this, but I'll say it anyway - if you're going to map like this, make sure you silence (or quiet) ALL the slider ends, since there's nothing in the music at any of the sliderends to suggest a hitsound. fixed
00:57:510 (14) - There's nothing in the music here. Delete this. fixed
01:08:482 (14) - See above. fixed
01:40:110 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - The way this looks while playing is sweet. Love it. Thanks!
01:24:339 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - I feel like this whole section up to the bass drop could benefit from a lowered SV, since the song is much calmer in this part than during the rest of the song. fixed
01:41:482 (1) - If you're going to use this hitsound, please please silence the slider ends. fixed
01:36:681 - Music naturally works in groups of fours (at least in this genre). Have something clickable here so there are four slider hitsounds before moving to clickable objects instead of five, which is awkward and tripped me up several times. fixed
01:37:710 (7,8) - Why are these suddenly so close together after the increasingly large jumps? Move 01:37:882 (8) to 460,108 or so. fixed
01:49:025 (9,10,11,12) - Same thing that I said about 00:26:225, mirror these so that you don't have a sudden tiny movement after a bunch of big jumps. fixed
02:33:254 (9) - Ctrl+G for flow. Is this a copy/paste section? fixed
02:58:196 (15) - Nothing here in the music, delete. fixed
03:09:168 (14) - See above. fixed
04:41:311 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Same thing as at the beginning. fixed

Sweet map! The slider shapes are sliderbreak city, haha, but I like the way it plays a lot other than that. Glad you enjoyed it and thanks for the mod!

A r M i N wrote:

from M4M
although you didnt answer to the post yet i am going to mod cause i wanna be helpful ^^


04:51:308 (2) - maybe let this slider repeat itself only one time and then add another circle at 04:51:822 - fixed

notice how from 01:20:965 - there is some kinda background sound that gets louder and louder ? maybe add a spinner to 01:24:051 - ok

01:25:422 - same as above to 01:29:536 - ok

i dont like how the sliders overlap like here 01:44:279 - or 01:45:608 - just move them a little bit so they are right next to each other but dont let them overlap (just my thoughts tho other ppl may like it) see also 01:55:551 - this looks ugly for me ^^ just try my tip and then you can decide what u like best

00:33:051 - add spinner to 00:35:365 - ok

02:35:451 (10,11) - maybe remove those 2 ? idk No change because it's going off of the drum and the synth

Good luck ^^

SHADIC_ wrote:

A r M i N wrote:

from M4M
although you didnt answer to the post yet i am going to mod cause i wanna be helpful ^^


04:51:308 (2) - maybe let this slider repeat itself only one time and then add another circle at 04:51:822 - fixed

notice how from 01:20:965 - there is some kinda background sound that gets louder and louder ? maybe add a spinner to 01:24:051 - ok

01:25:422 - same as above to 01:29:536 - ok

i dont like how the sliders overlap like here 01:44:279 - or 01:45:608 - just move them a little bit so they are right next to each other but dont let them overlap (just my thoughts tho other ppl may like it) see also 01:55:551 - this looks ugly for me ^^ just try my tip and then you can decide what u like best

00:33:051 - add spinner to 00:35:365 - ok

02:35:451 (10,11) - maybe remove those 2 ? idk No change because it's going off of the drum and the synth

Good luck ^^

Thanks for the mod! Will get to modding your map ASAP!

erictran0 wrote:

hi, how are you. from m4m

Marathon

00:00:051 (1) to 00:09:479 (8) - Why no hitsounds? couldn't find any that I liked and felt would fit
00:00:222 (1) - Remove NC
00:03:136 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - Do these notes form stars? It'd be great if they did. They kind of do...
00:11:022 (1) - I think this should be a jump fixed
00:26:279 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - imo I don't like this pattern, and this also appears in 04:41:365 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) Will change if I get more complaints
00:32:965 (7) - Insert break after note or add spinner already done
00:35:708 (1) to 00:45:308 (6), 00:47:022 (2) to 01:13:765 (4) - Why no hitsounds? couldn't find any that I liked and felt would fit
00:43:765 (1,2) - I don't think slider end of 00:44:279 (2) should overlap slider beginning of 00:43:765 (1).
00:47:022 (2) - NC fixed
01:08:622 (1) - This slider should be farther than the last one. can't fix due to blanketing
01:18:222 (1) - Insert break after note or add spinner fixed
01:24:736 (2) - ^ fixed
01:36:051 (1) - Decrease the amount of times the slider repeats and add some notes fixed
01:40:336 (1) - Not very readable? fixed
02:03:479 (1) to 02:12:908 (5) - C+P'd 01:41:536 (1) to 01:50:965 (5). is there anything wrong with that? it's just my style... this is a rhythm game after all
02:36:308 (8,1) - Distance spacing too high?
02:36:393 (1) to 03:14:451 (4) - Why no hitsounds? couldn't find any that I liked and felt would fit
02:44:451 (1,2) - Similar to 00:43:765 (1,2)
03:18:908 (1) - Insert break after note or add spinner fixed
03:25:765 (4) - ^ fixed
03:31:593 (5) - NC fixed
03:33:993 (5) - ^ fixed
03:36:908 (7) - ^ fixed
03:39:479 (8) - ^ fixed
03:52:508 (9) - ^?
04:04:079 (1,1) - Distance spacing too high?
04:15:051 (1,1) - ^
04:24:736 (5) - NC?
04:37:079 (1,2) - They're so close together. Higher distance spacing please. fixed
04:59:193 (1) - Insert green ticks such that the spinner's "spinning" sound will be gradually silent. fixed

Overall, you barely used additional hitsounds, and looks like you C+P'd material (not saying that's bad or anything). didn't use more because I didn't feel that the song needed it...

wow you must like sliders as well

Well, good luck on your beatmap and enjoy the rest of your day!

HighTec wrote:

Hi, saw this floating around in #modhelp and was bored, so enjoy the mod

!!!Singletapped almost everything!!! (it was quite hard to sightread >.<)

Marathon

General:
-Maybe change the diff name to something more interesting than 'Marathon' changed to "Non-Linear" :3
-Change the OD to 8,5 fixed
-Most of the sliders should be bent a little more, or just made straight, it seems a little useless Will change if I get another complaint, because I really like the gentle curve of the sliders...
-Some mistakes are repetitive, try to see what I pointed out and correct that troughout the songfixed what I saw/had time to do

More specific:
00:09:651 (9) - NC (because the jumps get harder and hitsounding begins) fixed
00:26:279 (5) - NC to suggest the beginning for the jump pattern fixed
00:32:279 (14,1) - Maybe make the jump bigger fixed
00:50:451 (3,5) - This overlapping >.< I like this though ;-;
00:56:965 (9) - NC fixed
01:07:936 (9) - ^ fixed
01:18:222 (1) - Instead of this, make it change every white tick to follow the music better fixed
01:33:308 (1) - Make this edge a little sharper fixed
01:49:593 (12) - Sorry but this overlapping ;w; fixed
01:59:365 (5,1) - ^^^^ wasn't intentional but I kinda like this overlap...
02:11:536 (12) - I think you get the point fixed
02:13:079 (6) - NC fixed
02:20:965 (3) - Maybe make this slider more interesting will edit shape if I get another complaint
02:56:965 (5) - NC fixed
02:57:651 (10) - ^ fixed
03:08:622 (9) - ^ fixed
03:18:908 (1) - The same thing as with the other one I suggested earlier fixed
03:21:651 (1) - Start this right after the slider so that is follows the singing (because I think you did that the whole time) fixed
03:27:136 (1) - Start this one earlier too (follows the song better imo) fixed
03:52:508 (9) - NC fixed
04:12:222 (12) - Just pointing it out again ;w; fixed
04:21:651 (3) - Also make this more interesting, just a normal bow seems quite boring will edit shape if I get another complaint
04:41:365 (5) - NC fixed

Overall nice map to play, but just some mistakes that can break the gameplay, so pointed those out.
I hope I wasn't rude and good luck approving it, I see some true potential Thanks a ton for the random mod!

_ Hatsune Miku wrote:

YO M4M!
Huge thanks for the new background!

New BG?

if you Hold in mind

suggestion add Whistle

1. 00:00:736 (5) - 00:01:422 (8) - 00:02:108 (11) - add Whistle slider End done
2. 00:02:793 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - odd number Circle add Whistle done
3. 00:05:193 (1,2,3,4,5) - (1),slider End add done
4. 00:05:879 (1) - 00:06:565 (4) - 00:07:251 (7) - and 00:07:936 (11) - slide end done

01:19:765 (1) - Spiner Start is 01:19:765 here done

02:13:079 ~ 02:14:365

1. 02:13:079 ~ 02:13:636 - short slider (look under pic)
2. 02:13:679 ~ 02:14:065 - (look under pic)
3. 02:14:108 ~ 02:14:365 - slider

Doesn't quite sound right, and doesn't quite make sense rhythmically

okay done Huge thanks for the mod! Will get to modding your map as soon as possible!

Zectro wrote:

Yo! M4M from your queue!

[Non-Linear]
00:07:936 (11) - Overlaps 00:07:251 (7,8) - , and doesn't flow that well, I'd suggest changing it's position fixed... i think...
00:12:222 (5,6) - You could blanket these fixed
00:24:393 (9,1,2,3) - This flows terrible! fixed... i think...
00:26:279 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This pattern is honestly pretty meh fixed... i think...
00:27:993 (2,3) - Blanket I suppose fixed
00:32:451 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This stream looks kinda bad fixed
00:36:565 (3,4,5) - This looks awful fixed... i think...
00:39:822 (4,5) - This overlap is ugly aswell fixed... i think...
00:42:736 (5) - Ew this slider shape fixed
00:43:251 (6,7,8,1) - This is preeeetty weird s: Not quite sure how to fix that
00:56:279 (4,5,6,7,8) - Please make this look better fixed... i think...
01:35:365 (5) - Anchor point in the middle please fixed... i think...
01:36:051 (1) - ^ fixed... i think...
01:37:936 (10,12) - Both same shape please fixed
01:45:651 (6) - This one looks bad Friend of mine who's good at mapping, told me that I should blanket it that way...
01:51:822 (9) - Is 2 back/forths too long! fixed
01:55:251 (1,2) - This looks kinda bad, at least make them the same shape if you decide to keep this fixed... i think...
01:57:993 (1) - Looks bad aswell fixed... i think...
02:13:765 (6) - Also too long! You could end it at 02:14:236 - and put a note underneath it at 02:14:279 - fixed
02:17:193 (1,2) - Looks bad fixed... i think...
02:19:251 (8,9) - Use equal spacing for this and 02:19:593 (10,11) - please, also do that for any other times you use this pattern in the map, I'll not mention more of these fixed
02:37:251 (3,4) - Looks bad fixed... i think...
02:43:422 (5) - This shape looks terrible again! Looks like a 2009 slider haha fixed
02:56:965 (5,6,7,8,9) - Please make this look better fixed
04:04:079 (1,1) - This is way too difficult to hit fixed
04:36:736 (11,12,13,14) - Looks very bad fixed

Sorry for so many visual things! But you should really focus on that more for now
Thank you so much for the mod! Will get to modding your map ASAP!
Good luck!