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Sugar Donut - Fury

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Zerostarry
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on October 9, 2010 at 3:45:15 PM

Artist: Sugar Donut
Title: Fury
Source: DJMax
Tags: Krisom orz
BPM: 135
Filesize: 9578kb
Play Time: 01:37
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4.83 stars, 189 notes)
  2. Krisom's Easy (1.46 stars, 85 notes)
  3. Normal (3.19 stars, 117 notes)
Download: Sugar Donut - Fury
Download: Sugar Donut - Fury (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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P-Please be gentle with my map... >///<

Uguuuu~
Last edited by Zerostarry , edited 16 times in total.
Wizard Of Orz
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Joined May 2008
Wizard Of Orz
worst map
bmin11
5,438 posts
Joined October 2008
bmin11
offset: 322

[Hard]
00:44:988 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This is off symmetry. Might want to fix that
00:48:544 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
01:08:099 (1,2,3) - The previous pattern sounded much better. Wanna fix it?
01:20:544 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This is off symmetry. Might want to fix that
01:24:099 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
01:35:433 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Spacing. I really recommand you to fix this


Copy-pasting a huge chunk of the map doesn't seem like a good idea for a 1:36 long song. However, it's your choice
Zerostarry
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bmin11 wrote:

offset: 322

[Hard]
00:44:988 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This is off symmetry. Might want to fix that
00:48:544 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
01:08:099 (1,2,3) - The previous pattern sounded much better. Wanna fix it?
01:20:544 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This is off symmetry. Might want to fix that
01:24:099 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
01:35:433 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Spacing. I really recommand you to fix this


Copy-pasting a huge chunk of the map doesn't seem like a good idea for a 1:36 long song. However, it's your choice
Fixed.. added a bit more variety to the 2nd chorus, though I believe copy+paste should be more respected, iNiS does it all the time. I really don't think the offset is that early.. i know for one that my universal offset is early by around 10ms... but I don't think it's that early.
DJNightmare
882 posts
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DJNightmare
Can i make a guest diff? '_'
Starred for... DJMAX FTW!
Zerostarry
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DJNightmare wrote:

Can i make a guest diff? '_'
Starred for... DJMAX FTW!
Um, sure... but a few things:

1) Please make a map of quality; if your difficulty seems to drag down the ranking speed, i may remove it. Please be quick to fix any modder's suggestions and get back to me asap.
2) I already mapped normal and hard, you may map easy or insane. (Prefer easy)

I may seem like a douche about this, but I usually don't prefer guest difficulties... it just makes it a hassle for me to keep up with :|
James
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James
you should work at inis ^^ not map here ^^
Zerostarry
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James wrote:

you should work at inis ^^ not map here ^^
I wish i could :o
James2250
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James2250
Hey you ranked my map a few years ago, time to repay the favor ;)

-Your offset seems pretty late, I get 350
-Delete osb file in folder
-orz in tags? lol?
-Don't really like background resolution (black bars at top and bottom) Any resolution that is 4:3 works better, so I would try and find a new one or resize it nicely
-Looking at your normal...you need an easy
-Audio lead-in time isn't needed

Normal:
For these days that is a pretty small circle size for a Normal, make it 1 size bigger
00:11:036 (3) - new combo
00:12:369 (4,1) - try to avoid too many harsh jumps on a Normal
00:33:925 (11) - try to keep combos below 10 on Normal if possible
00:46:592 (1,2) - could be stacked under the slider slightly better
01:05:925 (4,1) - jump comment
01:13:481 (5) - new combo
01:15:258 (1) - end at 01:17:703? (the note is pretty close after for a Normal)
A pretty hard normal in general

Hard:
01:19:925 (4,1) - try and space these out further (anti jump doesn't play nicely)
01:23:480 (4,1) - ^
01:27:036 (4,1) - ^

*star*
Krisom
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Krisom
Feel free to refuse.

Download: Sugar Donut - Fury (Zerostarry) [Krisom's Easy].osu

Don't forget to add me to tags... ...whait, why is "orz" in tags D:?!
Anwyays, I'll mod the other diffs later, just remind me ingame or I'll forget :v
Zerostarry
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James' suggestions complete.
Krisom's Easy added.

Woo~
aRiskOfRain
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General;

Got an .osb there.

Easy;

Hey the offset should be 350 here too.
01:37:036 (1) - 1/4 later?

Normal;

00:35:683 (4,5) - eww get rid of that overlap
01:18:572 onwards - Could you horizontally flip this or something?

Hard;

00:36:127 - Circle here?
00:41:683 (1,2,3,4) - Up a grid? y'know so the 2 is on the 5
01:25:572 (1,2,3,4) - 1/4 forward, srs.
Zerostarry
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Fixfixfixfixfix

Also whenever I upload it the .osb magically appears there again

wtf is this shit
Agnes
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Agnes
Did an IRC mod. Only found one issue on Hard and that was to just flip a pattern. Woo.

I'd bubble if I wasn't so paranoid. Well done. <3

EDIT: lolol it turned into +8 with my star
On a serious note, I'll wait before I bubble. >_>;
Larto
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Larto
Overall:
More hitsounds?
Place preview point on 00:43:016 - ?
Add kiai starting on 00:43:016 - ?

Hard:
01:33:683 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3) - This confused me SO MUCH when I was playing. I don't know what you could do about it, but it's hardly readable on your first play =[

Normal:
01:33:683 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - This is a little less weird, but still weird.

Easy:
yeah okay i guess
Mashley
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Mashley
-10 to the offset or so
Zerostarry
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Awaiting bubble 8-)
Lybydose
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Lybydose
I got 346 offset.
Larto
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Larto
Fair enough
James2250
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James2250
Background max is 1024x768 (yours is 1365x768) Re-downloaded and asked another person just to confirm I have the current one

(I am guessing audio lead-in is for video? Download speed is annoying so didn't download it)
Add krisom to tags on all difficulties

Hard:
00:33:900 (5,1) - don't really like the anti jump here
00:41:011 (5,1) - ^

Call me back for rebubble
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