T-Mac wrote:

[Hard]

00:16:337 (4) - 有啥办法能把这个slidertick的声音弄的不那么明显吗，slidertick这个地方感觉不应该发出这样的声音啊

Kencho wrote:

[Hard]

1. 01:27:894 (1,2) - 這種堆疊不太建議，可以把2放到x332 y256的位置

Sakaue Nachi wrote:

给偶像射够12个

Shad0w1and wrote:

[Insane]
00:01:980 (1,3) - overlap阴影，感觉还是隔开点好 好
01:03:614 (1) - 感觉可以修一下 好

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02:51:007 (3) - 无重音支撑高DS 我挪个位置

Narcissu wrote:

我覺得這些都是必須改的東西才寫下來，六連打常見於前置切分音把八連打去掉了兩個，偶爾的一個超高DS用在這種新手向的圖裏面只會讓人不悅……其他次一點的像02:03:147 (1,2,3,4,5) - 跨長白線的五連等明顯是缺乏經驗而下的節奏我都憋到肚子裏面去了…… 什么新手图 这明明是DT图 这种五连我觉得还好啊 不是没有见过 替我问候你的肚子

Zero__wind wrote:

其实我为什么听不懂你们在说什么
01:04:781 (1) - 这里不是7连改5连么 哪里来的什么6啊4啊的 我也云里雾里的

Normal
AR建议低一点 比如4.5什么的 毕竟是最低难度而且又慢歌 就4了
漏掉的drum sample：
00:01:821 -
00:08:516 -
00:12:719 -
00:15:987 -
01:54:743 (2) -
02:30:929 - normal换drum 参考第一段和第三段里相似的地方
02:44:236 -
02:47:039 (2) -
04:05:715 -
漏掉的normal sample：
00:45:404 -
比较有必要补的whistle：
02:26:727 - 参考其他段类似的位置
02:49:140 (6) -

02:55:676 (3) - 这个节奏实在还是有点要命…… 最好就看下我Hard的下法吧 从02:56:143 - 这里起一个3/4的折返滑条 或者就直接全白线都可以
03:00:345 (5) - 这里感觉缩短成1/1 尾巴上加个鼓点更舒服一些
04:14:120 (5) - 考虑加个NC 不加 其他都改了

Insane
01:04:898 (2) - 这个地方我觉得把它删了 拆成一个单点 后面一个五连进kiai舒服一些 反正01:04:898 (2) - 这里也没什么音 哎 我改完了才看见这条mod 我们心灵相通！

Kencho wrote:

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[Normal]

1. 00:06:649 (3,4) - 可以再包好一點，看縮圈 改
   
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   02:55:676 (3,4) - 像上面01說的那樣會比較好 改
   
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[Insane]

1. HP-1良心點 No
   
   
2. 00:05:481 - 個人認為加個圈比較好 但是根本没音阿……
   
   00:12:952 - ^
   
   02:26:493 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 個人認為這樣的節奏更符合歌曲 打死白线起三连
   
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祝順利起飛~

Xinely wrote:

come as karen's req

• 
  Hard

1. 00:42:602 (1) - everyone still can notice this 1/1 stacked so no need to give nc here ok removed
2. 00:54:275 (1) - somehow it looks a bit too curvy for me that makes the flow a bit unwell too for me. i would say make a bit smoother like middle curve node 376,112 fixed
3. 01:17:388 (2) - similar with above, i would say smoother a bit with move middle curve node to 72,188 ok
4. 02:01:046 (4) - nazi but imo flow feels smoother if move the tail to 396,124 so it pointing out the head of next slider fine
5. 02:32:330 (3) - comparing with next slider curve level, this slider is too curvy too for me. hmm smoother it a bit with middle curve node 104,224 done
6. 03:30:695 (2) - just my taste but imo ctrl+g will give a nice jump to next slider for emphasis the cymbal seems too much for this point
7. 04:00:579 (4) - since this slider's head has cymbal, how about make a mini jump for this slider? just move to 456,260 is enough imo not a real strong beat, I think it's fine as it currently is. moving it to the right will make the coming jump a bit too big
8. 04:15:053 (3) - all of them (head tail repeat) have cymbal musics so how about make mini jumps with 3 circles to emphasis the cymbals? for me cymbal mapped with something unclickable object feels something less sorry I kinda like this pattern

• 
  Insane

1. 00:45:871 (4) - not really sure what you follow but if you follow drum then the tail should be in 1/4, if follow the vocal then probably 1/6 changed to 1/4
2. 01:18:439 (7) - somehow the curve which goes to down like this feel not really well to play for me. at least i would like to make diagonal straight one or a bit to upward like 252,48 hmm, I like the current better. and it's not a big distance one so I think it doesn't matter THAT much
3. 01:32:330 (2) - nazi but the blanket can be better with 224,316 sure
4. 03:42:135 (6) - imo if you move to 171,169 it would be nicer to play as you can make a jump for next slider as the new stanza don't want to jump that far

i guess that's all

Karen wrote:

[Hard]

1. 降点ar？ 4.5到7 不是什么问题
2. 00:45:987 - 加个note做三连还是加个normal-hitnormal？这里音效没有这个clap有点奇怪 还好吧 加三连感觉有点难了 而且白线起的好蛋疼 我就是为了让这个感觉更自然一些所以把音效一样的叠在一起这样搞了两组
3. 00:50:073 (6) - 这角度转有点太直了，叠在00:48:906 (2) - 这个尾巴上好一点 哎这个 其实我一直有点犹豫 不过还是不太想改 不太喜欢那样叠在尾巴上感觉很难看
4. 03:08:750 (1) - 去掉NC，01:35:365 (7) - 这个没加，感觉这里你也不会加的样子。 嗯去掉了
5. 03:55:909 (2,3,4,5) - flow有点不好。。还好吧也不难打 好歹等间距 这个地方我就是想强调一下曲子的变化 一张图不能所有地方都顺着走的

[Insane]

1. 00:45:871 (4) - 感觉尾巴snap错了，1/4还是有音的。 之前就死活觉得鼓是1/6 莫名 反正改了
2. 03:19:723 - 放个二连+滑条多好，03:22:524 (1,2,3) - 这里都跟了 行吧 不是第一个提到的了

Xinely wrote:

come as karen's req

• 
  General

1. remove this pls http://puu.sh/lOWah/d8126ec499.png fixed

• 
  Normal

1. 00:47:505 (2) - i would say to remove this slider and change to circle in 00:47:738 - , as you can hear ur vocal is higher in this time rather than in 00:47:505 - I want to follow the drums here
2. 00:52:641 (4) - remove please, easiest diff asdfghjkl ok
3. 01:08:516 (3,4) - can replace to 1/2 slider repeat to make easier doesn't really matter, it's not that hard imo
4. 01:35:365 (8) - cant understand why 40% here. the cymbal sounds loud then i would say keep in 60% or 50% changed to 50%
5. 01:54:042 (1,3) - should avoid the stack in tail, the score (100, 300 or 50) keep hiding the (3)'s head so yep... must be avoided fixed
6. 01:57:077 (7) - or 01:57:544 - should be removed one of them since the rhythms are too long for newbies agreed
7. 02:05:948 (2) - same as 00:47:505 (2) -
8. 02:58:244 (2,3) - i would recommend to make them into 3/4 slider repeat. because from 02:58:244 (2,3,4) - 2 and 3 already have 3/4 gap which can make confuse to newbie, and then to catch 4 need different gap which is 1/2. i think that's really hard for beginner to read it properly changed, although I think it's already acceptable
9. 03:19:956 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - hope you can find a way to remove some 1/2 here (i would say 03:21:357 (3) - but not really sure to suggest) since the music is weak, mostly vocal but so many 1/2.. looks hard for me removed 3
10. 03:23:692 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - same as above same here
11. 04:11:551 (6,7) - can make easier with change to 1/2 slider repeat since all of them only follow piano, can be combine become 1 imo no I think it currently flows better

• 
  Insane

1. 00:01:980 (1) - just suggestion but making a jump for begining of circle object feels too sudden for me. at least i would like to ctrl+g this slider, let the circle mapped with normal spacing and a jump to next slider fixed

me and karen agree this normal looks quite hard as easiest d iff, if possible please nerf it a bit normal diff mod only for making the diff more friendly for newbies

i guess that's all

Karen wrote:

[General]

1. 我觉得你的翻唱里都可以在tag里加上“夏萝” 猴 要不要加01

[Normal]

1. 00:58:011 (1) - 沒必要弯这么一点，干脆都直着 画得更弯了一些
2. 00:51:941 (3) - 取消这个折返？连续1/2有点多，而且后面02:10:851 - 这里也是空的 删了后面的circle
3. 02:59:645 - 这个drum-whistle看起来是多余的 对 我自己也发现了
4. 03:32:797 (3,4,5) - 这三个距离看起来不应该一样的嘛 间距没什么问题吧 这样放flow好一些啊
5. 03:35:365 (1,2) - 这flow在低难度里感觉很别扭。。有点强行blanket的感觉。还好吧 因为1/2滑条很短 所以不怎么影响的
6. 03:58:711 (3,4) - ^
7. 04:12:952 (2,3,4,1) - 这种对新手来说不好打，建议换成1/2滑条。 这个没什么关系吧 我前面也有不少叠着的两连点呀

[Insane]

1. 02:55:209 (2) - ctrl+g跟前后都顺一点。 fixed
2. 02:56:143 (3,5) - 干脆叠好嘛 这个应该是mistake
3. 04:01:046 (1,2) - 这距离不应该那么远的，1是重要还加了finish，然后下一个突然跳有点奇怪 各种换位置

OniJAM wrote:

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Sharlo wrote:

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OniJAM wrote:

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