THANNNKSCrystilonZ wrote:
Still sick but w/e
Bg makes me blind I need fluffy stuff wat
Artist is probably wrong. Japanese names contain no spaces I think. Uhhhh okie dokie
Red and pink is too similar. combo 3 and 4 They look different in game rather than in colour selection screen
[Pop!]
00:00:382 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - several problems
- a bit disturbed that this is just the intro and you're spacing this pattern equally/more than the kiai Nerfed.
- 00:01:543 (7) - as it stands rn is a weird spacing drop and goes against the overall acceleration of the pattern. You can try something like reducing the spacing on beats that lack the main melody --> 00:01:543 (7,9,3) - 00:01:156 (5,6) - is much stronger of a sound than this and I wanted to help emphasize that by reducing the spacing before and after.
- 00:02:511 (3,4) - uhh welp I don't rly agree with this one lol. Is (4) that important to be spaced that far? rn it's on par with 00:35:995 (6,1) - for some reason I don't know] Nerfed.
- 00:05:221 (1) - has an echo on it. You can either highlight this difference by replacing this with 2 circles but either way is fine for me Yeah but the echo isnt part of the main rhythm and wasnt mapped in any other difficulty.
[Hard]
- 00:35:092 (2,3) - those are definitely 1/8s lol Listened at 25% this are actually /14 but changed.
- 00:15:866 (4,5,6) - and these are definitely 1/4s Changed.
- 00:19:027 (6,7) - and these are 1/8s See above
- 00:22:124 (6,7) - 1/8s ^
- 00:30:769 (5,6,7) - 00:32:317 (5,6,7) - explain the difference between these two pls First one maps drums second one maps main rhythm
- 00:30:382 (3) - spacing drop is too harsh to be considered as spacing variation 00:30:188 (2,3,4) - I like how these three as a pattern catch the rhythm.
- 00:33:092 (1,2) - 00:39:285 (1,2) - 00:37:350 (7,8) - 00:31:156 (7,8) - these stacks seem to be at the points where the main melody isn't playing is it? I mean it's the only justification I can think of xd. However, these bring us back to the consistency between these stacks and 00:30:769 (5,6,7) - 00:38:898 (7) - 00:36:963 (5,6,7) - . Shouldn't they be less emphasized because of the lack of main melody like the stacks? Yes these were stacked due to lack of main melody.00:30:769 (5,6,7) has two solid bass drums, - 00:38:898 (7) is still mapping the main rhythm with that one circle.00:36:963 (5,6,7) and this has the two solid bass hits. Of course I could just map these all as stacks, but that would get old and boring fast.
- 00:40:446 (5,1,2) - how am I supposed to tell that one is 1/2 and the other one is 1/4 lol Fixed
- also compare 00:40:059 (4,5) - 00:45:672 (2,3,4) - . Why is the spacing reduced on 00:46:253 (4) - 00:46:253 (4,5,6) - Because the "bass" gets lower, so why not reduce spacing.
- a bit sad that the verses look a bit like jump practice xd. I can't really find the correlation between the map and the song much. A bit here and there but they aren't consistent This is far from jump practice. Plenty of stacks, kick sliders, vibrate sliders and spacing differences present to help emphasize the music. And those elements definitely aren't present in any jump practice I've ever seen.
[Normal]
- Combos feel a bit too long for me Ill fix if more people mention.
- 00:02:124 (7) - use this rhythm please i beg you 00:01:156 (4,5) - Okay
- 00:09:092 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - R u SurE YOu wANt TO maP TheSe WEaK iNSecTS wItH CirCLeS maTe? RrrrRRRrRRrrrRrRRrRR wHy dOnT YOu dO tHiS On thE maIn MeLOdY? Circles arent only for emphasis. Here, I've used circles to represent short sounds but sliders to map long sounds within the main melody.
- 00:14:511 (1,2,3) - 10/10 aesthetics. Perfect symmetry. Excellent blanket. Marvelous. I actually didn't like that all that much but thanks haha
- 00:20:705 (1) - at least a reversing 1/2 slider please? fits with both the main melody and the thing you're following if you ask me Yeah you're right, but I've mapped that background melody everytime and just kept consistent. But uh, I wouldn't be able to change it without remapping everything.
- 00:39:672 (2,3,4) - is it just me or the angles are a bit weird here lol Its an eblow slider fan so
This is not rushed at all
- 00:01:350 (3,4) - why are they not 1/1 and 1/2 reverse respectively instead lol. You tell me I dont understand.. I just captured the loudest of the xylophone and went for a break off since it was only the intro.
- 00:35:414 (5) - 1 circle should be enough. Emphasis on 00:35:801 (6) - . Or reduce 00:35:801 (6) - to one circle idk. Rn they feel a bit all over the place with no emphasis at all Following drums that lead into the chorus
- 00:45:479 (1) - Rly? a break? lol map eeeet Ah woops I never finished HAHA
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