1. Easy (1.24 stars, 54 notes)
2. Hard (2.7 stars, 128 notes)
3. Insane (3.46 stars, 198 notes)
4. Normal (1.7 stars, 80 notes)
5. Sayonara (4.64 stars, 228 notes)

1. 00:25:460 (2,3) - 你呢到應該係跟vocal吧...如果係我覺得3無什麼必要，因為00:26:187 (4) - 00:26:914 (1) - 都算係一個字一個object吧... 更何況sliderend覺得吾係好fit
2. 01:44:051 (2,3) - ^

1. 01:12:551 (2,3,4) - 吾係好聽得出呢個triple的適合性
2. 01:44:914 (3) - 不如將個sliderend設係 01:45:460 ？個到有個beat所以應該比較fit，更何況vocal係個到完
3. 00:23:642 (4) - (suggestion) ctrl+g?

1. 01:11:642 (2,3) - ds

• [General]

1. Add AudioLeadIn 2000 or 1300?
2. gakusentoshi asterisk > gakusen toshi asterisk on tag
3. Add "The Asterisk War The Academy City on the Water" and "Academy Battle City Asterisk" for english and synonyms on tag?
   
   [Easy]
4. 01:34:914 (2) - Tail blanket with (1)?
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   
   [Normal]
5. 00:25:460 (2,3) - Not perfectly blanket i think
6. 00:29:823 (1) - 2nd point on -8, 220 to make it same with 00:31:278 (2) - ?
7. 01:19:278 (3,6) - Blanket
   
   [Hard]
8. 00:06:551 (1,2) - Blanket?
9. 00:09:460 (1) - Maybe start spinner on 00:09:096 - ?
10. 00:18:187 (1) - Make it curve on 00:19:278 - and 00:19:642 - to follow the piano sound
    
    SPOILER

    
11. 00:21:096 (2) - Something like before...
12. 00:32:005 (5,1) - Not a perfect blanket, imo...
13. 00:38:551 (1) - Better make it symmetry i think
14. 00:41:096 (2,3) - Blanket
    
    [Insane]
15. 00:41:096 (2,3) - Blanket?
16. 01:25:096 (1,2) - ^
17. 01:33:642 (8,1) - ^
    
    [Sayonara]
18. 00:13:642 (4,5) - Blanket
19. 00:38:551 (1) - Just my probelm :< looks ugly for me... make it symmetry?
20. 00:41:278 (3,1) - Not perfectly blanket
21. 01:25:096 (1,2) - ^

StarrStyx wrote:

First 030
柚子激速作圖工廠香港有限公司

[Sayonara]

1. 00:25:460 (2,3) - 你呢到應該係跟vocal吧...如果係我覺得3無什麼必要，因為00:26:187 (4) - 00:26:914 (1) - 都算係一個字一個object吧... 更何況sliderend覺得吾係好fit
2. 01:44:051 (2,3) - ^

[Insane]

1. 01:12:551 (2,3,4) - 吾係好聽得出呢個triple的適合性 豐富節奏 以後有問題再改~~
2. 01:44:914 (3) - 不如將個sliderend設係 01:45:460 ？個到有個beat所以應該比較fit，更何況vocal係個到完
3. 00:23:642 (4) - (suggestion) ctrl+g? 唔記得左有無ctrl+g 所以答唔到你

[Easy]

1. 01:11:642 (2,3) - ds

呢個map太clean啦，mod吾到;w;

RzHr wrote:

M4M

• [General]

1. Add AudioLeadIn 2000 or 1300?
2. gakusentoshi asterisk > gakusen toshi asterisk on tag
3. Add "The Asterisk War The Academy City on the Water" and "Academy Battle City Asterisk" for english and synonyms on tag?
   
   [Easy]
4. 01:34:914 (2) - Tail blanket with (1)?
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   
   [Normal]
5. 00:25:460 (2,3) - Not perfectly blanket i think
6. 00:29:823 (1) - 2nd point on -8, 220 to make it same with 00:31:278 (2) - ?
7. 01:19:278 (3,6) - Blanket
   
   [Hard]
8. 00:06:551 (1,2) - Blanket?
9. 00:09:460 (1) - Maybe start spinner on 00:09:096 - ?
10. 00:18:187 (1) - Make it curve on 00:19:278 - and 00:19:642 - to follow the piano sound
    
    SPOILER

    
11. 00:21:096 (2) - Something like before...
12. 00:32:005 (5,1) - Not a perfect blanket, imo...
13. 00:38:551 (1) - Better make it symmetry i think deliberately here
14. 00:41:096 (2,3) - Blanket
    
    [Insane]
15. 00:41:096 (2,3) - Blanket?
16. 01:25:096 (1,2) - ^
17. 01:33:642 (8,1) - ^
    
    [Sayonara]
18. 00:13:642 (4,5) - Blanket
19. 00:38:551 (1) - Just my probelm :< looks ugly for me... make it symmetry? deliberately here
20. 00:41:278 (3,1) - Not perfectly blanket
21. 01:25:096 (1,2) - ^

Sangzin wrote:

M4M~

[Sayonana]

• 
  AR 9? Since this map is CS5 i think ar9 is too slow
  00:08:005 (5) - Whistle on head
  00:12:005 (5) - Delete whistle
  00:13:823 (5) - Whistle on head
  00:35:642 (1,2) - This jump is too small compared with 00:35:823 (2,3) - deliberately, want speed up between these note
  00:38:551 (1) - You can use two anchors to make S sliders. ex i like now
  01:25:096 (1) - End this slider on 01:25:642 so sound is natural imo

[Insane]

• 
  00:05:096 (5) - NC
  00:12:369 (5) - ^
  00:53:823 (4) - ^
  01:01:823 (3) - doesn't that have potential offsceen? fine on 4:3 is ok
  01:22:914 (3,4) - These sliders feels bad to me, Make a stream or same pattern with 01:11:278 (2,3,4) -
  01:45:869 (4) - move light more a little bit to avoid overlap

[Hard]

• 
  00:02:187 (3,4) - This sliders have different pattern with first patterns.
  00:12:369 (1) - Down the second anchor to make more natural slider
  00:32:732 (1) - Looks it has potential offscren. How about this? fine on 4:3
  00:38:551 (1) - You can make this sliders with the method I mentioned at Sayonara diff. want keep this kind of slider

[Normal]

• 
  00:06:551 (1) - Look. It's really dangerous that I really recommend you to fix.
  01:16:369 (4,5) - How about this? Seems good imo.

hard to read imo

[Easy]

• 
  Seems nothing to mod.

Hope my mod will be helpful. GL!

Hathz wrote:

like the song here is a mod :3

[General]

1. I think offset is too early (around +17 seems perfect to me)

[Sayonara]

1. AR9.3 too high IMO but it's good at kiai part some pattern
2. 00:13:642 (4,5) - Imperfect blanket
3. 00:58:914 (4) - Make the straight starting part of the slider a bit longer, it looks a bit derpy right now .w.
4. 01:17:459 (6) - Object's end is not snapped
5. 01:44:596 (3,4) - These are too close it was hard to read that slowdown
6. 01:46:778 (1) - Reduce volume at the end of slider? (applies to all diffs)

[Insane]

1. 00:12:369 (5,6) - Blanket? :3
2. 00:53:823 (4) - NC
3. 01:22:914 (3,4) - Stream instead? Or a triple into 1/8 slider, I just think the current pattern looks kinda messy
4. 01:25:096 (1) - Shorten this slider by 1/8
5. 01:33:642 (8,1) - Imperfect blanket
6. 01:44:051 (2,3,4) - I feel at least 2 and 3 are slightly too close due to the slowdown

[Hard]

1. 00:15:278 (3) - Improve that curve to be a more accurate circle
2. 00:25:460 (5,6) - Blanket? .3. don't want blanket here
3. 00:32:005 (5,1) - Imperfect blanket
4. 00:41:096 (2,3) - ^

[Normal]

1. 00:06:551 (1) - I might be considered offscreen but I'm not sure, regardless probably best to change it

[Easy]

1. I got nothing .w.

Lots of my personal ideas in here but i hope you find at least some useful, good luck

1. If you find a video file, please add it! It would be better!
2. 01:46:793 (1) - Why don't you turn down the volume gradually at last spinner ? It would fit well with this kind of music. (To all diffs)

1. 00:08:020 - You added whistle sounds around this part. So try to add it to here!
2. 00:24:020 (1) - ,00:29:838 (1) - ,00:35:657 (1) - ^
3. 01:05:884 (1) - You took the vocal sounds at this part 01:01:111 (1,2) - . So you should consider taking same sound to that spinner's start. try to set from here 01:04:747 - or 01:04:838 -
4. 01:25:111 (4) - forgot to add a new combo from here ?

1. 00:06:566 (1) - no need to add new combo at here
2. 00:41:111 (4) - mmm, It's a little hard to read for me and this rhythm. try to remove it from here, It's better for this difficulty level.
3. 01:05:884 (1) - Same as Easy diff.
   00:00:748 - ,00:24:020 - I'm worry about first and second volume. Because When I was checking, i can't hear whistle sounds at this part. This part is clam so it's fine to me but i don't agree this volumes for bigenners on lower difficulties (Easy/Normal). You should consider turning up the volume around 30%

1. AR8 is too high for this song. Please set AR7 or 7.5 or something.
2. 00:09:111 (1,1) - The distance is about 360ms. This song is low BPM but it's better to give recovery time for 1 beat in my opinion.
3. 00:41:111 (2) - try to make this shape!
   
   SPOILER

   

1. 01:08:566 - forgot to add a clap?
2. 01:28:747 (3,4,5) - That equal spacing is not natural for this sound since the slider's head has strong sound. How about making a jump on here 01:29:111 (5) - ?
3. 01:33:657 (8,1) - Same

1. 00:58:929 (3) - try to make more curve like this. It would be fit the vocal sound!
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 01:08:566 - Same as Insane
3. 01:22:020 (6) - The flow is not natural for playing to me. try to put 01:20:929 (2) - 's head for next slider. It's better to me
   
   SPOILER

   
   CS5 <3

Tarrasky wrote:

General

the music is very melancholic and I dont think the yellow collorcombo combines with the music/map/bg, i think this collorcombo sounds cool i'm following character hair color from anime

or some white in this burgundy

you can add "ED" in tags, once a lot of sites/forums use ED in japanese definition for Ending, like "学戦都市アスタリスク ED 「Waiting for the rain」"

Normal

I prefer a circle here 00:08:020 (2) - and you add a slider starting in 00:08:747 - and finish in 00:10:929 - or something want to keep this
[a bit nazi but] 00:37:111 (2,3) - I recommend increases the angle of 00:38:566 (3) - and make a perfect blanket

i'm not good in blanket but i think you can improve

the spin can starts in 01:37:475 -, It is better for beginners

Hard

i prefer CS 3.5 but 4 not is bad CS4 is good
00:29:111 (2) - this angle seems more beautiful i think ^^

00:32:747 (1) - It is not a little off the screen? fine on 4:3 is ok
01:44:929 (1) - you can remove NC here and add in 01:45:884 (2) - , like 00:25:293 (4,5,6,1) -, i think is better ^^

Insane

01:21:475 (3,4,5,6,1) - perfect star maybe
01:45:884 (4) - NC?

Sayonara

01:20:384 (1) - Ctrl + G is cool here i like now flow
01:22:929 (4,5,6,7,1) - overlap at this moment may increase the aesthetic it's bad for me

01:45:884 (4) - NC?

very well map and nice music, hope this be rank ^^
congrats and good luck

alacat wrote:

Hello :3

[General]

1. If you find a video file, please add it! It would be better!
2. 01:46:793 (1) - Why don't you turn down the volume gradually at last spinner ? It would fit well with this kind of music. (To all diffs)

[Easy]

1. 00:08:020 - You added whistle sounds around this part. So try to add it to here!
2. 00:24:020 (1) - ,00:29:838 (1) - ,00:35:657 (1) - ^
3. 01:05:884 (1) - You took the vocal sounds at this part 01:01:111 (1,2) - . So you should consider taking same sound to that spinner's start. try to set from here 01:04:747 - or 01:04:838 -
4. 01:25:111 (4) - forgot to add a new combo from here ?

[Normal]

1. 00:06:566 (1) - no need to add new combo at here
2. 00:41:111 (4) - mmm, It's a little hard to read for me and this rhythm. try to remove it from here, It's better for this difficulty level.
3. 01:05:884 (1) - Same as Easy diff.
   00:00:748 - ,00:24:020 - I'm worry about first and second volume. Because When I was checking, i can't hear whistle sounds at this part. This part is clam so it's fine to me but i don't agree this volumes for bigenners on lower difficulties (Easy/Normal). You should consider turning up the volume around 30%

[Hard]

1. AR8 is too high for this song. Please set AR7 or 7.5 or something. ar7.5!
2. 00:09:111 (1,1) - The distance is about 360ms. This song is low BPM but it's better to give recovery time for 1 beat in my opinion.
3. 00:41:111 (2) - try to make this shape!
   
   SPOILER

   

[Insane]

1. 01:08:566 - forgot to add a clap?
2. 01:28:747 (3,4,5) - That equal spacing is not natural for this sound since the slider's head has strong sound. How about making a jump on here 01:29:111 (5) - ? i want keep this jump because now it's most fit this part
3. 01:33:657 (8,1) - Same

[Sayonara]

1. 00:58:929 (3) - try to make more curve like this. It would be fit the vocal sound!
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 01:08:566 - Same as Insane
3. 01:22:020 (6) - The flow is not natural for playing to me. try to put 01:20:929 (2) - 's head for next slider. It's better to me
   
   SPOILER

   
   CS5 <3

Good luck =3=b

1. 01:46:793 (1) - Just assume it also applied to all diff, is this spinner snapped correctly?
   
   1. I found some unsnapped objects in higher diffs, I don't know . Tell me that I'm wrong @@ I confused
2. You can see some announced whistle thingy on Normal . Maybe you should make it consistent through all diffs, since your Easy was like that

1. 00:08:020 (2) - This head should be get whistle . It goes same with the similar things like 00:13:838 (2) -
2. 01:05:884 (1) - Is it snapped correctly?

1. 01:12:384 (4,5) - I don't really think that they are important here . I heard it a bit nonsense . Remove these circles could be a resolution in this case, because removing them will make the diff more less complicated

1. 00:24:020 (1) - It's rather loud here . Don't you think higher spacing would fits more even better?
2. 00:38:566 (1) - Make its node constant in every single place on the slider body will make this shape perfect

Ipas wrote:

Hello!
Nice mapset here, I don't think there will be many complains regarding to the map itself

[General]

1. 01:46:793 (1) - Just assume it also applied to all diff, is this spinner snapped correctly? fixed the spinner head on easy and normal, in hard insane sayonara, they are snapped on 1/16
   
   1. I found some unsnapped objects in higher diffs, I don't know . Tell me that I'm wrong @@ I confused maybe they are snapped on 1/16, it should be fine because they are currently on vocal or drum
2. You can see some announced whistle thingy on Normal . Maybe you should make it consistent through all diffs, since your Easy was like that i think different rhythm on diff, so make hitsound have a little bit different

[Normal]

1. 00:08:020 (2) - This head should be get whistle . It goes same with the similar things like 00:13:838 (2) - it's kinda noisy to me, added on 00:07:657 - 00:13:475 -
2. 01:05:884 (1) - Is it snapped correctly?

[Hard]

1. 01:12:384 (4,5) - I don't really think that they are important here . I heard it a bit nonsense . Remove these circles could be a resolution in this case, because removing them will make the diff more less complicated

[Sayonara]

1. 00:24:020 (1) - It's rather loud here . Don't you think higher spacing would fits more even better? i made high spacing on 00:24:020 (1,2,3) -
2. 00:38:566 (1) - Make its node constant in every single place on the slider body will make this shape perfect it seem good to me

[]
You can call me anytime later, good luck first!

alacat wrote:

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3000 posts lol

appleeaterx wrote:

Congrats <3